Seriously, this song NEEDS to be ranked. Haven't tried the Insane setting yet, but the Hard version is some of the most fun I've had playing a beatmap. Kudos, Timorisu! 
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[General]
Is this barcoding of the timeline really necessary?
The increase from the Normal to the Hard is much more than from the Hard to the Insane, you should either make the Hard easier or the Insane harder.
[Hard]
Some patterns/parts are harder than they are in the Insane, I don't think that's a good idea. With a bad accuracy and with HardRock this could even give more PP than the Insane I think. The copy-paste-reverseslider were too frequent, you should definetely replace them with other objects that aren't copy-pasted.
You placed the combos like here 02:28:991 (5,6,1) on the last circle of the stream but you didn't place a new combo 02:31:569 (4,5,6) - try to make these more consistent.
[Insane]
I have the problem that I can't read AR9 because many maps have a density which is too high. On this map, I have the problem that I almost can't read AR9 because the density is too low. Maybe a bit exaggerated but the point is: Lower the AR. (AR8-8.5 seems fine) The copy-paste on this difficulty was clearly visible, you should reduce it.
01:11:413 (8,1,2,3) - not consitent comboing, make the 3 the start of the new combo instead of the current one
01:41:061 (5,6,1) - inconsistent comboing, make the 5 the start of the combo instead of the current 1 (I guess you comboed it like this because the pitch (? dont know the proper word) got higher but combos should be placed consistently based on the rhythm)
01:44:928 (4,1) - You made the preludes be the 1 in the combo in the last part, try to make it consistently either the end or the beginning of the combo
01:46:803 (6,1) - ^
02:20:788 (6) and 02:22:663 (1)are inconsistent in comboing, either make a new combo after both or after none of them make no new combo on this slider 02:22:663 (1)
03:48:913 (5,1,2,3) - not consitent comboing, make the 3 the start of the new combo instead of the current one
03:52:428 (8,1) - make the 8 the start of the combo instead of the current 1
I saw that most of the blankets weren't exact. Listing all of them would even take longer than listing all correct ones. You better check all blankets if they are exact an adjust them (by activating 1/16 snap, looking where the approach circle is the closest to the slider border) if they aren't.
Is this barcoding of the timeline really necessary?
The increase from the Normal to the Hard is much more than from the Hard to the Insane, you should either make the Hard easier or the Insane harder.
[Hard]
Some patterns/parts are harder than they are in the Insane, I don't think that's a good idea. With a bad accuracy and with HardRock this could even give more PP than the Insane I think. The copy-paste-reverseslider were too frequent, you should definetely replace them with other objects that aren't copy-pasted.
You placed the combos like here 02:28:991 (5,6,1) on the last circle of the stream but you didn't place a new combo 02:31:569 (4,5,6) - try to make these more consistent.
[Insane]
I have the problem that I can't read AR9 because many maps have a density which is too high. On this map, I have the problem that I almost can't read AR9 because the density is too low. Maybe a bit exaggerated but the point is: Lower the AR. (AR8-8.5 seems fine) The copy-paste on this difficulty was clearly visible, you should reduce it.
01:11:413 (8,1,2,3) - not consitent comboing, make the 3 the start of the new combo instead of the current one
01:41:061 (5,6,1) - inconsistent comboing, make the 5 the start of the combo instead of the current 1 (I guess you comboed it like this because the pitch (? dont know the proper word) got higher but combos should be placed consistently based on the rhythm)
01:44:928 (4,1) - You made the preludes be the 1 in the combo in the last part, try to make it consistently either the end or the beginning of the combo
01:46:803 (6,1) - ^
02:20:788 (6) and 02:22:663 (1)
03:48:913 (5,1,2,3) - not consitent comboing, make the 3 the start of the new combo instead of the current one
03:52:428 (8,1) - make the 8 the start of the combo instead of the current 1
I saw that most of the blankets weren't exact. Listing all of them would even take longer than listing all correct ones. You better check all blankets if they are exact an adjust them (by activating 1/16 snap, looking where the approach circle is the closest to the slider border) if they aren't.
Topic Starter
Fixed Hard for now, NCing on Insane will have to get a revision anyways so I'll see when I can do that
Thanks
Thanks
1st attempting to mod a beatmap , so apologies for any lacking Osu! basic experience.... 
[Minao's Normal]
00:40:241 (5) - Some skin like mine (Taiko No Tatsujin v6.1) may not able to see that after the circle (3). If you could lower it down a bit then it's a clear hit for me to do it.
[Minao's Normal]
00:40:241 (5) - Some skin like mine (Taiko No Tatsujin v6.1) may not able to see that after the circle (3). If you could lower it down a bit then it's a clear hit for me to do it.
Hey there !
Here's the small mod I told you about. Hope it's gonna be useful.
General
Disconnected
Hitsounding is simple but fine, though you could sparingly add claps to some notes even when not requested by the rhythm.
Not much more to say, except that you don't use enough SV variation for a challenging insane.
Overall nice diff.
Generally speaking, pretty nice map, good way to ranked !
Here's the small mod I told you about. Hope it's gonna be useful.
General
- First of all, very nice song. Nothing to do with mod, but still.
- I'm not competent at all for Normal, so I trust Minao on this one.
- I had a look at the three other diffs. Disconnected's mod is just below (5 most important suggestions are in bold).
- I didn't like your insane much, and I suggest switching to AR8 or 8,5, because just like Zeonive, I (personally) can't read AR9 with such a low density. Didn't go any further on this diff.
- Hard is absolutely perfect. AR8 +DT matches my current playing skills, so that's what I do most, and this Hard is one of the map I play the most. Feels really amazing (NB : after having a look at some of your others beatmaps, I'm rarely a big fan of your insanes, however all your hards are amazing)
- Focus a bit on avoiding copy paste, not very pleasant in some parts.
- Try changing combo colours. Your background is very nice, you could do something very attractive. There's a note on this at the end of the mod.
Disconnected
- 00:25:709 (4) - NC
- 00:26:413 (1) - Remove NC if you focus on consistency, keep NC if you prefer having an esthetic contrast with triangle (I'd keep it).
- 00:28:288 (5) - NC. Single note alone in combo is OK if you have the right combo colours, it's the beginning of "Dsiconnected" and doesn't have much to do with the previous slider (the apparent link is made by your choice of a spinner instead of mapping "Disconnected")
- 00:52:663 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Consider stacking perfectly pairs instead of shifting the second one a bit. This is currently not very pleasant nor to play or to look at.
- 00:59:225 (9) - Consider splitting up this in order to bring out the "Dis-con-nec-ted" in the background. An example could be (in 1/8) : Single note - 3 ticks reverse slider - Single note - 3 ticks reverse slider - Single note. The contrast with the half beat silence will be nice. Playing with hitsound could be great to add diversity.
- 01:01:100 (4) - NC possible for esthetic contrast between two exact same patterns
- 01:03:444 (3) - NC
- 01:04:850 (9) - If you focus on consistency, make the same NC choice as 01:01:100. Otherwise if you prefer esthetic, you can keep no NC for same colours-same sliders, or NC to make a contrast between (7,8) and (9,10). I personally like having NC at 01:01:100 and no NC here, producing a little "unexpected" effect
- 01:07:428 (5) - Depending on how you feel the music, NC here and remove next NC if you think (5) belongs to next part, or keep it this way if you think it marks the end of the previous part. (I'd NC)
- 01:08:600 (4) - Depending on your previous choices, NC or don't for consistency, but there's no esthetic solution here.
- 01:10:944 (4) - NC here and remove NC at 01:11:413 (1). Imo you should avoid having a NC at the end of a stream, except when the stream belongs clearly to the previous part (not the case) and is not there to stress the beginning of a new "sentence" (which is the most frequent use of short streams [3-4-5 notes], and precisely the aim of this one).
- 01:12:350 (3) - Nc possible for consistency, depending on your choices.
- 01:13:053 - This seems to me like a poor place for a spinner. You already placed quite some spinners in the map, and this could be a great part if mapped correctly. Spinner is still possible, but hurts a bit.
- 01:18:444 (5) - Apply the same decision as to 01:10:944 (4)
- 01:19:850 (3) - See 01:04:850 (9)
- 01:20:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - Keep the rhythm if you want, but please change the pattern. Unpleasant "already did this" feeling.
- 01:22:663 (1,2,3,4) - This is great. Very pleasant to see and to play.
- 01:25:944 (5) - Apply the same decision as to 01:10:944 (4)
- 01:29:225 - Two beats long silence fits perfectly the music and creates some cool effect, but doesn't feel great after a spinner. One option is replacing the spinner by a very low SV slider lasting just as long. However, it is still frustrating not to play the "Disconnected". That's why I'd choose to shorten the spinner of 1/4 of a beat (finishing on blue tick), to silence the end-hitsound of the spinner (sacrifices have to be made) and to do something cool and dynamic with 1/4 beat sliders, something like below (if you do so, I suggest keeping NC on each slider, that really makes a disconnected effect)
- 01:31:100 (4) - NC possible for consistency (depending on choices) or esthetic, just like 01:01:100 (4).
- 01:36:022 (6) - NC possible. "Unexpected" effect.
- 01:40:944 (6) - NC here and remove NC at 01:41:413
- 01:40:944 (6,7,8,9,1) - Pure esthetic suggestion, you could accompany the music by making the stream start from bottom to top, could be cool. Still absolutely unnecessary.
- 01:46:100 (5) - You know the stuff. But here, figure is not purly symmetrical thanks to (1), so you can change usual choice.
- 01:52:194 (9) - See 01:07:428 (5)
- 01:55:944 (6) - NC here and remove NC at 1:56:413 (1)
- 02:00:163 - Background pulsing during break is very nice.
- 02:11:413 - The dubstep part (until 02:43:991) would need a remap in my opinion. This is currently the hardest diff on this map, and I think you don't play enough with things like Slider Velocity or 1/4 beat sliders, two elements that are usually crucial in dubstep maps. If you want examples, have a look at Meg & Dia - Monster (DotEXE Remix) mapped by nold_1702, especially the hardest diffs. Anyway, if you wanna keep it this way, it's your map, it's your choice. Once more, it's not a question of bad rhythm, it's just... frustrating. Following points of the mod will focus on your current map, rather than on remapping this part, which is up to you.
- 02:11:413 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You could NC every slider, it's consistent with the song and one more time, pretty cool "disconnected" effect.
- 02:18:678 (5,6,1) - Current NC pattern is OK, but I think you should rather NC (5) and remove NC on (1), the triple doesn't belong to previous combo and is here purely for stressing (1).
- 02:19:850 (2) - NC here depending on previous choice
- 02:21:491 (2) - Possible NC here. The slider alone in combo doesn't hurt.
- 02:26:178 (4,5,1) - See 02:18:678 (5,6,1)
- 02:28:991 (2) - Apply same decision as to 02:21:491 (2)
- 02:30:163 (1,2) - You could space out a bit more, and make it look not symmetrical. Would be a bit more challenging.
- 02:33:678 (6,7,1) - See 02:18:678 (5,6,1)
- 02:35:670 (5,1) - This NC choice is not very consistent, but looks fairly great. Up to you.
- 02:37:663 (1,2) - Constant symmetry is requested in low diffs, but in insane ones it ends up being a bit boring. You could also space out a bit more, same reason as previously.
- 02:39:538 (1,2) - This pattern is perfect. You should use it (just a bit, don't wanna get disgusted) more frequently.
- 02:41:178 (6,7,1) - See 02:18:678 (5,6,1)
- 02:43:288 (7) - NC
- 02:44:225 - Break is OK, but could be a very jumpy attractive part. You decide.
- 02:52:663 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Try not using the same pattern as first time. Tastes copy paste too much. It was OK for the previous one, but here repetition is boring. If you still keep it this way, see 00:52:663 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4). There's anyway in the rest of the map quite nothing new, so just consider previous notes. I'm not a huge fan of CTRL+C CTRL+V of this scale, but it still matches the music, which is also repetitive.
- 03:30:163 - Last but not least, this last part is slightly different from the previous ones (rhythm on higher notes on the background). If this is definitely your hardest diff, you could have made something up to mark this difference, would have dynamized the end of the map.
Hitsounding is simple but fine, though you could sparingly add claps to some notes even when not requested by the rhythm.
Not much more to say, except that you don't use enough SV variation for a challenging insane.
Overall nice diff.
Generally speaking, pretty nice map, good way to ranked !
Short mods from #modreq
[General]
[General]
- Use custom combo colors which fits the music.
- Use stack leniency of 7.
- 00:43:053 (1) - Recovery time too short. Replace beats similar to this one:
- 00:56:413 (1,2,3,4) - Reconstruct this pattern as this is not distance snapped.
- 00:58:288 (1) - Recovery time too short. Replace beats similar to this one:
- 02:58:288 (1) - ^
- Just make sure your Normal will be under 2.0 star diff after adjusting it.
- 02:35:319 (2) - Why 1/16sliders? You'll got red warning when you do that. Replace with circle.
- 02:59:225 (9) - Why 1/16sliders? Just replace with spinner or reduce to 1/8.
Thank you!TianInfinity wrote:
[Minao's Normal]
00:40:241 (5) - Some skin like mine (Taiko No Tatsujin v6.1) may not able to see that after the circle (3). If you could lower it down a bit then it's a clear hit for me to do it. Changed this part
Thank you for your mod!Neil Leo wrote:
Short mods from #modreq
[General][Minao's Normal]
- Use custom combo colors which fits the music.
- Use stack leniency of 7. Changed
- 00:43:053 (1) - Recovery time too short. Replace beats similar to this one Changed
- 00:56:413 (1,2,3,4) - Reconstruct this pattern as this is not distance snapped. Changed
- 00:58:288 (1) - Recovery time too short. Replace beats similar to this one
No for these 2 ones because I think a spinner is the best and funnier option here, and the next objects are near the center so it's not that hard to catch quickly.- 02:58:288 (1) - ^
- Just make sure your Normal will be under 2.0 star diff after adjusting it.
Minao's Normal:
00:58:288 (1) - End at 00:59:225 for a safe recovery time.
01:48:913 (1,2) - It would be definitely better if you can find a way to remove this barely overlapped pattern.
01:58:053 (1) - Consider a Finish.
02:58:288 (1) - End at 02:59:225 for a safe recovery time.
Hard:
-- AR highly imbalanced with [Normal]. Honestly I think even AR6 will work here since there are no serious jumps and triple streams are readable enough.
03:44:928 (1) - Little tough this being right after 1/2 a spinner. Recommended to remove, but up to you.
Insane:
02:54:538 (6) - Consider NC even this is a variated pattern from the previous.
Disconnected:
-- Check unsnapped objects.
00:56:881 (2) - 02:56:881 (2) - Offcreen.
01:52:194 (9,1) - 03:52:194 (7,1) - Personally little disappointed since these sliders failed interacting each other.
Call me back for a bubble.
00:58:288 (1) - End at 00:59:225 for a safe recovery time.
01:48:913 (1,2) - It would be definitely better if you can find a way to remove this barely overlapped pattern.
01:58:053 (1) - Consider a Finish.
02:58:288 (1) - End at 02:59:225 for a safe recovery time.
Hard:
-- AR highly imbalanced with [Normal]. Honestly I think even AR6 will work here since there are no serious jumps and triple streams are readable enough.
03:44:928 (1) - Little tough this being right after 1/2 a spinner. Recommended to remove, but up to you.
Insane:
02:54:538 (6) - Consider NC even this is a variated pattern from the previous.
Disconnected:
-- Check unsnapped objects.
00:56:881 (2) - 02:56:881 (2) - Offcreen.
01:52:194 (9,1) - 03:52:194 (7,1) - Personally little disappointed since these sliders failed interacting each other.
Call me back for a bubble.
Topic Starter
Fixed all on my side except for the following:
Changed Hard AR to 7, 6 is a little slow imo.
01:52:194 (9,1) - is kind of a weird thing to force interaction on, I thought about doing something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2688713 but I am not too sure.
I'll wait for Minao's diff to update.
Thanks!
No kds since this is a second mod
Changed Hard AR to 7, 6 is a little slow imo.
01:52:194 (9,1) - is kind of a weird thing to force interaction on, I thought about doing something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2688713 but I am not too sure.
I'll wait for Minao's diff to update.
Thanks!
No kds since this is a second mod
Thank youSonnyc wrote:
Minao's Normal:
Fixed all except:
01:48:913 (1,2) - It would be definitely better if you can find a way to remove this barely overlapped pattern.
because I can't find a better pattern '-'
Enjoy your bubble~
irc
15:04 Timorisu: piiiiiiiipe
15:04 Timorisu: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3834171
15:04 Timorisu: IRC Modded, Map is pretty fine except for the spread gap between Normal -> Hard
15:04 Timorisu: can you check?
15:04 Timorisu: if you think normal -> hard gap is too big
19:29 Timorisu: ok hi
19:29 Secretpipe: let's do this boyyyyy
19:29 Secretpipe: first
19:29 Secretpipe: of all
19:29 Secretpipe: SORRY FOR THE LATE
19:29 Secretpipe: >>>>///<>/<
19:29 Timorisu: lol np x3
19:29 Secretpipe: x3
19:29 Secretpipe: minao's here?
19:29 Timorisu: no :L
19:32 Secretpipe: what should I do fi I find things for minao?
19:32 Timorisu: maybe post our IRC
19:32 Timorisu: and under that NM for minaos diff
19:32 Secretpipe: the diff is meh
19:32 Secretpipe: 00:28:053 (3,4) -
19:33 Secretpipe: rhythm here?
19:33 Timorisu: what diff??
19:33 Timorisu: lol
19:33 Secretpipe: normal
19:34 Secretpipe: I'd like to rank it today
19:34 Secretpipe: but he/she's not here
19:34 Timorisu: minao will appear
19:34 Timorisu: he always comes on at evening :P
19:35 Timorisu: and hes french :o so maybe u can do very fast irc
19:35 Secretpipe: he's fr ?
19:35 Secretpipe: kk nice
19:35 Secretpipe: then let's do your diffs for now
19:35 Timorisu: ok :3
19:36 Secretpipe: cs 4 for hard / insane and Disconnected diffs? ;;
19:36 Secretpipe: put at least 3.8 for hard
19:36 Timorisu: cs4 is perfect ;w;
19:36 Secretpipe: oh
19:37 Timorisu: decimal values :/ idk about them lol. only decimals i like to use are .5
19:37 Secretpipe: but it's not good with the spread actually lol
19:37 Secretpipe: or cs 3 for normal
19:37 Secretpipe: are greenlines snapped in your map ? :O
19:37 Timorisu: yes :o
19:38 Secretpipe: 01:05:788 (5) - it tend to be offscreen
19:38 Secretpipe: fix that
19:38 Secretpipe: 01:17:741 (2) - same
19:38 Secretpipe: 01:25:944 (6,7,8) - not sure with these one
19:39 Secretpipe: wow there's a ton of C/p D:
19:39 Secretpipe: 01:28:170 (1) - I think it's too fast for a spinner
19:39 Timorisu: only on start
19:40 Timorisu: is it ok if i put cs 3.7 on hard
19:40 Secretpipe: sure
19:40 Secretpipe: but I'm annoyed
19:40 Secretpipe: you keep using copy/paste stuff
19:40 Secretpipe: D:
19:41 Secretpipe: but there's good patterns
19:41 Secretpipe: 03:05:788 (5) - this is offscreen
19:41 Secretpipe: 03:17:741 (2) - ^
19:42 Timorisu: do you mean off grid
19:42 Timorisu: thats ok isnt it :o
19:42 Secretpipe: 03:30:163 (1,2,3) - it comes too often D:
19:42 Secretpipe: offscreen , it goes over the screen
19:42 Secretpipe: this is unrankable
19:42 Timorisu: o_O
19:42 Timorisu: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2711315
19:42 Timorisu: its fine for me
19:42 Secretpipe: lmao
19:42 Secretpipe: this is gonna be unranked
19:43 Secretpipe: think at 4/3 players
19:43 Secretpipe: Except those , diff is fine
19:43 Secretpipe: but I found a pattern
19:43 Secretpipe: and you used it like 6 times or even more
19:43 Secretpipe: ;;
19:44 Timorisu: it was a rushed diff sry ww
19:44 Secretpipe: it's okay
19:44 Secretpipe: fix the unrankable errors
19:46 Secretpipe: it's funny cause I played that song when I was new
19:46 Secretpipe: now I'm gonna rank it haha
19:46 Timorisu: :O
19:46 Timorisu: u played it when you were new??!
19:46 Secretpipe: yea lol
19:46 Secretpipe: anyway you fixed things on hard?
19:46 Secretpipe: there's this in insane
19:46 Secretpipe: 01:25:241 (5) -
19:47 Timorisu: those arent offscreen at all D:
19:47 Timorisu: let me ask other ppl
19:47 Timorisu: what resolution do you play at?
19:47 Secretpipe: a normal one
19:47 Secretpipe: but I know that it's gonna be unranked
19:47 Secretpipe: man just move them by some grids ;;
19:47 Timorisu: 4:3 or 16:9?
19:48 Timorisu: those arent unrankable lol
19:48 Secretpipe: don't want to take risks though
19:49 Secretpipe: 02:35:319 (2) -
19:49 Secretpipe: WHAT
19:49 Timorisu: okok
19:49 Timorisu: that slider
19:49 Timorisu: everyone hates it
19:49 Timorisu: i will just remove QQ
19:52 Secretpipe: other than that
19:52 Secretpipe: there's nohting
19:52 Secretpipe: except that the map is rushed indeed ffs
19:52 Secretpipe: always the same patterns
19:53 Timorisu: insane diff
19:53 Timorisu: is from original upload x)
19:53 Secretpipe: I see
19:57 Secretpipe: 03:39:069 - missed a beat in disconnected diff?
19:57 Secretpipe: other than that
19:58 Secretpipe: I hope you fixed offscreen objects :/
and here's suggestionf for minao's normal :
- 00:28:053 (3,4) - Je vois clairement pas ou est le rythme ici o.o
- 00:32:038 (3) - La aussi , je te conseille d'extend le slider d'un tick de maière à ce qu'il se finisse sur 00:32:975 -
- 00:58:288 (1) - Ceci est unrankable. C'est la diff la plus facile de mapset et dit toi bien qu'un débutant ne va pas clear un slider long de 3 ticks.
- 01:30:163 (1,2,3,4) - Je suis sûr que tu pourrais faire un truc plus esthétique , même moi j'ai un peu galéré a le read ce pattern.
- 01:37:663 (1) - Pourquoi avoir mis un NC ici ?
- 01:41:647 (1) - La aussi je ne comprend pas.
- 02:58:288 (1) - Unrankable aussi , delete et met autre chose a la place, c'est trop rapide.
- 03:30:163 (1,2,3,4) - T'as vraiment fait un copié/collé? :/ M'enfin bon garde le comme tu veux meme si je te le conseille pas mais fix l'esthétique au moins.
Other than that , call me back afterwards~
SORRY FOR TAKING SO MUCH TIME !!! The 2 last week were full of work ._.
Secretpipe wrote:
Coucou!A mon avis , tu devrais fix tout les éléments mentionnés ci dessous. Aussi je n'ai pas mentionné les autres spinners mais tu devrais les changes aussi
- 00:28:053 (3,4) - Je vois clairement pas ou est le rythme ici o.o J'ai changé cette partie
- 00:32:038 (3) - La aussi , je te conseille d'extend le slider d'un tick de maière à ce qu'il se finisse sur 00:32:975 - Changé aussi
- 00:58:288 (1) - Ceci est unrankable. C'est la diff la plus facile de mapset et dit toi bien qu'un débutant ne va pas clear un slider long de 3 ticks. J'ai enlevé le spinner mais je ne suis pas sûre que ce que j'ai fais soit vraiment mieux '-'
- 01:30:163 (1,2,3,4) - Je suis sûr que tu pourrais faire un truc plus esthétique , même moi j'ai un peu galéré a le read ce pattern. Changé
- 01:37:663 (1) - Pourquoi avoir mis un NC ici ? Parce que j'essaye de garder le même modèle que pour quasiment tout le reste de la map qui est d'environ 8 ticks par combo. Si tu trouves que c'est quand même trop bizarre je pourrais le bouger!
- 01:41:647 (1) - La aussi je ne comprend pas. Pareil que plus haut
- 02:58:288 (1) - Unrankable aussi , delete et met autre chose a la place, c'est trop rapide. Changé
- 03:30:163 (1,2,3,4) - T'as vraiment fait un copié/collé? :/ M'enfin bon garde le comme tu veux meme si je te le conseille pas mais fix l'esthétique au moins. J'ai changé de la même façon que le précédent.
Qu'est-ce qui ne va pas avec les autres spinners? :/
Other than that , call me back afterwards~
Ils sont unrankables , les débutants sont pas assez bon pour spin rapidementMinao wrote:
SORRY FOR TAKING SO MUCH TIME !!! The 2 last week were full of work ._.Secretpipe wrote:
Qu'est-ce qui ne va pas avec les autres spinners? :/
EDIT : Tes greenlines sont a 100% a plusieurs reprises , c'est trop fort !
Considère de les mettre vers ~70/75%
Topic Starter
J'ai changé les greenlines a 70%/80%.
Parlez anglais maintenant s'il vous plaît
Parlez anglais maintenant s'il vous plaît
Star Rating for Normal is above 2.0 stars ;;
Topic Starter
I messaged Minao about a pattern, if that is changed it should easily go below 2 again. Just a matter of time
Weeeeeeeell. After all these changes :
settings , diff gap , SB and unrankable issues , I can finally fulfil your dream o/
Congratz~
settings , diff gap , SB and unrankable issues , I can finally fulfil your dream o/
Congratz~
- Main concern is Normal-difficulty's sudden change of spacing at 00:39:303 - . The fact that the music doesn't change at that point compared to earlier at all, this makes zero sense. Moreover, this is the easiest difficulty in the mapset so a consistent spacing throughout the difficulty is required, because I am sure that will confuse beginners.
That being said, I strongly advise you to make the spacing consistent (1,2x spacing) from 00:15:163 - till 00:38:600 - . That should help newbies to understand the difficulty more and to play it that much better.
General
- You could put an additional note at 04:00:163 - , at least in higher difficulties. Would give you more of a consistent feeling with 01:28:053 (1,1) - and similar spots.
- The OD of every difficulty (except Normal, that's acceptable) is low. I find it much more fitting if Hard would have OD 6, Insane OD 7 and Disconnected OD 7,5, but preferably 8. Normal's OD could be raised to 4 aswell, if Timorisu makes changes to the OD's.
03:05:788 (5) - Like Timorisu did, a whistle would fit really well on the head of this slider, and similar spots such as this. But like said earlier, if this current setup fits for you, then there's no need to change it.- 00:27:584 (3,4) - Would be quite nice if they were spaced normally, stacks like that can be somewhat confusing. Especially because the notes are on the red ticks, and not whites.
- 01:05:788 (5) - Consider moving its end more to the mapping field? (03:05:788 (5) - aswell then)
- 00:23:600 (2,3) - You could try to make changes to this pattern, since the repeat arrow appears somewhat late and can cause unnecessary confusion.
I find the set quite clean otherwise, it's well done. If you have any questions regarding my post, don't hesitate and ask me, I'll try to elaborate on anything! Best of luck!
Topic Starter
Only changed the first thing in Hard, the others don't seem to cause any problems for me. Also ODs are very fitting since this is a slow paced song.
I'll update when I get Minao's diff.
I'll update when I get Minao's diff.
wai? :<
lower disconnected's ar plz.. its quite unfitting for 200bpm..
I hope this beatmap can get ranked again!
Best of luck to you, Timorisu.
Best of luck to you, Timorisu.
Hi!!!
I changed everything, except the suggestion about the SV on 02:15:163 because I really like this part u_u" Actually I made the SV faster because this part is more dubstep-like, so in my mind... it's faster '-'
I changed everything, except the suggestion about the SV on 02:15:163 because I really like this part u_u" Actually I made the SV faster because this part is more dubstep-like, so in my mind... it's faster '-'
These maps are really fun to play
This is my mod for the disconnected difficulty.
The slider at 00:23:834 felt out of place having two reverses, so I removed the last reverse and put a new slider in at 00:25:006. The slider points are:
(199,240) for the starting point
(166,267)
(166,338) for the last point
The three circles before the slider at 01:36:491 I moved to make it easier to see the pattern, as follows:
01:36:022 moved to (184,96)
01:36:139 moved to (180,104)
01:36:256 moved to (176,112)
Identical shift with the 3 before the slider at 03:36:419:
03:36:022 moved to (364,104)
03:36:139 moved to (360,112)
03:36:256 moved to (356,120)
That's all that I think could really be improved, the rest of it is so geometrically perfect that it wouldn't be worth moving any other points for such slight improvements
This is my mod for the disconnected difficulty.
The slider at 00:23:834 felt out of place having two reverses, so I removed the last reverse and put a new slider in at 00:25:006. The slider points are:
(199,240) for the starting point
(166,267)
(166,338) for the last point
The three circles before the slider at 01:36:491 I moved to make it easier to see the pattern, as follows:
01:36:022 moved to (184,96)
01:36:139 moved to (180,104)
01:36:256 moved to (176,112)
Identical shift with the 3 before the slider at 03:36:419:
03:36:022 moved to (364,104)
03:36:139 moved to (360,112)
03:36:256 moved to (356,120)
That's all that I think could really be improved, the rest of it is so geometrically perfect that it wouldn't be worth moving any other points for such slight improvements
shahme_old
Hello, as requested!
Get me back for recheck, when you're done. So i might be able to help you move this map's process forward.
[> General <]
Most mods above are just suggestions, so.. meh- - I think that light silver color is almost inflicting the background SB of yours in the middle of the map. I might think you'll need to change into some other combo colour to avoid inflicting with the BG.
- - If you're keeping the above, just enable epilepsy warning.
- - Mehh, those copy-paste patterns idk
- - Everything seems fine.
- 00:27:350 - Unused inherited point, better remove it?
- 01:13:288 (5) - Quite a half body of this slider is out of grid, you might need to move a bit right grid.
- 01:34:147 (2,3,4) - It looks fine, but i prefer following a bit of the song track here. Or you're doing on you own way?
- 01:36:491 (6,2) - Is this overlap on purpose?
- 01:39:538 (5) - Almost the same as 01:34:147 (2,3,4) -
- 02:17:038 (4,5) - IDK but recorrect a little blanket here. Maybe not important :p
- - And some copy-pasted patterns on the next tracks, would have the same issues as the mods i've mentioned.
- 00:25:006 - Unused inherited point.
- 00:27:350 - ^
- 00:27:819 - ^
- 01:05:788 (5) - Ehh, out of grid...
- 02:16:569 (2,3) - Idk, recorrect blanket.
- 02:32:975 (4,1) - Probably not important, but you could make a little parallel with slider (4)'s tail and slider (1)'s tail too.
- - Pretty fine here.
- 01:16:803 (3,5,3) - Stack maybe? or sth else..
- 01:50:788 (5,6) - Recorrect blanket?
- - Great Diff!
- 00:23:834 (3) - This is quite complicating flow, It's like you're hiding the reverse arrow by stacking on head, and repeat the reverse arrow twice to add more rhyme.. You should better remove one reverse and add some notes next to it.
- 01:23:600 (3,4) - This jump doesn't make any sense with the song track, you could've shorten the spacing here a bit. Since the song is not quite powerful enough for it.
- 01:51:491 (8,9) - ^
- - Can't mention more, but it's likely few on the next tracks.
- - It seems fine, few jumps but ehh... nvm.
Get me back for recheck, when you're done. So i might be able to help you move this map's process forward.
Topic Starter
Didn't fix the slider thats out of grid on Hard, because it's still in the playfield, even on a 4:3 resolution, and I didn't fix the first thing on Disconnected, since that repeat doesn't actually cause any problems when playing.
Will update when I get Minao's diff.
Will update when I get Minao's diff.
Thank you! Here is my diff: http://puu.sh/h9y6a/ec533d6d45.zipGray Veyron wrote:
[> Minao's Normal <]
- 00:27:350 - Unused inherited point, better remove it? Removed
- 01:13:288 (5) - Quite a half body of this slider is out of grid, you might need to move a bit right grid. I moved it
- 01:34:147 (2,3,4) - It looks fine, but i prefer following a bit of the song track here. Or you're doing on you own way? I tried to find new patterns with this rhythm, but I couldn't find one that pleased me, so I think I'll keep it '-'
- 01:36:491 (6,2) - Is this overlap on purpose? I can't move all the next objets on the top to avoid the overlap, so it will stay like this :/
- 01:39:538 (5) - Almost the same as 01:34:147 (2,3,4) - Same thing than 01:34
- 02:17:038 (4,5) - IDK but recorrect a little blanket here. Maybe not important :p Corrected!
- - And some copy-pasted patterns on the next tracks, would have the same issues as the mods i've mentioned.
I've checked everything, and finally seems fine! A bit worried about copy-pasted patterns and Minao's Normal. But i hope they're all okay.
Well, let's bring this map back!!
Well, let's bring this map back!!
Hi, hi! Sorry for being so late. ._.
General
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General
- Because of pulsing BG and color changes I suggest
- Diff is totally fine. The only thing I want you to change is AR. Can you use 4.6-5 value, please? Now I feel it's too slow even for easy and normal diff players.
- *Pure suggestion: How about OD8-8.5? #PPable \o3o/
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