Sedang00:03:389 (1,2) - possibly something like this? Have more emphasis on 00:04:346 so making it clickable:
00:10:091 (2) - add finish here, same with the other difficulty
00:31:474 (1,1) - give more rest time after the spinner
00:43:601 (5,1) - doesn't follow the spacing of the rest
01:21:261 (3,4,1) - spacing irregularities
01:27:006 (3) - still could add something like a whistle at the end of the slider to end off the phrase
01:51:580 (2,3) - the gap feels odd, could tie up the gap between the red lines with a slider
02:36:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - quite a long phrase, could cut 02:40:091 (2) to just a circle
Susah00:19:665 - the song here feels like there should be more emphasis here, you could make this clickable
00:26:048 (2,3) - the vocals drags on from 00:26:367 to 00:26:687 though, feels like a better place to put the slider, just like 00:27:006 (4,5)
00:36:580 - strong beat as well
01:11:048 (5,6) - you NCed this area in the other difficulty but not here though, I find the NC kinda odd and inconsistent. Likewise 02:27:644 (4,5,6)
01:26:846 - hitsound something to the snare here?
01:27:644 (7) - similar to the other difficulty
02:20:623 (4) - why 1/4 repeat slider here though, there is no apparent beat at 02:20:782
03:35:623 (2) - why is the finish on the start of the slider? The cymbals in the song are where the repeat arrow is at 03:35:942 and also at 03:36:580
03:42:325 - there's cymbals in the music here too
The NCing seems rather odd though, sometimes it feels like it is following the phrasing, sometimes the vocals, then sometimes it just seems not relating to either. I think more consistent usage could be used, and also have less variations where some are more than 4 beats, 6 or 8.
Good Luck!