Hi. mod because m2u
[general]
bpm is 230 6/8 (3/4) or 76.66667 2/8 (2/4). Don't worry about throwing off people because of abnormally high BPM. This is natural in 6/8 songs. I recommend 230 and cut the SV in half. Nobody will complain about 230 BPM, since you aren't switching to 4/4.
The last spinner in the song needs to be the same length across all difficulties. Easy has it shorter than the rest, and absurdly long spinners are pointless.
not sure how to fix [Shi-Ra]'s silly name. Maybe peppy or woc will fix?
[insane]
HP drain seems a little low for this map, but I like being able to actually pass maps.
00:23:275 (2) - take the beginning of this note off (put silence on this beat). It makes the rhythm much better.
00:38:232 (5,6) - doesn't fit. better to simplify into straight 1/2 notes.
00:41:602 (7,8,9) - doesn't fit. You can't correctly and play-ably map the piano here, so don't do it at all.
00:41:732 (9,1) - careful with poor spacing. Make sure compressed streams are equal
00:46:232 (7,8,9,10) - doesn't fit. You can't correctly and play-ably map the piano here, so don't do it at all.
00:52:493 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't fit. You can't correctly and play-ably map the piano here, so don't do it at all.
00:55:884 (1) - I feel this is the perfect spot for some
tornado combos. To each his own.
01:06:841 (3) - this isn't stacked?
01:12:058 (3,4,5) - these aren't stacked, and look bad
http://i.imgur.com/quzW4r9.png01:42:841 (1,2) - not stacked
01:44:667 (2) - in general these are poor ways to map this type of note. They are impossible to hit late without a slider break (unless you crank OD up to 10) and you can recreate the same fingering with just a normal slider.
01:45:449 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - spacing. Make sure actual distance is the same, don't worry about the number you get in the corner.
01:47:471 (11,1) - spacing
01:47:797 (2,5) - minor detail, both these sounds are the same, but mapped using different methods. not very consistent.
01:49:819 (5,1) - spacing
02:21:971 (5) - not stacked
02:24:319 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this looks better not stacked
[hard]
On compressed notes with low spacing, consider using no grid snap except for the beginning and end of the stream. This will prevent all spacing errors.
00:23:015 (3) - you seem to like fancy sliders (see 00:19:102 (4) - ), so why not turn this into just a normal slider? The repeat doesn't really match the beat here, and osu doesn't have enough long sliders in it.
00:35:928 (5) - ^
00:37:884 (3,4,5) - not stacked right. Better to do it manually then let osu's terrible algorithm handle it
http://i.imgur.com/NRaN4Go.png00:44:145 (4,5,1) - ^
00:51:971 (7,8,1) - ^
01:08:145 (1,2,3) - spacing
01:25:623 (6,7,8,9) - not stacked right
http://i.imgur.com/VmmavA1.png01:27:971 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:46:754 (8,9,1) - ^
02:06:058 (1,2,3) - spacing
02:06:319 (3,4,5) - repeating slider doesn't fit here
02:08:667 (1,2,3) - accelerated spacing doesn't really work when there's only 3 notes. better to keep it steady at 1.25x
02:13:884 (6,7,1) - spacing
[easy]
02:06:319 (3) - something like this?
http://i.imgur.com/Z5lPeKz.png[tk's oni]
I definitely don't like this slider velocity change.