1. Clean

1. 00:19:459 (1,2,3) - to maintain consistency and coherence with the other difficulties of map, I recommend adding whistles here and remove the finish & add clap here 00:20:107 (2), 00:20:756 (3) - remove the finish on this and add clap at the end of the slider.
2. 00:22:702 (2) - whistle.
3. 00:23:999 (4) - you forgot to add one clap here.
4. 00:27:242 (1,2) - I'm not sure about this but this is a bit confusing for a beginners imo is better if you try to make another pattern here.
   maybe this:
   
   Example

   
   The flow is better and is more readable imo.
5. 00:30:486 (2) - clap.
6. 00:37:296 (2) - if you listen the background , you may have noticed need to add a clap here.
7. 00:41:513 (3,1) - bad flow, this is a bad transition from one slider to another.
   
   Bad Flow

   
   I recommend you do the following: 00:41:513 (3) - CTRL + H, CTRL + J , CTRL + G and move this slider to: X:223 Y:163 for to be more fluid when playing the map.
   
   Good Flow

   
8. 00:58:378 (1) - add clap.
9. 01:15:729 - this clap sounds bad and random with your previous patterns of hitsounds, remove the clap and add finish.
10. 01:23:026 (3,2) - Nazi* I'm sure you can make better this blanket maybe like this:
    
    Blanket

    
11. 01:29:513 (1) - finish.
12. 01:34:702 (1) - ^.
13. 01:45:080 (3) - ^.
14. 01:39:242 (3) - clap on the head.

• I would assume that this difficulty is normal

1. 00:06:161 - add clap because in the background you can to hear one .
2. 00:18:162 (3,4,1) - bad flow try this:
   
   Good Flow

   
3. 00:20:108 (2,3) - same here ^.
4. 00:21:729 - clap and whistle sounds good here.
5. 00:29:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - whistles please.
6. 00:51:567 (2,3) - Nazi* 00:51:892 (3) - move this slider to X:452 Y:224 for a better stack.
7. 00:55:946 (1,2) - well... this is sounds good and is nice but for a beginner diff you should not do as many repetitions could be confusing.
   Try this rhythm:
   this is highly recommended to fix
8. 01:13:621 (4) - you forgot to add one clap here.
9. 01:17:513 (2) - ^.
10. 01:20:107 - ^.
11. 01:21:405 - ^.
12. 01:26:594 (3) - ^.
13. 01:34:378 (4) - ^.
14. 01:35:675 - ^.
15. 01:33:405 - maybe finish soft here.
16. 01:36:972 - same suggestion whistle and clap sounds good here.
17. 01:37:297 (1) - finish on the head because it is the beginning of a kiai time.
18. 01:39:567 (4) - clap.
19. 01:42:162 (4) - ^.
20. 01:47:351 (2) - ^.

1. 00:57:000 (6) - this note is unnecessary you should have to remove it.

1. 00:10:378 - when I was playing had a feeling something to click here so I suggest mapping this part is empty, something like this:
   

Gero wrote:

INFINITE

00:57:000 (6) - this note is unnecessary you should have to remove it. i feel better with this note, following sound
Pretty Nice diff~ thank you!

Gero wrote:

ryuu's NOVICE

• I would assume that this difficulty is normal it's normal o.o

1. 00:06:161 - add clap because in the background you can to hear one . ugu
2. 00:18:162 (3,4,1) - bad flow try this: i like my flow
   
   Good Flow

   
3. 00:20:108 (2,3) - same here ^. ^
4. 00:21:729 - clap and whistle sounds good here. ugu
5. 00:29:838 (1,2,3,4,5) - whistles please.ugu
6. 00:51:567 (2,3) - Nazi* 00:51:892 (3) - move this slider to X:452 Y:224 for a better stack. ugu
7. 00:55:946 (1,2) - well... this is sounds good and is nice but for a beginner diff you should not do as many repetitions could be confusing. ugu
   Try this rhythm:
   this is highly recommended to fix
8. 01:13:621 (4) - you forgot to add one clap here. ugu
9. 01:17:513 (2) - ^. ugu
10. 01:20:107 - ^. ugu
11. 01:21:405 - ^. ugu
12. 01:26:594 (3) - ^. ugu
13. 01:34:378 (4) - ^. ugu
14. 01:35:675 - ^. ugu
15. 01:33:405 - maybe finish soft here. ugu
16. 01:36:972 - same suggestion whistle and clap sounds good here. ugu
17. 01:37:297 (1) - finish on the head because it is the beginning of a kiai time. ugu
18. 01:39:567 (4) - clap. ugu
19. 01:42:162 (4) - ^. ugu
20. 01:47:351 (2) - ^. ugu

Mystyk wrote:

General:
Aka's BASIC:
00:06:486 (1) - try a different direction for this slider so that it will have better flow - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1203218 - your version leads downwards, so a slider leading upwards would be better dun see anything wrong with this one o.ò and actually i don't like how it would flow after 00:05:188 (2) if so. so noppppp
00:44:107 (2) - you should end this slider on the red tick (1/2 later), because you started the slider on the same melody, you should end it on the same melody as well we have discussed that kick-sliders are kinda hard for an easy diff.. no?
01:15:242 (3) - you should end this 1/2 earlier on the white tick, since the big beat is there and then you can try adding a hit circle 01:15:891 - which would fit to the vocals eeeeeh, b-but here 01:11:351 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - is the same rhythm, wouldn't it be strange to do such thing?

Gero wrote:

Aka's BASIC

1. 00:41:513 (3,1) - bad flow, this is a bad transition from one slider to another.
   
   Bad Flow

   
   I recommend you do the following: 00:41:513 (3) - CTRL + H, CTRL + J , CTRL + G and move this slider to: X:223 Y:163 for to be more fluid when playing the map.
   
   Good Flow

   
   done bun rotated the (3) a bit left and some changes cuz with your x,y the pattern would not even fit in grid level lol..
2. 01:39:242 (3) - clap on the head. doesn't suit here imo k

1. 00:20:756 (3) - add a whistle to the end instead of removing a clap from there. it's more fitting with the song.
2. 00:22:702 (2) - I wonder why you added a whistle not a clap.
3. 00:44:756 - add an extra note here to complete the vocal (??) line. or extend 00:44:107 (2) - to the next red tick to make consistent with 00:42:810 (1) - and 00:45:405 (1) - .
4. 00:51:891 (2) - considering the pattern and the flow it'd probably better to make this slider to straight one like this imo. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1205412
5. 01:11:351 (1) - this's optional, but how about making a curve with this slider for consistency with 01:12:648 (2,1) - ?
6. 01:16:540 (1,2,1,2) - I like this placement :3
7. 01:35:999 (3) - add a whistle to the reversal point instead of a clap? it's more fitting.

1. 00:07:783 (3) - it's strange to break a clap pattern here. well I know why you did that though. try this clap pattern once ↓
   
   SPOILER

   * these make 1 set.
   00:06:486 (1) - remove from the end
   00:07:783 (3) - remove from the beginning
   00:08:432 (4) - ^
2. 00:15:567 (3,4) - sounds confused for me. it'd probably better to remove a whistle from the reversal point.
3. 00:25:946 (3) - considering the vocal(??) line, a whistle should be added to the beginning imo. because it's already added to the end and (4).
4. 00:46:702 (3) - the way this curve slider is doesn't fit with the flow well imo. so I suggest rearranging it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1205477
   

   444,104,46702,2,0,L|460:20,2,79.9999999999999

5. 01:15:243 (3,4) - try this pattern once. it's more fitting with the vocal and the melody.
   

• 
  nothing especially to say~
  can't defeat Reiji-RJ. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1205503

KSHR wrote:

[Aka's BASIC]

1. 00:44:756 - add an extra note here to complete the vocal (??) line. or extend 00:44:107 (2) - to the next red tick to make consistent with 00:42:810 (1) - and 00:45:405 (1) - . i'd like to finally leave it alone, keep as it is -v- slider-note would be hard for an easy, kick-slider would be hard too, if i extend it, it would not fit the rhythm imo.. so

KSHR wrote:

[ryuu's NOVICE]

1. 00:07:783 (3) - it's strange to break a clap pattern here. well I know why you did that though. try this clap pattern once ↓
   
   SPOILER

   * these make 1 set.
   00:06:486 (1) - remove from the end
   00:07:783 (3) - remove from the beginning
   00:08:432 (4) - ^
2. 00:15:567 (3,4) - sounds confused for me. it'd probably better to remove a whistle from the reversal point.
3. 00:25:946 (3) - considering the vocal(??) line, a whistle should be added to the beginning imo. because it's already added to the end and (4).
4. 00:46:702 (3) - the way this curve slider is doesn't fit with the flow well imo. so I suggest rearranging it like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1205477
   

   444,104,46702,2,0,L|460:20,2,79.9999999999999

5. 01:15:243 (3,4) - try this pattern once. it's more fitting with the vocal and the melody.
   

1. Can the difficulty names not be in capitals?. I'd be much happier if you stylised them as Basic, Novice, and so. I don't know if the native difficulties of the game are in capitals
2. Kiai times are inconsistent in Reiji's difficulty; you could either use the same kiais for your diffs or have reiji change hers, for the sake of consistency. Not a must, though.
3. Since Reiji's username is actually Reiji-RJ, that's how it should be in the tags. Also, you can separately add Reiji.
4. The tag reflec isn't meant to be reflect? Just a wild guess here.

1. 00:32:432 (1,2) - I really do not recommend this on the easiest difficulty. I suggest extending (1) to 00:32:918 - and placing a circle at 00:33:242 -
2. 00:44:107 (2) - Extending this to be 3/2 in length (as 00:42:810 (1,1) - ) seems to fit the music better. You should try it!
3. 00:54:486 (3,4,1) - Hitting things on red ticks can be very misleading for new players. I at least recommend adding a repeat on (3) and removing (4). You'll have to replace the next sliders, but that shouldn't be a problem since they come right before a spinner.

1. 01:38:594 (3) - Pleeeease could you try to make this symmetrical to it's center? Something like this.

1. Unsnapped sliderend brah
   Unsnapped sliderends

   
2. 00:04:378 (2) - Not perfectly stacked - is it on purpose? Can you fix this?
3. 00:05:675 (2,3,4,5) - This would flow soooo much better if you could Ctrl + H this and then rework the pattern a bit... Right now it feels way too forced to play.
4. 00:09:405 (3,4) - Please move these up and left so that they aren't stacked nor overlapping/overlapped by other sliders. Everything looks way too clustered as it is now.
5. 00:36:324 (1,1,1,1) - hahaha nice!
6. 01:17:027 (2,3) - For skins with "backgrounded" hitbursts this becomes awkward to read... I'd much rather ask you to not place the stack on top of 01:15:892 (1,2,3,4) -

narakucrimson wrote:

[ryuu's NOVICE]

1. 01:38:594 (3) - Pleeeease could you try to make this symmetrical to it's center? Something like this. i'm tried :< if u don't like, post code :о

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi!

[General]

1. Can the difficulty names not be in capitals?. I'd be much happier if you stylised them as Basic, Novice, and so. I don't know if the native difficulties of the game are in capitals I think diff names should be in capitals, because thats native diff scaling
2. Kiai times are inconsistent in Reiji's difficulty; you could either use the same kiais for your diffs or have reiji change hers, for the sake of consistency. Not a must, though. i'll ask her
3. Since Reiji's username is actually Reiji-RJ, that's how it should be in the tags. Also, you can separately add Reiji. will be fixed when all will post their fixed diffs
4. The tag reflec isn't meant to be reflect? Just a wild guess here. it's Reflec Beat

[INFINITE]

1. Unsnapped sliderend brah fxd that was snapped 1/16 repeat slider D:
   Unsnapped sliderends

   
2. 00:04:378 (2) - Not perfectly stacked - is it on purpose? Can you fix this? fxd
3. 00:05:675 (2,3,4,5) - This would flow soooo much better if you could Ctrl + H this and then rework the pattern a bit... Right now it feels way too forced to play. changed something
4. 00:09:405 (3,4) - Please move these up and left so that they aren't stacked nor overlapping/overlapped by other sliders. Everything looks way too clustered as it is now. done
5. 00:36:324 (1,1,1,1) - hahaha nice! thank you!
6. 01:17:027 (2,3) - For skins with "backgrounded" hitbursts this becomes awkward to read... I'd much rather ask you to not place the stack on top of 01:15:892 (1,2,3,4) - moved

That's all for now!
Good luck!

488,120,98594,2,0,B|472:168|472:168|480:196|488:224|488:224|472:272,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Zero__wind wrote:

Hi, mod as previously requested
I'm sorry I was busy these days but I found that this map is about to be bubbled so I would just try to point out some minor issues here, hope it would help

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
clear.
Natteke's combo colors? Impressive. it's yeahyeahyeah's colors /me hides

INFINITE
00:01:297 - I think you could try using a normal sample with soft finish here, just like what you did at 00:01:783 (2) - , they share quite the same sound as I suppose done
00:02:594 - same as above, also for 00:03:081 (2) - , I think they should be consistent and they sound quite nice with a normal sound together. And you could do the same to all the similar points in the later parts, like 00:03:892 - and 00:04:378 (2) - and so on, if you decided to do so done
00:06:162 (4) - you may consider replaceing this with a 1/8 reverse slider to fit the intense drum sound in the music, but that would break your symmetrical pattern, so this is quite an optional one i think i'll leave those sliders consistent to "are you ready?"
00:10:540 - I don't really like that you reduced the volume here, because I think there are still quite audioable sound effects in the music and 00:10:702 (3) - may sound really good if you add a whistle to it, maybe use 30% volume for 00:10:540 (2,3,4,1) - instead of 15% all fixed
00:13:540 (4) - maybe adjust its end to soft sample? as there's no such drum sound or something at 00:13:702 - , but rather at 00:13:621 - , so that normal sound is kinda out of place imo fixed
00:20:756 (5) - according to the music, I think you missed a whistle and a finish on head added
00:21:405 (1) - maybe whistle for its body? added
00:22:378 (2) - according to your former hitsound patterns ,you may need a whistle here? or at 00:22:459 - , I'm not really sure added on (2)
00:23:675 (2,3,4) - the rhythm here is a bit weird to me, I think you should still keep the double tap pattern, maybe try exchanging the order of 00:23:757 (3,4) - , slider start first, and the circle follows, I think that would be a beetter fitting rhythm, if so, you may put the circle which is at 00:23:919 - to around 00:24:000 (1) - 's head and it'll be playable tried to fix
00:27:729 (5) - this also feels awkward to me, I think maybe you're try to following the "dance" sound, I still prefer better to follow the background music which is at 00:27:810 - . and also, 00:27:729 (5,6) - the spacing between them is somehow unintuitive, it's really quite far as a 1/4 pattern. comparing to 00:28:540 (1,2) - , the distance is quite the same, while this is a 1/2 pattern. as long as there's no heavy beat landing on 00:27:729 (5,6) - so I don't really understand the jump here. you could move 00:28:054 (6) - to about (228,124) to form blanket with 00:28:540 (1) - to solve this i want to keep this slider on loli moan in music, so i'll not change that. but i fixed thats slider too long, this was my mistake, thank you
00:32:108 (1) - adjusting its end to soft sample sounds better to me as there's nothing to follow at 00:32:270 - fixed
00:42:162 (1) - may consider replacing this with a circle at 00:42:162 - and a 1/2 slider which starts from 00:42:243 - , in this way you could more precisely catch the rhythm of vocal wow, thats sounds really good!
00:42:810 (1) - why is this slider with x0.75 sv? I think it should have a x1.0 speed just like 00:45:405 (1) - , I think they're really quite the same fixed
01:15:000 (6) - I prefer to move this circle to 01:15:162 - , making 01:15:081 (6,7,1) - a tripple, instead of 01:14:919 (5,6,7) - . fixed
01:37:783 (4) - same as 00:27:729 (5) - same too
overall a very nice diff, I enjoyed this a lot thank you!

EXHAUST
first to mention that hitsound suggestions are quite same as the above, so you could check them by yourself. just fix what you've fixed in INFINITE diff to make them consistent with each other all fixed
00:58:378 (6) - I think you'd better add a NC here, because players may mis-read 00:58:216 (5,6) - 's rhythm as the same as 00:56:919 (5,6) - , they look really alike to me, so they may hit 00:58:378 (6) - early. also it's to be consistent with that in INFINITE diff fixed
01:27:486 (5,2) - intended to NOT stack them precisely? if not, betterfix it yeah, missed that, fixed
01:45:081 (1,2,3) - I don't really know why you use so small distance between them. this should be the part that you really need to emphasise but you didn't set jumps to do so, not cool enough added jump

Reiji's ADVANCED
all fine to me. I always enjoy RJ's map she says she glad to hear this

ryuu's NOVICE
01:21:729 (1,2) - maybe add whistles on their heads? I think they share quite the same sound as 01:24:324 - added whistles by ryuu's request

Aka's BASIC
decent diff, everything fine

Clear! Wish you good luck here!
it's really cool as a 1st ranked map

Ntasuto wrote:

INFINITE
00:32:432 (1,1,1,1) - maybe not so much combo color spam. fxd
00:47:351 (5,1) - Bad overlapping > the end of the slider(5) is not inside the slider(1) move the middle anchor so it does i tried
00:52:540 (1,2) - ^ no
01:34:865 (1) - remove combo fxd
01:41:189 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think you should separate 01:41:189 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) and 01:41:838 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - since you can clearly hear the change. i don't have anything in my mind right now. Try think of something. done

EXHAUST
00:20:756 (1,2,1) - kinda breaks the flow. feels uncomfortable , something likes this feels really nice : http://puu.sh/6qdnO.jpg fixed with own variant
01:21:081 (3,1) - bad overlap don't want to change

Ntasuto wrote:

ryuu's NOVICE
00:22:054 (1,2) - bad overlapping > Rotate (-45°) "Origin: selection center" so it blankets 00:20:756 (3) i like me overlaps here
01:28:215 (3,1) - ^ ^
01:33:081 (2,3,4,5) - too confusing for novice( low ar) fixed
01:36:000 (4) - Move the red anchor to x:96 / y:100 so it is perfect( don't forget to slightly move the next slider so it has the same distance ) okay
01:45:729 (2,1) - bad overlap > 3 notes before the end and so much space. no need to overlap like that changed

Nymph wrote:

some suggestions here:

[INFINITE]
00:45:081 (1) - try make a better blanket?

00:55:702 (X) - maybe add a note here to follow the music?

00:57:000 (X) - same here


actually I think something can be better such as slidershapes and some nazi spacing but maybe too strict for a first map, so maybe you can try to learn them in your future maps, call me if you want some mods on those nazi stuff lol

call me back when you are ready.

1. Make the Kiai Time consistent through all the difficulties if possible.

1. Settings feels too easy, I'd increase HP OD and AR by 1 tick at least.

1. 00:49:296 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern feels a bit too hard compared to the rest of the difficulty, I'd change them with some sliders instead.
2. 01:16:215 (5) - Don't stack this circle under the previous slider, it might be confusing for a Normal.
3. 01:33:081 (2,3,4,5) - Way too many stacks, too confusing with such a low AR, please space them and don't stack them together.

1. 00:31:135 (6) - I'd add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
2. 01:22:946 (1) - Add a finish on this slider end to follow the strong beat of the music.

1. 00:23:919 (4) - This circle here feels extra and not needed, I'd remove it from here.
2. 01:15:892 (1,2,3,4) - These notes would be better if stacked normally, this way are somewhat confusing to read.