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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dinsdag 18 maart 2014 at 23:57:56

Artist: Rie Fu
Title: Tsukiakari (TV size)
Source: Darker than Black
Tags: Anime Ending Yin bk201
BPM: 91
Filesize: 1493kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,27 stars, 80 notes)
  2. Hard (4,14 stars, 148 notes)
  3. Normal (3,52 stars, 127 notes)


Download: Rie Fu - Tsukiakari (TV size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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2nd beatmap
Easy - Done!
Normal - Done!
Hard - Done!

Thanks to Everyone in my friendlist for their support.
Special thanks to BrianTheDrummer for his amazing feedback and teaching me how to use hitsounds!

Lexi-chan-
Pjecoo
pinataman
BrianTheDrummer
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Hey, saw you in #modreqs! :D

Timing: Change BPM into 91,25. In my opinion it fits better. :3

Easy:
Nothing to complain about.

Normal:[/color]
01:26:689 (1) - The slider ends at the red tick with the green timing section.

Hard:
00:25:966 (11) - Edit -> Reverse Selection. Flows better.
01:02:239 (5) - Make this slider like 01:00:927 (3) :)
And this 01:02:894 (6) like this 01:02:239 (5).

Really good map. Especially because it's your second map. I don't know if this could get ranked but that's a really good start.
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DTB Lover...Anyway

EASY
00:07:505 (4) - I'm not sure about this one, try to make it like this (http://puu.sh/77Hex.jpg) <-- it's an example, you can put it closer.

NORMAL
00:40:471 (7) - Putting this slider next to (6) will be good imo.
01:22:074 - Put there circle.

HARD
00:40:141 (5) - This one seems little off. Put him lower than (4) and little bit closer to (6).
01:16:140 - Put there circle.

This map is awesome imo. But as you can see, there're some little mistakes, but I can't take them seriously.
Good luck with that map.
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This is the first time my map get's modded, hope i reply in the right way :D

Lexi-chan- wrote:

Hey, saw you in #modreqs! :D

Timing: Change BPM into 91,25. In my opinion it fits better. :3 I did not change the bpm, imo this is just right. (If more people have an issue with the timing i'll reconsider)

Easy:
Nothing to complain about. :D

Normal:[/color]
01:26:689 (1) - The slider ends at the red tick with the green timing section. Not sure what you mean with this, but i'm guessing you ment the spinner, i thought so too so i changed it

Hard:
00:25:966 (11) - Edit -> Reverse Selection. Flows better.
01:02:239 (5) - Make this slider like 01:00:927 (3) :)
And this 01:02:894 (6) like this 01:02:239 (5).

Really good map. Especially because it's your second map. I don't know if this could get ranked but that's a really good start.

Pjecoo wrote:

DTB Lover...Anyway

EASY
00:07:505 (4) - I'm not sure about this one, try to make it like this (http://puu.sh/77Hex.jpg) <-- it's an example, you can put it closer.

NORMAL
00:40:471 (7) - Putting this slider next to (6) will be good imo.
01:22:074 - Put there circle.How did i miss that before *facepalms*

HARD
00:40:141 (5) - This one seems little off. Put him lower than (4) and little bit closer to (6).
01:16:140 - Put there circle.

This map is awesome imo. But as you can see, there're some little mistakes, but I can't take them seriously.
Good luck with that map.
Thanks you both for modding my map!! I certainly did not expect to get mods this soon after posting it in #modreqs
Gave you both a kudosu
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Hi there. Been on my to mod list for a while from mod request. I'm a little new to mapping/modding, but hope this helps!

[General:]

Though I don't know too much about tags, it might be extraneous to list Darker than Black and Rie Fu because they are the source/artist.
01:25:370 (6) - This slider puzzles me (on all difficulties) because it seems a little late with the music, though this is the only instance of it. Also, the hit finish sounds a little odd, in my opinion (though every option I tried still sounded odd too, I'm not good with hitsounds)

[Easy:]

The approach rate feels fast for an easy. I would probably put it at 1, 2, or maybe 3

00:05:527 (2) – I feel like this should be the New Combo instead of 00:04:867 (1) (listen to the music to see if you agree)
00:16:076 (3) – NC, 00:14:098 (1) – remove NC
00:37:833 (6) - NC
01:01:583 (3) – NC (because it gains energy here)
00:14:098 (1) – the spacing differs from prev to next (from .76, to .83), so making this closer to .8 would help clean it up. I'll leave it up to you to see how picky you want to be about this kind of spacing throughout the rest of the map. (turning off gridsnap could help you do it)
01:02:239 (4,6) - I don't play easy, but stacking these might be bad for beginners, especially if you decide to change the approach rate.
01:22:733 (1,2,3,4) - the beat-spacing really picks up here, especially since you change the bpm on the inheriting section. Again I don't know easy all the well, but this might confuse new players.

[Normal:]

00:05:527 (2) – I feel like this should be the New Combo instead of 00:04:867 (1)
00:16:076 (2) – NC, 00:14:098 (1) - remove NC
00:47:781 (2) – NC, 00:47:114 (1) – remove NC
00:55:681 (5) – NC, 00:56:993 (1) – remove NC
00:58:960 (4) - NC
00:02:889 (3,4,1) – spacing is a little inconsistent at (4)
01:22:074 (8,1) - ^
00:05:527 (2,3) - the spacing could be closer to 1.00x here, maybe using a smaller grid or none at all? (these are just some of the ones that I saw at like 1.06, maybe check the map if you want to be nitpicky)
00:10:142 (5) - ^
00:19:372 (3) - ^
00:20:691 (5) - ^
00:39:482 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:17:459 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:15:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - personally, I think these would look better if some of the sliders were curved. The flow feels just a little bit off going into and out of some of the sliders
00:27:943 (4) - again personally, I like breaking up the linearity with a curved slider here, so maybe changing the slider at 00:25:966 (5) to make room like so? : http://puu.sh/7tY2u.jpg
00:43:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks a little sloppy, (esp 4,5,6). Consider making a symmetrical pattern like this (rotate by 120 on the straight slider): http://puu.sh/7tYPk.jpg
00:53:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) – didn't like the break in the pattern at 00:56:993 (1). If you want to make them all evenly spaced (so like a 7-sided polygon), you can go to Compose → Create polygon circle (or Ctrl + Shift + D) and make 7 points to use for the beginning of each slider (you might have to play with the distance as you need to make all the sliders end near a central point). Also, 00:52:074 (4,1) – might have a bit of awkward overlap, so consider starting it in a different place?
01:02:894 (6,7,8,9) – doesn't keep the same curve, so it looks a little sloppy, maybe using a zig-zag pattern here?
01:12:184 (1,2,3) – beat spacing is 1.3, which is the biggest in the map, but it might be ok
01:16:140 (4) – add a note here? (it's a little long pause, and the note fits the music here)
for some nazi stuff:
00:07:505 (1,2,3,4) – space these more evenly, (you can tell 4 and 3 overlap more than any of them)
00:12:119 (2,3) – a little crooked, maybe try copy paste or emphasizing the different slant
00:31:570 (1,2) - could be blanketed better
01:04:206 (10) – the slider doesn't end at the last tick, so it's not symmetrical about the axis
01:25:370 (5) – the slider tick should be at the red tick (right where the slider turns)


[Hard:]

nice map, not much to say :)

Like in the above difficulties, check to see if the combos feel right
00:01:571 (4) - spacing might be a little inconsistent, maybe trying to get at least one of the prev or next closer to 1.1x spacing?
00:29:592 (7,9) - plays fine, I just have a gripe about the way it looks (or something about it)
01:09:547 (1,1) - consider blanketing these?

Nice song, nice maps, would love to see this ranked.
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Hi...Just want to let you know...If you want DTB skin for this beatmap, I could make it for you.
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[quote="pinataman"

[General:]

Though I don't know too much about tags, it might be extraneous to list Darker than Black and Rie Fu because they are the source/artist.
added new tags + removed old ones
01:25:370 (6) - This slider puzzles me (on all difficulties) because it seems a little late with the music, though this is the only instance of it. Also, the hit finish sounds a little odd, in my opinion (though every option I tried still sounded odd too, I'm not good with hitsounds)
removed hitfinish

[Easy:]

The approach rate feels fast for an easy. I would probably put it at 1, 2, or maybe 3

00:05:527 (2) – I feel like this should be the New Combo instead of 00:04:867 (1) (listen to the music to see if you agree)
00:16:076 (3) – NC, 00:14:098 (1) – remove NC
00:37:833 (6) - NC
01:01:583 (3) – NC (because it gains energy here) fixed all the combo's
00:14:098 (1) – the spacing differs from prev to next (from .76, to .83), so making this closer to .8 would help clean it up. I'll leave it up to you to see how picky you want to be about this kind of spacing throughout the rest of the map. (turning off gridsnap could help you do it)
i must've accidently changed the beatsnapdivisor there, thanks for noticing, normally i'm actually very picky about spacing :)
01:02:239 (4,6) - I don't play easy, but stacking these might be bad for beginners, especially if you decide to change the approach rate.probably yes, fixed it
01:22:733 (1,2,3,4) - the beat-spacing really picks up here, especially since you change the bpm on the inheriting section. Again I don't know easy all the well, but this might confuse new players. I think the speedup is part of the map, just like at 00:22:010 (1) -

[Normal:]

00:05:527 (2) – I feel like this should be the New Combo instead of 00:04:867 (1)
00:16:076 (2) – NC, 00:14:098 (1) - remove NC
00:47:781 (2) – NC, 00:47:114 (1) – remove NC
00:55:681 (5) – NC, 00:56:993 (1) – remove NC
00:58:960 (4) - NC
00:02:889 (3,4,1) – spacing is a little inconsistent at (4)
01:22:074 (8,1) - ^
00:05:527 (2,3) - the spacing could be closer to 1.00x here, maybe using a smaller grid or none at all? (these are just some of the ones that I saw at like 1.06, maybe check the map if you want to be nitpicky)
00:10:142 (5) - ^
00:19:372 (3) - ^
00:20:691 (5) - ^
00:39:482 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:17:459 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Changed some (not all)spacing and combo's throughout the map
00:15:416 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - personally, I think these would look better if some of the sliders were curved. The flow feels just a little bit off going into and out of some of the sliders
00:27:943 (4) - again personally, I like breaking up the linearity with a curved slider here, so maybe changing the slider at 00:25:966 (5) to make room like so? : http://puu.sh/7tY2u.jpg
00:43:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - looks a little sloppy, (esp 4,5,6). Consider making a symmetrical pattern like this (rotate by 120 on the straight slider): http://puu.sh/7tYPk.jpg Didn't know about crtl+shift+R when i made that part, fixed it
00:53:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) – didn't like the break in the pattern at 00:56:993 (1). If you want to make them all evenly spaced (so like a 7-sided polygon), you can go to Compose → Create polygon circle (or Ctrl + Shift + D) and make 7 points to use for the beginning of each slider (you might have to play with the distance as you need to make all the sliders end near a central point). Also, 00:52:074 (4,1) – might have a bit of awkward overlap, so consider starting it in a different place? Fixed the overlap and changed the 7 sliders a little
01:02:894 (6,7,8,9) – doesn't keep the same curve, so it looks a little sloppy, maybe using a zig-zag pattern here?
made a lovely circle with ctrl+shift+ D <3
01:12:184 (1,2,3) – beat spacing is 1.3, which is the biggest in the map, but it might be ok
I think it compliments 01:06:910 (1,2,3,4) -
01:16:140 (4) – add a note here? (it's a little long pause, and the note fits the music here) Added 3 notes!!! 01:16:470 (1,2,3) -
for some nazi stuff: Don't bring up the nazi's, that's offensive to some
00:07:505 (1,2,3,4) – space these more evenly, (you can tell 4 and 3 overlap more than any of them) k
00:12:119 (2,3) – a little crooked, maybe try copy paste or emphasizing the different slant copy paste ftw
00:31:570 (1,2) - could be blanketed better I even gave it an extra pillow ;)
01:04:206 (10) – the slider doesn't end at the last tick, so it's not symmetrical about the axis
01:25:370 (5) – the slider tick should be at the red tick (right where the slider turns)


[Hard:]

nice map, not much to say :)

Like in the above difficulties, check to see if the combos feel right
00:01:571 (4) - spacing might be a little inconsistent, maybe trying to get at least one of the prev or next closer to 1.1x spacing?done
00:29:592 (7,9) - plays fine, I just have a gripe about the way it looks (or something about it) done
01:09:547 (1,1) - consider blanketing these? done

Nice song, nice maps, would love to see this ranked. Haha thanks, one can always dream :D[/quote]

Sorry for the late reply >.< Thanks for modding \:D/
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Hey Spaikz /o/

[Easy]
I recommend a higher distance snap at the slow parts such as 00:00:912 to 00:20:691 to avoid the small overlap.
00:21:350 - Remove this inheriting point
00:32:559 (1) - Add finish
00:37:833 (1) - Try to make this slider symmetrical
00:37:833 (1) - Add finish
00:53:058 (1) - Add finish
00:53:714 Add finish
01:04:206 (5) - I recommend to continue to map until 01:05:517 and add a finish at 01:05:517
01:26:689 (1) - This spinner is short and very hard for beginners

[Normal]
This difficulty also has many overlaps, try to use a higher distance snap.
00:09:482 (4) - This slider is unnecessary. Extend 00:08:823 (3) - to 00:09:482 instead.
00:14:757 (4) - Try to put this on 00:12:120 (2) -
00:22:010 (2) - Add (normal)finish.
00:25:966 (5) - Add a circle and remove the slider, try to keep Normal simple and just follow the vocals.
00:28:603 (5) - NC
00:43:114 (1) - Add (normal)finish
00:58:304 (5) - NC
00:58:960 (1) - Remove NC
01:00:927 (4) - NC
01:02:894 (9) - NC
01:05:517 - Add (normal)finish
01:26:689 (1) - This Spinner is very short

[Hard]
00:39:266 - Add finish
00:38:822 - Add finish
01:04:206 - I recommend to continue to map until 01:05:517 and add a finish at 01:05:517
01:25:370 (6) - This slider isn't very good for the flow, try something like this http://puu.sh/7Ayz0.jpg

Overall a pretty good map, good luck on getting this ranked :)
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BrianTheDrummer wrote:

Hey Spaikz /o/ Hey BrianTheDrummer \o\

Not commenting on every change, when i say nothing it means i agree with you, if its red i disagree and when it's green i comment :)

[Easy]
I recommend a higher distance snap at the slow parts such as 00:00:912 to 00:20:691 to avoid the small overlap. done
00:21:350 - Remove this inheriting point Wups, sloppy
00:32:559 (1) - Add finish
00:37:833 (1) - Try to make this slider symmetrical Fixed (as good as i could)
00:37:833 (1) - Add finish
00:53:058 (1) - Add finish
00:53:714 Add finish I'm a hitsound noob T_T
01:04:206 (5) - I recommend to continue to map until 01:05:517 and add a finish at 01:05:517
01:26:689 (1) - This spinner is short and very hard for beginners replaced by 3 notes, last one ending with hitfinish

[Normal]
This difficulty also has many overlaps, try to use a higher distance snap.
00:09:482 (4) - This slider is unnecessary. Extend 00:08:823 (3) - to 00:09:482 instead. I rly like that part, don't want to lose it just because it doesn't fit the vocals, it's not a big deal imo
00:14:757 (4) - Try to put this on 00:12:120 (2) -
00:22:010 (2) - Add (normal)finish.
00:25:966 (5) - Add a circle and remove the slider, try to keep Normal simple and just follow the vocals.
00:28:603 (5) - NC
00:43:114 (1) - Add (normal)finish
00:58:304 (5) - NC
00:58:960 (1) - Remove NC
01:00:927 (4) - NC
01:02:894 (9) - NC Yeah that combo was a bit long ^_^'
01:05:517 - Add (normal)finish
01:26:689 (1) - This Spinner is very short Added 3 notes just like in [easy]

[Hard]
00:39:266 - Add finish
00:38:822 - Add finish
01:04:206 - I recommend to continue to map until 01:05:517 and add a finish at 01:05:517 added some lovely notes 01:04:534 (8,9,10,11,12,13) -
01:25:370 (6) - This slider isn't very good for the flow, try something like this http://puu.sh/7Ayz0.jpg

Overall a pretty good map, good luck on getting this ranked :)
Thanks for the mod mate! I'll return the favor once you finished that marathon of yours ;)
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