General:

Normal:

112,192,77666,2,0,P|128:128|176:80,2,130,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,176,78757,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Verdi's Hard

Lapis Aoki wrote:

[Garven's Easy]
00:10:030 (1) -Ctrl + G Why? I like the circular motion that's currently there better.
00:17:484 -The space is too long. I.. don't understand. You want a lot of recovery time after a spinner for new players.
00:21:484 (2) -The shape isn't pretty, try another shape. Sure.
00:42:030 -DS. Seriously?
00:42:757 (2,1) -I didn't really like the shape, try to make it like an S. Nah.
01:25:848 -Spinner till 01:27:848 I don't want to end with a spinner since the song is obviously cut and there's no strong finish to have it end on.

Lapis Aoki wrote:

[General]
I really like how you used different pictures in every diff, nice work ~ ! ^^

[Normal]
00:01:303 (2,3,4) -Change blanket. No need to, since I wanted to make it rotated a bit.

SPOILER

00:11:121 (2) -DS No, it was made on purpose since SV changes here, so I wanted to reduce spacing a bit to make it more equal, anyways I reduced it to 1.0x, I think it seems better now.
[Insane]
00:06:393 (2,3,4) -No need for the slider, just add 3 notes. Why? the rhythm won't change anyways, so there shouldn't be any issue at using a different pattern if I'm using the same rhythm.

SPOILER

00:47:212 (4,5,6,7) -Change. Same here.

SPOILER

GL and take star.

vahn10 wrote:

General:

for some reason, the bitrate of the mp3 is 320 kbps which is unrankable. here is a 192 kbps file

Normal:

00:12:575 (4) - replace the finish with whistle at the beginning of the slider Actually if you listen carefully you will hear two cymbals here, so Finish fits nicely.
00:55:484 (4) - add clap at the beginning of the slider Oops, added.
01:17:666 (3,4) - better blanket I like how it is, thanks anyways.

112,192,77666,2,0,P|128:128|176:80,2,130,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,176,78757,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Lobont wrote:

Good luckuu ^-^

Dariano wrote:

[General]

As vahn10 said, the mp3 bitrate is higher than 192kbps, You probably forgot to replace it. Oops, my bad, thanks for pointing this.

[Timing]

Why did you keep this? I find it unnecessary. Not sure but some BATs told me this is necessary, I'll check it later though.

[Normal]

00:11:121 (2) - The distances are uneven, making this look odd, try 240/52 This was placed here on purpose, I answered in a previous mod.

Well, I couldn't find anything else, that's why I didn't give any suggestions to the Insane difficult.

Great map, and song. Good luck!

Garven wrote:

DS, can you fix the kiai snapping please?

1. General stuff: The comboing seems to be a bit long. It would be nice if you could split them into half or something. The spinner ends are ending too late, that's not only inappropriate, but it ruins the rhythm too.
2. 00:10:121 (1) - Would fit much better if it ends at 00:12:212. Powerful stuff going on there.
3. 00:14:393 (6) - Should be a new combo. Makes more sense.
4. 00:16:030 (1,2) - I don't think you need a combo this short, just remove new combo.
5. 00:23:121 (8) - Could be a new combo.
6. 00:31:848 (6,7) - This should get changed. This is extremely hard to read and very easy to sliderbreak. I would really recommend this spot 00:31:848 - to have a new combo, and then you just map2 sliders instead of the double repeater.
7. 00:34:121 (1,1) - While this fits the music I find it inappropriate for a hard. The circle is really hard to see as well. I would recommend to end the spinner at 00:35:484 - and then map 00:35:848 - (which you missed due to spinner) with a circle, which is also a drum you are trying to follow. Can be a stacked note on top of the other circle.
8. 00:45:030 (1) - should end on 00:47:121 - else it ruins the rhythm.
9. 01:21:303 (7) - Should have a new combo. The jumps are nice and fit but having them in a separate combo could be best.

1. General stuff: A bit boring due to constant 1/1 hitting. Consider changing some of the less important sliders into longer sliders. Also, I strongly advise not to use tick hitsounds here because you didn't map the whole drums. Mapping drums in lower diffs is hard in general, and unless you cover them all, the consistency is gone and the tick hitsounds lose meaning in a way, and can be a bit annoying.
2. OD,AR,HP +1. AR4 is too slow and raising AR will leave other settings inappropriate a bit.
3. 00:13:666 (2) - No idea what this should represent. :p Something needs to start on 00:13:484.
4. 00:19:666 (5) - No drum hitsounds?
5. 00:26:030 (3) - Would be better if followed the vocals. (see 00:28:939 (4) - )
6. 00:27:303 - I dont like this tick hitsounds I suggest removal. If you really want it to stay (I hope not), you need to reduce volume for each tick hitsounds by 12% of current, else they are too loud.
7. 00:37:666 (3) - vocal pls.
8. 00:38:757 (4,1) - I would advise against positioning the small repeater like this. It could be mistaken as a double repeater because thats just the way such objects usually get positioned.
9. 00:42:393 (2) - I would actually suggest to remove this or just move it to 00:42:575. If you move it then I would suggest to revamp this whole section a little so it follows the vocals better. I think the diff would sound and play better that way.
10. 00:46:393 (3) - This is what I'm talking about. This hitsound here is completely meaningless without mapping the drum at 00:46:212. It's just half of the drum mapped. I don't think that works that well, sorry.
11. 00:47:848 - From here until the end it's like 99% 1/1. I think you can do better. Just try to follow the vocals or something.
12. 01:11:121 (1) - Oho, the only non 1/1 slider, that's good, but I think you can do this better. If you split this into two sliders and make the first end at 01:11:484 - then you dont need the ugly tick hitsound. 1/2 is totally fine to use in cases like this, especially if its two sliders.
13. No more comments here because if you take my advice you would change everything here almost, cause 1/1 is zzz.

1. AR3 OD3 pls. AR2 is AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. The SV is too high for AR2 seriously ;_;.
2. 00:23:666 (2) - I don't think it's appropriate to end it like this. While the focus of the melody (which is important) is there, the focus of the drums is at 00:24:575 and is very audible. With that finish sound this just sounds out of place. I would recommend extension to there. Extending the slider also creates a much better flow into the upcoming hitcircle pattern you have here, since the rhythm is easier to get into.
3. 00:52:030 (2) - This sounds bad to be honest. I suggest you end it at 00:52:575 - and then you make a hitcircle at 00:52:939 - to stabilize the rhythm. You have so many sliders it's good to have a circle every now and then anyway.
4. 00:53:666 (1,2) - I think you can use the vocals pretty good here. If you end the first at 00:54:757 - as a repeater (just add a repeat basically), and end the 2nd slider at 00:56:212 - (no repeats though) you covered the vocals pretty well.
5. 00:56:575 (1) - Not a fan of this slider because the rhythm on repeat is a bit shabby but eh its fine i guess.
6. 01:16:939 (1) - This clap just bothers me for some reason.
7. 01:22:757 (3) - Yeah, ending it at 01:24:212 - sounds much better if you ask me, and is better because the rhythm is more stable which will help people hitting the last two circles.
8. Where is the spinner? ;_; 4mod will create a huge scoreboard inflation.

lolcubes wrote:

:3/ :3/

[General]
Timing: The correct offset should be 1303. There is no reason to put that negative offset at all. The first musical measure of the song is 1303 just remove the negative one it's meaningless. Well, you were a BAT and I'm pretty sure you know much more than me about this, so okay.

[Insane]
OD8 please. Pretty please. Please? I SSd first try on this laptop ;w; Uhh, not sure if it's THAAAT easy to get a good acc here, but will think about it :3
Rest is good, great job here. <3

[Normal]

1. General stuff: A bit boring due to constant 1/1 hitting. Consider changing some of the less important sliders into longer sliders. Also, I strongly advise not to use tick hitsounds here because you didn't map the whole drums. Mapping drums in lower diffs is hard in general, and unless you cover them all, the consistency is gone and the tick hitsounds lose meaning in a way, and can be a bit annoying. Will try to change this a bit later.
2. OD,AR,HP +1. AR4 is too slow and raising AR will leave other settings inappropriate a bit. Ok.
3. 00:13:666 (2) - No idea what this should represent. :p Something needs to start on 00:13:484. Fixed.
4. 00:19:666 (5) - No drum hitsounds? I can hear them on the music o.o
5. 00:26:030 (3) - Would be better if followed the vocals. (see 00:28:939 (4) - ) Ok.
6. 00:27:303 - I dont like this tick hitsounds I suggest removal. If you really want it to stay (I hope not), you need to reduce volume for each tick hitsounds by 12% of current, else they are too loud. Removed.
7. 00:37:666 (3) - vocal pls. Ok.
8. 00:38:757 (4,1) - I would advise against positioning the small repeater like this. It could be mistaken as a double repeater because thats just the way such objects usually get positioned.
9. 00:42:393 (2) - I would actually suggest to remove this or just move it to 00:42:575. If you move it then I would suggest to revamp this whole section a little so it follows the vocals better. I think the diff would sound and play better that way. Changed.
10. 00:46:393 (3) - This is what I'm talking about. This hitsound here is completely meaningless without mapping the drum at 00:46:212. It's just half of the drum mapped. I don't think that works that well, sorry. Okay, removed.
11. 00:47:848 - From here until the end it's like 99% 1/1. I think you can do better. Just try to follow the vocals or something. Well since here 1/1 fits nicely with the music/vocal at the same time imo, so won't change anything here, sorry.
12. 01:11:121 (1) - Oho, the only non 1/1 slider, that's good, but I think you can do this better. If you split this into two sliders and make the first end at 01:11:484 - then you dont need the ugly tick hitsound. 1/2 is totally fine to use in cases like this, especially if its two sliders. This one is well done imo, no need to change this.
13. No more comments here because if you take my advice you would change everything here almost, cause 1/1 is zzz.

Just honest opinions, don't take them personally. The map has potential, but not if you keep the 1/1 half of the map. If you follow the vocals more then you don't need to map all of the drums just those most important ones which can normally get mapped anyway, so you probably wont need the tick hitsounds either. Just try and see what you can do about this, won't take too long since you already have the patterns made, you jsut need to adjust them so the sliders follow the vocals more. You don't have to copy the easy but you can still introduce it as the main focus. Just some opinions. Thanks, will have this on mind.

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lolcubes wrote:

:3/

[General]
[Easy]

1. AR3 OD3 pls. AR2 is AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. The SV is too high for AR2 seriously ;_;.　　Pfft, I like it at 2, but at this level of easiness, I don't think it'll matter too much.
2. 00:23:666 (2) - I don't think it's appropriate to end it like this. While the focus of the melody (which is important) is there, the focus of the drums is at 00:24:575 and is very audible. With that finish sound this just sounds out of place. I would recommend extension to there. Extending the slider also creates a much better flow into the upcoming hitcircle pattern you have here, since the rhythm is easier to get into. Derp, I'm an idiot.
3. 00:52:030 (2) - This sounds bad to be honest. I suggest you end it at 00:52:575 - and then you make a hitcircle at 00:52:939 - to stabilize the rhythm. You have so many sliders it's good to have a circle every now and then anyway. I like the original better since it sounds best, but in the interest of having more circles, I'm for this change.
4. 00:53:666 (1,2) - I think you can use the vocals pretty good here. If you end the first at 00:54:757 - as a repeater (just add a repeat basically), and end the 2nd slider at 00:56:212 - (no repeats though) you covered the vocals pretty well. I wanted to give more emphasis to the guitar changes while still keeping to the vocals, plus having the distance for the mirror slider and flow back into that curl in the middle. It's tough to throw in jumps in Easy's that don't spike the difficulty and I think this one fits well.
5. 00:56:575 (1) - Not a fan of this slider because the rhythm on repeat is a bit shabby but eh its fine i guess. It's consistent with how I emphasized all the other vocal parts.
6. 01:16:939 (1) - This clap just bothers me for some reason. Ok
7. 01:22:757 (3) - Yeah, ending it at 01:24:212 - sounds much better if you ask me, and is better because the rhythm is more stable which will help people hitting the last two circles. Same thing as earlier: ending on the vocal emphasis instead of the band is all.
8. Where is the spinner? ;_; 4mod will create a huge scoreboard inflation. Um.

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1. 00:12:939 - 00:24:575 - Just personal opinion thought, but it is kinda weird to hear whistles at this part instead of finishes what exactly exist in music. I'd recommend add here finishes follow music instead of that whistles with redused volume (something around 35% for each finish sound should works perfectly)
2. 00:38:393 (6,8) - There are slight spacing issue here which makes these notes looks weird while playing & breaks your stacking. Stack them perfectly please.

1. 00:19:666 (5) - Consider adding NC here to make this pattern more readable
2. 00:24:030 (10) - Same here
3. 00:31:848 (6) - This two-repeat slider is kinda hard to follow and works very confusing. I's decommend you separate it into 2 1/2 sliders. Try something like this:
   
   
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   356,368,31484,2,0,L|359:288,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   445,307,31848,2,0,L|448:227,1,80
   416,144,32212,2,0,L|420:43,1,80
   332,80,32575,2,0,L|335:0,2,80,0|2|8,0:0|1:3|1:3,0:0:0:0:

4. 00:34:121 (1) - I understand that you wants to follow vocals properly here but such sudden rhythm change (from music to vocals) is just doesn't work. This spinner feels kinda random & out of place. I highly suggest you map this part.
5. 00:38:575 (6) - New Combo please to make this pattern more readable
6. 00:44:939 (6) - This stacking looks weird and counter-intuitive. Please unstack this note.
7. 00:45:030 (1) - same about long spinner follow vocals ;_;
8. 00:58:212 (6) - Again, NC to make it more readable
9. 01:07:121 (5) - Add clap to head
10. 01:11:666 (2) - And remove clap from head
11. 01:17:484 (7) - Remove clap here too

1. 00:32:575 (2) - 3 whistles in a row sounds a bit noisy. Remove whistle from head or reduse volume a bit here please.
2. 00:42:575 (2,3) - Kinda confusing. Spacing at this part feels so clamped which makes this part kinda hard to play & understand. Easiest way to fix it - just stack these notes. It will improve playability a lot!
3. 00:46:030 (2,3) - Rhythm here feels kinda weird since you ignored strong beat at 00:46:212 - try something like this to follow music better:
   
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:52:939 (5,2) - I would really not recommend do such things in Normal diffs - such stacking migh be too hard to undesrstand for beginners. Make it a bit more visible - try something like this:
   
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:10:030 (1) - I was expecting whistle on head
2. 00:44:939 (1) - I'd remove this NC, don't see much reasons for it to be.
3. 00:50:757 (1,2) - A bit nazi, but i'd make blanket here instead for better flow:
   
   
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4. 01:25:666 - add spinner like in other diffs for consistensy?

Kodora wrote:

[Garven's Easy]

*AR3 OD3 <3
Already done from cubes' mod q:

1. 00:10:030 (1) - I was expecting whistle on head That'd take away from the intensity increase here though. I'd like to keep the progression with the song.
2. 00:44:939 (1) - I'd remove this NC, don't see much reasons for it to be. I guess with that pattern, having one long combo isn't too horribad
3. 00:50:757 (1,2) - A bit nazi, but i'd make blanket here instead for better flow: This part was changed a bit from lolcubes' mod so uh... might want to recheck this and see if it's better for ya.
   
4. 01:25:666 - add spinner like in other diffs for consistensy? I find it a poor spot for a spinner since the fadeout feels so forced and is very short.

omg finally i find not low spaced well mapped easy really good job! Haha, thanks!

Kodora wrote:

[Insane]

*I agree with lolcubes that OD can be higher, 7 feels here too easy (i SS it in 1 try orz). 8 should works perfectly. Okay okay.

1. 00:12:939 - 00:24:575 - Just personal opinion thought, but it is kinda weird to hear whistles at this part instead of finishes what exactly exist in music. I'd recommend add here finishes follow music instead of that whistles with redused volume (something around 35% for each finish sound should works perfectly) Finish abuse here sounds really bad imo even with low volume, I got your point, but whistle sounds fine and fits.
2. 00:38:393 (6,8) - There are slight spacing issue here which makes these notes looks weird while playing & breaks your stacking. Stack them perfectly please. Ah, little bug, fixed.

Good job here! Thanks! :3

[Normal]

*Gradual SV increasing works perfectly <3 Good job! :3
*Same about hitfinishes at this diff :3

1. 00:32:575 (2) - 3 whistles in a row sounds a bit noisy. Remove whistle from head or reduse volume a bit here please. I added them because it fits with the music, I did the same on Insane.
2. 00:42:575 (2,3) - Kinda confusing. Spacing at this part feels so clamped which makes this part kinda hard to play & understand. Easiest way to fix it - just stack these notes. It will improve playability a lot! If I stack them spacing consistency will be broken, and no this isn't really confusing imo >>
3. 00:46:030 (2,3) - Rhythm here feels kinda weird since you ignored strong beat at 00:46:212 - try something like this to follow music better: I changed it in other way :3
   
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:52:939 (5,2) - I would really not recommend do such things in Normal diffs - such stacking migh be too hard to undesrstand for beginners. Make it a bit more visible - try something like this: Well there are more than 1 second between these notes, so I don't think that can make it confusing, also your suggestion seems more confusing imo xD.
   
   
   SPOILER

   

Good luck Moesonic :3 Thanks >w<

Garven wrote:

Can you apply that new combo, DS?

Sonnyc wrote:

Normal:

00:05:303 (2) - Add whistle at the end. I'm using Whistles to follow Piano here, so it wouldn't fit.
00:54:393 (3) - Missing whistle at the head? Nope.
Insane:

00:05:303 (1) - Mind adding a whistle at the end? Hit sounds feel quite empty here. Answered before.

Oracle wrote:

General
fine.

Normal
00:06:030 (3) - Whistle on the head(piano) I know there is a piano sound here but not that loud like the other ones, so I prefer to leave it without hitsounds.
00:13:848 (2) - Clap on the head(drum) Oops my bad, added.
01:24:030 - Add a circle here with normal hitsound? This empty gap is somehow annoying me since there's a tick sound here 01:23:666 - Seems/sounds bad if I do imo.
01:25:303 (2) - Whistle? Why? I can't hear anything that worth a Whistle here.

Insane
00:58:757 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream feels a bit bland to me, at least add clap on 00:59:121 (5) - and whistle on 00:58:757 (1) - . Sounds better. Added the Whistle but didn't add the Clap, I don't really like how it sounds.
01:24:939 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as above,clap on 01:24:939 (3) - &01:25:303 (7) - ? Same, sounds bad.
This diff is well done! :3

GOGO Get this ranked! <3 I'm fighting! =w=b

Narcissu wrote:

hi …… _(:3」∠)_

[general]

i think 01:10:939 - is kiai , so move ( 70757,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0 ) to 01:11:098 - Nah, it's fine like I did.

maybe you wish a soft-sliderslider.wav ? Oh right, I forgot about this!

[insane]

SPOILER

just some nazi ……

00:01:303 (2,5) - maybe too curved now , same as 00:07:121 (4) - ? This isn't a problem, and seems nice like this.

00:13:848 (4) - http://puu.sh/6T5KH.jpg It flows weird like that.

00:16:212 (3) - move to (180.184) , stack in 00:13:848 (4) - Ok.

00:16:757 (5,1) - i think these too closed for blanket , so move 00:17:303 (1) - to (272.296) Moved it, but not there, thanks for the suggestion ^^

00:27:848 (1) - i think normal-slider better http://puu.sh/6T6aD.jpg or same 00:36:575 (1) - , it's looks ugly now No, this one is nice for me.

00:38:030 (4) - move to （276.196）and 00:38:212 (5) - move to （336.96 Why? seems fine like this.

00:44:757 (8) - move to （392.116） , i think note use same distance between slider better , i click premature because these too closed Nah not needed, I usually use 1,0x spacing as you probably saw on the map.

00:58:757 (1,2,3,4) - why not clap but 00:47:212 (4,5,6,7) - have clap ? i think these is same _(:3」∠)_ Both parts sound a bit different, also if I want to add Claps I would have to do it on the whole stream and that would sound really bad, try it by yourself xD.

01:24:939 (3,4,5) - ^ ^

01:11:121 (3) - i think NC here , because you add NC in White line when kiai time Yeah right, changed.

Do not alter the song's title. This includes adding any marker to describe the cut of the song such as "Short Ver.", "TV Size" and so forth unless those markers are part of the official song title as listed by a reputable source.

No Dap wrote:

[Normal]
00:03:848 (5) - NC Oh right NC has to be here, fixed.
00:04:212 (1) - delete NC Done.
00:25:303 (2,3) - blanket properly Fixed.

[Insane]
00:14:939 (3) - This is blanketing 00:13:848 (4) - so no changes here.

SPOILER

00:35:484 (3) - crtl+g Why? it isn't bad to have a jump here, else this would be boring.
00:35:848 (4) - ^ No.
00:38:939 (8) - on 6 tail? Same as before, this wouldl be boring if I move it there.
00:57:303 (1,2) - reduce distance a bit Nah, this was made on purpose and I think the pattern is pretty good, also this is the only pattern with such a big spacing, and since this is an Insane diff this isn't a problem, right?
01:24:212 (1,2) - those hit claps sound awkward to me. I'm just following music, delete this notes and listen by yourself.

1. Clean

1. 00:12:939 (1) - finish + whistle like you did with 00:24:575 (1) -
2. 00:14:393 (1,2,3) - Use an equal distance between them? personally I feel the jump from 2 to 3 really forced, maybe try some similar as:
   
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3. 00:14:939 (3,1) - sorry for nazy, but blanket is too close, consider to move 00:15:666 (1) - 1 or 2 grids to the left.
4. 00:17:030 just wonder, why you didn't map this? since you map the one at 00:22:757 (6,7,8) -
5. 00:21:848 (2) - In my opinion this circle is sounding weird here, It doesn't have a real support from the music, maybe just convert 00:21:484 (1,2) - in a slider sound a lot better for me .
6. 00:29:848 (6) - I really think the repeat slider doesn't fit here, 00:29:848 sound here is really weak compared to 00:30:030 - 00:30:212 - (they have drum sound), probably I'll suggest you to change the rhythm to:
   
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7. 00:32:939 (6) - 2 circles fit better the music here, sound at 00:33:121 is really strong and deserve a click action, like you did here 00:38:757 (7,8) -
8. 00:48:757 (4,1) - this doesn't flow nice, maybe just about taste anyways my suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:50:030 (4) - remove whistle? it broke your pattern.
10. 01:12:575 (1,3) - sorry for nazi again, this blanket can be better.
11. 01:25:666 (11) - this need NC.
    
    pretty nice

1. 00:10:121 (1) - raise volume here 5% is really low, I need a feedback from ending the spinner, since the next circle come to fast.
2. Unsnapped green line at: 00:12:948 - snap to 00:12:939
3. 00:12:848 remove this line It's unnecessary
4. 00:14:393 ad NC? the music change here significatively
5. 00:16:939 finish doesn't fit the song here add a clap instead.
6. 00:18:393 same as above
7. 00:19:666 (5) - probably you'll a NC here too for the antijumps, also is consistent with the one at 00:16:030 (1) -
8. 00:22:575 (6) - add NC? since this one is going too long compared to the others.
9. 00:48:939 (4,5) - stack this properly.
10. 01:03:484 (4,5) - ^
11. 01:08:939 (2,3) - Imo this jump is too big and not comfortable to play for a hard diff.
12. 01:15:484 (4) - missing whistle in the head.
13. 01:16:212 (5,7) - maybe try to stack them for better design
14. 01:25:666 (7) - this need NC
    
    personally I don't like the hitsounds in this diff, maybe just not my taste. anyways the diff is nice

1. 00:11:121 (2,3) - mmm the connection between objects is not natural here and it require a force movement from the cursor, my suggestion:
   
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2. 00:24:030 you should add a circle here, since the music claim for a hit here
3. 01:16:939 I really don't agree with ending slider on really important beats in the music, maybe you can try a more interesting rhythm here.
4. 00:12:575 (4) - you need to add a circle here it's consistent with the above ^ also same suggestion about the rhythm
5. 01:23:484 (2) - I feel this slider weird since it doesn't follow the music nicely, try a 1/2 repeat slider instead?
   
   nice normal diff

1. maybe use HP2? 3 is to hight imo
2. 00:18:575 (2) this need NC
3. 00:42:757 (2,3) - fix the distance o.o I really don't agree with little jumps on easy diff.
4. 01:19:848 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:53:666 (1,2) -
6. 00:36:575 (1,2) - sorry for nazi, but this blanket can be better.
   
   diff is nice, but personally I don't like those jumps QAQ

Natsu wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:12:939 (1) - finish + whistle like you did with 00:24:575 (1) - The Whistle is following a different music sound, that's why I added it there and not before.
2. 00:14:393 (1,2,3) - Use an equal distance between them? personally I feel the jump from 2 to 3 really forced, maybe try some similar as: Ok.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:14:939 (3,1) - sorry for nazy, but blanket is too close, consider to move 00:15:666 (1) - 1 or 2 grids to the left. Ok.
4. 00:17:030 just wonder, why you didn't map this? since you map the one at 00:22:757 (6,7,8) - I just didn't want to follow drums, that's not an issue is it?
5. 00:21:848 (2) - In my opinion this circle is sounding weird here, It doesn't have a real support from the music, maybe just convert 00:21:484 (1,2) - in a slider sound a lot better for me . Oh, I followed drums and music here at the same time, that's why it maybe sounds a bit weird, but it's fine imo.
6. 00:29:848 (6) - I really think the repeat slider doesn't fit here, 00:29:848 sound here is really weak compared to 00:30:030 - 00:30:212 - (they have drum sound), probably I'll suggest you to change the rhythm to: Changed.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:32:939 (6) - 2 circles fit better the music here, sound at 00:33:121 is really strong and deserve a click action, like you did here 00:38:757 (7,8) - I did it this way to follow pattern consistency, so I prefer to keep it.
8. 00:48:757 (4,1) - this doesn't flow nice, maybe just about taste anyways my suggestion: Fine for me.
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 00:50:030 (4) - remove whistle? it broke your pattern. Actually I forgot to add Whistle in 00:49:666 (3) - , again I'm following a music sound.
10. 01:12:575 (1,3) - sorry for nazi again, this blanket can be better. Fixed.
11. 01:25:666 (11) - this need NC. Why? o.o it seems weird ending a stream with a NC.
    
    pretty nice ^w^

[Normal]

1. 00:11:121 (2,3) - mmm the connection between objects is not natural here and it require a force movement from the cursor, my suggestion: Ok, that seems good.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:24:030 you should add a circle here, since the music claim for a hit here I would like to add it but it would break my pattern since I'm not able to follow spacing consistency here if I don't move 00:24:212 (2) - , so I prefer to keep it like this.
3. 01:16:939 I really don't agree with ending slider on really important beats in the music, maybe you can try a more interesting rhythm here. Well I'm following vocal here, that's why I made it like this, hopefully this won't be a problem.
4. 00:12:575 (4) - you need to add a circle here it's consistent with the above ^ also same suggestion about the rhythm I don't see where I have to add a note but this seems fine on my eyes.
5. 01:23:484 (2) - I feel this slider weird since it doesn't follow the music nicely, try a 1/2 repeat slider instead? That would end too soon and would make this part a bit boring, wouldn't it? I'll keep this too.
   
   nice normal diff :3

1. 01:14:030 (1) - http://puu.sh/6ZHJ9.jpg slider tick on middle plz
   
   Yeah i love it

1. 00:39:484 (1) - how about move this slider x=420 y=112
2. is there any problems?

1. 01:23:484 (1,2) - i think 2 should be NC

1. CLEAR!

Neta wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:39:484 (1) - how about move this slider x=420 y=112 Well didn't move it here but anyways your suggestion gave me an idea to improve this pattern.

Garven wrote:

@Neta

I don't understand what you mean by slider tick in the middle. Care to explain?

Raiku wrote:

[Normal]

00:09:666 (3) - I felt that this curve could be made to flow even smoother by moving 3 down and to the left a little more. I also moved the first point of slider 1 left a little and the last point to the right towards its next note more like so (http://puu.sh/70s2C.jpg). Sure.

00:33:303 (1) - How do you feel about the tail end of this slider blanketing the next slider, nice flow alteration suggestion here (http://puu.sh/70s9N.jpg). Nah, I wanted to try something different here.

00:46:030 (2) - I felt this looked smoother with the tail end of 2 moved to the right to meet the entrance of the next slider perfectly (http://puu.sh/70sfS.jpg). My bad, fixed.

01:04:575 (2) - How do you feel about my flowier alternative to this sequence by adjusting the curve of this slider and positioning is as such (http://puu.sh/70sqq.jpg). Seems good but I think both what I did and your suggestion flow nicely, so I'll keep this one.

[Insane]

00:09:666 (6) - Since it is the slow part at the beginning, i felt the spacing with 6 didn't need to be so drastic, so here's my alternative (http://puu.sh/70sy8.jpg). Also the tail point of 00:10:030 (1) - could be moved up one space on grid level 4 to have the 2 bodies curve synchronize and fit perfectly (http://puu.sh/70sE4.jpg). I just wanted to keep consistency on spacing so I'll keep that note there. About slider it's fine, tried to fix it.

00:10:757 (1,1) - You could achieve the same fit like this if you wanted (http://puu.sh/70sHk.jpg). I also feel that with this alteration in place, my placement of 2 changed to make it look flowier and I also moved orange 1 to blanket the start of the white one like this (http://puu.sh/70sRb.jpg). Okay, improved the pattern.

00:24:484 (7) - Moved this down to fit the curve a little better (http://puu.sh/70sXd.jpg). Ok.

00:56:575 (1) - I felt this flowed out of 6 better when lined up with its exit like this (http://puu.sh/70t60.jpg). I'll keep this one, your suggestion is nice but makes the pattern much easier imo.

Kiai is really fun, i really enjoyed modding this map, good luck cos its really well mapped! I'm glad you liked it!

ts8zs wrote:

[Insane]
00:07:121 (4) - NC Why? music doesn't change too much here.
00:13:848 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345323 180,184 Didn't change it like that but in a different way.
00:17:666 (2) - 180,184 or 364,0 Nah.
00:21:484 (1) - 148,192 It makes the pattern like.. super boring.
00:23:484 (2) - 296,140 ^
00:25:121 (2) - 404,188 ^
00:29:303 (4) - 168,236 ^
00:38:030 (4,5) - Ctrl+G Flows a bit bad imo.
00:52:575 (4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345330 Flow is terrible like you did.
00:54:757 (5) - Ctrl+G Again, it makes the pattern boring.
01:05:303 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345333 Your suggestion is cool but I don't like too much to reduce spacing like that, so i'll keep this.
01:07:121 (2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345334 Saaaaame.
01:19:484 (5) - Ctrl+G ^
01:25:757 (1) - end at 01:27:666 - ? Singer is still singing here.

[Normal]
00:27:848 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345340 I like this one, changed.
01:25:666 (1) - end at 01:27:666 - ? Singer is still singing here.

1. 00:13:121 (1) - You clearly mapped this spinner following the vocal sound. I think that this finish on the spinner is actually too loud and it doesn't fit that well honestly. I think it'd be more enjoyable to hear if you decided to decrease its volume till 50% at least.
2. 00:23:121 (1) - There should be a soft finish here to keep consistency with 00:13:121 (1)'s end. Obviously my suggestion above is the same for this circle as well.
3. 00:42:030 (1,2) - Actually I think it'd be more logical if you decided to remove the new combo from (1) adding it on the (2) instead. It fills better for three reasons: 1) It would mh.. I don't know how to say, "fill" better the finish hitsound; 2)New vocal rhythm starts here; 3) The pattern 00:42:757 (2,3,4) is symmetric and starting the combo on the slider 00:42:757 (2) would fit much better IMO.
4. 01:25:848 - Spinner would be pretty cool here. It'd be also consistent with other diffs. Add it here or remove the (2) adding it there.

1. 00:12:575 (4) - I think curved slider like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352018 would flow better here
2. 00:18:939 (4) - Add whistle on the tail
3. 00:20:212 (1) - Clap for consistency with 00:14:393 (1)
4. 00:26:030 (3) - You could use some whistles here to emphasize the vocal rhythm. Add whistle on the head and on the tail of this slider, and do the same for 00:28:939 (4), 00:37:666 (3), 00:40:575 (3) - as well. It actually looks so empty w/o hitsounds IMO
5. 01:03:484 (1) - Whistle on reverse? Same for this circle if you add it, for consistency: 01:15:484 (3)

1. 00:05:666 (4) - New combo?
2. 00:17:303 (3,4) - I think that making these sliders' shapes in this other way the pattern would flow much better IMO: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352037
3. 00:19:666 (1,2,3) - What about using drum finish hitsound on these circles to fill the drums you can hear in the music? Moreover, I would stack all these circles together (but fixing the spacing between 00:19:303 (4,1). Actually it could confuse some players IMO
4. 00:31:848 (1) - I guess you forgot normal sampleset on this slider's tail. It's too empty, add it please
5. 00:34:121 (1) - 20% volume. It's confusing = unrankable. 5% is allowed only on spinner's end that can't confuse players because placed at the end of a map or before than a break. This silenced 00:35:848 (1) is regardless unrankable because of that 5%.
6. 00:44:757 - You really should add a circle here. You can clearly hear a sound in the music and it'd be better to fill it
7. 01:03:848 (5) - New combo for the new 1/1 rhythm and square pattern pls D: Same for 01:15:484 (4) if you follow this.
8. 01:15:484 (4,5) - Remove whistles for consistency with previous square pattern

1. 00:07:121 (4) - New vocal = new combo
2. 00:17:848 (3,4) - This sliders completely ruin the flow you created. If you want to keep them straight than place them in this way, it's muuuch better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352061
3. 00:18:575 (1) - If you follow my suggestion above about those two sliders, it'd be better to change this slider shape as well to make the part more flowing. You could move the 00:19:121 (2), make the 00:18:575 (1) and the 00:19:303 (3) in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352066
4. 00:31:121 (3) - Whistle on the head
5. 00:55:484 (2) - I think this circle is played bad there. Maybe stack it with 00:54:575 (4)?

[Navy] wrote:

[Normal]

00:05:303 (3,4) - change rhythm? (add reverse in (3) instead of (4) ) Nah, it ends up being the same.



00:11:121 (2) - erase? Hmm I don't see why.


[Insane]

00:12:757 (2) - how about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/73vK7.jpg A triplet here won't be following the music, try listening this part carefully.



00:52:030 (1) - I think new combo more fits at 00:52:212 (2) Vocal changes here, so no.

Chewin wrote:

MòèSònìc <3 <3

Normal

1. 00:12:575 (4) - I think curved slider like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352018 would flow better here I agree.
2. 00:18:939 (4) - Add whistle on the tail Sure.
3. 00:20:212 (1) - Clap for consistency with 00:14:393 (1) But 00:14.393 (1) - doesn't have a clap, lol.
4. 00:26:030 (3) - You could use some whistles here to emphasize the vocal rhythm. Add whistle on the head and on the tail of this slider, and do the same for 00:28:939 (4), 00:37:666 (3), 00:40:575 (3) - as well. It actually looks so empty w/o hitsounds IMO Okay.
5. 01:03:484 (1) - Whistle on reverse? Same for this circle if you add it, for consistency: 01:15:484 (3) Hmm it won't be following anything, so no.

Insane

1. 00:07:121 (4) - New vocal = new combo Ok.
2. 00:17:848 (3,4) - This sliders completely ruin the flow you created. If you want to keep them straight than place them in this way, it's muuuch better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352061 In this case I prefer to keep it, since I think your suggestion won't change flow too much tbh.
3. 00:18:575 (1) - If you follow my suggestion above about those two sliders, it'd be better to change this slider shape as well to make the part more flowing. You could move the 00:19:121 (2), make the 00:18:575 (1) and the 00:19:303 (3) in this way: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1352066 Nothing to do here I guess.
4. 00:31:121 (3) - Whistle on the head I'm using Whistles to follow music here instead vocals, so a Whistle wouldn't fit.
5. 00:55:484 (2) - I think this circle is played bad there. Maybe stack it with 00:54:575 (4)? Nooo, this circle stars a star pattern.

That's all :3 Sorry for the bad mod, I haven't modded for months D: Baka, actually your mod was pretty helpful! ^^

[Navy] wrote:

[Garven's Easy]

00:10:030 (1,2,3) - for (3)'s location, move (1) to (408,352, (2) to (284,32) and (3) to (256,192)

This adds some crazy overlap. No thanks.

00:34:757 (2,3,4) - eraze and copy (1) The rhythm gets boring then. :<


00:53:666 (1,2) - I think this sliders need reverse for better rhythm
Nah, I wanted to keep the rhythm changing a bit, but still fairly easy.



I think this notes are hard in terms of Easy

00:24:939 (1,2,3,4) - how about zigzag Nah, a curve feels better

01:03:848 (3,4,5,6) - change 2 notes to slider? Nah, it wouldn't feel the same.

01:09:666 (2,3,4,5)

01:15:121 (2,3,4,5,6)

Chewin wrote:

MòèSònìc <3 Garven <3 ;_;

Garven's Easy

1. 00:13:121 (1) - You clearly mapped this spinner following the vocal sound. I think that this finish on the spinner is actually too loud and it doesn't fit that well honestly. I think it'd be more enjoyable to hear if you decided to decrease its volume till 50% at least. Changed to a normal finish. I want some large hit on the end of such a long spinner.
2. 00:23:121 (1) - There should be a soft finish here to keep consistency with 00:13:121 (1)'s end. Obviously my suggestion above is the same for this circle as well. The consecutive drum hitsounds feel better compared to the lone sound of the finish before.
3. 00:42:030 (1,2) - Actually I think it'd be more logical if you decided to remove the new combo from (1) adding it on the (2) instead. It fills better for three reasons: 1) It would mh.. I don't know how to say, "fill" better the finish hitsound; 2)New vocal rhythm starts here; 3) The pattern 00:42:757 (2,3,4) is symmetric and starting the combo on the slider 00:42:757 (2) would fit much better IMO. This one was tricky since it actually used to be spilt up as two combos, but considering the length of the vocal parts here, it was suggested to extend them. I agreed, but now the two sets of two hit objects are four. I'll take the suggestion though, since it fits my progression prior now that the shorter combos are gone.
4. 01:25:848 - Spinner would be pretty cool here. It'd be also consistent with other diffs. Add it here or remove the (2) adding it there. No forced end spinner plz thx. Maybe if the song felt like it really should have a longer fade out, but for now it's just too short and lame sounding. Don't want to map to that.

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80,272,82757,2,0,P|256:372|432:272,1,423.500012924195,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,32,85303,5,4,0:3:0:0:
256,152,85666,1,4,0:1:0:0:

1. 00:13:848 (4) - I'd rather make a jump at 00:14:393 (1)- to replace here because of the NC.
2. 00:21:848 (2,3) - it'd be better if they are not overlapped imo. Not way too flow because you didn't overlap 00:21:303 (4,1) - which goes before 2,3.
3. 00:22:393 (4,5) - ctrl+g
4. 00:34:757 (1) - make a reversed slider would be awesome.
5. 01:19:484 (5) - ctrl+g
6. 01:20:575 (3) - ^
7. 01:20:939 (4) - ^

1. AR+1
2. 00:14:939 (2)- http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1360131 the rhythm is fluent enough so try to make it reversed instead of a slider?
3. 00:15:484 (3) - remove
4. 01:24:212 (3,4) - the spacing's kinda far from each other imo..
5. 00:58:757 (4) - make it extend to 00:59:393 -