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searched the source as Fycho requested.

there is only a character song album which was released by solfa / marble sky records (the artist group who produced game songs / BGMs).
and it has full ver. but short one. so you should remove (Short Ver.) from the title.

posted

Kenterz9 wrote:

Hi, From my queue ~
[Flower's Easy]
00:13:563 (3,2) - Better blanket ^w^ok
00:45:897 (1,2) - Maybe blanket ?no


[Hard]
00:04:897 (2,3) - Try this patern (for blanket) no ,for flow:<

00:13:897 (1) - Place at x:360 y:136no
00:37:397 (4) - Place at x:400 y:164 (for Distance Snap)ok
00:43:730 (2,3) - Try to blanket please =3ok
00:49:897 (1,2) - ^ok
00:54:897 (4,1) - ^no
00:59:563 (2) - Place at x:228 y:296not good imo

[Insane]
00:25:897 (1) - x:120 y:196 changed a little
01:32:563 (1,4) - Try to blanket ok

Hope it'll be helpful ^w^
thanks!!

To grumd and KSHR,thank you for reminding!,changed the title:3
posted
that overlap is nothing and easy to get imo so no change

edit: well more than 1 modder point out that i will change it...

edit2: changed
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Miracle infinity.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67230
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Miracle infinity
TitleUnicode:ミラクルinfinity
Artist:solfa feat. Chata
ArtistUnicode:solfa feat. 茶太
Creator:Fycho
Version:Yuki's Normal
Source:ゆめこい ~夢見る魔法少女と恋の呪文~
Tags:Laurier Flower [Minakami Yuki] galgame eroge visual novel opening parasol Yumekoi ~Yume Miru Mahou Shoujo to Koi no Jumon~
BeatmapID:334975
BeatmapSetID:132638

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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posted
又一神麻婆陣容

[花花]
00:14:897 (2) - 中間的錨點 x240 y64

[M醬]
00:02:563 (4,1) - 這樣overlap不怕嗎?

[Hard]
00:21:063 (2) - 頭whistle
00:26:897 (6) - x216 y80
00:31:563 (4,5) - 中間的錨點?

[Insane]
沒問題

[Laurier]
Nice
posted

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

又一神麻婆陣容

[花花]
00:14:897 (2) - 中間的錨點 x240 y64 不了

[Hard]
00:21:063 (2) - 頭whistle fixed
00:26:897 (6) - x216 y80改了一点
00:31:563 (4,5) - 中間的錨點?
thanks@@
posted
[Flower's Easy]

00:11:230 - 到 00:21:563 - 说实话我感觉节奏很不好,空的拍子感觉有那么点莫名奇妙 建议这部分remap。。不要打我= =
00:28:563 - 加note
00:31:230 (2) - 起始点拉到00:31:063 -
00:48:230 (4) - 这个可以去掉
00:57:897 (3) - 去掉
00:57:563 - 到 00:59:230 - 试试这种的怎么样?

01:08:230 (2) - 后移到01:08:563 -
01:10:897 (3) - 去掉
01:13:563 (2) - 后移到01:13:897 -
01:17:397 (4) - 滑条尾压白线感觉不是很合适。试试这种节奏?

01:18:897 (2) - 去掉?
01:20:563 (1,2) - 大白线接滑条头感觉好一些,1和2换一下,先滑条再note
01:23:897 - 这个音空的很突兀,可以考虑01:23:230 - 到01:23:897 - 拉成滑条
01:25:897 (1,2) - 互换,先滑条后note
01:28:063 (4,1) - ^
01:37:563 (2,4) - 前面音空着,这里可以考虑直接去掉这两个note,突然的加速一下还是不怎么好

[Yuki's Normal]

all well

[Hard]

01:05:230 (4) - 滑条没什么必要,而且不太好读。单note就可以了

[Insane & Laurier's Insane]

all well
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kanon_sayuri wrote:

[Flower's Easy]

00:11:230 - 到 00:21:563 - 说实话我感觉节奏很不好,空的拍子感觉有那么点莫名奇妙 建议这部分remap。。不要打我= = 根据这条mod和Fycho的要求,进行了remap
00:28:563 - 加note 这里空出来可以暂时让玩家休息一下
00:31:230 (2) - 起始点拉到00:31:063 - ok
00:48:230 (4) - 这个可以去掉 没有太好的理由,不变
00:57:897 (3) - 去掉 同上
00:57:563 - 到 00:59:230 - 试试这种的怎么样? 同上

01:08:230 (2) - 后移到01:08:563 - 我现在kiai就是跟鼓了 说什么都晚了 之后的同类问题同上
01:10:897 (3) - 去掉 没啥改进,不改
01:13:563 (2) - 后移到01:13:897 -
01:17:397 (4) - 滑条尾压白线感觉不是很合适。试试这种节奏?没什么规定说这样不好,实际上我认为没什么问题

01:18:897 (2) - 去掉?
01:20:563 (1,2) - 大白线接滑条头感觉好一些,1和2换一下,先滑条再note
01:23:897 - 这个音空的很突兀,可以考虑01:23:230 - 到01:23:897 - 拉成滑条
01:25:897 (1,2) - 互换,先滑条后note
01:28:063 (4,1) - ^
01:37:563 (2,4) - 前面音空着,这里可以考虑直接去掉这两个note,突然的加速一下还是不怎么好 这里不一样,是有鼓的,因此不改
Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/5NmHH.zip
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Flower's Easy:
花花

Yuki's Normal:
01:04:563 (1,1,1,1) - 不用加这么多

Hard:
01:38:563 (3,4,5,6,1) - 建议摆小一点, 打到最后会紧张, 一不小心就SS美丽

Laurier's Insane:
00:37:230 (3,4) - i think this is a better rhythm, it's also easier to read http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1180708
01:18:563 (3,4,5,6) - suggesting star formation http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1180712

Insane:
00:24:563 (1) - 这不科学 建议删了 (每次都打不着)
00:50:730 (2) - 感觉这个位置不好 至少太难读了吧o.o x:332 y:124怎么样
01:00:897 (2) - 叠起来? 右下1grid
01:01:897 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 好难啊
手好冷 打不动
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Meramipop wrote:

01:38:563 (3,4,5,6,1) - 建议摆小一点, 打到最后会紧张, 一不小心就SS美丽 ok

Insane:
00:24:563 (1) - 这不科学 建议删了 (每次都打不着) 不好吧,这有个鼓音
00:50:730 (2) - 感觉这个位置不好 至少太难读了吧o.o x:332 y:124怎么样
01:00:897 (2) - 叠起来? 右下1grid
01:01:897 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 好难啊1111
手好冷 打不动
thansk!!
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no fixed thanks ar233333333333333
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InsaneとLaurier's Insane二つとも素晴らしい譜面です!!!!>.<
ここからのはmodderからじゃなくてプレーヤーから言う提案です!

这两个diff都超爽
我以player的角度来提点建议 不是modder了
Laurier's Insane
01:12:063 (4) - (296,232)の近くに移動してみたらどう0.0
01:11:730 (3) - の弧とよく接するのでwww

01:00:730 (2) - これをCtrl+Gしたらいいと思うよ
なぜかわかりませんが とにかくそんな感じ!

01:34:563 (3,5,6,1,2) - これっ 正五角形とはちょっと違うんですね
01:35:063 (6,2) - の位置を調整してみたら~?

Insane

01:34:397 (3,4,1) - Ctrl+G之后爽得多呢
01:39:063 (4,1) - 萨米智障了 Ctrl G会爽一点的是这两个


00:44:397 (6) - 往下移20个坐标更爽
01:35:730 (3,4) - 弧度调整一下 打起来不爽
我把这两个贴在一起了感觉一下效果



Hard
很棒很棒 依旧是作为player的建议
00:28:313 (3,3,4,1) - 这段flow不太好。。00:40:397 (4) - 不在前面的滑条弧上
建议把4上移一点 把1右移点

00:43:730 (2) - 离前后的滑条的距离差不太相等呢....很容易蛋疼断 调整一下吧
01:19:897 (3) - 这个 Ctrl+H Ctrl+J Ctrl+G 爽点 和前面的滑条角度搭配不错
虽然知道是和01:18:897 (4) - 照应不过还是想说。改了之后的感觉要比之前要好很多

Yuki's Normal

没啥可说的。。。很好的normal
不愧是m酱

Flower‘s Easy

00:04:563 (2,1) - 这两个构一下blanket增强一下美观如何0.0 顺便按DS调整一下下面的滑条的位置


00:21:230 (4) - 滑条尾上的finish还是去掉吧 w
我仔细听了一遍 00:20:563 - 的音和00:21:230 - 的音 感觉前面的一个更需要强调
所以只需要前面加finish+clap这种特强调音效
后面的finish...有点赘余也很吵

嗯。。就这些吧。。Easy我也看不出来什么了






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http://puu.sh/5Takq.osu

sammy711 wrote:

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InsaneとLaurier's Insane二つとも素晴らしい譜面です!!!!>.<
ここからのはmodderからじゃなくてプレーヤーから言う提案です!

这两个diff都超爽
我以player的角度来提点建议 不是modder了
Laurier's Insane
01:12:063 (4) - (296,232)の近くに移動してみたらどう0.0
01:11:730 (3) - の弧とよく接するのでwww fixed!!! ついでに次の(5)も移動してスペーシングそろえましたっ

01:00:730 (2) - これをCtrl+Gしたらいいと思うよ
なぜかわかりませんが とにかくそんな感じ! うーんこれはちょっと合わなさそうなのでnoで!

01:34:563 (3,5,6,1,2) - これっ 正五角形とはちょっと違うんですね
01:35:063 (6,2) - の位置を調整してみたら~? たしかにこっちのほうが綺麗 調整しましたっ



剩下的明天摸
modありがとう!
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sammy711 wrote:

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Insane

01:34:397 (3,4,1) - Ctrl+G之后爽得多呢 三个怎么ctrl+G,全乱了阿
00:44:397 (6) - 往下移20个坐标更爽移动了一点,太多感觉形状不好看
01:35:730 (3,4) - 弧度调整一下 打起来不爽ok
我把这两个贴在一起了感觉一下效果



Hard
很棒很棒 依旧是作为player的建议
00:28:313 (3,3,4,1) - 这段flow不太好。。00:40:397 (4) - 不在前面的滑条弧上我不觉得, 这用了滑条尾低判定吧
建议把4上移一点 把1右移点

00:43:730 (2) - 离前后的滑条的距离差不太相等呢....很容易蛋疼断 调整一下吧是想改的,但是一改就不美观了又想不到更好的
01:19:897 (3) - 这个 Ctrl+H Ctrl+J Ctrl+G 爽点 和前面的滑条角度搭配不错没什么区别啊
虽然知道是和01:18:897 (4) - 照应不过还是想说。改了之后的感觉要比之前要好很多

Flower‘s Easy

00:04:563 (2,1) - 这两个构一下blanket增强一下美观如何0.0 顺便按DS调整一下下面的滑条的位置我觉得不需要


00:21:230 (4) - 滑条尾上的finish还是去掉吧 w好的
我仔细听了一遍 00:20:563 - 的音和00:21:230 - 的音 感觉前面的一个更需要强调
所以只需要前面加finish+clap这种特强调音效
后面的finish...有点赘余也很吵

嗯。。就这些吧。。Easy我也看不出来什么了
thanks for modding!updated laurier‘s insane
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Hi~ Mod as requested :3 Sry it's late :?

Flower's Easy:
~00:05:897 (1) - Make 00:04:563 (2) blanket it. Since you've blanketed 00:01:897 (2,1) .
~00:45:897 (1) - Make this curve more so it can blanket 00:47:230 (2) ? http://puu.sh/5Y7CS.jpg
~00:52:897 (2) - I think it would make more sense if you moved this to (488,124) for following the slider path of 00:51:230 (1) and for much smoother cursor movements.
~00:59:230 (5) - Looks a bit odd compared with the next one. Copy 01:01:230 (6) and make reverse for better appearance? http://puu.sh/5Y7Mg.jpg
~01:04:563 (1,2) - Add finish on both ends of the sliders to follow the crashes in music.
~01:08:230 (2,3) = 01:11:230 (3,4) - Therefore keep patterns consistent?
~01:23:230 (1,2) - Just slider?

Yuki's Normal:
~00:03:230 (1) - Since 00:01:897 (3,4) both are straight, make 00:03:230 (1) the same shape as 00:03:897 (2) to keep consistency and avoid overlap.
~00:05:230 (5,6,1) - You could try to tidy these patterns a little as it looks a bit messy like it's randomly placed right now. A tip is to follow the slider's end path and put it to the best possible place to match the flow and comfort level while playing.
~00:07:897 (5) - Add one more reverse to follow the music completely? (Even for Normal diff, players should get the hang of playing with sliders that has more than 1 reverse arrow. Since Easy has only 1 reverse so Normal should have 2 :P )
~01:18:563 (3,5) - They should be symmetrical.
~01:19:897 (6) - Move to (118,19) So that 01:20:563 (1) can be stacked on top of 01:18:563 (3) 's head. (Not perfect stack though)
~01:21:063 - Add note and DS properly.
~01:22:397 - ^
~01:27:563 (5) - This overlap looks bad :( To fix it, Curve this down 01:26:563 (3) - the blanket 01:27:230 (4) - Furthermore DS 01:27:563 (5) . Then make 01:28:063 (6) like http://puu.sh/5Y8Ur.jpg . Now place 01:28:563 (1) in between the arrow and head of 01:28:063 (6) . DONE! Now DS the rest.
~Not done :P 01:29:730 - Add note to follow snare. Therefore add clap.
~ 01:32:397 - ^
~01:35:063 - ^
~01:37:730 - ^
~01:38:563 (4) - Change to Reverse slider to follow snare, sounds way better :P Therefore add clap into all head and arrow and end of slider. http://puu.sh/5Y955.jpg

Hard:
~00:41:730 (1,2,3) - I think it's better for you to only stack 00:42:730 (2,3) together cuz it's a tiny bit confusing for hard to read for hard diff in this slow speed.
~00:43:230 (1) - Then just avoid overlap by fixing shape if u took my suggestion that is.
~01:05:563 (1,2) - Suddenly jump @@ Keep consistent with 01:04:563 (1,2) ?
~01:06:230 (4) - 1/2 beat slider should be fine. As of now it creates a bit of a weird feeling while playing.
~01:17:063 (2) - You could DS this? Since it's easier to read and the position is almost the same :P
~01:39:063 (6) - Overlapped jumps in hard? Maybe don't overlap? Cuz it's only hard.

Insane:
~00:15:563 (2) - NC here instead? Easier to read ur next pattern.
~00:24:563 (1) - Hmm, I know it's a downbeat, but Putting the NC there is confusing Since u only have a gap between 00:24:563 (1,2) So I think it's best to emphasis that gap by putting NC on 00:24:897 (2) instead.
~01:15:563 (2) - This breaks the flow quite a bit. Maybe just circle is fine.
Good diff :3

Laurier's insane:
~00:11:230 - I don't really feel the chane in SV here, therefore I think multiplying it by 1.2 instead of 1 (This goes to all 1x SV ecxept 00:43:230 to Kiai)would be better for your patterns. Since there are many jumps, so just match it with the SV. Cuz atm, the SV is a bit slow and it feels a bit awkward while playing since it doesn't flow as smooth. I know it's a lot of work after adjusting the SV, so it's entirely up to you although I recommend it. If you totally disagree, just think of it to spice up the map a little since insane is has the same SV too. You could make this one stand out more, that's all I'm trying to say.
~I totally dunno wat mistakes are there since you are such an advanced mapper. So that's all I can give as advice atm :P Sry if it didn't help :?

Pretty neat map-set overall. GO GO FYCHO!!~ GET EM ALL RANKED! :) GL!
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gideon5504 wrote:

Yuki's Normal:
~00:03:230 (1) - Since 00:01:897 (3,4) both are straight, make 00:03:230 (1) the same shape as 00:03:897 (2) to keep consistency and avoid overlap. nope
~00:05:230 (5,6,1) - You could try to tidy these patterns a little as it looks a bit messy like it's randomly placed right now. A tip is to follow the slider's end path and put it to the best possible place to match the flow and comfort level while playing. because I like randomly placing notes
~00:07:897 (5) - Add one more reverse to follow the music completely? (Even for Normal diff, players should get the hang of playing with sliders that has more than 1 reverse arrow. Since Easy has only 1 reverse so Normal should have 2 :P ) I will think about it.
~01:18:563 (3,5) - They should be symmetrical. they are
~01:19:897 (6) - Move to (118,19) So that 01:20:563 (1) can be stacked on top of 01:18:563 (3) 's head. (Not perfect stack though)
~01:21:063 - Add note and DS properly. nope
~01:22:397 - ^ nope
~01:27:563 (5) - This overlap looks bad :( To fix it, Curve this down 01:26:563 (3) - the blanket 01:27:230 (4) - Furthermore DS 01:27:563 (5) . Then make 01:28:063 (6) like http://puu.sh/5Y8Ur.jpg . Now place 01:28:563 (1) in between the arrow and head of 01:28:063 (6) . DONE! Now DS the rest. make some changes
~Not done :P 01:29:730 - Add note to follow snare. Therefore add clap. nope
~ 01:32:397 - ^ ^
~01:35:063 - ^ ^
~01:37:730 - ^ ^
~01:38:563 (4) - Change to Reverse slider to follow snare, sounds way better :P Therefore add clap into all head and arrow and end of slider. http://puu.sh/5Y955.jpg ok
thanks~

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posted

gideon5504 wrote:

Hi~ Mod as requested :3 Sry it's late :?

Flower's Easy:
~00:05:897 (1) - Make 00:04:563 (2) blanket it. Since you've blanketed 00:01:897 (2,1) .moved,but not blanket
~00:45:897 (1) - Make this curve more so it can blanket 00:47:230 (2) ? http://puu.sh/5Y7CS.jpg sorry no,
~00:52:897 (2) - I think it would make more sense if you moved this to (488,124) for following the slider path of 00:51:230 (1) and for much smoother cursor movements.I think flow is no problem since they both are sliders
~00:59:230 (5) - Looks a bit odd compared with the next one. Copy 01:01:230 (6) and make reverse for better appearance? http://puu.sh/5Y7Mg.jpgI think it's not good
~01:04:563 (1,2) - Add finish on both ends of the sliders to follow the crashes in music.ok
~01:08:230 (2,3) = 01:11:230 (3,4) - Therefore keep patterns consistent? sorry,no sense
~01:23:230 (1,2) - Just slider? I think they are the same

Hard:
~00:41:730 (1,2,3) - I think it's better for you to only stack 00:42:730 (2,3) together cuz it's a tiny bit confusing for hard to read for hard diff in this slow speed. I like the stack and the overlap is on purpose,this is not hard to read
~00:43:230 (1) - Then just avoid overlap by fixing shape if u took my suggestion that is.^
~01:05:563 (1,2) - Suddenly jump @@ Keep consistent with 01:04:563 (1,2) ? ok
~01:06:230 (4) - 1/2 beat slider should be fine. As of now it creates a bit of a weird feeling while playing.Since no drums at blue tick,so 3/4 is no problem and it can make rhythm more interesting
~01:17:063 (2) - You could DS this? Since it's easier to read and the position is almost the same :PThis is a small jump to fit the musice better,so don't need to use ds
~01:39:063 (6) - Overlapped jumps in hard? Maybe don't overlap? Cuz it's only hard. I tested.It has no problem imo

Insane:
~00:15:563 (2) - NC here instead? Easier to read ur next pattern.no,keep it at big white tick
~00:24:563 (1) - Hmm, I know it's a downbeat, but Putting the NC there is confusing Since u only have a gap between 00:24:563 (1,2) So I think it's best to emphasis that gap by putting NC on 00:24:897 (2) instead.^
~01:15:563 (2) - This breaks the flow quite a bit. Maybe just circle is fine.I think flow is good now:<
Good diff :3
Pretty neat map-set overall. GO GO FYCHO!!~ GET EM ALL RANKED! :) GL!
thanks for modding!!updated normal diff
posted
here's your ticket

[General]
我建议用sb给video打点圣光

[Normal]
00:07:897 (5) - 建议换个方向,现在有点难读这个sldier何时结束以及下个slider何时开始
00:09:063 (1,1,1,1) - 我觉得没必要这么多NC
00:41:730 (1,2,3,4) - 这个节奏非常难读,建议用一个1/1 repeat slider+ 1/1 sldier,N里出现这种节奏还是不太好
01:05:063 (1,1,1,1) - same
01:27:230 (4,5,6) - 可以试着让他们(不包括6的折返)在一条直线上,看着会舒服很多。顺带5加航clap会好听点
01:29:897 (3) - 同00:07:897 (5) -

[Hard]
00:41:230 (3) - 这个可以blanket好点
00:58:897 (4) - 建议试着改改pattern,让00:59:230 - 压在circle或者slider头上,现在这样压在slider尾上打起来不太带感
01:16:230 (3) - ctrl+g下?flow好点
01:38:563 (3,4,5,6,1) - 建议换spacing小点的梗,有点坑爹

[Laurier's Insane]
00:42:063 (1,1) - why added nc at here? they's seems help nothing here
00:50:063 (2,4) - ctrl+G? flow can be better imo(remember to fix the hitsounds if you fixed this)
01:29:230 - you missed clap here?

[Insane]
00:13:897 (1) - 这个3/4 slider非常违和,建议停在00:14:063 - ,当然这么改了的话这里会太简单,建议同时改改附近的pattern
01:31:230 - 建议吧这个NC移到01:31:730 - ,会让anti-jump更好读点,如果觉得combo太长,可以把01:29:897 - 这个NC移到01:30:563 -

好了叫我,别忘了圣光
posted

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Normal]
00:07:897 (5) - 建议换个方向,现在有点难读这个sldier何时结束以及下个slider何时开始 考虑了下,加了个折返,不知道行不行
00:09:063 (1,1,1,1) - 我觉得没必要这么多NC 好吧
00:41:730 (1,2,3,4) - 这个节奏非常难读,建议用一个1/1 repeat slider+ 1/1 sldier,N里出现这种节奏还是不太好 fixed
01:05:063 (1,1,1,1) - same same
01:27:230 (4,5,6) - 可以试着让他们(不包括6的折返)在一条直线上,看着会舒服很多。顺带5加航clap会好听点 fix and加上了
01:29:897 (3) - 同00:07:897 (5) - 改了个摆法
thx
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Version:Yuki's Normal
Source:ゆめこい ~夢見る魔法少女と恋の呪文~
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102,265,56563,6,0,P|169:279|227:255,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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330,139,79063,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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http://puu.sh/5ZyKN.osu
thanks!

wcx19911123 wrote:

here's your ticket


[Laurier's Insane]
00:42:063 (1,1) - why added nc at here? they's seems help nothing here ok
00:50:063 (2,4) - ctrl+G? flow can be better imo(remember to fix the hitsounds if you fixed this) sorry i keep my flow
01:29:230 - you missed clap here? fixed


好了叫我,别忘了圣光
posted
:D

wcx19911123 wrote:

here's your ticket

[General]
我建议用sb给video打点圣光 有点麻烦,干脆把video去掉了,之前嘉文也说过这.-.


[Hard]
00:41:230 (3) - 这个可以blanket好点 ok
00:58:897 (4) - 建议试着改改pattern,让00:59:230 - 压在circle或者slider头上,现在这样压在slider尾上打起来不太带感 ok
01:16:230 (3) - ctrl+g下?flow好点感觉不好,还顺着往下比较好,考虑了滑条尾低判定和后面一个重音的打击感
01:38:563 (3,4,5,6,1) - 建议换spacing小点的梗,有点坑爹


[Insane]
00:13:897 (1) - 这个3/4 slider非常违和,建议停在00:14:063 - ,当然这么改了的话这里会太简单,建议同时改改附近的pattern
01:31:230 - 建议吧这个NC移到01:31:730 - ,会让anti-jump更好读点,如果觉得combo太长,可以把01:29:897 - 这个NC移到01:30:563 - 好的,但是保留了一个NC,后面加了一个对应

好了叫我,别忘了圣光
其他有一个地方修改过,是insane的00:57:063 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - 换了个梗,其他没有变动

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