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hi

General


Offset: Hard's offset is set to 0. Set to 1500.
Files: soft-hitwhistle4, soft-slidertick2, soft-slidertick3, and soft-slidertick5. They could be renamed to "soft-hitwhistle2", "soft-slidertick", "soft-slidertick2"
and "soft-slidertick3", respectively. (optional)

Timing is OK.
Hitsounds usage: Depends if you decide to rename the files or not.
Tags are fine

Insane


01:14:750 (2,3)
- How the ends aren't stacked is quite disturbing.
01:16:137 (1,2)
02:36:600 (1,2) - same here.

01:55:328 (2)
- You can ignore this but..

Solar's Easy


00:42:842 (6)
- I don't like how this hits (1)
00:47:524 (2)
- Not aligned properly with (1)
02:35:212 (5,6,1,2)
- This is supposed to be like a trapezoid right? If not, then make it like a parallelogram.
02:44:923 (4)
- The end of this slider doesn't make a perfect square with (5,6,1).

Some sliders blanket some notes too perfectly. lol.

Hard and Solar's Normal? Clean ;v


Good luck! Pa-rank na. :o
posted

Avishay wrote:

Hey, from my queue~ :)
I will do my best!

[Solar's Easy]
Well done, I wasn't able to spot anything, sorry! (yay~)

[Solar's Normal]
03:00:877 (4,5,1) - Wouldn't this party be too fast and too hard for new players to play? (well, that's my style, moreover it would give the normal players kind of challenge to bridge the normal and hard diff)
03:09:201 (5,6,1) - Same ^

Couldn't find anything else that bothers me, those both difficulties are really good (and well I am not really good with detecting stuff on the easier difficulties)! (thanks :3)

Fr33z3R wrote:

oi =w=


[Solar's Easy]
Notes 2 beats apart makes this map pretty easy(obviously lol) 10/10 would FL. (well, I think some players there will be happy)
Anyhow..

00:02:611 (1) - Move to x:256 y:76. (um.. I think it would be more perfect with my current position since the position you mentioned have a 0,57 DS, while I'm intending to make a perfect 0,6x DS)
00:03:305 (2) - Fix Spacing afterwards
02:04:345 (6) - Change hitsound to Clap (nope, the finish gives more fitting emphasis with the song)
02:10:241 (1) - Change or add Finish hitsound (kung gusto mo ipagsabay ung dalawa.) (hm, I'm a bit confused with this, maybe you intend to only say "add finish hitsound". Anyway, the finish sounds a bit noisy so I don't think that's the best way to emphasis this one)
02:13:016 (3) - ^
02:15:790 (1) - Add Finish (not really sounds fit)
02:36:600 (1) - ^ (same)
03:18:218 (1) - ^ (added it with a low sound, fixed)
[Solar's Normal]
00:41:455 (2) - Make this more symmetrical. Move midpoint to x:172 y:192, Endpoint to x:204 y:112 (sure)
00:46:657 (3) - Add Clap (oops, fixed)
01:02:264 (2) - Add Clap to End point (fixed)
01:02:784 (3) - Add Whistle (fixed)
01:03:652 (1) - Add Finish. ? (fixed, why not mention this in easy diff too then orz)
01:15:270 (2) - Add Whistle (fixed)
02:25:154 (1) - Remove NC. Doesn't really match to the vocal. (in opposite, I added NC here because the vocal is changing into higher pitch)
02:34:865 - Add note with Clap (it would cause inconsistency, in addition I wouldn't add more note unless there's a strong reasoning to add it)

That's it for now. I'll follow up the rest soon. =w= (thanks for the mod~)

ritsu-tanaika wrote:

m4m

EASY

00:22:033 (2) - Extend this slider to 00:22:727 to fit the rhythm since the strong vocal is there (sorry, I'm following the instrument)

00:42:842 (6) - (380,224) would be a better position to avoid the overlap with 00:43:363 (1) - (I don't think it would look pretty, anyway you can't really call it an overlap since it's just an intersection between a curve lines)

01:43:883 (2) - Same as 00:22:033 (2) but extend to 01:44:576 (same reason) (same reason from me as well)

02:03:825 (5) - NC this to show that its on a red tick so different pattern (well, the reason I use the NC is not come from the rhythm pattern, it practically comes from the difference of the vocal pitch and sections of the song itself)

03:18:218 (1) - This note isnt necessary and one note alone may be hard for Easy players (actually I need some detail in why I shouldn't put this, and seriously, this diff is already really easy-like and I don't want to make it any easier)

NORMAL

00:10:935 (6) - Add a note here since the main vocal stops here, with a strong Finish (well, I think it sounds better in the current way, when the player expect one more circle, but a break is the one which come instead orz)

01:25:848 (1) - (72,208) would be better to avoid the overlap with 01:24:981 (2) - (overlaps can easily confuse players' track) (this is normal diff anyway, and at least the spacing is still decent)

01:26:715 (2,3) - If you follow ^, fix the spacing on these notes

02:36:600 (1,2,3,1,2) - Consider fixing the pattern here because of the overlap and the position of them. (I like the way it is currently, besides, it's a nice suggestion, but I can't see how to connect those to the next position)

<-- suggestion

IadzXenon wrote:

Hello M4M Request... :)

Solar's Easy :
00:05:386 (4) I think you should change this : (why so? I think it's fancy this way, and I don't see any strong reasoning behind it)

00:44:750 (2) I think is better if you copy and paste 00:43:363 (1) and place to 00:44:750 (2) then flip verticaly and flip horizontaly. Place at x:156 y:136 (I don't think it would fitting with the previous circle and anyway, I like this fancy sliders just the way they are since I really mind the variation and aesthetics factor of the slider shape)
01:02:264 (3) You should change with reverse (the rhythm will be bad that way, and I like this fancy slider the most. well, I think you should appreciate the art behind it sometimes)
316,40,62264,2,0,B|352:112|304:184|304:184|320:232|348:260|392:260|416:228|400:176|364:176,1,332,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:28:623 You should pull it to 01:28:449 (please give a spesific reason, and anyway, I don't think the rhythm is nice to be heard)
02:25:675 Why this must be different with 00:28:613? (I think you should check the time you provide before posting)
- 00:28:613

- 02:25:675

Make 02:25:675 shorter like 00:28:613 and place to 02:26:195 (I like the rhythm just the way it is)

02:50:472 Same reason as 01:28:623 pull to 02:50:299 (and I give you the same reason as before as well)

Solar's Normal :

00:08:160 - 00:10:588 (2, 3, 4, 5) I think isn't good pattern, try this : (one does not simply telling others "the pattern is bad" without giving any spesific reason, please consider this for your further modding, since I'm afraid the mapper won't be happy when you just claiming it directly like that)
276,256,8160,2,0,B|216:284|160:264|136:196|136:196|176:152|176:92|124:52|72:56,1,339,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,136,9547,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,256,10068,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,208,10588,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Mira-san wrote:

Solar's Easy


00:42:842 (6)
- I don't like how this hits (1) (well, actually it's subjective, and I'm on the team who like this one as is)
00:47:524 (2)
- Not aligned properly with (1) (it's not really a matter though, but maybe I need a little nazi here later orz)
02:35:212 (5,6,1,2)
- This is supposed to be like a trapezoid right? If not, then make it like a parallelogram. (I'm quite surprised you can guess it well owo. well, the slider's length is actually quite intriguing, but let's see the development later)
02:44:923 (4)
- The end of this slider doesn't make a perfect square with (5,6,1). (lol fixed)

Some sliders blanket some notes too perfectly. lol. (haha thanks :3)

Hard and Solar's Normal? Clean ;v


Good luck! Pa-rank na. :o


here's the update
puu.sh/619mS.rar
and maybe I'll shoot some stars for this orz
posted

El SolarBeam wrote:

here's the update
puu.sh/619mS.rar
and maybe I'll shoot some stars for this orz
~ill update later when i get home, and just shoot a star XD
posted

Mira-san wrote:

hi

General


Offset: Hard's offset is set to 0. Set to 1500. ~you mean audio lead in lol, fixed
Files: soft-hitwhistle4, soft-slidertick2, soft-slidertick3, and soft-slidertick5. They could be renamed to "soft-hitwhistle2", "soft-slidertick", "soft-slidertick2"
and "soft-slidertick3", respectively. (optional)
~no change, pag binago ko tong lahat, nag kakameron ng conflicts sa hitsound, at pag nirename ko lahat eh that means babaguhin ko lahat ung green points, e sobrang dami, so yun

Timing is OK.
Hitsounds usage: Depends if you decide to rename the files or not.
Tags are fine

Insane


01:14:750 (2,3) ~fixed
- How the ends aren't stacked is quite disturbing.
01:16:137 (1,2) ~fixed
02:36:600 (1,2) - same here. ~fixed

01:55:328 (2) ~intentional :3
- You can ignore this but..


Good luck! Pa-rank na. :o~GG :o
Thanks Mira-chan :3

Updated
posted
hihihihi asagi, mod req from mutual.
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[-General-]
ok

[Solar's Easy]
hum, i think the HP and OD is a little high, less some or ?
the distace is a little close.
  1. 00:30:010 - here is a kick and i think its heavy so add note, extend the slider or repeat the slider ?
  2. 00:33:478 - i think this clap is not need because the rhythm not two claps of white line which you used for 00:31:744 - 00:41:455 - this part
  3. 00:42:842 (6,1) - blanket it better its overlapped with slider's edge
  4. 01:02:264 (3) - its pretty but unreadable for beginner
  5. 01:24:287 - 01:25:501 - listen to the music's rhythm, maybe you just beat 1/1 but its not good for this different rhythm.
  6. 02:46:137 - 02:47:351 - same problem as ^
  7. 02:50:472 (1) - add finish because the music have ?
  8. 03:09:894 (3,4) - blanket it better its overlapped with slider's edge
  9. 03:33:305 - 03:34:519 - same problem as 01:24:287 - 01:25:501 -
  10. 03:35:732 (2) - finish as your rhythm what you used like that part
  11. 03:36:079 (3) - clap the front and add whistle as your rhythm what you used
  12. 03:37:640 (4) - add kick i think its better than none
  13. 03:39:721 (6) - add clap i think its better


[Solar's Normal]
i think the distance is a little close, too.
  1. 01:24:981 (2,1) - overlap and looks not pretty
  2. 02:57:062 (2,3) - blanket it better its overlapped with slider's edge


[Hard]
  1. 00:07:813 (1) - add whistle? i think its better
  2. 00:08:160 (1) - add clap ?
  3. 00:14:230 (2) - add whistle for thr front ?
  4. 00:16:831 (2) - add whistle for the end ?
  5. 00:20:126 (5) - add clap for the center ?
  6. 00:23:594 (4) - whistle for the end you forgot
  7. 02:01:917 (1) - add clap for the end ?
  8. 02:37:120 (2) - end whistle not clap ?
  9. 02:48:565 (4) - clap front ?
  10. 03:35:732 (4) - clap front ?


[Insane]
  1. 01:43:709 (7) - add whistle for the front ?
  2. 02:27:929 (4) - remove whistle from the front ? ?
  3. 03:35:732 (4) - add clap for thr front ?
  4. 03:36:079 (1) - add finish for the front ?


End of this mod,
hope it could help you !
Good luck to rank this map !!! ;3
posted
All hitsound fixed
Thanks Bakachii o3o
posted
From my queue~
[Solar's Easy]
00:21:600 -Note between the 2 sliders.
00:27:149 -^
00:29:923 -^
01:09:547 -Note above the slider.
01:15:097 -^
01:17:178 -^
01:18:652 -^
01:20:646 -^
01:22:727 -^
01:27:062 -Make the slider short till 01:27:582
01:28:623 -Move the spinner back to 01:27:669 then make the spinner long till 01:31:397
01:43:449 -Note between the 2 sliders.
01:48:998 -^
02:36:946 -Note above the slider.
02:39:027 -^
02:40:415 -^
02:42:495 -^
02:44:576 -^
02:48:912 -Make the slider small till 02:49:432
02:50:472 -Move the spinner backwards to 02:49:519 then make long till 02:53:247
03:29:663 -Note above the slider.
03:31:744 -^
03:37:987 -^
03:41:628 -Make the slider small till 03:42:149
03:43:189 -Move the spinner backwards to 03:42:235 and make it long till 03:45:790
[Solar's Normal]
00:10:935 -Note.
00:21:513 -^
00:25:675 -^
00:27:235 -^
00:54:114 -^
00:55:588 -^
00:56:975 -^
01:12:929 -^
01:43:363 -^
01:43:623 -^
01:47:784 -^
01:49:085 -^
02:34:865 -^
[Hard]
00:22:553 -^
[Insane]
This diff needs whistle I guess.. ?

Great map btw ~ ! ^^ GL~
posted
Well thanks for the mod
i think no change on hard, its fine
and on the Insane, it has whistles LOL
posted
Hello, this is from my modding queue!

Maybe consider reducing slider rate to 1
02:14:403 (4,5) - I think you should transform these 2 into a slider, i think it fits more the music
02:41:975 (1) - With the slowpoke rythm and lack of notes, it can be confusing to time it there. Try this: http://puu.sh/6iez3.jpg
03:01:571 (1) - I think these slider should be full beasts one.
03:18:218 (1) - I think it fits better following the vocal - 03:18:045
00:22:727 (4) - Maybe place this note at 00:22:553 like others on this part
00:33:131 (3) - I think oyu forgot something at the end of slider about hitsound
01:13:189 - I think adding a note there should be good
01:56:021 (1) - Think you forgat a clap
03:18:218 (2) - It's the same for Easy
03:41:282 (1) - I don't think you should NC
AR is too high, diminush it to 6 or 7
I see nothing, sorry .v.
00:08:161 (1,1,1,1,1) - Doing NC like that is not permitted i think
See nothign else, sorry.
:) Hopes it helped
posted

Winek wrote:

Hello, this is from my modding queue!

AR is too high, diminush it to 6 or 7 ~ill just keep it, you didnt explain well why im gonna change it to ar 6 or 7 :v
I see nothing, sorry .v.
00:08:161 (1,1,1,1,1) - Doing NC like that is not permitted i think ~its perfectly fine, because all of then is increasing SV
See nothign else, sorry.
:) Hopes it helped
posted

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

[Solar's Easy]
hum, i think the HP and OD is a little high, less some or ? (I think it's already easy enough, except there's some spead issue there)
the distace is a little close. (don't understand what this based on)
  1. 00:30:010 - here is a kick and i think its heavy so add note, extend the slider or repeat the slider ? (well, it's an easy anyway, it's better not to make a radical rhythm change)
  2. 00:33:478 - i think this clap is not need because the rhythm not two claps of white line which you used for 00:31:744 - 00:41:455 - this part (still prefer the previous)
  3. 00:42:842 (6,1) - blanket it better its overlapped with slider's edge (then choose one, you ask me to blanket it or remove the overlap? multiple DS can't be used in easy diff anyway)
  4. 01:02:264 (3) - its pretty but unreadable for beginner (in what kind of sense someone can't pass through a long slider lol)
  5. 01:24:287 - 01:25:501 - listen to the music's rhythm, maybe you just beat 1/1 but its not good for this different rhythm. (I prefer use the red tick on the normal diff, personally, but I'll see another opinion later)
  6. 02:46:137 - 02:47:351 - same problem as ^
  7. 02:50:472 (1) - add finish because the music have ? (sounds loud)
  8. 03:09:894 (3,4) - blanket it better its overlapped with slider's edge (maybe you should ask to remove the overlap instead of creating a blanket, but won't change this in a meantime)
  9. 03:33:305 - 03:34:519 - same problem as 01:24:287 - 01:25:501 -
  10. 03:35:732 (2) - finish as your rhythm what you used like that part (fixed)
  11. 03:36:079 (3) - clap the front and add whistle as your rhythm what you used (don't remember adding clap at the previous section though)
  12. 03:37:640 (4) - add kick i think its better than none (actully never heard this term being exist)
  13. 03:39:721 (6) - add clap i think its better (prefer it as is)


[Solar's Normal]
i think the distance is a little close, too.
  1. 01:24:981 (2,1) - overlap and looks not pretty (not a big deal)
  2. 02:57:062 (2,3) - blanket it better its overlapped with slider's edge (well, this is normal though)

Lapis Aoki wrote:

From my queue~
[Solar's Easy]
00:21:600 -Note between the 2 sliders.
00:27:149 -^
00:29:923 -^
01:09:547 -Note above the slider.
01:15:097 -^
01:17:178 -^
01:18:652 -^
01:20:646 -^
01:22:727 -^
01:27:062 -Make the slider short till 01:27:582
01:28:623 -Move the spinner back to 01:27:669 then make the spinner long till 01:31:397
01:43:449 -Note between the 2 sliders.
01:48:998 -^
02:36:946 -Note above the slider.
02:39:027 -^
02:40:415 -^
02:42:495 -^
02:44:576 -^
02:48:912 -Make the slider small till 02:49:432
02:50:472 -Move the spinner backwards to 02:49:519 then make long till 02:53:247
03:29:663 -Note above the slider.
03:31:744 -^
03:37:987 -^
03:41:628 -Make the slider small till 03:42:149
03:43:189 -Move the spinner backwards to 03:42:235 and make it long till 03:45:790
[Solar's Normal]
00:10:935 -Note.
00:21:513 -^
00:25:675 -^
00:27:235 -^
00:54:114 -^
00:55:588 -^
00:56:975 -^
01:12:929 -^
01:43:363 -^
01:43:623 -^
01:47:784 -^
01:49:085 -^
02:34:865 -^

hm.. after I think twice, maybe I'll try to mod your mod back (yo dawg)
firstly, you shouldn't give an easy diff to be harder than it could be toleranced
second, think twice before considering if adding a note can make the rhythm better, SO it could be much better if you testplay the map first before considering something that will possibly ruin the rhythm

Winek wrote:

Hello, this is from my modding queue!

00:22:727 (4) - Maybe place this note at 00:22:553 like others on this part (make sure of the rhythm first, then you'll see why)
00:33:131 (3) - I think oyu forgot something at the end of slider about hitsound (fixed)
01:13:189 - I think adding a note there should be good (prefer the current one)
01:56:021 (1) - Think you forgat a clap (fixed)
03:18:218 (2) - It's the same for Easy (prefer it as is)
03:41:282 (1) - I don't think you should NC (reason?)
[/box]

update (lol sorry super late):
http://puu.sh/6o7Eu.osu
http://puu.sh/6o7F4.osu
posted
Updated! finally lol
posted
for my queue

i love this song~~



prefect map ……

[insane]

00:32:612 (4) - maybe is you wish ↓↓↓



00:36:947 (5) - i think it‘s fun ↓↓↓



01:12:670 (4,5) - ctrl + G , maybe novel

02:05:213 (2) - move to (112.108) , stack 02:05:906 (4) -

02:34:866 (6) - distance 2.0 ? i think move to (344.160) is beautiful

03:11:803 (1) - maybe unrankable

[hard]

00:15:790 - your insane diff have whistle , but hard diff no whistle

00:16:657 - ^

00:17:004 - your insane diff no whistle

00:31:397 - finish ?

00:40:415 -

00:41:802 -

00:53:941 -

maybe you wish your hard diff be different from insane diff :?

[normal&easy]

DS 0.6~0.8 ? i think is too close , i suggest use 1.0~1.2 , player move the cursor on slider faster than move the cursor between the note is unreasonable …… maybe …… :?
posted
Yun source dapat... "グリザイアの楽園 -LE EDEN DE LA GRISAIA-". Pa add din "Rakuen" sa tags!

Tawagin mo na lang ako pag naka-respond ka sa mod above. :P
posted

zengdaen wrote:

for my queue

i love this song~~

~pro :3

prefect map ……

[insane]

00:32:612 (4) - maybe is you wish ↓↓↓ ~no no no, it will break the flow



00:36:947 (5) - i think it‘s fun ↓↓↓ ~good idea, but i wanna blanket it on the previous slider so no change



01:12:670 (4,5) - ctrl + G , maybe novel~no, the flow is perfect here

02:05:213 (2) - move to (112.108) , stack 02:05:906 (4) - ~dunno, still thinking about this :3

02:34:866 (6) - distance 2.0 ? i think move to (344.160) is beautiful ~this is perfectly fine, no change

03:11:803 (1) - maybe unrankable ~no its not unrankable, a BAT told me it was fine

[hard]

00:15:790 - your insane diff have whistle , but hard diff no whistle

00:16:657 - ^

00:17:004 - your insane diff no whistle

00:31:397 - finish ?

00:40:415 -

00:41:802 -

00:53:941 -

maybe you wish your hard diff be different from insane diff :?
~All Hitsound fix :3
Thanks for the Mod, and the Stars :)
posted
This set is pretty great. Meron lang isa akong gustong sabihin. :P

[Insane]
03:11:803 (1) - I don't approve of this slider. It has a clear path, but I would rather see something else there. Hope you can understand.
posted
lol it's near

maybe this weekend or next week na to.
hehehehe. ;)
posted

dkun wrote:

This set is pretty great. Meron lang isa akong gustong sabihin. :P

[Insane]
03:11:803 (1) - I don't approve of this slider. It has a clear path, but I would rather see something else there. Hope you can understand.~yeah, tinanong tanong ko n rin sa ibang BAT about this, okay lng cya but ewan, im doubting this slider too, baguhin ko n lng :v

Mira-san wrote:

lol it's near

maybe this weekend or next week na to.
hehehehe. ;)
GG hahahaha
posted
19:45 *NoHitter is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/338797 Okui Masami - FISSION [Insane]]
19:45 NoHitter: gogogo
19:45 -Asagi: yeah hahaha
19:45 -Asagi: nilagyan ni dkun ng star icon ng d ko nalalaman lol
19:46 NoHitter: 00:00:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The whistles here sound noisy :(
19:46 -Asagi: imomod mo n ba?
19:46 NoHitter: yea
19:46 NoHitter: IMO only add a whistle at 00:02:611
19:46 NoHitter: 00:02:611 () -
19:47 -Asagi: oh irc
19:47 NoHitter: kasi IRC mod ka rin eh ;)
19:48 -Asagi: hahaha
19:48 -Asagi: time to close app :v para d m DC
19:48 NoHitter: 00:04:346 (4,5,6,7) - pattern suggestion since you love blankets http://puu.sh/6wgIt.jpg
19:49 -Asagi: about 00:00:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ewan ko kung bket noisy, ung whistle kase ay naka follow sa vocals
19:49 NoHitter: lower the volume a bit then
19:49 NoHitter: whistles sound a bit noisy if you spam them even soft whistles :(
19:50 -Asagi: 00:04:346 (4,5,6,7) - hayaan ko na to XD, ginawa ko rin yan dati, pero :v
19:50 NoHitter: 00:07:814 (8) - this should be at x:448, y:64 for better flow
19:50 -Asagi: ginawa ko n lng 30
19:50 NoHitter: you can move the entire pattern before 00:09:548 (1) - along with the (8)
19:51 -Asagi: 00:07:814 (8) - done, tapos isinunod ko n lng ung iba para d masira ung anti jump
19:52 NoHitter: 00:10:936 (5) - ok you should rotate this by 15 degrees in place
19:52 NoHitter: so that the notes will flow into the slider
19:52 -Asagi: yeah yeah, medyo pinalaki ko n lng ng konting spacing ung 1 1 1 1 combos
19:52 NoHitter: http://puu.sh/6wgR2.jpg
19:53 NoHitter: actually mga 21 degrees dapat siya
19:53 -Asagi: fixed
19:53 NoHitter: http://puu.sh/6wgSZ.jpg
19:53 -Asagi: gawin ko n lng 21?
19:53 -Asagi: parang medyo off
19:53 NoHitter: yeah IMO
19:53 NoHitter: well up to you
19:53 -Asagi: or sala lng ung spacing nung slider hahaha
19:53 NoHitter: 15 or 21 wotks
19:53 NoHitter: works
19:54 -Asagi: yeah fixed
19:54 NoHitter: 00:12:323 (1) - make this mirror 00:11:976 (8) ?
19:55 -Asagi: so you mean gagawin kong straight? vise versa
19:56 NoHitter: suggestion ko para may kointing symettry pero ok lang kung hindi
19:56 -Asagi: geh fixed
19:56 NoHitter: 00:12:843 (2,4) - overlap :(
19:56 NoHitter: you can lower (2) for good effect
19:57 NoHitter: http://puu.sh/6wh0Q.jpg
19:57 -Asagi: ewan ko, intentional kase yan para naka blanket cya sa end neto 00:13:364 (4) -
19:58 -Asagi: okay suggestion is better lol
19:58 -Asagi: pero ang layo sa previous note hahaha
19:59 -Asagi: tuloy n pla lol
19:59 NoHitter: http://puu.sh/6wh4u.jpg
19:59 NoHitter: http://puu.sh/6wh5a.jpg
20:00 -Asagi: cguro pde n yun, kahit malayo
20:00 -Asagi: 00:16:832 (2,3) - parang ganto nmn cya kalayo
20:01 NoHitter: 00:15:617 (4) - maybe change the pattern a bit so it follows the previous slider a bit? rotate it in place by 30. http://puu.sh/6wh92.jpg http://puu.sh/6wh9q.jpg
20:02 NoHitter: 00:17:872 (1) - not perfect blanket. [nazi] move right by one grid
20:04 NoHitter: 00:20:647 (1) - IMO you need to add a cymbal here
20:05 NoHitter: you can hear the cymbals in the background, so add a finish. it matches with your custom hs anyway
20:05 -Asagi: yeah done sa finish
20:05 NoHitter: 00:22:728 (2) - sounds pretty empty IMO
20:06 NoHitter: maybe try adding the original soft-whistle on the head?
20:06 NoHitter: to highlight the vocals
20:06 -Asagi: panong empty? sa hitsounds?
20:06 NoHitter: yea :(
20:07 NoHitter: even if the music itself is silent
20:07 NoHitter: medyo offputting siya
20:07 -Asagi: ewan ko, i follow the vocals dun ,
20:08 NoHitter: that's fine then :)
20:08 -Asagi: at ung hitsound ay lagi kong binabase sa mismong instru
20:08 -Asagi: d ko type ung nag aadd ng hitsound kahit wala nmn, pero not sure
20:08 -Asagi: yeah hahaha
20:08 NoHitter: 00:31:398 (5) - doesn't flow quite right. you're moving in a curving upwards direction then you suddenly go down
20:10 NoHitter: maybe? http://puu.sh/6whr6.jpg
20:11 -Asagi: or how bout i ctrl g ko n lng to? 00:31:572 (6) -
20:11 NoHitter: 00:46:138 (3) - this should be placed a little down a bit to flow properly http://puu.sh/6whu2.jpg
20:12 NoHitter: well my main qualm about 00:31:398 (5) - is because of the stream before it
20:12 -Asagi: ^fixed
20:13 NoHitter: http://puu.sh/6whwo.jpg
20:13 NoHitter: as opposed to
20:14 NoHitter: http://puu.sh/6why6.jpg
20:14 NoHitter: well up to you :)
20:15 NoHitter: 01:07:814 (3) - normal finish here maybe?
20:16 -Asagi: about sa 1/4, well i think okay n ung luma, http://puu.sh/6whCa.jpg
20:16 NoHitter: 01:09:548 (2) - doesn't quite blanket (1) properly. move it to the left? http://puu.sh/6whCO.jpg
20:16 -Asagi: kase pag dating dun sa 1/4 sliders eh halos inde mo n gagalawin ung cursor pababa
20:17 NoHitter: ok then. the sharp angle just doesn't look thaty good xD
20:17 -Asagi: yeah hahaha XD
20:17 -Asagi: maybe lng nmn
20:17 -Asagi: depende n rin :v
20:17 NoHitter: oh god your custom sliderslide
20:17 -Asagi: anyway, fixed
20:18 -Asagi: dunsa move sa left
20:18 -Asagi: ay?
20:18 -Asagi: nadami? hahaha
20:19 -Asagi: madami*
20:19 NoHitter: 01:18:566 (5) - I would flip this 90 http://puu.sh/6whIm.jpg
20:19 NoHitter: the current one doesn't quite look good (5) facing teh same direction as (4)
20:20 NoHitter: 01:19:086 (2) - http://puu.sh/6whJs.jpg
20:20 -Asagi: how bout ung sample mo, tapos ctrl G ko n lng ung (5)
20:21 -Asagi: ^fixed lel
20:21 NoHitter: if you want it to move in that direction, try this http://puu.sh/6whLQ.jpg
20:22 NoHitter: 01:27:062 (1) - finish here?
20:22 -Asagi: ayan n nga sinasabi ko hahaha
20:22 -Asagi: okay fixed
20:22 -Asagi: added
20:23 -Asagi: added pati dun sa katulad na part :v
20:23 NoHitter: 01:21:514 (1) - try adding a normal soft-hitwhistle here if you don't want a hitfinish
20:24 NoHitter: this second part's flow is better mapped :)
20:25 -Asagi: yeah hahaha
20:25 -Asagi: pansin ko rin hahaha
20:25 -Asagi: kase ung 1st part napapaicp ako kung ano ilalagay ko :v
20:25 -Asagi: ung 2nd part alam ko na gagawin kea GG
20:25 NoHitter: 02:29:663 (3) - normal finish here
20:26 NoHitter: 02:28:450 (2) - soft-whistle here (from base sampleset)
20:26 NoHitter: oh god by "normal soft-whistle" i meant the default one
20:27 -Asagi: palilito ako
20:27 -Asagi: http://puu.sh/6whYk.jpg
20:27 NoHitter: 02:32:265 (5) - finish here
20:27 -Asagi: gagawin tong normal? ung sample set?
20:27 NoHitter: for what yan?
20:27 NoHitter: yung 02:29:663 (3)?
20:28 -Asagi: no
20:28 -Asagi: 01:21:514 (1) -
20:28 -Asagi: 02:28:450 (2) - pati d2? ewan ko ahaha
20:29 NoHitter: keep it soft but you need to add a timing point na base sampleset
20:29 NoHitter: http://puu.sh/6wi2C.png
20:29 NoHitter: default diyan
20:30 NoHitter: 02:31:397 (2) - same comment with the sliders not facing each other xD http://puu.sh/6wi3A.jpg
20:30 -Asagi: nalito ako hahaha
20:31 -Asagi: ^ewan ko about this XD
20:31 -Asagi: pag iicpan ko muna hahaha
20:32 NoHitter: 02:56:022 (1) - needs more whistles at this part :D
20:32 NoHitter: the violin <3
20:32 NoHitter: viola pala
20:32 NoHitter: mas mababa yung tunog
20:33 -Asagi: ewan ko pero basta violin part hahaha
20:33 -Asagi: what whistle? ung custom?
20:33 NoHitter: by whistles gamitin mo yung default na whistle
20:33 NoHitter: your current whistle sounds like a drum xD
20:33 NoHitter: 03:11:803 (1) - :( ugly looking slider
20:34 -Asagi: ung custom ay kicks lol
20:34 NoHitter: 03:09:809 (8,9) - rotate by 25 so it will flow better http://puu.sh/6wicA.jpg
20:35 -Asagi: anyway, sabi ni dkun palitan ko daw yan
20:35 -Asagi: suggesitions?
20:35 NoHitter: yeah basta dun sa violin part gawin mo yung normal whistle yung parang chime
20:35 -Asagi: teka mmya n yang hitsound sa violin hahaha
20:35 NoHitter: also yung finishes na slider tick = not recommended
20:36 -Asagi: eh? why?
20:36 NoHitter: pwede pa yung clap, pero yung finish usually you have to click on a object
20:36 NoHitter: a finish is very distinct
20:36 NoHitter: medyo nakakagulat siya kung nasa slidertick
20:37 -Asagi: 03:06:947 (4) - d2 lng ata meron nun eh
20:39 NoHitter: also slider suggestion,. you can make it wiggle but make it more obvious http://puu.sh/6wik0.jpg
20:39 NoHitter: 03:06:947 (4) - also
20:39 NoHitter: yung slidertick finish
20:39 NoHitter: 03:11:109 (4) - here too
20:40 -Asagi: so tanggalin ko na?
20:40 NoHitter: 03:12:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - make these face the opposite direction
20:40 NoHitter: top to down instead of down to top
20:40 NoHitter: I woudl recommend you place a note where the slidertick is instead
20:40 NoHitter: break it down into notes
20:40 -Asagi: no, tanggalin ko n lng
20:40 NoHitter: http://puu.sh/6wioo.jpg
20:40 -Asagi: naka follow kase un sa violin
20:41 NoHitter: btw what I meant by opposite direction is http://puu.sh/6wipi.jpg
20:42 NoHitter: 03:27:583 (1) - for better blanketing http://puu.sh/6wisz.jpg
20:43 -Asagi: ewan ko intentional kase yan
20:44 NoHitter: end this at the white tick 03:45:444 (1) -
20:44 -Asagi: para sakto ung basta
20:44 NoHitter: you can hear the rhythm at the white tick there
20:44 NoHitter: hmm ok then
20:45 NoHitter: suggestion lang naman yun xD
20:46 NoHitter: wow your hard seems flawless so far :)
20:47 -Asagi: :O
20:47 -Asagi: actually copy paste lng yan sa hard, pinadali ko lng :v
20:47 NoHitter: dont say that out loud lol
20:47 NoHitter: 01:56:368 (4) - not perfectly in the middle
20:47 NoHitter: http://puu.sh/6wiDu.jpg
20:48 -Asagi: yeah hahaha
20:48 -Asagi: medyo nakakatamad kase hashaha
20:48 -Asagi: fixed
20:49 NoHitter: 03:06:946 (3) - finish :(
20:49 NoHitter: at slidertick
20:49 NoHitter: 03:11:802 (1) - same comment xD
20:49 NoHitter: ugly slider
20:51 -Asagi: hahaha
20:51 -Asagi: mmya mag iicp ako ng slider dyan :v
20:51 -Asagi: 03:45:443 (5) - this i know iknow hahah
20:52 NoHitter: ironiccaly it sounds fine in Hard but not in insane O_O
20:52 -Asagi: hahaha
20:52 -Asagi: halos tulad na tulad nmn yun
20:52 NoHitter: something about the hitsound maybe?
20:52 -Asagi: wala
20:53 -Asagi: tulad n tulad yan
20:53 NoHitter: but the one in hard sounds less offputting
20:53 NoHitter: xD
20:53 NoHitter: ewan ko na
20:53 -Asagi: ung mga tick tulad n tulad yan sa insane
20:53 -Asagi: alam mo nmn :v hahaha
20:54 NoHitter: 02:01:917 (4,5,6,1) - confusing spacing in Easy lol
20:55 NoHitter: apart from that Easy is fine. I dislike some slider shapes though
20:55 NoHitter: Normal checks out too
20:55 -Asagi: aaa no no
20:56 -Asagi: GD yan :v
20:56 NoHitter: contact the mapper na lang
20:56 -Asagi: dead
20:56 -Asagi: i mean offline :v


[Solar's Easy]
- 02:01:917 (4,5,6,1) - The 1/2 to 1/1 spacing is confusing. I HIGHLY recommend changing the transition to a slider.
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