This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, August 11, 2017 at 8:47:09 AM

Artist: Nicky Tirta - Vanessa Angel
Title: Indah Cintaku
Tags: bahasa indonesia Jerry indo Nagaswara Alam Urbach Neppu
BPM: 94
Filesize: 7202kb
Play Time: 03:53
Difficulties Available:

1. Jerry's Muzukashii (1.95 stars, 518 notes)
2. Oni (2.68 stars, 806 notes)
3. Sedang (1.71 stars, 255 notes)
4. Susah (2.65 stars, 402 notes)

Download: Nicky Tirta - Vanessa Angel - Indah Cintaku
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Sedang = Normal
Susah = Hard
Going for ranked now!
Redownload for better background and storyboard.

Old style mapping. If you don't like it, you can always play another map! The map is from 4 years ago. xD
Special thanks to taiko_maniac1811 and Jerry(Neppu) for editing the sb sprites.

Ishi's http://puu.sh/ipkSz/8d3ab2f4b7.rar

1st post. muahahaha :3

Indo song /w/

sent flickering code in forum pm ~

i'm not really think nazi mod like this should to get kd?;-;

Anyway good luck Heat ~ and star for Indo song :3

Muzu diff as requested done~

http://puu.sh/5VDUO.osu

=w=

updated!

wahh lagu indo xD /me runs
goodluck guys :3

hehe thank you! mod the taiko >:DDD

maybe random guest \:3/

i am new taiko modder so my mod so poor ;w;
Oni looks like Muzukashii. lol easy |3 /me hides and run

[Oni]
00:55:092 (193,194,195,196) - hhh not good seems look akward rhythm. maybe try this? (Why not in "Memandang"?)
01:00:039 (212) - delete this note
01:12:645 (257) - ^ it's too much
01:26:847 (302) - kat here 01:27:007 (303) - and delete kat here because this is perfect imo <3333 no no no no no seems fine
01:27:645 (306) - kat? i like ddk <3333
01:40:092 (350) - huh delete kat what fits here
01:42:645 (360) - ^
01:44:081 - add circle (don thats mean ddd)
01:55:730 (405,406,407) - dons pattern?
02:12:645 (469,470,471,472) - dkdk?
02:45:198 (590,591,592) - dkd pls
02:45:837 (593,594,595) - ^
02:47:751 (600,601,602,603,604,605) - ^
02:50:305 (610,611,612,613,614,615) - ^
02:51:581 (616,617,618) - add kats here? o/ (ok this is my oppinion. if you like just change this.)
02:54:932 (635) - delete this note
02:55:092 (636,637,638,639,640) - dkdkd?
02:57:007 (646) - add k
03:33:709 (770,771) - kd? like before patterns.
03:44:241 (812) - should be kat here

[Jerry's Muzukashii]
00:06:581 (13,14) - dk?
00:17:432 (36,37,38,39) - ddkd is so boring... maybe try another pattern? like dkdk?
00:49:347 (102) - kat?
00:54:773 - add circle? you should make a 5 patterns o/
01:15:837 - ^
01:37:539 - ^ follows "sudahkah kau"
01:54:454 (59) - maybe delete this circle
01:57:326 (65,66,67,68) - dkdd pls
02:22:858 (38,39,40,1) - ^
02:52:219 (19,20,21) - kkd follow guitar
02:59:560 (1) - ends at 03:00:517 ? (just my oppinion.)
03:16:475 (39,40,41,42) - dkdd pls
03:31:794 (25,26,27,28) - ^
03:47:113 (18) - looks akward ._.

[Susah]
oh damn my puush

k - feel akward to rhythms and the spinner so easy so add od+1?

00:15:837 (1,2) - Not a jump? and 00:17:113 (3,4) - jump? maybe it's look like a antijump so reverse collection 00:16:475 (2) - this?
00:18:390 (5) - stack fail lol
00:25:092 - add circle here? 00:24:454 (6) - or add reverse arrow in this slider? maybe flow bit crowded o/
00:27:007 (1) - new combo here doesn't fit anything
00:30:837 (1) - new combo is not in stanza
00:49:028 (2,3) - maybe flow bit crowded o/
01:02:113 (1) - i think you need this pattern for not akward
01:03:709 (4) - seems you need to blanket
02:16:156 (1,2) - this two imo feel akward. so move the red point 2 grids to left. (Grid level: 4)
02:41:368 (1,2,3) - stream not good o/
hmmm good antijumps ;3

[Sederhana]
00:12:007 (3) - maybe curve/angle it?
00:55:411 (2) - looks different like (1)?
01:05:943 (3) - stack?
01:16:794 (3) - ugly o/
01:23:496 (2) - i should know what you mean/fits here?
02:12:964 (3) - overlap with (1) i mean....
02:29:879 (2) - move 1 grid to left (Grid level: 4)
02:31:475 (1) - ^ but to right
03:35:624 (2) - stack mostly fail
okay \:D/ that

indonesian song ;w; SPEEDRANK SPEEDRANK SPEEDRANK lolololol
sorry my english is poor ;w; and sorry if my mod is not helpfull ;w;
Okay good luck~ :3

Indonesian Song?

yes indonesian song :3
I'll update it.... next month LOL

LETS do this shiet again! REVIVED. d-post

Hmm, I should start working this soon after I finished sitting on exam. Will be working on it next month

alright! aku cari mod utk 4 diff ni lu :3

Randomly picked from #modreqs

[General]

1. Try finding a softer clap-hitsound? It feels like the current one is a bit too loud. It sounds really TOO looud during non-kiai parts, imo.
2. Put translation for the dff names to the creator's word.
3. Please, disable the Widescreen support! It conflicts with your 4:3 storyboard!
4. You can resize "SB/2.jpg" to 640x480 resolution. If you use 640x480 file it will reduce SB load (there will be no need to scale it) and it is the recommended resolution.
5. Hey, your colours are so bright. They don't really work with your BG and seem unfitting, imo. What's more, they are similar, so it may be boring to look at them for 4 minutes.
   
   How about these colours?

   
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 168,189,186
   Combo2 : 192,208,211
   Combo3 : 211,208,171
   Combo4 : 157,177,198

[Sederhana]

1. 00:03:390 (4,1,2) - try emphasizing the vocals here? 00:04:028 - there's the same sound as on 00:05:305 - so, it might be a good idea to use the same rhythm for them. It may be a bit hard to understand, but my example should make it clear.
2. 00:11:049 (1) - the way how (1) appears right after clicking 00:09:773 (1) - is confusing for beginners. Since this diff is the easiest I strongly recommend you to make this pattern a bit less confusing. How? Well, this may fit pretty good here.
3. 00:29:879 (4,5) - sounds a bit off because of the beat at 00:30:198 - being ignored, there're also some vocals, so having some empty space here is confusing, imo. Select 00:29:879 (4,5) - and press Ctrl+G. Listen to the result and fix the spacing if you like it!
4. 00:31:156 - please, place a circle here and move spinner to 00:31:475 - so, the downbeat is not ignored.
   Note: here's an example of the pattern. See this picture!
5. 00:43:602 (5,1) - first of all, there's a little spacing mistake. Secondly, beginners (since this diff is the easiest, it should be playable for beginners, remembber!) may mistakenly hit (1)'s tail. Please, try to move (1)'s tail away and make the pattern intuitively understandable!
6. 00:59:241 - I see that you don't want to use too many 1/2 beats, but a circle here is really necessary to emphasize the vocals!
7. 01:09:773 (1,1) - having two new combos in a row is not a good idea, imo. Try to remove NC from 01:11:049 (1) - to make comboing a bit more consistent and to make the beginning of kiai a bit more epic.
8. 01:23:177 (1,2) - could you, please, fix the blanket here? It will make your map a bit neater and we both know that players like neat patterns! Appearance is also important for the map.
9. 01:27:007 (3) - I don't think that the clap on it's repeat is necessary. Consider removing it?
10. 01:47:751 (1) - pretty much the same happend to 00:31:156, so please start the spinner at 01:48:071 - and place a circle at 01:47:751, so you;ll keep your rhythm consistent and follow vocals and music at the same time!
11. 01:50:624 (1,2) - the transition between these two seems a bit unnatural and feels forced. Maybe it's just me, but for such a relaxing song I expected you to use really soft flow. I'd try to make your flow a bit softer, but it is totally up to you. Anyway, just take a look at the example and see for yourself
12. 02:18:709 (1,2) - definetly will confuse befinners. A specially those, who have disabled "snaking sliders" feature. Try to avoid this stack and make the diff a bit more readable for beginners, please!
13. 02:20:624 (1) - previously you were focused on following the vocals, so it is really weird to hear 02:20:943 - voice here ignored. Why don't you try to change the slider? Example
    Note: 02:20:943 - new combo should be placed on 02:20:943, so it will help you to keep consistency in comboing (I've seen a few similar patterns in the diff, so..) and to follow vocals
14. 02:26:368 (1,1) - 03:19:985 (1,1) - seems like you've copypasted the pattern from 01:09:773 (1,1) - I'm totally okay with copypasta, but two NCs confuse me here.
15. 02:33:390 - the clap here is ignored. It feels off your normal patterns and it doesn't sound good with vocals, imo. Try to change your rhythm here in order to follow the song better, please!
16. 02:56:049 - ignored/ 02:54:773 (2) - mapped / 02:57:326 (2) - mapped / 02:58:602 - ignored. Looks like some kind iof inconsistency. So, I'd remove the circles and follow only "nanana" in the cocals. It will give you more consistent and reasonable rhythm!
17. 03:08:815 (2,1) - try to turn these sliders into blanket-sliders? It may create a smoother flow don't you think so?
18. 03:13:283 (2) - try to replace the slider with just one circle at 03:13:602 - it will help you to emphasiz stronger beat. I feel like the beats at the red ticks shouldn't be mapped here because they sound too quite.
19. 03:49:028 (1,1) - don't forget that the diff is playable in ALL modes. This sudden 1/4 pattern will bug o!m players, so I recommend you to remove 03:49:028(1) and place the spinner there.
    Note: alternatively, you can start spinner 03:49:666 - here to emphasize the piano sound. either way is fine, imo.
    
    The diff is quite alright. Though some of your patterns are too hard, you did really great job!

[Susah]

1. 00:14:241 (1,2) - try to swap new combo there. Since the sound changes at 00:14:560 - having NC started there sounds like a good idea to me.
2. 00:24:932 - don't you feel like such a cute voice shouldn't be ignored? Try to map "ku" in vocals somehow. I got this but tail of (7) should be muted, if you decide to take this pattern!
3. 00:32:592 - I think you should place a circle here in order to ap the 1/4 beat. At the beginning you've used a few 1/4 patterns but now they're all gone which makes your rhythm appear inconsistent
   Note: 00:35:783 - 00:36:102 - 00:37:379 - yup, the same. Please, do not ignore them! The song is relaxing, but having a few 1/4 patterns will lkeep players entertained. There're a few more missed beats, but I think you'll be able to find them yourself if you agree with me!
4. 01:25:411 (2) - whoops, check it with 25% playback rate. There's no any 1/4 beats, therefore the part is overmapped. Consider replacing it with two circles or one 1/2 slider, please!
5. 02:56:368 (1,1) - not a fan of such sliders because it is rather hard to read/guess how many repeats are there. So, I would try to replace them with 1/4 circles as you did it previously.
6. 03:49:028 (1,1) - if you've changed this pattern in the Normal diff, do the samme here, please! Consistency is important!
   
   The diff is pretty nice, great job with the flow!

The mapset is pretty cool, thoug I feel like it needs a few more mods to become perfect!

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Best of luck!

ah wow!

-Bakari- wrote:

Something will appear here soon. :3

hehe thanks :3 idk how to reply but i changed a lot, thanks again bakari! you're such a big help :3

Mintong wrote:

ah wow!

!!! x3

quick mod, map looks nice!
what a nice, calm song

[General]

1. Find a softer/quieter slider slide?

[Sederhana]

1. 00:06:900 (3) - This appearing under 00:05:305 (1) - 's slider end/hit burst may be hard to read for newer players
2. 00:08:815 (2) - I would move this slider down a 1/2 and add a circle where it started originally for a better rhythm
3. 01:23:496 (2) - Maybe bring the two slider points before the anchor up a bit so there isn't so much of a sharp edge where the anchor is
4. 01:26:049 (2) - Have this slider body blanket 01:27:007 (3) - 's slider start a bit more?
5. 02:04:028 (4,5) - (Nazi) blanket can be improved
6. 02:28:922 (1,2) - Blankets can be improved
7. 02:31:475 (1,2) - ^
8. 03:49:028 (1) - Maybe use green lines to fade out the volume of the spinner

[Susah]

1. 00:09:613 (1) - This was kind of awkward to hit since it started on a blue tick, I would just have a singular note 00:09:773 - here
2. 00:12:007 (3,4) - Maybe bring the anchor out a bit more so that it blankets (4) nicer?
3. 01:57:964 (5,7) - Make sure that there are an equal amount of grids between both sliders
4. 03:49:028 (1) - Same spinner suggestion as Sederhana

Nice map! Good luck~

Thank you for the mod Lust! most of them are fixed! really appreciate it <3

Hi~ Heatkai~! ><
from your request in game.






Calm song and nice mappp~!! :3
GL to rank~~!

Thank you for the mod akemi!
Updated! >w< more mods please :3

Mod request from my queue

General

1. Let's see if I can mod this with song muted (I can't stand almost 97% songs from my own land, you lived with them therefore you're bored with them and sick of them, trust me) Challenge begin.
2. Add indo to tags (you know)
   
   1. For sprites: The dark night background is not dark enough, currently it looks like raining noon without rains (just the dark clouds, you know) Night is usually composed of invisible horizon, bluish dark sky (real dark) and more stars. Also lighting on the couple is not dark enough )-:
   2. For sprites optimization: The transparent couple sprite could be cropped. The white flash is too strong, maybe tune it down a little bit. Stars are less dense (-:
3. Both couple did managed one job standing in the beach for 3 days straight just for looking at the stars even in the noon

sederhana cijerah (murah cuma 2000 ajah)

1. 00:04:028 (5) - Add clap on sliderstart?
2. 00:04:666 (6) - Remove pls, broke pattern
3. 00:45:198 (2) - Old slider olgarithm? '-'
4. 03:44:241 (3,1) - Stack maybe? Why not?

Nice symmetries.

Susah-susah gampang cari kerja (di Jakarta)

1. 00:15:837 (1,2,3,4) - I think it'll be better if you put them like this: http://puu.sh/8ukS7.jpg
2. 01:02:113 (1) - Not good, what about http://puu.sh/8ukXC.jpg
3. 02:39:134 (1,2,3) - Imperfect blanket?

Map is way too good. Nice job.

Starred because I see stars on the map. Anyway I passed the challenge modding this map muted.

thank you very much inverness! hahaha "Susah-susah gampang cari kerja (di Jakarta)"
all of them are fixed

Hello Mr. HandsomeKai :3

[Oni]

1. 00:00:039 (1,2,3) - If I were you, I would try to reduce the volume of those notes as they sound really loud. The layer ay not really understand what they follow as it is the beginning of the song and they start on a blue tick. (and it also sounds nicer to me)
2. 00:00:358 - I would add a note here ( a don), as 00:00:517 (4,5,6) are following the guitar, but the guitar actually starts at 00:00:358.
3. 00:17:113 (60) - Chang itt into a kat to mak som nic ffct with th vocals?
4. 00:31:156 (107) - Kat hr too? To emphasize on th vocals?
5. 00:55:092 (193,194,195,196,197,198) - kddd dd doesn't sound that great here as it does at 00:57:645 (203,204,205,206,207,208) since there is nothing suggesting having a note at 00:55:890. I would suggest you to do a kddkd d instead, which is more intuitive here imo.
6. 01:29:241 (311) - k here too? Fits the guitar pretty well!
7. 01:35:624 (335) - I see that the kats in this pattern are here to accentuate the guitar, like 01:34:985 (333). So for the same reason, I'd make (335) a kat too!
8. 02:58:922 (656,657,658,659,660) - Change this kdddk into a kddkd. The last note (160) shouldn't be a k as the vocals are going down unlie 02:58:283 (654). (a kdddd works too but that wouldn't really match with the other patterns imo).
9. 03:45:198 (818) - don? I don't realy think a kat fits the drumbeat here >.<

HeatKai pro slow-song mapper! *___*

[Jerry's Muzukashii]

1. 00:47:113 - Add a note here (don)? it feels empty otherwise, and it fits the music smoothly ~

I don't really have the time to fully mod the Muzukashii right now, I'll probably give it a recheck when I'll mod the standard diffs, but the difficulty looks pretty nice for now, it's simple, relaxing and smooth!

Kurai thank you >A< I'll fix once you're finished your mod. <3

I finally got to the PM KaiKai o/

Susah

NC seems weird, inconsistent

00:13:602 (6) - NC here instead
00:16:475 (2,3) - swap so that 00:17:113 (3) is at 00:16:475 and vice versa so the pattern of flow is up, down, up, down. Also maybe possibly get them to stack on the ends of 00:18:390 (5)
00:19:985 (1) - the vocals start on the end of the slider, which is quite passive, maybe change it so that 00:19:985 (1) is removed, 00:19:347 (6) has a repeat and put a circle at 00:20:305
00:33:071 (6,1) - has a 5 beat sound here, add a note at 00:33:549
00:56:368 (7) - I don't think the clap on the reverse arrow fits too well
01:01:794 (7) - ^
01:06:262 (4) - ^ the clap on the end
I think it's because it's quite loud, which is why I felt parts of the song like 01:17:113 (8) it kinda drowns the vocals, which is why I think whistle might be better
01:27:326 (6,7) - let the beat at 01:27:645 be passive, use one slider instead
01:53:975 (7) - sounds better if it was at 01:53:337 instead
02:43:922 (5) - change it to a 1/4 slider with 1 repeat
03:20:624 (3) - sounds like cymbals in the background
03:35:624 (2) - finish on the repeat end of slider
03:36:581 (4) - finish on start of slider
03:42:326 (6) - ^

Sederhana

00:10:092 (2) - finish
00:49:347 (3) - whistle on start of slider
01:25:092 (1) - whistle on start of slider
03:02:113 (1,2) - shift the slider starting head so maybe it could blanket better
03:35:624 (2) - finish on end of slider
03:41:688 (3) - ^

Good luck!

updated neonat's mod, will wait for KUKUKUrai!

HeatKai baby, I can't find anything wrong in your standard diffs because they're as awesome as you are! I can give you a circle if you want, b-but t-that's not b-because I like y-you or anything ... owo

Kurai wrote:

HeatKai baby, I can't find anything wrong in your standard diffs because they're as awesome as you are! I can give you a circle if you want, b-but t-that's not b-because I like y-you or anything ... owo

o-oh kurai baby, pls do anything you want. I can try my best finding taiko bat. <3 HAHAHA

Well crap, looks like I'm late to the party lol

Good luck anyway!

Let's do a little quick check, shall we?

>Sederhana

1. I prefer "Sedang" compared to "Sederhana", since "Sedang" actually means Normal in Indonesian (not sure if the word even exists in Melayu, but then again, this is a Malaysian Indonesian (how the hell did I type that wrongly) song lol), while "Sederhana" is equal to Kantan and Easy in Japanese and... Okay, the last reason didn't make much sense, but whatever lol
2. It would be nice to emphasize the string instruments with whistles, since it feels kinda empty with only claps all around (applies for all parts beside the choruses).
3. 00:03:390 (4) - Drag the head a little higher to the point where it'll create a better flow from 00:03:071 (3)? This can be done by moving the node on the head to (61,218), and then move the middle node to (36,242) and the one on the end to (12,284) for refinement.
4. 00:06:581 (3,4) - The spacing is 1.05x. Not that it's noticeable (it's a little too large from the default spacing); just saying.
5. 00:56:688 - Remove the clap and use the Drum sampleset instead? drum-hitnormal follows the drum here more accurately. (Applies to other double-claps like this.)
6. 02:34:028 (4,1) - Swap NC since (4) is at the beginning of the stanza?
7. 03:32:751 - Reduce the volume on this tick to 50%? The cymbal in the background doesn't stand out much compared to the other instruments in the song, and when the finish is triggered, it sounds too loud compared to the other hitsounds you have used.
8. 03:35:943 - There is nothing such as a cymbal being played here. Remove the finish and replace it with a whistle instead? Feels more fitting and far less awkward, IMO.
9. 03:42:326 - Reduce the volume to 50%? Same reason as 03:32:751.
10. 03:42:964 - ^ (But you can use 65% here, I guess.)
11. 03:45:517 - Same as 03:35:943; there is no heavy instrument played here, so it feels very jarring.

>Susah

1. 00:02:113 (5) - Make it look like this for a better flow from 00:01:794 (4) and to 00:03:071 (1)?
2. 00:09:454 (8,1,2,3) - The spacing is kinda inconsistent here; (8,1) is at 1.00x, while (1,2,3) is at 1.08x. It's actually noticeable, too.
3. 02:00:837 (2,3) - Make these two sliders similar? You know, either make both of them straight or have the same curve. Honestly, it looks kinda weird right now.
4. 02:10:411 (4) - Move the node on the tail to (28,336) for, again, a better flow? The pattern design will also be improved that way.
5. 02:43:443 (2) - Use the Drum sampleset? This will invoke the usage of drum-hitnormal, which fits quite well with the drum here.
6. 02:54:134 (3,4) - ^

Not much to say

Good luck on the way

ok settled! :3 thanks hinsvar

Daging sapi!

I'm pro Indonesian

daging ayam!
i know you pro

Quick lazy mod.~

[General]

Add a Timing point on 00:00:039 - since you can't play these diffs at all due to the green line before the red tick.
or just remove the green line

[Oni]

1. 00:53:177 (188) - Remove this for a nice pause that you used later on.
2. 02:15:198 (479) - Change this to a k for snare consistency?
3. 02:17:751 (488,490) - Switch these around for the same reason above.
4. 02:25:411 (514) - Change this to a k for snare consistency as well.
5. 02:27:326 (520,521,522,523,524,525) - Try ddd dkk instead.
6. 02:30:039 (533) - Move this to 02:30:198 and add a k on 02:30:517 (535) for better feeling.
7. 02:33:071 (544) - Change this to a k for the snare.
8. 02:34:826 (551) - The roll here starting on 1/4 felt pretty awkward while playing. Just remove this so that it'll feel better.
9. 02:35:624 (555) - Change this to a k for the snare as well.
10. 02:40:730 (574) - ^
11. 02:43:124 (583,587) - Remove these, the roll is pretty complicated and removing these would fix that.
12. 02:46:794 (597) - Remove the finisher on this for consistency with 02:51:900.
13. 03:49:347 - 03:53:815 - Add a spinner here

I'd point out the rest, but it's a little variation.

[Jerry's Muzukashii]

Not much to point out besides these major empty finishers.

1. 01:11:688 (12,1) -
2. 01:27:645 (1) -
3. 02:08:496 (1) -
4. 02:28:284 (13,1) -
5. 02:44:241 (1) -
6. 03:22:539 (1) -
7. 03:32:751 (28) -
8. 03:37:858 (1) -
9. 03:45:517 (17) -

updated! thank you Love <3

go go go (ノ `Д´)ノ

AT LAST UPDATED AIHFKLASEHGKLASGHASGKLQWHG BSS LOVE YOU
why wouldn't you update T____T

Changed lead-in to 2000 and repositioned the taiko background.

Boop~

yeay thank you D

Pop and Other

not Novelty and Other

oh wat wat? omg it's bubbled! cool xD let me shot a star before it ranked ww

lol thank you ming xD

Here my \STAR/

star too ~

Thanks guys I really appreciate it.

Changed timing, combocolor, confirmed metadata,
rebubbled and good luck!

thank you, FUUUU TIMING

Before you map ranked, I want a Mod this map:



[General]

• 
  Check (Centang) "Widescreen Supprot" (For Storyboard)
  You must need a Lycris SB for good JUST KIDDING XD

[Normal]

• 
  Circle Size -1
  
  Perfect~

[Hard]

• 
  02:29:720 (3) - change you position, like this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  03:02:113 (0) - why you don't add kiai time?

[Jerry's Muzukashii]

• 
  Perfect~

[Oni]

• 
  00:00:038 (1,2,3) - Delete (not follow the flow of the music) (tidak mengikuti aliran musik)

WOW, Short Mod!

The Indonesian Map #2

Sungguh Indah Cintaku~

Good Luck for Ranked~



Edit:
My 1.300's post!

will check when there's another BAT mod after this ^^ dont want to pop for now
fix, wew i didn't check that widescreen zzzzz ~_~'

Okay~


Here my \STAR/ again~

Pfioooou!