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Nightcore Princess G wrote:

Zero`s Insane
00:05:294 (2) - reverse selection,这里节奏是往下撇的,所以觉得这样合适
或者对于00:04:978 (1,2,3) -
移动不顺畅 前面慢速段流畅保持间距为主
00:07:978 (5,6,7) - 在只改变物件出现时间的前提下
这个感觉还可以不过到后面的角度不好
00:18:083 (5,6,7) -

联动上面一条意见 若采纳,请务必将00:18:873 (1) - 也reverse selection,嗯 7应该跳 所以你这个不合适
00:27:083 (3,4) - 就是觉得调换一下位置比较好…… 不 后面类似的vocal我当时叠了一个circle在slider头上
00:50:925 (3) - 移动到(260,224),也就是00:50:294 (5) - 的位置,然后滑条指向4 这样滑条走向太不自然了
00:53:452 (2,3) - 试验型意见 调换一下位置,也是没来由的觉得可以,但是觉得不大符合整张图的风格 确实太奇怪了
00:53:452 (2,3,4,5,6) -
234的弧线之后4直接往下拐不舒服 而且那两个滑条我比较喜欢同向来配合音效 而不是相向
01:07:189 (2) - 移动到(244,200),还是觉得这种角度和间距舒服,嗯 是还可以 不过破坏结构 打起来的话关系不大的 因为前面是原地三连 对于移动有缓和作用
01:08:136 (1,2) - 分别reverse selection,感觉这里还是条一下比较好 我这1已经是跳了 CTRL+G的话移动太牵强
01:19:347 (5,6) - 试验型意见 调换一下位置,感觉有些奇葩,不过貌似可以一试 不好 跳的时机错了 6的位置的clap 接后面的finish 才是应该跳的地方 5只是普通间距
01:23:452 (1,2) - 这里明显是八分拍的节奏啊,是刻意为之么? 完全没觉得是1/8 而且即使是的话也只会这样摆
01:45:399 (2,3,4,5) - 顺序改成2,5,3,4,这里果然还是转一圈好啊! 不你没理解我的flow的精髓 每个finish调转方向 现在这样5接后面的1非常爽的
02:03:399 (6,7) - 为何就是觉得换过来爽! 这个不错 我还改了后面一个类似地方的
02:15:794 (1,1,1) - 读图上会不会有障碍? 嗯NC去掉了 之前是叠着的 后来分开了之后没去掉NC
02:26:610 (1) - 取消nc,同时02:26:689 (2) - nc,似乎这样能更好读一些 把后面的串子打散了太奇怪了
02:49:189 (4) - nc 没有必要 HP6 不缺回血
02:53:768 (3) - reverse selection,配合4的位置,这样不失是个选择 不 那样反而不跳了 直线有够无聊
03:07:347 (2) - reverse selection 比较无聊的对称画圈 而且和3衔接不圆滑
@kanon_sayuri : 第一个是刻意的 我讨厌一直线 第二个改了 之前找人试图的时候也有被提到
thx for your mods
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Hello~
From qq req.


[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
本来说好上周搞定的结果还是拖到现在,实在是抱歉啦~
来看图~
EN两个难度quick check,明天得七点起。。
[Easy]
General
这个我就粗略一看了,感觉质量还是可以
Placement
01:24:715 (1,2) - blanket你懂得
02:54:241 (4,1) - 这个也是叠的。。也行吧,就是觉得没有展开
[ZZH's Normal]
General
Hmm,我看看是不是得写论文
首先得把aimod里面的间距问题搞定吧。。
我说的挺激,就当吐槽看吧233
spread不均匀,我想最好降星到4星
加油
Beats
我想说的是一定要考虑哪个note是跟哪个音,滑条头的击打感有没有道理;滑条尾这样结束好么,滑条为什么不在前一个音结束不在后一个音结束而是在这里结束;circle的击打感出来了么;如何用滑条来盖长音
00:03:715 (1,2) - 想说这里的节奏对于normal来说打起来憋,不如用之前的白线节奏,重音还是在白线上的
00:08:768 (4,1) - 这个感觉实在是不太好,4有一个重音然后note掉,等着人家唱完几个字,手上什么都不做只是等下一个滑条,滑条到了却跟了一句的倒数第二个字然后一直延伸到下一句的第一个字
00:11:452 - 这一段break也是为何好好的vocal不跟了呢。。
00:20:294 - 这种放空vocal的感觉实在是不好,况且我感觉00:18:873 (1) - 这个转盘本来应该是放在后边空白处作为过渡用的,却在这里盖了整整一句歌词
00:44:136 (4,1) - 本来是跟的钢琴声,这里的滑条1是有一种错位感
00:46:662 - 首先我不建议那样放1/2多折返在normal里,其次这里的音还是要跟上的
01:15:557 (1,2,3) - 这个三连跟的莫名,不清楚是跟什么,我建议这里vocal很明显,还是跟vocal,2处直接起滑条
01:16:504 (4,5) - god你跟的是鼓,即使说跟鼓,那也得看vocal啊。。如果vocal上面有鼓,你不来跟,反而去跟了没有vocal的鼓声,强弱也是差不多,这就是乱了
01:26:294 (5,6) - 这样的节奏型确实是难了
01:40:504 (1,2,3) - 这种跟的也是乱,跟vocal就好。。
01:42:241 (2) - 尾巴上是个长音,也是比较适合来给一个击打感
后边有一段鬼畜段,在转盘前摆的和节奏都还不错——除了blanket都要检查一下,有很多问题不一一吐槽
后边还是说跟的音轨乱02:26:610 (1,2,3) - 这里是在跟什么呢。。我建议跟钢琴,而且这里对normal难了
02:46:347 (2) - 滑条头上的击打感是觉得不知道在跟啥
02:46:347 (2,3,4) - 这里遮挡也是增加难度,而且展开也是好些
02:51:241 (2,3,1) - 节奏型说过了
Placement
00:22:189 (2,3) - 这个地方不重要,nazi一下,blanket没有包好,2的尾巴要离3近一点点,无妨。
00:53:452 (4,1) - 这个blanket歪的太厉害
01:43:504 (4,5) - 还是最基本先把blanket摆好
02:59:610 (5) - 这里我觉得note击打感出的奇怪另外这段弄得太难,全是1/2,这图bpm190啊。。
[Hard]
General
质量还是不错,很整洁
Beats
其实我是觉得整体节奏有的时候跟的不是特别明确
01:35:925 (5,6) - 这个地方我是觉得确实适合来跟vocal,我觉得5的击打感是在vocal上而6的头开在了一声鼓点上,这样?

02:12:241 (7) - 这个滑条我觉得击打时机是在没有把握好,似乎02:12:083 - 更加适合这个击打
02:51:715 (4,5) - 这里的节奏和前边提到的那个地方是一个道理01:35:925 (5,6)
(03:01:820 (4,5) - )
Placement
00:37:347 (1,2,3) - 我想这里第一,1,2之间没有叠好,第二,2,3之间我觉得也可以叠了,产生一种一顿一顿的感觉,会比较合曲
01:04:504 (1,2) - 神触往往会认为像这样的hold滑条间距很好接,不过我是觉得这两个滑条之间的间距确实大了
01:09:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - 位置下移一点会觉得顺一点
01:28:347 (5,6,7,8) - 考虑展开一些,这里挺适合放一点小跳
01:33:083 (4,5) - 我觉得从4到5会有一个比较大的角度,5可以往左移一点,不过由此后边一堆物件也要相应调整
02:02:610 (1) - 1更适合叠在2上边,似乎更加合曲
[Insane]
General
比较工整的排版,第一次看你的谱子感觉还是比较清新 :)
后边鬼畜段还是打不了,可能会提一些意见,总体质量到目前来说两个insane都不错
Beats
01:23:452 (6,7,8) - 这段跟的节奏不清晰,尤其是中间note7是在跟鼓而8的折返是在跟背后刺耳的音了,这个音的开头是在01:23:689 ,中间还有一段加强01:23:847 我感觉这样的节奏会显得混乱,可以试试在01:23:689、01:23:847 加note会好些,如果要这样跟的话还有好多音是得跟的,不过那样就要打1/8我感觉不好(虽然这样只是加一个note也不太好)
- 中间那一段鬼畜我听不太清,总是感觉跟的有一点乱
Placement
00:36:399 (6,1) - Nazi:blanket右边似乎没有包好,不过无大碍
00:54:399 (1) - 这个flow的话是拐个急弯了,刻意为之有理,不过我的建议还是稍微弯一下这个滑条来迎合flow
00:56:925 (1,2) - Nazi:其实不太想弄太多nazi不过既然看到了就说下,blanket,这个弧弯的还是差一点
01:14:610 (1,2,3) - 这种程度的叠歪了像是故意的,不过何必要增加这种不太整齐的梗呢。。
01:32:925 (4) - 跳了这一下,有点平底起高楼的感觉,这里没有那么强的跳的标志
01:36:557 (7,8) - 这个跳反flow也是缺少必要的标志。。我觉得8这个音没有那么重去强调
02:11:294 (4,5,6,7) - 我觉得这里叠起来不如打开会伸展些,如果这样叠起来是会有顿手的感觉
02:27:873 (1) - 从这个note开始这一小段02:29:373 (8,9) - 一直到这里我觉得往外展开比较好些,这全都缩在这底部了
02:29:373 (8,9) - 另外这个8,9叠在一起也是会觉得憋,这一小段实在可以来一点大间距的排列(其实我打不了,但是用鼠标划这一段的时候是觉得局促)
02:49:189 (3) - 我想这个note为之还是搞得远一点为好,有一种跳的快感,不过像这样叠在这里来突出后边一整段kiai的高位移的话我建议叠在尾巴上,就不要再让轨迹在往上折回来了
03:02:452 (7,8,9) - 我觉得这个可能flow比较粗糙,可以考虑让滑条带点弧度(这条慎重,因为我感觉像这种pattern应该挺适合这种难度,况且这是主观意见)
03:02:925 (9,1) - 诶。。这里算不算blanket呢。。我建议顺便blanket掉,这对于滑条美观都有补益

03:04:662 (7) - 我觉得这个滑条如果ctrl+G可能会更舒服,像这种突然减小的间距和突然顺了的flow我会觉得摸不着头脑,如采纳,ctrl+G之后可以适当弯曲弧度来顺应flow。
03:05:136 (9,10) - 嗯。。我觉得应该是故意使flow反向而增加难度,不过还是觉得绕起来顺手一点会舒服些,所以滑条10可以由凸变凹。
[Zero's Insane]
General
多数都是建议,也许有些还会有一点主观的感觉。。
后边那段我打不了,建议会比较少
Beats
00:17:610 (4,5,6) - 如果是现在这里的节奏的话不建议拐flow,从4到5的位置实际是要比到6的位置是要舒服的,有一个建议是这样:

我解释一下,听原曲的话会感觉原来6的尾巴上的音实际比头上的音强,这里如果改成这样的话虽然滑条还是尾巴比头强,但是也是跟前边滑条有一点联系的感觉,并且,后边的两个音是比较适合做成跳的,根据这个渐强我感觉5的尾巴到6 6到7的距离是逐渐增大的,而且改成这样flow是会顺一些,跟后边的note的距离也会适中的感觉,慎重考虑吧。。
Placement
00:10:662 (7) - 大概可以增加6,7 7,8之间的距离,因为从5到6是一个跳,而6到7则间距减小,这里的5,6,7应该是比较等价的距离关系
00:27:241 (4,5) - 这里的stack我觉得会有一种阻碍节奏发展的感觉,总感觉更适合展开放成跳
00:50:768 (2,3) - 3的距离是可以拉大的,不然这样的突然降低的距离会让人感觉不痛快
01:07:820 (4,1) - 挑刺:这里的blanket如果把滑条弧线向下拉一小下会更好
01:18:241 (1) - 碰到了右上角的进度条和分数表示,至少进度条是碰到了
01:19:504 (6) - 个人感觉这是一个过渡性的note,如果是放这样大的jump的话确实是有点过度强调的感觉
01:21:873 (5,1) - 参考01:20:610 (3,1) 的距离感,我觉得在这里放一个稍微大一点的跳也是比较合曲的
02:25:031 (6,1) - 感觉这是个坑点,flow逆着来而且距离也不小
Hitsound
01:23:610 (3,4) - 我柑橘这里的两个drum用的反而使打击感减弱了,暴力normal也许还比这个好些
NCs
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
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回黄书 窝昨晚写完没post出去就直接把网页关了orz
大概说一下吧 改的地方并不多 改了几个连续二分之一滑条
修复了一些blanket问题
但大部分beat没改
部分不太确定的地方找mapper商量了一下作出了相应改动
大概就这样orz
原谅我懒
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no kds
Zero's Insane
零翼啊刚才看mod的时候突然发现的

01:45:873 (5,1) - 的确这两个接起来很爽
不过我怎么打都有一点违和感 思考了一下 大概是因为 01:46:031 (1) - 这个滑条最后有个向顺时针方向的趋势
而01:46:504 (2) - 是逆时针的趋势
这两个的flow有些冲突
不如试试这样的滑条

接2的滑条更好一些 而且这也应该不会破坏你的重音转向的原则。。(01:46:189 -这里虽然是长白线也没有什么重音或者特殊的音也没有finish 所以没必要从逆时针转成顺时针对吧www)

另外1的距离离5太远了 蛋疼 建议左移16-20个坐标 (最好能让5到1和到4的距离相等)
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Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From qq req.
[Zero's Insane]
General
多数都是建议,也许有些还会有一点主观的感觉。。
后边那段我打不了,建议会比较少
Beats
00:17:610 (4,5,6) - 如果是现在这里的节奏的话不建议拐flow,从4到5的位置实际是要比到6的位置是要舒服的,有一个建议是这样:

我解释一下,听原曲的话会感觉原来6的尾巴上的音实际比头上的音强,这里如果改成这样的话虽然滑条还是尾巴比头强,但是也是跟前边滑条有一点联系的感觉,并且,后边的两个音是比较适合做成跳的,根据这个渐强我感觉5的尾巴到6 6到7的距离是逐渐增大的,而且改成这样flow是会顺一些,跟后边的note的距离也会适中的感觉,慎重考虑吧。。 节奏改了 位置不太一样
Placement
00:10:662 (7) - 大概可以增加6,7 7,8之间的距离,因为从5到6是一个跳,而6到7则间距减小,这里的5,6,7应该是比较等价的距离关系 只把7扔远了一点 叠到后面一个slider尾巴上了
00:27:241 (4,5) - 这里的stack我觉得会有一种阻碍节奏发展的感觉,总感觉更适合展开放成跳 这种stack不怎么毁flow的 我觉得这里的vocal就是让我想叠起来 后面还有两处差不多的地方也是
00:50:768 (2,3) - 3的距离是可以拉大的,不然这样的突然降低的距离会让人感觉不痛快 为什么你们都觉得这里近了 这里是正常间距啊 前面放了跳只是为了保证后面的角度流畅而已
01:07:820 (4,1) - 挑刺:这里的blanket如果把滑条弧线向下拉一小下会更好 不算很理解你的意思 现在这个距离下 左边的结构是比较整洁的 如果你是指blanket的大小 那确实是和其他一些位置的不太一样 但是这是没办法的 为了保持左边的距离
01:18:241 (1) - 碰到了右上角的进度条和分数表示,至少进度条是碰到了 只和前面一起往下拉了一格 没有空间了 为了保持间距
01:19:504 (6) - 个人感觉这是一个过渡性的note,如果是放这样大的jump的话确实是有点过度强调的感觉 它确实很远 但这只是为了保持左边的结构美观以及后面的角度流畅 那你觉得它能扔哪里呢 现在这个位置是很好的 不要不敢用大间距 有时候太拘谨了只会破坏流畅感
01:21:873 (5,1) - 参考01:20:610 (3,1) 的距离感,我觉得在这里放一个稍微大一点的跳也是比较合曲的 试着扔远了一些但是为了保持风格所以差别不是很大 我在非kiai部分的滑条形状都是三点弧线的
02:25:031 (6,1) - 感觉这是个坑点,flow逆着来而且距离也不小 稍微有点吧 关系不大 那里本来就是个向下砸的重音 可能角度转得急了一点
Hitsound
01:23:610 (3,4) - 我柑橘这里的两个drum用的反而使打击感减弱了,暴力normal也许还比这个好些 关系不大 我只是追求原曲而已 曲子里面那里本来就是低音鼓 1/6后面那八个音都是Normal就好了
NCs
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
@萨米: 无所谓的 打起来完全没有区别 都是在底下画一个逆时针的小椭圆绕到右边

thx for your mods
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水平不够,只能摸一点点


[Normal]
00:28:978 (1) - 可以再跟着词调整下扭动的时候,就是让滑条上的点点在扭方向的位置上
00:35:294 (1) - 柑橘有点偷懒……
00:44:610 (1) - 反过来效果更佳
00:48:715 (4,1) - 感觉这里也能做个炒鸡扭的滑条
00:56:925 (1,2,3,4) - 齐一点
01:17:136 (1,2,3) - 摆好看点?Orz
01:37:662 (7) - 往前半格
01:28:347 (3,1,2) - 3和12的节奏对称起来如何?
02:06:241 (1) - 感觉不带感,建议在前两格再扭一些
02:54:399 (1) - 遮……
03:06:399 (1,2) - 换成滑条吧

总体来说感觉排的有点乱,音效不会看;w;,虽然飞秋说不要太纠结包,但是我觉得NM还是适度包一包,因为滑条见存在的时间很长,工整度会很突出,以上

个人意见,祝贺早泡 :)
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axschiming wrote:

水平不够,只能摸一点点


[Normal]
00:28:978 (1) - 可以再跟着词调整下扭动的时候,就是让滑条上的点点在扭方向的位置上nope 这样会稍微美观一些不然不知道拉成什么样
00:35:294 (1) - 柑橘有点偷懒……flow没问题
00:44:610 (1) - 反过来效果更佳done
00:48:715 (4,1) - 感觉这里也能做个炒鸡扭的滑条多了会被喷死
00:56:925 (1,2,3,4) - 齐一点done
01:17:136 (1,2,3) - 摆好看点?Orz改了下滑条方向
01:37:662 (7) - 往前半格= =?
01:28:347 (3,1,2) - 3和12的节奏对称起来如何?nope
02:06:241 (1) - 感觉不带感,建议在前两格再扭一些nope 原因同前
02:54:399 (1) - 遮……= =?
03:06:399 (1,2) - 换成滑条吧nope

总体来说感觉排的有点乱,音效不会看;w;,虽然飞秋说不要太纠结包,但是我觉得NM还是适度包一包,因为滑条见存在的时间很长,工整度会很突出,以上

个人意见,祝贺早泡 :)苦苦 感觉呗针对 :?
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188,208,142820,6,0,P|144:148|88:140,1,99.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,120,143452,2,0,P|76:52|128:44,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,36,143925,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,32,144083,2,0,P|256:40|292:48,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,48,144715,2,0,P|380:124|368:172,1,99.9999999999999,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,244,145347,6,0,L|420:296,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,180,145978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,180,146294,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,80,146610,6,0,L|352:64,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,52,147241,2,0,P|172:68|152:104,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,140,147557,2,0,P|136:176|144:212,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,240,147873,6,0,P|140:272|128:320,2,50,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,180,148504,2,0,P|276:160|340:164,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,200,148978,2,0,P|396:224|472:224,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,220,149452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,136,149768,2,0,P|428:88|436:32,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,60,150399,6,0,B|288:52|252:76|252:76|232:64|232:64|188:88|140:68,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,148,151347,2,0,P|48:112|44:52,2,99.9999999999999,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,180,152294,2,0,P|196:240|180:312,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,368,152925,1,4,0:0:0:0:
432,192,163031,5,6,0:0:0:0:
232,188,163662,2,0,P|136:176|116:168,2,99.9999999999999,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,164925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,60,165557,6,0,P|200:92|184:124,2,99.9999999999999,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,68,166347,2,0,B|390:97|390:97|428:132|440:176,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,264,167136,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,340,167452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,168083,12,0,169189,0:0:0:0:
232,160,170610,6,0,P|272:104|312:84,1,99.9999999999999,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,48,171241,2,0,P|444:80|464:128,1,99.9999999999999,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,164,171715,6,0,B|444:172|416:172|416:172|348:228,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,304,172347,2,0,P|284:256|284:196,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,128,172978,2,0,P|224:144|204:168,1,99.9999999999999,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,208,173452,2,0,P|156:248|88:280,2,99.9999999999999,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,160,174241,6,0,P|236:108|308:108,1,99.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,196,174873,2,0,P|324:228|336:288,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,280,175504,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,280,175662,2,0,P|156:292|108:272,1,99.9999999999999,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,284,176294,2,0,B|36:232,1,50,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,136,176768,5,2,0:0:0:0:
116,76,177084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,164,177400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,108,177716,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,120,178031,5,0,0:0:0:0:
384,144,178189,2,0,P|416:184|396:272,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,272,178662,2,0,P|396:316|332:320,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,300,179136,2,0,P|256:292|204:320,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,320,179610,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,288,180083,2,0,B|84:256|84:256|184:228,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,2:2:0:0:
220,220,180715,6,0,P|192:164|72:116,1,150,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,108,181347,2,0,L|40:168,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,64,181820,6,0,P|144:32|224:40,1,99.9999999999999,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,182452,2,0,L|140:152,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,188,183083,2,0,L|164:248|164:248,1,99.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,292,183557,2,0,L|268:280,1,99.9999999999999,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,260,184189,5,8,0:0:0:0:
384,244,184347,2,0,P|428:188|408:128,1,99.9999999999999,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,92,184978,2,0,P|444:64|376:84,1,99.9999999999999,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,80,185452,6,0,L|280:104,2,50,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,80,186399,5,8,0:0:0:0:
184,128,186557,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,168,186873,2,0,P|340:140|404:152,1,99.9999999999999,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,80,187504,2,0,P|460:152|432:208,2,99.9999999999999,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,188294,12,0,193189,0:0:0:0:
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应为水平的限制,只能看一个难度了!Irie好厉害!

[ZZH'S Normal]

00:09:557 (4,1) - 这里中间可以加一个点,或者两个Note之间空的稍微大一点,一开始玩真的容易过早误触“4” 。
00:15:083 (2) - 加长半格。
00:44:136 (4) - 往前半格。
00:59:452 (1) - 觉得这里的spinner偏长,中间可以增加更多的Note。
02:49:612 - 这里后面跟着后面的音加上几个点如何?
02:08:610 (1) - 向前移动半格。
02:46:347 (2,3,4) - 同时向前移动半格

位置排的不错,但是一开始玩起来的时候会有种乱的感觉。节奏感不强,需要在摆放note的时候增强节奏感!多增加一些音效finishi或者clap的音效。

都是一些个人意见!祝你早泡!(其实我作图也是渣渣~~) :)
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mod from 15175731
专业骗分 爽11
17:51 *woshiguabi is watching MuryokuP - Aspirin [ZZH's Normal] |Autoplay|
17:52 ZZHBOY: 不要拉黑我啊
17:52 ZZHBOY: 苦苦哦;w;
17:53 woshiguabi: 很多节奏有问题啊
17:53 woshiguabi: 要不要我送你个irc mod
17:53 ZZHBOY: 对也不对
17:53 ZZHBOY: 可
17:54 woshiguabi: 你把自己想象成一个10Wrank的新手
17:54 woshiguabi: 就知道了
17:54 woshiguabi: 当然有部分我很欣赏
17:54 ZZHBOY: 这图原来4.5星
17:54 woshiguabi: 不过开头简直蠢
17:54 ZZHBOY: 对啊 我真不会跟啊
17:55 woshiguabi: 我从开头开始喷
17:55 woshiguabi: 你开edit
17:55 woshiguabi: 00:01:347 (1,2,1) -
17:56 woshiguabi: 第一个
17:56 ZZHBOY: 00:06:399 (1,2,3,4) -
17:56 ZZHBOY: 这段到底怎么下
17:56 woshiguabi: 等下 我排位开了 我先去打完
17:56 ZZHBOY: 哦对了irie那zz没更新操
17:56 ZZHBOY: 好
18:29 woshiguabi: 在?
18:29 woshiguabi: 输了 黄金梦美丽
18:35 woshiguabi: 3分钟不说话 你mod也美丽
19:07 ZZHBOY: 美丽
19:07 woshiguabi: hhh
19:07 woshiguabi: 你已经死了
19:07 ZZHBOY: 别拉黑我啊
19:08 woshiguabi: 88 你让我等了你半个小时
19:08 ZZHBOY: 爷爷 我要吃饭
19:09 woshiguabi: 嘛 原谅你一次好了
19:09 woshiguabi: 快开edit
19:09 ZZHBOY: 开了啊
19:09 woshiguabi: 00:01:347 (1,2,1,2) -
19:09 woshiguabi: 这个啊
19:09 woshiguabi: 摆放间距问题
19:11 woshiguabi: http://puu.sh/6p4jV.jpg
19:12 woshiguabi: 你可以看到 两个的节奏是一样的 但是摆放距离不一样
19:12 ZZHBOY: 靠 怎么有这种问题
19:12 ZZHBOY: 我记得我aimod了好多遍
19:12 woshiguabi: 你信aimod?
19:13 ZZHBOY: 信
19:13 woshiguabi: 当然摆放是我的弱项 但是这个太明显
19:14 woshiguabi: 1和2之间的距离 根据调整调整一下
19:14 woshiguabi: 根据节奏
19:15 ZZHBOY: done
19:15 woshiguabi: 00:03:399 (3) - 还有这个地方建议加一个note
19:16 ZZHBOY: ?
19:16 woshiguabi: 就是在2下面放一个重叠的
19:16 woshiguabi: 3
19:17 woshiguabi: 我其实也是刚刚才看到
19:17 woshiguabi: 因为后面00:03:715 (1,2,3) -
19:17 woshiguabi: 这个地方我建议把滑条缩短以后加一个note
19:17 woshiguabi: 然后前面也要修改一下 听起来就好一点
19:18 ZZHBOY: 这图原来的扬子和你说的一样
19:18 ZZHBOY: 然后我都删了
19:18 ZZHBOY: 降难度
19:18 woshiguabi: 》
19:18 woshiguabi: 。
19:18 woshiguabi: 讲个鸡巴
19:19 woshiguabi: 争当鬼畜麻婆
19:19 ZZHBOY: map for fun
19:19 ZZHBOY: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/142659
19:20 woshiguabi: so
19:20 woshiguabi: 你改还是不改 弄完我说下一个(手动扇子笑
19:21 ZZHBOY: next
19:21 woshiguabi: http://puu.sh/6p4DS.jpg
19:22 woshiguabi: 然后就是你问我的地方
19:22 woshiguabi: 这个地方我也不是做的挺好
19:22 woshiguabi: 00:06:399 (1,2,3) -
19:22 ZZHBOY: wa
19:22 woshiguabi: 不过这个应该是这样不错
19:22 woshiguabi: 后面的就自己感觉不太好
19:23 woshiguabi: 00:08:768 (8,1) -
19:23 woshiguabi: 还有这个为什么间隔这么久 很多人要点快
19:24 ZZHBOY: 活该 叫他们不好好读图 反正他们喜欢retry
19:24 ZZHBOY: `_>`
19:25 woshiguabi: http://puu.sh/6p4Lg.jpg
19:25 woshiguabi: 后面的我又改了下
19:25 woshiguabi: 这样应该听起来好一点
19:25 woshiguabi: 但是摆放就比较重要了 要让别人容易读一点
19:27 woshiguabi: 我想打死你啊
19:29 woshiguabi: 暴打
19:29 woshiguabi: 继续
19:30 ZZHBOY: 苦苦
19:30 woshiguabi: 好 这个地方还有没有疑问
19:30 ZZHBOY: mei
19:31 woshiguabi: next
19:34 woshiguabi: 01:15:557 (1,2,3) -
19:34 woshiguabi: 这个地方有些zz
19:35 woshiguabi: http://puu.sh/6p57L.jpg
19:35 woshiguabi: 这样
19:36 woshiguabi: 01:18:399 (3,4) -
19:36 woshiguabi: 滑条4往前面移动半拍
19:38 woshiguabi: 01:21:241 (2,3) -
19:38 woshiguabi: 滑条2缩短半拍 后面接个note
19:38 woshiguabi: 01:22:504 (2) -
19:39 woshiguabi: 缩短半拍
19:39 ZZHBOY: nope
19:40 woshiguabi: 好
19:40 woshiguabi: 主要是这个地方听起来很怪
19:46 woshiguabi: 哭了 大鸽
19:46 ZZHBOY: yy
19:46 ZZHBOY: yeye
19:46 woshiguabi: 后面还有地方要改 看不看了
19:47 ZZHBOY: lai
19:47 woshiguabi: 02:43:662 (2) -
19:47 woshiguabi: 改成1/3 加长1/3拍
19:48 ZZHBOY: no
19:48 ZZHBOY: next
19:50 woshiguabi: 妈的 没了
19:50 ZZHBOY: 尼嘻嘻
19:50 woshiguabi: 这个滑条明显要加长1/3拍才好啊
19:50 ZZHBOY: 我真是神马坡
19:50 woshiguabi: 00:10:978 (4) - 那你告诉我为什么这个地方要break
19:51 ZZHBOY: 音轨转换
19:51 woshiguabi: 00:12:557 (1) -
19:51 woshiguabi: 你大不了在这个地方加个note啊
19:51 woshiguabi: 为什么要break
19:51 ZZHBOY: no
19:53 woshiguabi: 00:28:978 (1) - 还有这个滑条起点感觉很奇怪
19:53 woshiguabi: 也应该用note接滑条啊
19:54 woshiguabi: 00:42:873 (3,4,1) - 前面的滑条不应该在红线开始
19:55 woshiguabi: 部队
19:55 woshiguabi: 反正这个地方就是听着不爽
19:55 ZZHBOY: zzz
19:56 ZZHBOY: 反正给playerdt玩 要是BAT要改我就公司
19:56 ZZHBOY: 该
19:56 woshiguabi: http://puu.sh/6p5Uu.jpg
19:57 woshiguabi: 既然是DT图 这个地方的滑条换成3个单点也是比较爽
19:57 ZZHBOY: 那些3个4个note连续的梗建议全改简单点
19:59 woshiguabi: 送分不好吗
20:00 woshiguabi: 我知道了
20:00 woshiguabi: 00:44:610 (1) -
20:00 woshiguabi: 这个滑条你缩短半拍试试
20:02 woshiguabi: 00:45:873 (1) - 那么这个就要多折返一次
20:03 ZZHBOY: 缩短了
20:05 woshiguabi: 02:06:241 (1,2) -
20:05 woshiguabi: http://puu.sh/6p6gv.jpg
20:06 woshiguabi: 我看mod里面有说到节奏感不强的问题
20:07 woshiguabi: 好 我要喷的就这些 不愧是智障波
20:08 ZZHBOY: ...
20:08 ZZHBOY: ;w;
20:08 woshiguabi: zz
20:10 woshiguabi: 我再跟你说一遍 02:43:662 (2) - 这个滑条真的不对劲 不喜欢1/3可以换成别的
20:10 woshiguabi: http://puu.sh/6p6qP.jpg
20:10 woshiguabi: 我用1/3听起来挺好的啊
20:11 ZZHBOY: 苦苦
20:11 ZZHBOY: 怎么啦啊
20:11 woshiguabi: 反正1/2听起来不爽
20:13 woshiguabi: ;w;
20:13 woshiguabi: 殴打一波智障
20:13 woshiguabi: 感觉好爽~!
20:13 ZZHBOY: 苦苦
20:14 woshiguabi: 我能不能拿去骗分了
20:14 woshiguabi: 看我这么仔细 只mod一个难度也应该能骗吧
20:14 ZZHBOY: 发把
20:14 ZZHBOY: 嗯
20:15 woshiguabi: 好 savelog

谁认识这位智障男孩?(图)
来源:网易新闻


  本报讯 8日上午,一名智障小男孩被丹阳练湖派出所送到该市救助管理站。因男孩有语言障碍,不能提供自身准确信息,丹阳市救助站通过本报向社会求助,希望其家人或知情者见报后速与丹阳市救助站联系。

  丹阳市救助站工作人员介绍,这名男孩是8日早晨在丹阳河阳联观村一水塘失足落水后被村民及时救起的。小男孩身高约1米40,体重70斤左右。当工作人员问其姓名和家庭住址时,他却毫无反应。根据经验工作人员判断该男孩属智力障碍。丹阳市救助站寻亲热线:0511―86576119。
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17:07 IamKwaN: 看過你的Normal 沒啥問題
17:08 Irie Miyuki: 谢谢O O
17:08 IamKwaN: 只是02:10:189 (3,4) (3)可能CTRL+G 更好XD
17:08 IamKwaN: 02:10:189 (3,4) - 02:10:189 (3,4) -
17:08 IamKwaN: 02:10:189 (3,4) -
17:09 Irie Miyuki: 啊哈哈这里本来我放的是2个折返的滑条 后来为了降星改成一个折返了
17:09 IamKwaN: 還有就是02:49:189 (2) -
17:09 IamKwaN: 喔喔XD
17:09 IamKwaN: 跟02:48:083 (1) - 成一直線flow會更好
17:09 Irie Miyuki: o.o没注意这个
17:10 IamKwaN: 其他真的沒有了233
17:10 Irie Miyuki: 233 谢谢啦>.< 如果要kd的话就post到论坛里吧
17:10 IamKwaN: lol 那我來騙KD了
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路边的草泥马,你真的好漂亮啊~
冲啊草泥马!撞死美雪和风铃!你们俩就是一鬼畜二人组,祝早死。


[General]


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[Easy]

  1. Easy感觉节奏不太好,梗挺好
  • Rhythm
  1. 00:23:452 (3,4) - 按照正常打法,一般都会打4的尾巴,建议把4再顺时针旋转一些。况且4的音很低,听起来越听越打越不舒服...
  2. 00:24:083 (4,1,2) - 1的位置有些高,咱觉得像这种高度就挺好,虽然
  3. 00:27:873 (4) - 这个也一样啊,原音乐完全没音,但是就出现了。音游节奏为主,好看为辅啊,这节奏都出问题了.....
  4. 00:35:452 (3,2) - 这两个有没有blanket关系啊?
  5. 00:36:715 (1,2) - 这个梗从1到2的角度有点问题,突然前面圆滑直接到这里变成锐角不舒服。
  6. 00:39:252 (1) - 这个地方来个note然后spinner往后推1/4如何?然后尾巴加一个finish?
  7. 00:48:715 (1) - 咱建议往下挪到88|280左右。
  8. 00:53:136 (2,1) - 这个遮挡貌似没有理由存在啊。
  9. 00:54:399 (1,2) - 这个梗的话,个人认为2应该在192|24这种地方附近flow好,并且也好看些
  10. 01:08:925 (2,3) - 尾巴你这样放放好看也不难打,之前的flow根据2应该往上放点。
  11. 02:02:621 (1) - 180|88
  12. 02:09:568 (3,1) - 这两个完全不是一个combo。咱觉得1其实应该和2合作,组成一个flow比较好的combo。
  13. 02:25:200 (1,2,3,4) - 之前的节奏感觉一点打击感都没,一拳打到云彩上,咱觉得下面这个节奏不错,后面的02:27:884 (1,2,1,2) -咱也建议这样搞,不然全1|4太可怕了。
  • Sound Effect
  1. 02:12:726 (1) - 尾巴的finish别丢咯
  2. 03:08:305 (1) - spinner尾巴的finish呢


[Normal]

  1. Normal赠送32个赞。
  • Rhythm
  1. 00:51:241 (3) - 这里应该加一个音效,不然听起来太奇怪了,节奏变得怪怪的
  2. 01:01:662 - 缺一个声音,一个clap声音,和之前在01:01:031 - 歌曲的声音一样那种
  3. 01:47:294 (1) - 如图往下来一点好像flow更好些
  • Sound Effect
  1. 00:39:241 (1) - Finish
    03:08:452 (1) - Finish


[Hard]

  • Rhythm
  1. 00:04:347 (2,3) - 咱不理解这个梗,打起来这么不爽,为啥都喜欢用
  2. 00:27:399 (4) - 前面vocal更前面是跟歌曲节奏,而这里 00:27:557 - 这里明显没vocal音,真是难受,虽然打起来感觉不到节奏但是还是不舒服。
  3. 00:53:768 (3) - 根据flow这里不应该是向反方向来么,要是按照你这儿的方向。。。太难受。。
  4. 01:05:768 (1,2,3) - 莫名的违和,打起来有点绕。
  5. 01:45:557 (3) - 这样摆flow会好点的。
  6. 01:48:241 (4) - ctrl+g换过来比之前顺溜多了。
  7. 01:48:557 (1) - 和前一个的承接做的不是很好。形状可能不太好看,但是这样flow会好很多的。
    272,244,108557,6,0,B|192:252|192:252|152:276|148:336,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    264,152,109189,6,0,B|344:144|344:144|384:120|388:60,2,160
  8. 02:06:241 (1) - 这方向flow不太好,咱也不知道怎么改这个=。=
  9. 02:07:347 (3,1) - 听着音乐这是个重音,所以咱觉得这里如果是个跳可能会更好。
  10. 02:18:873 (3,6) - 这个没叠好
  11. 03:03:083 (1,4) - 同没叠好
  • Sound Effect
  1. ~

[Insane]

  1. 狗,打死人得了>_>
  • Rhythm
  1. 00:04:504 (3) - 根据前面,咱觉得这个地方应该使用1.0ds,和前面保持一致会好些。
  2. 00:56:925 (1,2,3) - 这种梗个人感觉打起来不是很舒服。如果落在4的尾巴那个地方感觉就听好了。
  3. 01:03:557 (7,8,9) - 这是一个combo的话,这里的flow就有点小问题了
  4. 01:07:978 (4) - ctrl+g
  5. 01:21:241 (6,7) - 这俩如果不是一个combo的话,这个梗还是挺好的,但是这俩是一个combo
  6. 01:22:978 (4) - 这样flow好些
  7. 01:24:162 (9) - nc?
  8. 01:28:978 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - 这个梗真是好啊,赞一个。
  9. 01:30:557 (5) - 这个和4的flow不是很好,打起来有点难受。
  10. 01:33:715 (7) - 以前这个打起来难受,试试咱下图这个。
  11. 01:36:557 (7,8) - 这个8上面并没有重音啊,跳有些不合适。
  12. 01:38:768 (7,8,9,10) - 稍微改了改,感觉flow好了些。可参考。
    344,120,98768,2,0,P|305:94|291:49,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    128,124,99083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    215,125,99241,2,0,P|254:151|268:196,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    188,324,99557,2,0,P|225:320|264:280,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  13. 03:00:162 (2,4) - 这俩没盖好
  14. 03:02:610 (8) - ctrl+g
  • Sound Effect
  1. ~


[Zero's Insane]

  1. 难打,打图水平不足,确实不好摸啊
  • Rhythm
  1. 00:02:452 (4,5,6,7) - 不好看。
  2. 00:07:504 (4,5,6,7) - 还是梗不好看。
  3. 00:18:083 (5,7) - 268|128
  4. 00:20:136 (4,5,6,7) - 这个移动方向扭转稍显别扭,打起来有不舒服的感觉。
  5. 00:24:399 (2,3,4,5) - 45这个跳太大了,和前面23就不是一个级别的。所以打起来有断层,几次都出了这个问题。
  6. 00:26:294 (7,8,9,10,1) - 往下来一点,你这个位置打起来有些奇怪的感觉。
  7. 00:34:978 (5,6) - 强烈建议后面这个三角加大距离,技能打起来有感觉,也没有堆积在一起看不清的感觉了。
  8. 00:48:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 由于后面的跳可以说是非常的大,于是这里的起跳部分做的就不是很好了,这里的跳非常小,没办法支撑后面的大跳。换句话说,就是起跳准备做的不足。
  9. 01:01:347 (4,5,6,7) - 这个遮挡的咱完全看不清,不知道别人能看清不,顺便,咱的读图能力不是很强。
  10. 01:19:504 (6) - 根据歌曲这个是一个重音没错,但是根据后面的slider的话,个人认为这个1还是离1近一点会比较好些,毕竟一个1/1 slider节奏还是比较空的。
  11. 01:52:189 (5,6) - 6离5近一点吧,6这里本来就没感觉到什么应该跳的理由,或者把6挪到144|264左右构成flow弧形,这样比较符合逻辑。
    后面太难打了,实在没办法看了
  • Sound Effect
  1. ~


------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
posted

Rotte wrote:

路边的草泥马,你真的好漂亮啊~
冲啊草泥马!撞死美雪和风铃!你们俩就是一鬼畜二人组,祝早死。


[General]


  1. offset+11
ok

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------


[Easy]

  1. Easy感觉节奏不太好,梗挺好
因为重音都是红线起我都放白线

  • Rhythm
  1. 00:23:452 (3,4) - 按照正常打法,一般都会打4的尾巴,建议把4再顺时针旋转一些。况且4的音很低,听起来越听越打越不舒服... 我觉得还ok啊
  2. 00:24:083 (4,1,2) - 1的位置有些高,咱觉得像这种高度就挺好,虽然 ..没说完?
  3. 00:27:873 (4) - 这个也一样啊,原音乐完全没音,但是就出现了。音游节奏为主,好看为辅啊,这节奏都出问题了..... 不不 因为我不觉得玩easy的能点准红线
  4. 00:35:452 (3,2) - 这两个有没有blanket关系啊? 没有
  5. 00:36:715 (1,2) - 这个梗从1到2的角度有点问题,突然前面圆滑直接到这里变成锐角不舒服。 就是想要突兀的感觉啊么么哒
  6. 00:39:252 (1) - 这个地方来个note然后spinner往后推1/4如何?然后尾巴加一个finish?
  7. 00:48:715 (1) - 咱建议往下挪到88|280左右。 那ds就不对了 往下挪了一下
  8. 00:53:136 (2,1) - 这个遮挡貌似没有理由存在啊。打死你orz 我蛇形滑条刚好挡不住的 改了
  9. 00:54:399 (1,2) - 这个梗的话,个人认为2应该在192|24这种地方附近flow好,并且也好看些 换形状了
  10. 01:08:925 (2,3) - 尾巴你这样放放好看也不难打,之前的flow根据2应该往上放点。 ...这有啥的
  11. 02:02:621 (1) - 180|88
  12. 02:09:568 (3,1) - 这两个完全不是一个combo。咱觉得1其实应该和2合作,组成一个flow比较好的combo。 我是顺着就过去了=。=
  13. 02:25:200 (1,2,3,4) - 之前的节奏感觉一点打击感都没,一拳打到云彩上,咱觉得下面这个节奏不错,后面的02:27:884 (1,2,1,2) -咱也建议这样搞,不然全1|4太可怕了。 还是不敢放红线
  • Sound Effect
  1. 02:12:726 (1) - 尾巴的finish别丢咯 觉得不适合finish啊 没放
  2. 03:08:305 (1) - spinner尾巴的finish呢 ok


[Normal]

  1. Normal赠送32个赞。么么哒
  • Rhythm
  1. 00:51:241 (3) - 这里应该加一个音效,不然听起来太奇怪了,节奏变得怪怪的 有whistle在的啊
  2. 01:01:662 - 缺一个声音,一个clap声音,和之前在01:01:031 - 歌曲的声音一样那种 那个snare是在后边那条红线上 放了不合适
  3. 01:47:294 (1) - 如图往下来一点好像flow更好些
  • Sound Effect
  1. 00:39:241 (1) - Finish
    03:08:452 (1) - Finish
改没改同easy么么哒


[Hard]

  • Rhythm
  1. 00:04:347 (2,3) - 咱不理解这个梗,打起来这么不爽,为啥都喜欢用 因为对三角
  2. 00:27:399 (4) - 前面vocal更前面是跟歌曲节奏,而这里 00:27:557 - 这里明显没vocal音,真是难受,虽然打起来感觉不到节奏但是还是不舒服。 加了条绿线改了音量
  3. 00:53:768 (3) - 根据flow这里不应该是向反方向来么,要是按照你这儿的方向。。。太难受。。 我觉得挺好啊么么哒
  4. 01:05:768 (1,2,3) - 莫名的违和,打起来有点绕。 应该是个向上的趋向的
  5. 01:45:557 (3) - 这样摆flow会好点的。 我他妈强迫症患者难受死 就是想放在以前留下的印上 殴打
  6. 01:48:241 (4) - ctrl+g换过来比之前顺溜多了。 想强调那几个鼓点然后特地有一个拉左右拉过来的感觉O O
  7. 01:48:557 (1) - 和前一个的承接做的不是很好。形状可能不太好看,但是这样flow会好很多的。 这个形状的滑条我再也不想用了=。= 你等我思考一下滑条形状吧
    272,244,108557,6,0,B|192:252|192:252|152:276|148:336,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    264,152,109189,6,0,B|344:144|344:144|384:120|388:60,2,160
  8. 02:06:241 (1) - 这方向flow不太好,咱也不知道怎么改这个=。= 其实现在看看好像横着过去好些 但是如果换了我后面就gg了
  9. 02:07:347 (3,1) - 听着音乐这是个重音,所以咱觉得这里如果是个跳可能会更好。 前面后面也是 但是我都放的ds啊么么哒
  10. 02:18:873 (3,6) - 这个没叠好
  11. 03:03:083 (1,4) - 同没叠好 ^
  • Sound Effect
  1. ~

[Insane]

  1. 狗,打死人得了>_> 鬼畜先锋Irie 么么哒
  • Rhythm
  1. 00:04:504 (3) - 根据前面,咱觉得这个地方应该使用1.0ds,和前面保持一致会好些。 我前后都是1.5x =_=
  2. 00:56:925 (1,2,3) - 这种梗个人感觉打起来不是很舒服。如果落在4的尾巴那个地方感觉就听好了。 有人提过这个 而且提供的方案跟你一样 但是我改了一段觉得不好 又换回来了
  3. 01:03:557 (7,8,9) - 这是一个combo的话,这里的flow就有点小问题了 我觉得蛮好啊么么哒
  4. 01:07:978 (4) - ctrl+g 故意的啊
  5. 01:21:241 (6,7) - 这俩如果不是一个combo的话,这个梗还是挺好的,但是这俩是一个combo 同上上
  6. 01:22:978 (4) - 这样flow好些 还是故意的 一直blanket blanket的没意思了
  7. 01:24:162 (9) - nc? ok
  8. 01:28:978 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1) - 这个梗真是好啊,赞一个。 擦 我以为这是前面六角的那个 你他妈居然跟我说这个 苦苦
  9. 01:30:557 (5) - 这个和4的flow不是很好,打起来有点难受。换了下滑条方向
  10. 01:33:715 (7) - 以前这个打起来难受,试试咱下图这个。 =_= 好的改了 明明没啥不一样啊
  11. 01:36:557 (7,8) - 这个8上面并没有重音啊,跳有些不合适。 不算跳啊O O
  12. 01:38:768 (7,8,9,10) - 稍微改了改,感觉flow好了些。可参考。 我挺喜欢现在这样的=。=
    344,120,98768,2,0,P|305:94|291:49,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    128,124,99083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    215,125,99241,2,0,P|254:151|268:196,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    188,324,99557,2,0,P|225:320|264:280,1,95,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  13. 03:00:162 (2,4) - 这俩没盖好 fixed
  14. 03:02:610 (8) - ctrl+g 那8到9就太跳了 寿司熊
小猫么么哒
posted
Mod request from Popner's Modding Team

  1. Red - Unrankable
  2. Purple - Highly recommended
  3. Black - You'd better fixed
  4. Gray - Just suggestion
  5. d=don D=big don
    k=kat K=big kat
  • General
  1. 01nsane和其它难度Timing不一样(顺带一提我觉得01的Timing才是准的)
  2. 把Normal的宽屏Storyboard支持点掉

    Easy
  3. Fine...

    Normal
  4. Fine!

    Hard
  5. 02:03:726 (1) - 见Insane 后同
  6. 没有什么大的问题 就是你全跟vocal之后音效变得断断续续=,=感觉不是很舒服

    Insane
  7. 00:36:726 (1) - remove clap
  8. 01:08:305 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 干脆变成正三角形吧(567放在8910的中点处)
  9. 01:51:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - *nazi* 1 grid right 这样01:51:726 (9) - 看着更像五角星的中心
  10. 02:03:726 (1) - 这种弯折有点打擦边球的感觉 尽量前后不要留没弯的地方不然以后可能会出事
  11. 02:06:252 (1) - ^
  12. 02:08:779 (1) - ^
  13. 02:12:726 (1) - 这段piano其实是展现做图技巧的好段 不map太可惜了
  14. 02:22:515 (3) - CTRL+G 打的更顺
  15. 03:07:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - *nazi* 全选后把1移到264:304 理由同上一个*nazi*

    Zero's Insane
  16. 顺带一提我觉得可以叫Extra
  17. 00:02:925 (5) - 我感觉你的whistle下法应该是跟vocal的重音 那么这个whistle应该移除 第一很容易能听出来这个音和前后1/2的两个vocal同样轻 比另外两个加whistle的地方轻 其次你随后的许多类似段这个位置都没有加whistle
  18. 00:10:347 (6,8) - 加whistle(8在开头加)根据vocal的声调变化
  19. 00:15:715 (7) - missing whistle
  20. 00:38:136 - 这里有个vocal不跟么
  21. 00:38:452 (1,2) - 人性
  22. 01:26:294 (3) - unranked slider
    之后的地方难度太大我不会摸
    后面的音效感觉就是凭感觉下的也没什么规律 听着不错就不多说了


That's all.. Good Luck :D
posted
@小猫:微调了开始段落那几个note的位置
@欧尼酱:那几个音效都加了 其他的都没什么
thx for your mods~
updated
posted
Late mod post is late. -w-"

[Easy]
00:01:336 (1) - This needs a fixed length BADLY.
01:04:504 (1) - A finish at its end?
01:37:189 (1) - A lot of overused finishes in this chorus, you should aim for a spread like in the second one.
02:03:715 (1) - And a lot of overused new combos in this section.

[Normal]
00:02:452 (1) - The new combos are pretty much overused in this whole beginning. Please delete some of them (like every second one).
02:10:820 (4) - Add a finish.

[Hard]
00:19:662 (2) - This note might have been placed prettier, but it's not a big problem.
00:50:610 (1) - Overused new combos. Delete the new combo on every second section from now on.
01:05:136 (3) - You might want to move this a little higher so its easier to hit for players that are still learning the game.
01:23:452 (6) - New combo.
02:19:031 (4) - That jump might be confusing. Use a new combo here so it's easier to notice.
02:48:715 (2) - Shorten it by 1/2?

Good enough, I guess.

[Insane]
01:05:136 (1) - A finish here?
02:26:452 (6) - You might want to rorate it a little bit so it covers (7)'s beginning, like that: http://puu.sh/71eVZ.jpg
02:58:031 (12,1,2) - I was close to thinking that this was a 1/4. Improve the distance snap here.

Nothing much that I could complain about. The hitsounding might have been better, but that's it.

[Zero's Insane]
00:28:820 (8) - This clap feels overused.
00:31:662 (1) - Decrease the distance between the previous note a little bit so it's easier to hit it without breaking the reverse slider.
00:39:241 (2) - Just a personal opinion: this jump is way too overmapped. Provided people complain about it, I'd consider changing that.
01:09:241 (4,5,6,7,8) - This might look a lot better if you rearranged some of the first notes.
02:10:820 (3) - A finish here?
02:48:083 (1) - ^

Looks sweet.


Aaand that's it. Good luck~
posted

rEdo wrote:

Late mod post is late. -w-"

[Zero's Insane]
00:28:820 (8) - This clap feels overused. it's fine to me, as there's quite the same sound as 00:28:504 -
00:31:662 (1) - Decrease the distance between the previous note a little bit so it's easier to hit it without breaking the reverse slider. considerate
00:39:241 (2) - Just a personal opinion: this jump is way too overmapped. Provided people complain about it, I'd consider changing that. I think I won't change this anyway, I looooooove this jump whether it's called overmap or not
01:09:241 (4,5,6,7,8) - This might look a lot better if you rearranged some of the first notes. I think I tried to rework a bit, it's just fine as it's going around the head of 01:08:610 (2) -
02:10:820 (3) - A finish here? I don't really like to use clap with finish together when it comes to drums, that sounds weird to me
02:48:083 (1) - ^ not really getting any suitable sound from the noise, and mostly, I used only whistle because this is a soft part, soft part shouldd be soft

Looks sweet.

Aaand that's it. Good luck~
thx for your mod
osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74484
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
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216,328,171557,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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280,304,172820,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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396,108,174083,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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252,100,174715,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,272,174873,1,2,0:0:0:0:
231,292,174952,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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492,64,175504,1,8,1:3:0:0:
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128,112,176136,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,252,176294,1,0,3:0:0:0:
42,338,176452,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,196,176610,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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236,369,177557,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,200,177715,1,4,3:0:0:0:
208,162,177794,1,4,3:0:0:0:
216,125,177873,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,94,177952,1,8,3:0:0:0:
268,72,178031,1,4,1:3:0:0:
304,61,178110,1,8,1:2:0:0:
342,66,178189,5,4,1:0:0:0:
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313,167,178662,1,0,3:0:0:0:
313,205,178741,1,0,3:0:0:0:
313,243,178820,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,352,178978,1,0,3:0:0:0:
92,156,179136,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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420,276,179768,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,328,179925,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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106,157,180399,1,2,0:0:0:0:
97,130,180478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
94,101,180557,1,0,1:0:0:0:
99,73,180636,1,0,1:0:0:0:
110,47,180715,6,0,B|128:28|146:11|146:11|205:69|185:136,1,190,4|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,284,181189,1,2,0:0:0:0:
196,352,181347,2,0,L|288:328,1,95,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
452,96,181662,1,10,0:0:0:0:
476,332,181820,6,0,B|432:310|389:352|389:352|405:295|366:268,1,190,4|0,1:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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324,12,182610,1,0,3:0:0:0:
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posted

OniJAM wrote:

Mod request from Popner's Modding Team

  1. Red - Unrankable
  2. Purple - Highly recommended
  3. Black - You'd better fixed
  4. Gray - Just suggestion
  5. d=don D=big don
    k=kat K=big kat
  • General
  1. 01nsane和其它难度Timing不一样(顺带一提我觉得01的Timing才是准的) 我zz 调回来了
  2. 把Normal的宽屏Storyboard支持点掉

    Easy
  3. Fine...

    Normal
  4. Fine!

    Hard
  5. 02:03:726 (1) - 见Insane 后同
  6. 没有什么大的问题 就是你全跟vocal之后音效变得断断续续=,=感觉不是很舒服

    Insane
  7. 00:36:726 (1) - remove clap
  8. 01:08:305 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 干脆变成正三角形吧(567放在8910的中点处) 打的感觉变了 就不换了
  9. 01:51:884 (1,2,3,4,5) - *nazi* 1 grid right 这样01:51:726 (9) - 看着更像五角星的中心
  10. 02:03:726 (1) - 这种弯折有点打擦边球的感觉 尽量前后不要留没弯的地方不然以后可能会出事
  11. 02:06:252 (1) - ^
  12. 02:08:779 (1) - ^ 迷之01说这个没事儿 就不换了
  13. 02:12:726 (1) - 这段piano其实是展现做图技巧的好段 不map太可惜了 卧槽我也想 我要是有那能力我早就@#$%^
  14. 02:22:515 (3) - CTRL+G 打的更顺 唔这个前面有人提过 我G了但是又换回来了 还是这么放着吧
  15. 03:07:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - *nazi* 全选后把1移到264:304 理由同上一个*nazi*


That's all.. Good Luck :D
谢谢欧尼酱么么哒

rEdo wrote:

Late mod post is late. -w-"

[Easy]
00:01:336 (1) - This needs a fixed length BADLY. forgot this -w-b
01:04:504 (1) - A finish at its end?
01:37:189 (1) - A lot of overused finishes in this chorus, you should aim for a spread like in the second one. k
02:03:715 (1) - And a lot of overused new combos in this section. fixed

[Normal]
00:02:452 (1) - The new combos are pretty much overused in this whole beginning. Please delete some of them (like every second one). fixed
02:10:820 (4) - Add a finish. Added, but i found i didn't add it in other diffs..orz I'll consider it

[Hard]
00:19:662 (2) - This note might have been placed prettier, but it's not a big problem. moved it for a little bit, should be ok now?(
00:50:610 (1) - Overused new combos. Delete the new combo on every second section from now on. k
01:05:136 (3) - You might want to move this a little higher so its easier to hit for players that are still learning the game. k
01:23:452 (6) - New combo. ^
02:19:031 (4) - That jump might be confusing. Use a new combo here so it's easier to notice. ^
02:48:715 (2) - Shorten it by 1/2? =w=b

Good enough, I guess.

[Insane]
01:05:136 (1) - A finish here? hmmm a soft-finish sounds strange i think
02:26:452 (6) - You might want to rorate it a little bit so it covers (7)'s beginning, like that: Looks better owohttp://puu.sh/71eVZ.jpg
02:58:031 (12,1,2) - I was close to thinking that this was a 1/4. Improve the distance snap here. ok

Nothing much that I could complain about. The hitsounding might have been better, but that's it.



Aaand that's it. Good luck~
Thanks for modding :D
posted
Your mapset seems fine, but the Preview Time is unsnapped! :P
posted
恭喜rank
posted
IRC mod! We fixed a few things! I also checked some of Zero__Wind's Insane and it seems to be fine. Going to update on that in a bit before I bubble.
00:13 Irie Miyuki: hi ike <3
00:15 BeatofIke: hu
00:15 Irie Miyuki: i saw your info left in your queue o.o
00:16 Irie Miyuki: so could you please recheck my map before you afk? ;w;
00:16 BeatofIke: i'll try...
00:18 Irie Miyuki: thank you~ owo
00:18 Irie Miyuki: and hope you have a good time during your break <3
00:18 BeatofIke: thanks :3
00:21 Irie Miyuki: it's very hard to see a bat does a lot of work
00:32 BeatofIke: 01:49:978 (2) - On easy, this spacing is inconsistent :/
00:33 Irie Miyuki: o.o my fault
00:41 BeatofIke: 03:06:399 (2,1) - Should probably add an extra note here :/
00:42 BeatofIke: that's it for Easy :D
00:42 BeatofIke: moving to Normal
00:43 Irie Miyuki: oh there's a slider here
00:43 Irie Miyuki: so should i add an extra note between the slider and the spinner?
00:44 BeatofIke: sure
00:44 Irie Miyuki: ok o.o
00:44 BeatofIke: a reverse works too :)
00:45 Irie Miyuki: reverse done >.<
00:46 BeatofIke: ok
00:46 BeatofIke: and remember, you don't have to change it if you don't like it :P
00:47 Irie Miyuki: ok owo
00:47 BeatofIke: My mods are usually 90% suggestions XD
00:49 Irie Miyuki: i like suggestions \o/
00:49 BeatofIke: okay :D
00:50 BeatofIke: 02:54:241 (1) - For normal. you can remove combo here. :)
00:51 Irie Miyuki: ok :D
00:51 BeatofIke: including here: 02:56:768 (1) -
00:51 Irie Miyuki: done~
00:52 BeatofIke: since it's consistent with the last chorus section at 01:37:189 -
00:52 BeatofIke: other than that Normal is good to go
00:53 BeatofIke: moving to Hard
00:53 Irie Miyuki: 01:43:978 (1) - so i should remove combo here?
00:53 BeatofIke: nope, that one is fine
00:53 Irie Miyuki: ok~
01:03 BeatofIke: 02:20:452 (2) - could polish this slider a bit: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1513849
01:06 Irie Miyuki: owo changed a little bit
01:06 BeatofIke: that would be it for hard. moving to the insanes o.o
01:06 BeatofIke: and okay :)
01:06 Irie Miyuki: \yeah/
01:07 Irie Miyuki: but i may have to go in another 10 minutes
01:07 Irie Miyuki: my lessons will begin soon ;w;
01:07 BeatofIke: okay ;w
01:07 BeatofIke: upload :)
01:08 BeatofIke: chances are, the insane diffs are probably good as well :P
01:08 Irie Miyuki: o.o
01:08 Irie Miyuki: ok <3 thanks~
01:10 Irie Miyuki: uploaded~
01:10 BeatofIke: okay
01:13 Irie Miyuki: OwO
01:15 BeatofIke: okay one more suggestion for easy/normal diffs o.o
01:15 Irie Miyuki: o.o
01:15 BeatofIke: Hard/Insane is good already.
01:15 Irie Miyuki: yay~
01:15 BeatofIke: still need to check Zero wind's insane though ;p
01:16 BeatofIke: 03:07:662 (3) - for easy, try adding a note here.
01:16 BeatofIke: 02:58:189 (5) - For Normal, add a new combo here.
01:16 BeatofIke: That's it :D
01:18 BeatofIke: have fun in class XD
02:20 Irie Miyuki: I'm back orz
02:21 Irie Miyuki: i guess it's very late in america now.. so i hope you can check zero's diff if you have time >.< thanks~

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