Kalafina - Kimi no Gin no Niwa

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ZZHBOY

Ikaros_F wrote:

Hello, ZZ

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02:08:068 (3) - 不知道需不需要加个NC呢?因为变速我给他加一个 希望他不打我

03:55:095 (3) - 往左下放一点对着2的方向比较爽对着2看上去美观一些但是flow会差一点(个人看法
04:08:474 (1) - 个人感觉不好看._.打的爽o.o
04:24:690 (4) - 变速了要不要加NC呢 要;w;


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00:29:555 (1,2,3) - 对新手来说会不会有点难了呢 你书的对 删了3
01:06:852 (1,2,3,4,1) - ↑ 因为是kiai所以就没动了o.o
你normal可能有点难,有些新手要是加个DT的话就是210+的
还有跟着鼓点走会好一点,让图保持连贯 感觉vocal更容易跟QAQ


这摸这样了._.汪汪汪 :):):)
感谢 :)
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ZZHBOY

Emperor wrote:

建议添加hard难度和easy的.歌曲算慢节奏的感觉可以加2个难度.collab难度有点怪。因为没作图不知道哪里奇怪......normal的话感觉不错,节奏抓的都很好~
hard难度委托别人制作中哦;w;
Koiyuki
Title: Kimi no Gin no Niwa
Tag: S o a p ——> S_o_a_p
add Tag: Awaken
Awaken
hitsound
你千万记得先把我那部分的绿线全部删掉啊 不然到时候check很麻烦的
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327,204,104960,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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Rizia
[Collab]
00:20:636 (3) - 這種改變了DS的地方最好NC一下
00:23:068 (2) - 同上 不過這個可以放近 3 , 例如x160 y200附近
00:33:102 (2) - 移前到紅線?
00:33:204 (3) - 感覺不太合適 另外我覺得要nc
00:42:123 (2,5) - overlap了 , 5移左一點點
00:50:231 (3,4,5) -
01:23:068 - 感覺能一個slider帶過後面整個空位
01:32:798 (1,3) - 放開點 跟1,2的距離一樣就行了
01:36:041 (1) - blanket好
01:39:285 (4,5) - 現在這樣放有點醜 但我想不到解決方法x(
01:40:095 (1) - finish? if yes ,後面還有差不多相同的地方
01:42:123 (9) - blanket好6
01:46:785 (2) - x160 y136
01:47:393 - 為啥突然變大聲
02:11:717 (2) - 這個早了完吧..
02:56:717 (1) - 想吐糟最後的錨點
03:01:582 (2) - nc
03:31:177 (2) - ^
03:46:582 (4) - ^
這裡主要是變速slider的NC
04:44:960 - 建議把vol.調到20
04:46:312 (1) - ctrl+h也好 不建議放同一個位置啊

我最主要想吐糟有關DS方面

[Normal]
00:11:312 (1,2) - 這裡排得好醜
00:18:609 (4) - 未blanket好
00:19:825 (1) - 把尾蓋在3下面吧
00:23:271 (2) - 建議在後面的大白線開始
00:27:933 (2) - blanket
00:45:771 (2) - ^
00:47:798 (1) - ^
00:55:095 (2,1) - 不想再提了..
01:01:177 - 放點東西代替break吧
01:08:474 (7) - 太長了 建議這裡nc
01:54:690 (1) - 用跟01:53:474 (1) - 同款的slider吧
02:11:717 (3) - 錨點們 你們調皮了嗎?
02:21:447 (4) - NC吧
02:29:150 - 同之前的Break
02:34:825 (8) - NC
02:50:636 (3) - 錨點們在調皮的話我會使出柚子攻擊的說 >O<
02:53:068 (3) - overlap了...
03:34:420 (5) - NC
03:50:028 (2) - 拆開兩個1/2比較好

感覺NM糟點加多 多下點功夫
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Collab]
03:31:177 (2) - ^done
03:46:582 (4) - ^done
這裡主要是變速slider的NC
04:44:960 - 建議把vol.調到20 调到了30后面一个调到了20
04:46:312 (1) - ctrl+h也好 不建議放同一個位置啊这个是有意的因为不知道摆哪里好 ctrl+h的话有可能会使后一个折返箭头被遮住o.o

我最主要想吐糟有關DS方面

[Normal]
00:11:312 (1,2) - 這裡排得好醜flow说的过去就没改惹orz
00:18:609 (4) - 未blanket好调了
00:19:825 (1) - 把尾蓋在3下面吧
00:23:271 (2) - 建議在後面的大白線開始不猴 这里跟了vocal
00:27:933 (2) - blanketdone
00:45:771 (2) - ^done
00:47:798 (1) - ^done
00:55:095 (2,1) - 不想再提了..我真是zz
01:01:177 - 放點東西代替break吧不猴 正好转盘接break休息一下多开心o.o
01:08:474 (7) - 太長了 建議這裡ncdone
01:54:690 (1) - 用跟01:53:474 (1) - 同款的slider吧
02:11:717 (3) - 錨點們 你們調皮了嗎?QAQQQQ
02:21:447 (4) - NC吧done
02:29:150 - 同之前的Break我懒
02:34:825 (8) - NCdone
02:50:636 (3) - 錨點們在調皮的話我會使出柚子攻擊的說 >O<殴打柚子`_>`
02:53:068 (3) - overlap了...感觉没太大影响o.o
03:34:420 (5) - NCdone
03:50:028 (2) - 拆開兩個1/2比較好done

感覺NM糟點加多 多下點功夫
感谢柚子(吃柚子
Hollow Wings
from ur req

Collab Insane

  1. 我强烈建议整个diff的音效下的有整体性一些,即使各有各的音效风格可能也是一种有趣的想法,不过现在从结果看来效果不是很好。
  2. 00:16:582 (6) - 丧心病狂的出界,unrankble
  3. 00:39:690 (2,3,4,1) - 这边同ds不同ts的话我的建议是要用nc提醒一下,比如这里可以1的nc提前到4,或者改成像00:44:960 (3,1,2) - 一样,不然确实有点confusing
  4. 01:35:231 (1) - 这个也出界了unrankble
  5. 01:37:258 (1) - 不明白这里为什么要静音,而且打击音效静音是unrankble的,与此同时,绿线的音量最好不要低于20%。就正常的放个折返嘛,从第一次折返开始把音量调小一点就好。
  6. 01:38:879 (3,4,5) - 前面看了下都是各旋转120度对称的,这里稍微调整一下也做好看点?
  7. 01:47:393 (1,2) - 这两个note被放在了100%音效那边了,再树个路线吧
  8. 01:51:041 (2) - 这个滑条whistle是啥意思,这个音效下的有点超出理解范围了0.0
  9. 01:50:231 (1) - 身子向左凸更顺手点
  10. 02:10:501 (1,2) - 1的nc移动到2上
  11. 02:11:717 (2) - 滑条蓝线结尾是闹哪样。。。
  12. 03:12:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这。。。感觉可以换个更有趣点的梗
  13. 03:19:825 这里感觉还是要加个note,或者直接让03:19:420 (6) - 在这里结尾,转盘头可没音效
  14. 03:38:879 (6) - 变速加nc
  15. 03:50:028 (6) - nc,并且这个note后面跟着的三连和之前靠的实在太近了,可以换个位置
  16. 03:54:690 (2) - 这个ctrl+j一下会不会好一点?
  17. 03:57:933 (2) - 变速加nc,可能还有些我没看到,都注意一下
  18. 04:32:798 (1) - 从这里开始一直到结尾,音效音量柑橘都有点太响了
  19. 作为开了同一个坑的人我必须表示自己无法很客观地摸这个图,毕竟我跟你们做的完全不一样,只能尽量摒弃一些主观感受给你们提些意见,希望有所帮助。
    (硬要说的话我觉得awaken做的部分更好一些233

Normal

  1. 全图nc我建议:combo count控制在6左右,别太长了,具体自己从头到尾过一遍吧
  2. 00:14:960 (1,2) - blanket perfect,好多,想改就改吧,不改也不是大问题就是了(低难度还是多注意一下美观比较好
  3. 00:51:447 (1,1) - 这个ds变得有点太多了,在normal里不推荐这么摆
  4. 04:27:123 (2,3) - 同上,类似的还有一些,normal的话一般直接锁ds摆东西就好
  5. 02:55:501 这个beat为什么不摆东西呢。。。
  6. 呃,跟vocal跟的太凶啦,好多鼓点都漏了orz
噗,开了同样的坑再去摸对方的感觉怪怪的,本来不应该是你撞死我我撞死你什么的么orz

good luck
yf_bmp
mod太多就不分条回复了 :P
总之改了一些 谢谢了
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Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

Hollow Wings wrote:

from ur req

Collab Insane

  1. 我强烈建议整个diff的音效下的有整体性一些,即使各有各的音效风格可能也是一种有趣的想法,不过现在从结果看来效果不是很好。不得不说不是有意的orz 肥皂也一直懒得来加
  2. 03:38:879 (6) - 变速加ncdone
  3. 03:50:028 (6) - nc,并且这个note后面跟着的三连和之前靠的实在太近了,可以换个位置移了下
  4. 03:54:690 (2) - 这个ctrl+j一下会不会好一点?done
  5. 03:57:933 (2) - 变速加nc,可能还有些我没看到,都注意一下check了一遍都改了
  6. 04:32:798 (1) - 从这里开始一直到结尾,音效音量柑橘都有点太响了降了15%
  7. 作为开了同一个坑的人我必须表示自己无法很客观地摸这个图,毕竟我跟你们做的完全不一样,只能尽量摒弃一些主观感受给你们提些意见,希望有所帮助。你的ex屌飞起
    (硬要说的话我觉得awaken做的部分更好一些233怎么都这么说 不服 百恶俗可是有rank图的神马破

Normal

  1. 全图nc我建议:combo count控制在6左右,别太长了,具体自己从头到尾过一遍吧remap后没注意 都改了
  2. 00:14:960 (1,2) - blanket perfect,好多,想改就改吧,不改也不是大问题就是了(低难度还是多注意一下美观比较好我懒orz
  3. 00:51:447 (1,1) - 这个ds变得有点太多了,在normal里不推荐这么摆改了
  4. 04:27:123 (2,3) - 同上,类似的还有一些,normal的话一般直接锁ds摆东西就好
  5. 02:55:501 这个beat为什么不摆东西呢。。。改了之后感觉违和 然后又改回去了orz
  6. 呃,跟vocal跟的太凶啦,好多鼓点都漏了orz大概是半年前曾经跟一段vocal跟一段鼓点被喷过留下心理阴影所以决心跟vocal就跟到底.-.
噗,开了同样的坑再去摸对方的感觉怪怪的,本来不应该是你撞死我我撞死你什么的么orz 相爱相杀(?

good luck
Awaken

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Collab]
01:23:068 - 感覺能一個slider帶過後面整個空位 fixed
01:32:798 (1,3) - 放開點 跟1,2的距離一樣就行了 没明白;w;
01:36:041 (1) - blanket好 fixed
01:39:285 (4,5) - 現在這樣放有點醜 但我想不到解決方法x( sad
  • Hollow Wings wrote:

  1. 01:35:231 (1) - 这个也出界了unrankble fixed
  2. 01:37:258 (1) - 不明白这里为什么要静音,而且打击音效静音是unrankble的,与此同时,绿线的音量最好不要低于20%。就正常的放个折返嘛,从第一次折返开始把音量调小一点就好。 这里我本来是不想让音量太大吵 看来过头了 两边绿线删掉了
  3. 01:38:879 (3,4,5) - 前面看了下都是各旋转120度对称的,这里稍微调整一下也做好看点? 其实这里我也是120 只是不知道为什么这么丑;w;
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RandF
From my queue~

[General]
  1. Tags suggetion:
    劇場版 魔法少女まどか☆マギカ [新編] 叛逆の物語
    ending

[Normal]
  1. For Normal diff, it is better to conform DS as far as possible.
    for Example, 00:11:717 (2,1,2,3,1,2) - is not good
  2. 00:16:177 (2) - end at 00:16:987
  3. 00:23:271 (2,3) - I prefer the same pattern as 00:20:839 (2,3,4) -
  4. 00:30:771 (1) - remove NC
  5. 00:33:001 (1) - ^ instead, add NC at 00:36:852 (2) -
  6. 00:38:068 (1) - remove NC
  7. 00:39:285 (2) - ^
  8. 00:38:068 (1,2) - how about making symmetric?
  9. 00:47:798 (1) - remove NC
  10. 00:56:312 (1) - end at 00:57:123
  11. 01:06:041 (5) - end at 01:06:852
  12. 01:14:352 (1) - remove NC
  13. 01:26:717 (1) - ^
  14. 01:48:406 (1) - ^ instead, add NC at 01:49:825 (3)
  15. 01:55:906 (1) - remove NC. instead add NC at 01:57:123
  16. 02:00:568 (1) - remove NC. instead, add NC at 02:01:987 (3) -
  17. 02:03:204 (1,2,3) - it's difficult to use many triplet like this. it is better to change into the pattern like 02:01:987 (3,4) -
  18. 02:06:649 (1) - move to 02:06:447
  19. 02:10:298 (1) - remove NC. instead, add NC at 02:11:717
  20. 02:13:339 (1) - ^ at 02:14:150 (2) -
  21. 02:15:366 (1) - remove NC
  22. 02:21:447 (1,2) - avoid overlap
  23. 02:36:041 (3) - NC?
  24. 03:37:663 (2,4) - avoid overlap
  25. 04:03:204 (1) - how about stack on the end of 04:01:582 (3) - ?
  26. 04:19:420 (3,1) - DS is too large
  27. 04:24:082 (1) - move NC to 04:23:068 (3) -
  28. 04:25:095 (1) - ^ to 04:25:906 (2) -
  29. 04:26:717 (1) - ^ to 04:27:933 (3) -
  30. 04:30:366 (1) - remove NC

[Collab Insane]
yf_bmp
  1. 00:24:690 (4) - how about curveing and blanket?
  2. 00:56:312 (1,2) - I prefer to make symmetric pattern to 00:57:528 (3,4) -
  3. 01:01:987 (3) - it is better to be toward not 01:02:595 (2) - but 01:02:393 (1) -

Awaken
  1. 01:41:109 (4,5,6,7,8) - how about symmetric star?

    56,203,101109,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    191,101,101312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    141,264,101514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    86,103,101717,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    226,201,101920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 01:42:933 (2,3) - too close

S o a p
  1. 01:49:420 (4) - move to x:269 y:60 (stack correctly)
  2. 02:06:244 (2,3) - I prefer Ctrl+G
  3. 02:11:717 (2) - end at 02:12:528
  4. 02:23:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - it looks awkward. how about this?

    296,224,143879,5,4,3:0:0:0:
    320,113,144082,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    214,147,144285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    214,147,144487,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    238,36,144690,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    402,190,144893,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    190,258,145095,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    124,281,145501,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    176,327,145906,1,4,3:0:0:0:

615915887
  1. 02:49:014 (3) - move to x:471 y:231
  2. 02:49:217 (4) - move to x:229 y:121
  3. 02:50:636 (1) - I prefer the same shape slider as 02:51:852 (3) -

ZZHBOY
  1. too many NC. I recommend to decrease
  2. 04:00:771- add a note
  3. 04:06:041 (1) - I prefer this
  4. 04:09:690 (2) - move to x:167 y:199
  5. 04:13:339 (1) - it is better to add a note at this time


many member's collab~
You seem to be having fun :)
~Good Luck~
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]
  1. Tags suggetion:
    劇場版 魔法少女まどか☆マギカ [新編] 叛逆の物語
    ending

[Normal]
  1. For Normal diff, it is better to conform DS as far as possible.
    for Example, 00:11:717 (2,1,2,3,1,2) - is not goodthat's right, fixed
  2. 00:16:177 (2) - end at 00:16:987not good, this way may follow the music better o.o
  3. 00:23:271 (2,3) - I prefer the same pattern as 00:20:839 (2,3,4) - done
  4. 00:30:771 (1) - remove NC done
  5. 00:33:001 (1) - ^ instead, add NC at 00:36:852 (2) - done
  6. 00:38:068 (1) - remove NCdone
  7. 00:39:285 (2) - ^done
  8. 00:38:068 (1,2) - how about making symmetric?changed but may not perfectly
  9. 00:47:798 (1) - remove NCdone
  10. 00:56:312 (1) - end at 00:57:123nope, the same as before
  11. 01:06:041 (5) - end at 01:06:852^
  12. 01:14:352 (1) - remove NCdone
  13. 01:26:717 (1) - ^done
  14. 01:48:406 (1) - ^ instead, add NC at 01:49:825 (3) done
  15. 01:55:906 (1) - remove NC. instead add NC at 01:57:123done
  16. 02:00:568 (1) - remove NC. instead, add NC at 02:01:987 (3) - done
  17. 02:03:204 (1,2,3) - it's difficult to use many triplet like this. it is better to change into the pattern like 02:01:987 (3,4) -done
  18. 02:06:649 (1) - move to 02:06:447changed
  19. 02:10:298 (1) - remove NC. instead, add NC at 02:11:717done
  20. 02:13:339 (1) - ^ at 02:14:150 (2) - done
  21. 02:15:366 (1) - remove NCdone
  22. 02:21:447 (1,2) - avoid overlapi konw it's not goood but i prefer to keep it blanketed
  23. 02:36:041 (3) - NC?done
  24. 03:37:663 (2,4) - avoid overlapfixed
  25. 04:03:204 (1) - how about stack on the end of 04:01:582 (3) - ?done
  26. 04:19:420 (3,1) - DS is too largefixed
  27. 04:24:082 (1) - move NC to 04:23:068 (3) - done
  28. 04:25:095 (1) - ^ to 04:25:906 (2) - done
  29. 04:26:717 (1) - ^ to 04:27:933 (3) - done
  30. 04:30:366 (1) - remove NCdone

[Collab Insane]
ZZHBOY
  1. too many NC. I recommend to decrease
  2. 04:00:771- add a notedone
  3. 04:06:041 (1) - I prefer this done
  4. 04:09:690 (2) - move to x:167 y:199 stacked
  5. 04:13:339 (1) - it is better to add a note at this timedone


many member's collab~
You seem to be having fun :)it's right but it's hard to do well :?
~Good Luck~
thank you for your mod especially about NC
S o a p
感谢智障boy帮我加音效和改图!!
Topic Starter
ZZHBOY

S o a p wrote:

感谢智障boy帮我加音效和改图!!
打死懒皂
smallboat
Hi,紙張波,In-game PM req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

soft-sliderslide的音效沒有運用到阿,你這邊是S,你要調S:C1才會讓滑條聲無聲,現在還是有聲的。

[Normal]

1.同猴王所說跟人聲跟太多,希望再考慮下。
2.02:57:123 的綠線可刪掉,因為音量是一樣的,如果不想刪的話就減低音量。
3.另外有些部分可以+whistle音效,加大白線試試。
4.有些甚至差個0.10x間距,建議是一致。

00:14:960 (1) - 這個間距不一樣呢
00:16:177 (2) - 這個也是
00:20:839 (2) - 不知為何大白線放在滑條尾有點不順的感覺。(1點到2蠻難以判定。) 覺得00:20:636 這個要加一個note還比較好點。
00:23:271 (2) - 感覺前面漏了一個note
00:27:123 (1) - 間距
00:29:555 (1) - ^
00:34:420 (1,1) - 這兩個空隙加個note,點的比較舒服些。
00:44:150 (1) - 間距
01:08:879 (3) - 感覺換個長條比較適合音樂。
01:11:717 (2) - 這可以複製1的怎不兩個一樣? 兩個一樣比較好看
01:14:555 (3) - 既然是跟人聲,那這邊紅線怎麼沒跟到?
01:18:204 (3) - Blanket (2) 滑條頭。
01:22:663 (2) - 大白線忘了finish?
02:05:636 (3) - 間距
02:36:041 (1) - Blanket,尾端白線試試?
02:45:771 (1) - 不要折返,用1/1的滑條試試。
02:50:636 (3) - 開頭finish
03:13:744 (3) - 間距
03:19:420 (3) - 換成1/1滑條還比較好點。
03:34:420 (1) - 滑條頭finish
03:38:068 (3) - 看看要不要考慮用1/1滑條。
03:50:028 (2,3) - 往後一格,前面白線加note。
03:53:879 (1,2) - 不太好看的堆疊。
03:51:852 (4,3) - 兩個明顯不一樣,怎不複製?
04:01:379 (2) - 刪掉,然後04:00:974 (1) 往後一格,前面紅線+個note。
04:20:636 (1) - Blanket.
04:21:852 (2) - 間距
04:23:068 (1) - 滑條頭finish
04:27:933 (1) - ^
04:29:555 (4,5,6) - 還是分開間距放吧?
04:32:798 (5) - 不如加個note +whistle 做個結束?

[Collab Insane]

00:19:217 (2,3) - Drum的音效聽起來有點突兀,個人意見。
00:26:717 (6) - 照這樣節奏聽下去這邊不加whistle感覺怪怪。
00:29:150 (8) - ^
00:39:690 (2) - 你這邊1234間距都一樣了有點難讀,所以建議說2移到(268|152)左右位置做個antijump,這樣比較好讀。
00:45:568 (2) - 感覺疊在3滑條頭比較好讀和順。
00:48:609 (8) - 怎不移到(240|128),原來位置也太遠了吧?
00:53:474 (3) - 可以複製1的來對稱
01:03:406 (6) - (360|20)試試。
01:23:068 (1) - 忘了finish?
01:25:095 (3,4,5) - 3個擺的間距怎不一樣,建議一樣比較好看。
01:29:960 (3) - ^
01:38:879 (3,4,5) - 微調一下:
01:41:312 (5,6) - 建議用5邊形作,另外6也沒blanket到。
01:44:960 (1,3,4,5,6) - 試著五邊形,356放遠點也比較好點擊。
01:48:609 (1) - 因為前面變速這邊NC。
01:55:906 (5) - (336|170),三角+Blanket。
02:38:068 (3) - 這樣折返點有點太遠,建議說移到(486|247)試試。
02:49:420 (1) - 4點到1有點扭,所以推薦用ctrl+g這樣就順了。
02:50:231 (2) - 如用上面這也用ctrl+g加開間距。
02:53:474 (2) - Ctrl+g?
03:09:893 (5) - 覺得這邊可以刪掉note,因為沒有節奏在這裡。
03:48:204 (7) - 推薦(306|318)比較順。
03:54:487 (1) - (371|240)。
03:55:906 (1) - 跟前面疊起來吧
04:19:217 (4) - 試著test看看,有可能會被誤認成連打,還是放開點間距好了。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.
YoshinoSakura

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

02:56:717 (1) - 想吐糟最後的錨點 去惹
03:01:582 (2) - nc 这样前一个slider只有一个惹

Hollow Wings wrote:

03:12:528 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这。。。感觉可以换个更有趣点的梗 想不出来惹TAT
03:19:825 这里感觉还是要加个note,或者直接让03:19:420 (6) - 在这里结尾,转盘头可没音效

RandomEffect wrote:

615915887
02:49:014 (3) - move to x:471 y:231 fixed
02:49:217 (4) - move to x:229 y:121 fixed
02:50:636 (1) - I prefer the same shape slider as 02:51:852 (3) - I think this is okay

smallboat wrote:

02:49:420 (1) - 4點到1有點扭,所以推薦用ctrl+g這樣就順了。稍稍移了下
02:50:231 (2) - 如用上面這也用ctrl+g加開間距。 有道理
02:53:474 (2) - Ctrl+g? 挺顺的没必要
03:09:893 (5) - 覺得這邊可以刪掉note,因為沒有節奏在這裡。
thx for your mods~

绿线没改动除了你改的那个
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Topic Starter
ZZHBOY
[quote="smallboat"]Hi,紙張波,In-game PM req.

  1. Red words: Should be fix it.
  2. Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

soft-sliderslide的音效沒有運用到阿,你這邊是S,你要調S:C1才會讓滑條聲無聲,現在還是有聲的。

[Normal]

1.同猴王所說跟人聲跟太多,希望再考慮下。
2.02:57:123 的綠線可刪掉,因為音量是一樣的,如果不想刪的話就減低音量。
3.另外有些部分可以+whistle音效,加大白線試試。
4.有些甚至差個0.10x間距,建議是一致。

00:14:960 (1) - 這個間距不一樣呢
00:16:177 (2) - 這個也是
00:20:839 (2) - 不知為何大白線放在滑條尾有點不順的感覺。(1點到2蠻難以判定。) 覺得00:20:636 這個要加一個note還比較好點。
00:23:271 (2) - 感覺前面漏了一個note
00:27:123 (1) - 間距
00:29:555 (1) - ^
00:34:420 (1,1) - 這兩個空隙加個note,點的比較舒服些。
00:44:150 (1) - 間距
01:08:879 (3) - 感覺換個長條比較適合音樂。
01:11:717 (2) - 這可以複製1的怎不兩個一樣? 兩個一樣比較好看
01:14:555 (3) - 既然是跟人聲,那這邊紅線怎麼沒跟到?
01:18:204 (3) - Blanket (2) 滑條頭。
01:22:663 (2) - 大白線忘了finish?
02:05:636 (3) - 間距
02:36:041 (1) - Blanket,尾端白線試試?
02:45:771 (1) - 不要折返,用1/1的滑條試試。
02:50:636 (3) - 開頭finish
03:13:744 (3) - 間距
03:19:420 (3) - 換成1/1滑條還比較好點。
03:34:420 (1) - 滑條頭finish
03:38:068 (3) - 看看要不要考慮用1/1滑條。
03:50:028 (2,3) - 往後一格,前面白線加note。
03:53:879 (1,2) - 不太好看的堆疊。
03:51:852 (4,3) - 兩個明顯不一樣,怎不複製?
04:01:379 (2) - 刪掉,然後04:00:974 (1) 往後一格,前面紅線+個note。
04:20:636 (1) - Blanket.
04:21:852 (2) - 間距
04:23:068 (1) - 滑條頭finish
04:27:933 (1) - ^
04:29:555 (4,5,6) - 還是分開間距放吧?
04:32:798 (5) - 不如加個note +whistle 做個結束?
Normal难度的间距、blanket问题和蓝字部分都改了
[Collab Insane]

00:19:217 (2,3) - Drum的音效聽起來有點突兀,個人意見。
00:26:717 (6) - 照這樣節奏聽下去這邊不加whistle感覺怪怪。
00:29:150 (8) - ^
00:39:690 (2) - 你這邊1234間距都一樣了有點難讀,所以建議說2移到(268|152)左右位置做個antijump,這樣比較好讀。
00:45:568 (2) - 感覺疊在3滑條頭比較好讀和順。
00:48:609 (8) - 怎不移到(240|128),原來位置也太遠了吧?
00:53:474 (3) - 可以複製1的來對稱
01:03:406 (6) - (360|20)試試。
01:23:068 (1) - 忘了finish?
01:25:095 (3,4,5) - 3個擺的間距怎不一樣,建議一樣比較好看。
01:29:960 (3) - ^
01:38:879 (3,4,5) - 微調一下:
01:41:312 (5,6) - 建議用5邊形作,另外6也沒blanket到。
01:44:960 (1,3,4,5,6) - 試著五邊形,356放遠點也比較好點擊。
01:48:609 (1) - 因為前面變速這邊NC。
01:55:906 (5) - (336|170),三角+Blanket。
02:38:068 (3) - 這樣折返點有點太遠,建議說移到(486|247)試試。
02:49:420 (1) - 4點到1有點扭,所以推薦用ctrl+g這樣就順了。
02:50:231 (2) - 如用上面這也用ctrl+g加開間距。
02:53:474 (2) - Ctrl+g?
03:09:893 (5) - 覺得這邊可以刪掉note,因為沒有節奏在這裡。
03:48:204 (7) - 推薦(306|318)比較順。
03:54:487 (1) - (371|240)。这一部分排列重改了一下
03:55:906 (1) - 跟前面疊起來吧done
04:19:217 (4) - 試著test看看,有可能會被誤認成連打,還是放開點間距好了。有意放的 没改

感谢小船的mod~
Awaken

smallboat wrote:

01:25:095 (3,4,5) - 3個擺的間距怎不一樣,建議一樣比較好看。 k
01:29:960 (3) - ^ k
01:38:879 (3,4,5) - 微調一下:
k
01:41:312 (5,6) - 建議用5邊形作,另外6也沒blanket到。 k
01:44:960 (1,3,4,5,6) - 試著五邊形,356放遠點也比較好點擊。 nope,我这里本来是想随机乱跳一下的
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Nunnally Lamperouge
渣MOD,仅供参考
以下仅仅是建议
先说一下总体印象···这滑条断尾出100简直是····还有就是滑条速度拉慢的有点多···
最后就是··这DS···HD必定跪
00:35:636 (1,2,3,4,5) - 建议↓
因为是开头,所以稍微简单点,和前面蓝色的5个点音一样比较好
00:51:447 (1,2) - 拉开一点吧,还有些其他的也是。还有就是我有点不明白2压蓝线的意义···就好像是为了压蓝线而压蓝线
00:53:474 (3,1) - 有点坑···建议00:53:879 (1,2,3) - 与00:55:095 (1,2,3) - 互调··虽然不换也行··比较我这里没断←只是建议
01:08:474 (1,1,1,1) - 滑条过分慢,还有其他的也是。
01:27:933 (1,3) - 重新包一下吧←好吧,我承认我有强迫症···
01:47:798 (1) - soap啊··真的不要拉这么慢啊···坑死了·····其他也是,除去滑条我觉得soap这部分最舒服···
02:33:406 (6) - 拉到2下面一点
02:33:609 (1) - 拉慢,否则太难看
02:38:271 (4) - 去掉吧
02:44:555 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 好吧,我被坑了···但是我连上惹!
02:48:001 (6) - 去掉吧
03:14:960 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 赞!
04:25:704 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 红蓝拉开点吧

总体蛮不错的,加油!
Awaken

Nunnally Lamperouge wrote:

01:08:474 (1,1,1,1) - 滑条过分慢,还有其他的也是。 不要不服
01:27:933 (1,3) - 重新包一下吧←好吧,我承认我有强迫症··· 包的还不够好嘛;w;
thx for mod
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