yee indonesia

sedang
00:02:431 (1,2) - just use 1/2 slider here for decreased the density of rhythm on intro
00:07:218 - circle here? for guitar (it looks weird when you leave it blank)
00:31:474 (1) - the spinner ended so fast imo xd,maybe make the spinner ended on the next white tick?
00:56:367 (3) - i would ctrl h this for better flow between (2,3,4)
01:16:794 (3) - uncruved this a bit cause the angle of shape too much for normal diff
01:18:389 (2,1) - would be great if you avoid this overlap
01:47:750 (1) - the vocal start on the white tick but why you put the spinner here?
01:57:645 (3) - move a bit up for better pattern
02:18:071 (3) - move a bit down (the tail of slider (2) too close with this circle)
02:59:559 (1) - finsih here for cymbal?
03:02:113 (1,2) - blanket
03:07:857 (1,2) - these slider not represent the music correctly imo (mostly awkward imo).so my sggestion is a circle here and then 1/1 slider at 03:08:176 - and another circle at 03:09:133 -

susah
00:09:453 (8) - just use 1/3 reverse slider here for make the rhythm easier to read and emphatize the drum well
02:42:963 - ^
03:00:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - im not quite sure about these stream tbh,with this stream it looks like you didnt emphatize the vocal and guitar.so my suggestion is try another rhythm xd

ok thats it from me
GL!

Thanks! I changed alot in sedang! but i like what i did in susah, so im not changing it hehe xD

sorry, i couldn't find anything other than a few personal suggestions

sedang

00:45:198 (2) - why not just change this to a more even three-point slider?
01:19:985 (1,2,3,4) - can you make them symmetrical

susah

02:02:751 (1) - raise up by a bit, its kind of leveled with 5
02:41:368 (1,2,4) - (unintentional??) overlap is kinda messy to look at

Fix others except "00:45:198 (2) - why not just change this to a more even three-point slider?".
No difference even if I change it now, it flows right in my eyes right now ;p

Thanks for your time! Your personal suggestions are great

Halo~ HeatKai & Jerry~ :3
Wow.. so old map. I remember that modded this 4 years ago. lol
My modding is include personal feeling & suggestion.
Please feel free to ignore, If my modding affect your mapping style.

d = don
D = big don
k = kat
K = big kat




I hope my modding helpful for you. :3
I really want to see this map ranked.
Good Luck~~!

Thank you very much for the mod, Akemi_Homura. <3
Remod after 3-4 years

yeah, more indonesian songs would be good for osu now :3
take my star! \o/

Thank you!!

Yo, osu! alumni
Going for re bub. gl

From my queue:

[Jerry's Muzukashii]
00:09:453: Remove this note since I don't hear any structure of the music

00:47:750: Change to k? I think it will fit the pitch

01:02:112: ^

03:47:112: Remove k here. I hear calm part here

[Oni]
00:03:708: Would do ddkkd, Idk.

00:58:442 (204, 205): I don't know if I can hear the structure of the music but I think you should change the timing positions on these notes

00:57:644: Please be careful that 4 notes stream isn't very common and usually doesn't fit the pitch. Think about it. Idk

01:23:176: ^

01:23:974: ^

01:25:091: Remove D, I hear calm part.

01:26:687: Add d or k. I hear a small vocal of the music. (slow down the song)

That's it for me.
GL on re bub. and ranking

davidminh0111 wrote:

00:57:644Please be careful that 4 notes stream isn't very common and usually doesn't fit the pitch. Think about it. Idk

01:23:176^

01:23:974^

Actually it does fits. I'm loving it for now. So I'm staying like that and thank you very much! Updated!

Hi via game-in chat.(quick mod)

[ about]

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is big don note
4. K is big kat note

[ General]

• 
  
  You can use more high quality BG.

[ Muzukashii]

• 
  
  Audio sample set Normal please.
  
  I think Vol60% is good.
  
  * 00:27:325 - change to k.still high pitch?
  
  * 00:50:623 - 00:51:899 - & 01:11:048 - 01:12:325 other,This section more consistent please.
  
  * 03:49:027 - Fadeout part.so You can add green line (e.g.40→30→20 please gradually down volume)

[ Oni]

• 
  
  Audio sample set Normal please.
  
  I think Vol60% is good.
  
  hmm...why SV2.24? (2.23999996185303)
  
  * 02:54:931 - remove.why 7plet? 02:56:367 - & 02:57:644 - & 02:58:921 - 5plet for consistency
  
  * 02:55:091 - kdkkd 02:56:367 - kdkdk 02:57:644 - kdkkd 02:58:921 - kdkdk
  
  * 03:01:633 - remove.haven't sound
  
  * 03:49:346 - Fadeout part.so You can add green line (e.g.40→30→20 please gradually down volume)
  
  I prefer more consisten map.

Good luck

03:49:346 - Fadeout part.so You can add green line (e.g.40→30→20 please gradually down volume)
I didnt fix this coz I dont think it changes much coz it's the last spinner and the background I dont change because I've done the sb with the bg. ;w;

Thanks for the mod, Charlotte! )

Hello Heatkai, here's the mod you requested in-game.

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

1. All seems fine.

[Jerry's Muzukashii]

1. 00:03:867 - add a k here? a kk 1/4 fits good there and considering how dense it's the Oni would be nice.
2. 00:20:942 - add a k here? fits good with the vocals and as said previously, the Oni it's too dense compared to Muzukashii, so adding some notes wouldn't hurt.
3. 00:24:772 - i'm not convinced with this k d d at all, maybe move 00:25:091 - to 00:25:410 - as it fits better with the vocals and the instrumental?
4. 01:18:548 - add a d? you are using ddd triplets previously but not now, so for consistency i suggest adding.
5. 01:23:495 - add a k? i think fits good and makes a mirror pattern with 01:20:942 - .
6. 02:26:367 - here i suggest deleting 02:26:367 - and 02:26:687 - for two reasons, a little break and because the pattern is too long compared to the others.
7. 02:30:038 - add a d in 02:30:038 - 02:35:144 - for make a triplet as you did in previous kiais, without triplet there it feels inconsistent.
8. 02:45:836 - change this note to k? the pitch is higher and it fits better as k k d in comparation of 02:47:112 - that is lower pitch.
9. 02:51:580 - change to k? same reason as ^, higher pitch.

[Oni]

1. 00:15:836 (57,58) - control+g these notes? (k d) i think fits good with the instrumental, also it makes similar to 00:13:282 - .
2. 00:24:772 - change to d? the pitch is lower there.
3. 00:27:325 - if you applied ^ change this note to d and 00:27:644 - to k for the instrumental and the vocals.
4. 00:37:857 - i suggest deleting this note as this goes too dense compared to previous patterns.
5. 00:39:133 - change this note to d and 00:39:453 - to k? 00:39:133 - fits good with vocals and instrumental having a d there and a k in 00:39:453 - imo.
6. 00:42:963 - same here, i suggest deleting it as it's too dense.
7. 00:48:070 - same ^.
8. 00:58:123 - move 00:58:442 - to 00:58:282 - and change to k? kddd it doesn't fit at all imo and a kdddk fits better.
9. 01:12:644 - change to k? k fits good there with that guitar sound.
10. 01:18:867 - add a d here? a ddd triplet fits good there.
11. 01:23:974 - same as 00:58:282 - , move this note to 01:23:814 - and change to k?
12. 01:28:601 - to match better the guitar, change 01:28:601 - and 01:28:921 - to k and 01:29:240 - to d, sounds lot better imo.
13. 01:31:793 - change to k as higher pitch than 01:31:474 - ?
14. 01:33:070 - change 01:33:070 - and 01:34:027 - to k for the guitar?
15. 01:59:399 - i suggest deleting this note and 01:59:718 - as xxxx xx it doesn't fits at all and the whole 1/2 patterns it's starting to be too dense.
16. 02:21:580 - change this note to k? fits good with the vocals.
17. 02:32:750 - change to k? fits good with instrumental+vocals.
18. 02:54:054 - i know that you are trying to match the vocals with this, but one triplet 1/8 it's enough imo as the only with a 1/8 sound it's 02:53:415 - , i suggest doing this, delete 02:54:054 - and change 02:54:133 - to d, as it fits instrumental + vocals.
19. 03:40:250 - add a k here? dkd here fits good imo.
20. 03:44:080 - move this note to 03:43:921 - and change to k? as before, xxxx xx it doesn't fit at all.

Good luck~

Fixed most of it! Waiting for jerry's diff now. Thanks for the mod!

Hanjamon wrote:

[Jerry's Muzukashii]

1. 00:03:867 - add a k here? a kk 1/4 fits good there and considering how dense it's the Oni would be nice. No change for this, it doesn't really flow well with the rest of the patterns of the map imo
2. 00:20:942 - add a k here? fits good with the vocals and as said previously, the Oni it's too dense compared to Muzukashii, so adding some notes wouldn't hurt. Ok, added
3. 00:24:772 - i'm not convinced with this k d d at all, maybe move 00:25:091 - to 00:25:410 - as it fits better with the vocals and the instrumental? True, changed.
4. 01:18:548 - add a d? you are using ddd triplets previously but not now, so for consistency i suggest adding. Nice, added
5. 01:23:495 - add a k? i think fits good and makes a mirror pattern with 01:20:942 - . Added
6. 02:26:367 - here i suggest deleting 02:26:367 - and 02:26:687 - for two reasons, a little break and because the pattern is too long compared to the others. Only removed 02:26:687 - as the flow will be affected if both notes are removed
7. 02:30:038 - add a d in 02:30:038 - 02:35:144 - for make a triplet as you did in previous kiais, without triplet there it feels inconsistent. Okay
8. 02:45:836 - change this note to k? the pitch is higher and it fits better as k k d in comparation of 02:47:112 - that is lower pitch. The instruments in the music goes down in pitch as compared to 02:46:155 (5) - , so I think don would be better
9. 02:51:580 - change to k? same reason as ^, higher pitch. Changed

Thanks for the mod, Hanja!
Here's my update: http://puu.sh/whEOV/f2e7b05475.rar

Everything is updated now!

[sb]

1. 02:43:921 - hey, observe this carefully on that boy. the transition seems rly weird

[susah sudah kehidupanku dgn kegalauan aku ini]

1. 00:18:389 (5) - the slider could be improved to make it symmetry by second anchor on 303|231, red on 256|231, fourth on 245|199, last on 209|231
2. 03:07:538 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - u can just copy paste from 03:07:538 (1,2,3) - to 03:08:814 (4,5,6) - and ctrl H it, to make it more symmetrical
3. 03:20:942 (4,5) - yeah, i know it's an old mapping style in the old times. i get that u were following a vocal here, but the rhythm choice here is a bit weird though. would suggest to have a slider first on white tick instead, to make the vocal start more clickable

[cintaku masih sedang]

1. more like a bit hard diff ish
2. 02:10:410 (3,4) - this doesn't look like a perfect symmetry as u have done it from 02:08:495 (1,2) - 02:11:048 (1,2) - . set 02:10:410 (3) - at 294|346, then copy paste it, ctrl + h it to make it more perfect symmetry look

not much a bit of problem for an old mapping style like this, so xd

cari jodoh skali lah kek :v

gl

the sb, i think it's because of the sprite, because one of it edited to be a little darker. but i dont think it's a problem.
fixed the vocal mapping in susah ;p

updated!

Sedang

00:03:389 (1,2) - possibly something like this? Have more emphasis on 00:04:346 so making it clickable:
00:10:091 (2) - add finish here, same with the other difficulty
00:31:474 (1,1) - give more rest time after the spinner
00:43:601 (5,1) - doesn't follow the spacing of the rest
01:21:261 (3,4,1) - spacing irregularities
01:27:006 (3) - still could add something like a whistle at the end of the slider to end off the phrase
01:51:580 (2,3) - the gap feels odd, could tie up the gap between the red lines with a slider
02:36:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - quite a long phrase, could cut 02:40:091 (2) to just a circle

Susah

00:19:665 - the song here feels like there should be more emphasis here, you could make this clickable
00:26:048 (2,3) - the vocals drags on from 00:26:367 to 00:26:687 though, feels like a better place to put the slider, just like 00:27:006 (4,5)
00:36:580 - strong beat as well
01:11:048 (5,6) - you NCed this area in the other difficulty but not here though, I find the NC kinda odd and inconsistent. Likewise 02:27:644 (4,5,6)
01:26:846 - hitsound something to the snare here?
01:27:644 (7) - similar to the other difficulty
02:20:623 (4) - why 1/4 repeat slider here though, there is no apparent beat at 02:20:782
03:35:623 (2) - why is the finish on the start of the slider? The cymbals in the song are where the repeat arrow is at 03:35:942 and also at 03:36:580
03:42:325 - there's cymbals in the music here too


The NCing seems rather odd though, sometimes it feels like it is following the phrasing, sometimes the vocals, then sometimes it just seems not relating to either. I think more consistent usage could be used, and also have less variations where some are more than 4 beats, 6 or 8.


Good Luck!

Ahh been awhile from getting a mod. Thanks neonat. Will update soon

hel yeh, masih berjoeang selaloe.

soon(tm)

Terima kasih!
Updated most of it. Thanks neonat!

placeholder to taiko mod

(?)


General:

Don = d
Kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

> That BG is small --> take this
> In taiko diffs with notepad change [events] section >> 0,0,"bggggg.jpg",0,50 << --> 50 to 0 (if you change BG image)

Rank this !!!!

jangan menyerah >w<

xtrem3x wrote:

Perrykashii

• 
  
  00:31:155 - change this note to k --> have consistence with similar triples but here is more a change related to 2 vocal sounds. Changed~
  
  00:51:580 - Delete this note --> to emphatize next note with start kiai. Agreed
  01:12:006 - Same. Fixed
  
  01:27:325 - Change this note to k --> to emphatize next note with sequence change. I'm following the low drum beat in the music for this part though, so don would fit better
  
  01:31:793 - Change this note to k --> have high vocal sound. Yep, changed.
  
  01:47:750 - Delete this note --> to emphatize next note ok
  01:48:708 - Add finish in this note --> same aa I don't think a finisher here would be necessary, it'll just make this quiet part sound noisy imo
  
  02:10:091 - Change this note to k --> have same tone as next note. For this note, I'm following the slight and low "tok" sound in the music which sounds better when accompanied with a don
  02:15:197 - Same ^ Same for this.
  02:17:750 - Same No changed for this as well, this note has a low pitch
  02:20:304 - Same Same reason
  02:30:516 - Same Same reason
  02:35:623 - Same Same reason
  
  02:43:921 - Change this note to k --> to priorize next note (sequence change) Following the low drum beats for this section with dons, so no change for this.
  
  03:11:367 - Same as 02:10:091- This note has a low beat to it, better with don.
  
  03:20:463 - Delete Agreed, also changed 03:20:942 - to a don for better rhythm
  03:22:218 - Change this note to k --> with these 2 changes is more fitableemphatize last kiai time Decided to delete the note instead for consistency with all the previous kiai times
  
  03:26:687 - Same as 02:10:091- Same reason as above, low beat in the music, better accompanied with don.
  03:29:240 - Same ^

Thanks alot for the mod!

Jerry's Muzukashii Update

Thanks xtrem3x for the mod, I fixed most of it!
updated!

Giving my approval again for the STD difficulties! Sadly, I can't bubble taiko anymore, so you'll have to find a taiko BN :3

Kurai wrote:

Giving my approval again for the STD difficulties! Sadly, I can't bubble taiko anymore, so you'll have to find a taiko BN :3

Thanks!

general stuff only. (no kd)

[General]

1. We are very strict with metadata now. Based on Nicky Tirta's Official Youtube, you should change the artist to: Nicky Tirta - Vanessa Angel
2. Can be added to tag: Alam Urbach, Nagaswara
3. BG resolution is so low x_x here is resized bg to max resolution that Ranking Criteria can accept (1920 x 1200): http://puu.sh/wEv6B/a198c71a35.jpg
4. Maybe the SB sprites can be remade from the new BG for better resolution.

I think surono said he will check the taiko. I won't snipe him lol xD

Volta wrote:

general stuff only. (no kd)

[General]

1. We are very strict with metadata now. Based on Nicky Tirta's Official Youtube, you should change the artist to: Nicky Tirta - Vanessa Angel
2. Can be added to tag: Alam Urbach, Nagaswara
3. BG resolution is so low x_x here is resized bg to max resolution that Ranking Criteria can accept (1920 x 1200): http://puu.sh/wEv6B/a198c71a35.jpg
4. Maybe the SB sprites can be remade from the new BG for better resolution.

I think surono said he will check the taiko. I won't snipe him lol xD

ahh I skipped the no kd. someone revoke it pls lol


Will fix the sprites by tomorrow or in 2 days.

New post just for the bump and updated!
redownload, new bg and sprites.

Volta wrote:

I think surono said he will check the taiko. I won't snipe him lol xD

wes ta atur lah, nuwon bantuane.
tenang bang, ntar kalau selo atau gimana saya check lagi wwkwk. siap barbel gelembung melayang

xd

>Muzu
* 00:08:814 - could add kat here for noticeable drum
* 00:22:857 - kat for this sound? 00:21:899 - ~ 00:25:729 - kd/dk pattern orz
* 00:50:942 - add here d, since oni is dense in here
* 00:56:687 - emphasize da vocal.. rip kkd lovely pattern
* 01:25:091 - 01:26:048 - just finish these like oni?
* 01:29:240 - 01:30:516 - add d
* 02:07:538 - add
* 02:53:974 - add kat, oni pattern are looks yeah
* 03:24:772 - 03:27:325 - kat
still concern about this muzu, because i think the spread with oni is a bit far or colorless in patterning? overall density of this diff is really safe even its slow bpm, you could check again about density to balance with the oni since his diff kinda full mapped and makes more interesting on coloring your pattern as much as possible.

>Oni
mostly its about something weaks and accurate sounds, delete n move.
* 00:37:857 - 00:42:963 - 00:48:070 - delete
* 02:47:112 - move to 02:47:272 - here
* 03:00:516 - delete
* 01:49:506 - -> 01:49:346 - then 01:49:665 - delete

Surono wrote:

>Oni
* 03:00:516 - delete

Fixed others except this. Leaving there empty is really awkward for me, so I'm not deleting the note.
Waiting for Jerry.

Surono wrote:

>Muzu
* 00:08:814 - could add kat here for noticeable drum Alright
* 00:22:857 - kat for this sound? 00:21:899 - ~ 00:25:729 - kd/dk pattern orz Agreed, changed
* 00:50:942 - add here d, since oni is dense in here ok
* 00:56:687 - emphasize da vocal.. rip kkd lovely pattern Changed to kkd
* 01:25:091 - 01:26:048 - just finish these like oni? Switched it up abit with a triplet in this part
* 01:29:240 - 01:30:516 - add d Got it
* 02:07:538 - add okay
* 02:53:974 - add kat, oni pattern are looks yeah I think maintaining this kkk k pattern would be better, having a kkkkk here just feels weird imo. Plus, I'm following the triplet 1/4 spaced drum beat here at 02:53:495 - for this pattern
* 03:24:772 - 03:27:325 - kat Okay
still concern about this muzu, because i think the spread with oni is a bit far or colorless in patterning? overall density of this diff is really safe even its slow bpm, you could check again about density to balance with the oni since his diff kinda full mapped and makes more interesting on coloring your pattern as much as possible.

Thanks for the mod!

Here's my update: http://puu.sh/wK3WO/f3f43c30e2.rar

updated

cinta itu apa

both testd de tacos its okok oeg, don loverz. ^L_^

edit:
lol fixing bubble, w i d e s c r e e n.

Surono wrote:

cinta itu apa

sayang jangan sakiti aku.

thanks!


Fixed everything again. gg surono rep

hey idk what im doing with life, at least its about love. <3 haduh kelakuan si om om makin menjadi - _-

bgnya pedo-upil, " si om om perkantoran dan si gadis sekolah ".

kelakuan sb nya menjadi om om
everything is fixed now, thanks to Saten

edit: I missed "Neppu" in tags because Jerry just changed his username to that.

add that tag

normal
01:23:176 (1,2) - seems like a spacing mistake. if spacing is different for a blanket or whatever, try to like make that clearer lol
02:53:814 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - should like cut down on combo spam here. like 02:55:091 (1) - 02:57:644 (1) - removing ncs on those would be an okay way to do that

call me back!!!

added the tag, fixed both. Thanks pishifat!
Won't be changing jerry's diff name because the name is still new. People might not recognize.

nice

h

ooo time pass so fast p/4289235

Congratz!

mantab dengkuljiwa!!!!!!!111

Sungguh indah cintaku~

Congratulations! <3
Glad to see other country mapper mapping Indonesian song, thank you! <3

Thanks pishifat!

@Natsu, hahaha time flies. Thanks!

@Surono, woooohohohohoh xD

@KittyAdventure, Thanks and you are welcome. Thanks for noticing the map 4 years ago!

congrulation
It is finally qualifed your beatmap

Good job!

Thanks, Noctalove and Shiranai !