lZenxl wrote:

From Zenx' Mod Queue!

我的华文不是很强，请你了解:P

我上星期刚刚mod一样的这首歌，这个你不要加影像?

Timing Check

Offset

没问题

BPM

没问题

7k MX

Note Placement

00:11:334 (11334|3,11659|1,11821|5) - 这里为什么放LN这样的？这里是电音w- 00:12:956 (12956|0,13118|2,13280|6,13442|4,14253|1,14415|3,14577|5) - 其他的LN的模式也不一样？这里也是
00:31:767 (31767|6,34361|0,35821|0) - 为什么这三个用蓝色线完LN蓝线和后面3个接着的都是电音(不大确定是不是电吉他XD)
01:23:659 - 这里加一些LN配歌词？这个还是免了XD

Overmapping

00:05:496 (5496|0,5659|1,5713|2,5767|3) - 这里没音？其实是提琴的声音，不过确实听不清楚，fixed
00:18:550 (18550|5,18713|3) - 这里没鼓声其实1/4很早就开始了，我选择从这里放w

Note Count

00:06:307 (6307|5,6631|3,7604|6,7929|4,8902|3,9226|5) - 这里音不太强，用一个就可以了 - 除掉全部其实我感觉这是一个双音，这个暂且保留w
00:11:172 (11172|6,11172|3,11172|2) - ^fixed
00:11:334 (11334|1,11334|3,11334|4) - 为什么这里要按3个 - 00:11:659 (11659|0,11659|4,11659|1,11659|2) - 这里比较小声要按4个？fixed
00:18:794 (18794|0,18794|2,18794|5,19118|4,19118|6,19118|1) - 这里两条线为什么要按3个，每个线除掉一个ohoh my mistake~ fixed
00:23:983 (23983|2,23983|4) - o_o 为什么要突然按4个 - 除掉1个双音
00:26:091 (26091|1) - 因该用1个，00:25:767 (25767|0) - 本来就只有一个这里有一个钢琴XD
00:43:929 (43929|5,43929|1,43929|3) - 这个算要按下3个，把LN移下1/2，拉长1/2，然后除掉 00:43:767 (43767|2)这个保留
01:07:767 (67767|6) - 除掉这个，不应该有3个按键要按的fixed
01:14:253 - 这里少了一个按键？fixed

Hit-Sound Check

要加晚一点铺面搞定就加~

SV Check

没问题

Kiai Time Check

没问题

General

Ranking Criteria Check

没问题

AiMod

没问题

Title Check

7k MX -> 7K MX?我喜欢小写><

Pattern Check

00:55:604 (55604|4,55686|0,55767|4,55848|0,55929|4,56010|0,56091|4,56172|0,56253|4) - 这个不顺手，很难按全300 - 把它改这个交替打保留

7k HD

Note Placement

00:10:361 (10361|3,11334|2,11659|4,11821|2,12956|0,13118|4,13280|2,13442|6,14253|1,14415|5,14577|3) - LN一样奇怪，不知你在强调什么:/同MX
01:23:659 - 这里加一些LN配歌词？保留XD

Overmapping

00:05:496 (5496|1) - 没音这是一个小提琴>.<

Note Count

00:06:307 (6307|5,6631|4,7604|6,7929|4,8902|6,9226|5) - 用2个按键太强力 - 把这些除掉fixed
00:10:361 (10361|3) - 建议你加多1个按键在这里保留
00:18:794 (18794|2) - 为什么突然3个？-除掉这个钢琴+鼓点w
00:19:118 (19118|0) - ^^
00:23:983 (23983|6) - ^同MX
00:44:415 (44415|5) - ^同前

Hit-Sound Check

一样要加嗯

Kiai Time Check

没问题

General

Ranking Criteria Check

没问题

AiMod

没问题

Title Check

把 k 换成 K :p

Pattern Check

7k NM 每有很多问题，我不需用格式
7k -> 7K

00:05:496 (5496|2) - 没音同HD
00:06:713 (6713|0) - 放错？fixed！感谢
00:11:334 (11334|2,11659|4,11821|2,12956|0,13118|4,13280|2,13442|6,14253|1,14415|5,14577|3) - 不懂你在强调什么同前
00:33:388 (33388|2,33388|6,33550|4,33713|1,33713|6,33875|3,34037|5) - 会不会对NM的人太绝了？rearrange a little
00:35:983 (35983|6,35983|2,36145|4,36307|1,36307|6,36469|3,36631|5) - ^^
01:23:659 - 这里加一些LN配歌词？保留

4k EZ
4k ->4KXD

01:09:388 (69388|2) - 移左一次？- 不然 01:07:929 (67929|1) - 要拉长1/2这个先保留，我看一下XD

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi, there are mods for your diffs as you requested ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
7K NM

Inside :3

00:06:713 (6713|0) - oh, misplaced note, it should be here 00:06:631 check thatindeed XD

00:06:307 (6307|3) - move to 2nd column and then 00:06:713 (6713|0) - move to 4th column, it'll be more suitable transition here between such chords, remember it and use in other same parts tooabout this let me consider a while...

00:10:037 (10037|5) - move to 6th column to keep distance between notes in one column here, that's good for your patternsdone

00:11:496 - place one more LN here according to the sound like you did it in next part, to 3rd column I thinkno actual sound there x.x

00:32:902 - add here one more note to 1st column to keep alternation here according to the bass soundrearrange

00:33:226 - add here note to 4th column too according to bass sound to complete this pattern and fill it ^give up bass here

00:37:280 (37280|1) - move this note to 4th column to make your pattern here more balanced, you'll see that when you movedone

00:42:145 (42145|2) - move to 3rd column, it's better to start your pattern here from centre column, check thatdone

01:10:361 - add here one more note to 4th column according to snare drum sounddone

7K HD

Inside :3

00:07:604 (7604|2,7604|6) - move these notes right to 1st and 4th positions, it'll be more suitable for this chord hereabout this, remain

00:21:064 (21064|5) - you can delete this note coz there's no adding sound, dat's overmapping hereyes!

00:21:388 - and here you can add one more note according to accent-able beat, add to 4th columnremain

From 00:24:145 to 00:25:929 - I suggest you to switch columns here on 1st and 5th or re-arrange notes here coz it's too monotonous to follow same pattern more than two tactsredo a little, thanks

00:31:686 - add here one more note to 5th column and perform triplet according to the sound which goes thereok

00:45:388 (45388|4) - move this note to 2nd column, it'll be more suitable transition between both stair patternsok

00:57:226 - maybe add one more note here to 5th column? it'll be good accent before break part here and also that's suitable with your next going patternsno

01:15:388 (75388|0) - move this one to 2nd column, that's better transition before next chord hererearrange

For ending part - here goes at least three notes in next way (1/6 divisor):

01:25:118 - add here one more note to 1st column then

01:25:280 (85280|2) - move this note to 3rd column and place it correctly here 01:25:226 and finally

01:25:388 (85388|5) - move this note to 6th column and place it here 01:25:334 that will be correctly place for this pattern
about this I think no XD
^ Also apply that for all diffs if you want ^

7K MX

Inside :3

There's some overmapping in this diff, especially in chords, I recommend to cut them at least by one note, there's no need to overmap to make your chart difficult, also it'll be a problem when you'll go for rank so keep it in eye.ok fixed some

00:07:604 (7604|6) - move to 1st column, that's more comfortable chord transition hereremain

From 00:24:145 to 00:29:172 - this part needs re-arranging, try to place notes and chords in more different ways, now it looks monotonously and not good for your map / > example <about this, considering

00:32:415 (32415|6) - too close shield note, I recommend you to move it in another column, to 1st column for example and I see many notes placed in this way too, suggest you to re-arrange them all, it's bad for your LN patternsoh they are there for electrical sound deliberately

01:06:956 - unmapped syllable, try to fill this empty place with chord or LNyes

Generals

Inside :3

As for EZ - you need to make it 7K. Firstly that's strange to see one 4K diff and all others 7K diffs in one mapset, and secondly - according to ranking criteria you need:

4K EZ + 4K IN + 7K EZ + 7K MX

or

7K EZ + 7K NM + 7K HD + 7K MX

You see that second variant is better for you, so re-create your 4K and turn it into 7K to have no problems with rank.ok

Hitsounding: according to new ranking rules, you need to hitsound all of your diffs or they can't get ranked :c So keep an eye on it and make sure that your map is hitsounded before go for rank.doing XD

That's an early pattern review so you can call me again after some time to re-check your map ^w^
Good luck :3/

Simple_Star wrote:

Mod by request,Column:1 2 3 4 5 6 7
PC太诗了 提的都只是一些建议

[4k EZ]
OD7
00:23:659 - Add a Note
00:23:983 - Remove a Note
00:28:848 - Add a Note at 2
01:06:631 - Add a Note at 4

[7k NM]
HP7 OD7
00:58:848 - Add a Note at 7
01:11:172 - Add a Note at 3
01:25:388 (85388|5) - Move to 01:25:199 -

[7k HD]
HP8 OD8
01:00:794 - Add a Note at 3
01:11:172 - Add a Note at 4
01:25:388 (85388|5) - Move to 01:25:199 -

[7k MX]
可以邪恶一点 HP9 太诗

Good Luck~

indyinyou wrote:

i make diff for review hitsound only drum sound (and for copy sounds)

http://puu.sh/5Nao3

and use hitsound copier for your diff https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/131540

it up to you use it or not

Chocoliti wrote:

Sorry for late
column 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

[General]

EZ, NM, HD Difficulties are different with MX Difficulty at 01:25:280 (85280|2) and 01:25:388 (85388|5)
Try to move notes by MX Difficulty's timing

[EZ]

OD+1

00:20:902 (20902|2) - move to 0 (because pitch is going up at here)
00:21:064 (21064|0) - move to 2 (^)
00:21:388 (21388|4) - add one more note.
00:25:929 - add note, beat missing. Piano's sound is exist at here. X
01:02:577 - add note
01:06:631 - add note at here. You already added note at same rhythm 01:17:010 (77010|1) Yes!
01:12:956 - add note

Others are all fixed
[NM]

HP+1 OD+1

01:05:172 (65172|6) - move to 5 (actually you can ignore this, just suggest)
01:15:550 (75550|6) - move to 2 (^)
all done
[HD]

OD+1

01:18:794 (78794|0) - maybe this should be at 01:18:469 ?
my fault :p added
[MX]

00:19:280 (19280|4,19280|0) - delete two of one
00:19:442 - add
00:19:604 (19604|4,19604|1) - delete two of one
00:19:765 - add
00:19:929 (19929|6,19929|3) - delete two of one
00:20:091 - add
00:20:253 (20253|4,20253|0) - delete two of one
00:20:415 - add
00:20:577 (20577|4,20577|1) - delete two of one
00:20:740 - add
00:20:902 (20902|5,20902|1) - delete two of one
00:35:010 (35010|0,35172|0,35334|0,35496|0,35821|0,36145|0) - too many notes on column 0 imo. try to separate it.
Oh let me explain this
about stream part I follow piano not heavy beats so I do not want to make that changes
And those notes on 0 is all one thing: fragment of electron sound. That's why I put them in one column XD

Good Luck!

richardfeder wrote:

Oh let me explain this
about stream part I follow piano not heavy beats so I do not want to make that changes
And those notes on 0 is all one thing: fragment of electron sound. That's why I put them in one column XD

Chocoliti wrote:

richardfeder wrote:

Oh let me explain this
about stream part I follow piano not heavy beats so I do not want to make that changes
And those notes on 0 is all one thing: fragment of electron sound. That's why I put them in one column XD

Actually, It's all up to you. I think notes' consistent is very important but if you think which you mapped is right, then it's right!
Thank you for writing reason what you thought XD

asd123iii wrote:

[General]
1.注意左右手平衡 尤其是空白鍵的分配微调了一下...打了一下试试还过得去?
2.sample event list裡面有兩個東西 不需要就刪掉好
3.00:56:253 (56253|0,56577|2,56740|6,56902|4) - 這4個好像是兩個音軌混在一起的? 挑高音那個放吧..

[EZ]
感覺沒什麼問題

[NM]
這diff說是NM有點太難了 比較像NM+所以才会有ez（被打
00:11:010 - 00:14:740 - 這段的LN是什麼...电音w
00:23:983 (23983|6) - 移到中間?ok
00:29:496 (29496|1) - 移到6th或7th3个鼓换方法放了w
00:31:118 - 加個note?ok
00:59:983 - ^ok
01:00:145 (60145|2,60469|3) - column互換保留

[HD]
01:02:902 - 01:05:334 - 整齊點效果比較好长条位置换了一下
01:13:280 - 01:15:713 - ^没动
01:17:659 (77659|0,77740|2,77821|1,77821|4,77983|5,78064|3,78145|6,78145|1) - 不對稱嗎?保留

[MX]
已跪orz orz

victorica_db wrote:

我会说我是来骗KD的吗好，好，都骗
quick mod
1234567

EZ
00:06:307 (6307|6,6631|1,7604|6,7929|2,8902|6,9226|4,9875|4,10037|6,10199|4,10523|0,10848|0) - 删感觉比较好
00:09:713 - +1 3
00:09:875 - +1 5
00:10:037 - +1 6
ok 删都删了，但是加的note我重新搞了一下

NM
00:08:253 - +1no
00:11:334 (11334|2,11659|4,11821|2) - 有点奇怪。和我听出来的感觉不一样干，全世界都说这个面条有问题/w\
00:12:956 (12956|0,13118|4,13280|2,13442|6) -^ QAQ
00:14:253 (14253|1,14415|5,14577|3) - ^QAQ
00:18:307 (18307|3) - 放到2
00:18:469 (18469|0) - 放到3保留
00:19:118 (19118|4,19280|2,21064|5) - 和上面感觉差不多 我觉的靠近点比较好^
00:21:064 (21064|5) - 变成hold？ok
00:38:253 (38253|6,38577|4,38902|2,39226|0,40523|6,40848|4,41172|2) - - 打起来的感觉并不好。比较难听到这个几个条子的音。嗯是有点...我先暂时放一下看一看. 人声还是太打了orz
00:49:280 (49280|2) - move to 6
00:49:604 (49604|2) - move to 00:49:442 -
00:49:767 (49767|0) - move to 4 保留
00:51:875 (51875|4,52037|6,52199|4,52361|6) - 和上面一样保留
01:23:659 (83659|1) - 换一个条子？如果是条子的话要更早开始/w\所以不了


HD （怎么越来越水了
00:08:253 - +1其实这里本来是有个条子的，但是100%太难听到了而且手感不好
00:09:713 -

x

无音的样子 @@
01:23:659 (83659|1) - 这边弄一个条子吧


就到这里了。。

x

不愧是PC诗鬼 太强了 MX就不mod了 不是我的风格 o/

咦 原来我射过星了

Spy wrote:

Hello,here is poor quality~
Sorry for late XD :D

[EZ]
5% Volume is ok ?._.前面我打算这样....实在是太吵....
00:01:118 (1118|2) - Seems unsanpped,move to 00:01:226
00:01:442 (1442|5) - Seems unsnapped,move to 00:01:496
00:01:767 (1767|0) - Seems unsnapped,move to 00:01:821
00:02:415 (2415|4) - I feel it is no sound,or volume is too low
00:02:902 (2902|2) - Unsnapped,move to 00:02:956
00:03:550 (3550|5) - Move to 00:03:604 ?
00:03:713 (3713|1) - ?
01:25:199 (85199|2,85334|5) - Don't you feel the volume is too low to listen ?
干,好像声音确实有点小...
关于unsnap的我先放一下,我也感觉有不对....但是大体看了一下硬说的话可能在1/12上...我决定先对下offset先
[NM]
00:01:118 (1118|2) - End at 00:01:550
00:01:442 (1442|5) - Start from 00:01:550
00:01:442 (1442|5) - End at 00:01:821
00:01:767 (1767|3) - Start from 00:01:821同ez
00:16:523 (16523|4) - You caught it,why not keep adding a note at 00:16:848 - 00:17:172 - 00:17:496 - 00:17:821 - 00:18:145 - ?that's piano not beats >.<
00:29:821 (29821|0,29902|1,29983|2,30064|3,30145|4) - For Normal difficulty,is it ok ?should be ok...?
01:25:199 (85199|2,85334|5) - Same as EZ

Sorry other difficulties I have stress to mod

- R u m i a - wrote:

too nice i cant mod much lol take my star ~!
[HD]
00:10:199 - make like this? http://puu.sh/63jX4.jpg yes!
00:28:118 - add no
[MX]
00:17:010 - make like this? http://puu.sh/63jDN.jpgdone!
00:22:604 - add a notei think i should add at 00:22:767 (22767|3) - . added
00:25:199 - ^00:25:037 (25037|3) - instead
00:28:118 - ^00:27:956 (27956|3) - instead. also add at 00:28:929 (28929|4) -
00:46:686 - 1/4 stream pls!! xDso evil xDDD intend to leave here 1/2 only
00:57:713 - add
00:58:199 - ^
00:58:929 - addall added
01:05:821 - 1/4 stream againok!
01:07:523 - addok
01:08:577 - addadded
01:09:956 - addx
01:13:280 - why its a single note? :c it looks like a forever alone xD?TAT don't point outadd :p
01:23:659 (83659|6,83659|1) - consider make it as longnote til here 01:27:550? ok

Lieselotte wrote:

NM

00:00:956 (956|4) - 我建议这种NOTE写成米粒好点
00:51:388 (51388|1,51469|2,51550|3) - 整个向右移一格
00:51:875 (51875|4,52199|4) - 这两个移到第6轨
00:52:037 (52037|6,52361|6) - 移到第三轨
00:55:280 - 漏音
00:55:442 (55442|2) - 起始点00:55:604 -
00:56:577 (56577|1) - No sound here
00:57:064 (57064|2) - 写到第四轨
00:59:415 - 漏音
01:07:442 (67442|5) - 同上
01:23:172 (83172|5) - 你这个是在写鼓点么，那就不该写成长条了，如果要写滑音的话，就要加一个写鼓点了哦

HD

00:10:037 - 鼓点从这里开始的，中间是连续没有间断的，跟NM一样漏掉了
00:15:307 (15307|5) - No sound here
00:23:334 - 这种地方你把不明显的音色写上去，反而把钢琴舍弃掉是为什么
00:56:577 (56577|2) - 删掉，一轨的面条延续下去
00:57:226 (57226|3,57226|1) - 这两个和下面两个NOTE放在同一轨上
01:07:442 (67442|5,67604|6) - 删掉，写这个NOTE是想表达什么
01:12:631 (72631|3) - 想来想去你这种NOTE还是删掉好点，看着都特别碍事，根本不适合写在谱子上，
我建议你把人声发声最长的部分加到谱子里，例如:01:13:280 - 如果要加这个人声进去你就得适当删减你铺面的物件数量了，
感觉有点为了加音效而增加物件数量，根本没必要，有种东西叫Sample，这歌根本做不了太难，自己斟酌吧

这难度你前面做那么难，后面反而简单了，你不觉得自己写反了吗~~

MX

开头重写，你敢写面条是有勇气，可惜失败了...
真是难度越高问题越多，建议Remap...
我简单的看了下，就给你提几点，有些不必要的人声不要加进去，尽量挑长音加就好了
钢琴声不加你在逗我吧
00:08:091 - 从这里开始有漏音
00:09:875 (9875|3,10037|4,10199|3,10523|1) - 这种奇葩的东西就不要加了……
00:09:875 (9875|3,10037|4,10199|3,10523|1) - 写钢琴加人声
00:46:523 - 漏音

我建议你重写吧，咱不说乱不乱了~~乐器抓的也不好~~窜音严重~~

Luyuja wrote:

column 1234567
[MX]
Sorry，这个难度的LN已经超出我的理解范围了，只能找些很明显的地方mod了感谢w
00:11:172 - 加一个在7
00:11:334 - 加一个音
00:13:929 - 加两个音
00:55:767 (55767|3,55929|6) - 这两个长条加snare的K音不奇怪吗，snare还能做成长条啊。。00:55:767 (55767|4,55929|4) - 把snare加到这两个上吧
00:57:226 (57226|1) - 移到1
01:01:118 (61118|4) - 移到6
01:01:929 (61929|0) - 移到5
01:06:307 (66307|3) - 移到6
ALL FIXED
[HD]
00:38:415 (38415|5) - 移到1
00:38:577 (38577|0) - 移到7Done
00:38:577 (38577|0) - 加一个音
00:38:577 (38577|0) - 加一个音没复制到啦QAQ

PROGUY wrote:

Hi richardfeder
Here's my mod as requested.

I don't like how the mp3 abruptly cuts out at the end though. considering change the mp3

[General]
- Title should be "AVENGE WORLD (TV Size)" (Insert a space between "D" and open parenthesis symbol.)done
- The sample volume at the start should be increased to 30% or above. Currently it may not be possible to rank at 5%. Applies to all diffs in the set.
ok
[EZ]
00:05:821 (5821|4,5983|4) Move to 3rd column.
00:15:794 (15794|2) Move long note end to 00:16:199.
00:33:713 (33713|6) Change to long note that ends at 00:34:361.
00:33:875 (33875|0) Remove this.
00:36:307 (36307|6) ^
00:38:091 (38091|4) ^
00:57:226 (57226|3) Move to 5th column.
00:57:550 (57550|4) Move to 4th column.
01:23:172 (83172|4) Change to normal note.
all fixed
[NM]
00:11:334 (11334|2,11659|4,11821|2) What are these supposed to represent? Remove them as they don't match anything in the song at all. alright everyone point this out
00:12:956 (12956|0,13118|4,13280|2,13442|6) Change to normal notes.
00:14:253 (14253|1,14415|5,14577|3) ^
00:33:713 (33713|6) Remove this.
00:33:875 (33875|0) Move to 00:33:713. Long note end should stay where it is.
00:36:307 (36307|6) Remove this.
00:36:469 (36469|0) Move to 2nd column.3 instead
other all fixed
[HD]
00:02:415 (2415|4,2902|2) Swap the column positions of these two notes... Or just use Ctrl + H.
00:05:010 (5010|3) Move to 1st column.
00:26:091 Add note in 4th column.I think this is unnecessary
00:31:442 (31442|1) Change to normal note.no
00:41:172 (41172|1) Remove this as this does not fit song at all.
other all fixed
[MX]
- Not sure if this is 100% rankable with some tedious patterns and multiple long note presses.I will reconstruct some part if more people point this out. I make this long time ago
00:55:767 (55767|2,55929|6) Change to normal notes.remain

Hopes this helps! Good luck!

ljqandylee wrote:

Hi richard~ here're some suggestions:

[7K MX]
00:19:199 - I found you put 2 notes where has high pitch sound in this period but except here, maybe should rearrange it to 00:19:280? yeah my mistake
01:20:091 - Each 1/1 has 2 notes except here?sure

[7K EZ]
00:36:307 (36307|6) - End at 00:36:956, too weird that you made it 1/4 grid longer. 手滑orz

Others are fine~ good map