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RzHr

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-12-13T16:52:34+00:00

OblivioN wrote:
[Hard]
00:36:270 (1) - remove NC - ok
00:41:349 (1) - ^ - ok
01:26:904 (1) - ^ - no

[Normal]
01:25:317 (2) - make the red dot in grid ,like this : - no, i make this one symmetry
SPOILER

[Others]

seems that the stars rating of Normal and Easy are very similar - not a problem, imo .-.

thanks for your help

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2014-12-14T13:28:26+00:00

http://puu.sh/dufkP/4362358571.png

gg

Kuro Fuyusaki

593 posts

Joined May 2013

Kuro Fuyusaki 2014-12-15T07:08:29+00:00

Continue Feedback~

OblivioN

[Kuro's Insane]

u choose ignore drumbeats at 00:07:223 -00:08:493 -00:09:763 - but flow the drumbeat at 00:10:398 (3) - ,why? -> for that 3 timing point 00:07:223 -00:08:493 -00:09:763 - i'm following the guitar, because it's the dominant beat (for me) and, i'm adding 2 drumbeats before it (new setting) for a new looking (perhaps :/), and for 00:10:398 (3) - there's no special reason anymore, there's a drumbeats then yes, add it :/, is it acceptable? (
I think the diff need more work,overall.-.
during00:11:191 to 00:31:587 ， u can use softhitsound _(:з」∠)_ -> already implemented it, the map's not updated yet

the new code, fix some hitsound, thx -> http://puu.sh/dvo43/42bcffde23.osu

sorciere

147 posts

Joined April 2013

sorciere 2014-12-16T11:57:56+00:00

sorry for being slow really

anyway

[General]
video offset is wrong i think, it's too early. (or late? the more i watch it, the more i get confused lol)
also easy and normal too close in terms of star diff, try to either make easy easier or normal harder. i'd say easy should be easier.

oyea don't mind the examples if you don't like them. (in fact don't mind all the things you don't like implemented, it's ok)

[Easy]
it's way too challenging (ie very little spaces in between notes), i suggest removing certain circles/sliders completely. (hence the minibreak thing)
00:01:826 (2) - rotate 10 degrees, move it to (240,140) for cleaner flow.
00:05:159 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - way too challenging (as said above). also it can be simpler, if you change the whole pattern till there are some points that has some open areas.

example (in terms of beats only)

anything is fine, i only suggest making this whole pattern easier (it's tough, but i feel it will help the map a lot better, you can ask me ingame)
00:10:874 (3) - if you choose to not do above, at least remove the return of this slider.
00:16:429 (3,1) - i don't understand this rhythm. maybe something like this?

example

(i made (4) by flipping 00:18:651 (1) - )
00:21:826 (1) - remove circle for minibreak (check dist. spacing if you do so)
00:26:905 (1,2,3) - confusing rhythm, not sure you want to match the vocals or the instruments. how about starting slider (1) on 00:27:064 for vocals?
00:30:080 (4) - how about ending the slider at 00:30:238 to sync with the silence?
00:33:571 (4,1) - some random idea : remove circle (4) and add circle where slider (1) is followed by another shorter slider (2)

example

00:38:651 (4) - if you did the above, remove this circle for consistency.
00:49:127 (1) - end slider at 00:49:444 to sync with the silence.
00:55:159 (5) - remove circle for minibreak. (remember to check dist. spacing)
00:57:698 (4) - ^
01:12:301 (1) - move up by 1 tick for better blanket.
01:15:476 (4) - remove circle for minibreak. (remember to check dist. spacing)
01:18:016 (4) - ^
01:18:333 (5) - add nc for consistency. also if you did ^, flip this slider for better flow.

[Normal]
00:06:906 (4,5) - the rhythm does not fit, i suggest mapping according to the guitar thing.

example

00:30:080 (1) - curve this instead as the elbow of this l-shaped slider doesn't emphasise anything. (it should emphasise the silence, if you want to retain the shape)
00:45:635 (3) - a little jarring, i suggest the curve should be less curvy.
00:53:890 (4) - move it to (228,156) for slight, slight better flow.
00:58:651 (2,3) - blanket circle (3). (slider (2) should be less curvy)
01:12:301 (1) - move it to (352,204) for better blanket. (check dist. spacing between this and (2))

[Hard]
00:07:859 (2) - move it to where (3) is for smoother flow.
00:30:080 (1,2,3) - i don't understand rhythm (maybe it's just me), try to change?

example

also at least make dist. snap 1.5 for consistence spacing
00:45:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - this jump pattern is absolutely horrifying, almost unrank standard for a hard, i recommend you change the whole pattern.

example

01:26:904 (1,2,3) - ~~2nd instant death jump~~ jump is too hard, at most just dist. snap 1.5. 2.0 is way too hard for scrubs like me

.

Sorry for not modding the insanes, i instafailed them within 6-8 seconds.

Good luck!

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-12-17T16:19:38+00:00

Rokkea wrote:
sorry for being slow really

anyway

[General]
video offset is wrong i think, it's too early. (or late? the more i watch it, the more i get confused lol)
also easy and normal too close in terms of star diff, try to either make easy easier or normal harder. i'd say easy should be easier. - offset is correct i think, for star diff, I have no idea .... but imo, maybe not a problem, because easy still easier than normal

oyea don't mind the examples if you don't like them. (in fact don't mind all the things you don't like implemented, it's ok)

[Easy]
it's way too challenging (ie very little spaces in between notes), i suggest removing certain circles/sliders completely. (hence the minibreak thing)
00:01:826 (2) - rotate 10 degrees, move it to (240,140) for cleaner flow. - ok
00:05:159 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1) - way too challenging (as said above). also it can be simpler, if you change the whole pattern till there are some points that has some open areas. - sound little strange for me .-.
example (in terms of beats only)
anything is fine, i only suggest making this whole pattern easier (it's tough, but i feel it will help the map a lot better, you can ask me ingame)
00:10:874 (3) - if you choose to not do above, at least remove the return of this slider. - why i must remove that ?
00:16:429 (3,1) - i don't understand this rhythm. maybe something like this? - ummm, nope
example
(i made (4) by flipping 00:18:651 (1) - )
00:21:826 (1) - remove circle for minibreak (check dist. spacing if you do so) -no
00:26:905 (1,2,3) - confusing rhythm, not sure you want to match the vocals or the instruments. how about starting slider (1) on 00:27:064 for vocals? - listen 00:26:905 - at 50%
00:30:080 (4) - how about ending the slider at 00:30:238 to sync with the silence? - no
00:33:571 (4,1) - some random idea : remove circle (4) and add circle where slider (1) is followed by another shorter slider (2) - no
example
00:38:651 (4) - if you did the above, remove this circle for consistency. - no
00:49:127 (1) - end slider at 00:49:444 to sync with the silence. - no
00:55:159 (5) - remove circle for minibreak. (remember to check dist. spacing) - If I remove it, it sounds a little odd to me
00:57:698 (4) - ^ - ^
01:12:301 (1) - move up by 1 tick for better blanket. - previously, there is a same mod. I'm not too careful that time. ok, fixed
01:15:476 (4) - remove circle for minibreak. (remember to check dist. spacing) - same like before
01:18:016 (4) - ^ - ^
01:18:333 (5) - add nc for consistency. also if you did ^, flip this slider for better flow. - ok

[Normal]
00:06:906 (4,5) - the rhythm does not fit, i suggest mapping according to the guitar thing. - ah right
example
00:30:080 (1) - curve this instead as the elbow of this l-shaped slider doesn't emphasise anything. (it should emphasise the silence, if you want to retain the shape) - fixed
00:45:635 (3) - a little jarring, i suggest the curve should be less curvy. - fixed
00:53:890 (4) - move it to (228,156) for slight, slight better flow. - ok
00:58:651 (2,3) - blanket circle (3). (slider (2) should be less curvy) - ok
01:12:301 (1) - move it to (352,204) for better blanket. (check dist. spacing between this and (2)) - ok

[Hard]
00:07:859 (2) - move it to where (3) is for smoother flow. - no
00:30:080 (1,2,3) - i don't understand rhythm (maybe it's just me), try to change? - ok
example
also at least make dist. snap 1.5 for consistence spacing
00:45:635 (1,2,3,4,5) - this jump pattern is absolutely horrifying, almost unrank standard for a hard, i recommend you change the whole pattern. - ok
example
01:26:904 (1,2,3) - ~~2nd instant death jump~~ jump is too hard, at most just dist. snap 1.5. 2.0 is way too hard for scrubs like me . - ok

Sorry for not modding the insanes, i instafailed them within 6-8 seconds.

Good luck!

thanks for your help

- Love1yV1ruS -

88 posts

Joined October 2012

- Love1yV1ruS - 2014-12-23T12:40:56+00:00

M4M with Nardo

Nardo oni

00:21:191 (93) - delete and change 00:21:033 (92) - to k? More clean here.
因为整体的note摆放没什么问题，下面是一个比较笼统的意见：
可能是因为这首歌唱得比较乱再加上这些比较随机向的stream显得更乱了。
有一个提议：01:09:762 - 01:10:873
original version: 'kkd k dkd ddk d'
recommend version: 'kkd d kkd d kkd'
我觉得加上这些比较标志性的太鼓节奏可能会好一点

That's it! Enjoy

Nardoxyribonucleic

osu! Alumni

3,008 posts

Joined May 2011

Nardoxyribonucleic 2014-12-23T13:49:31+00:00

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:
M4M with Nardo

Nardo oni
00:21:191 (93) - delete and change 00:21:033 (92) - to k? More clean here. Remain unchanged to map the noticeable cymbal sound at 00:21:191 (93) -
因为整体的note摆放没什么问题，下面是一个比较笼统的意见：
可能是因为这首歌唱得比较乱再加上这些比较随机向的stream显得更乱了。
有一个提议：01:09:762 - 01:10:873
original version: 'kkd k dkd ddk d'
recommend version: 'kkd d kkd d kkd'
我觉得加上这些比较标志性的太鼓节奏可能会好一点 It's a good idea. But I prefer keeping mine here as they also look fine.

That's it! Enjoy

Thanks for your mod~

Update: http://puu.sh/dGoBW.rar

-Nya-

2,133 posts

Joined December 2011

-Nya- 2014-12-28T20:26:21+00:00

Hey!
NM request from Aerous' & -Nya-'s Standard Queue
Well, here's my mod:

General:
Change your audio lead-in to 2000ms. Go to “File” and then to “Open .osu in notepad” and change the audio lead-in to 2000

Easy:
00:06:112 (2) – I don’t really like the shape of this slider. Rather this?

Picture

00:24:048 (5,6) – This looks messy. Do this:

Picture

Copy and paste 00:24:048 (5) – then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G00:32:619 (2) – Rather not curve it too much. Tends to then look ugly.

Picture

00:58:016 (1) - ^01:04:047 (1) - ^01:15:476 (4,1) – Rather do this?

Picture

The picture shows 01:15:476 (4) –is place near the tail of 01:14:524 (3) –and 01:15:793 (1) –makes a blanket with 01:15:476 (4) -01:22:143 (2) – Again, don’t curve too much

Normal:
00:09:921 (3) – I don’t like the shape. I think a normal curved slider will do.

Picture

00:11:984 (2) – Same here. Rather just make it a normal curved slider. Copy and paste 00:11:191 (1) – so these two sliders have the same shape.00:20:397 (3) - ^00:22:143 (2) – Ctrl+H this slider. And make this slider: 00:22:778 (3) – a normal curved one, but copy and paste 00:22:143 (2) – then.

Picture

00:25:953 (7) – Ctrl+J.

Picture

00:30:080 (4) – Move this slider upwards till it’s here: X:140 Y:4400:30:873 (5) – Rather Ctrl+H this slider.00:34:524 (2) – This looks ugly. Just straighten it.

Picture

00:39:603 (2) – Same here. Straighten it instead.00:42:779 (2,3) – This blanket can be improved a teeny bit.

Picture

I just moved the middle white square of 00:43:095 (3) – one grid lower00:45:635 (3) – Rather try to make the wave shape look like this:

Picture

00:48:174 (3) – Do this:

Picture

Copy and paste 00:47:540 (2) – then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G00:50:079 (2) – Rather a normal slider00:56:112 (2) – Make this slider’s shape as this slider: 00:55:476 (1) –

Picture

Hard:
Please check AiMod again. Fix the tags and the timing points00:02:302 (2) – Don’t like the shape. Rather this:

Picture

Copy and paste 00:01:826 (1) – then Ctrl+H00:03:572 (2) – Ctrl+J?00:04:366 (1) – Again, I don’t really like the shape. A normal curved slider will look better. (This is just my opinion, so feel free to ignore)00:07:063 (2) – Ctrl+J?00:08:017 (3,5) – Don’t curve them too much. Tends to look ugly then.00:09:286 (5) – Ctrl+H, will support 00:08:017 (3) – then00:19:445 (2,3) – Improve this blanket.

Picture

00:22:461 (3,1) – Try to prevent the hitcircle from touching the head of the slider. Move the circle a bit upwards.00:23:413 (1,2,3,4,1) – Maybe this pattern will look better if you rather place 00:24:048 (1) – like this:

Picture

00:28:809 (2) – Make this slider look like this slider 00:28:493 (1) – instead?

Picture

00:35:000 (3) – Curve this slider a bit as well. To support these sliders: 00:34:682 (2,4) – 00:37:540 (3,4) – Rather make a blanket here:

Picture

00:38:492 (7,8) – Same here. A blanket will look nice.00:42:460 (3,4) – Make sure these two sliders look the same. Use the copy and paste option.00:44:047 (8) – Make this slider look the same like this slider: 00:43:413 (6) - (Like my previous suggestion)00:56:428 (5) – This slider is curved too much. Lessen the curve please.01:04:047 (1,2) – This blanket can be improved.01:06:587 (4,5) – These two sliders are not the same. Use the copy and paste option.01:23:571 (1,3) – Improve this stack. Move 01:24:524 (3) – till it’s here: X:168 Y:18201:26:587 (4,3) - ^, move 01:27:222 (3) – till it’s here: X:107 Y:161

Nice mapset, overall.
Good Luck!

Last edited by -Nya- 2015-01-08T14:59:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2014-12-29T02:03:39+00:00

-Nya- wrote:
Hey!
NM request from Aerous' & -Nya-'s Standard Queue
Well, here's my mod:

General:
Change your audio lead-in to 2000ms. Go to “File” and then to “Open .osu in notepad” and change the audio lead-in to 2000 - ummm, no.. because this start at 00:01:033 - maybe 1000 is quite

Easy:
00:06:112 (2) – I don’t really like the shape of this slider. Rather this? - no
Picture
00:24:048 (5,6) – This looks messy. Do this: - ok
Picture
Copy and paste 00:24:048 (5) – then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G00:32:619 (2) – Rather not curve it too much. Tends to then look ugly. - ok
Picture
00:58:016 (1) - ^ - ok01:04:047 (1) - ^ - ok01:15:476 (4,1) – Rather do this? - ummm, maybe no
Picture
The picture shows 01:15:476 (4) –is place near the tail of 01:14:524 (3) –and 01:15:793 (1) –makes a blanket with 01:15:476 (4) -01:22:143 (2) – Again, don’t curve too much - fixed :>

Normal:
00:09:921 (3) – I don’t like the shape. I think a normal curved slider will do. - ummm.. nope, idk why i like make slider like this XD
Picture
00:11:984 (2) – Same here. Rather just make it a normal curved slider. Copy and paste 00:11:191 (1) – so these two sliders have the same shape. - ^00:20:397 (3) - ^ - ^00:22:143 (2) – Ctrl+H this slider. And make this slider: 00:22:778 (3) – a normal curved one, but copy and paste 00:22:143 (2) – then. - no, but for me, this one little odd too :< but i have no idea
Picture
00:25:953 (7) – Ctrl+J. - maybe no
Picture
00:30:080 (4) – Move this slider upwards till it’s here: X:140 Y:44 - it will touch the HPbar .-. and if I do ... i have to make it more curved, little odd for me 00:30:873 (5) – Rather Ctrl+H this slider. - no, will interfere the flow, imo .-.00:34:524 (2) – This looks ugly. Just straighten it.- nope
Picture
00:39:603 (2) – Same here. Straighten it instead. - ^00:42:779 (2,3) – This blanket can be improved a teeny bit. - fixed :>
Picture
I just moved the middle white square of 00:43:095 (3) – one grid lower00:45:635 (3) – Rather try to make the wave shape look like this: - ok
Picture
00:48:174 (3) – Do this: - no
Picture
Copy and paste 00:47:540 (2) – then Ctrl+H and then Ctrl+G00:50:079 (2) – Rather a normal slider - no XD00:56:112 (2) – Make this slider’s shape as this slider: 00:55:476 (1) – ok
Picture

I’ll mod the Hard when I get back from holiday.

thanks for your help

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

wcx19911123 2015-01-05T07:52:29+00:00

here's your ticket, sorry for the delay

[General]
remove "Anime" from tags, add "TV" before "Size"
downbeat is wrong from the beginning to 00:11:350 - . also, the bpm is constant and the downbeat isn't changed, no need to use multi red sections
cancel wildscreen support to all diffs
the video offset should be more accurate imo, the current one is not correct

[Easy]
01:11:032 (6,1) - blanket better?
01:26:905 (3) - how about repeat this slider and start the spinner later? would fit the song better imo

[Normal]
01:27:540 - same as Easy, you can add a note here and start the spinner later if you accepted it in Easy diff

[Hard]
the difficulty setting is too low, raise both HD and OD by 1 please
00:45:476 (8,1,2,3,4) - this spacing is too large imo, the difficulty of this pattern is mush higher than the average level of this diff but this is not the song's most intense part
01:27:540 - same as before

[Kuro's Insane]
00:15:160 (1,2,1) - they can blanket and/or stack better
00:25:476 (4) - ctrl+g on this slider, flow can be much better imo
00:49:444 - same as Easy
00:57:063 (1,2) - this spacing is too small imo, it looks like a 1/4 time gap but actually not. it's a bit confusing

[Fort's insane]
01:27:540 - same as Easy
kinda nice diff

in overall, nothing really wrong but the diff spread between Normal and Hard is too huge imo
if some bat/qat members think the diff spread is fine, feel free to call me back then

Kuro Fuyusaki

593 posts

Joined May 2013

Kuro Fuyusaki 2015-01-05T09:30:29+00:00

Feedback Mod o/

wcx19911123

wcx19911123 wrote:
here's your ticket, sorry for the delay

[General]
remove "Anime" from tags, add "TV" before "Size"
downbeat is wrong from the beginning to 00:11:350 - . also, the bpm is constant and the downbeat isn't changed, no need to use multi red sections
cancel wildscreen support to all diffs
the video offset should be more accurate imo, the current one is not correct

[Kuro's Insane]
00:15:160 (1,2,1) - they can blanket and/or stack better --> changing pattern, fixed
00:25:476 (4) - ctrl+g on this slider, flow can be much better imo --> Hmm, okay trying it, and changing some pattern
00:49:444 - same as Easy --> Okay .-. , fixed
00:57:063 (1,2) - this spacing is too small imo, it looks like a 1/4 time gap but actually not. it's a bit confusing --> Same think ~_~ , changing some of the pattern, fixed

Update Map : ~~http://puu.sh/e66QV/984d3c19d9.osu~~ http://puu.sh/e6779/1b00a7ce6f.osu

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2015-01-05T10:15:41+00:00

wcx19911123

wcx19911123 wrote:
here's your ticket, sorry for the delay

[General]
remove "Anime" from tags, add "TV" before "Size" - remove anime, but i didn't add TV, because there is "TV" on "TV Edit"
downbeat is wrong from the beginning to 00:11:350 - . also, the bpm is constant and the downbeat isn't changed, no need to use multi red sections - fixed
cancel wildscreen support to all diffs - ok
the video offset should be more accurate imo, the current one is not correct- fixed

[Easy]
01:11:032 (6,1) - blanket better? - fixed
01:26:905 (3) - how about repeat this slider and start the spinner later? would fit the song better imo - no, spinner sound starts at 01:27:540 - and if i accept this, maybe more better if without spinner imo..

[Normal]
01:27:540 - same as Easy, you can add a note here and start the spinner later if you accepted it in Easy diff - same like easy

[Hard]
the difficulty setting is too low, raise both HD and OD by 1 please - ok
00:45:476 (8,1,2,3,4) - this spacing is too large imo, the difficulty of this pattern is mush higher than the average level of this diff but this is not the song's most intense part - fixed the spacing
01:27:540 - same as before - same like easy

in overall, nothing really wrong but the diff spread between Normal and Hard is too huge imo
if some bat/qat members think the diff spread is fine, feel free to call me back then - ok, i'll ask later

thanks

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-01-17T10:31:04+00:00

RIP RZHR Silenced ;_;

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2015-02-03T08:59:15+00:00

Fort wrote:
RIP RZHR Silenced ;_;

i'm back XD

there are several changes, will update later ...
i have a problem with my connection ;_;

btw, where are you axelhino ? .-.

AxelHino

1,734 posts

Joined July 2011

AxelHino 2015-02-08T07:13:44+00:00

KDS wrote:
[AxelHino's Oni]
00:16:746 - add d. that emptiness of note is quite awkward because of silence and following vocal emphasis. ok
01:12:301 (127) - add finish. there is a finish sound. ok
01:17:381 (164) - ^ ok~
- ok well structured

good luck

Charlotte wrote:
[AxelHino's Oni]

OD6→5. Inner Oni=6 so Oni=OD5? inner oni is just an extra difficulty so i don't think it's necessary

00:18:651 (5,6) - change d ok

00:20:873 (14,15,16,17,18) - I felt don't fit. so 00:20:873 (14,15) - delete. & 00:21:123 - delete. & 00:21:027 - change d

01:20:635 (186,187) - move to 1/4 right.I feel good better. ok

maaaaaaan sorry for the super super late reply. wanted to take a break from osu.

well, updated~ http://puu.sh/fD4D3/c5e683eb95.osu

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2015-02-11T00:40:52+00:00

hii, from Pho's Delivery Service :3/

[General]

[Easy]
HP and OD 2 for better spread

00:10:874 (3,1) - This part sounds weird imo, try this http://puu.sh/fKzcF/c0b48700aa.jpg
00:13:889 (4,1) - Try this, to follow vocals better http://puu.sh/fKzpt/5cf12465fe.jpg
00:19:286 (2) - Tweaked a bit:

408,68,19286,2,0,B|356:36|356:36|292:96|224:52,1,200.000001490115

00:28:017 (2) - http://puu.sh/fKzOl/d81371bdbe.jpg
00:33:889 (1) - http://puu.sh/fKzYP/bded37bbd4.jpg
00:49:127 (1,2) - eh... http://puu.sh/fKAe9/986b8fe4bf.jpg
01:06:587 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/fKAvR/0bc9d30bbb.jpg
01:09:444 (6) - Add NC
01:19:286 (2) - http://puu.sh/fKAM5/7b530f9191.jpg
01:20:873 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/fKB5b/205a647348.jpg
01:24:682 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/fKBpr/3f2f78e5df.jpg
00:11:984 - 00:43:730 - This section is empty, add some hitsounds please

[Normal]
AR5 will be better

00:03:571 (5,1) - Swap nc and add nc here 00:06:111 (5) -
00:08:651 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/fKDyb/1a2f24d067.jpg <- that works much better since you ignored the strong beat here 00:09:127 -
00:11:190 (1) - http://puu.sh/fKDQZ/d9785f0002.jpg
00:14:206 - Add a 1/2 slider here
00:18:651 (1) - http://puu.sh/fKE8p/8c6238018a.jpg
00:19:286 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/fKEhx/a769467f04.jpg
00:22:143 (2) - Delete it and place a 1/2 slider + reverse, like this http://puu.sh/fKEuz/4b3e2c3b6d.jpg
00:26:905 (1,2,3,4) - eh... http://puu.sh/fKEK7/e1e44c999c.jpg Follow the vocals better
00:30:079 (1) - Replace it with this http://puu.sh/fKF1b/535d2730d8.jpg
00:33:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/fKFhB/d81f01fb0c.jpg
00:38:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try something similar to what I said above
01:22:460 (5) - Add NC
Try to make this more 1/2, the gap between this and hard its a little big imo. You have many 1/1 sliders idk, just try to split them into something else or replacing some 1/2 sliders with circles, just a suggestion, im not sure

[Hard]

00:05:636 (1) - add NC
00:11:191 (1) - http://puu.sh/fKGYx/2de06a5438.jpg
00:11:984 (3) - Tweaked a bit:

120,292,11984,2,0,B|172:336|172:336|228:284|288:344,1,195.000000894069,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:30:555 - Dont ignore this

00:35:635 (5) - This is better:

288,348,35635,2,0,B|248:316|204:340|204:340|164:304,1,130.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:55:952 (1) - Remove NC
00:58:492 (1) - ^

[Fort's Insane]

00:06:906 (1,2,3) - You can easily use circles instead

00:11:349 - Why everyone ignore this beat? ;w;
00:17:699 (6,1) - Swap nc
00:25:000 (1,4) - ^
00:30:397 (1) - Remove NC
00:32:460 (1,4) - Swap NC
00:35:476 (5) - Add NC
00:38:016 (6) - ^
00:40:555 (4) - ^
00:49:286 - Dont skip this

00:52:619 (3,4) - You dont need all these patterns, just place a triplet (00:52:540 - You skipped this too) I'll not point out more of these cuz I know that you'll not change them (but I highly suggest you to change them owo)
01:00:159 - Add circle
01:05:476 (3,4,5) - this goes here 01:05:159 -
01:05:873 - You ignored this
You really skipped many 1/4 in this song, i suggest to check it with hitsounds at 0% volume at 50~75% playback, that really helps :3

[Kuro's Insane]

00:20:873 - The stream starts here
00:31:588 (3) - There's nothing here, delete
00:52:936 (1) - Remove NC
01:05:079 (4) - Delete
01:06:349 (3) - move to 01:06:508 - and adjust spacing
01:12:856 (3) - Delete
01:14:761 (5) - ^
01:16:111 (1,2,3) - the right place for that triplet is here 01:16:587 -
Same as fort's map, check the map using what i've said in his diff

Sorry for the lazy mod ;w;
Good luck ^^

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2015-02-11T08:19:30+00:00

pkhg

pkhg wrote:
hii, from Pho's Delivery Service :3/

[General]

[Easy]
HP and OD 2 for better spread - ok

00:10:874 (3,1) - This part sounds weird imo, try this http://puu.sh/fKzcF/c0b48700aa.jpg - ummm... no, little odd for me
00:13:889 (4,1) - Try this, to follow vocals better http://puu.sh/fKzpt/5cf12465fe.jpg - ^
00:19:286 (2) - Tweaked a bit: - ok
408,68,19286,2,0,B|356:36|356:36|292:96|224:52,1,200.000001490115
00:28:017 (2) - http://puu.sh/fKzOl/d81371bdbe.jpg - imo, this diff is quite difficult for easy. maybe no
00:33:889 (1) - http://puu.sh/fKzYP/bded37bbd4.jpg - ^
00:49:127 (1,2) - eh... http://puu.sh/fKAe9/986b8fe4bf.jpg - ^
01:06:587 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/fKAvR/0bc9d30bbb.jpg - ^
01:09:444 (6) - Add NC - ok
01:19:286 (2) - http://puu.sh/fKAM5/7b530f9191.jpg - same like before
01:20:873 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/fKB5b/205a647348.jpg - ok, but i don't add (4)
01:24:682 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/fKBpr/3f2f78e5df.jpg - no
00:11:984 - 00:43:730 - This section is empty, add some hitsounds please - ok XD

[Normal]
AR5 will be better - ok :>

00:03:571 (5,1) - Swap nc and add nc here 00:06:111 (5) - no... or more to i don't understand .-.
00:08:651 (5,1) - http://puu.sh/fKDyb/1a2f24d067.jpg <- that works much better since you ignored the strong beat here 00:09:127 - maybe no
00:11:190 (1) - http://puu.sh/fKDQZ/d9785f0002.jpg - no
00:14:206 - Add a 1/2 slider here -imo, no sound there .-.
00:18:651 (1) - http://puu.sh/fKE8p/8c6238018a.jpg - no
00:19:286 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/fKEhx/a769467f04.jpg - ^
00:22:143 (2) - Delete it and place a 1/2 slider + reverse, like this http://puu.sh/fKEuz/4b3e2c3b6d.jpg - ^
00:26:905 (1,2,3,4) - eh... http://puu.sh/fKEK7/e1e44c999c.jpg Follow the vocals better - fix with something little different
00:30:079 (1) - Replace it with this http://puu.sh/fKF1b/535d2730d8.jpg - ok... but without reverse :>
00:33:889 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/fKFhB/d81f01fb0c.jpg - no
00:38:968 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try something similar to what I said above - ^
01:22:460 (5) - Add NC - ok
Try to make this more 1/2, the gap between this and hard its a little big imo. You have many 1/1 sliders idk, just try to split them into something else or replacing some 1/2 sliders with circles, just a suggestion, im not sure - i have no idea ;_;

[Hard]

00:05:636 (1) - add NC - no
00:11:191 (1) - http://puu.sh/fKGYx/2de06a5438.jpg - no
00:11:984 (3) - Tweaked a bit: - ok
120,292,11984,2,0,B|172:336|172:336|228:284|288:344,1,195.000000894069,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:30:555 - Dont ignore this - ok
00:35:635 (5) - This is better: - ok
288,348,35635,2,0,B|248:316|204:340|204:340|164:304,1,130.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:55:952 (1) - Remove NC - ups :>
00:58:492 (1) - ^ - ups[2] XD

thanks for your help

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-11T11:19:45+00:00

RZHR: i will Make v2 map for this? (but i didnt want to remap it lol)

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-11T13:33:58+00:00

pkhg wrote:
hii, from Pho's Delivery Service :3/
[Fort's Insane]

00:06:906 (1,2,3) - You can easily use circles instead okay
00:11:349 - Why everyone ignore this beat? ;w; because vocals

00:17:699 (6,1) - Swap nc
00:25:000 (1,4) - ^
00:30:397 (1) - Remove NC
00:32:460 (1,4) - Swap NC
00:35:476 (5) - Add NC
00:38:016 (6) - ^
00:40:555 (4) - ^
About NCs i re fix NC for my map, so fixed!!
00:49:286 - Dont skip this i will not change that
00:52:619 (3,4) - You dont need all these patterns, just place a triplet (00:52:540 - You skipped this too) I'll not point out more of these cuz I know that you'll not change them (but I highly suggest you to change them owo) let's try something there
01:00:159 - Add circle looks good
01:05:476 (3,4,5) - this goes here 01:05:159 - i didnt follow instrumental, im pretty sure of that and i cant hear that sound lol
01:05:873 - You ignored this wow distance too far, i think i cant do this
You really skipped many 1/4 in this song, i suggest to check it with hitsounds at 0% volume at 50~75% playback, that really helps :3 but i follow vocal in this map :<

applied all except red one

Fortsane

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Coro

2,394 posts

Joined September 2010

Coro 2015-02-13T15:06:11+00:00

Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[IMT's Muzukashii]
00:08:334 (34) - shift this to 00:08:492 and change to k, that way you can still have the note mapping the snare~

[AxelHino's Oni]
seems fine~

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
also seems fine~

everything seems ready to be ranked already, go for it~

Setsurei

1,149 posts

Joined May 2012

Setsurei 2015-02-16T23:03:46+00:00

M4M \:D/
[Easy]
00:06:111 (2) - imo the flow is weird here. better shape it like this? flow with (1), and blanket (3)

SPOILER

00:11:190 - strong beat here, 00:11:508 - empty beat here, so I suggest to remove the reverse
00:22:778 (3,4) - smoother flow

SPOILER

00:26:905 (1) - curve the half end?

SPOILER

01:07:857 (2) - blanket it with 01:09:444 (1) - looks cool, well idk your taste though, you may agree to my suggestion or not

SPOILER

01:14:524 (3,4) - flow cut, change to this?

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:01:825 (2) - curve the half end

SPOILER

00:03:095 (4) - softer flow, curve out a bit

SPOILER

00:06:905 (4) - wavy slider?

SPOILER

00:16:905 (1) - curve the front half

SPOILER

00:23:254 (4) - 45° CW selection centre
00:28:333 (5,6) - change to this?

SPOILER

00:35:635 (4) - 316|232
00:36:270 (5) - 132|288
00:36:746 (1) - curve more to flow smoothly with 00:37:698 (2) -

SPOILER

00:40:079 (3,4,5) - a better flow

SPOILER

01:01:190 (2) - this is better, no?

SPOILER

01:11:984 (3) - 464|140, fix the next objects DS too
01:22:144 (4) - 344|292, fix next objects too
[Hard]
00:03:572 (2) - 308|84
00:13:889 (4) - suggesting to change the slider's shape

SPOILER

00:21:984 (2,4) - overlap
00:32:619 (4,1) - blanket paralel properly
01:03:571 (2,2) - overlap a bit
01:07:540 (3) - curve this

SPOILER

01:08:809 (3) - rotate 25° clockwise, then move to 384|48
[Fort's Insane]
00:09:604 (3,1) - fix blanket
00:09:128 (1,3) - ^
00:10:398 (3,2) - ^

00:33:889 (3,1) - fix blanket
00:47:381 (3,5) - ^
00:59:762 (2,6) - ^
01:03:571 (2,3) - ^
[Kuro's Insane]
00:01:826 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:03:096 (4,1) - ^
00:04:683 (5,1) - ^
00:07:382 (1,2) - ^
00:11:191 (1) - a sudden jump here, uncomfortable
00:29:128 (1,1) - ^
00:36:745 (1) - stack properly with 00:35:793 (2,4) - / 00:37:539 (3) -
01:04:364 (1,3) - fix blanket
01:05:634 (8,1) - ^
01:09:444 (6,1) - blanket it?
01:23:412 (5,1) - fix blanket

sorry for the delay (my laptop dies a lot lol), and sorry for the wall of images (especially on the lower diffs)
good luck

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-18T14:38:00+00:00

Setsurei wrote:
[Fort's Insane]
00:09:604 (3,1) - fix blanket
00:09:128 (1,3) - ^ didnt purpose fix blanket
00:10:398 (3,2) - ^

00:33:889 (3,1) - fix blanket
00:47:381 (3,5) - ^
00:59:762 (2,6) - ^
01:03:571 (2,3) - ^ didnt blanket that

Fort's Insane

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172,340,55793,6,0,L|280:312,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,280,56032,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,252,56111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,216,56270,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,172,56428,2,0,P|232:136|228:112,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,100,56587,2,0,P|324:60|336:48,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,116,56746,2,0,L|416:208,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,300,57063,6,0,P|64:252|64:200,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,136,57381,2,0,L|184:180,1,127.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,177,57698,2,0,P|224:172|264:148,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,96,58016,2,0,L|348:204,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,220,58254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,252,58333,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,308,58492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,352,58651,2,0,P|164:304|216:232,1,127.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,196,58968,2,0,P|160:156|160:104,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,216,59286,2,0,L|60:312,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,128,59603,5,4,0:0:0:0:
128,196,59762,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,68,59920,1,4,0:0:0:0:
200,228,60079,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,228,60159,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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84,108,62619,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,108,62698,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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390,143,63968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
390,143,64047,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,264,64206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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100,248,65000,2,0,P|132:180|112:76,1,170,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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48,44,65555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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266,272,66508,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,272,66587,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,336,66746,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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24,188,68968,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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124,120,69762,5,4,0:0:0:0:
252,208,69920,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,36,70079,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,244,70238,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,244,70317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,244,70397,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,280,70555,2,0,P|188:316|120:320,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,300,70873,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,216,71032,6,0,L|428:328,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,196,71349,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,132,71508,2,0,L|320:20,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,72,71825,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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448,288,72301,6,0,L|324:264,1,85,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,324,72619,2,0,L|172:300,1,85,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,332,72936,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,256,73095,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,216,73174,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,176,73254,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,120,73413,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,156,73571,2,0,P|252:216|252:272,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,256,73889,2,0,P|72:260|4:224,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,144,74365,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,92,74524,2,0,P|136:80|192:100,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,44,74841,6,0,L|264:116,1,42.5,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,72,75000,2,0,L|328:136,1,42.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,144,75159,2,0,L|384:236,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,296,75476,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,336,75635,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,336,75714,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2015-02-18T16:14:49+00:00

Setsurei wrote:
M4M \:D/
[Easy]
00:06:111 (2) - imo the flow is weird here. better shape it like this? flow with (1), and blanket (3)- ummm, maybe no
SPOILER
00:11:190 - strong beat here, 00:11:508 - empty beat here, so I suggest to remove the reverse - vocal ?
00:22:778 (3,4) - smoother flow - ok, but i keep (4), bcause i want it to symmetry :>
SPOILER
00:26:905 (1) - curve the half end? - ummm, no..
SPOILER
01:07:857 (2) - blanket it with 01:09:444 (1) - looks cool, well idk your taste though, you may agree to my suggestion or not - prefer mine :>
SPOILER
01:14:524 (3,4) - flow cut, change to this? - ok
SPOILER
[Normal]
00:01:825 (2) - curve the half end - maybe no
SPOILER
00:03:095 (4) - softer flow, curve out a bit - ^
SPOILER
00:06:905 (4) - wavy slider? - ok :>
SPOILER
00:16:905 (1) - curve the front half - no
SPOILER
00:23:254 (4) - 45° CW selection centre - ^
00:28:333 (5,6) - change to this? - idk why, but it looks weird for me :<
SPOILER
00:35:635 (4) - 316|232 - ok
00:36:270 (5) - 132|288 - ^I change that slider shape a little ... i change this one with something in my mind :>
00:36:746 (1) - curve more to flow smoothly with 00:37:698 (2) - fixed
SPOILER
00:40:079 (3,4,5) - a better flow - ummm no, and because (5) blanket with (1)
SPOILER
01:01:190 (2) - this is better, no? - ah
SPOILER
01:11:984 (3) - 464|140, fix the next objects DS too - nothing change
01:22:144 (4) - 344|292, fix next objects too - ^
[Hard]
00:03:572 (2) - 308|84 - ok
00:13:889 (4) - suggesting to change the slider's shape - maybe no .-.
SPOILER
00:21:984 (2,4) - overlap - how? .-.
00:32:619 (4,1) - blanket paralel properly - fixed
01:03:571 (2,2) - overlap a bit - no
01:07:540 (3) - curve this - ok
SPOILER
01:08:809 (3) - rotate 25° clockwise, then move to 384|48 - no

sorry for the delay (my laptop dies a lot lol), and sorry for the wall of images (especially on the lower diffs)
good luck

thanks for your help :>

Sky Trias

Sky Trias 2015-02-19T16:59:15+00:00

Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

[General]

Tags :

Remove : Short Version Size

Combo Colours :

Inconsistency in combo colours with taiko and standard difficult :

- Taiko

128,0,64
0,64,128
255,0,128
255,255,0
0,255,0
255,128,0

- Standard

128,0,64
0,64,128
255,0,128
255,255,0
0,128,0
255,128,0

Audio :

- Raise the audio on Normal difficult ~

especially :
Extra :

- Move the inherit line ( red ) to 00:01:032 - ( Cause first not start here )

- Is this song changing the offset or something? i see 2 inherit line ( red ) on timing ~

- The gap between Normal with Hard is too high ~

[ Easy]

Use 1/1 Snap Divisor for Easy difficult ~
00:01:033 (1) - remove clap ( tail ) following 00:04:366 (4)
00:06:905 (3) - add whistle ( tail )
00:10:874 (3) - no need repeat here
00:26:905 (1) - add whistle ( head )
00:50:079 (2) - remove whistle ( repeat )
01:17:063 (3) - change to whistle ( tail )

[ Normal]

00:06:905 (4) - NC
00:09:444 (2) - remove whistle ( head ) move to 00:08:968 (1) - ( tail )
00:09:921 (3) - add clap ( tail )
00:11:190 (1) - add whistle ( tail )
00:16:746 (5) - remove whistle ?
00:22:619 (3) - remove whistle ( head ) move to ( tail )
00:23:254 (4) - remove whistle ( repeat )
00:26:905 (1) - remove whistle
00:27:063 (2) - NC should start here not 00:26:905 (1)
00:48:174 (3) - add whistle ( tail )

[ Hard]

00:16:747 (1) - remove whistle ?
00:18:809 (1) - ^
01:04:047 (1) - remove NC
01:12:301 (1) - change to whistle ( head ) change to clap ( tail ) it's following 00:51:984 (1)
01:23:413 (6) - double hitsounds ? why ? remove clap maybe ?

[ Fort's Insane]

Are you using silent slider or something ? Cause , using audio under 20% is not rankable~
00:02:144 (3) - add whistle
00:04:048 (3) - add whistle ( tail )
00:05:795 (3) - ^
00:22:619 (7) - NC?
00:23:730 (10) - Put same as 00:23:096 (8) - ( on the beginning slider ) it's really confusing
00:25:317 (2,3) - Ctrl+G?
00:25:794 (4) - remove whistle ?
00:27:222 (1) - missing whistle
00:40:555 (4,5) - blanked
00:41:666 (6) - add whistle ?
00:46:905 (1) - straight slider ? same as 00:47:381 (3)
01:12:619 (2) - double hitsounds ? why ? remove clap maybe ?
01:15:000 (2) - why clap ? should change to whistle same as 01:20:555 (4,5)
01:20:714 (5) - there a finish added .. why ? remove maybe ..
01:27:540 (5) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner.

[ Kuro's Insane]

Are you using Fort's Timing ?
00:04:048 (2,3) - Check DS ~
00:05:477 (3,4) - Ctrl+G?
Well this is nice ~

OK! That's all i can mod

GL! RzHr

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Monstrata 2015-02-20T06:34:04+00:00

Hihi~ Random mod. I just happened to be mapping a full version of this song, thought it would be nice to see the tv-size get ranked too!. I didn't make a lot of comments on style, since we all have different mapping styles. Still, I hope this will be useful to you guys

. Best of luck ^^

[General]

01:12:301 - I highly recommend having a Kiai reset here. End Kiai Time here, and reset it at 01:12:301 - for a nice effect

.

[Kuro's Insane]

00:05:795 (5,1) - This jump is pretty big, but it also doesn't flow very well
00:11:985 (4) - Shorten to 1/1 and add note at 00:12:460 - . This will be more consistent with the rest of your rhythmic pattern in this section.
00:33:571 (3,4,1) - This flow could be improved... How about Ctrl + H on 00:34:206 (1) - . Reposition after.
00:36:745 (1,3) - Stack.
01:04:364 (1,3) - Could improve this blanket

[Fort's Insane]

00:25:317 (2,3,4) - Maybe space this out just a bit more so it's clear 3, 4 are separated by a full 1/1.
00:49:444 (1) - May I suggest using 3 3/2 sliders here instead? Something like this? ;o.
00:51:349 - Could map a note here too if you want~.
01:13:571 (8) - NC
01:16:111 (8) - ^

[Hard]

00:18:176 (4,5) - Check blanket
00:28:651 (5,7) - Fix stack
00:52:619 (3,4) - These two notes should be stacked on top of each other, since the rest of your stacks occur during the drum beats here. Maybe shorten 00:51:984 (1) - to a 1/2 slider and add another one at 00:52:301 -
(For examples: 00:53:889 (4,5) - . 00:55:159 (4,5) - 00:57:698 (4,5) - )

[Normal]

00:28:017 (2,3) - Check blanket.
00:33:571 (4,1) - ^
00:49:127 (1) - How about a rhythm like This?
00:52:619 (2,3) - Check blanket.
01:06:905 (2,3,4) - Check blankets. You may want to use two control points instead of one for these kinds of designs.

[Easy]

01:02:143 - Map this beat D:. It's a strong beat!!
01:04:682 - ^

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-02-23T08:56:06+00:00

Sky Trias wrote:
[ Fort's Insane]
Are you using silent slider or something ? Cause , using audio under 20% is not rankable~ wow that was.... thanks gan
00:02:144 (3) - add whistle
00:04:048 (3) - add whistle ( tail )
00:05:795 (3) - ^
00:22:619 (7) - NC? nope
00:23:730 (10) - Put same as 00:23:096 (8) - ( on the beginning slider ) it's really confusing i like this xP
00:25:317 (2,3) - Ctrl+G? distance problem?
00:25:794 (4) - remove whistle ? follow something there
00:27:222 (1) - missing whistle
00:40:555 (4,5) - blanked 2Hard2BlankET xD
00:41:666 (6) - add whistle ? sound good but too loud
00:46:905 (1) - straight slider ? same as 00:47:381 (3) totally have pattern change so its okay if i didnt do symetrical things there
01:12:619 (2) - double hitsounds ? why ? remove clap maybe ?
01:15:000 (2) - why clap ? should change to whistle same as 01:20:555 (4,5)
01:20:714 (5) - there a finish added .. why ? remove maybe ..
01:27:540 (5) - Consider adding a NC on this spinner. this very funny things ever i see

monstrata wrote:
[Fort's Insane]

00:25:317 (2,3,4) - Maybe space this out just a bit more so it's clear 3, 4 are separated by a full 1/1. :/
00:49:444 (1) - May I suggest using 3 3/2 sliders here instead? Something like this? ;o. why?? its slow part, you make some jump there lol
00:51:349 - Could map a note here too if you want~. sound very low than my next circle
01:13:571 (8) - NC fixed error NCs
01:16:111 (8) - ^

thanks for mods guys, i love you all <3 i apply all except red one

Boom!!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: The Bravery (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 51666
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 49128,53890,61192,83811
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:The Bravery (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:The Bravery (TV Edit)
Artist:supercell
ArtistUnicode:supercell
Creator:RzHr
Version:Fort's insane
Source:マギ The labyrinth of magic
Tags:2nd Ending ED Closing ryo Koeda こゑだ こえだ Magi Aladdin Alibaba Morgiana AxelHino Kuro Fuyusaki Fort IMMoRTalS Nardoxyribonucleic Short Version Size
BeatmapID:492958
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RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2015-02-23T09:51:02+00:00

Sky Trias

Sky Trias wrote:
Hi! From -[Trias's STD Modding Queue]-

[General]
Tags :

Remove : Short Version Size why ? .-. imo, it will make people more easier to searh this BM
Combo Colours :

Inconsistency in combo colours with taiko and standard difficult : - fixed

- Taiko
128,0,64
0,64,128
255,0,128
255,255,0
0,255,0
255,128,0
- Standard
128,0,64
0,64,128
255,0,128
255,255,0
0,128,0
255,128,0
Audio :

- Raise the audio on Normal difficult ~ - ok

especially :
Extra :

- Move the inherit line ( red ) to 00:01:032 - ( Cause first not start here ) - downbeat is wrong

- Is this song changing the offset or something? i see 2 inherit line ( red ) on timing ~ - need it there

- The gap between Normal with Hard is too high ~ - i have no idea ;_;
[ Easy]
Use 1/1 Snap Divisor for Easy difficult ~
00:01:033 (1) - remove clap ( tail ) following 00:04:366 (4) - imo, need it there
00:06:905 (3) - add whistle ( tail ) - ummm... no
00:10:874 (3) - no need repeat here - idk, but i think i follow the vocal on the repeat & the vibration(?) .-.
00:26:905 (1) - add whistle ( head ) - ok
00:50:079 (2) - remove whistle ( repeat ) - no
01:17:063 (3) - change to whistle ( tail ) - no
[ Normal]
00:06:905 (4) - NC - ng... ok
00:09:444 (2) - remove whistle ( head ) move to 00:08:968 (1) - ( tail ) - ok
00:09:921 (3) - add clap ( tail ) - ok
00:11:190 (1) - add whistle ( tail ) - no
00:16:746 (5) - remove whistle ? - maybe no
00:22:619 (3) - remove whistle ( head ) move to ( tail ) - ^
00:23:254 (4) - remove whistle ( repeat ) - ^
00:26:905 (1) - remove whistle - ^
00:27:063 (2) - NC should start here not 00:26:905 (1) - fixed
00:48:174 (3) - add whistle ( tail ) - ummm, no
[ Hard]
00:16:747 (1) - remove whistle ? - ok
00:18:809 (1) - ^ - ^
01:04:047 (1) - remove NC - why ? .-.
01:12:301 (1) - change to whistle ( head ) change to clap ( tail ) it's following 00:51:984 (1) - no
01:23:413 (6) - double hitsounds ? why ? remove clap maybe ? - ups, fixed :>
OK! That's all i can mod
GL! RzHr

monstrata

monstrata wrote:
Hihi~ Random mod. I just happened to be mapping a full version of this song, thought it would be nice to see the tv-size get ranked too!. I didn't make a lot of comments on style, since we all have different mapping styles. Still, I hope this will be useful to you guys . Best of luck ^^

[General]

01:12:301 - I highly recommend having a Kiai reset here. End Kiai Time here, and reset it at 01:12:301 - for a nice effect . - idk... but, maybe no :<

[Hard]

00:18:176 (4,5) - Check blanket - fixed
00:28:651 (5,7) - Fix stack - that's already... nothing wrong, imo .-.
00:52:619 (3,4) - These two notes should be stacked on top of each other, since the rest of your stacks occur during the drum beats here. Maybe shorten 00:51:984 (1) - to a 1/2 slider and add another one at 00:52:301 -
(For examples: 00:53:889 (4,5) - . 00:55:159 (4,5) - 00:57:698 (4,5) - ) - nothing change

[Normal]

00:28:017 (2,3) - Check blanket. i don't get what you mean .-.
00:33:571 (4,1) - ^ - ^
00:49:127 (1) - How about a rhythm like This? - no
00:52:619 (2,3) - Check blanket. - same like before .-.
01:06:905 (2,3,4) - Check blankets. You may want to use two control points instead of one for these kinds of designs. - nothing wrong, imo

[Easy]

01:02:143 - Map this beat D:. It's a strong beat!! - little break for easy
01:04:682 - ^ - ^

thanks for your help

wasonz

714 posts

Joined July 2013

wasonz 2015-03-04T09:42:35+00:00

Coro wrote:
Taiko mod~
All are suggestion unless in red.

[IMT's Muzukashii]
00:08:334 (34) - shift this to 00:08:492 and change to k, that way you can still have the note mapping the snare~

[AxelHino's Oni]
seems fine~

[Nardo's Inner Oni]
also seems fine~

everything seems ready to be ranked already, go for it~

Nope

Kuro Fuyusaki

593 posts

Joined May 2013

Kuro Fuyusaki 2015-03-13T09:12:36+00:00

fixing all of the changes, can't feedback right now....in hurry, my schedule is really tight ugh ;w;

updated map : http://puu.sh/gyj58/0b67746cb6.osu

Lally

3,177 posts

Joined December 2011

Lally 2015-03-14T19:31:24+00:00

sorry for delay ;_;

[Hard]

AR 7.5 feels better
00:21:111 (7) - remove it feels overmapped

00:39:762 (2,3,4,5) - i have a suggestion for this pattern ;

SPOILER

216,324,39762,2,0,P|252:308|296:316,1,65.000000298023,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,272,40079,2,0,P|368:232|356:196,1,65.000000298023
280,224,40397,2,0,P|268:188|244:168,1,65.000000298023,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,104,40714,2,0,P|260:80|176:120,1,130.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,156,41190,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,212,41349,2,0,B|36:252|44:296,1,65.000000298023,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,360,41667,1,2,0:0:0:0:

[Fort]

00:12:461 (4) - nc
00:16:746 (9,1) - swap nc

nice mapset but i think sthe pread between the normal and hard is not so good there is a bug gap imo inbetween >_< try to reduce the note dencity in hard diff !!

good luck o3o

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2015-03-15T06:24:32+00:00

Lally wrote:
sorry for delay ;_;

[Hard]
AR 7.5 feels better - ok
00:21:111 (7) - remove it feels overmapped - ok
00:39:762 (2,3,4,5) - i have a suggestion for this pattern ; - prefer mine :>
SPOILER
216,324,39762,2,0,P|252:308|296:316,1,65.000000298023,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,272,40079,2,0,P|368:232|356:196,1,65.000000298023
280,224,40397,2,0,P|268:188|244:168,1,65.000000298023,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,104,40714,2,0,P|260:80|176:120,1,130.000000596046,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,156,41190,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,212,41349,2,0,B|36:252|44:296,1,65.000000298023,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,360,41667,1,2,0:0:0:0:
nice mapset but i think sthe pread between the normal and hard is not so good there is a bug gap imo inbetween >_< try to reduce the note dencity in hard diff !! - i have no idea ;_;

good luck o3o

thanks for your help

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-03-15T11:28:16+00:00

@lally fixed all, didnt need to reply mods

Fort

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: The Bravery (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 51666
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 49128,53890,61192,83811
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.7

[Metadata]
Title:The Bravery (TV Edit)
TitleUnicode:The Bravery (TV Edit)
Artist:supercell
ArtistUnicode:supercell
Creator:RzHr
Version:Fort's insane
Source:マギ The labyrinth of magic
Tags:2nd Ending ED Closing ryo Koeda こゑだ こえだ Magi Aladdin Alibaba Morgiana AxelHino Kuro Fuyusaki Fort IMMoRTalS Nardoxyribonucleic Short Version Size
BeatmapID:492958
BeatmapSetID:134165

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.7
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Background.jpg",0,0
Video,400,"Magi ED2.flv"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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11350,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,50,0,0
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36905,-100,4,2,1,45,0,0
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46508,-100,4,2,1,48,0,0
46587,-100,4,2,1,55,0,0
49047,-200,4,2,1,40,0,0
51984,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61190,-80,4,2,1,70,0,1
61349,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
61984,-80,4,2,1,70,0,1
62143,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
87540,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
90714,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,0,64
Combo2 : 0,64,128
Combo3 : 255,0,128
Combo4 : 255,255,0
Combo5 : 0,255,0
Combo6 : 255,128,0

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296,48,1509,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,48,1826,5,0,0:0:0:0:
248,116,1985,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,184,2144,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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thanks for mods

Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-03-18T14:51:54+00:00

As requested

[General]

I think it better to use " magi: the labyrinth of magic " as source and move japanese name to tags , it a bit more safe when it come to quality check when the map is qualified imo ( using japanese name need to correct or otherwise will get dq since the source can't be edited by qat )

[Kuro]

The NC pattern here is pretty inconsistent imo I recommend you NC every downbeat ( big white tick ) it make NC a bit more consistent here imo

00:06:905 (4,5) - Ctrl+g these seems to make the flow a bit better here , it give a bit more impactful at this sliderjumps 00:06:429 (3) - which is a bit same feeling as what you did here 00:07:858 (2,3) -
00:11:349 - , 00:11:191 - Hitsound here sound pretty low , 30-35% volume would fit this a bit better
00:32:301 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try make spacing between each double and slider here a bit consistent it flow much better that way and also give more impact feeling to players imo
00:35:952 (3,4) - This jumps feels a bit awkward , I'd make jumps here instead 00:35:793 (2,3) - it a bit more reasonable imo
00:43:095 - This beat should be emphasized more , Try make it clickable
SPOILER

[Fort]

The NC pattern here is pretty inconsistent imo I recommend you NC every downbeat ( big white tick ) it make NC a bit more consistent here imo

00:02:302 (1,2) - The flow here play a bit uhhh...idk weird or not but I think if you swap (2) with (3), it flow better :3
00:11:985 (3,4) - Stacking and skipping beat here 00:12:302 - is not a good idea imo , it make the pattern here a bit hard to read , I'd would unstack them , well stacking here is okay 00:13:889 (9,10) - players can read that easy
00:21:032 (6,7) - Finish doesn't fit here imo , it too loud while the cymbal in music sound pretty low
00:25:476 (3,4) - Slider would work a bit better here the beat here 00:25:794 - doesn't emphasized enough to be clickable imo
00:29:603 (4) - Finish doesn't fit here
00:36:270 (1,2) - Bad overlap , something like this is better imo
SPOILER
I can give better overlap pattern suggestion but the flow end up pretty bad so I didn't suggest it xD
00:59:920 - , 01:00:238 - , 01:00:714 - , 01:01:190 - finish doesn't fit here imo
01:11:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - Finish fit only these beat imo 01:11:032 - ,01:11:508 - ,01:11:984 -

some 1/4 notes are pretty questionable , I enjoy playing it yea but they somehow feel not right for this type of song lol idk so maybe consider some 1/4 notes would be the best because lots of them are questionable

[Hard]

The NC pattern here is pretty inconsistent imo I recommend you NC every downbeat ( big white tick ) it make NC a bit more consistent here imo

00:01:508 (2) - tbh move this to somewhere around x192 y288 would make the flow here a bit better
00:21:111 - Adding a note here would make rhythm here 00:21:032 (6,7) - a bit more intresting
00:21:984 (2,3,4,5,6) - Using repetitive pattern and flow like this is not really good imo it's pretty boring and give repetitive feeling to player
00:30:079 (1,2,3,4) - imo anit-jumps doesn't fit here

Aesthetic things in this diff can be improved a bit imo

[Normal]

The NC pattern here is pretty inconsistent imo I recommend you NC every 2nd downbeat ( big white tick ) it make NC a bit more consistent here imo

00:16:746 (5,1) - Stack these would make rhythm here play a bit better
00:26:905 (5,1) - Try this ? play a bit better here
SPOILER
00:31:349 - Add a circle would make rhythm here sound a bit better
00:36:270 (5) - Use 1/2 slider here instead would improve polarity here 00:36:270 (5,1) - a bit
SPOILER
00:41:349 (5) - Similiar to above

[Easy]

The NC pattern here is a bit inconsistent at some part imo I recommend you NC every 2nd downbeat ( big white tick ) it make NC a bit more consistent here imo

00:05:159 (1) - Start slider here 00:05:317 - sound better imo also the change the slider head 1/1 would mess up rhythm after that a bit so I suggest this rhythm
SPOILER
[img]puu.sh/gFpZ8/74cc92a5e2.png[/img]
it flow and sound a bit nice for beginner
00:06:906 (3,4) - This rhythm sound better
SPOILER
00:10:873 (3) - Delete repeat arrow here will make this slider land at emphasized beat which make rhythm sound a bit better
00:13:889 (3) - Whistle?
00:16:429 - ^
00:28:016 - ^
00:28:968 - ^
00:43:095 - ^
01:04:047 (1) - Curve the another way so it flow with 01:02:460 (3) - better

Good luck

Kuro Fuyusaki

593 posts

Joined May 2013

Kuro Fuyusaki 2015-03-18T15:38:47+00:00

CelsiusLK

CelsiusLK wrote:
As requested

[Kuro]
The NC pattern here is pretty inconsistent imo I recommend you NC every downbeat ( big white tick ) it make NC a bit more consistent here imo -> some of the beat ofc are incosistent, so i can't make it NC every downbeat...hmm, i'll recheck it carefully
00:06:905 (4,5) - Ctrl+g these seems to make the flow a bit better here , it give a bit more impactful at this sliderjumps 00:06:429 (3) - which is a bit same feeling as what you did here 00:07:858 (2,3) - -> i'll make 00:06:905 (4) - and 00:08:175 (3) - further instead
00:11:349 - , 00:11:191 - Hitsound here sound pretty low , 30-35% volume would fit this a bit better -> fixed~
00:32:301 (1,2,3,4,1) - Try make spacing between each double and slider here a bit consistent it flow much better that way and also give more impact feeling to players imo -> i'll change the pattern .-.
00:35:952 (3,4) - This jumps feels a bit awkward , I'd make jumps here instead 00:35:793 (2,3) - it a bit more reasonable imo -> fixed~
00:43:095 - This beat should be emphasized more , Try make it clickable -> changing pattern, fixed o/
SPOILER

Good luck

updated map : http://puu.sh/gFsHH/69c9199fc7.osu

RzHr

267 posts

Joined July 2013

Topic Starter

RzHr 2015-03-21T16:40:13+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
As requested

[General]
I think it better to use " magi: the labyrinth of magic " as source and move japanese name to tags , it a bit more safe when it come to quality check when the map is qualified imo ( using japanese name need to correct or otherwise will get dq since the source can't be edited by qat ) - mmm... nothing change, i'm really sure with that source http://myanimelist.net/anime/14513/Magi ... h_of_Magic

[Hard]
The NC pattern here is pretty inconsistent imo I recommend you NC every downbeat ( big white tick ) it make NC a bit more consistent here imo - i will check again
00:01:508 (2) - tbh move this to somewhere around x192 y288 would make the flow here a bit better - fix with something little different
00:21:111 - Adding a note here would make rhythm here 00:21:032 (6,7) - a bit more intresting - add it again
00:21:984 (2,3,4,5,6) - Using repetitive pattern and flow like this is not really good imo it's pretty boring and give repetitive feeling to player -fixed
00:30:079 (1,2,3,4) - imo anit-jumps doesn't fit here - nothing change

Aesthetic things in this diff can be improved a bit imo
[Normal]
The NC pattern here is pretty inconsistent imo I recommend you NC every 2nd downbeat ( big white tick ) it make NC a bit more consistent here imo - same like before
00:16:746 (5,1) - Stack these would make rhythm here play a bit better - no
00:26:905 (5,1) - Try this ? play a bit better here - little odd for me :<
SPOILER
00:31:349 - Add a circle would make rhythm here sound a bit better - no sound there .-.
00:36:270 (5) - Use 1/2 slider here instead would improve polarity here 00:36:270 (5,1) - a bit - no
SPOILER
00:41:349 (5) - Similiar to above - ^
[Easy]
The NC pattern here is a bit inconsistent at some part imo I recommend you NC every 2nd downbeat ( big white tick ) it make NC a bit more consistent here imo - same like before
00:05:159 (1) - Start slider here 00:05:317 - sound better imo also the change the slider head 1/1 would mess up rhythm after that a bit so I suggest this rhythm
SPOILER
[img]puu.sh/gFpZ8/74cc92a5e2.png[/img]
it flow and sound a bit nice for beginner - little odd for me :<
00:06:906 (3,4) - This rhythm sound better - fixed
SPOILER
00:10:873 (3) - Delete repeat arrow here will make this slider land at emphasized beat which make rhythm sound a bit better - i really sure i follow the vocal .-. but several mod say something like this too... ok, changed
00:13:889 (3) - Whistle? - ok
00:16:429 - ^ - ^
00:28:016 - ^ - ^
00:28:968 - ^ - ^
00:43:095 - ^ - ^
01:04:047 (1) - Curve the another way so it flow with 01:02:460 (3) - better - fixed
Good luck

thanks

Ciyus Miapah

3,011 posts

Joined June 2013

Ciyus Miapah 2015-03-22T11:03:49+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
[Fort]
The NC pattern here is pretty inconsistent imo I recommend you NC every downbeat ( big white tick ) it make NC a bit more consistent here imo lmao i designed this diff and NC like complex one so i made some custom consistency combos
00:02:302 (1,2) - The flow here play a bit uhhh...idk weird or not but I think if you swap (2) with (3), it flow better :3 make square jumps? oh god too hard
00:11:985 (3,4) - Stacking and skipping beat here 00:12:302 - is not a good idea imo , it make the pattern here a bit hard to read , I'd would unstack them , well stacking here is okay 00:13:889 (9,10) - players can read that easy because my pattern is swag
00:21:032 (6,7) - Finish doesn't fit here imo , it too loud while the cymbal in music sound pretty low
00:25:476 (3,4) - Slider would work a bit better here the beat here 00:25:794 - doesn't emphasized enough to be clickable imo slider too hard to put there, and i like circle :3
00:29:603 (4) - Finish doesn't fit here
00:36:270 (1,2) - Bad overlap , something like this is better imo
SPOILER
I can give better overlap pattern suggestion but the flow end up pretty bad so I didn't suggest it xD i will get some idea for this just keep it for now
00:59:920 - , 01:00:238 - , 01:00:714 - , 01:01:190 - finish doesn't fit here imo
01:11:032 (1,2,3,4,5) - Finish fit only these beat imo 01:11:032 - ,01:11:508 - ,01:11:984 -

some 1/4 notes are pretty questionable , I enjoy playing it yea but they somehow feel not right for this type of song lol idk so maybe consider some 1/4 notes would be the best because lots of them are questionable
ok try it

i fix all except red one

thanks for mod :3

fort

osu file format v14

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Rizia

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Rizia 2015-04-19T06:11:00+00:00

still here?

RzHr

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RzHr 2015-04-19T09:42:55+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
still here?

yes .-.

Rizia

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Rizia 2015-04-19T15:46:04+00:00

[General]

first timing point offset should change to -78, then delete 00:31:667 - this timing point

[Kuro's Insane]

00:11:191 (1,2) - stress on 00:11:190 - , so i think the slider head should place there
SPOILER
00:36:269 (1) - ctrl+g, better flow
00:48:174 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - triangle jump pattern?
00:56:110 (2) - i think move to x172 y268 will more fun on playing
01:12:936 (4,5) - why slow down the slider speed?

[Fort's Insane]

00:03:413 - add note here
00:04:287 (4,1) - didn't stack together for better look
SPOILER
00:05:239 (2,1) - ^
00:17:699 (4,5) - nazi, blanket better
00:17:699 (4,6) - ^
00:30:080 (1,2,3) - hitsound on 00:30:080 (1) - tail and 00:30:317 (2,3) - are too noisy
00:30:317 (2) - remove, didn't fit here

[Hard]

00:01:033 (1) - missing finish at the head
00:03:572 (2) - finish at the head too
00:04:842 (2) - finish
00:06:111 (4) - head
00:07:063 (2) - tail
00:09:921 (1) - head
00:08:652 (1) - head
00:07:698 (1,2,3) - i think the rhythm on here should like this
SPOILER
00:21:032 (6,7,8) - stack together, would more nice for read
00:30:079 (1,2) - i think ds is a bit slow now...
SPOILER

[Normal]

Finish suggestion same as Hard
00:19:286 (2) - feel weird here.... change to a 1/2 slider
SPOILER
00:57:063 - i know you want follow vocal, but i think you can't ignore this finish sound...
01:02:144 (3) - finish
01:11:032 (1,2) - finish at the head

[Easy]

00:06:905 (3,4) - i think this rhythm will better for here
SPOILER

RzHr

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RzHr 2015-04-20T16:53:59+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[General]
first timing point offset should change to -78, then delete 00:31:667 - this timing point - idk ;-; but keep it like before
[Hard]
00:01:033 (1) - missing finish at the head - add it
00:03:572 (2) - finish at the head too - ^
00:04:842 (2) - finish - ^
00:06:111 (4) - head - ^
00:07:063 (2) - tail - ^
00:09:921 (1) - head - ^
00:08:652 (1) - head - ^
00:07:698 (1,2,3) - i think the rhythm on here should like this - fixed
SPOILER
00:21:032 (6,7,8) - stack together, would more nice for read - fixed
00:30:079 (1,2) - i think ds is a bit slow now... - nothing change
SPOILER
[Normal]
Finish suggestion same as Hard - ok
00:19:286 (2) - feel weird here.... change to a 1/2 slider - fixed
SPOILER
00:57:063 - i know you want follow vocal, but i think you can't ignore this finish sound... - fixed
01:02:144 (3) - finish - ok
01:11:032 (1,2) - finish at the head - maybe no
[Easy]
00:06:905 (3,4) - i think this rhythm will better for here - ok
SPOILER

thanks for your help

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