Avicii ft. Salem Al Fakir - You Make Me [OsuMania] · forum

Remillion Cross

Joined October 2012

Remillion Cross 2013-12-25T08:13:41+00:00

Reikosaka wrote:
[RC's 7K MX]
00:03:210 (3210|3) - delete ini , note sebelum 1st unherited itu nggak diperbolehkan .. note harus mulai di unherited atau selebihnya fixed, soalnya ada suara kecil disitu, dan aku ga tau soal boleh tidaknya note sebelum 1st unherited.
- karena hampir setiap section note-nya triple , coba set semua volume ke 15% , hitsoundnya terlalu keras dan sedikit menganggu untuk dimainin di lagu santai ini fixed, suara komputer aku kurang jelas denger hitsoundnya, jadi aku pikir itu udah kecil hitsoundnya
- kebanyakan LN , sebaiknya dikurangin. walau ini Maximum tapi kan style lagunya santai fixed, sebenarnya ini lagu udah ga bisa dibuat MX, tapi si Naxel udah minta aku buatin MX nya, yasudah mungkin saja dengan LN bisa lebih susah. Tapi, star diff nya kok lebih banyak 7K HD
01:06:090 (66090|1,66210|2,66330|3,66450|4,66570|5) - aku nggak ngerasa kalo ada 1/4 stream, di delete aja mungkin ? fixed, ya dihapus saja lah biar ga overmapped

Thanks for mod Reiko

NaxelCL, here : http://puu.sh/5XXGN.osu

Bruce

1,076 posts

Joined January 2013

Bruce 2013-12-25T08:43:42+00:00

Reikosaka wrote:
[S.Star 4K EZ]
00:24:810 (24810|1) - move to 4th Fixed
00:26:250 (26250|1) - move to 1st Fixed
00:27:450 - Add note ? No
00:49:770 (49770|1) - move to 3rd No
01:13:290 (73290|1) - move to 4th Fixed
01:21:690 (81690|2) - move to 4th Fixed
01:26:970 - Add note ? Fixed

Thanks for mod~

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Title:You Make Me
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Artist:Avicii ft. Salem Al Fakir
ArtistUnicode:Avicii ft. Salem Al Fakir
Creator:NaxelCL
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NaxelCL

Topic Starter

NaxelCL 2013-12-25T16:07:23+00:00

Reikosaka wrote:
[General]
1st kiai start should be 00:35:850 - end here 00:43:530 - because this place 00:28:170 - not in chorus , still intro
2nd kiai start should be 01:21:930 - end here 01:29:610 -
01:35:370 - set inherited volume to 15 Because this section is cutting and lower sound
01:36:570 - set inherited volume to 5

[S.Star 4K EZ]
00:24:810 (24810|1) - move to 4th
00:26:250 (26250|1) - move to 1st
00:27:450 - Add note ?
00:49:770 (49770|1) - move to 3rd
01:13:290 (73290|1) - move to 4th
01:21:690 (81690|2) - move to 4th
01:26:970 - Add note ?

[Skalim's 6K NM]
00:09:090 (9090|2,9330|2) - missing beat , fix it
00:22:890 (22890|3) - move to 5th
01:14:010 - adding 1 note in every LN like this would be good
01:20:250 (80250|3) - move to 2nd

[RC's 7K MX]
00:03:210 (3210|3) - delete ini , note sebelum 1st unherited itu nggak diperbolehkan .. note harus mulai di unherited atau selebihnya
- karena hampir setiap section note-nya triple , coba set semua volume ke 15% , hitsoundnya terlalu keras dan sedikit menganggu untuk dimainin di lagu santai ini
- kebanyakan LN , sebaiknya dikurangin. walau ini Maximum tapi kan style lagunya santai
01:06:090 (66090|1,66210|2,66330|3,66450|4,66570|5) - aku nggak ngerasa kalo ada 1/4 stream, di delete aja mungkin ?

[7K HD]
just like RC's MX, this diff style note almost double.. try to set all volume to 15%, because hitsound too loud and bit annoying to play in this relax song
01:26:490 - add note ?
01:30:330 - add note ?
01:34:170 - add note ?
01:35:370 - this note end time is different from other difficult, you should make all diff with same note end time

Fixed<3

PROGUY

osu! Alumni

936 posts

Joined October 2010

PROGUY 2013-12-26T04:27:27+00:00

Hi there. Here's my mod as requested.

[General]
- Offset feels a bit early for me. I highly recommend setting it to 5,148 ms.
- Your BG's dimensions is 767 x 767. I'm not sure if this is rankable because usually BGs are larger with aspect ratios of either 4:3 or 16:9.

[S.Star's 4K EZ]
- Disable "Letterbox during breaks" in Design section of Song Setup.

[Skalim's 6K NM]
HP Drain +2
OD +2
00:09:090 (9090|2,9330|2,9570|4,9570|5) Move down/early by one grid in 1/4 beat snap. (Cut these notes and paste them at 00:08:970 (may change after offset adjustment).)

[7K HD]
HP Drain + 1 or 2
OD + 1 or 2
00:20:970 Add normal note in 1st, 3rd, or 4th column.
00:37:290 (37290|2) Move long note end to 00:37:770.
00:38:730 Adjust these two long notes like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1201305
00:40:650 (40650|3) Move long ntoe end to 00:41:130.

Hope this helps! Good luck!

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2013-12-26T05:20:36+00:00

From Zenx' Mod Queue o/

Sorry for late mod o/

Didn't expect short version o_o||| was a bit anti-climatic at the end

Major errors:
Kiai Time conflict
No hitsounds for GDs
Awkward difficulty spread
Not checking Aimod.............

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

7K HD

Note Placement

00:38:730 (38730|3,39090|4) - o_o I don't get the end of the left slider and the start of the right slider | Move to a 1/2
00:51:210 (51210|0,52170|1) - o_o??? - weird placement of sliders
00:56:730 (56730|1,56970|2,57210|1,57450|0,57690|3,57930|2) - Are you mapping to the vocals? Cause these sliders are totally wrong if so

Overmapping

00:29:130 (29130|5,29130|1) - Slider end overmap, no beat there
00:40:650 (40650|3) - ^

Note Count

From Start to 00:20:370:
-=- 00:05:130 (5130|5,5130|4,5370|2,5370|1,5610|6,5610|4,5610|3) - These 3 chords are pretty much same in volume, I'm guessing one piano note with some sound effect tweaks. Therefore, they should all have 2 notes, the slider also counts as a note since you have to press it. There are a lot of these note inconsistencies here, I suggest to fix all Ex. 00:12:810 (12810|5,12810|3,12810|4) - , 00:14:250 (14250|5,14250|0,14250|2,14250|4) -
-=- 00:08:970 (8970|2) - Move down 1/2 | The piano chord falls on the previous chord instead of this chord, so emphasizing it would be better
-=- 00:12:090 (12090|5,12090|6,12570|2) - These 2 are piano chords, they should have more notes than these 00:11:850 (11850|3,11850|2,13050|1,13050|0) - Keep the 2 piano chords' note count consistent also

Everything from Start to 00:28:170 Should have the same note count if you are not mapping towards the vocals, because the piano loops over and over again

You might want to review the rest of your map for note count inconsistencies

Hit-Sound Check

Remove last Inheriting point
Custom override? I don't see any custom sounds o_o
- Could use more hitsounds

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

Can't find any patterns that are exceptionally fun to play here, I suggest moving the notes around to create them

RC's 7K MX

7K MX? It's easier than HD??? o_o???

Note Placement

No Problems here

Overmapping

Sliders shouldn't end on blue lines unless there is a beat, else it is an overmap in Mania
... not going to list every one of them down

Note Count

A lot of note inconsistencies, not going to list them X_X

Hit-Sound Check

None?
Custom override with no custom hitsounds?

SV Check

Really really awkward SV changes...

Please make it more sight-readable

Kiai Time Check

Kiai Time conflict...

General

Ranking Criteria Check

Delete the last inheriting point
Add Hitsounds

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

Very nice patterns, however, the sliders ending on blue lines made it weird.

Skalim's 6K NM

Note Placement

00:09:090 (9090|2,9330|2) - did you derp
00:11:850 (11850|5,12090|4) - Follow pitch relevancy, put the bottom slider to the left of the top slider
00:39:210 (39210|5,39450|4) - The vocals here should be one slider

Overmapping

None!

Note Count

A lot of inconsistencies again, always follow note count as priority before making patterns or else your map is going to sound weird with hitsounds

Hit-Sound Check

None?
Custom override with no custom sounds?

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

Not similar to Naxel's?

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

No significant fun patterns, smooth usage for LNs otherwise

S.Star's 4K EZ

Note Placement

The ending seems to lack in notes..

Overmapping

No Problems

Note Count

01:28:170 - Add one | You used 2 notes for snares, so you should have 2 here
01:29:130 ^
01:30:090 ^
... and more

Hit-Sound Check

None?
Turn off custom override since there is no custom sounds

Kiai Time Check

Conflicts with Naxel's

General

Ranking Criteria Check

Add hitsounds
Delete last inheriting point

AiMod

Turn off letter box

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

No Problems

Skalim

311 posts

Joined December 2012

Skalim 2013-12-26T05:52:50+00:00

lZenxl wrote:
From Zenx' Mod Queue o/

Sorry for late mod o/

Didn't expect short version o_o||| was a bit anti-climatic at the end

Major errors:
Kiai Time conflict
No hitsounds for GDs
Awkward difficulty spread
Not checking Aimod.............

Timing Check

Offset

No Problems

BPM

No Problems

7K HD
Note Placement

00:38:730 (38730|3,39090|4) - o_o I don't get the end of the left slider and the start of the right slider | Move to a 1/2
00:51:210 (51210|0,52170|1) - o_o??? - weird placement of sliders
00:56:730 (56730|1,56970|2,57210|1,57450|0,57690|3,57930|2) - Are you mapping to the vocals? Cause these sliders are totally wrong if so

Overmapping

00:29:130 (29130|5,29130|1) - Slider end overmap, no beat there
00:40:650 (40650|3) - ^

Note Count

From Start to 00:20:370:
-=- 00:05:130 (5130|5,5130|4,5370|2,5370|1,5610|6,5610|4,5610|3) - These 3 chords are pretty much same in volume, I'm guessing one piano note with some sound effect tweaks. Therefore, they should all have 2 notes, the slider also counts as a note since you have to press it. There are a lot of these note inconsistencies here, I suggest to fix all Ex. 00:12:810 (12810|5,12810|3,12810|4) - , 00:14:250 (14250|5,14250|0,14250|2,14250|4) -
-=- 00:08:970 (8970|2) - Move down 1/2 | The piano chord falls on the previous chord instead of this chord, so emphasizing it would be better
-=- 00:12:090 (12090|5,12090|6,12570|2) - These 2 are piano chords, they should have more notes than these 00:11:850 (11850|3,11850|2,13050|1,13050|0) - Keep the 2 piano chords' note count consistent also

Everything from Start to 00:28:170 Should have the same note count if you are not mapping towards the vocals, because the piano loops over and over again

You might want to review the rest of your map for note count inconsistencies

Hit-Sound Check

Remove last Inheriting point
Custom override? I don't see any custom sounds o_o
- Could use more hitsounds

Kiai Time Check

No Problems

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

Can't find any patterns that are exceptionally fun to play here, I suggest moving the notes around to create them

RC's 7K MX
7K MX? It's easier than HD??? o_o???

Note Placement

No Problems here

Overmapping

Sliders shouldn't end on blue lines unless there is a beat, else it is an overmap in Mania
... not going to list every one of them down

Note Count

A lot of note inconsistencies, not going to list them X_X

Hit-Sound Check

None?
Custom override with no custom hitsounds?

SV Check

Really really awkward SV changes...

Please make it more sight-readable

Kiai Time Check

Kiai Time conflict...

General

Ranking Criteria Check

Delete the last inheriting point
Add Hitsounds

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

Very nice patterns, however, the sliders ending on blue lines made it weird.

Skalim's 6K NM
Note Placement

00:09:090 (9090|2,9330|2) - did you derp
00:11:850 (11850|5,12090|4) - Follow pitch relevancy, put the bottom slider to the left of the top slider
00:39:210 (39210|5,39450|4) - The vocals here should be one slider

Overmapping

None!

Note Count

A lot of inconsistencies again, always follow note count as priority before making patterns or else your map is going to sound weird with hitsounds

Hit-Sound Check

None?
Custom override with no custom sounds?

SV Check

No Problems

Kiai Time Check

Not similar to Naxel's?

General

Ranking Criteria Check

No Problems

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

No significant fun patterns, smooth usage for LNs otherwise

S.Star's 4K EZ
Note Placement

The ending seems to lack in notes..

Overmapping

No Problems

Note Count

01:28:170 - Add one | You used 2 notes for snares, so you should have 2 here
01:29:130 ^
01:30:090 ^
... and more

Hit-Sound Check

None?
Turn off custom override since there is no custom sounds

Kiai Time Check

Conflicts with Naxel's

General

Ranking Criteria Check

Add hitsounds
Delete last inheriting point

AiMod

Turn off letter box

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

No Problems

The "fun" is subjetive in a mod, and the part of hitsounds, i think what i´ll make my own hitsounds if i can, but thanks for the mod ^^-

Remillion Cross

522 posts

Joined October 2012

Remillion Cross 2013-12-26T18:02:29+00:00

lZenxl wrote:
RC's 7K MX
7K MX? It's easier than HD??? o_o??? see ? that's why i use some LN's here ...

Note Placement

No Problems here really ? thanks, but i will change the sliders

Overmapping

Sliders shouldn't end on blue lines unless there is a beat, else it is an overmap in Mania
... not going to list every one of them down lol okay fixed, i just wandering to make it harder

Note Count

A lot of note inconsistencies, not going to list them X_X haha, yeah i'm just not like a monoton notes

Hit-Sound Check

None?
Custom override with no custom hitsounds? will make hitsound myself

SV Check

Really really awkward SV changes...

Please make it more sight-readable fixed, i'm use that because i'm SV maniacs

Kiai Time Check

Kiai Time conflict... fixed

General

Ranking Criteria Check

Delete the last inheriting point fixed
Add Hitsounds will ask Naxel later

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

Very nice patterns, however, the sliders ending on blue lines made it weird. thanks

Thanks for mod lZenxl ( don't know why my MX is having a smaller star diff than HD. I'm never do something like this before )
NaxelCl update here : http://puu.sh/5ZiUG.osu

NaxelCL

Topic Starter

NaxelCL 2013-12-26T21:01:54+00:00

Remillion Cross wrote:
lZenxl wrote:
RC's 7K MX
7K MX? It's easier than HD??? o_o??? see ? that's why i use some LN's here ...

Note Placement

No Problems here really ? thanks, but i will change the sliders

Overmapping

Sliders shouldn't end on blue lines unless there is a beat, else it is an overmap in Mania
... not going to list every one of them down lol okay fixed, i just wandering to make it harder

Note Count

A lot of note inconsistencies, not going to list them X_X haha, yeah i'm just not like a monoton notes

Hit-Sound Check

None?
Custom override with no custom hitsounds? will make hitsound myself

SV Check

Really really awkward SV changes...

Please make it more sight-readable fixed, i'm use that because i'm SV maniacs

Kiai Time Check

Kiai Time conflict... fixed

General

Ranking Criteria Check

Delete the last inheriting point fixed
Add Hitsounds will ask Naxel later

AiMod

No Problems

Title Check

No Problems

Pattern Check

Very nice patterns, however, the sliders ending on blue lines made it weird. thanks
Thanks for mod lZenxl ( don't know why my MX is having a smaller star diff than HD. I'm never do something like this before )
NaxelCl update here : http://puu.sh/5ZiUG.osu

i'm agreged hitsounds:P

Bruce

1,076 posts

Joined January 2013

Bruce 2013-12-27T03:34:17+00:00

Thanks for mod,here is change

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Avicii   You Make Me (Audio).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 29130
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 3
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
SpecialStyle: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16

[Metadata]
Title:You Make Me
TitleUnicode:You Make Me
Artist:Avicii ft. Salem Al Fakir
ArtistUnicode:Avicii ft. Salem Al Fakir
Creator:NaxelCL
Version:S.Star's 4K EZ
Source:True
Tags:Electronic, Dance pop  Universal Music Tim Bergling, Arash Pournouri, Vincent Pontare , Pournouri,  ShortVer
BeatmapID:341841
BeatmapSetID:133438

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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320,192,87210,1,4,0:0:0:0:
448,192,87210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,87450,1,4,0:0:0:0:
320,192,87690,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,192,88170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,88410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,88650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,88890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,89130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,89370,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,90090,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,90570,128,0,90810:0:0:0:0:
320,192,91050,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,91290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,91530,128,0,92010:0:0:0:0:
192,192,92010,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,92250,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,92490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,92730,128,0,93210:0:0:0:0:
192,192,93210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,192,94410,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,192,94890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,95130,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,192,95370,128,0,95610:0:0:0:0:
448,192,95850,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,192,95850,1,8,0:0:0:0:

[Shi-Ra]

458 posts

Joined October 2012

[Shi-Ra] 2013-12-28T08:17:49+00:00

Hi, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^
Sorry for delay~

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 for 6K diff)
Skalim's 6K NM

Inside :3

00:07:530 (7530|4,7530|5) - this chord is too far from previous notes, it may be uncomfortable for NM, so I suggest you to remodel it, for example make chord here with notes in 2nd and 4th columns

00:08:010 (8010|0,8490|5) - I recommend you to replace these LNs with single notes, it's more suitable with sounds here - single notes for the beat and next going LNs for piano

From 00:11:370 to 00:12:810 - same reasons like above, but mirrored, I think you need to balance this pattern with previous part in this way, it'll be more comfortable according to the song

00:16:650 (16650|1,16890|2) - I think you need to move these notes to 2nd and 3rd columns and connect here your pattern with previous chord, performing stairs, it'll be more suitable with your previous part

00:17:610 (17610|4,17850|3) - finally to make the beginning part well-balanced, move these notes to 3rd and 2nd columns here and perform good transition between your previous pattern and next going part

00:20:490 - you've accented such sound previously with two note chord and same situation for next going chords, so I think you need to add one more note here and perform a chord according to the strong beat

00:23:370 (23370|2,23850|0) - move these LNs to 0 and 2nd columns accordingly and perform more suitable LN transition here

00:34:170 (34170|5) - move this note to 2nd column and perform stair transition between previous and next going chords here, it'll be more comfortable for this part before LNs

00:52:650 (52650|2) - I suggest you to move this note to 1st column and make smth like mirrored pattern of previous two notes, it'll help you to save hand balance here

00:56:490 (56490|3) - move to 4th column, same reason ^ make these patterns same, it'll be good for NM

01:23:370 (83370|0) - I recommend you to delete this note, three note chord here isn't suitable with NM difficulty and it'll be hard for player on this playlevel

01:27:210 (87210|1) - delete this note too, same reason as above ^

01:31:050 (91050|1) - same suggestion ^ this pattern will be more comfortable without extra notes

01:34:890 (94890|5) - and finally delete this one, same reason ^

Except extra notes, ending part is really good so take care of it!

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7K HD

Inside :3

00:05:628 (5628|6) - wow, this LN is misplaced, you should move it to correct position here 00:05:610

00:10:170 (10170|2) - move to centre column, it'll be more comfortable with your next going chord here and more suitable with your previous pattern

00:14:250 (14250|4) - move this one to 2nd column and perform chord transition here correctly, now it's uncomfortable a little, so I suggest you to make correct double stair transition here

00:15:930 (15930|1) - I recommend you to move this note to another column, coz three notes in same column are uncomfortable and boring for HD, you need to make this pattern more different and exciting for player

00:32:010 (32010|5) - I suggest you to make chord here suitable with next going chords, so move this note to 3rd column, such stair transition is good for your patterns here

00:46:890 (46890|5) - move this note to 4th column, it's uncomfortable to catch two notes in same column here coz of LNs so I highly recommend you to avoid such situations

00:50:250 (50250|2,50730|2) - you've leaved 0 column empty here for a long time, so I suggest you to move these notes to 0 column and fill empty place, it'll be more balanced pattern after this

01:13:050 (73050|2,73530|2) - move these notes to 1st column and fill empty part here too, these notes now are uncomfortable before next going LN

RC's 7K MX

Inside :3

00:05:130 (5130|5) - move this note to 2nd column, move this part more symmetrical like you did it with next part, it'll be more comfortable to play with LNs here

00:05:610 (5610|6) - if you'll follow my suggestion and make symmetrical pattern, there's no need to accent this note so you can delete it and make comfortable beginning part, I think it'll be good here

From 00:07:050 to 00:11:370 - this LN pattern looks weird a little coz it's hard to find here strong and low beats if you accent them with single notes, I think you need to re-arrange it with another pattern, but it's only my opinion, not suggestion, maybe I don't understand smth here

00:13:770 (13770|4) - I suggest you to move this note to centre column according to your next going open chord here, it'll be good with your previous pattern too, check that

00:16:650 (16650|3,16890|6) - move these notes to 2nd and 4th columns accordingly and perform more suitable transition between your previous and next going chords there

00:20:010 - one note here? why? you need to accent this strong beat, I suggest you to add one more note to 6th column and then move 00:20:250 (20250|6) - this note to 5th column to accent all sounds correctly

00:37:530 - you can add one more note here according to the hi-hat sound to 3rd column, it'll be suitable with your chords here

00:46:890 - add one more note to 5th column here, same reason ^ it also will be good stair pattern for this part, check that

01:04:410 - one note there's not enough according to your previous pattern, so I recommend you to add one more note to 3rd column here and connect it with next going pattern correctly

01:27:450 (87450|5) - move to 4th column to perform here stair transition, it'll be more comfortable between next going LN

MX easier than HD? o.o You need to rename this diff into HD too coz it can't be right diff spread then, think about it or make your MX harder. For example from 00:51:210 to 01:06:570 - this part is too easy for MX, you can add more notes and accent more sounds with chords to make it harder. From 01:18:090 to 01:21:930 - there are more background sounds and I suggest you to chart them too. Check these parts and I think you'll reach MX level.

General

Inside :3

Kiai: all kiai sections are wrong here, you need to accent them correctly, so I suggest you to do it like:

1st part: From 00:35:850 to 00:51:210 - accent here full "chorus" part

and

2nd part: From 01:21:930 to 01:35:370 - second "chord" with "solo" part
________________________________________

Hitsounding: there's no any hitsounds except soft set, this map still unrankable coz if that. You need to accent every strong beat here with snare beat sound or with clap sound and you need bass drum kick sound to accent main beat.
________________________________________

Mapset: seems like there's a conflict between HD & MX diffs. You need to make HD more easier or MX harder then. My suggestion here is only to review note count or rename diffs HD>MX and MX>HD, it'll be correct.

S.Star's diff is good and well-patterned already~
Good luck :3/

Skalim

311 posts

Joined December 2012

Skalim 2013-12-29T01:04:01+00:00

[Shi-Ra] wrote:
Hi, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^
Sorry for delay~

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 for 6K diff)
Skalim's 6K NM
Inside :3
00:07:530 (7530|4,7530|5) - this chord is too far from previous notes, it may be uncomfortable for NM, so I suggest you to remodel it, for example make chord here with notes in 2nd and 4th columns

00:08:010 (8010|0,8490|5) - I recommend you to replace these LNs with single notes, it's more suitable with sounds here - single notes for the beat and next going LNs for piano

From 00:11:370 to 00:12:810 - same reasons like above, but mirrored, I think you need to balance this pattern with previous part in this way, it'll be more comfortable according to the song

00:16:650 (16650|1,16890|2) - I think you need to move these notes to 2nd and 3rd columns and connect here your pattern with previous chord, performing stairs, it'll be more suitable with your previous part

00:17:610 (17610|4,17850|3) - finally to make the beginning part well-balanced, move these notes to 3rd and 2nd columns here and perform good transition between your previous pattern and next going part

00:20:490 - you've accented such sound previously with two note chord and same situation for next going chords, so I think you need to add one more note here and perform a chord according to the strong beat Is not necessary

00:23:370 (23370|2,23850|0) - move these LNs to 0 and 2nd columns accordingly and perform more suitable LN transition here

00:34:170 (34170|5) - move this note to 2nd column and perform stair transition between previous and next going chords here, it'll be more comfortable for this part before LNs

00:52:650 (52650|2) - I suggest you to move this note to 1st column and make smth like mirrored pattern of previous two notes, it'll help you to save hand balance here

00:56:490 (56490|3) - move to 4th column, same reason ^ make these patterns same, it'll be good for NM

01:23:370 (83370|0) - I recommend you to delete this note, three note chord here isn't suitable with NM difficulty and it'll be hard for player on this playlevel

01:27:210 (87210|1) - delete this note too, same reason as above ^

01:31:050 (91050|1) - same suggestion ^ this pattern will be more comfortable without extra notes

01:34:890 (94890|5) - and finally delete this one, same reason ^

Except extra notes, ending part is really good so take care of it!

________________________________________

Hitsounding: there's no any hitsounds except soft set, this map still unrankable coz if that. You need to accent every strong beat here with snare beat sound or with clap sound and you need bass drum kick sound to accent main beat.
________________________________________

Mapset: seems like there's a conflict between HD & MX diffs. You need to make HD more easier or MX harder then. My suggestion here is only to review note count or rename diffs HD>MX and MX>HD, it'll be correct.[/box]

S.Star's diff is good and well-patterned already~
Good luck :3/

All fixed, thanks for the mod ^^ (Umm, the first kiai time got 16 seconds, this is legal?).
Simple_Star to stronk!!

Remillion Cross

522 posts

Joined October 2012

Remillion Cross 2013-12-29T17:20:24+00:00

[Shi-Ra] wrote:
Hi, there are mods for your mania chart ^w^
Sorry for delay~

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 for 6K diff)

RC's 7K MX
Inside :3
00:05:130 (5130|5) - move this note to 2nd column, move this part more symmetrical like you did it with next part, it'll be more comfortable to play with LNs here fixed!

00:05:610 (5610|6) - if you'll follow my suggestion and make symmetrical pattern, there's no need to accent this note so you can delete it and make comfortable beginning part, I think it'll be good here fixed

From 00:07:050 to 00:11:370 - this LN pattern looks weird a little coz it's hard to find here strong and low beats if you accent them with single notes, I think you need to re-arrange it with another pattern, but it's only my opinion, not suggestion, maybe I don't understand smth here okay, i'm agreed

00:13:770 (13770|4) - I suggest you to move this note to centre column according to your next going open chord here, it'll be good with your previous pattern too, check that fixed

00:16:650 (16650|3,16890|6) - move these notes to 2nd and 4th columns accordingly and perform more suitable transition between your previous and next going chords there fixed

00:20:010 - one note here? why? you need to accent this strong beat, I suggest you to add one more note to 6th column and then move 00:20:250 (20250|6) - this note to 5th column to accent all sounds correctly fixed

00:37:530 - you can add one more note here according to the hi-hat sound to 3rd column, it'll be suitable with your chords here fixed

00:46:890 - add one more note to 5th column here, same reason ^ it also will be good stair pattern for this part, check that fixed

01:04:410 - one note there's not enough according to your previous pattern, so I recommend you to add one more note to 3rd column here and connect it with next going pattern correctly fixed

01:27:450 (87450|5) - move to 4th column to perform here stair transition, it'll be more comfortable between next going LN fixed

MX easier than HD? o.o You need to rename this diff into HD too coz it can't be right diff spread then, think about it or make your MX harder. For example from 00:51:210 to 01:06:570 - this part is too easy for MX, you can add more notes and accent more sounds with chords to make it harder. From 01:18:090 to 01:21:930 - there are more background sounds and I suggest you to chart them too. Check these parts and I think you'll reach MX level.
Nah, i'm just afraid if this will be overmapped, but i'm like this opinion. Fixed all

Good luck :3/

Thanks for modding~ 'w')b

NaxelCL, update here : http://puu.sh/62unM.osu
(Thanks for remembering me too :p)

[FX] AEM

227 posts

Joined August 2013

[FX] AEM 2013-12-29T17:55:43+00:00

mod by request. looks ok now, but i will mod about rhythms

suggestion

[General]
This is your image and your beatmap's settings is "Widescreen". Choose 1366x768 or lower (not lower than 800x600) with 16:9 aspect ratio.
https://www.google.com/search?q=sunset+ ... CCgQ2A4oAQ

[4K EZ]
00:07:050 (7050|0,7290|1) - Ctrl+J, follow 2 previous note patterns. (same rhythm as previous patterns.)
00:08:010 (8010|3) - move to 1st (bass sound for the next 2 1/1 notes)
00:08:250 (8250|0) - move to 4th (higher pitch)
00:08:490 - add 1st note (refer to 00:08:010 (8010|0) - )
00:08:970 (8970|1) - move to 1st (refer to 00:08:010 (8010|0) - again)
00:09:930 (9930|0) - move to 4th and move 00:10:170 (10170|2) - to 1st and move 00:10:410 (10410|3) - to 2nd (there are not much different sound there (refer to 00:08:970 (8970|0,9210|3,9450|1) - ))
00:10:890 (10890|1) - move to 3rd (spreading note even it's the same sound as 00:09:930 (9930|3) - )
00:11:130 (11130|3) - move to 1st (refer to 00:10:170 (10170|0) - )
00:11:370 (11370|0) - move to 2nd (refer to 00:10:410 (10410|1) - )
from 00:11:850 - to 00:12:810 - same as 00:08:010 (8010|0,8250|3,8490|0,8730|2,8970|0) - but INVERSE and no need LN 00:11:850 (11850|2) - here
00:13:050 (13050|0) - move to 3rd and 00:13:290 (13290|2) - move to 2nd (refer to 00:13:770 (13770|1,14010|2,14250|3,14730|2,14970|1,15210|0) - ) then move 00:13:770 (13770|1,14010|2,14250|3) - to 1st,2nd and 3rd and move 00:14:730 (14730|2,14970|1,15210|0) - to 2nd, 3rd and 4th. (its all the same rhythm like previous beat. again...)
from 00:15:690 - to 00:16:650 - same as 00:08:010 (8010|0,8250|3,8490|0,8730|2,8970|0) - (again...)
00:16:890 (16890|2) - move to 1st ( you're trying to do a jack on this pattern.)
00:17:610 (17610|0,17850|0) - Ctrl+H (different pattern)
00:18:090 (18090|3) - move to 3rd
00:18:570 (18570|1,19530|2) - i don't know what this 2 Holds stand for. try change into jacks or like previous pattern.
00:23:610 (23610|1) - move to 4th (higher pitch but same as the beginning)
00:23:850 - add 4th note (refer to 00:23:370 (23370|3) - )
00:24:090 (24090|0) - move to 2nd
00:24:570 (24570|0,24810|3) - move 1st note to 2nd and move 4th note to 1st and then 00:25:290 (25290|3,25530|2,25770|1) - Ctrl+J (again.. but trying do a jack part like 00:16:650 (16650|0,16890|0,17130|1,17610|3,17850|3,18090|2) - is a nice choice too. (depends on your opinion))
00:27:210 - to 00:27:930 - same as 00:08:010 (8010|0,8250|3,8490|0,8730|2) -
00:35:850 (35850|0,35850|1) - delete one of them and change it into Hold end here 00:36:330 - (you can skip this if you don't like)
00:38:250 (38250|3,39210|0) - move to 2nd and 3rd (refer to 00:37:290 (37290|2,37290|1) - ) (you can skip this if you don't like)
00:46:890 (46890|0) - move to 3rd
00:49:530 (49530|3) - delete this (conflict with vocal notes here 00:48:330 (48330|0,48570|1,48810|3,49050|2,49290|0) - ))
00:49:290 (49290|0) - move to 2nd
00:49:770 (49770|1) - move to 4th (spreading note)
00:51:210 (51210|3) - move to 2nd (lower pitched sound here)
00:53:130 (53130|1) - if you refer to vocal then move to 4th
01:08:490 (68490|0) - move to 2nd, 01:08:730 (68730|3) - move to 3rd and move 01:08:970 (68970|1,68970|2) - to 1st and 4th (follow this pattern 01:09:450 (69450|2,69690|1,69930|3,69930|0) - )
01:11:370 (71370|1,71610|2) - Ctrl+J (do not repeat a pattern here > refer to 01:10:410 (70410|0,70650|1) - )
01:13:290 (73290|3,73530|0,73770|2,73770|3) - you can repeat this pattern 01:12:330 (72330|2,72570|3,72810|0,72810|1) - (you can skip this if you don't like)
01:14:010 (74010|0) - delete this (conflict with instruments note (refer to 01:13:290 (73290|3,73530|0,73770|2,73770|3) - ))
01:17:610 (77610|3) - same as ^
01:21:450 (81450|2,81690|3) - Ctrl+J (lower pitched sound)
01:24:570 (84570|3,84810|2,85050|0) - Ctrl+H (higher pitched sound) and after Ctrl+H then move 01:24:810 (84810|1) - (2nd note) to 3rd because those low-speed players will not be able to read a note after LN like that.
01:27:210 (87210|2,87210|3,87450|1,87690|2) - if you are following this rhythm 01:26:730 (86730|3,86730|0) - then delete 01:27:210 (87210|3) - , move 01:27:210 (87210|2) - to 2nd, move 01:27:450 (87450|1) - to 3rd and move 01:27:690 (87690|2) - to 4th. and this hold 01:26:730 (86730|0) - should end here 01:26:730 (86730|0) -
01:28:650 (88650|3) - move to 3rd, move 01:28:890 (88890|2) - to 2nd, move 01:29:130 (89130|1) - to 3rd and move 01:29:370 (89370|0) - to 3rd. (refer to the instruments.)
01:30:090 (90090|3) - you can change into hold (end here 01:30:570 - )
01:30:570 (90570|1) - LN should end here 01:31:050 -
01:32:250 (92250|2) - move to 1st and move 01:32:490 (92490|0) - to 2nd (higher pitched)
01:34:410 (94410|0) - same as 01:30:090 (90090|3) -
01:34:890 (94890|3) - move to 2nd, delete 01:35:850 (95850|3) - then move 01:35:370 (95370|1) - to 4th. hold end here 01:35:850 -

Last edited by [FX] AEM 2013-12-29T18:19:56+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Stefan

Global Moderator

10,393 posts

Joined January 2011

Stefan 2013-12-29T17:57:56+00:00

Do not put the Album name in the source. no kd

Bruce

1,076 posts

Joined January 2013

Bruce 2013-12-30T09:57:31+00:00

[FX] AEM wrote:
mod by request. looks ok now, but i will mod about rhythms

suggestion

[General]
This is your image and your beatmap's settings is "Widescreen". Choose 1366x768 or lower (not lower than 800x600) with 16:9 aspect ratio.
https://www.google.com/search?q=sunset+ ... CCgQ2A4oAQ

[4K EZ]
00:07:050 (7050|0,7290|1) - Ctrl+J, follow 2 previous note patterns. (same rhythm as previous patterns.)
00:08:010 (8010|3) - move to 1st (bass sound for the next 2 1/1 notes)
00:08:250 (8250|0) - move to 4th (higher pitch)
00:08:490 - add 1st note (refer to 00:08:010 (8010|0) - )
00:08:970 (8970|1) - move to 1st (refer to 00:08:010 (8010|0) - again)
00:09:930 (9930|0) - move to 4th and move 00:10:170 (10170|2) - to 1st and move 00:10:410 (10410|3) - to 2nd (there are not much different sound there (refer to 00:08:970 (8970|0,9210|3,9450|1) - ))
00:10:890 (10890|1) - move to 3rd (spreading note even it's the same sound as 00:09:930 (9930|3) - )
00:11:130 (11130|3) - move to 1st (refer to 00:10:170 (10170|0) - )
00:11:370 (11370|0) - move to 2nd (refer to 00:10:410 (10410|1) - )
from 00:11:850 - to 00:12:810 - same as 00:08:010 (8010|0,8250|3,8490|0,8730|2,8970|0) - but INVERSE and no need LN 00:11:850 (11850|2) - here
00:13:050 (13050|0) - move to 3rd and 00:13:290 (13290|2) - move to 2nd (refer to 00:13:770 (13770|1,14010|2,14250|3,14730|2,14970|1,15210|0) - ) then move 00:13:770 (13770|1,14010|2,14250|3) - to 1st,2nd and 3rd and move 00:14:730 (14730|2,14970|1,15210|0) - to 2nd, 3rd and 4th. (its all the same rhythm like previous beat. again...)
from 00:15:690 - to 00:16:650 - same as 00:08:010 (8010|0,8250|3,8490|0,8730|2,8970|0) - (again...)
00:16:890 (16890|2) - move to 1st ( you're trying to do a jack on this pattern.)
00:17:610 (17610|0,17850|0) - Ctrl+H (different pattern)
00:18:090 (18090|3) - move to 3rd
00:18:570 (18570|1,19530|2) - i don't know what this 2 Holds stand for. try change into jacks or like previous pattern.
00:23:610 (23610|1) - move to 4th (higher pitch but same as the beginning)
00:23:850 - add 4th note (refer to 00:23:370 (23370|3) - )
00:24:090 (24090|0) - move to 2nd
00:24:570 (24570|0,24810|3) - move 1st note to 2nd and move 4th note to 1st and then 00:25:290 (25290|3,25530|2,25770|1) - Ctrl+J (again.. but trying do a jack part like 00:16:650 (16650|0,16890|0,17130|1,17610|3,17850|3,18090|2) - is a nice choice too. (depends on your opinion))
00:27:210 - to 00:27:930 - same as 00:08:010 (8010|0,8250|3,8490|0,8730|2) -
00:35:850 (35850|0,35850|1) - delete one of them and change it into Hold end here 00:36:330 - (you can skip this if you don't like)
00:38:250 (38250|3,39210|0) - move to 2nd and 3rd (refer to 00:37:290 (37290|2,37290|1) - ) (you can skip this if you don't like)
00:46:890 (46890|0) - move to 3rd
00:49:530 (49530|3) - delete this (conflict with vocal notes here 00:48:330 (48330|0,48570|1,48810|3,49050|2,49290|0) - ))
00:49:290 (49290|0) - move to 2nd
00:49:770 (49770|1) - move to 4th (spreading note)
00:51:210 (51210|3) - move to 2nd (lower pitched sound here)
00:53:130 (53130|1) - if you refer to vocal then move to 4th
01:08:490 (68490|0) - move to 2nd, 01:08:730 (68730|3) - move to 3rd and move 01:08:970 (68970|1,68970|2) - to 1st and 4th (follow this pattern 01:09:450 (69450|2,69690|1,69930|3,69930|0) - )
01:11:370 (71370|1,71610|2) - Ctrl+J (do not repeat a pattern here > refer to 01:10:410 (70410|0,70650|1) - )
01:13:290 (73290|3,73530|0,73770|2,73770|3) - you can repeat this pattern 01:12:330 (72330|2,72570|3,72810|0,72810|1) - (you can skip this if you don't like)
01:14:010 (74010|0) - delete this (conflict with instruments note (refer to 01:13:290 (73290|3,73530|0,73770|2,73770|3) - ))
01:17:610 (77610|3) - same as ^
01:21:450 (81450|2,81690|3) - Ctrl+J (lower pitched sound)
01:24:570 (84570|3,84810|2,85050|0) - Ctrl+H (higher pitched sound) and after Ctrl+H then move 01:24:810 (84810|1) - (2nd note) to 3rd because those low-speed players will not be able to read a note after LN like that.
01:27:210 (87210|2,87210|3,87450|1,87690|2) - if you are following this rhythm 01:26:730 (86730|3,86730|0) - then delete 01:27:210 (87210|3) - , move 01:27:210 (87210|2) - to 2nd, move 01:27:450 (87450|1) - to 3rd and move 01:27:690 (87690|2) - to 4th. and this hold 01:26:730 (86730|0) - should end here 01:26:730 (86730|0) -
01:28:650 (88650|3) - move to 3rd, move 01:28:890 (88890|2) - to 2nd, move 01:29:130 (89130|1) - to 3rd and move 01:29:370 (89370|0) - to 3rd. (refer to the instruments.)
01:30:090 (90090|3) - you can change into hold (end here 01:30:570 - )
01:30:570 (90570|1) - LN should end here 01:31:050 -
01:32:250 (92250|2) - move to 1st and move 01:32:490 (92490|0) - to 2nd (higher pitched)
01:34:410 (94410|0) - same as 01:30:090 (90090|3) -
01:34:890 (94890|3) - move to 2nd, delete 01:35:850 (95850|3) - then move 01:35:370 (95370|1) - to 4th. hold end here 01:35:850 -

Wow,A very important Mod,Good Job, All Fixed~

Here is change

SPOILER

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Title:You Make Me
TitleUnicode:You Make Me
Artist:Avicii ft. Salem Al Fakir
ArtistUnicode:Avicii ft. Salem Al Fakir
Creator:NaxelCL
Version:S.Star's 4K EZ
Source:
Tags:Electronic, Dance pop  Universal Music Tim Bergling, Arash Pournouri, Vincent Pontare , Pournouri,  ShortVer
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17VA

1,007 posts

Joined September 2012

17VA 2014-01-01T15:25:42+00:00

Your mapping skills are increase a lot...

but you need experience more mania beatmaps are o2jam converts

[7K HD]

00:25:290 (25290|3,25770|4) - awkward while I'm playing this diff

http://puu.sh/65CFt.jpg re-arrange like this

00:26:970 (26970|4,27210|3,27690|5) -

this LNs looks awkward. re-arrange

00:27:210 - add

00:27:690 - add

00:51:210 (51210|0) - this ln should end at 00:52:170 - ,

00:52:050 (52050|1) - this ln should start at 00:52:170 -

[RC's 7K MX]

00:07:530 - http://puu.sh/65CYT.jpg lol

01:13:770 - add 3,7

01:14:010 (74010|2) - move 4

Runamii

51 posts

Joined April 2013

Runamii 2014-01-02T03:04:14+00:00

nice mapset

NaxelCL

Topic Starter

NaxelCL 2014-01-02T16:24:03+00:00

Runamii wrote:
nice mapset

thanks x33333

Remillion Cross

522 posts

Joined October 2012

Remillion Cross 2014-01-02T19:12:39+00:00

17VA wrote:
Your mapping skills are increase a lot...

but you need experience more mania beatmaps are o2jam converts

[RC's 7K MX]

00:07:530 - http://puu.sh/65CYT.jpg lol

01:13:770 - add 3,7

01:14:010 (74010|2) - move 4

all fixed, thanks for mod

( still lack of hitsounds, i will applied some hitsounds when i'm find them )
NaxelCL : http://puu.sh/66Zhm.osu

indyinyou

887 posts

Joined June 2009

indyinyou 2014-01-03T03:24:50+00:00

hi

http://puu.sh/67C4S if link can t download pm me my internet no good

use hitsound copier for other diff t/131540

if sound weird pm me i ll check it

Remillion Cross

522 posts

Joined October 2012

Remillion Cross 2014-01-03T04:45:35+00:00

erh... NaxelCl, looks like i'm forgot to fix the SV.
please update my diff here : http://puu.sh/67GFn.osu

sorry for the mistakes .__.

PROGUY

osu! Alumni

936 posts

Joined October 2010

PROGUY 2014-01-05T15:49:45+00:00

Hi there. Here's my recheck as requested.

[Skalim's 6K NM]
HP Drain +2
OD +2

[NavelCL's 7K HD]
HP Drain +1

[RC's 7K MX]
00:51:210 The SV change in this inherited point from x1.00 to x0.50 is too sudden. I recommend to increase it to x0.80 or above.
01:06:570 Increase this inherited point's SV change to x0.90 or above.

No kudosu please, but call me when you guys are done with this.

Remillion Cross

522 posts

Joined October 2012

Remillion Cross 2014-01-05T17:45:32+00:00

PROGUY wrote:
Hi there. Here's my recheck as requested.

[RC's 7K MX]
00:51:210 The SV change in this inherited point from x1.00 to x0.50 is too sudden. I recommend to increase it to x0.80 or above.
01:06:570 Increase this inherited point's SV change to x0.90 or above.

No kudosu please, but call me when you guys are done with this.

Thanks for the SV correction

, all fixed.
NaxelCL here : http://puu.sh/6azZy.osu ( Already hitsounded, like your request )

xxbidiao

450 posts

Joined November 2008

xxbidiao 2014-01-06T02:31:22+00:00

RC's 7K:

On the first few seconds, I would never recommend anyone to try to use slider ends to represent some sound... But if you know what you are doing, that's fine...
and 00:05:850 (5850|5) - , I didn't find any sound that this note is representing ( I think the beats should be like ooo_ooo_ooo_ooooooo_ooo...) So you may consider remove this note.

Actually my suggestion is to remove most circles before 00:12:810 (12810|2) - only leave a few at 1/1s (whte line) and rearrange these holds...

00:46:170 (46170|0,46410|1) - I recommend letting these 2 sliders end at the same time and add another slider ( I heard 3 vocal words "you make it(?)" )

Slider pattern placement is better in later parts of the song than in earlier ones. You may check your first few seconds and make enhancement

7K HD
00:14:970 (14970|4) - This jackhammer is strange, it looks like 00:14:730 (14730|3,14970|4) - this two should form one jackhammer. You may move this note to some other locations and rearrange this part.
00:26:970 (26970|4) - A hold should be enough, consider remove this note.
00:56:490 (56490|0,56730|1) - i'm not sure what you are doing here.
if you are mapping vocals, consider combine this two notes to one ( and a later part too);
if you are mapping instrumentals, consider adding 3 1/2 sliders after 00:58:170 (58170|1) - .
01:14:730 (74730|1) - remove this one or add some more notes at similar parts. (Some are 3-chords like this one, some are 2.They are nearly half to half) You may need a rearrangement.
01:24:090 (84090|4) - After here some hold just seems a little randomly put. I know that you are mapping something, but this may be caused by inconsistency (you map ooo 1 circle, 1 hold and 1 circle) - You may check it further.

These two are not bad, but are not excellent. Go on! I look forward to see these two getting better

Remillion Cross

522 posts

Joined October 2012

Remillion Cross 2014-01-06T04:04:18+00:00

xxbidiao wrote:
RC's 7K:

On the first few seconds, I would never recommend anyone to try to use slider ends to represent some sound... But if you know what you are doing, that's fine... allright, i know what i'm doing. All i can do is erase some sound in slider, so they won't represent some sound in a wrong place. Also, i'm added a hitsound in another way. Thanks for remembering this
and 00:05:850 (5850|5) - , I didn't find any sound that this note is representing ( I think the beats should be like ooo_ooo_ooo_ooooooo_ooo...) So you may consider remove this note. yes, i'm very agree with this, fixed.

Actually my suggestion is to remove most circles before 00:12:810 (12810|2) - only leave a few at 1/1s (whte line) and rearrange these holds... fine, i'm remove the circles which is not hitsounded, so only leave a circle at 1/1 snap. I'm fixed these holds too. I hope it'll be better.

00:46:170 (46170|0,46410|1) - I recommend letting these 2 sliders end at the same time and add another slider ( I heard 3 vocal words "you make it(?)" )
yeah you make it fixed.

Slider pattern placement is better in later parts of the song than in earlier ones. You may check your first few seconds and make enhancement okay...i will think about it.

These two are not bad, but are not excellent. Go on! I look forward to see these two getting better

Thanks for great mod. Every single help makes everything better xD
NaxelCL update pls : http://puu.sh/6bcYY.osu

PROGUY

osu! Alumni

936 posts

Joined October 2010

PROGUY 2014-01-06T04:27:32+00:00

Good.
Just one last thing: Remove all commas in your tags, and separate & change "ShortVer" to "Short Version".

Again no kudosu please.

Charles445

Elite Mapper II: Aspirant / osu! Paragon

2,881 posts

Joined March 2009

Charles445 2014-01-06T04:35:33+00:00

PROGUY wrote:
Good.
Just one last thing: Remove all commas in your tags, and separate & change "ShortVer" to "Short Version".

Again no kudosu please.

Woah slow down
The guest mappers have to be in the tags too

NaxelCL

Topic Starter

NaxelCL 2014-01-06T04:44:58+00:00

Charles445 wrote:
PROGUY wrote:
Good.
Just one last thing: Remove all commas in your tags, and separate & change "ShortVer" to "Short Version".

Again no kudosu please.
Woah slow down
The guest mappers have to be in the tags too

plz re check is ready plz

PROGUY

osu! Alumni

936 posts

Joined October 2010

PROGUY 2014-01-06T04:50:24+00:00

Whoops, thanks Charles.
And now, bubbled.

Bruce

1,076 posts

Joined January 2013

Bruce 2014-01-08T04:57:03+00:00

RC's 7K MX haven't First Kiai Time