Breezy wrote:

Hey, M4M from my queue!

Normal

00:14:641 (3) - Something about this slider bothers me, it looks like the end of it may be uneven with the beginning of it, it might be just me or the skin that I'm using. Fixed thanks!! It was also bothering me as well.

00:29:187 (4) - I think you should remove this circle because it would go better with the instrument in the background. I like your suggestion, but something makes me want to map the beat on 00:29:187 - (and to be consistent with 00:12:096 (3,4) -).

00:43:368 (3,4) - You could probably have this blanket more neatly. Done, also re-aligned some sliders. It should play much better now!

Hard

00:14:641 (6,7) - You could probably blanket this better. lol I thought I fixed this blanket in the previous mod

00:18:641 (1,2) - ^ Looks ok to me, how can it be improved?

00:24:277 (8,1) - It looks a bit weird with these overlapping, I suggest moving it in a spot where they wouldn't overlap. No change, I actually love this mapping technique <3

00:33:732 (2) - Ctrl + G would flow better. I prefer the current because it matches my previous pattern at 00:30:277 (1,2,3,4) -. When I Ctrl+G here, the distance snap would be -0.30x.

00:44:641 (8,9) - You could probably have these two sliders blanket each other. Flow is more important than blanketing here IMO because of the vocal. I follow the Double Ctrl+> rule here.

Dream

00:11:732 (1,2,3) - Maybe change this pattern up so it looks a bit different from the rest of the similar patterns before this. Slightly increased the DS of the circle before.

00:14:641 (1) - It would sound better if you end this slider at 00:14:823 and then add a circle at 00:15:005 I use the 1/1 slider here because it emphasizes the 1/1 wait and follows the previous 1/1.

00:57:187 - You could have a stream start here instead but that's up to you. No thanks

01:22:823 (1,2) - Have these blanket? Blanket not intended, it is a double Ctrl+> pattern.

Good luck getting this ranked!

Breezy wrote:

Hey, M4M from my queue!

toybot's Insane

SPOILER

00:05:187 (4) - Ctrl + G would flow better. -fix

00:15:732 (1,2) - You could blanket this. -fix

00:29:732 (3,1,1) - This looks really scrunched up and looks weird, I suggest you to find a better way to do this, also you could Ctrl + G 00:29:914 (1) if you don't plan on changing this. -hmm, i really like this especially the slider on 00:29:915 -. there really isn't a better way for me that would go in this direction of flow

00:49:732 (4,5) - I don't think you should have these two overlap. -fix

00:59:005 (4) - I think there could be a better placement for this, maybe X:116/Y:192? If you do this, then Ctrl + G would be more appropriate at 00:58:641 (3) -i like it here right now, as it goes in a counterclockwise spin; putting the note there would just feel counterintuitive, and the ctrl+G, although flows well, feels less climactic and fun.

01:09:187 (2) - This reverse slider should end facing the next note instead of away, it would be more comfortable. -what's wrong with it? if anything, it kinda helps launch the cursor up by ending farther away

01:27:005 (1) - This would look better directly in the middle. -meh, sure fixed

Good luck getting this ranked!

SolrosRepica wrote:

Hiya~!
Thanks m4m
Nice mapping,I like this.Rhythmic map.

[Dream]
00:10:823 (4) - Add a note.If you like. example : http://puu.sh/dn75l/830d3b4ad4.jpg No, it breaks the transition here for me to add a circle here.
00:11:550 (4) - ^ example: http://puu.sh/dn76a/1b7f1618d6.jpg I want to follow the current pattern to match the triples in the song.
00:57:187 (3) - Change to Beat snap 1/4 and add a stream note. Here is example : http://puu.sh/dn7jR/2118a93f50.jpg I don't want to use 1/4 in this difficulty.
01:09:368 (3) - , 01:09:459 (4) - Add a note : http://puu.sh/dn7pX/0a69684f6f.jpg I will consider this, but I want to emphasize the voal here, so no change.
00:41:005 (3) - ,00:41:096 (4) - ^ http://puu.sh/dn7D4/308c7bcf3e.jpg No change, note does not fit IMO.
00:57:368 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Add a sound[Whistle] Instead, I added Finish to some.
00:30:277 (1) - 00:40:823 (2) - I love this part <33 Awesome. Thank you!

If you like my modding,I'm glad

PureCreamy wrote:

Hi! Random Mod ^^

Alarido's Easy
In this diff. I'll give some suggestion about the hitsound
00:19:732 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:21:187 (4) Add clap (SC2)
00:32:459 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:32:823 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:35:368 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:35:732 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:38:277 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:38:641 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:41:187 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:41:550 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:42:277 (1) Add clap (SC2)
00:43:005 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:43:732 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:44:459 (4) Add clap (SC2)
00:45:914 (2) Add clap (SC2)
00:52:459 (1) Add clap (SC2)
00:53:914 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:54:641 (3) Add clap (SC2)
00:58:641 (2) Add whistle (SC2)
01:00:823 (1) Add finish (SC2)
The flow seems good for me ^^ ► ♥ Flow is my main concern on mapping. It has the power of enchant or ruin any map, and also of make a map harder or easier, obvious or fuzzy.

► APPLIED EVERYTHING (:

That's all Good luck!

PureCreamy wrote:

Hi! Random Mod ^^

Normal
00:01:187 (1) You need to add finish here Tried here but I prefer my current Clap -> Finish Soft Drum pattern
00:02:277 (2) Add clap (SC2) I tried SC2 for the map but I think regular whistles match the mapping style better, the claps sounded too loud and blocked out the whistle
00:03:732 (4) ^
00:18:277 (3) ^
00:19:732 (2) ^
00:21:187 (4) ^
00:22:641 (1) ^
00:24:096 (4) ^
00:25:550 (3) ^
00:27:005 (4) ^
00:29:914 (5) ^
00:42:277 (1) ^
00:43:005 (2) ^
00:43:732 (3) ^
00:44:459 (4) ^
00:45:914 (2) ^
00:46:641 (3) ^
00:51:005 (2) ^
00:51:732 (3) ^
00:52:459 (4) ^
00:53:187 (5) ^
00:53:914 (2) ^
00:54:641 (2) ^
00:58:277 (1) ^
00:59:005 (2) ^
00:59:732 (4) ^
01:00:459 (5) ^
01:01:187 (1) ^
01:01:914 (2) ^
01:02:641 (3) ^
01:04:096 (2) ^
01:04:823 (2) ^
01:05:550 (4) ^
01:07:005 (1) ^
01:07:732 (2) ^
01:08:459 (3) ^
01:09:914 (1) ^
01:10:641 (2) ^
01:11:368 (4) ^
01:12:096 (6) ^
01:12:823 (1) ^
01:13:550 (2) ^
01:14:277 (3) ^
01:15:005 (4) ^
01:15:732 (2) ^
01:18:641 (1) ^
01:19:368 (2) ^
01:20:823 (1) ^
01:22:277 (2) ^
01:00:823 (1) Add finish I don't want to put a finish here
01:03:187 (4) Add whistle Done!
01:03:550 (4) ^ Done!
01:06:096 (5) ^ Done!
01:06:459 (5) ^ Done!
01:08:641 (1) It would be great if you add finish here Done!
01:09:005 (2) Same ^ Done!
01:12:459 (1) ^ No change, I have drum here

That's all Good luck!

Jintai wrote:

Suggestions for Railgun's Dream

00:56:096 (1,1,2,3,4) - Would be better if you make a mini stream instead of using 4 circles. No change, this is 1/2 map

01:05:550 (1) - Should cut that slider in half and add a circle between them. I hold the vocal here

01:17:187 (1,4,1,2) - Sounds a bit offbeat to me.

01:24:096 (1) - Maybe add a circle at the end of the slider. "Ku" starts on 01:23:914 - so I don't think there needs to be a circle here.

This beatmap is fun in general, but it needs a bit more work on it because i think it's a bit easy to be 4.10 stars. Too me, it's like a 3.98 - 4 stars. Great job so far on your beatmap. you shouldn't judge a map by the amount of stars ><

Meyrink wrote:

Hi ! MRM Sory for late
Going to put important things i noticed and suggestions !

Alarido's Easy

1. Slider Track rate 2 a bit wierd! try just 1 ► Done.
2. 01:12:460 (1) - can be better ! or ! the best si to map that place rather than long slider !cuz overlap with 01:16:096 (2) - ► View no problem coz (3) is far on time than the minimum it could. Kept.
3. 01:27:005 (1) - u can remove spinner to make it like other diffs ! or do here a spinner 01:24:096 - then delet 2nd ► Remov'd the slider and moved spinner by some measures early. Done.

that's all ! good luck o/

Meyrink wrote:

Hi ! MRM Sory for late
Going to put important things i noticed and suggestions !

toybot's Insane

1. Better Diff Name Light insane -changed
2. 00:20:641 (2,3) - isn't that curved alot ? just to make keep map consistent maby make them normal like 00:19:187 (2) - etc.. -changed
3. 00:57:732 (5) - why not just 2 circles ? -it emphasizes the next object more imo
   nice diff !

that's all ! good luck o/

regN wrote:

Dream:

00:14:277 (4) - I think this note is placed a bit out of place, I don't think it needs to be emphasized that much. I changed the angle a bit but kept the same DS. It should look a bit better.
this: 00:12:823 (1) - and this 00:13:732 (3,4) - have the same sound but one is a lot harder. maybe move 4 to make a triangle shape with 2 slider end and 3 slider head. Done

00:29:187 (3) - only slider that isn't curved want to know why you decided not to do it Mixing things up. I think it makes it easier to see.
00:45:005 (2,3) - maybe try to make these single notes instead, doesn't sound like a slider part to me I prefer the current pattern
00:57:368 (2,3,4,1) - stream here map the blue ticks I prefer not to use any 1/4 in this diff
01:17:732 (3,4) - fix blanket Ok
move 01:22:460 (4) - to x=248 y=12 Done for both