1. 00:41:957 (1) - those I'd rather have like waves with an anchor; click the box below for slidercodes, point coordinates and images
   
   slider

   
   
   start: 26|70
   first bezier point: 0|139
   second bezier point: 77|209
   anchor (red) point: 166|172
   third bezier (the one after the red point): 118|227
   fourth bezier: 125|323
   fifth bezier: 194|359
   end: 256|343
2. 01:27:061 (3,5) - I don't really enjoy how these are at nearly the same spot but I guess it's okay
3. 01:52:303 (4,5) - I suggest you move 4 to 308|205 and 5 to 425|226 as to avoid hitburst overlaps with the coming slider
4. 02:16:302 (1,2,3,4) - I'd rather see a symmetrical building around the Y axis here; image below
   
   here, coordinates inside as usual

   
   
   1: 82|59
   2: 138|291
   3+4: Just copy 1+2, CTRL-H them, then CTRL-G and remove the new combo
5. 02:19:613 (1,2,3,4) - this is not really pretty either but it doesn't seem like you wanted it symmetric anyways?

1. 00:17:544 (2) - remove whistle; three of them in a row are a bit much
2. 00:19:199 (2) - consider removing the whistle on the slidertrack (leave the one on the end though)
3. 00:34:095 (2) - similar to 00:17:544, remove whistle please
4. 00:35:337 (1) - remove new combo here, still belongs to the same string of vocals
5. 00:36:992 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - you could make this a proper circle by playing around with the "Create Polygon Circles" option in the Compose tab (make sure to set beat snap divisor to 1/1 before so it doesn't create 1/2 instead, then enter 7 points into it and play with the offset until you have a pattern as you would like it)
6. 00:38:647 (1) - remove NC aswell
7. 00:46:509 (3) - add clap?
8. 01:34:095 (7) - this is more 1.1x snap than the usual 1.0x you are using here; move this to 32|247
9. 01:42:371 (5) - this just feels too close to 4's sliderbody; also, the straight line doesn't really go well with the curvy slider before - box below
   
   huzzah

   
   startpoint: 409|31
   middle point: 422|83
   third point: 389|159
10. 01:47:751 (2) - this slider ends on a strong beat than it starts on, replace it with two circles please (also, a straight line doesn't really go well with the curve before)
11. 01:49:820 (2) - this is 0.9x snap while it should be 1.0x - please fix this and adjust the rest of the pattern
12. 02:45:268 (1,2,1,2) - these sliders look very unbalanced, I'd suggest you do them anew with the new algorhythm as that'll fix the problem quite easily.
13. 02:51:475 (1) - another one of those 0.9x snaps!
14. 03:11:751 (1) - why's this 1.1x snap? also, please remove the new combo because there's no reason for it here (same vocal string)
15. 03:22:095 (1) - in Easy, the entire spinner is still in the kiai time but here you turn it off earlier; please make this consistent with another any way or the other

1. 00:16:302 (1) - no need for this new combo
2. 00:29:544 (1) - ^
3. 00:32:440 (1) - ^
4. 01:04:923 (2) - still not quite symmetric (just make the sliderpoints symmetric to the Y-axis and the rest should probably get solved in the process)
5. 02:03:682 (1) - wave would be a little better with the end at 345|80 and the point before at 253|125
6. 02:31:198 (1) - personally I'd remove this NC as I don't count it as an invidual soundpattern or anything but that's your call
7. 02:40:922 (4) - wave would be better with end on 234|97 and the point before at 164|153
8. 02:57:474 (3) - stack this with 2's end xP
9. 03:15:060 (1) - no need for new combo

1. 00:19:199 (6,7,8) - I'd still like to see these blanketting each other (and 6's overlap with 4 is a bit bleh)
2. 00:32:233 (1,2,3) - actually I expected a finishpattern here like you did it in the previous combos at this point in the music
3. 01:03:682 (1,2) - this pair of sliders is a fair lot closer to each other than the ones before, fix that please?
4. 01:04:716 (1) - silence this spinner end? the finish seems out of place
5. 01:30:371 (5) - please fix this to exact 0.9x spacing - not like it was a super big deal but I felt something was off when playing since the spacing seemed different from 4 to 5 than from 5 to 6
6. 01:58:303 (1,2) - just like 01:03:682
7. 01:59:337 (1) - silence this spinner end? the finish seems out of place
8. 02:16:302 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - man I still want this symmetric ;_;
9. 03:05:751 (4,5) - these may still be a bit close to the HP bar as hitbursts could overlap there and that'd look bleh

Jenny wrote:

Also having Normal at Drain 1 seems fairly low; raise to 3 or 4 perhaps.
(You don't need to KD multiple posts of the same person unless there was a considerably large amount of time between the mods)

0_o wrote:

http://puu.sh/7OXxA.osu did a few changes, as well as some hitsound stuff. Also made the volume pretty much consistent throughout; for some reason the volumes were all over the place.

Blue Dragon wrote:

puush is offline right now, wait a while

1. 02:49:406 (1) - Tá saindo um pouco da tela.

1. 01:34:095 (7) - Não curti muito isso, ficou meio confuso. Que tal fazer assim, ao invés?
2. 03:11:337 (9,1) - não curti muito o jump, mas ACHO que não tem muito problema

1. 00:16:923 (1) - Spacing here still bothers me a bit
2. 01:31:199 (6,1,2) - Same as ^