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Nogizaka46 - Tsuki no Ookisa [Osu|Taiko]

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ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 15 марта 2015 г. at 21:19:50

Artist: Nogizaka46
Title: Tsuki no Ookisa
Source: Naruto Shippuuden
Tags: opening ナルト 疾風伝 Z3nx
BPM: 185
Filesize: 6422kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,46 stars, 75 notes)
  2. Hard (3,19 stars, 207 notes)
  3. Normal (2,01 stars, 118 notes)
  4. Z3nx's Futsuu (2,24 stars, 232 notes)
  5. Z3nx's Muzu (2,88 stars, 351 notes)
Download: Nogizaka46 - Tsuki no Ookisa
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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storyboard?

Futsuu and Muzu by Z3nx
Last edited by ego_17 , edited 41 times in total.
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
Was going to do the GD, realised I don't know which difficulty I should do? owo

Will do maximum 2 difficulties, I have some Gd requests already lol
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17

lZenxl wrote:

Was going to do the GD, realised I don't know which difficulty I should do? owo

Will do maximum 2 difficulties, I have some Gd requests already lol
sorry for keep you wait
i think easy and hard one are ok, for me song dosnt fits for insane
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
There you go owo/

Futsuu ( Normal ) : http://puu.sh/94m0V/5b62cc7f54.osu
Muzu ( Hard ) : http://puu.sh/94m1U/94017aa566.osu

Oh damn, forgot to turn off letterbox, can you do that for me?

Thanks!
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17

lZenxl wrote:

There you go owo/

Futsuu ( Normal ) : http://puu.sh/94m0V/5b62cc7f54.osu
Muzu ( Hard ) : http://puu.sh/94m1U/94017aa566.osu

Oh damn, forgot to turn off letterbox, can you do that for me?

Thanks!
diff added and letterbox is turned off

thankyou for work :)
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
oh wow the star difficulty rating is pretty close, I will update with more notes later owo/
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17
i cant beat normal - lol
Akasha-
Nomination Assessment Team
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Akasha-
The artist should be:
Nogizaka46
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening
Muzu Update!
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: nP_(Shippuden OP14) Nogizaka46 - Tsuki no Okisa (TV Version).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 30348
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Tsuki no Okisa
TitleUnicode:Tsuki no Okisa
Artist:Nogizaka 46
ArtistUnicode:Nogizaka 46
Creator:ego_17
Version:lZenxl's Muzu
Source:Naruto Shippuden
Tags:Naruto Shippuden
BeatmapID:430860
BeatmapSetID:135661

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.39999990463257
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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256,192,79008,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79494,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79656,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,80143,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

The artist should be:
Nogizaka46
changed

lZenxl wrote:

Muzu Update!
done
paraoka_old_1
paraoka_old_1
From modding queue. sorry for late.

[Basic]

Drum Hitsound might can ignore taiko mode's Hitsound.

[Easy]

00:29:386 - Delete Break time.
00:49:981 - Where's note? add note. don't need break time.
01:15:440 - Delete Break time.

[Normal]

00:16:675 - add note. so far to next note.(adv)
01:15:602 - Delete Break time.

[Hard]

01:15:602 - Delete Break time. and add note.
01:22:656 (1) - Slider fix.

<3

actually, i saw it's like beginner's map...
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17
from paraoka :
[Easy]

00:29:386 - Delete Break time. ok
00:49:981 - Where's note? add note. don't need break time. added slider and spinner
01:15:440 - Delete Break time. no

[Normal]

00:16:675 - add note. so far to next note.(adv) remaped
01:15:602 - Delete Break time. no

[Hard]

01:15:602 - Delete Break time. and add note. no
01:22:656 (1) - Slider fix. i think its on rigt place

<3

ok thankyou for yor time
also changed some upbeat sliders on easy
RandF
1,249 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
From my queue~
mainly, basic indication

[General]
  1. Title: 月の大きさ
    Romanised title: Tsuki no Ookisa
  2. Airtist: 乃木坂46
  3. source: Naruto Shippuuden
  4. remove "naruto shippuden" from tags. it's already added as source
  5. tags suggetion:
    opening
    ナルト 疾風伝
  6. I suggest that kiai-time ends at 01:13:332-
[Easy]
  1. CS(Circle Size) -1. too small size for easy!!!
  2. it is better to decrease SV(Slider Velocity) less than normal-diff
  3. for easy diff, you should conform DS(distance spacing) constantly.
    for example, 00:37:008 (3,1) - is not good
  4. 00:27:927 (1,1,1) - NC rush is unnecessary
  5. 01:01:656 (2,3) - for easy, you should not use stack
  6. 01:13:332 (1) - end at 01:15:927(applied to other-diffs)
[Normal]
  1. AR(Approrch rate) +1~2
  2. too many circles. that's too dificult for normal. you should make map by use of more sliders
  3. 00:01:332 (1) - remove NC
  4. 00:05:548 (5) - NC
  5. 00:20:143 (5,1) - avoid overlap like this
  6. 01:04:900 (2,3,1,2) - stack correctly. if you intend to stack correctly, remove GridSnap
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:873 (4,5) - avoid overlap like this
  2. 00:19:170 (4,5) - ^
  3. 00:16:575~00:18:035- make some mapping. for hard-diff, short break like this is not good.
  4. 01:22:656 (1) - not suit to rhythm. maybe, 3/4 triplet is suitable
for this osu-standard map, normal-hitsound is more suitable than drum-hitsound, imo

~Good Luck~
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17
RandomEffect's mod

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~
mainly, basic indication

[General]
  1. Title: 月の大きさ copypasted
    Romanised title: Tsuki no Ookisa ^
  2. Airtist: 乃木坂46^
  3. source: Naruto Shippuuden^
  4. remove "naruto shippuden" from tags. it's already added as source ok
  5. tags suggetion:copypasted
    opening
    ナルト 疾風伝
  6. I suggest that kiai-time ends at 01:13:332-
ok
[Easy] remaped some parts
  1. CS(Circle Size) -1. too small size for easy!!! i agree, also AP - 1
  2. it is better to decrease SV(Slider Velocity) less than normal-diff its alredy less than one, it may become boring
  3. for easy diff, you should conform DS(distance spacing) constantly.
    for example, 00:37:008 (3,1) - is not good replaced 00:36:035 (1,2,3) -
  4. 00:27:927 (1,1,1) - NC rush is unnecessary removed combos
  5. 01:01:656 (2,3) - for easy, you should not use stack removed
  6. 01:13:332 (1) - end at 01:15:927(applied to other-diffs)
i see now what spinner on easy ends at different point than normal and hard - fixed, but i refered spinner on lyrics (long note that ends on 01:15:440 ) so ending at 01:15:927 is kinda weird for me

[Normal]
  1. AR(Approrch rate) +1~2 +1
  2. too many circles. that's too dificult for normal. you should make map by use of more sliders removed 6 circles
  3. 00:01:332 (1) - remove NC done
  4. 00:05:548 (5) - NC done
  5. 00:20:143 (5,1) - avoid overlap like this avoided
  6. 01:04:900 (2,3,1,2) - stack correctly. if you intend to stack correctly, remove GridSnap
tried my best to do that
[Hard]
  1. 00:11:873 (4,5) - avoid overlap like this
  2. 00:19:170 (4,5) - ^ both avoided
  3. 00:16:575~00:18:035- make some mapping. for hard-diff, short break like this is not good. done
  4. 01:22:656 (1) - not suit to rhythm. maybe, 3/4 triplet is suitable ok ok since it second time i agree
for this osu-standard map, normal-hitsound is more suitable than drum-hitsound, imo

~Good Luck~
Gordon123
1,038 posts
Joined June 2013
Gordon123
sorry for my skill heh~
lZenxl's Futsuu
replay : http://puu.sh/9eKZb/4f8d883d67.osr
----------------------------------------

:) :) :)
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening

Gordon123 wrote:

sorry for my skill heh~
lZenxl's Futsuu
replay : http://puu.sh/9eKZb/4f8d883d67.osr
----------------------------------------

:) :) :)
owo thanks for the test play!

Added/deleted some notes so as to increase readability owo/

http://puu.sh/9fCmk/eda2eb211b.osu
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17
updated
Gordon123
1,038 posts
Joined June 2013
Gordon123
Video for map : http://puu.sh/9nKTJ/b1987ae1b8.avi
(без звука не бойся,всё сделал как надо,я же озвучивал аниме)
P.S. good luck :)
[-Sophie-]_old
[-Sophie-]_old
From my moe queue
[Easy]
00:05:548 - Slider sounds late
00:52:575 - Longer Slider for easy.
01:01:332 - Should have the same hitsound as 01:00:359
[Normal]
00:05:873 - Straight slider will flow better imo.
00:39:927 - Slider works better here
00:52:575 - Whistle sound isn't needed, a long drum role or w/e should work fine.
[Hard]
AIMod
Goodluck!
KokoroStudiox3
1,272 posts
Joined April 2011
KokoroStudiox3
mod request in lacueva


general


BG →1024x768
mp3 is 117 kb/s, which is below the miniumum of 128 kb/s



Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks: -
[Easy : 1 -
[Hard : 1 -
[lZenxl's Futsuu : 0 -
[lZenxl's Muzu : 0 -
[Normal : 1
letterbox you must disable as in the other difficulties http://puu.sh/aj0Zk/1f30e4405a.png

Inconsistency in Kiai Times: -
[Easy : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:170, ends on 01:13:332 -
[Hard : Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:170, ends on 01:13:332 -

[lZenxl's Futsuu :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:170, ends on 01:13:170 -

[lZenxl's Muzu :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:170, ends on 01:13:170 -

[Normal :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:55:170, ends on 01:13:332

I think the mp3 audio is low o:
no audio100%
better 60% o 70%

[easy]
00:26:629 (3,2) - stacked
00:29:224 (3,1) - ^
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17
thanks for cheking, but i didnt find this mods helpful
...i try search for better mp3
wasonz
713 posts
Joined July 2013
wasonz
Hi ~ From my queue
I'll mod Futsuu since you map has only 1 map that i need to mod if i follow my rule .-.

[ lZenxl's Futsuu]

  • 00:25:819 (81) - delete because decrease some difficult in Futsuu and this note not fit to voice much
  • 00:27:765 (88,92) - delete //decrease some difficult in Futsuu
  • 00:39:440 (129) - delete //^
  • 01:17:386 (6) - ^
[ lZenxl's Muzukashii]

  • 00:29:873 (121) - add k //I can here some little sound here and feel blank here

Good Luck ~ :)
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

Hi ~ From my queue
I'll mod Futsuu since you map has only 1 map that i need to mod if i follow my rule .-.

[ lZenxl's Futsuu]

  • 00:25:819 (81) - delete because decrease some difficult in Futsuu and this note not fit to voice much
  • 00:27:765 (88,92) - delete //decrease some difficult in Futsuu
  • 00:39:440 (129) - delete //^
  • 01:17:386 (6) - ^
[ lZenxl's Muzukashii]

  • 00:29:873 (121) - add k //I can here some little sound here and feel blank here

Good Luck ~ :)
Fixed all, thank you senpai owo/!

MUZU : http://puu.sh/aB91x/8ec54e5ab5.osu
FUTSUU : http://puu.sh/aB8Yw/10128b2b91.osu
PatZar
3,079 posts
Joined March 2013
PatZar
Requested on my quehuehue
well this is so hard :|
your taiko are solid

[Muzukashii]
00:51:989 (201,202) - ctrl + g , it's better

[Futsuu]
00:31:070 (102) - delete this
00:52:475 (1) - delete this spinner, it's annoying

nice taiko
good luck
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening

Genocide wrote:

Requested on my quehuehue
well this is so hard :|
your taiko are solid

[Muzukashii]
00:51:989 (201,202) - ctrl + g , it's better Hmm good idea for variation, changed to kkdkk

[Futsuu]
00:31:070 (102) - delete this Changed to 1/1 to make it simpler
00:52:475 (1) - delete this spinner, it's annoying Aight, done

nice taiko
good luck

Futsuu
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: 46.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 30421
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1.3

[Metadata]
Title:Tsuki no Ookisa
TitleUnicode:月の大きさ
Artist:Nogizaka46
ArtistUnicode:乃木坂46
Creator:ego_17
Version:lZenxl's Futsuu
Source:Naruto Shippuuden
Tags:opening ナルト 疾風伝 lZenxl
BeatmapID:435450
BeatmapSetID:135661

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.39999990463257
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
584,324.324324324324,4,1,0,100,1,0
55070,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
73232,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0


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256,192,68854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69016,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69178,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70313,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70962,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71611,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71935,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72097,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72583,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72746,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73070,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73394,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73719,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74854,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75502,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75989,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76313,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76800,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77448,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77935,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78097,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78421,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78746,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79719,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80043,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80529,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80692,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81016,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81340,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81502,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81989,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82070,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82151,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82475,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82719,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82962,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83448,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83529,12,0,84746,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84908,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85394,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85881,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86043,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86854,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Thanks for MOD!

Sorry for late reply lol
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17
1000 post..
updated
still only can get C on futsuu :)
Pho
1,785 posts
Joined November 2013
Pho
Mod from modding queue~

[General]
Song length is longer than what you mapped. Either map it more equal to it's length or search for the TV size version of this.
Disable widescreen support if you don't want to put a storyboard in this map.
This map has an unused storyboard element. delete it in the design section (click, then ctrl+x).


[Easy]
00:05:773 (3) - End with a circle here. also add finish sound here.
00:00:584 (1,2,1) - add claps at the beginning of these sliders.
01:01:232 (2) - start the slider here instead 01:01:556 -

[Normal]
00:05:773 - same as in easy
00:46:313 - add backslider here
01:10:638 (2,3) - check the blanket here again

[Hard]
00:05:286 (4,5,6,1,2) - This looks a bit unstructured, try http://puu.sh/aTPtl/6ba517ae8e.jpg
00:16:962 (2,3,4,1) - make distance between 4 and 1 bigger, people will confuse this with a 1/4 beat otherwise
00:19:070 (5,6) - blanket here http://puu.sh/aTPC3/0bc1e8786e.jpg
00:39:502 (5,6,7) - stack 5 and 7 better. also, i don't see a reason to make such a big SV change here.
00:43:394 - big gap, map here
00:46:313 - ^
00:49:881 - sudden increase in note density here is not good if you don't build up a bit pressure in the previous seconds.
00:53:773 (1,2) - go with four 1/3 beats here instead
00:55:070 (1,2) - slider fits better here
00:58:962 (5,6,1) - not so good flow, avoid these straight up straight down flows
01:24:259 (1) - this slider doesn't fit to the glissando at all, just try with a backslider instead.

A good start, you need more mods and a lot of cleanup. Good luck! :)

Greetings,
paseli
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17

paseli wrote:

Mod from modding queue~

[General]
Song length is longer than what you mapped. Either map it more equal to it's length or search for the TV size version of this.
Disable widescreen support if you don't want to put a storyboard in this map.
This map has an unused storyboard element. delete it in the design section (click, then ctrl+x).

looks like you copypasted somthing unnecessary :)


A good start, you need more mods and a lot of cleanup. Good luck! :)

eah "start" - i started it like year ago :)

Greetings,
paseli
thanks for modding, i feel like confirming some suggessions, i answer properly later

edit :

paseli wrote:

Mod from modding queue~

[Easy]
00:05:773 (3) - End with a circle here. also add finish sound here. no changes
00:00:584 (1,2,1) - add claps at the beginning of these sliders. hitsounding is terrible now - i will rearange them later - dont need modding
01:01:232 (2) - start the slider here instead 01:01:556 - i didnt get it - its already starts on 01:01:232 (2) to follow lyrics

[Normal]
00:05:773 - same as in easy no changes
00:46:313 - add backslider here i mapped this place on easy, but intentionally skipped this part in normal to make next combo easier to read (i think about slider if there are more people ask for it..)
01:10:638 (2,3) - check the blanket here again that blanket? its to short for blanketing)

[Hard]
00:05:286 (4,5,6,1,2) - This looks a bit unstructured, try http://puu.sh/aTPtl/6ba517ae8e.jpg link is broken, but its fine for me
00:16:962 (2,3,4,1) - make distance between 4 and 1 bigger, people will confuse this with a 1/4 beat otherwise its just nasty antijump to make next combo start in the centre of the screen and it NC so must be alrigt
00:19:070 (5,6) - blanket here http://puu.sh/aTPC3/0bc1e8786e.jpg link is broken, but i intentionaly made it look like this
00:39:502 (5,6,7) - stack 5 and 7 better. also, i don't see a reason to make such a big SV change here. OK! speed change cos she sing loong note and for symmetry
00:43:394 - big gap, map here i like it this way (mapped on easy\normal to make it more clear)- gap emphases next 3 beats 00:44:692 (1,2,3) - and especialy 00:47:286 (1,2,3,4) - ... - they so strong in the song!
00:46:313 - ^
00:49:881 - sudden increase in note density here is not good if you don't build up a bit pressure in the previous seconds. it suits the song
00:53:773 (1,2) - go with four 1/3 beats here instead ok now i think i shoud try 1/3 This is the most valuable fix among all previous mods! also found that this one 01:22:529 (1) - is 1\3 too
00:55:070 (1,2) - slider fits better here no! this strong beat 00:55:719 (2) - must be played (1/2 slider with circle didn't fit too)
00:58:962 (5,6,1) - not so good flow, avoid these straight up straight down flows im fine with this )
01:24:259 (1) - this slider doesn't fit to the glissando at all, just try with a backslider instead. ^
Krisom
osu! Alumni
2,867 posts
Joined April 2009
Krisom
Hello~

I see that you're pretty new at beatmapping, so I'll focus more on what you could add to improve your hard diff in quality. Ok? You can pick the technical issues with more modposts later, but I'd rather focus on teaching you some simple tricks to make the rhythms and patterns you've made mroe visually appealing to the audience.

·First, you might want to conside making the Circle Size bigger than what it is, I'd suggest CS 4 or 4,5, since CS 5 usually suits better songs with a faster bpm and Insane difficulties. Making the Slide Velocity greater than 1,4 will also help you a lot in making more intresting patterns and sliders. SV 1,8 works good with this BPM.

·For TV Size mapsets (or maps that are under 1:30 in lenght) it's generally advisable to not map breaks, since the song is short enough to avoid the player from feeling exhausted.

·To make hitsounding easier when you're starting, you must create a rule. By example, you can add a clap every 2nd and 4th white tick. There will be places in the music when you'll have to break the rule to give emphasis to a certain sound in the music, so pay attention for those.

·There are certain patterns that will make your map look more organized. I strongly advise you to check the Beatmapping techniques forum to see what has been done in the past. Some patterns that are easy to implement are squares, etna sliders(pic here) and Honeycombs.

·When you're a new mapper, I strongly suggest you to follow the vocals closely when the artist is singing, that will make it easier for you to understand what rhythms to map. I'll point out a few improvements in this area...

00:10:962 (1,2) - The singer says a word with 3 syllables, so either map 3 circles here (placing one between 1 and 2) or make this a 1 beat long slider.
00:11:773 (4,5,6,7) - The singer holds a word at 00:11:773 - 00:12:097 - 00:12:421 - and then she goes back to the main beat at 00:12:583 - . I'd suggest mapping a 1 beat long slider with one repeat at 00:11:773 - and then creating a similar slider that's either blanketing or symmetrical to the previous one at 00:12:583 - wihout any repeat.
00:13:556 (7,1,2,3) - Since the singer "holds" the words, it feels better when these places are sliders intead of circles.
...and so on.

00:18:421 (4) - A repeat arrow can never be below another object (in this case, (1) sliderstart).
00:19:070 (5,6) - Spacing between (5,6) is too close to each other. Oh, and I'm not sure you know, but just in case, you can copy a slider shape with ctrl-c and paste it somewhere else with ctrl-v. You can make pretty patterns with this, and you can also flip the second slider vertically with ctrl-j and horizontally with ctrl-h.You can also reverse the flow of a slider if you press ctrl-g.Example 1. Example 2.Example 3.
00:26:854 (7) - The singer starts holding the note at 00:27:016 - so, this should start here. You could also improve the shape of this slider by taking a look atRJ's guide on making pretty sliders.

00:40:151 (7) - Avoid using slider slowdowns with a x0,5 SV change. You can benefit way more if you keep the SV at x1,0 and do any kind of slidershape from RJ's guide I linked avobe.

00:43:394 - 00:45:989 - Map these silences.

There's a lot to be improved. I really advice you o check the links I gave you and go see the ranking charts maps. They will give you an idea on how good quality mapsets must be done. You should also start chatting in #modhelp and see other people's mapsets.

Good luck o/
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17
Krisom's mod

Krisom wrote:

Hello~

I see that you're pretty new at beatmapping, so I'll focus more on what you could add to improve your hard diff in quality. Ok? You can pick the technical issues with more modposts later, but I'd rather focus on teaching you some simple tricks to make the rhythms and patterns you've made mroe visually appealing to the audience.

·First, you might want to conside making the Circle Size bigger than what it is, I'd suggest CS 4 or 4,5, since CS 5 usually suits better songs with a faster bpm and Insane difficulties. Making the Slide Velocity greater than 1,4 will also help you a lot in making more intresting patterns and sliders. SV 1,8 works good with this BPM.

·For TV Size mapsets (or maps that are under 1:30 in lenght) it's generally advisable to not map breaks, since the song is short enough to avoid the player from feeling exhausted.

·To make hitsounding easier when you're starting, you must create a rule. By example, you can add a clap every 2nd and 4th white tick. There will be places in the music when you'll have to break the rule to give emphasis to a certain sound in the music, so pay attention for those.

·There are certain patterns that will make your map look more organized. I strongly advise you to check the Beatmapping techniques forum to see what has been done in the past. Some patterns that are easy to implement are squares, etna sliders(pic here) and Honeycombs.

·When you're a new mapper, I strongly suggest you to follow the vocals closely when the artist is singing, that will make it easier for you to understand what rhythms to map. I'll point out a few improvements in this area...

00:10:962 (1,2) - The singer says a word with 3 syllables, so either map 3 circles here (placing one between 1 and 2) or make this a 1 beat long slider.
00:11:773 (4,5,6,7) - The singer holds a word at 00:11:773 - 00:12:097 - 00:12:421 - and then she goes back to the main beat at 00:12:583 - . I'd suggest mapping a 1 beat long slider with one repeat at 00:11:773 - and then creating a similar slider that's either blanketing or symmetrical to the previous one at 00:12:583 - wihout any repeat.
00:13:556 (7,1,2,3) - Since the singer "holds" the words, it feels better when these places are sliders intead of circles.
...and so on.

00:18:421 (4) - A repeat arrow can never be below another object (in this case, (1) sliderstart).
00:19:070 (5,6) - Spacing between (5,6) is too close to each other. Oh, and I'm not sure you know, but just in case, you can copy a slider shape with ctrl-c and paste it somewhere else with ctrl-v. You can make pretty patterns with this, and you can also flip the second slider vertically with ctrl-j and horizontally with ctrl-h.You can also reverse the flow of a slider if you press ctrl-g.Example 1. Example 2.Example 3.
00:26:854 (7) - The singer starts holding the note at 00:27:016 - so, this should start here. You could also improve the shape of this slider by taking a look atRJ's guide on making pretty sliders.

00:40:151 (7) - Avoid using slider slowdowns with a x0,5 SV change. You can benefit way more if you keep the SV at x1,0 and do any kind of slidershape from RJ's guide I linked avobe.

00:43:394 - 00:45:989 - Map these silences.

There's a lot to be improved. I really advice you o check the links I gave you and go see the ranking charts maps. They will give you an idea on how good quality mapsets must be done. You should also start chatting in #modhelp and see other people's mapsets.

Good luck o/

im going to change : 00:26:854 (7) - The singer starts holding the note at 00:27:016 - so, this should start here. You could also improve the shape of this slider by taking a look atRJ's guide on making pretty sliders. - circle+slider
and
00:18:421 (4) - A repeat arrow can never be below another object (in this case, (1) sliderstart). - cos its against the rules, but its visible for me...

thankyou for taiking your time and useful advices
Kyouren
5,657 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
I will mod you map.

I very so busy.
-Nya-
2,133 posts
Joined December 2011
-Nya-
Hello! From Nya's Anime Modding Queue
Sorry for the delay.
Well, here's my mod:

Easy:
 00:20:692 (4) – Place this hitcircle here: X:396 Y:216. I think it then flows better00:43:719 (1,2) – Try to improve this blanket.
Picture
Something like that.01:10:313 (1) – Place this slider somewhere here: X:164 Y:26801:13:340 (1) – Maybe this spinner must end here: 01:15:502 – (It just sounds a bit off at the moment.)That’s all for this diff. It’s pretty good.

Normal:
Make the OD and HP a 4 as well?00:03:178 (4) – Rather place it here: X:308 Y:19600:25:394 (1) – Remove NC00:48:259 (3) – Place it somewhere here: X:252 Y:308 to support the allignment00:50:529 (2,4) – Maybe make these two curved sliders? Just to spice it up a bit.00:56:043 (3) – I don’t like this repetitive slider. Sort of breaks the flow and it’s a bit weird to play. Either place a normal curved slider from this point: 00:56:043 - to this point: 00:56:529 - or two sliders like this.
Picture
00:58:638 (4,5) – Make these two sliders look similar in their shape by using the copy and paste option and then Ctrl+J01:01:556 (4) – Same suggestion as the other one.01:10:638 (2) – Curve a bit more to improve the blanket01:13:232 (1) – Rather make the spinner end here: 01:15:502 – 01:26:043 (2) – Maybe make this a slider instead to support the music better. Like this:
Picture

Hard:
 00:11:286 (2,3,6,7) – Stack on top of each other00:16:962 (2,2,3) – Same here, stack00:17:611 (1,4) – Improve this blanket by curving this slider: 00:18:421 (4) – more.00:19:070 (5) – I think this looks better
Picture
00:22:151 (3,4) – Shorten the distance a bit since it speeds up here. Place this circle here: X:304 Y:256 and this circle here: X:344 Y:13600:36:583 (3,4,5,6) – Place these like this. 00:36:583 (3) – X:344 Y:172 00:36:908 (4) – X:164 Y:172 00:37:232 (5,6) – X:256 Y:17200:41:773 (3) – Ctrl+G?00:45:665 (3) – Instead of a slider, why not just a hitcircle. I think it supports the vocal better00:49:070 (5,6) – Maybe lengthen the distance like you did here: 00:47:286 (1,2) – 00:49:881 (1,2,3,4,5,8,9,10) – Don’t straighten all of them. Put some curves in too00:53:773 (1,2) – Stack the hitcircle on the slider’s head?01:03:502 (4) – Ugly slider. Maybe just curve it normally?01:13:232 (1) – End the spinner here: 01:15:502 –

Overall, good mapset.
Your Easy looks fine, but I think your Normal and Hard could do with a bit of improving.
Good Luck! :D
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17
-Nya- mod

SPOILER

-Nya- wrote:

Hello! From Nya's Anime Modding Queue
Sorry for the delay.
Well, here's my mod:

Easy:
 00:20:692 (4) – Place this hitcircle here: X:396 Y:216.I think it then flows better [b]moved to 400\208 to match with 00:18:746 (2) - 00:43:719 (1,2) – Try to improve this blanket. tryed my best01:10:313 (1) – Place this slider somewhere here: X:164 Y:268 i intentional maked this combo look sloppy01:13:340 (1) – Maybe this spinner must end here: 01:15:502 – (It just sounds a bit off at the moment.)ok - moved end to 1.15.17 (to follow vocal long note) on all difs
That’s all for this diff. It’s pretty good.

Normal:
Make the OD and HP a 4 as well? hp only00:03:178 (4) – Rather place it here: X:308 Y:196 didnt did that,mb its fun to stack it with 00:01:232 (2) - ... but it not seen while playing00:25:394 (1) – Remove NC oh ok )00:48:259 (3) – Place it somewhere here: X:252 Y:308 to support the allignment moved a litle00:50:529 (2,4) – Maybe make these two curved sliders? Just to spice it up a bit. i think its better make them all alike00:56:043 (3) – I don’t like this repetitive slider. Sort of breaks the flow and it’s a bit weird to play. Either place a normal curved slider from this point: 00:56:043 - to this point: 00:56:529 - or two sliders like this.
Picture
remaped 00:58:638 (4,5) – Make these two sliders look similar in their shape by using the copy and paste option and then Ctrl+J remaped01:01:556 (4) – Same suggestion as the other one. remaped01:10:638 (2) – Curve a bit more to improve the blanket remaped01:13:232 (1) – Rather make the spinner end here: 01:15:502 – like easy01:26:043 (2) – Maybe make this a slider instead to support the music better. Like this:
Picture

well all difs must end at the same point..

Hard:
 00:11:286 (2,3,6,7) – Stack on top of each other wisible only in editor - no changes00:16:962 (2,2,3) – Same here, stack ok this time it makes sense00:17:611 (1,4) – Improve this blanket by curving this slider: 00:18:421 (4) – more. no reason - it didnt wisible when play00:19:070 (5) – I think this looks better
Picture
i like my version)00:22:151 (3,4) – Shorten the distance a bit since it speeds up here. Place this circle here: X:304 Y:256 and this circle here: X:344 Y:136 ok now it 1x00:36:583 (3,4,5,6) – Place these like this. 00:36:583 (3) – X:344 Y:172 00:36:908 (4) – X:164 Y:172 00:37:232 (5,6) – X:256 Y:172 no changes00:41:773 (3) – Ctrl+G? well this place is funny// did it, but for 200:45:665 (3) – Instead of a slider, why not just a hitcircle. I think it supports the vocal better for me 00:43:070 (3,3) - didnt sound alike, so i decided to make second one slider00:49:070 (5,6) – Maybe lengthen the distance like you did here: 00:47:286 (1,2) – first time it distance snaped, second one is anti-jump00:49:881 (1,2,3,4,5,8,9,10) – Don’t straighten all of them. Put some curves i came out with stright, well let it be stright..00:53:773 (1,2) – Stack the hitcircle on the slider’s head? it more readeble like i did, it matter cos it on 1\301:03:502 (4) – Ugly slider. Maybe just curve it normally? ok, but i did to keep distanse 1x...01:13:232 (1) – End the spinner here: 01:15:502 – like easy


Overall, good mapset.
Your Easy looks fine, but I think your Normal and Hard could do with a bit of improving. mb cos easy is latest diff - i remaped it not so far ) i try to edit normal, but im fine with hard ..
Good Luck! :D
bananannian
393 posts
Joined June 2014
bananannian
Hi! From my forum NM/M4M taiko queue.
I am pretty thorough, so don't feel bad if I point out a lot of issues. A lot of times they are just my opinions, so feel free to object to them. :3
After looking through my mod, would you mind taking the time to check out my taiko set? <3

Btw, I don't know how to make bpm/offset/scroll speed changes, so don't ask me those pls. XD

d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu


[General]
From AIMod:
This map may need an epilepsy warning, as it contains frequently toggled storyboards.
The Slider Velocity should be 1.40 or 1.60.

Difficulty curve for taiko is a bit flat. You might want to consider lowering the star rating of Futsuu by like 0.2 or to a similar degree. Very minute thing, difficulty is just something I feel strongly about.

[lZenxl's Futsuu]
Overall a lot of offbeat patterns, should you wish to lessen the difficulty those are a good place to start. ^.^
I like your mapping of the beat... very rhythmic dkdkdk patterns. Although should you wish to lessen the difficulty those are also something you can change. :)

00:09:827 (27,28,29) - those are triplets. Use 1/3 snap divisor and move 00:09:827 (27) to 00:09:773 ; and move 00:10:070 (28) to 00:10:097 if you wish to keep them (triplets aren't really supposed to be in Futsuu though in my opinion)
00:25:394 (79) - change to k, match melody's rising pitch
00:44:043 (141) - change to k, match melody
00:40:313 (130,131,132) - no recognizable beat in the music for this pattern, consider recomposing
00:53:773 (1,2,3,4) - those are triplets. Use 1/3 snap divisor and move 00:54:016 (2) to 00:53:989 ; and move 00:54:259 (3) to 00:54:205 if you wish to keep them (triplets aren't really supposed to be in Futsuu though in my opinion)
01:02:529 (33) - move to 01:02:692 , match melody (although this does make another offbeat pattern, you decide on this one)
01:22:475 (9,10,11) - triplets etc.


[lZenxl's Muzukashii]
What a fine muzukashii! I like this one a lot :D

00:09:827 (32,33,34) - triplets etc, see Futsuu
00:18:097 (67) - change to k, match melody
00:49:881 (188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195) - suggestion: change to kkddkkdd, to create anticipation for the following kdkd pattern; having 1.5 bars worth of kdkd pattern is kinda strange
00:53:773 (211,212,213) - triplets etc, see Futsuu
01:13:394 (299,300) - remove these notes, make a break as the climax has just been reached for the entire song
01:22:475 (340,341,342) - triplets etc, see Futsuu
01:23:448 (343) - remove this note, extend following spinner to this position


There you go! Nice song, I want to learn osu standard just to play this now XD. Hope you find this mod helpful, and good luck beatmapping!
Evening
2,464 posts
Joined December 2012
Evening

bananannian wrote:

Hi! From my forum NM/M4M taiko queue.
I am pretty thorough, so don't feel bad if I point out a lot of issues. A lot of times they are just my opinions, so feel free to object to them. :3
After looking through my mod, would you mind taking the time to check out my taiko set? <3 i would if i ever start modding taiko again lol

Btw, I don't know how to make bpm/offset/scroll speed changes, so don't ask me those pls. XD

d = don
k = katsu
D = big don
K = big katsu


[General]
From AIMod:
This map may need an epilepsy warning, as it contains frequently toggled storyboards.
The Slider Velocity should be 1.40 or 1.60.

Difficulty curve for taiko is a bit flat. You might want to consider lowering the star rating of Futsuu by like 0.2 or to a similar degree. Very minute thing, difficulty is just something I feel strongly about. yea, this is going to be a problem, will see how i can nerf it

[lZenxl's Futsuu]
Overall a lot of offbeat patterns, should you wish to lessen the difficulty those are a good place to start. ^.^
I like your mapping of the beat... very rhythmic dkdkdk patterns. Although should you wish to lessen the difficulty those are also something you can change. :)

00:09:827 (27,28,29) - those are triplets. Use 1/3 snap divisor and move 00:09:827 (27) to 00:09:773 ; and move 00:10:070 (28) to 00:10:097 if you wish to keep them (triplets aren't really supposed to be in Futsuu though in my opinion) woop good catch, i think this triplet is fine as the spacing between the notes is rather big
00:25:394 (79) - change to k, match melody's rising pitch kinda concerned that this might have too many kats in a row
00:44:043 (141) - change to k, match melody
00:40:313 (130,131,132) - no recognizable beat in the music for this pattern, consider recomposing Restructured the patterning here, honestly don't really know what patterning to use here
00:53:773 (1,2,3,4) - those are triplets. Use 1/3 snap divisor and move 00:54:016 (2) to 00:53:989 ; and move 00:54:259 (3) to 00:54:205 if you wish to keep them (triplets aren't really supposed to be in Futsuu though in my opinion)
01:02:529 (33) - move to 01:02:692 , match melody (although this does make another offbeat pattern, you decide on this one) I think I'll pass this, for a big section of the map, it ends on a solid rhythm, using a offbeat pattern here kinda feels weird
01:22:475 (9,10,11) - triplets etc.



[lZenxl's Muzukashii]
What a fine muzukashii! I like this one a lot :D woots!

00:09:827 (32,33,34) - triplets etc, see Futsuu
00:18:097 (67) - change to k, match melody
00:49:881 (188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195) - suggestion: change to kkddkkdd, to create anticipation for the following kdkd pattern; having 1.5 bars worth of kdkd pattern is kinda strange Hmm okays, kd might feel repetitive i have to agree with that
00:53:773 (211,212,213) - triplets etc, see Futsuu
01:13:394 (299,300) - remove these notes, make a break as the climax has just been reached for the entire song Somewhat structured it differently so as to catch the vocals here
01:22:475 (340,341,342) - triplets etc, see Futsuu
01:23:448 (343) - remove this note, extend following spinner to this position I think this note is fine, emphasizing the sound here with the start of the spinner is rather weak imo


If no comment = accepted ( thanks \o/ )

There you go! Nice song, I want to learn osu standard just to play this now XD. Hope you find this mod helpful, and good luck beatmapping!
Thanks for mod o/

Futsuu
http://puu.sh/fAs69/b7bf9b02f6.osu

Muzu
http://puu.sh/fAqiB/9493d9063e.osu
gorgonzoler
104 posts
Joined March 2013
gorgonzoler
gorgonzoler's test play
first pc in hard

tell me you didn't finish it ,don't you.i found you just follow the vocal all the time. Try to place the note on tune and drum. it will more colorful.

my advise is: watch some map already ranked. and do a little reaserch on how to place them.

test complete
Good Luck OwO.
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17

gorgonzoler wrote:

gorgonzoler's test play
first pc in hard

tell me you didn't finish it ,don't you.i found you just follow the vocal all the time. Try to place the note on tune and drum. it will more colorful.

my advise is: watch some map already ranked. and do a little reaserch on how to place them.

test complete
Good Luck OwO.
ah thanks for playing
i finished it - its already as i want it to be, mapping drums isnt fun )
Shadren
Featured Artist
531 posts
Joined March 2011
Shadren
[Easy]
Рекомендую ставить НК просто каждые 2 белых тика, у тебя просто они слишком частые
00:27:827 - советую начать спиннер с этого момента
00:30:097 - по идее, в изе нужно минимум 4 белых тика между спиннером и объектом, просто получается не ранкабельно
00:54:421 - ^
00:47:286 (2,3) - новички трудно воспринимают такой ритм, они пытаются просто тыкать в 1/1, я бы рекомендовал заменить эти 2 круга на слайдер
00:49:070 (1,2) - ^
01:22:529 (2) - такой ритм в изе не полагается, если так оставить, то в мании будет твориться хаос. Думаю, лучше просто его убрать, ну или ещё как-нибудь

[Normal]
OD=4
00:33:178 (1) - рекомендую начать этот слайдер с 00:33:340 -
00:43:556 (1) - ^ уже с 00:43:719 -
00:56:692 (4) - вот этот кружок сюда бы 00:56:529 -

[Hard]
HP = 6
00:40:151 (7) - НК, так как меняется скорость слайдеров
01:23:448 (3) - ^
00:59:286 (6) - этот кружок бы убрать со слайдера, просто люди могут запутаться

Ну, вроде бы как по ритму я больше не вижу. Сториборд, кстати, классный :D
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17

Shadren wrote:

[Easy]
Рекомендую ставить НК просто каждые 2 белых тика, у тебя просто они слишком частые я убрал несколько коротких
00:27:827 - советую начать спиннер с этого момента да ну - там какраз под слова песни начинается и пустоты нет
00:30:097 - по идее, в изе нужно минимум 4 белых тика между спиннером и объектом, просто получается не ранкабельно я поправил, но на мой взгляд когда там больше 2х тиков так называемые новички кликают на то что за спиннером раньше времени и промахиваются
00:54:421 - ^
00:47:286 (2,3) - новички трудно воспринимают такой ритм, они пытаются просто тыкать в 1/1, я бы рекомендовал заменить эти 2 круга на слайдер я оставлю - нормально играется и там уж очень сильные удары чтобы они оказались концами слайдеров
00:49:070 (1,2) - ^
01:22:529 (2) - такой ритм в изе не полагается, если так оставить, то в мании будет твориться хаос. Думаю, лучше просто его убрать, ну или ещё как-нибудь я в мании ничего не заметил - ну ладно пораньше слайдер начну

[Normal]
OD=4 любите вы чтобы все галочки были на одной позиции ) ну ладно
00:33:178 (1) - рекомендую начать этот слайдер с 00:33:340 - переделал
00:43:556 (1) - ^ уже с 00:43:719 - там же ритм одинаковый - сделаю как там ^
00:56:692 (4) - вот этот кружок сюда бы 00:56:529 - да так вроде получше

решил в нормале спейсинг поменять..

[Hard]
HP = 6 я ведь обожаю дрейна побольше.. ну для дифспреда только если..
00:40:151 (7) - НК, так как меняется скорость слайдеров я не думаю что новое комбо следует для этого использовать - какбы никто не подумает :"оу цвет комбо поменялся - значит скорость изменилась" - там по точкам заметно да и лирика намекает без этого
01:23:448 (3) - ^
00:59:286 (6) - этот кружок бы убрать со слайдера, просто люди могут запутаться
ну это какбы и служит для того чтобы запутать.. ладно давно никто круги на слайдеры не ставит

Ну, вроде бы как по ритму я больше не вижу. Сториборд, кстати, классный :D
спасибо за мод - попробую хотябы сториборд закончить чтоли)
riffy
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
riffy
There was an IRC mod on the Normal. We didn't change much, though.

Anyways, the SB looks promising and so does the Normal. Keep it up!
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
hi

[General]
  1. bg.jpg is 1228x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
  2. Codeless SB Elements: bg.jpg.... and SB is really bad done sorry
  3. Inconsistency in combo colours:
  4. audio lead-in 2000 is better
[Easy]
  1. check aimod:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:18:746 (2) - try something like:
    SPOILER
  3. check better your spacing is really bad in some points
[Hard]
  1. 00:06:097 (2) - try to not use this kind of sliders
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17

Lally wrote:

hi

[General]
  1. bg.jpg is 1228x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
    is it really matters ? that it changes? i seen lot of maps with 1280x720/1366x768
  2. Codeless SB Elements: bg.jpg.... and SB is really bad done sorry its half done and i dont know why there is such wanrnings - sb is working well for me also its in every map that have SB - i think its bug or smthing
  3. Inconsistency in combo colours: i changed order once for normal and hard - is it so critical ?
  4. audio lead-in 2000 is better i believe its autosets 2000 then there is 0 in AudioLeadIn
[Easy]
  1. check aimod:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:18:746 (2) - try something like:
    SPOILER
    no i like curved lines
  3. check better your spacing is really bad in some points
i intentional did 1.1 for some new combos - for my opinion its plays better (and hey! this hitobjects divided with 2 beats and its only 0.1 of distance)

[Hard]
  1. 00:06:097 (2) - try to not use this kind of sliders
it was common in 2013, but times changing, mb i change it too..
thanks for replying )
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally

ego_17 wrote:

Lally wrote:

[General]
bg.jpg is 1228x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
is it really matters ? that it changes? i seen lot of maps with 1280x720/1366x768

uh yes ofc ò_ò

Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9. Although 1366x768 (16:9) is recommended, most background ratios that are 4:3 or 16:9 should also work reasonably well (for example, 800x600 or 852x480). Using an image with a different ratio is fine, but will result in letterboxing (black bars at the top/bottom of the screen) or upscaling (resized image to fill the whole screen).
ego_17
525 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
ego_17
for me it looks like this rule only sets max file resolution, not the file resolution

well ok - so i need to use 1280x720 or 1366x768 ?
1024x768 is 4:3 and i feel like it needs 16:9
mliencheng
460 posts
Joined November 2010
mliencheng
Short mod, request from forum queue

Without changing mapping style, I'll just point out main problems :D


[General]
Untick widescreen support.

[ Futsuu]

  1. 00:21:016 maybe remove ? Most following vocal sound, there's isn't vocal here
[ Muzukashii]

  1. 00:08:043 I'd suggest not to put 1/4 triplets other than ddd and kkk. It's much more complicated and is a great jump from futsuu difficulty.
Konpaku Sariel
778 posts
Joined October 2010
Konpaku Sariel
muzu
00:16:800 (61,62) - dk
00:18:097 (67) - d
00:18:583 (70) - d
00:20:529 (79) - d

00:23:773 (95) - d
00:24:746 (99) - k
00:25:719 (103) - d
00:26:043 (105) - add d
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