Hanatan - Romeo and Cinderella · forum

Xiaolin

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2014-05-10T16:16:36+00:00

-I suggest that the preview point should be at this time 01:10:165

-You should also add ''vocaloid 2'' in the tags, Miku is a Vocaloid 2

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

Topic Starter

captin1 2014-05-10T18:31:05+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
-I suggest that the preview point should be at this time 01:10:165 I like it where it's at

-You should also add ''vocaloid 2'' in the tags, Miku is a Vocaloid 2 not needed, doubt people really search that

thanks though!

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2014-05-13T06:30:18+00:00

rip Azer's Insane

[General]
cool

[Easy]
00:28:518 (2) - oot almost offscreen (and overlapping a lot with the hiterror window), might want to move it up a bit
00:58:871 (1) - make a blanket around 01:00:283 (2)
01:11:930 (2) - clap on start (a lot of missing claps in this section might want to check over it)
01:29:930 (3) - maybe a soft finish on the repeat since its in the music
01:36:989 (4) - NC here to indicate the hold would be great
02:12:636 (1,2) - might want to add some claps here to better fit the music, also missing a finish on 02:13:695 (1)
02:16:518 (3) - forgot NC
02:38:048 (2) - you could add a finish to accompany the kiai fountain
02:55:695 (2) - overlap the repeat of 02:53:224 (3)?
03:03:106 (4) - same as 01:36:989 (4)
03:27:106 (2,3,1) - maybe a crescendo effect here to match the rising volume of the music
03:32:753 (2) - almost offscreen again, but this doesn't overlap the hit error bar so up to you
04:14:400 (2) - clap on end
04:22:165 (4) - same as 01:36:989 (4)
the missing claps please catch em all

[AllStar's Normal]
Tick 2 like Easy/Hard?
00:39:989 (3) - clap on start
01:52:519 (1) - unnecessary NC
02:28:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this played a bit weird, you tried to follow some vocals for the first few objects but then you skipped over 02:29:753. you can try swapping 02:29:578 (5,6) for a 1/2 repeat slider
03:27:460 (4,5) - same as Easy, a crescendo effect here to reflect the volume raise would be great
04:02:048 (7) - maybe try something like this instead, would fit your patterns better:

SPOILER

nothing much to say about this diff, though i think you were too strictly covering for the 2/4 claps that a lot of possibilities in rhythm variation were lost

[Natsu's Hard]
00:36:283 (1) - add a finish here, its in the music
01:08:048 (1) - is this NC needed? i would add it on 01:08:577 (4) instead and remove NC on 01:09:106 (1)
02:11:577 (3,4,1) - this doesnt sound rhythmically correct, the finish is supposed to be at 02:12:106, and thats the downbeat as well. try something like this instead:

SPOILER

02:43:695 (2) - break this slider up to cover for the sound at 02:43:871
02:50:400 (1) - hmm finish doesnt really sound fitting here, especially because the vocals is stronger on 02:50:224
02:55:606 - add a note? you usually cover for the 1/4 vocals in the music
03:19:518 (3,3,3) - this is cool to use here, but the compound whistles just sound out of place, so maybe remove the ones at the slider ends
03:27:636 (3,4) - ctrl+g flows better imo
04:14:665 - add a note, the vocals are in 1/4; 04:15:548 (3) - this should be removed instead

[Insane]
tick rate 2? would make sv changes easier to identify
00:24:284 (1,2,1) - these should be the same combo to hint better at the 3/4 spacing
00:47:225 (6,7) - this is a bit harsh on weaker alternating players (like me), how bout 2 1/4 sliders instead
01:36:637 (1) - an example of how tick rate 2 would help
02:19:342 (1,3) - i'd try to make a blanket here and avoid the overlap if possible
02:33:460 (1) - missing a finish here
02:46:695 (3,4,5) - not a big fan of the large spacing difference here despite everything is in 1/4, i guess move 02:47:048 (4) more to the right would make it more flowy
03:28:166 (1,2) - rotate this 45 degrees (selection center) would give a better flow from 03:27:989 (6)
03:57:107 (2) - finish?
04:19:342 (1) - try something like this which conveys more flow:

SPOILER

04:30:460 (8,1) - these two should be a bit closer, the jump is quite harsh and easy to misread
04:34:695 (5) - this one too, mostly for the sake of difficulty reduction though since this pattern is more intuitive to play

let me know afterwards

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-05-13T07:11:51+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
[Natsu's Hard]

01:08:048 (1) - is this NC needed? i would add it on 01:08:577 (4) instead and remove NC on 01:09:106 (1) mmmm actually I'm unsure about this, since I just added the NC cause of the mini jumps 01:08:048 (1,2,3,4) - , but not sure lol, so yeah If you have a issue with this I can change it, keeped for now xD
02:43:695 (2) - break this slider up to cover for the sound at 02:43:871 I changed the rhythm instead, to a circle + 1/2 slider to fit the vocals
02:50:400 (1) - hmm finish doesnt really sound fitting here, especially because the vocals is stronger on 02:50:224 yeah, also I changed the rhythm a bit here too

thanks for mod

here is the cake:

SPOILER

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captin1

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Topic Starter

captin1 2014-05-13T08:37:03+00:00

"jonathanlfj"

rip Azer's Insane rip

[General]
cool

[Easy]
00:28:518 (2) - oot almost offscreen (and overlapping a lot with the hiterror window), might want to move it up a bit
00:58:871 (1) - make a blanket around 01:00:283 (2)
01:11:930 (2) - clap on start (a lot of missing claps in this section might want to check over it)
01:29:930 (3) - maybe a soft finish on the repeat since its in the music
01:36:989 (4) - NC here to indicate the hold would be great
02:12:636 (1,2) - might want to add some claps here to better fit the music, also missing a finish on 02:13:695 (1)
02:16:518 (3) - forgot NC
02:38:048 (2) - you could add a finish to accompany the kiai fountain
02:55:695 (2) - overlap the repeat of 02:53:224 (3)?
03:03:106 (4) - same as 01:36:989 (4)
03:27:106 (2,3,1) - maybe a crescendo effect here to match the rising volume of the music
03:32:753 (2) - almost offscreen again, but this doesn't overlap the hit error bar so up to you this one's fine imo
04:14:400 (2) - clap on end
04:22:165 (4) - same as 01:36:989 (4)
the missing claps please catch em all 6 month old hitsounding op

[Insane]
tick rate 2? would make sv changes easier to identify
00:24:284 (1,2,1) - these should be the same combo to hint better at the 3/4 spacing
00:47:225 (6,7) - this is a bit harsh on weaker alternating players (like me), how bout 2 1/4 sliders instead hmm nah I quite like this as is ~~gotta keep my ratio~~
01:36:637 (1) - an example of how tick rate 2 would help
02:19:342 (1,3) - i'd try to make a blanket here and avoid the overlap if possible
02:33:460 (1) - missing a finish here
02:46:695 (3,4,5) - not a big fan of the large spacing difference here despite everything is in 1/4, i guess move 02:47:048 (4) more to the right would make it more flowy
03:28:166 (1,2) - rotate this 45 degrees (selection center) would give a better flow from 03:27:989 (6)
03:57:107 (2) - finish?
04:19:342 (1) - try something like this which conveys more flow:

SPOILER

04:30:460 (8,1) - these two should be a bit closer, the jump is quite harsh and easy to misread
04:34:695 (5) - this one too, mostly for the sake of difficulty reduction though since this pattern is more intuitive to play

let me know afterwards

basically everything done, thanks!

also talked with natsu about that nc and decided to fix it

AllStar12

488 posts

Joined January 2013

AllStar12 2014-05-13T20:35:09+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
rip Azer's Insane

[AllStar's Normal]
Tick 2 like Easy/Hard?
00:39:989 (3) - clap on start
01:52:519 (1) - unnecessary NC
02:28:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this played a bit weird, you tried to follow some vocals for the first few objects but then you skipped over 02:29:753. you can try swapping 02:29:578 (5,6) for a 1/2 repeat slider
03:27:460 (4,5) - same as Easy, a crescendo effect here to reflect the volume raise would be great
04:02:048 (7) - maybe try something like this instead, would fit your patterns better:
SPOILER
nothing much to say about this diff, though i think you were too strictly covering for the 2/4 claps that a lot of possibilities in rhythm variation were lost

All fixed!

let me know afterwards