1. Hard (4.65 stars, 385 notes)
2. Normal (3.22 stars, 225 notes)

BeatofIke wrote:

Your BPM and offset is correct, but you don't need an extra red (Timing Points) timing section at 01:22:852 and 02:14:067 as there are no BPM changes, Time signature change, or any offset changes throughout the song. This is what the green (Inherited Points) timing sections are for. Consider removing 01:22:852 and changing 02:14:067 into a green (Inherited Points) timing section.

Good luck with your map.

1. 02:34:554 (1) - 看到這還是忍不住想吐槽 humm 感覺就這麼一個這種圖形有點奇怪xD

1. 我我我.... 我抓不出錯啊(;ノД\)

Oracle wrote:

Irie Miyuki wrote:

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Collab
01:03:823 (7) - 长白NC,另外这里的喷泉有点长,不稍微缩短点么 这个没必要啊
01:49:925 (2,3,4,5) - 做成这样? 3和4共线。感觉整洁点 http://puu.sh/6uQFV.jpg 给我的感觉没啥区别 懒了
02:34:371 (6,1) - blanket 好
03:09:310 (6,7,1) - 67和1的头一条线? 好

508,120,154554,6,0,P|464:164|404:164,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:


144,100,188945,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,140,189310,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,192,189493,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,244,189676,6,0,P|305:299|277:345,1,110,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,270,190408,2,0,P|131:216|166:175,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

- Miomio Chii - wrote:

End of this mod,
對不起我太渣了

1. 专辑名也是《The Bigger Lights》 是不是加到source里面 tag是不是要加上Rock 分类

1. 02:41:140 - 这里是不是应该map上？

1. 00:44:250 (3) - 这个circle的音量建议弄小些 有些影响节奏的感觉 可能是背景音这里声音太大了
2. 02:19:188 (5,6) - 这个spacing不太好..
3. 03:27:054 (6,1) - 这个spacing和变速不太对应啊 突然3X然后降速到很慢

CET 6 wrote:

Collab
00:49:921 (2,3,4) - 感觉往右下移一点比较顺 00:49:921 (2) - 包00:48:457 (6) - 头部左侧 00:50:470 (3,4) - 相对00:49:921 (2) - 稍微移下面一点感觉比较好 （回头看了一眼 这句话我到底在说什么- - 直接说整体右下移和6包着就好了呗 fixed
02:23:579 (3,4) - 这里我可能会倾向用3折返一次不用4 原来的也不错还能和4 5三角形衔接 4到5不够人性主义呢 还是DS吧

大概就这样啦
Good Luck ~

168,60,44250,1,0,2:0:0:0:

400,212,45531,2,0,P|392:196|388:156,1,55,8|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:

12,216,49921,2,0,P|20:280|56:312,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,300,50470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,292,50653,2,0,L|280:284,1,110


404,188,94559,6,0,L|516:184,1,110
444,300,95291,2,0,L|332:304,1,110,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

1. 大事不犯，小事不断。同样，草泥马，冲啊，撞死风铃！！

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Rotte wrote:

[Hard]

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• Rhythm

1. 00:50:470 (3) - flow，148|288
   00:50:653 (4) - 204|284 因为你摸的是01没上传的版本 所以这里还只是把后面滑条向上抬了一下
2. 00:55:775 (2,3,4) - 这个梗咱根据音乐，觉得34叠起来不是很好，三个连起来更好。 其实那个circle就是个overmap 而且要三连我也不知道怎么连会不出界也不别扭了=。=
3. 01:03:092 (5,6,7) - 来，全体往下挪，567整体到180|348 ，然后7挪到400|308 k
4. 01:38:766 (3,4) -　来，同样整体到126|286。如果在你原来的地方，打起来的感觉很别扭，因为本来就在屏幕地下，自然而然就觉得绕手。如果改了这个注意后面的梗也要挪挪调整。 如果你说的坐标真的是126,286的话 我还是保留我现在这样 你说的那也太挤了
5. 01:43:339 (1,2) - 2不爽，错位，一不好看，二打起来不爽，整体一个圆多爽的，为啥要分开这么远。本来就不打算放圆啊
6. 01:44:071 (2,3) - 继续接着，咱觉得3如果像这样打起来只会觉得跳着错位，不符合flow啊，2尾巴和3应该是条直线。这就是对称啊>_>,错一点儿都不爽。 就是对个三角;w;
7. 01:46:998 (2,3,4) -这个34怎么直线就变成斜线了。 ?
   01:48:095 (5) - 卖糕的这个太可怕了，瞬间手就要绕断。 没那么夸张吧 我觉得很顺呀 尤其是像你那样改过之后就一直是左右左右来回换了我觉得更难受些=。=
8. 03:06:567 (7) - 试试120|96，这个是跳的话咱觉得其实最好。把这附近都小动了一下 但是没跳
9. 03:10:957 (3,4) - 244|132 03:10:408 (2,3,4) - 如果你觉得这个能组成一个小小的combo的话那就建议这样挪，flow会好些。k

• Sound Effect

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Evil_Twilight wrote:

From QQ Fudu Group.

[Collab]

1. 00:18:275 (3) - 看你似乎是跟著人聲下節奏的，考慮改成跟00:23:579 (2) - 類似的東西？ 改了节奏 但是好像也不太相似呃
2. 00:30:165 (5) - 你在(5)加大了間距去把這一小節分成兩拍不同的東西，我覺得把(5)疊在(7)上然後加NC看起來會規律一些 感觉那样flow不好
3. 01:22:852 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 這邊可以兩個note一組讓間距配合著音樂越來越大 试过 一开始就是那么摆的 但是那样太乱了
4. 02:15:896 (4,5) - 這兩個位置對調我玩起來順一些 可以 算是增加不同的移动种类
5. 02:49:920 (2,3) - 窩覺得可以把這兩個弄點小加速(1.1x和1.2x)，感覺會有趣點也蠻符合音樂的 ok

[Normal]

1. 00:52:116 (1) - 你既然都拉了個對稱的slider就乾脆移到y軸上唄，這樣也能順便把00:51:384 (4) - 左移一些讓00:49:921 (2,3,4) - 變成三角形 后面太难改了 没什么必要
2. 02:49:188 (1,2,3) - 這三個改成往左上斜的直線會更符合音樂 想法还不错 不过太麻烦了=。=不动了 也不是什么大事情
3. 03:11:871 (4) - 往下一點讓03:11:140 (3,4) - 看起來像弧形？ 好的

完蛋這mod看起來太破

1. 01:04:189 - About here, If you want to use short kiai time, i think you should use kiai end at here 01:04:006 - . I feel it would fit well .

1. Overall Difficulty and HP Drain Rate -1. It's really hard for this difficulty.
2. 00:21:018 - i feel empty here, it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing also i can hear a vocal sound same as your previous part at here 00:16:994 (1,2,3) - . so you should consider adding a note here.
3. 01:03:823 (7) - I prefer to use new combo on kiai start o3o
4. 01:36:022 (3) - a bit nazi mod, Please move this note left to make equal spacing :3

1. 00:38:214 (3) - Design suggestion: Please try aligning this parts parallel to each other by moving this note to the left. it looks better to me.
   
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2. 01:03:823 (7) - Same as Normal diff.
3. 01:28:522 (6,1) - How about useing this pattern ? 01:38:217 (2,3,4) - It's better to use it for playing.
   
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4. 01:56:144 - , 02:01:998 - , 02:06:388 - I recommend you to use a whistle sound on kiai time.
5. 03:08:213 - missing a finish sound.

alacat wrote:

2 months ago O_O I'll check soon

Edit :

Let's go ~

[General]

1. 01:04:189 - About here, If you want to use short kiai time, i think you should use kiai end at here 01:04:006 - . I feel it would fit well .

[Normal]

1. Overall Difficulty and HP Drain Rate -1. It's really hard for this difficulty.
2. 00:21:018 - i feel empty here, it is better to use 1/2 rhythm for playing also i can hear a vocal sound same as your previous part at here 00:16:994 (1,2,3) - . so you should consider adding a note here.
3. 01:03:823 (7) - I prefer to use new combo on kiai start o3o
4. 01:36:022 (3) - a bit nazi mod, Please move this note left to make equal spacing :3

[Hard]

1. 00:38:214 (3) - Design suggestion: Please try aligning this parts parallel to each other by moving this note to the left. it looks better to me.
   
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2. 01:03:823 (7) - Same as Normal diff.
3. 01:28:522 (6,1) - How about useing this pattern ? 01:38:217 (2,3,4) - It's better to use it for playing.
   
   img

   
   I think the current is also fine
4. 01:56:144 - , 02:01:998 - , 02:06:388 - I recommend you to use a whistle sound on kiai time. didn't add at 02:06:388 - as I think that sound is soft
5. 03:08:213 - missing a finish sound.

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