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supercell - The Bravery (TV Edit) [Taiko|Osu]

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AxelHino
http://puu.sh/blgKV/1789ca11cd.osu

Taiko gd that you requested~ (oni)
I strongly recommend that you change the timing point to the one on my map. tho, it still feels too early. maybe you can fix it?
Topic Starter
RzHr

Chaoslitz wrote:

Hi :3/

Hard

00:39:112 (2) - The slider is too long and it seems quite not following the rhythm
Suggest this rhythm: http://puu.sh/bl9ID/e0e416f48c.jpg - i change it, like this http://puu.sh/bmpet/0fb34ea741.jpg
00:43:081 (3) - This one may be better: http://puu.sh/bla0W/818ba3d5b5.jpg - ok
01:14:668 (1,2) - Not quite follow the rhythm also
I think you can change to this one: http://puu.sh/blaed/c27c20c0cc.jpg A single note with a longer slider - ok

I hope it helps! ;D
Thanks :)
Topic Starter
RzHr

AxelHino wrote:

http://puu.sh/blgKV/1789ca11cd.osu

Taiko gd that you requested~ (oni)
I strongly recommend that you change the timing point to the one on my map. tho, it still feels too early. maybe you can fix it?
Thanks for your GD :)
Gaia
oh wow what a coincedence Im making a full ver of this song right now haha

best of luck with ur set~
Topic Starter
RzHr
u too :)
Gaia
hey again
I did some research regarding metadata on this map so I might as well share with u too ^^

Title: The Bravery (TV Edit)

also add "ryo" "Koeda" and "こえだ" to tags
and since it's an anime (magi ftw) u can add names of main characters? -> Aladdin Alibaba Morgiana
^dont think u can add any supporting characters tho. myanimelist only considers those 3 as main characters. (u may wanna double check)

remove the "/" in tags

source: http://vgmdb.net/album/37087

on a totally unrelated note you're gunna need a taiko muzu if u want to rank this mapset along with the oni

no kds

edit: lol oops i forgot to capitalize the B in Bravery ;w;
Topic Starter
RzHr
Ok, thanks :)
Mmm... i already request for inner oni few days ago, should I request for muzu too? ._.
Gaia
umm, i'm not so sure about taiko, so u may have to do some more research about that part O:

however, I do know this from the Ranking Criteria:
A mapset cannot have just one Taiko or osu!mania difficulty. If you decide, for example, to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties and that one of them is of an easier difficulty level if it doesn't have an osu! standard Easy level difficulty. However having only one CtB difficulty is fine.

I dont really know what diffculty inner oni is (easier than oni I'm guessing) so as long as it's easy enough it should be okay?

bleh idk anything about taiko so go check with a BAT to be sure lol
sorry orz
Topic Starter
RzHr
XD no problem, thanks for your advice
wasonz
; ; AxelHino must increase Note to make good spread with my diff
IMT's Muzukashii
Topic Starter
RzHr
XD, thanks for your GD :)
Nardoxyribonucleic
I'm mapping an Inner Oni of 500+ notes, so AxelHino could add some notes in order to have a better difficulty spread.
Topic Starter
RzHr
I don't know what to do, maybe I will ask for help from him, later. Or find someone else to help? ._.
AxelHino
I'll fix it later this day then~
AxelHino
Here you go~ http://puu.sh/bvHxl/5bdf2f98eb.osu
That should be nice

Also I noticed that the timing points i gave you was a bit off... sorry about that :<
fixed uninherited timing points (for taiko)
-67,317.460317460317,4,1,0,100,1,0
51996,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
87552,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0

(in short, remove the second uninherited timing point (red bar) and snap the notes and inherited points)

sorry orzzz
Topic Starter
RzHr
updated :)
Nardoxyribonucleic
Here is the Inner Oni as requested: http://puu.sh/bwWzs.rar

@AxelHino: I think you have added too many notes in Oni diff that the spread between Muzukashii and Oni is too great. If possible, please consider reducing some of them for a better difficulty spread. :>

  • Here are some examples:
  1. From 00:11:202 to 00:41:837 - As the music is relatively quiet, you may use fewer triplets and fewer notes to suit the music imo.
  2. 00:15:567 (76) - consider deleting this note to emphasize the vocal more ?
  3. 00:33:821 (76) - ^
  4. 00:38:901 (103) - ^
Current no. of notes in three taiko diffs: 354 -> 494 -> 514
Topic Starter
RzHr
thanks for your GD :D
wasonz

NO KDS PLEASE cuz i'm had got it ABOVE ^


Diff spread of taiko diff .....
354 --- 140 ---> 494 --- 20 ---> 514 rip :o

try to remove note
  1. 00:02:552 - 1
  2. 00:06:996 - 2
  3. 00:09:536 - 3
  4. 00:15:567 - 4
  5. 00:20:964 - 5
  6. 00:27:234 - 6
  7. 00:32:075 (64,65) - double kill !
  8. 00:33:821 - 9
  9. 00:35:091 - 10
  10. 00:35:726 - 11
  11. 00:36:080 - 12
  12. 00:37:155 (85,86) - double kill
  13. xx:xx:xxx - unknow
. . . . .exhaust. . .. AxelHino please . .. our map need good diff spread ..... :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

You will be the HERO after you done
Quest : reduce 45 ~ 80 note

little mod :lol:
00:33:345 (68,69) - move 1/4 >
AxelHino
Fine, fine I'll fix it tomorrow. Being the middle one is hard orzzzz
fm4a93au04
Hello , from my queue ~

fm4a93au04's standard modding and GD ( ? ) queue

Let's start ~

My mod
[General]

Consider to make your SE vol. louder . Almost no sound @W@” ~

Maybe 45 ~ 50% vol. ?

[Easy]

00:11:678 (1) – Change it to 1 note at 00:11:996 .

00:17:076 (3,4,1,2) – This strange for me . My suggestion :



I prefer to follow the main rhythm here in E diff =..= .

00:56:441 (2) – Move C ( clap ) from end to head .

00:58:346 (4) – Miss a C on end ?

01:02:790 (2) – Miss a C on head ?

01:05:012 (4) – Remove C on end ?

01:06:600 (1,2) – Change their end to F ( finish ) ?

01:09:139 (3) – Add F on end ?

01:12:314 (1) – F on head ? Here also suggest a graduatly increasing vol. like :



Or something . If you like it then try to compose in your style .

01:25:647 (4,5,6) – Add some sound at ending ? Like F or C or something .

[Normal]

00:28:822 (4,1) – Consider blanket ? Or something to make it more prettier .

00:32:949 (2) – Reverse ? I think it better =ㄦ= .

01:19:298 (3,1) – Blanket ?

01:24:695 (1,2,3,4) – Consider :



Reference for sure .

[Hard]

00:11:837 ~ 00:29:774 – Why not follow BG sound ? Your rhythm is strange for me … wired for me .

If you have no idea about this , PM me . If you think your rhythm is right , then just ignore this .

A example .

00:26:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Here you did it ! But other place … a mass for me =..= .

Maybe is my problem , for sure .

00:39:932 (4) - :



Reference .

00:48:028 (4,5,6,1,2) – ^ .



I forgot to NC in this pic … sorry .

00:49:298 (9) – Make a red point curve on 00:49:456 to match vocal . Or :



00:56:123 (2,3,4,5,6) – Make them 1/2 beat later , and add a note at 00:55:964 .

01:00:567 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - :



Most important thing is :

1. MAKE SE vol. LOUDER ~~~~ @W@” !!!!!!!

2. If you like the rhythm I suggest , then copy it to other correspond places .

3. Sound also . Copy E to N and H . <- Plz make it louder =..= .

That's all .
Good luck to your map ~
Topic Starter
RzHr

fm4a93au04 wrote:

Hello , from my queue ~

fm4a93au04's standard modding and GD ( ? ) queue

Let's start ~

My mod
[General]

Consider to make your SE vol. louder . Almost no sound @W@” ~

Maybe 45 ~ 50% vol. ? - ok XD

[Easy]

00:11:678 (1) – Change it to 1 note at 00:11:996 . - ok

00:17:076 (3,4,1,2) – This strange for me . My suggestion :



I prefer to follow the main rhythm here in E diff =..= . - ok

00:56:441 (2) – Move C ( clap ) from end to head . - ok

00:58:346 (4) – Miss a C on end ? - ok

01:02:790 (2) – Miss a C on head ? - ok

01:05:012 (4) – Remove C on end ? - ok

01:06:600 (1,2) – Change their end to F ( finish ) ? - ok

01:09:139 (3) – Add F on end ? - ok

01:12:314 (1) – F on head ? Here also suggest a graduatly increasing vol. like :



Or something . If you like it then try to compose in your style . - ok

01:25:647 (4,5,6) – Add some sound at ending ? Like F or C or something . - ok

[Normal]

00:28:822 (4,1) – Consider blanket ? Or something to make it more prettier . - :> no, i like that

00:32:949 (2) – Reverse ? I think it better =ㄦ= . - no

01:19:298 (3,1) – Blanket ? - no

01:24:695 (1,2,3,4) – Consider :



Reference for sure . - ok

[Hard]

00:11:837 ~ 00:29:774 – Why not follow BG sound ? Your rhythm is strange for me … wired for me .

If you have no idea about this , PM me . If you think your rhythm is right , then just ignore this .

A example . - I also want it. but I think, the object will be slightly ._.

00:26:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6) – Here you did it ! But other place … a mass for me =..= .

Maybe is my problem , for sure . -i like that :>

00:39:932 (4) - :



Reference . - no

00:48:028 (4,5,6,1,2) – ^ .



I forgot to NC in this pic … sorry . - ok

00:49:298 (9) – Make a red point curve on 00:49:456 to match vocal . Or : - ok



00:56:123 (2,3,4,5,6) – Make them 1/2 beat later , and add a note at 00:55:964 . - no

01:00:567 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - : - ok



Most important thing is :

1. MAKE SE vol. LOUDER ~~~~ @W@” !!!!!!!

2. If you like the rhythm I suggest , then copy it to other correspond places .

3. Sound also . Copy E to N and H . <- Plz make it louder =..= .

That's all .
Good luck to your map ~
thanks for your mod :)
AxelHino
Topic Starter
RzHr
updated :>
Xinely
denied 1 kudo (Fort) on first page as mapper's request

i keep AxelHino's kudosu on first page because he/she already helped the mapper a lot from irc mod (but they lost the log)

Be careful to give kudos next time C:
AxelHino
(i'm a he lol)
Support
sry sry i got a little confused with my mods so I accidentally posted the wrong mod on this map sry sry
Since you didnt indicate which diff you want me to mod I'll just mod the [Insane]

00:09:774 (1) - remove nc

00:10:567 (3) - nc

00:46:123 (1,2,3,4) - the 1/4 jump made a really quick speed up from the flow, i would suggest putting note 2 and 4 closer to slider 1 and 3. The sudden speedup seems a bit out of place especially when the map is still building up to kiai time.

01:01:203 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the triples seems a bit excessive here, since the music does not indicate a triple, I would suggest making those triples in to single taps.

In my opinion I feel like there might be a little bit too much triples or 1/4 repeater during kiai time when the music does not indicate it, and it made it kinda awkward to play having triples every few notes or so.

Nice map and song! :) I wish you goodluck!
Topic Starter
RzHr

Support wrote:

sry sry i got a little confused with my mods so I accidentally posted the wrong mod on this map sry sry
Since you didnt indicate which diff you want me to mod I'll just mod the [Insane]

00:09:774 (1) - remove nc - ok

00:10:567 (3) - nc - ok

00:46:123 (1,2,3,4) - the 1/4 jump made a really quick speed up from the flow, i would suggest putting note 2 and 4 closer to slider 1 and 3. The sudden speedup seems a bit out of place especially when the map is still building up to kiai time. - ok, and i change the position of 34 to 12 & 12 to 34

01:01:203 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - the triples seems a bit excessive here, since the music does not indicate a triple, I would suggest making those triples in to single taps. - how about this ? :D http://puu.sh/bOPAw/db53df02fb.jpg

In my opinion I feel like there might be a little bit too much triples or 1/4 repeater during kiai time when the music does not indicate it, and it made it kinda awkward to play having triples every few notes or so. - I will change it a little in some places :>

Nice map and song! :) I wish you goodluck!
Thanks for your help :)
Mood Breaker
Hallo mau ngemod ya :>

[General]
Kenapa HS nya agak telat bunyi nya di kiai. terutama di diff easy dan normal :/

[Easy]
00:14:536 (1) - remove NC kalo bisa ditumpuk sama 00:17:075 (3) -
00:17:075 (3) - NC
00:18:345 (1) - remove NC
00:57:711 (3) - tumpuk sama 00:59:615 (5) -

[Normal]
00:02:790 (3) - tumpuk sama 00:04:060 (5) -
00:23:742 (4) - slider ini daripada punya 4 titik lebih baik titik nya jadi 3 aja biar agak rapian
00:28:822 (4) - rapiin blanket nya.
00:32:949 (2) - reverse slider

[Hard]
00:28:980 (7) - dibikin biar blanket aja
00:39:615 (3) - saran tumpuk sama 00:38:027 (4) -
01:18:027 (8) - tumpuk sama 01:16:599 (3) -
01:18:980 (3,4,5) - gimana kalo polanya dibikin seperti ini
01:21:996 (4) - reverse slider nya dibuat ke 01:22:313 aja terus di 01:22:790 kasih circle
01:23:900 (1) - remove NC

[Fort's Insane]
00:02:948 (4,5,6) - gimana kalo dibikin agak jauhan dari 00:03:266 (7) - biar enak ngejump nya
00:04:536 (2) - slider tail nya ditumpuk ke 00:04:853 (3) -
00:27:075 (1,2,3) - gimana kalo ditumpuk semua aja, soalnya single tapping sblm nya renggang2.
00:49:139 (1) - ditumpuk sama 00:49:456 (2) -
00:51:678 (3) - Clap Finish

[Insane]
00:08:504 (1) - slider tail tumpukin sama slider tailnya 00:08:821 (2) -

[Kuro's Insane]
00:01:678 (3) - tumpuk sama 00:02:313 (1) -
00:02:313 (1) - blanket
00:03:107 (4) - Ctrl+G
00:10:567 (1) - Slider tail tumpuk sama 00:09:932 (1) -
Segini dulu aja ya mod kecil2an :)
Semoga sukses selalu 8-)
Topic Starter
RzHr

Mood Breaker wrote:

Hallo mau ngemod ya :>

[General]
Kenapa HS nya agak telat bunyi nya di kiai. terutama di diff easy dan normal :/ - ah :> mungkin cuma perasaan

[Easy]
00:14:536 (1) - remove NC kalo bisa ditumpuk sama 00:17:075 (3) - ok
00:17:075 (3) - NC - ok
00:18:345 (1) - remove NC - ok
00:57:711 (3) - tumpuk sama 00:59:615 (5) - ok

[Normal]
00:02:790 (3) - tumpuk sama 00:04:060 (5) - ok
00:23:742 (4) - slider ini daripada punya 4 titik lebih baik titik nya jadi 3 aja biar agak rapian - imo, kayaknya ga masalah kek gitu :>
00:28:822 (4) - rapiin blanket nya. - suka yang kayak gitu :> ah ia, ini juga solanya ngikutin distance snapnya
00:32:949 (2) - reverse slider - ok

[Hard]
00:28:980 (7) - dibikin biar blanket aja - suka yang kayak gitu :>
00:39:615 (3) - saran tumpuk sama 00:38:027 (4) - ok
01:18:027 (8) - tumpuk sama 01:16:599 (3) - ok
01:18:980 (3,4,5) - gimana kalo polanya dibikin seperti ini - ga :D
01:21:996 (4) - reverse slider nya dibuat ke 01:22:313 aja terus di 01:22:790 kasih circle - mmm, gimana kalo circle dulu baru reverse slider ? :>
01:23:900 (1) - remove NC - ok

[Insane]
00:08:504 (1) - slider tail tumpukin sama slider tailnya 00:08:821 (2) - ok

[Kuro's Insane]
00:01:678 (3) - tumpuk sama 00:02:313 (1) - ok
00:02:313 (1) - blanket - bingung :>
00:03:107 (4) - Ctrl+G - ok
00:10:567 (1) - Slider tail tumpuk sama 00:09:932 (1) - udah numpuk kok .-.
Segini dulu aja ya mod kecil2an :)
Semoga sukses selalu 8-)
thanks udah bantu :>
Kyouren
Yo~

Just a quick mod:
Your mp3 is so small sound volume, trying use a big sound volume~
Here your MP3, i converted to 192 and change to Big Sound Volume:
http://puu.sh/bQX8z/87938729c8.mp3

NO KDS~ and Good Luck~
Topic Starter
RzHr
updated :> thanks
rew0825
Hi from my request :)

[ IMT's Muzukashii]

  1. 00:04:218 (16) - k
  2. 00:07:710 (31,32) - ctrl+g
  3. 00:08:663 (35) - k
  4. 00:31:996 (121) - k
  5. 00:46:599 (184) - k
  6. 00:58:345 (28) - d

[ AxelHino's Oni]

  1. 00:30:409 (47) - d

Good luck :)
AxelHino
applied the mod! thanks~

updated: http://puu.sh/c469Q/6e40b9f0e3.osu
wasonz
applied some mods thank ! ;)

update
Fushimi Rio
Sorry for delay. From my queue.

[General]

offset -10

[Kuro]

00:21:520 (1) - since you didn't follow the guitar in former, I suggest to follow the vocal from here
00:04:059 (2) - stack to 4
00:04:853 (1) - ^
00:36:282 (1,2) - x208 y272
00:49:456 - add a note here is better
01:07:235 (1) - ctrl+g

[Insane]

00:08:504 (1,2) - try this rhythm?
00:11:837 (3,4,5,6,1) - keep the ds same
00:28:821 - add a note at x400 y336
00:31:679 (5) - nc should be here 8
00:38:187 (5) - stack to 4

Did you consider flow when you making this map? 0.0 I can't understand your placement now.

[Fort]

00:02:631 (2) - x208 y332
00:21:044 (1,2) - try this?
00:59:774 (2) - remove finish

overall good 0 0

[Hard]

00:56:599 (4) - sounds strange here
00:56:599 (4) - put slider's end on stress isn't a good idea here

Not much to say to Normal and easy ._. Good luck.
neonat
General

First object starts at 00:01:044 which is below the 2000ms needed before the first object from the start of th song. Add 1000 to AudioLeadIn on the .osu in Notepad for all difficulties

Easy

00:56:441 (2) - remove the clap at the end of the slider, a finish suits that better
01:00:885 (1) - finish on end of slider
01:09:139 (3) - more than 1 repeat isn't recommended in an Easy, unless it really fits
01:09:139 (3,1) - don't overlap, doesn't really look nice
01:18:028 (5,1) - bad flow, don't have the slider face downwards left after you had been moving right. The overlap isn't good either

The curved sliders don't look good, like 00:25:329 (4)
The placement used can be much better honestly, it isn't neat right now and doesn't look very structured

Normal

00:04:377 (6) - finish on end of slider
00:08:504 (1,3) - stack properly
00:15:171 (3,5) - ^
00:20:885 (3,1) - blanket them nicely
00:26:600 (7) - NC here, not at 00:27:076 (1)
00:31:679 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:36:759 (1) - ^
00:59:933 (4,1) - doesn't look good with slight overlap
01:05:012 (3,1) - blanket them
01:06:600 (1,2) - too close to each other
01:12:314 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:15:489 (6,1) - use a different position and shape for the slider, overlapping them doesn't look good
01:23:108 (5,1) - ^

Moves better than Easy. but the structure still has much improvement to make it look neater, Some of the rhythm seem questionable as they don't really follow the music, like 00:21:838 (1,4)

Hard

00:01:521 (2,1) - don't let them touch
00:03:584 (3) - finish
00:04:695 (2) - finish on end of slider
00:06:123 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:07:392 (6) - ^
00:08:662 (1) - ^
00:09:932 (1) - ^
The rhythm just doesn't click with the music, I don't know what you are trying to follow sometimes, because it's not following the main vocals and just doesn't seem to fit to any instrumental part. That's including parts like 00:15:012 (4) - which should blanket 00:14:854 (3) nicely either way
00:16:758 (1,2) - blanket them
00:19:139 (2,3) - ^
00:24:219 (1,2,3,4) - you're not following the rhythm of the song, this doesn't fit at all, it just seems like your own random rhythm. This rhythm fits much better:
00:27:869 (4,5) - blanket them
00:31:678 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:34:059 (2) - doesn't fit the song either. The important beat in the song here is the vocals which starts at 00:34:218 but the slider goes over it, which is bad for the rhythm. Split this slider up
00:36:758 (2) - finish on start of slider
00:41:202 (7) - finish on end of slider
00:41:837 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:46:916 (1) - ^
00:47:392 (2) - finish
00:48:186 (5) - finish on start of slider
00:48:504 (6) - finish on end of slider
00:49:139 (1) - finish
00:49:139 (1,3,4) - blanket them
00:50:091 (4,5) - ^
00:51:996 (1) - finish on start of slider
00:53:424 (1,2) - blanket
00:53:583 (2,4) - ^
00:56:599 (4) - finish on end of slider
01:00:726 (2) - finish on start of slider
01:01:202 (4) - finish on end of slider
01:02:154 (3) - finish, NC here instead of 01:01:679 (1) as well
01:06:916 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:12:313 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:17:234 (5) - finish on end of slider
01:19:456 (4,5) - place the head of the slider lower than the previous circle for better flow and to look better too
01:22:155 (5) - finish on repeat end of slider
01:23:265 (3) - finish on end of slider
01:24:694 (1) - ^

I really don't like how you have so many sliders ending on white ticks where vocals or music phrases start, like 01:24:694 (1) - 00:55:488 (1) - 01:05:805 (1) and 01:13:107 (4,5) you throw the feel off by having the play be on the weaker beats instead of the stronger ones. It also lowers the quality of the rhythm used, which I honestly don't see much quality so far in these 3 difficulties. The patterns need more polishing, there is no blankets, not all stacks are proper, patterns overlap unnecessarily, flow changes suddenly sometimes. Use the hitsounds more for highlighting parts of the song. Your Guest Difficulties have better use of hitsounds by far, look at them and take reference.

Fort's Insane

00:20:726 (4,1,2) - I don't feel like this rhythm helps highlight the more important part of the song put NC on 00:20:726 (4) and remove 00:20:885 (1) and shift 00:21:202 (2) to start at 00:21:044 and end at 00:21:361
00:25:329 (2) - the stacking doesn't fit the song
00:27:075 (1,2,3) - sudden anti-jump, too unexpected and I don't feel it in the song
00:47:393 (3) - don't squeeze the slider too much
00:46:917 (1,5) - stack?
00:49:139 (1) - finish on this note
01:25:012 (1,7) - finish on the start of these sliders

Too much 1/4 is used in the kiai when there really isn't much to go with in the song, using too many finishes repeatly also makes it very noisy, especially the start of it. The 1/4 just doesn't blend with the song and just makes everything look like it's overmapped for no reason

Insane

I can't see the form or proper rhythm a lot in Insane.

Kuro's Insane

00:46:441 (4,5) - align them to make it look better
01:14:219 (3,2) - stack them exactly

Would probably just need some fine tuning of the placement to make it look more neater and matching in movement. Other than that, it looks the best in the Standard set, the Kiai fits nicely, and it doesn't look overmapped with unnecessary 1/4s

Overall, I don't think the non-GDs are ready, and needs a lot of overhaul to be better.
Good Luck
Topic Starter
RzHr
because fort has not been active for a long time, maybe I'll take care of fort's insane too ._.

imoutosan wrote:

Sorry for delay. From my queue.

[General]

offset -10 - maybe at this time, i don't change it ._.

[Kuro]

00:21:520 (1) - since you didn't follow the guitar in former, I suggest to follow the vocal from here - i don't have idea :>
00:04:059 (2) - stack to 4 - ok
00:04:853 (1) - ^ - ok
00:36:282 (1,2) - x208 y272 - ok
00:49:456 - add a note here is better - i don't have idea & I can't make like his style :<
01:07:235 (1) - ctrl+g - ok

[Insane]

00:08:504 (1,2) - try this rhythm? - ok
00:11:837 (3,4,5,6,1) - keep the ds same - ok
00:28:821 - add a note at x400 y336 - ok
00:31:679 (5) - nc should be here 8 - ok
00:38:187 (5) - stack to 4 - ok

Did you consider flow when you making this map? 0.0 I can't understand your placement now. - i'll fix later XD

[Fort]

00:02:631 (2) - x208 y332 - ok
00:21:044 (1,2) - try this? - ok
00:59:774 (2) - remove finish - ok

overall good 0 0

[Hard]

00:56:599 (4) - sounds strange here - I don't think ._.
00:56:599 (4) - put slider's end on stress isn't a good idea here - slider's end ? .-. how about this ? :D http://puu.sh/c98fu/aa9399e540.jpg

Not much to say to Normal and easy ._. Good luck.
updated :> and i accept mod [normal > 00:30:092 (1) - blanket ]
Topic Starter
RzHr
dat hard XD

neonat wrote:

General

First object starts at 00:01:044 which is below the 2000ms needed before the first object from the start of th song. Add 1000 to AudioLeadIn on the .osu in Notepad for all difficulties - ok

Easy

00:56:441 (2) - remove the clap at the end of the slider, a finish suits that better - ok
01:00:885 (1) - finish on end of slider - ok
01:09:139 (3) - more than 1 repeat isn't recommended in an Easy, unless it really fits - imo, this is fit
01:09:139 (3,1) - don't overlap, doesn't really look nice - I like this :( but... because some mod before say like this too ... ok .-.
01:18:028 (5,1) - bad flow, don't have the slider face downwards left after you had been moving right. The overlap isn't good either - ^ same XD

The curved sliders don't look good, like 00:25:329 (4)
The placement used can be much better honestly, it isn't neat right now and doesn't look very structured - Idk, maybe because my style is like that ? .-.

Normal

00:04:377 (6) - finish on end of slider - ok
00:08:504 (1,3) - stack properly - ok
00:15:171 (3,5) - ^ - i think...already .-.
00:20:885 (3,1) - blanket them nicely - i dont have idea :<
00:26:600 (7) - NC here, not at 00:27:076 (1) - ok
00:31:679 (1) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:36:759 (1) - ^ - ok
00:59:933 (4,1) - doesn't look good with slight overlap -idk why ;_; but i like this XD and i don't know how to change it .-. maybe at this time, i don't change this one
01:05:012 (3,1) - blanket them - ok
01:06:600 (1,2) - too close to each other - ah... right :D
01:12:314 (1) - finish on start of slider - ok
01:15:489 (6,1) - use a different position and shape for the slider, overlapping them doesn't look good - same reason... 00:59:933 (4,1)
01:23:108 (5,1) - ^ - ^

Moves better than Easy. but the structure still has much improvement to make it look neater, Some of the rhythm seem questionable as they don't really follow the music, like 00:21:838 (1,4)

Hard

00:01:521 (2,1) - don't let them touch - ummmm ? .-.
00:03:584 (3) - finish - ok
00:04:695 (2) - finish on end of slider - ok
00:06:123 (1) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:07:392 (6) - ^ - ok
00:08:662 (1) - ^ - ok
00:09:932 (1) - ^ - ok
The rhythm just doesn't click with the music, I don't know what you are trying to follow sometimes, because it's not following the main vocals and just doesn't seem to fit to any instrumental part. That's including parts like 00:15:012 (4) - which should blanket 00:14:854 (3) nicely either way - I think I followed the vocal .-. but everyone's opinion is different :D
00:16:758 (1,2) - blanket them - ok
00:19:139 (2,3) - ^ - already .-.
00:24:219 (1,2,3,4) - you're not following the rhythm of the song, this doesn't fit at all, it just seems like your own random rhythm. This rhythm fits much better: - ok
00:27:869 (4,5) - blanket them - already
00:31:678 (1) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:34:059 (2) - doesn't fit the song either. The important beat in the song here is the vocals which starts at 00:34:218 but the slider goes over it, which is bad for the rhythm. Split this slider up - ok :D fixed
00:36:758 (2) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:41:202 (7) - finish on end of slider - ok
00:41:837 (1) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:46:916 (1) - ^ - ok
00:47:392 (2) - finish - ok
00:48:186 (5) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:48:504 (6) - finish on end of slider - ok
00:49:139 (1) - finish - ok
00:49:139 (1,3,4) - blanket them - no
00:50:091 (4,5) - ^ - no
00:51:996 (1) - finish on start of slider - ok
00:53:424 (1,2) - blanket - i think, already .-. ?
00:53:583 (2,4) - ^ - ^
00:56:599 (4) - finish on end of slider
01:00:726 (2) - finish on start of slider
01:01:202 (4) - finish on end of slider
01:02:154 (3) - finish, NC here instead of 01:01:679 (1) as well
01:06:916 (2) - finish on end of slider
01:12:313 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:17:234 (5) - finish on end of slider
01:19:456 (4,5) - place the head of the slider lower than the previous circle for better flow and to look better too
01:22:155 (5) - finish on repeat end of slider
01:23:265 (3) - finish on end of slider
01:24:694 (1) - ^

I really don't like how you have so many sliders ending on white ticks where vocals or music phrases start, like 01:24:694 (1) - 00:55:488 (1) - 01:05:805 (1) and 01:13:107 (4,5) you throw the feel off by having the play be on the weaker beats instead of the stronger ones. It also lowers the quality of the rhythm used, which I honestly don't see much quality so far in these 3 difficulties. The patterns need more polishing, there is no blankets, not all stacks are proper, patterns overlap unnecessarily, flow changes suddenly sometimes. Use the hitsounds more for highlighting parts of the song. Your Guest Difficulties have better use of hitsounds by far, look at them and take reference. - T_T I'm still very bad at hitsound

Fort's Insane

00:20:726 (4,1,2) - I don't feel like this rhythm helps highlight the more important part of the song put NC on 00:20:726 (4) and remove 00:20:885 (1) and shift 00:21:202 (2) to start at 00:21:044 and end at 00:21:361 - ok
00:25:329 (2) - the stacking doesn't fit the song - idk what to do, maybe at this time, nothing change :>
00:27:075 (1,2,3) - sudden anti-jump, too unexpected and I don't feel it in the song - ^
00:47:393 (3) - don't squeeze the slider too much - ok
00:46:917 (1,5) - stack? - ok
00:49:139 (1) - finish on this note - ok
01:25:012 (1,7) - finish on the start of these sliders - ok

Too much 1/4 is used in the kiai when there really isn't much to go with in the song, using too many finishes repeatly also makes it very noisy, especially the start of it. The 1/4 just doesn't blend with the song and just makes everything look like it's overmapped for no reason - no comment :D because it was not me who made ​​it :D still waiting for him to be active again ;_;

Insane

I can't see the form or proper rhythm a lot in Insane. - T_T

Kuro's Insane

00:46:441 (4,5) - align them to make it look better - ok
01:14:219 (3,2) - stack them exactly - ok

Would probably just need some fine tuning of the placement to make it look more neater and matching in movement. Other than that, it looks the best in the Standard set, the Kiai fits nicely, and it doesn't look overmapped with unnecessary 1/4s

Overall, I don't think the non-GDs are ready, and needs a lot of overhaul to be better.
Good Luck
thanks for your mod :D i will improve my mapping skill ;_;
for easy, normal, hard, I'll fix it later :D
for insane, idk what must i do ;_; but, i'll try to fix that :D
Ciyus Miapah
ah just finishing mod, but okay fix something

Stalkfort
osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 51679
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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Artist:supercell
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Creator:RzHr
Version:Fort's insane
Source:Magi : The Labyrinth Of Magic
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