HotaruMiraiRin wrote:

I love this song so much, please get it ranked!
I can't mod, so just some general stuff w

[General]

- I think you should change the source to ' マギ The labyrinth of magic ', the official Japanese name of the anime. - ok

- Koeda's name in Japanese is こゑだ, not こえだ - add こゑだ, and not remove こえだ because that's こゑだ (こえだ)

Thanks

wobble_owo wrote:

My mod owo
Easy,Normal,Hard
- End the spinner from 01:09:193 to 01:11:044 here: 01:11:361 or do it like you did in the hard diff - nothing change, because that's easy & normal

Good work, you really should try to rank the map owo

Thanks but, sorry no kd

NewIpas wrote:

General:
-Because of new rules, "(TV Edit)" must be deleted from the title :3 - new rule ? .-.
-Fort's insane -> "i" nya besarin :3

Easy:
00:11:837 (1,3) - Nadanya kurang pas deh :/ - imo, pas
00:51:996 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - Ini kepanjangan deh :3 - apanya ? :> combonya ? ga kok kayaknya
01:12:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - :^) - NC di 4

Normal:
00:11:837 (1,1) - Nadanya kurang pas :/ - imo lagi :>, pas kok

Hard:
00:07:710 - Add note - ok
00:46:917 (4) - NC :3 - ok

Thanks

NcrzX wrote:

From My queue sorry not much help
Easy :
00:50:091 I think should be here using spinner - because I more dominant follow the vocals, maybe not. And because if i use it there, the end of the spinner must be 00:51:361 or 00:51:679 there's no time for recovery
00:33:266 you can add slider there - no

Normal :
00:38:345 you can add circle there - no
00:38:737 and there - no

Hard :
00:50:726 I think should be here using spinner - same with easy

appleeaterx wrote:

Hello RzHr! from my queue

:idea: General

* '(TV Edit)' title is fine. It's listed on the single.
* Could just be me, but I find that the sections at 00:11:202 till 00:31:679 are a little soft. Maybe you could increase the volume a bit? Could just be me, so you should look for more opinions about this >_> - nothing change :>

Easy

* 00:05:964 (2) - The finish sound (which is much stronger than the guitar) starts 1/2 tick later. Maybe you could add a circle here and move the slider 1/2 tick later, or do something like you did at 00:08:663 (6) - ok
* 00:15:012 (4) - Shortening the slider by 1/2 tick and putting it on 00:15:171 sounds much bettger and this way you can focus on the high peaks of the vocals. - I think it's no problem
* 01:09:139 (1) - Same comment as the Hard diff. - why not write it on easy XD and on the next diff write "same with easy"... btw, at first time I did it, but I think now is better :>

A bit the same comment as the Normal diff. Some parts before the KIAI were quite awkward to play, since you didn't really focus on the high peaks of the vocals, but the KIAIs rhythm is really fun to play - imo, there is nothing wrong before the KIAI.... maybe :>

Normal

* 00:01:837 (2,4) - These sliders aren't following anything. Make them 1/2 tick longer and delete (3)? Might be a little easy for a Normal diff, but thats sounds much better than it is right now. - no
* 00:11:679 (4) - I recommend having an extra note here. It's quite hard to suddenly click on a slider that starts on a red tick, and this gap is kinda awkward. - i think that's fine .-.
* 00:49:139 (5) - Why did you start this slider so early? It should start on the next large white tick. You can then place 1/1 note on here to follow the vocals. - I don't know why I do that, but I think it still fits.... nothing change

* 01:07:869 (3,4) - Blanket is off. - fixed :> (maybe)
* 01:09:139 (1) - Same comment as the Hard diff. - Same reason with easy

Could use some more work on the rhythm at the beginning of the song, like the rhythm you had in KIAI. The KIAI section was fun to play, so maybe you should copy some rhythms from the KIAI to the beginning - same with easy

Hard

* 00:30:091 (1) - You were mainly following the vocals after this, so suddenly puitting a long slider here might not be a very good idea and could confuse some players as well. - no
Maybe you can try this rhythm to follow the vocals?

* 00:36:440 - Add a note? You're following the vocals here, and this one's missing. - ok :>
* 00:41:520 - ^ - no vocals here .-.
* 01:06:599 (1,2) - Blanket? - I feel a bit weird if i see this is blanket
* 01:07:869 (1,2) - ^ - ^
* 01:09:139 (1) - Why did you start the spinner here? The continuing 'ro' sound starts at 01:09:456 - Maybe you can start it a little later and map the vocals here. - same with easy

Mainly in the easier diffs there could be some work in the rhythm, but maybe that's just your style. Sorry if this mod was short, but I think with the suggestions I gave you should have an idea what you can improve in your map. Overall, fun map and good luck - maybe :>

2014-11-08 01:08 RzHr: natsu
2014-11-08 01:08 Natsu: RzHr
2014-11-08 01:10 RzHr: can you help me ? :<
2014-11-08 01:10 Natsu: probably, what do you need?
2014-11-08 01:10 RzHr: can you check my map? because some mod say the rhythm still not fit... idk, imo it fits, maybe you can help ? :D
2014-11-08 01:12 Natsu: link me your map 
2014-11-08 01:12 RzHr: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/427228 supercell - The Bravery (TV Edit)]
2014-11-08 01:15 Natsu: so what's the problem here
2014-11-08 01:16 RzHr: the rythm
2014-11-08 01:18 Natsu: lets see
2014-11-08 01:18 Natsu: 00:11:827 (1,2) -  for example here the rhythm sound really bad, since seems like you are trying to follow the vocals, but in a wrong way (hard diff)
2014-11-08 01:20 Natsu: http://puu.sh/cHSsE/1cdc64b08f.jpg  this will be a better way
2014-11-08 01:20 Natsu: 00:14:367 (1) -  same happen here, the problem is that you don't follow the main beats
2014-11-08 01:21 Natsu: this kind of popular problem when mapping, people don't follow he prominent beats in the song
2014-11-08 01:21 Natsu: since if you hear a strong sound, you should map it as slider head or circle, but never ignored or as slider tail
2014-11-08 01:23 Natsu: another example where a bad rhythm is used is here 00:19:287 (3,4,5,6,7) -  youa re following every vocal as a clickable object, but you fail following it with 00:19:764 (5) -  since is the only slider that broke your rhythm
2014-11-08 01:24 Natsu: try this: http://puu.sh/cHSD7/abf6bf548c.jpg
2014-11-08 01:27 Natsu: you there xD¿?
2014-11-08 01:27 RzHr: yeah XD
2014-11-08 01:28 Natsu: 00:24:526 (2,3,4) -  here you are following that whistles? or w/e that is, but you break it with 00:25:954 (5) - 
2014-11-08 01:28 Natsu: instead of a 1/1 slider a 1/2 will follow the melody a lot better
2014-11-08 01:29 Natsu: 00:30:081 (1) -  http://puu.sh/cHSQl/9cb8fa619c.jpg
2014-11-08 01:30 Natsu: 01:09:128 (1) -  also this spinner seems random in the midle of the chorus
2014-11-08 01:32 Natsu: 00:27:224 (2,3,4,5) - in a lot of parts, your spacing is really short and cause this kind of overlaps orz, try to use more spacing to avoid them in general
2014-11-08 01:32 RzHr: at first time, the spinner start from 01:09:446
2014-11-08 01:34 Natsu: mmm maybe use 1.20 spacing? abut the spinner is just my opinion, but I feel that part will be more fun mapped with slider and circles 
2014-11-08 01:34 RzHr: ok :D
2014-11-08 01:34 Natsu: 01:00:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -  oh your spacing in the kiai look a lot better
2014-11-08 01:35 RzHr: hmm... about the spinner because I think I follow the vocals, so i put the spinner there .-.
2014-11-08 01:37 Natsu: if you are really following the vocals, this will fit better than your long spinner https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2215440
2014-11-08 01:37 Natsu: don't mind theplacement
2014-11-08 01:38 RzHr: 00:10:399 (2,3,4) - ah right, did you think, this is overmapped ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:39 Natsu: lol that's not overmaped, overmapping = adding objects with nothing in the music
2014-11-08 01:39 Natsu: 00:10:399 (2,3,4) -  but this ahve a wrong rhythm 
2014-11-08 01:40 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2215445
2014-11-08 01:40 RzHr: because that's a mod say that XD
2014-11-08 01:42 RzHr: ok :> fixed
2014-11-08 01:42 Natsu: btw no boy complaining for your combo usage?
2014-11-08 01:44 RzHr: combo usage ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:45 RzHr: something like NC ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:46 Natsu: yeah
2014-11-08 01:46 Natsu: btw this timing is wrong o.o
2014-11-08 01:46 Natsu: 00:01:034 - first red line should be here
2014-11-08 01:46 RzHr: at first ... ummm yeterday... i change it from -67 to 240
2014-11-08 01:47 RzHr: ok :> i'ill fix
2014-11-08 01:49 Natsu: 00:31:669 - and probably you will need another red line with the same bpm there
2014-11-08 01:50 Natsu: to reset the offset
2014-11-08 01:51 RzHr: "00:11:351 - Please add a red line at here for beat stanza change"  there also ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:52 Natsu: who said that¿?
2014-11-08 01:53 RzHr: mintong89
2014-11-08 01:53 Natsu: nah I think you need it in 00:31:669 -
2014-11-08 01:53 Natsu: there is where the shift happen I think
2014-11-08 01:54 Natsu: anyways, ask to captin1 he is good at timing just to be sure
2014-11-08 01:54 RzHr: ok :D i'll ask later

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Tess wrote:

Hi, from my M4M queue

General

1. Correct offset is 250. You won't have to resnap any objects. - 1033
2. It feels like you pay very little attention to the rhythm and just make a rhythm of your own that sort of follows the song but not really. Try to listen in the future to what the music is telling you, and base your beatmap off of that.

Easy

1. 00:19:298 (7) - Make this symmetrical - because I will increase the number of circles, it will be many changes. Later, if I find a slider form like this, i will make it symmetrical
2. 00:22:631 (2) - ^ - ^
3. 00:27:075 (1) - Fix blanket - ^same reason with blanket.... but, IMO, there is already blanket .-.
4. 00:28:980 (3) - Fix blanket - ^
5. 00:30:091 (4) - Make this a little rounder, it doesn't look very good - ok, if i make slider like this again
6. 00:41:837 (4) - Fix blanket - same reason with before
7. 00:46:917 (3) - Fix blanket - ^
8. 01:07:869 (4) - This should end 1/1 later. Adjust the slider afterwards (you already muted it so it doesn't matter too much if you have to end it slightly early, I think. No more than 1/2 though.) - maybe no .-.
9. 01:19:298 (5) - Add a clap on the end - ok
10. 01:20:885 (1) - Make this symmetrical - like before

Normal

1. 00:11:837 (1) - This should be either a 1/2 slider or a single hitcircle - may later be changed, but I get the point
2. 00:12:472 (2,3,4) - Why don't you delete (4) and change (3) into a return slider and (2) into a 3/2 slider? like this - ok
3. 00:19:298 (2) - This should be 1/2 -same like first reason on this diff
4. 00:14:377 (1,2) - ^ - ^
5. 00:15:964 (4) - This should be 1/1 - ^
6. 00:16:758 (5) - This should be a circle on the white tick, and then a 1/1 return slider on the red - I don't think it will fit
7. 00:21:044 (5) - This should be a 2/1 slider - same like first reason on thisl diff
8. 00:21:996 (1) - 1/1 - ^
9. 00:25:012 (5) - 3/2 - ^
10. 00:28:028 (3) - Fix blanket - same reason like before
11. 00:28:980 (5) - Fix blanket - ^
12. 00:35:964 (7) - Fix blanket - ^
13. 00:36:758 (1) - Make symmetrical - ^
14. 00:39:615 (4) - You used a 1/2 before, why not here? - Ups, i didn't notice this XD
15. 00:43:107 (3) - Fix blanket - same before
16. 00:45:647 (6) - ^ - ^
17. 00:49:139 (5) - Make this into a symmetrical 3/1 slider, then delete (6) and place another 3/1 slider on 00:50:726 - maybe, I had to change this part from easy to normal
18. 00:52:948 (3) - Fix blanket - same before
19. 00:56:122 (2) - Why didn't you hitsound this sliderend? - maybe at the kiai, i'll make it like hard diff.
20. 00:58:662 (2) - Blanket - same before
21. 01:02:154 (3) - A clap doesn't fit here at all, place it on the end of 01:02:472 (4) - instead - same reason... kiai time
22. 01:04:694 (2) - Clap doesn't fit - ^
23. 01:06:599 (1) - Blanket - same before
24. 01:08:186 (4) - Blanket - ^
25. 01:14:536 (5) - Remove clap from the sliderend - same before
26. 01:16:440 (2) - Place clap on the sliderend - ^
27. 01:17:710 (4) - ^ - ^
28. 01:17:392 (3) - Remove clap - ^
29. 01:19:298 (3) - Only leave a clap on the return - ^
30. 01:21:202 (2) - Blanket - same
31. 01:24:059 (6) - Move this to the left slightly or it's hard to read - if I don't re- this BM. maybe after that, will coming mod that say to stack this :>

Hard

1. 00:06:123 (4) - Fix this slider shape, make it curvier - ok
2. 00:09:932 (1) - ^, except here you should just make it form a more symmetrical half circle - ok
3. 00:07:869 (2) - Add clap - ok
4. 00:09:298 (2) - Add clap on the end - little strange .-. maybe no
5. 00:10:409 (2,3,4) - Overmapping in a Hard? Really? - not overmapping, btw... but, fixed :>
6. 00:13:107 (4,5,6) - I don't see how you're hearing any 1/2's here if you're mapping after the vocals - fix
7. 00:15:171 (3,4) - This doesn't fit the music just like in the Normal - ^
8. 00:22:155 (2,3) - ^ - ^
9. 00:27:076 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ - ^
10. 00:35:012 (3,4,5) - ^ - i think, this is fine
11. 00:40:091 (3,4,5) - ^ - ^
12. 00:15:964 (5,6) - I really don't see why you're placing 1/2 sliders everywhere - lol, i'll fix it too
13. 00:19:456 (4) - ^ - ^
14. 00:20:409 (6,7) - ^ - ^
15. 00:46:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ - ^
16. 00:52:948 (2,3,4,5) - ^ - ^
17. 00:55:488 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - ^
18. 00:58:028 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - ^
19. 01:02:472 (5) - ^ - ^
20. 01:04:059 (1,3) - ^ - ^
21. 01:06:599 (1) - ^ - ^
22. 01:07:869 (1) - ^ - ^
23. 01:13:266 (2,3) - ^ - ^
24. 01:15:806 (1,2,3,4) - ^ - ^
25. 01:18:345 (1,2) - ^ - ^
26. 01:20:885 (1,2) - ^ - ^
27. 01:24:694 (1) - ^ - ^
28. 01:14:694 (1,2) - ^ - This is exceptionally wrong because they start on red ticks where they don't fit at all - imo this is fit .-. but idk maybe this will be change later
29. 01:17:552 (6) - ^ - maybe i'll change this into a circle
30. 01:25:806 (4,5) - ^ - fix later
31. 00:31:679 (1) - Fix this slidershape, it's not curving properly at all - b-b-but this one is cute but, ok
32. 00:41:837 (1) - ^ - ^
33. 00:45:647 (3) - ^ - ^
34. 00:51:996 (1) - ^ - ^
35. 00:55:012 (8) - Why would you place a hitcircle on a white tick just to place a slider on a red tick afterwards, where it doesn't fit at all? - fix
36. 00:57:393 (6,7) - ^ - I do have to say that it's good that you're consistent, that's something that you shouldn't change. You just need to improve the things you're consistent with. - ok :>
37. 00:59:932 (6,7) - ^ - ^
38. 00:59:298 (5) - Make this symmetrical - same like before
39. 01:00:567 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't really fit because you're ending the sliders with claps, making them into downbeats that end on red ticks, which doesn't really make sense, and second because there's absolutely nothing there in the music to support those sliders, and they don't play very nicely either. I understand that you want to follow the elongated notes in the vocals but this is not the way to do it. Use hit circles instead, or two return sliders. - claps ? there is nothing there .-. but, ok i'll fix later
40. 01:26:917 (7) - This could've been a triple, you know - ok

So there's a recurring issue with the 1/2 sliders - I'm not really sure why you placed them there, but all those things prevent me from even getting into the flow aspect of your map because they're there throughout the whole thing and they don't fit the song at all, so I suggest you remap and use more hitcircles instead. You shouldn't map to sounds that aren't in the song, especially not on a Hard. I noticed that you like to use sliders a lot - there are barely any hit circles in any of your diffs. That's not good. You need to have a healthy balance between sliders, spinners and hit circles or else your map will feel off or repetitive. Also, another issue I kept seeing was that you don't listen to the song's rhythm much, if it all. Your map only mildly follows the song, and that isn't how you're supposed to map. It has to follow the song 1:1, preferably, accentuating beats that need to be accentuated. Lastly, I'll advise you to not start sliders on red ticks at all, for now, unless you're absolutely sure that it fits there. Consult another (experienced) mapper if you're not sure about it. You're always free to PM me in-game but I might be busy, so don't yell at me when I am. - at first I didn't pay attention... but, after seeing another people BM, it may be true also .-.

I have to go but if you apply these changes I'll also take a look at the GDs later. Good luck!

Natsu wrote:

Did some IRC, mainly helping with rhythm in hard diff

2014-11-08 01:08 RzHr: natsu
2014-11-08 01:08 Natsu: RzHr
2014-11-08 01:10 RzHr: can you help me ? :<
2014-11-08 01:10 Natsu: probably, what do you need?
2014-11-08 01:10 RzHr: can you check my map? because some mod say the rhythm still not fit... idk, imo it fits, maybe you can help ? :D
2014-11-08 01:12 Natsu: link me your map 
2014-11-08 01:12 RzHr: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/427228 supercell - The Bravery (TV Edit)]
2014-11-08 01:15 Natsu: so what's the problem here
2014-11-08 01:16 RzHr: the rythm
2014-11-08 01:18 Natsu: lets see
2014-11-08 01:18 Natsu: 00:11:827 (1,2) -  for example here the rhythm sound really bad, since seems like you are trying to follow the vocals, but in a wrong way (hard diff)
2014-11-08 01:20 Natsu: http://puu.sh/cHSsE/1cdc64b08f.jpg  this will be a better way
2014-11-08 01:20 Natsu: 00:14:367 (1) -  same happen here, the problem is that you don't follow the main beats
2014-11-08 01:21 Natsu: this kind of popular problem when mapping, people don't follow he prominent beats in the song
2014-11-08 01:21 Natsu: since if you hear a strong sound, you should map it as slider head or circle, but never ignored or as slider tail
2014-11-08 01:23 Natsu: another example where a bad rhythm is used is here 00:19:287 (3,4,5,6,7) -  youa re following every vocal as a clickable object, but you fail following it with 00:19:764 (5) -  since is the only slider that broke your rhythm
2014-11-08 01:24 Natsu: try this: http://puu.sh/cHSD7/abf6bf548c.jpg
2014-11-08 01:27 Natsu: you there xD¿?
2014-11-08 01:27 RzHr: yeah XD
2014-11-08 01:28 Natsu: 00:24:526 (2,3,4) -  here you are following that whistles? or w/e that is, but you break it with 00:25:954 (5) - 
2014-11-08 01:28 Natsu: instead of a 1/1 slider a 1/2 will follow the melody a lot better
2014-11-08 01:29 Natsu: 00:30:081 (1) -  http://puu.sh/cHSQl/9cb8fa619c.jpg
2014-11-08 01:30 Natsu: 01:09:128 (1) -  also this spinner seems random in the midle of the chorus
2014-11-08 01:32 Natsu: 00:27:224 (2,3,4,5) - in a lot of parts, your spacing is really short and cause this kind of overlaps orz, try to use more spacing to avoid them in general
2014-11-08 01:32 RzHr: at first time, the spinner start from 01:09:446
2014-11-08 01:34 Natsu: mmm maybe use 1.20 spacing? abut the spinner is just my opinion, but I feel that part will be more fun mapped with slider and circles 
2014-11-08 01:34 RzHr: ok :D
2014-11-08 01:34 Natsu: 01:00:557 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -  oh your spacing in the kiai look a lot better
2014-11-08 01:35 RzHr: hmm... about the spinner because I think I follow the vocals, so i put the spinner there .-.
2014-11-08 01:37 Natsu: if you are really following the vocals, this will fit better than your long spinner https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2215440
2014-11-08 01:37 Natsu: don't mind theplacement
2014-11-08 01:38 RzHr: 00:10:399 (2,3,4) - ah right, did you think, this is overmapped ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:39 Natsu: lol that's not overmaped, overmapping = adding objects with nothing in the music
2014-11-08 01:39 Natsu: 00:10:399 (2,3,4) -  but this ahve a wrong rhythm 
2014-11-08 01:40 Natsu: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2215445
2014-11-08 01:40 RzHr: because that's a mod say that XD
2014-11-08 01:42 RzHr: ok :> fixed
2014-11-08 01:42 Natsu: btw no boy complaining for your combo usage?
2014-11-08 01:44 RzHr: combo usage ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:45 RzHr: something like NC ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:46 Natsu: yeah
2014-11-08 01:46 Natsu: btw this timing is wrong o.o
2014-11-08 01:46 Natsu: 00:01:034 - first red line should be here
2014-11-08 01:46 RzHr: at first ... ummm yeterday... i change it from -67 to 240
2014-11-08 01:47 RzHr: ok :> i'ill fix
2014-11-08 01:49 Natsu: 00:31:669 - and probably you will need another red line with the same bpm there
2014-11-08 01:50 Natsu: to reset the offset
2014-11-08 01:51 RzHr: "00:11:351 - Please add a red line at here for beat stanza change"  there also ? .-.
2014-11-08 01:52 Natsu: who said that¿?
2014-11-08 01:53 RzHr: mintong89
2014-11-08 01:53 Natsu: nah I think you need it in 00:31:669 -
2014-11-08 01:53 Natsu: there is where the shift happen I think
2014-11-08 01:54 Natsu: anyways, ask to captin1 he is good at timing just to be sure
2014-11-08 01:54 RzHr: ok :D i'll ask later

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phate45 wrote:

[General]

1. Standard mod only, no taiko from me.
2. Nice song!

[ Easy]

1. 00:10:874 (3) - Part of it is outside grid, should be repositioned. - imo, not a big problem, nothing change
2. 00:14:365 (1) - Needs to be shortened and repositioned if it's meant to follow the vocal. - ummm... no
   
3. 00:19:286 (2,3) - These two bend out of grid. - fix (2) shape, and make (3) into a straight slider
4. 00:22:143 (2) - ^ - move it up a little
5. 00:26:905 (1,2,3) - These sliders don't feel like they are following the vocal at all, you should try something like the image below, or couple short sliders maybe? - no, I follow... what is it ? .-. sound like tsch tsch
   
   Don't mind the curves, they are for example only.
6. 00:40:714 (3) - Is partly out of grid. - nothing change
7. 01:02:143 - Should have a note, feels natural with the drums, can also be conveniently placed between 01:01:190 (2) and 01:02:460 (3). - no
8. 01:04:682 - ^ same thing. - no
9. 01:09:444 (4) - Is a tiny bit off the grid. - nothing change
10. 01:12:301 (1) - Move the start point to x:396 y:264 for better blanket. - no,
11. 01:17:063 (3) - Is a tiny bit off the grid. - nothing change

[ Normal]

1. 00:05:159 (1,2,3) - Changing to fit the image below would follow both the guitar and the drums better than your current sliders. - sound little strange for me .-.
   
2. 00:09:921 (3,4) - Shortening 3 to end at 00:10:239 and inserting a note at 00:10:556 would feel better with the music. - nothing change
   
3. 00:14:524 (1) - Off grid. - change into a straight slider
4. 00:18:651 (1,2) - Lenghtening (1) and shortening (2) would fit better with the vocal. - sound little strange for me
   
5. 00:24:048 (5,6) - I'm going to assume these two follow the guitar, because it does not fit with the vocals at all. - same like easy, that sound like tsch tsch XD
6. 00:26:905 (1,2,3) - I got no idea what do these 3 sliders follow, neither guitar nor vocals fit their timing. - vocal imo .-.
7. 00:31:667 (1,2) - Bend slightly off grid. - nothing change
8. 00:49:127 (1) - ^ same. - ^
9. 01:06:905 (2,3,4) - Nice blanket! - thanks
10. 01:16:428 (2) - Off grid again. - nothing change

[ Hard]

1. 00:22:461 (3,4) - Removing (4), moving (3) to 00:22:619 and adding a repeat to it fits better with the vocal. - no
   
2. Overall, very nice diff (99.7% first try sightread ).

pinataman wrote:

Hey, absolutely love this song, so have a mod! If I sound mean when I ask questions, I apologize. I didn't mean to, and they're there because I want to genuinely learn from it.

Also I mention pacing a lot. If you don't get what I mean by that watchthis video. Sorry if I sound smug about it, I just like playing with my new toy in map theory.

[General:]

It'd be nice if the audio file had the title and artist in it's properties field.
[Easy/Normal]

I've been modding for 3.5 hours and I'm too tired to do these. If this map gets close to ranking, pm me and I might come back and do these. - :D

[Hard:]

00:01:033 (1,2) – (2) is a little bit too out of flow(see other note relating to this), try moving (1) to (10, 183), or doing your little trick of changing the end of (1). (Personally, I think you use this a little too much or in a visually unappealing way, but hey, you can't please everyone) - idk why, but I like to make them like that :>
00:11:826 (2) – Delete this and make (1) end here. Mostly pacing reasons. Having this part of the song start off this way made it seem like this had more energy than the opening, which should not happen. The rest of the section is okay pacing-wise - no
00:22:461 (3,1) – Try not to overlap these for visual reasons. - i have no idea what must i do .-.
00:24:048 (1,2,3,4) – these don't flow with the bass all that well. You do a lot better job with it at 00:23:414 (1,2,3,4) - . I had something like the picture below. I do this because the bass has this wavy feel to it, so I changed the orientation from clockwise to CC or vice versa to match it with the wave slider. (3) and (4) in my pattern also matches 00:25:000 (3,4) – , so it's good to have a cohesive subtheme like this.- but i'm fine with it :>




00:23:414 (1) - to follow the bass, use either a triple or a reverse slider using ¼ notes and delete 00:23:889 (4) - . - no
00:30:080 (1,2,3) – Delete 2 and 3, make 1 end where 3 starts, and add a circle where 3 ends. This is a slow part of the song, and you're going too fast. - no
00:36:746 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) – I can follow your rhythm but it's kind of odd, I would look to improve it. - idk...but, i don't have a problem with this
00:42:301 (2,3,4,5,6,7) – This rhythm is off. You can tell because the singer sings where (3) ends; she should start again on a slider head. Delete 8, shift 2-7 by a half beat later, and make the 1 slider end at 00:42:301 (2) - .- ok... ummm, i don't make the 1 slider end at 00:42:301 - but i add a circle
00:45:635 (1) – This should be the start of the jump pattern, and it is a little too jumpy - ok
00:46:111 (4) - This should also be part of the jump pattern. - ok
00:49:444 (5,6,7) – If you want to be fancy, you could change each of these sv's so (6) is slightly faster than (5) and (7) is even slower than (5), though that's probably me being too hyper and making your map worse XD - I think it would be little confusing :>
00:50:714 (7) – I think it sounds better if it ends here 00:51:666 (8) - no .-.
01:00:873 (3,4,5) – something about these stacks make this part hard or something idk. - maybe just your feeling
01:04:841 (3) – This is more an example to a general statement for mapping, but this flow off by too much. Generally speaking, you want the note to come off of the path of the slider/flow before it unless you have a good reason to break flow, which to me is not evident here (I might be being a little too picky about this one, but keep this in mind, this doesn't just apply here). - not a problem... maybe .-.
01:11:031 (1,3,5) – I'll preface this with I'm not the best at hitsounds, but consider making these heads also have a finish like in the section at 01:00:714 (2) - ? If you do, maybe add hitfinish to 01:14:841 (1) - , and 01:19:920 (1) – (I said the same thing in Kuro's insane, so maybe ask him too for second opinion) - imo, not too fit
01:17:063 (9) – This is being a little too dreamy on my part, but keep in mind your pacing. Is this part strong enough for this part of the song relative to the rest of the map? (The sliders get a little repetitive towards the end) - not a problem... maybe[2] :>
01:27:540 (1) – add circle? - no

phate45 wrote:

[General]

1. Standard mod only, no taiko from me.
2. Nice song!

[ Kuro's Insane]
This is a bit too hard for me to playtest, but I had a friend help me out. Alexsire says that the map is quite fun!

1. 00:36:269 (1,2,1) - Feels unnatural, hard to read by Alex -> as expected ~_~ , i'll change the pattern, and 4 circle before it
2. 00:52:460 (3,4,5) - This is the pattern i comment on the previous diff at 01:15:159, nicely mapped. -> Thank You
3. Overall, feels pretty solid, nicely done. Or maybe my modding skills are not enough to spot any more mistakes

-> You're doing good >.<

pinataman wrote:

Hey, absolutely love this song, so have a mod! If I sound mean when I ask questions, I apologize. I didn't mean to, and they're there because I want to genuinely learn from it.

Also I mention pacing a lot. If you don't get what I mean by that watchthis video. Sorry if I sound smug about it, I just like playing with my new toy in map theory.

[Kuro's Insane:]

00:06:112 (1) – Anti-flow here is inappropriate here, though that's probably personal. However, if you do use anti-flow, I suggest you put it at (144, 169) for a dist snap of 3.2 since it is a little too high as is. -> it's not inappropriate, well maybe just the location is seems a bit weird, i'll change the pattern for sure

00:30:238 (1) – This felt a little too long and I like having circles at 00:31:191 (2) – and 00:31:508 (3) - . I think you made your point already with 00:29:127 (1) - , so try having this end at 00:30:873 (2) - . -> okay, delete the second slider and place a little drain section

00:48:651 (2) – Your pacing is really good in this map, but I'm not sure about here. I feel like the energy here should be more than it was at 00:47:381 (2) - , yet the jump is smaller and the slider slows it down a lot. I didn't really have a good solution for this. I tried making 00:48:651 (2) – a circle and making a slider at 00:48:809 (3) - that ends at (3), but I still didn't like it. (Pic for reference below) However, I would be satisfied with an explanation of why this shouldn't have more energy then the mentioned section. -> there's no reason in particular, confused at that part too .-. , completely. But looks like i get an idea that would make the pattern little interesting, and more energetic ofc.



01:04:999 (3) – What made you choose a 5 note stream here? I liked deleting (4), but I would like to hear your reason for it. -> simple reason. Variations. and it's still acceptable for the song's flow, at least imo.

01:11:031 (1,3,5) – I'll preface this with I'm not the best at hitsounds, but consider making these heads also have a finish like in the section at 01:00:714 (2) - ? If you do, maybe add hitfinish to 01:14:841 (1) - , 01:19:920 (1) - , and claps to 01:24:047 (2) – 's head and tail? -> okay for 01:11:031 (1,3,5) – except 5, didn't hear any finish :/. And for 01:14:841 (1) - , 01:19:920 (1) - , it's ofc not, because i don't hear any finish there. and for 01:24:047 (2) – , yep same, i won't make the claps at the end of the slider, sounds weird for me

01:12:936 (4,5,1) – the spacing into and out of 5 seems too small. This section should be slow, but having it at 1.4x spacing feels a little more fluid -> make the SV slower, thx for the suggestion

01:27:540 (1) – Circle here? It'd be nice to have the hitfinish too. -> What the..... Whattttt??!! I Think i remember when i did put it into there.... Who's deleting it? D:


Welp, that's it. Hope it helps. If it does and you want to help me out, take a look at one of the maps in my sig, but obviously I'm not expecting anything. Good luck! -> That's a great help.

OblivioN wrote:

From Lazy modding team(¦3[____]
sorry for delay cuz too many mod requset ;w;
[General]

1. what happened to the volume of Insane diff？make me confused ，try make them looks neat，example:http://puu.sh/drizX/188c441299.png

[Kuro's Insane]

1. 00:07:223 - missing a down beat hear. -> i'm following the guitar here
2. 00:08:493 -^ -> ^
3. 00:09:128 -^ -> ^
4. 00:09:763 -^ -> ^
5. 00:10:557 (1) - remove NC -> nope, it's a transition
6. I think the diff need more work,overall.-.
   so I just post some of my advices at here.
   somewhere such as :00:01:747 -&00:03:017 -00:04:286 - can add a circle to make tripiets. -> there's no need
   I‘m not a fond of overmaps like here: 00:21:112 (4) - 01:05:079 (4) - -> there's still no problem with that .-.

——————————————haven't finished yet ——————————————

Thank you for your suggestions, but there's no change yet

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