1. 00:10:666 (1,2,3) - Do something like this for better flow: ?
   
   Example

   
2. 01:57:333 (1,2) - Make a blanket?

1. 00:23:111 (3,4) - Doesn't look good for me ;w; You could do it like
   
   that:
   
   Example

   
2. 00:39:111 (1) - Move to x:356 y:162 to look better?

1. 00:04:999 (6) - Ctrl+g?

Kazey wrote:

Hi hi!
From modding queue ~

[Easy]

- 00:00:888(2) - Make this slider more curve to catch with previous slider(1), like this.
- 00:04:888(3) - ^
- 00:34:222(1) - Remove NC ? no
- 00:47:333 - This pattern looks so weird. I suggest you to change/move some notes : maybe ? no
- 01:00:444(1,2) - Same suggestion at the beginning. no
- 01:17:333(3) - Make it more prettier!
- 01:58:666(2) - Move this note to get it center of previous slider? If you do it, don't forget to change spacing! no


[Normal]

- 00:28:444(1,2) - Change NC between these notes? no
- 01:02:666(1) - Overlap with the previous note(1), looks better! Don't forget spacing with next beat(2). agreed!
- 01:11:111(1) - This slider needs more curve. not need imo.
- 01:57:777 - Hard?! 4rating.. I guess is too for a normal no? just red tick. no problem imo.
- 02:24:888(6) - Add finish at the end of slider? Fit! can't find symbals.

Okay, the second verse is too hard than 1st. Maybe try to re-make some pattern/notes, replace by sliders.


[Hard]

Ok, this difficulty is better than other, ofc. Some (nazi) suggestions there:

- 00:23:111(7) : NC?
- 00:30:111(7) : ^, and remove NC there: 00:32:222(1)
- 00:37:333(5) : NC?
- 00:40:888(5) : ^
- 00:44:444(6) : ^
- 00:47:999(7) : ^
- 00:58:444(7) : ^
- 01:23:555(5) : ^
- 01:38:888(4) : Move 2 grid down. I know you want get it beautiful, but spacing is too long, you need to reduce. Just overlap like sorry, spacing keepthis!
- 01:53:111(4) : ^ ^
- 02:16:888(5) : NC?
- 02:22:888(3) : Add finish on this note? keep
no changed NC stuff.

Okay, that's all! Good song, like it! =3
Good luck! ~

-Kirito wrote:

wait modding ;w;

1. 02:20:444 (1) - Move to x248 y64 for better blanketing?

1. 00:42:666 (1) - Forgot a clap at the end?
2. 01:57:999 (4) - I think this note makes the pattern a bit unnecessary difficult lol Remove it?
3. 02:26:444 (4) - ^

1. 00:19:555 (4) - Missing a clap here? o.o
2. 00:22:222 (5) - Clap at end?
3. 00:50:666 (5) - ^
4. 01:17:333 (7) - Not sure if this is allowed since it's actually 1/6 @.@
5. 01:24:444 (7) - ^
6. 01:31:111 (4) - Clap at start and repeat would be nice
7. 01:38:888 (4) - Move it a bit up so it's not hidden?
8. 01:53:111 (4) - Same as ^, but right

Blue Dragon wrote:

[Easy]

1. 02:20:444 (1) - Move to x248 y64 for better blanketing? done

[Normal]

1. 00:42:666 (1) - Forgot a clap at the end? done
2. 01:57:999 (4) - I think this note makes the pattern a bit unnecessary difficult lol Remove it? done
3. 02:26:444 (4) - ^ done

[Hard]

1. 00:19:555 (4) - Missing a clap here? o.o not follow clap my rhythm here. so, no change this.
2. 00:22:222 (5) - Clap at end? done
3. 00:50:666 (5) - ^ done
4. 01:17:333 (7) - Not sure if this is allowed since it's actually 1/6 @.@ done
5. 01:24:444 (7) - ^ done
6. 01:31:111 (4) - Clap at start and repeat would be nice agree done!
7. 01:38:888 (4) - Move it a bit up so it's not hidden? done
8. 01:53:111 (4) - Same as ^, but right done

Pretty awesome map, I'd like to make a diff tho

ts8zs wrote:

[BD's Insane]
00:06:222 (1,2,3,4) - it should be .-.- I wanted to make it easy and predictable to play
00:33:333 (6) - 1/4reverse? song doesn't go 1/4 D:
01:03:999 - remove and break start here? I feel like this note has to be clicked lol
01:51:999 (1,7,8,9,10) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1350919 done

ts8zs wrote:

[Hard]
Some part could be divide to two parts by NC like 00:06:222 (4) - 00:37:333 (5) - etc...It depends on you umm, i kept NC pettern.

00:26:666 (5) - this whistle only used here,And I don't know why ok..
01:17:333 (7) - looks narrow XP
[Normal]
00:06:222 (5) - NC kept
00:41:777 (5,6) - Why not 3/4 reverse? fine, boring pettern.
01:10:666 (3) - NC why D:
01:19:999 (4) - looks narrow i hope fine.
[Easy]
Some part could be divide to two parts by NC,also,depends on you
00:00:888 (2) - didn't blank well i hope fix.
00:05:333 (3) - ^ ^
00:47:999 (4) - NC okie

Well made:3

Sheryl wrote:

[BD's Insane]
02:23:111 (1) - remove nc done
02:27:555 (1,2,3) - Suggestion flow would be weird for (2,3,4)

good luck!!

1. 01:19:999 (3) - NC? because of stacking.
2. 02:34:666 (3) - NC?

1. 00:08:666 (2) - clap
2. 00:22:888 (2) - ^
3. 00:26:666 (3) - hmm..NC?
4. 01:02:666 (4) - NC
5. 01:10:666 (3) - add clap too
6. 01:39:111 (6) - ^
7. 01:53:333 (3) - ^
8. 01:54:666 (3) - add clap on arrow of slider
9. 02:18:666 (1) - blanket
10. 02:23:111 (3) - add clap on arrow of slider
11. 02:26:666 (4) - clap on end of slider

1. 00:47:999 (7) - NC
2. 01:17:333 (7) - straighted slider than crooked slider
3. 01:23:555 (5) - NC
4. 01:38:888 (4) - add finish without end of slider. In end of slider, add clap
5. 01:53:111 (4) - ^

1. 00:34:888 (2,3,4) - finish? and decrease sound only this part.

1. Seems fine.

1. 00:31:444 (5,6,7) - I'd go for something like this instead: http://puu.sh/9C3OX.jpg .
2. 01:03:999 (1) - Not that it matters for GDs, but remove this note and add a delayed break? It's consistent with the other diffs, and tbh I think it's a nice effect.
3. 01:17:999 (1,2,3,4) - Generally, none of your 1/6 streams are stacked, so it's easy to notice when there's a 1/6 stream, well except here (and one other place). Consider spacing this out as well, like the other streams you have, as it'd feel more consistent and help reading the 1/6's.
4. 02:08:444 (4,5,6,7) - These feel a wee bit too close imo. Consider spreading it out a tiny bit.
5. 02:21:999 (6,7,8,1) - Same as 01:17:999 (1,2,3,4).

1. 00:07:555 (2,3) - I was gonna ask you to change this, but they're actually pretty cool to play!
2. 00:33:777 (4) - Remove this note? I think it's better to follow the instruments stopping here, instead of the person going "Ah-Oh" or whatever. Gives a nice effect of stopping up, before starting up again with the next slider.
3. 01:02:222 (3) - Same as above.

1. 00:06:222 (5) - I'd rather just make this identical to 00:05:333 (3) - . Makes the pattern look neater.
2. 01:13:999 (5) - Remove this note? Feels like overmapping, considering the "main melody" playing at this spot having no beat here at all.
3. 01:21:111 (5) - Same as above. This part sounds just as 01:19:111 (3) - , where the beats are on white ticks, so adding the red one is weird.
4. 02:19:333 - And here, skipping that red tick is weird Consider adding a note here?

1. 01:46:666 (1) - Is the whistle on repeat intentional? You don't use it on any of the other diffs, and it sounds a bit out of place.

CXu wrote:

[BD's Insane]

1. 00:31:444 (5,6,7) - I'd go for something like this instead: http://puu.sh/9C3OX.jpg . I was already using too many sliders in a row there, so I wanted to give it a quick break.
2. 01:03:999 (1) - Not that it matters for GDs, but remove this note and add a delayed break? It's consistent with the other diffs, and tbh I think it's a nice effect. imo this beat has to be clicked >:
3. 01:17:999 (1,2,3,4) - Generally, none of your 1/6 streams are stacked, so it's easy to notice when there's a 1/6 stream, well except here (and one other place). Consider spacing this out as well, like the other streams you have, as it'd feel more consistent and help reading the 1/6's. Even though that makes sense, I prefer to keep them that way. The AR (should be 8.3 now) helps on reading it and the song itself has a pretty much predictable rhythm at that part, so there shouldn't be any confusion for the players.
4. 02:08:444 (4,5,6,7) - These feel a wee bit too close imo. Consider spreading it out a tiny bit. done
5. 02:21:999 (6,7,8,1) - Same as 01:17:999 (1,2,3,4). same

CXu wrote:

Hi I am fastest modder /sarcasm.
Ancient m4m incoming.

[Hard]

1. 00:07:555 (2,3) - I was gonna ask you to change this, but they're actually pretty cool to play! ya XD
2. 00:33:777 (4) - Remove this note? I think it's better to follow the instruments stopping here, instead of the person going "Ah-Oh" or whatever. Gives a nice effect of stopping up, before starting up again with the next slider. okay x.x
3. 01:02:222 (3) - Same as above. okay x_x

[Normal]

1. 00:06:222 (5) - I'd rather just make this identical to 00:05:333 (3) - . Makes the pattern look neater. ok
2. 01:13:999 (5) - Remove this note? Feels like overmapping, considering the "main melody" playing at this spot having no beat here at all. yep
3. 01:21:111 (5) - Same as above. This part sounds just as 01:19:111 (3) - , where the beats are on white ticks, so adding the red one is weird. yues.
4. 02:19:333 - And here, skipping that red tick is weird Consider adding a note here? done

[Easy]

1. 01:46:666 (1) - Is the whistle on repeat intentional? You don't use it on any of the other diffs, and it sounds a bit out of place. agree

Nice map overall. Nothing much, so poke me when you're done!

1. 00:26:666 (3) - Intentional normal on end?
2. 00:34:888 (2) - Should be soft-hitfinish on end.
3. 02:05:333 (3) - Clap on end.

1. 00:25:777 (2) - Intentional normal on end?
2. 00:35:111 (2) - Soft finish.
3. 00:50:666 (1) - Finish?

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi~

[BD's Insane]
01:18:518 (5) - Wouldn't it be better to keep circles here? It breaks a bit the consistency you have on 1/6 notes. I wanted to add a bit of variation so the map isn't the same thing all over
01:20:296 (2) - ^
01:22:074 (2) - ^
02:13:703 (3) - ^

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi~

[Hard]
00:07:555 (2) - I get why these are 3/4, but you should try making these 1/2 so they match with the percusions you follow, like in 00:09:555 (6).
00:14:666 (2) - ^ sorry both no changed. CXu said, so, they're actually cute playable. and i like this follow sound.
02:01:666 (3) - I'd really suggest to change this for two circles, so you keep the tapping pattern you use in later parts like this [02:03:111 (2,3,4)] changed stuff and more playable pettern.

That's it, we have nice stuff over here.