Hey, M4M from my queue!
Alarido's Easy
Normal
Hard
toybot's Insane
Dream
Good luck getting this ranked!
Alarido's Easy
SPOILER
00:08:096 (2) - I think this circle would look better if it was directly in the middle and not slightly above the two sliders it is in between.
00:49:187 (2) - Ctrl + G flows better to me.
00:52:096 (1) - Same thing with this one, Ctrl + G this, because then it would end towards the next note instead of away making it more comfortable to play for a beginner.
01:03:732 (1,3) - I think these sliders would look better if you made them more balanced out: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2285422
01:22:277 - Adding a circle here feels better to me, and it doesn't feel so empty.
01:23:732 - ^
00:49:187 (2) - Ctrl + G flows better to me.
00:52:096 (1) - Same thing with this one, Ctrl + G this, because then it would end towards the next note instead of away making it more comfortable to play for a beginner.
01:03:732 (1,3) - I think these sliders would look better if you made them more balanced out: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2285422
01:22:277 - Adding a circle here feels better to me, and it doesn't feel so empty.
01:23:732 - ^
Normal
SPOILER
00:14:641 (3) - Something about this slider bothers me, it looks like the end of it may be uneven with the beginning of it, it might be just me or the skin that I'm using.
00:29:187 (4) - I think you should remove this circle because it would go better with the instrument in the background.
00:43:368 (3,4) - You could probably have this blanket more neatly.
00:29:187 (4) - I think you should remove this circle because it would go better with the instrument in the background.
00:43:368 (3,4) - You could probably have this blanket more neatly.
Hard
SPOILER
00:14:641 (6,7) - You could probably blanket this better.
00:18:641 (1,2) - ^
00:24:277 (8,1) - It looks a bit weird with these overlapping, I suggest moving it in a spot where they wouldn't overlap.
00:33:732 (2) - Ctrl + G would flow better.
00:44:641 (8,9) - You could probably have these two sliders blanket each other.
00:18:641 (1,2) - ^
00:24:277 (8,1) - It looks a bit weird with these overlapping, I suggest moving it in a spot where they wouldn't overlap.
00:33:732 (2) - Ctrl + G would flow better.
00:44:641 (8,9) - You could probably have these two sliders blanket each other.
toybot's Insane
SPOILER
00:05:187 (4) - Ctrl + G would flow better.
00:15:732 (1,2) - You could blanket this.
00:29:732 (3,1,1) - This looks really scrunched up and looks weird, I suggest you to find a better way to do this, also you could Ctrl + G 00:29:914 (1) if you don't plan on changing this.
00:49:732 (4,5) - I don't think you should have these two overlap.
00:59:005 (4) - I think there could be a better placement for this, maybe X:116/Y:192? If you do this, then Ctrl + G would be more appropriate at 00:58:641 (3)
01:09:187 (2) - This reverse slider should end facing the next note instead of away, it would be more comfortable.
01:27:005 (1) - This would look better directly in the middle.
00:15:732 (1,2) - You could blanket this.
00:29:732 (3,1,1) - This looks really scrunched up and looks weird, I suggest you to find a better way to do this, also you could Ctrl + G 00:29:914 (1) if you don't plan on changing this.
00:49:732 (4,5) - I don't think you should have these two overlap.
00:59:005 (4) - I think there could be a better placement for this, maybe X:116/Y:192? If you do this, then Ctrl + G would be more appropriate at 00:58:641 (3)
01:09:187 (2) - This reverse slider should end facing the next note instead of away, it would be more comfortable.
01:27:005 (1) - This would look better directly in the middle.
Dream
SPOILER
00:11:732 (1,2,3) - Maybe change this pattern up so it looks a bit different from the rest of the similar patterns before this.
00:14:641 (1) - It would sound better if you end this slider at 00:14:823 and then add a circle at 00:15:005
00:57:187 - You could have a stream start here instead but that's up to you.
01:22:823 (1,2) - Have these blanket?
00:14:641 (1) - It would sound better if you end this slider at 00:14:823 and then add a circle at 00:15:005
00:57:187 - You could have a stream start here instead but that's up to you.
01:22:823 (1,2) - Have these blanket?
Good luck getting this ranked!