KiyoshiX101 wrote:

M4M

[General]
Inconsistency in combo colours:
Hard
Combo1 : 232,116,0
Combo2 : 0,128,192
Combo3 : 181,74,154
Combo4 : 0,255,255
Combo5 : 193,9,13
Combo6 : 255,0,0
Combo7 : 128,128,128
Combo8 : 62,78,151

Insane
Combo1 : 128,128,128
Combo2 : 0,128,192
Combo3 : 182,73,136
Combo4 : 0,255,255
Combo5 : 193,9,13
Combo6 : 255,0,0

Normal
Combo1 : 128,128,128
Combo2 : 0,128,192
Combo3 : 173,82,148
Combo4 : 0,255,255
Combo5 : 226,221,29
Combo6 : 255,0,0
I don't understand these at all
Inconsistency in Kiai Times
Hard
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:451, ends on 01:06:512
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:061, ends on 01:22:610

Insane Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:390, ends on 01:06:404
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:244, ends on 01:21:695

Normal
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:51:451, ends on 01:05:659
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:07:000, ends on 01:23:707
I don't understand it either
[Normal]
00:14:866 (2,3,4,1) - You could make a nice pattern here by moving the note (1). o-o;
00:39:744 (1) - Put the red anchor one tick left
00:40:719 (2) - the red anchor one tick left and one down.
00:43:159 (4) - Prev and next spacing ain't the same, it's very clear and obvious that it is like that :p fix
01:24:622 (7) - The red and ending anchor 1 tick up to make the slider symmetric.
Nothing else.

[Hard]
00:09:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like this pattern, maybe make somenthing like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1370423 ? fix
00:20:963 (1,2) - Starting from her and then, end all sliders to red ticks, they sound bad ending at blue ticks. :c change it
00:28:098 (1) - This must go on the white tick, the current is off-beat. fix
00:34:134 (5) - Inconsistent spacing.
00:54:866 (8,9,10,1,2,3) - ^ fix
01:24:012 (2,3,4) - ^ fix?

[Insane]
00:02:671 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,1) -

SPOILER

I had to do it, this stream is too much for the specific beginning.
00:13:890 (6) - This on white tick. fix?
01:26:390 (8,9,10,11) - Don't increase spacing is terrible. fix

My honest opinion is that Insane needs remap, that aside, good luck!

yurunneram wrote:

Regarding Kiyoshi's mod, the first part.

Combo colours should be the same for all difficulties, unless you have some weird reason. But usually it's better to keep the combo colours same throughout.

Also your kiai time HAS to have the same starting and ending point for all diffs. If not, your map is unrankable.

Regarding Ctrl + Shift + D for my mod, you could maybe find me ingame for that. I wouldn't like explaining in forums for such a thing

eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from modding queue.

GENERAL
Combo 4 and 5 are very similar color, change the order (hard/insane difficulty) later i will fix this

NORMAL
Consider adding more notes or changing the very long sliders, this is too easy to be normal difficulty
00:57:305 (4) - i think the end of this shape can be better angled fix
01:01:207 (2,3,4,5) - spacing too close, considering they are 1/1 apart, keep same as earlier sections no. ds thing
01:16:817 (2,3,4,5,6) - again too close no

HARD
00:12:305 (6,1) - jump is too far, (1) is only 1/2 time away
00:33:159 (2,3,4,5) - add a circle at 00:33:341 or delete (3) fix
00:46:512 (5) - move up 1/4 to 00:46:451 fix
01:14:866 (11,1) - i think this jump should be a little closer fix
01:15:354 (1) - remove new combo fix

INSANE
00:03:037 (2) - new combo fix
00:17:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - i think this should be centered i will think of that soon
00:24:134 (1,2) - i think you should add a circle at 00:24:378 fix
00:53:402 (7,8) - i think its a very far jump but the music sounds like it should be closer
01:18:768 (1) - change this shape to match the other ones (copy (2), ctrl+h, ctrl+j) fix
01:19:744 (3) - change shape fix
01:24:622 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - maybe replace some of this with reverse slider? very long stream + high bpm can't replace 1, 2, , 3 ,etc but i replace the 8,9,10,11 with a reverse slider

That's all! Nice old-fashion mapping feel to it! Best of luck

Timorisu wrote:

[Normal]

00:24:134 (1) - http://puu.sh/7mqfw.jpg Wouldn't make it as curved fix

00:28:037 (1) - Move this closer to the previous object no

01:01:207 (2,3,4,5) - This totally goes against the spacing you had before, these are way too close together fix

[Hard]

00:12:305 (6,1) - This is spaced way too far i made it a little closer

00:24:439 (3) - Seems misplaced i don't think so

00:33:159 (2,3,4,5,6) - Space these closer, they look like a regular stream fix

01:14:866 (11,1) - Spaced too farfix

[Insane]

Idk the streams seem too fast for anyone who's not rrtyui I'm going to fix that soon or don't know

00:44:378 (3,4) - Spaced too close no

00:46:329 (4,5) - ^ fix

01:00:598 (5) - This looks like a 1/2 or 1/1, not like a 1/4, so space it closer together fix



Sorry for not finding much

-Napoleon- wrote:

Hi there! Mod4Mod I asked on your modding queue!

Also I like to bold keywords to help people improving their map so be aware of those words!

[Overall]
Oh nice music I like that "Break your spell vanguard!" part :3
Finding some new hitsounds could be better because I don't think default ones fit here well.
Try making more curved and less "straight" sliders
I recommend you reading the forums about mapping techniques, trust me it will help you at improving your maps and making them look nicer!

[Normal]
00:12:427 (1) - Having this as a curved slider could make things a bit funnier http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1398905
00:20:963 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like this combo that much, it is important for beginners to see patterns that are frenetic and "colorful" and not some patterns that are a bit monotone, don't take this has an offense though, try making things with some more curves and some more flow.
00:28:037 (1) - Delete this and make some more rhythms with the free space *w*)b
00:44:134 (2,3,4) - Hmm things here could be improved try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1398944 (yes place 00:47:549 (5) - on the same place of 00:45:598 (3) - )
01:12:915 (4) - Make this a "3 points" slider because it makes things more "curvish" and sexier
01:14:866 - Add hitsound finish

[Hard]
00:11:939 (3) - Add hitsound whistle, keeps things rhythmical
00:44:622 (3) - This slider looks a bit odd make it symmetrical and I think it will be nicer!

[Insane]
00:02:671 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1) - This stream doesn't look nice, try not finishing it where it started
00:04:622 - 00:06:085 - Map this, not mapping vocals isn't nice!
00:08:524 - 00:09:988 - ^
00:16:329 (1) - Hmmm this is a little bit too small and doesn't fit the music at all try making it a slider or something
00:17:305 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This stream doesn't look nice, try not finishing it where it started
01:22:671 - 01:24:622 - Map this, not mapping vocals isn't nice!
01:28:524 (1) - Place it on the vertical line on makes things symmetrical :3

So mod finished! Good luck on ranking!

arviejhay wrote:

Thanks for the mod but the insane mod? i can't get the part of 00:02:671 - try not finishing it where it started and 00:04:622 - 00:06:085 - Map this, not mapping vocals isn't nice!.
And also how to get new hitsounds?

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey mod from queue

[General]


The red combo colors look way too similar, I didn't even know you've used 2 different types of red until I checked the colors, in song setup.
Try to make the 5th combo color a more brighter hue in red.

[Normal]
00:21:939 (3,4) - Are slightly too far apart (AiMod doesn't show this).
00:27:549 (6,1) - ^
00:28:037 (1,1) - Too close.
00:35:841 (1,2,3) - Recheck their DS, they obviously look unsnapped.
00:49:500 (1,2,3) - ^
01:00:232 (1,2) - These notes are really too close to each other.
01:11:451 (1,2,3,4) - Fix DS
01:24:622 (7) - NC

Make sure that your objects are all snapped accordingly to their timing in distance. That's the main issue in this diff.

*I'm assuming that your DS is either 0.8 or 0.9 so please keep it as one of those throughout the diff.

[Hard]
00:19:256 - 00:20:963
No empty space here, why would you do that? You can clearly hear the music grow intensely at this part, so map it.
Try using this rhythm?

00:24:439 (3) - Move to 00:24:500 to hit the cymbal crash in the music.
00:27:793 (6,1) - I get that you don't need to use DS so much in the Hard diff, but these objects still needs to be close, since you've used a mini-slider here (players are unable to predict when it will end).
00:34:866 (10) - NC
01:03:159 (1,3) - Nazi mod here, these slider aren't the same (Ctrl + H 01:03:159 (1) - , and you'll see it).
01:24:866 (4) - NC, and I suggest actually making something creative with this slider.

Flow is still quite messy, and unorganized. That's all i can really say in general about this diff
[Insane]
00:13:402 (4,5,6) - Fix blanket here.

00:44:378 (3,4) - Are too close. Consider moving 00:44:622 (4,5) - up until 00:44:378 (3) - is stacked on 00:45:110 (5) - 's tail.
01:00:232 (4,5,6) - Fix blanket here.
01:15:841 (4,5,6) - ^

Same comment as Hard. Right now, you should continue on improving, and creating unique flow patterns with your objects so they look more natural. Try reading this to get a better understand of how flow really works.

Good luck!

arviejhay wrote:

About the distance snaps icon. I didn't really get that part

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ arviejhay

M4M Request!!

[ Normal ]

hmm..

HP + 1 OD + 1

00:28:037 (1) - Shape Change Recommendation

00:35:841 (1) - Slider End
00:36:573 (2) - here

00:36:817 (3) - Slider End
00:37:549 (4) - here

00:39:256 (6) - Delete
00:37:793 (3) -

Thus Please increase the length of the slider

( Shape Does not matter. )

00:41:695 (3) - Delete
00:41:695 (3) -

^

( ^ )

01:01:207 (2,3,4,5) - Please keep a certain distance.

01:05:476 (1,2) - Because of a conflict with the spinner
01:05:598 (1,2) - Go here

hmm.. Certain DS Please observe the ( DS = Distance Snapcing )

[ Hard ]

HP + 2 OD + 2 or AR - 1 HP + 1 OD + 2


Hmm.. Your Map DS Very strange ...

[ Insane ]

AR and OD
Change

...

The map itself is not difficult but ...

Part of this very difficult part.

( If you are a normal hard

It is a constant ds seems to be better. )

10crystalmask01 wrote:

arviejhay wrote:

About the distance snaps icon. I didn't really get that part

Turn on distance snap. You'll notice that you can only create and place the objects at a certain distance from other ones...so where it can be placed is limited to a specific distance from the previous object.

Does that make sense?

neonat wrote:

Normal

00:23:890 (5,1) - this is dangerous, the distance between them is the same as the rest, when the time between hitting the notes are definitely not the same, close the gap (turn distance snap on and use it through the map)
00:44:134 (2,3,4) - haphazard spacing, not recommended
00:51:451 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:07:061 (1) - ^

Hard

00:12:305 (6,1) - too sudden, spacing should not be this big
00:19:744 (1,2) - ok this is quite extreme lol, use distance snap for this
Rhythm sounds weird at times, the placement though is quite weird, somehow to me it looks messy and placed without purpose, maybe you could go through the map once more and see how you can make it look more beautiful in terms of presentation

Insane

00:02:671 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - sorry, I can't help it, but what. I know it looks interesting, but it just doesn't fit well into this rhythm
00:10:232 - add a note
Looking at it overall, it is all 1/2 1/4 rhythm and objects, it just makes it like, a rhythm game that has nothing special. It's rather repetitive and has no spice to the rhythm. Map to the various music and vocals in the song, mix it up, have some notes start on off beats.

Good luck

arviejhay wrote:

about 00:02:671 timestamp. I tried to hear that part using an earphone because it will give me an hd sounds
i see that it fit well with the sounds on the background. don't worry i will think of something to improve it

OblivioN wrote:

hi~from my queue
sorry for late

[General]
Remove letterbox during breaks because you don't have break times in this mapset. forgot to uncheck that thanks

[Normal]
first,the distance snap in normal should be same all the time.00:04:622-it's 0.68x here and you make 1.0x at 00:16:329-please check the diff to make sure the ds is same.【so many……
Don't choose black as combo colour
you'd better remap in this diff

[hard]
00:05:232-

picture

00:14:866 (1) - overlap with the head of 00:13:402 (4) -
00:19:744 (1,2) - overlap
00:22:183 (1,4) - ^
00:26:817 (3,4) - ^
00:31:939 (5,6) - ^
00:35:841 (1,2) - ^
00:42:671 (1,3) - ^
01:00:719 (4) - what's this?!!!!! First i see this i laugh but i fix it

[Insane]
00:24:378 (2,3) - tooooooooo far……nobody can do this QAQ haha the new big black xD i fix it i make it closer or think of some pattern
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and any else that I unabled to say……

[Notice]
I think you need read Ranking Criteria

good luck

[Edit]
and I'm chinese not japanese :3

enmyuuuU wrote:

Hello from my queue

[Normal]

SPOILER

-why is the length not the same as Hard and Insane?
-Hmm DS and a bit overlaps Fixing

[Hard]

SPOILER

-too much inconsistency in Distance Snap.
-maybe you could map this symmetrically. It's a bit ugly ._. ok

SPOILER

-too much overlap, like this:

SPOILER

In hards, it's best if there aren't so many overlaps that cannot be read by beginner players. It should be mapped with consistent DS, for hards about 1,00 - 1,20 is fine. It's also nice to have a bit jumps and anti-jumps, but not overusing it. I reduce some overlap circles and sliders and also jumps and anti-jumps too I Don't know if i reduce it more

[Insane]

SPOILER

Hmm, well I'm sorry I'm not good enough to play this diff because of 246bpm stream >.<
But I have one thing to ask you, do you want this diff to be hard or not? I want this to be the hardI'm saying this because I noticed there's some sudden stream while the rest of the map is 1s. Even I just find one or two 1/2s. Then suddenly comes 1/4 stream.
Maybe you could map at least the 1/2s so this diff is different than Hard. It's like you just want a stream inside your map without mapping the rest. So your saying that i should put stream in 1/2?


overall this map needs some fixing I think. Well Good luck arviejhay on your map!

So your saying that i should put stream in 1/2?

SPOILER

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enmyuuuU wrote:

So your saying that i should put stream in 1/2?

I'm saying your map is like this
this first part is good 1/2 sliders

SPOILER

then here comes 1/4 streams, high bpm hard spaced streams

SPOILER

which is good

but then the rest of the map are 1/1 sliders....like this:

SPOILER

which I find too easy for an Insane diff.

I'm not telling you to map 1/2 streams, really (sorry my english is bad), I think you should try mapping those 1/1 become 1/2 like the first part so the flow is consistent. That's why I'm asking you whether you want your map hard or not, because on a part it's fking hard spaced stream but on the other part (the biggest part actually) it's a super easy part you just click | - - - | - | - - - | - | while today's maps are at least | - | - - | | | | - - | (just an example, with '|' being a point where you clicks, not include slider end)
I hope you get what I'm saying because poor english.

yurunneram wrote:

Giving you a push

I will return

yurunneram wrote:

Ehhh nazeee =3= Osu needs more vanguard