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Pururut
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月5日 at 23:57:09

Artist: MitiS
Title: Endeavors
Source: Endeavors + Alive Remix
Tags: Drumstep Orangeneko Zweib wantuole Cyc17- Nunnally Lamperouge Left 4 Dead Melt
BPM: 170
Filesize: 5696kb
Play Time: 03:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (5 stars, 796 notes)
  2. Easy (2.58 stars, 185 notes)
  3. Gxy's Insane (5 stars, 699 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 627 notes)
  5. Normal (4.21 stars, 253 notes)
  6. wantuole's Hard (4.87 stars, 457 notes)
Download: MitiS - Endeavors
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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first for rank.
ready for mod :>
Easy 100%
Normal by Melt 100%
wantuole's Hard by wantuole 100%
Insane 100%
Gxy'Insane by gxytcgxytc 100%
Collab by 兔兔的后宫们 100%
MeraMiPoP_old
wa
Topic Starter
Pururut

Meramipop wrote:

wa

wa神速
Melt
wa
gxytcgxytc
占座
Frey
前排 :)
Cherry Blossom
I love you ♥

Topic Starter
Pururut

Cherry Blossom wrote:

I love you ♥


baka cb. I love you too
Zweib
I love you too ❤
Cherry Blossom

Zweib wrote:

I love you too ❤

I love you too Zweib ♥
Topic Starter
Pururut

Zweib wrote:

I love you too ❤
zweib is my wife.


想了想还是...
MeraMiPoP_old
这难道就是传说中的神图EVOLVES V.MiTiS的作者
Topic Starter
Pururut

Meramipop wrote:

这难道就是传说中的神图EVOLVES V.MiTiS的作者

那是啥.....
wmtokok
form PM :)

[Insane]
音效部分:
01:12:025 (7) - 這個忘記了吧? 頭加whistle 因為你所以大白線都有加
01:23:849 (6) - 頭加whistle 你後邊紅線都有加 參考: 01:12:555 (8) - 03:05:496 (7) - 03:16:790 (8) - (我覺得在紅線加都不錯
02:54:202 (2) - ^
01:41:673 (1) - 加finish

notes:
00:23:673 (4) - 這個跟00:23:320 (3) - 近一點 這樣可以令00:24:025 (5) - 包好一點
01:39:378 (4) - 跳多一點 你看01:39:025 (2) - 那是1.4 (最好2者都多跳一點
03:20:496 (1) - 改為這個比較好 http://puu.sh/70NGj.jpg

[wantuole's Hard]
00:12:379 (3) - 拉的方向改為橫線 這樣感覺比較有層次感
01:41:673 (4) - 放到x:472 y:344 突顯最後的一下重音
02:18:026 (3) - ctrl+g 目的是拉遠一點 因為停頓了一下 沒可能一樣是1.1 = = 加上你前邊都會跳 (例如 01:32:496 (2) -
02:19:084 (3) - ^

Normal,Easy 我不摸了...因為根本找不到 :)

good lucky :D
Topic Starter
Pururut

wmtokok wrote:

form PM :)

[Insane]
音效部分:
01:12:025 (7) - 這個忘記了吧? 頭加whistle 因為你所以大白線都有加 ok
01:23:849 (6) - 頭加whistle 你後邊紅線都有加 參考: 01:12:555 (8) - 03:05:496 (7) - 03:16:790 (8) - (我覺得在紅線加都不錯 ok
02:54:202 (2) - ^ ok
01:41:673 (1) - 加finish ok

notes:
00:23:673 (4) - 這個跟00:23:320 (3) - 近一點 這樣可以令00:24:025 (5) - 包好一點 改了
01:39:378 (4) - 跳多一點 你看01:39:025 (2) - 那是1.4 (最好2者都多跳一點 1 2 改成和3 4一样的距离了
03:20:496 (1) - 改為這個比較好 http://puu.sh/70NGj.jpg ok
修哥辛苦了:)
epocsodielaK
摸一下

[Easy]
check AI mod. 最低难度不要放跳,把distance snap有问题的都改了
00:19:790 (5) - 位置太上碰血条了而且有出界嫌疑
00:21:202 (1,2) - swap NC?
00:24:025 (1,2) - ^
00:28:261 (5,1) - ^
01:04:967 (3) - easy不太推荐多次折返,这里不如换个转盘吧,时间够
01:37:790 (2,3,1) - 这有点乱了,easy建议不要重叠
03:09:202 (5) - 这个好像也位置太高了
03:14:143 (3,4) - 避免overlap

[Normal]
一会儿单次折返一会儿偶数折返这么多好像略坑,具体怎么改我也不好说。。
00:33:908 (4) - NC? combo有点长
02:00:731 (5) - 太靠边了,关于滑条出界,建议是不要超过图示(6)的边缘
[wantuole's hard]
咦现在hard都可以做这么难了吗
02:09:555 (5) - 尾巴clap?跟第一段一样的地方
02:21:026 (4) - clap?

[Insane]
01:00:731 (5) - NC
01:07:084 (1) - made 0.25?
01:12:025 (7) - NC
01:20:849 (5) - NC?
01:23:320 (5) - ^
01:54:379 (6) - NC
其他地方也是。。。同样的部分为什么一会儿梁小姐一NC一会儿一小节一NC呢

[Collab]
你懂的
02:51:202 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
03:17:143 (1,2) - (1) 124, 204 (2) 40,272
03:23:143 (7) - 跟后面衔接有点怪,拉下来点

[gxy's Insane]
挺好的随便摸点
01:30:202 (1,3) - 1,3换下NC
Cherry Blossom
Baka CB will mod it tomorrow. :D
Topic Starter
Pururut

epocsodielaK wrote:

摸一下

[Easy]
check AI mod. 最低难度不要放跳,把distance snap有问题的都改了 AI mod没看到DS问题....
00:19:790 (5) - 位置太上碰血条了而且有出界嫌疑
00:21:202 (1,2) - swap NC? ok
00:24:025 (1,2) - ^ ok
00:28:261 (5,1) - ^ ok
01:04:967 (3) - easy不太推荐多次折返,这里不如换个转盘吧,时间够 改成转盘了..
01:37:790 (2,3,1) - 这有点乱了,easy建议不要重叠
03:09:202 (5) - 这个好像也位置太高了 拉下去了点.好像还是高了
03:14:143 (3,4) - 避免overlap 这没overlap吧?

[Insane]
01:00:731 (5) - NC ok
01:07:084 (1) - made 0.25? ...暂时先这样.实在不行再改...
01:12:025 (7) - NC ok
01:20:849 (5) - NC? ok
01:23:320 (5) - ^ ok
01:54:379 (6) - NC ok
其他地方也是。。。同样的部分为什么一会儿梁小姐一NC一会儿一小节一NC呢 梁小姐美丽

thx

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Baka CB will mod it tomorrow. :D
love you :)
Cherry Blossom
Baka CB's mod incoming ! :D

Easy

  1. Why no distance snapping ? it makes the easy really hard to read, and makes it unrankable too.
  2. 00:19:084 (4,5) - these objects are really close, it might confuse the player. You have to move (5) further.
  3. 00:31:084 (3,4) - This kind of pattern is not recommended for a easy, you should do ctrl+g on 00:31:790 (4)
  4. 00:35:320 (2,3,4) - fix distance here, it has to be the same.
  5. 01:09:202 (3,1) - (1)'s end is overlapped, make something else which does not overlap (1)'s end.
  6. 01:13:437 (1,3) - same scenario as ^.
  7. 01:57:202 (4) - here the reversed slider overlaps (1), you should fix.
  8. 02:46:614 (1,1) - the distance between the spinner and the next object is too close, you should remove the slider and begin here : 02:50:496

Normal

  1. 00:29:673 (3,4) - here you use different reversed slider, it might confuse the player, don't forget, the player can't read this kind of stuff easily... you should use 2 reversed slider with the same amount of reverses, or change the pattern.
  2. 00:33:908 (4) - NC
  3. 00:34:614 (5,6) - the 1/2 slider is fast for a Normal player, and it is introduced with a circle 1/1 earlier, it is not really recommended imo, so you should unstack these objects.
    01:08:496 (2,3) - ^ same here
    01:19:790 (2,3) - ^
    and many more...
  4. 01:06:378 (1) - Give time to spin, so the spinner must begin here 01:04:967 and end here : 01:07:084
  5. 02:48:025 (1) - same scenario ^ begin : 02:46:614 and end here : 02:48:731
  6. 01:28:967 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern seems a bit extreme for a normal diff imo, i suggest you this :
  7. 03:10:614 (1,2,3,4) - same ^

wantuole's Hard

  1. 00:32:496 (1) - ending this slider on a white tick seem kinda random here, extend this slider to 00:33:025 or 00:33:378 (on a red tick) because you added a note 00:33:731 and it has to respect the polarity.
  2. 00:39:379 (8) - it will be better if you move this note further than (5)'s end, because i'm not really sure if a hard player knows how to not spam with his fingers when he is playing 00:39:114 (6,7) - , and he might miss on (8).
  3. 01:23:320 (1,2,3,4) - the placement is not really well made imo, i think moving (4) like this can be better (I moved (4) to x216 y156, you also have to move the next object)
    same scenario here : 02:20:496 (3,4) ^
  4. 01:29:849 (2,4) - Why don't to ctrl+g here ? it will introduce the kiai part very well.
  5. 01:37:084 (3) - move 1 grid up, you see that the distance with 01:37:437 (1) - is not the same.

Insane

  1. 00:13:614 (4,5,6,1,2) - it will be nice if you make a diamond with these object, just move 00:14:673 (2) - to x280 y104
  2. 00:21:025 (4) - Add 2 circles instead of this slider.
  3. 01:07:084 (7) - add NC on this slow slider.
  4. 01:14:496 (5,6) - try ctrl+g here. if you did, don't forget to fix hitsounds then.
  5. 01:28:967 (7) - NC here or 01:29:673 (8)
  6. 03:10:614 (7) - same as ^

Collab

  1. 00:30:025 (3,4,5) - wrong rhythm here, triplet does not really start on a white tick without any reason by the music. There is not so remove 00:30:114 (4) - . If you really want to add triplet you can add a note here, and only here 00:29:937
  2. 00:35:143 - it will be nice if you add a note here because the player will think that 00:34:790 (5) - introduces 00:35:320 (1) - , and it is not the case, he might missclick.
  3. 00:41:320 (3,4,5) - wrong rhythm here too, remove 00:41:408 (4) - and add a note here : 00:41:231

    00:44:849 (6,7,8) - For example, here you had a reason to star a triplet on a white tick
  4. 00:57:025 (4,1,2,3,1) - unstack these notes, because you didnt stack the notes here : 00:58:437 (5,1,2,3,1) -
  5. 01:04:614 (5,1) - there is a polarity issue here, if you want to get rid of this, you should add a note here 01:04:790 so it will make a triplet.
  6. 01:07:437 (1) - Unfortunately, here, using a 1/8 slider is overmapping.
  7. 01:59:320 (4) - too much clap on this part, remove clap here.
  8. 02:00:731 (4) - ^
  9. 02:01:967 (2) - (end) ^
  10. 02:09:202 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this spaced stream comes suddenly because it is not introduced with a slow pattern. Make the spacing of the stream closer, or change the pattern (before this stream) into a faster other one, or move the stream further than the previous slider.
  11. 02:20:496 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
  12. 02:26:143 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
  13. 02:47:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - the stream must begin here 02:48:114, not here 02:47:231
  14. 03:17:496 (3) - Ctrl+G here, to introduce the next slider.
  15. 03:34:525 and 03:34:614 - add notes.

Gxy's Insane

  1. 00:20:849 (3,4,5) - when i testplayed it, i thought that it was a stream with 1/4 notes, and it is not. You should make something more spaced.
  2. 00:24:025 (1,2) - it may be your style but this is same as ^, i thought it was 1/4 spaced. you should move (2) further than the previous slider.
    and many more...
  3. 00:46:614 (3,4) - make symmetrical with the center, i mean rotate by 180°.
  4. 01:19:084 (1) - move the end like this :
  5. 01:24:467 (4) - overlap with 01:23:849 (2) - you might fix it.
  6. 01:41:673 (10) - add NC here to emphasize this note.
  7. 02:21:908 - this note should be played, you are dodging this note with the slider.
    02:24:731 - same ^
  8. 03:23:320 (10) - add finish + NC to emphasize this note.

Baka CB is K-O, 6 diffs , 3 minutes per diffs => x_x
Good luck ~
Topic Starter
Pururut

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Baka CB's mod incoming ! :D

Easy

  1. Why no distance snapping ? it makes the easy really hard to read, and makes it unrankable too. distance snapping? 1.2
  2. 00:19:084 (4,5) - these objects are really close, it might confuse the player. You have to move (5) further. ok
  3. 00:31:084 (3,4) - This kind of pattern is not recommended for a easy, you should do ctrl+g on 00:31:790 (4)
  4. 00:35:320 (2,3,4) - fix distance here, it has to be the same. fixed
  5. 01:09:202 (3,1) - (1)'s end is overlapped, make something else which does not overlap (1)'s end. fixed
  6. 01:13:437 (1,3) - same scenario as ^. fixed
  7. 01:57:202 (4) - here the reversed slider overlaps (1), you should fix. fixed
  8. 02:46:614 (1,1) - the distance between the spinner and the next object is too close, you should remove the slider and begin here : 02:50:496 ok


Insane

  1. 00:13:614 (4,5,6,1,2) - it will be nice if you make a diamond with these object, just move 00:14:673 (2) - to x280 y104 ok
  2. 00:21:025 (4) - Add 2 circles instead of this slider. ok
  3. 01:07:084 (7) - add NC on this slow slider. ok
  4. 01:14:496 (5,6) - try ctrl+g here. if you did, don't forget to fix hitsounds then. done
  5. 01:28:967 (7) - NC here or 01:29:673 (8) hmm
  6. 03:10:614 (7) - same as ^ hmm


Baka CB is K-O, 6 diffs , 3 minutes per diffs => x_x
Good luck ~
thank you very much. baka CB :D i love you
Melt
;3
gxytcgxytc

epocsodielaK wrote:

摸一下

[gxy's Insane]
挺好的随便摸点
01:30:202 (1,3) - 1,3换下NC
我觉得现在这样不错=-=

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Baka CB's mod incoming ! :D


Gxy's Insane

  1. 00:20:849 (3,4,5) - when i testplayed it, i thought that it was a stream with 1/4 notes, and it is not. You should make something more spaced.
  2. 00:24:025 (1,2) - it may be your style but this is same as ^, i thought it was 1/4 spaced. you should move (2) further than the previous slider.
    and many more... sorry but i think it's no need to change now >.>
  3. 00:46:614 (3,4) - make symmetrical with the center, i mean rotate by 180°. okay
  4. 01:19:084 (1) - move the end like this : done
  5. 01:24:467 (4) - overlap with 01:23:849 (2) - you might fix it. 0.0
  6. 01:41:673 (10) - add NC here to emphasize this note.fixed
  7. 03:23:320 (10) - add finish + NC to emphasize this note.fixed

  8. 02:21:908 - this note should be played, you are dodging this note with the slider.
    02:24:731 - same ^ Hold

Baka CB is K-O, 6 diffs , 3 minutes per diffs => x_x
Good luck ~
thx for mod :D
OblivioN
来给p总凑mod;3
[Easy]
00:19:084 (4) - NC
01:25:084 ^
01:28:967 (5) -有点难听……
02:21:555 (4) - NC
02:50:849 ^
03:01:084 (4) - ^

[Normal]
觉得ds有点高了……不是说ez和normal的ds最好0.9——1.1么……

[玩脱了hard]
00:21:467 add breaktime
00:28:261 (1) - 这样是不是要好一点

[Insane]
p总好图

[Gxy's Insane]
打死白雪;3

[Collab]
开始缓冲太快惹……
开始地方不一样可以么……?
00:01:084 有个蛮弱的音……
00:41:673 (6) - 感觉nc一下比较好

shoot star ;3
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