iyasine wrote:

hi~ Jekate o.o/

General

Crear!

Normal

Looks nice!

Hard

00:44:824 (3,4) - ctrl + G ? i guess no, i keep it like that since the flow is better imo
01:08:890 - add whistle ? no, it sounds weird

nice map! I like this song , go rank

Byakugan249 wrote:

hey~ what's up?

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Normal]
use AR4 since it feels more soothing--in other words calm and relaxing to follow during gameplay.
00:26:692 (4) - perhaps you can stack this on (2) and adjust the shape like this? i feel that doing this would look neater and flow smoother to the song during gameplay.
00:57:022 (3,4) - align (3) to (1). i can see a triangular pattern in this if you do it. also make (4) look like (3) for that symmetric pattern. don't sorry about the next note. it doesn't have to follow the default DS. the code is in the box if you don't understand,

SPOILER

256,68,54384,22,0,L|380:72,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,192,55703,2,0,L|352:188,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,57022,2,0,P|202:285|162:241,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,88,58340,2,0,P|182:111|222:155,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

[Hard]
00:24:055 (1,2) - the combos are incorrect. (1) shouldn't be a NC and (2) should because that(1) is connected with the slider in the music. (2)'s music changes, so it'd be more appropriate during gameplay.
00:50:428 (2) - don't you think that the spacing is pretty big compared to the gap between (3,1)? try to keep it consistent here by using the same spacing as (3,1).

let me know when you're ready for a re-check.

Mako Sakata wrote:

Go ranked

Byakugan249 wrote:

i'm gonna have to unrank this and wipeout all the scores. i realized that there were unused timing points, and unnecessary slider speeds in hard. this will be re-ranked ASAP.

dkun wrote:

Hello~ As a last minute suggestion (this is mainly for hard and rhythm), what about TR2 for both difficulties? It helps to read the slowdowns.

Let me know.