Hey Lanturn! I'm here for Mod4Mod. This beatmap is beautiful, and I hope you'll appreciate the comments I have and make this map even more fitting for the song. I'm pretty new at modding, though, so if you have any constructive feedback after reading this mod, please point that out!
Flabébé00:04:180 (1) - Move this slider a little bit down and the notes after accordingly, I feel that if you make this change the notes flow a little bit better
http://puu.sh/86des.jpg00:14:980 (1) - Perhaps move this one to the side a bit so 00:16:780 (2,3) can be in a slightly slanted pattern
http://puu.sh/86dlR.jpg00:27:580 (2) - What about making this slider curvy? I feel like the flow, being more than 90 degrees, is a little bit too demanding to make the flow feel natural akin to the song.
http://puu.sh/86dvC.jpg (halfassed attempt at making sliders)
00:37:480 (2) - This slider would look better curved, a straight slider would look out of place
http://puu.sh/86dz4.jpg00:59:080 (1) - I feel like this slider would be better placed a little bit more down, to make the flow from 00:56:380 (2) to the slider better, while simultaneously improving the flow towards 01:01:780 (1)
http://puu.sh/86dIl.jpg01:09:880 (2) - The slider, I feel, would be better off rotated about thirty degrees. Same goes for 01:24:280 (2)
http://puu.sh/86dVO.jpg01:49:480 (2) - What about something like this?
http://puu.sh/86e28.jpg02:27:003 (2) - The fact that this slider is straight doesn't really fit with the rest. You might want to consider something like this. Same goes for 02:41:403 (2)
http://puu.sh/86e8D.jpgChipotle00:02:380 (3) - Perhaps give this slider a curve?
http://puu.sh/86eoC.jpg00:18:280 (1) - Have this note stacked under 00:18:580 (2) perhaps?
http://puu.sh/86eyq.jpg00:20:380 (4,5) - I feel like the flow could be improved by making it somewhat akin to this. The stack with this kind of musical spacing makes it hard to read.
http://puu.sh/86eF3.jpg00:32:680 (1) - Consider stacking this note under 00:32:980 (2) for reasons stated before.
http://puu.sh/86eLO.jpg00:50:680 (1) - Same as the above.
http://puu.sh/86eUw.jpg00:53:680 (5) - I can't seem to find anything wrong with this, however, in my playtests I found this a weird note to play. Please consider changing this one around.
01:08:080 (4) - Please move this note around in favor of readability, akin to the screenshot
http://puu.sh/86f0y.jpg01:19:480 (5) - I feel like this note would do more justice if placed here.
http://puu.sh/86f48.jpg01:22:480 (4) - I feel a general dislike towards the stacks you use like that. Please consider moving this note.
http://puu.sh/86f7b.jpg01:31:480 (2) - Although more inconsistent, this slider would look better while curved.
http://puu.sh/86fls.jpg01:39:580 (3) - This slider clips. Consider moving it to (116,348).
01:47:680 (2) - Consider changing the shape to something like this.
http://puu.sh/86fvW.jpg02:06:303 (3,4) - For flow's sake and to change this stack, you might want to rearrange this slider and note to something like this.
02:13:503 (3,4,1,2) - As you might have noticed, I'm not a fan of this pattern. You might want to change these notes to be similar to my screenshot.
http://puu.sh/86fL4.jpg02:18:903 (1) - This note clips with 02:19:803 (2) you might want to consider moving it to (420,272)
02:38:403 (6) - Consider moving this note a little upwards, to about a y coordinate of 132.
http://puu.sh/86fWA.jpg02:43:203 (4) - This stack is quite hard to read. I can't think of a way to remap it though, but if you agree with my previous statements, you might want to consider making a small change here.
02:54:903 (1) - The NC doesn't really feel right here.
Floette00:03:580 (1) - To create some more 180 degree flow, consider changing this slider a bit.
http://puu.sh/86ga5.jpg00:18:280 (1) - This slider is too short and doesn't fit the music. Consider making it longer.
00:36:580 (2) - I feel like this slider would be better the other way around.
http://puu.sh/86ggx.jpg01:32:980 (5) - Perhaps stack this note under the slider.
http://puu.sh/86gs0.jpg01:35:080 (3) - Reverse this slider for more fun, less spacing, it feels kind of inconsistent with the rest of your map.
http://puu.sh/86gvc.jpg01:47:380 (5) - Once again, I would prefer myself to have this note under the slider.
01:49:480 (3) - Reverse this slider would be better.
01:54:580 (2) - The note would be better off under the slider.
02:10:503 (2,4) - Same as the above.
02:15:303 (1) - This note stacked under the slider feels weird with the spacing you're using around your map. Consider moving it here.
http://puu.sh/86gE1.jpg02:24:903 (2,4) - I would once again prefer this note to be stacked under the slider.
I've had a lot of fun modding your map! =)