nano.RIPE - Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.) · forum

Lari

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Lari 2013-11-27T15:19:52+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 2월 14일 금요일 at 오전 2:55:32

Artist: nano.RIPE
Title: Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)
Source: Non Non Biyori
Tags: のんのんびより opening [ Zzz ] HabiHolic のんのん日和
BPM: 134
Filesize: 18916kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.73 stars, 75 notes)
Habi's Insane (4.98 stars, 218 notes)
Insane (4.95 stars, 226 notes)
Normal (2.88 stars, 94 notes)
Zzz's Hard (4.81 stars, 208 notes)

Download: nano.RIPE - Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)
Download: nano.RIPE - Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I'm really sorry for score reset of my previous ranked map
にゃんぱす~
Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard by [ Zzz ]
Insane by HabiHolic
Insane by me
>w<

1/13 change BG
1/14 add Insane

Modding

Neiji Razuiya
Hanabi
Yuki
tellertheworld
smallboat
Ami
deejaydray
Dropbox
gaten
Teara
sksmwkd125
p3n
Zero__wind
grumd

Last edited by Lari 2014-02-13T17:57:57+00:00, edited 53 times in total.

Neiji Razuiya

235 posts

Joined October 2012

Neiji Razuiya 2013-11-28T03:47:46+00:00

request hard or insane diff~ o.o)/

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-12-08T13:56:47+00:00

Insane Done~

http://puu.sh/5G2Bn.zip

Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-12-09T06:49:38+00:00

Here's mod

Easy

00:05:180 (1,3) - 겹치지 않게 배치해주세요
00:19:509 (1,2,3) - 각각 131||222, 211||316, 304||237에 두는게 동선이 좋아보이네요
예시
00:30:031 (1) - 00:30:031 - 00:32:942 로 바꿔주세요. 스핀과 다음 노트 사이 시간간격이 너무 짧습니다
00:35:181 (2,3,4) - 이지 난이도에서 스택은 비추입니다. 제작자 마음이니 한번 고려해보세요
00:42:345 (2,3,4) - ^
00:44:583 (1) - 00:47:270 에서 스핀 end
00:48:166 (1) - 슬라이더 중간에 가사가 무시됬네요
예시
01:12:792 (5) - slider repeat은 헷갈리지 않게 1번만 하시는걸 추천 -> 01:15:479 (2) 처럼
01:27:569 - 여기서는 아무 소리도 들리지 않네요 01:27:345 - 여기서 끝내셔야 할거 같아요

Comment

전체적으로 박자나 동선에는 문제가 별로 없어보이네요. 맵 중간에 가끔씩 박자가 노래랑 안맞는 부분이 보이는데 노래 자세히 들어보시면서 수정해주시면 될 거 같네요.

Normal

00:20:852 (3) - HP바에 가려져요. 아래로 이동
00:54:882 (5) - 박자 수정
01:06:076 (4) - ^
01:28:912 - volume 5%

Comment

카렌님 맵을 한번 밖에 못봐서 스타일을 잘 모르겠네요. 노말도 전체적으로 괜찮은데 패턴이나 박자를 좀 더 다양하게 하면 플레이어들도 지루하지 않게 할 수 있을 거라고 생각됩니다.

Zzz's Hard

00:10:778 (6) - 갑자기 박자가 바뀌면 플레이어들이 헷갈려요. 이전 박자처럼 제거
00:40:778 (4) - 노트추가
00:48:166 (1,2,3) - 박자가 노래랑 전혀 안맞아요. 박자 수정
00:52:419 (3,4) - ^
00:53:539 (5,6,7) - ^
00:56:897 - 노트 추가
00:58:688 - ^
01:19:285 (2,3) - AImod에 잡힐 정도의 디스턴스!
01:27:121 (5) - 그냥 써클로 해주세요. 1/4 슬라이더를 쓸 필요가 없어보입니다.

Comment

깔끔하고 좋네요. 하지만 반대로 생각하면 패턴이 단조롭다고 볼 수 있어요. 노래가 길지 않아서 딱히 문제되지 않지만 길어지면 플레이어들에게 지루함을 줄 수도 있으니 새로운 패턴을 구상해보시는게 좋을거 같아요.

Habi's Insane

AI mod

- countdown 수정, Letterbox 체크해제

00:07:419 (6,7,8) - 큰 문제는 아니지만 같은 방향으로 디스턴스가 확 줄면 플레이어 입장에서 치기 까다롭습니다. 디스턴스 일정하게하거나 동선 꺾어주세요
00:10:330 (4,5) - 연타로 하는게 더 일관성있어보이고 실제로 00:10:442 에 소리가 선명하게 들리네요?
00:15:815 - ^
00:19:061 (5) - ^ 여긴 너무 잘들리네요
00:47:718 (8) - ^
01:27:009 - ^
00:37:195 - NC
00:37:419 - NC제거
01:03:166 (2,3,4) - 디스턴스 늘려주세요 0.7은 너무 가깝네요

Comment

점프와 힛사 모두 적절하고 중간중간 동선 꺾이는건 스타일이라고 하시니 패스. 개인적인 의견을 스레드에 쓰긴 좀 그렇지만, 간단하게 말씀드릴게요. 노래를 좀 더 자세히 듣고 매핑을 하셨으면 좋겠어요. 매번 느끼는 거지만 노래에서 들리지 않는 곳에 애드리브로 연타를 넣으시면서 정작 연타소리가 들리는 곳에서는 넣지않는 거 같아요. 굳이 그렇게 하고 싶으시다면 애드리브 연타도 일관성있게, 4/1 같이 지켜주시면 좋을것 같습니다

Lari

367 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Lari 2013-12-09T07:47:57+00:00

Easy

00:05:180 (1,3) - 겹치지 않게 배치해주세요 << 완료
00:19:509 (1,2,3) - 각각 131||222, 211||316, 304||237에 두는게 동선이 좋아보이네요<< 완료
예시
00:30:031 (1) - 00:30:031 - 00:32:942 로 바꿔주세요. 스핀과 다음 노트 사이 시간간격이 너무 짧습니다 << 완료
00:35:181 (2,3,4) - 이지 난이도에서 스택은 비추입니다. 제작자 마음이니 한번 고려해보세요 << 완료
00:42:345 (2,3,4) - ^ << 완료
00:44:583 (1) - 00:47:270 에서 스핀 end << 완료
00:48:166 (1) - 슬라이더 중간에 가사가 무시됬네요 <<저부분은 일부로 만든거라..
예시
01:12:792 (5) - slider repeat은 헷갈리지 않게 1번만 하시는걸 추천 -> 01:15:479 (2) 처럼 <<저부분도 일부러 저렇게 만들었습니다.
01:27:569 - 여기서는 아무 소리도 들리지 않네요 01:27:345 - 여기서 끝내셔야 할거 같아요 << 완료

Comment

전체적으로 박자나 동선에는 문제가 별로 없어보이네요. 맵 중간에 가끔씩 박자가 노래랑 안맞는 부분이 보이는데 노래 자세히 들어보시면서 수정해주시면 될 거 같네요.

Normal

00:20:852 (3) - HP바에 가려져요. 아래로 이동 << 모양 바꿧습니다
00:54:882 (5) - 박자 수정 << 뭔가 이상해서 박자 최대한 비슷하게했습니다
01:06:076 (4) - ^ << 완료
01:28:912 - volume 5% <<완료

Comment

카렌님 맵을 한번 밖에 못봐서 스타일을 잘 모르겠네요. 노말도 전체적으로 괜찮은데 패턴이나 박자를 좀 더 다양하게 하면 플레이어들도 지루하지 않게 할 수 있을 거라고 생각됩니다.

사나님 모딩 감사합니다! >_<

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-12-09T14:10:49+00:00

[ Sana ] wrote:
Here's mod

Habi's Insane

AI mod
- countdown 수정, Letterbox 체크해제
00:07:419 (6,7,8) - 큰 문제는 아니지만 같은 방향으로 디스턴스가 확 줄면 플레이어 입장에서 치기 까다롭습니다. 디스턴스 일정하게하거나 동선 꺾어주세요 / 일단 수정
00:10:330 (4,5) - 연타로 하는게 더 일관성있어보이고 실제로 00:10:442 에 소리가 선명하게 들리네요? / 기각합니다 무슨 말인지 모르겠습니다
00:15:815 - ^ / ^
00:19:061 (5) - ^ 여긴 너무 잘들리네요 / ^
00:47:718 (8) - ^ / ^
01:27:009 - ^ / / ^
00:37:195 - NC / 기각합니다. 흐름이 안맞기 때문입니다
00:37:419 - NC제거 / / ^
01:03:166 (2,3,4) - 디스턴스 늘려주세요 0.7은 너무 가깝네요 / 기각합니다 큰 문제는 아닌듯 합니다
Comment

점프와 힛사 모두 적절하고 중간중간 동선 꺾이는건 스타일이라고 하시니 패스. 개인적인 의견을 스레드에 쓰긴 좀 그렇지만, 간단하게 말씀드릴게요. 노래를 좀 더 자세히 듣고 매핑을 하셨으면 좋겠어요. 매번 느끼는 거지만 노래에서 들리지 않는 곳에 애드리브로 연타를 넣으시면서 정작 연타소리가 들리는 곳에서는 넣지않는 거 같아요. 굳이 그렇게 하고 싶으시다면 애드리브 연타도 일관성있게, 4/1 같이 지켜주시면 좋을것 같습니다

조언은 감사합니다만 애드립이라도 어울리는 곳이 있어서 넣은것이니 참고만 하겠습니다

SPOILER

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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:[ Karen ]
Version:Habi's Insane
Source:Non non Biyori
Tags:のんのんびより opening [ Zzz ] HabiHolic
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Neiji Razuiya

235 posts

Joined October 2012

Neiji Razuiya 2013-12-09T15:43:48+00:00

hai~ >_<

this just suggestion only

[Habi's insane]

starter are good,not bad~

00:54:882 (2) - i think that to far http://puu.sh/5HcmZ.jpg
01:03:837 (3) - NC
01:07:643 (5) - NC
01:18:389 (4) - NC

[Zzz's hard]
i dont know what want say but its ok

[Normal]
00:54:882 (5) - NC

[Easy]
Good

keep it up,i beat this ranked..so i give star (/>.<)/~ *

i stiil learn spacing note and time signature,so i only can give suggestion

Lari

367 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Lari 2013-12-09T16:09:55+00:00

Neiji Razuiya wrote:
hai~ >_<

[Normal]
00:54:882 (5) - NC << sorry..

[Easy]
Good
keep it up,i beat this ranked..so i give star (/>.<)/~ * << Thank ~ >_<

i stiil learn spacing note and time signature,so i only can give suggestion

Thank modding >w<

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-12-10T05:54:16+00:00

[quote="[ Sana ]"]Here's mod

Zzz's Hard

00:10:778 (6) - 갑자기 박자가 바뀌면 플레이어들이 헷갈려요. 이전 박자처럼 제거 ( ㅇㅇ )
00:40:778 (4) - 노트추가 ( 개인적으로 박자 많이 넣는걸 싫어해서 말이죠 ... 하드고 .. 그래서 결론은 이런건 모두 패스할깨요 'ㅅ' .. )
00:48:166 (1,2,3) - 박자가 노래랑 전혀 안맞아요. 박자 수정
( 일단... 수정은 했는데 .. 스샷이라도 보여주시면 좋을듯싶어요 ... 하루만에 안고치면 .. 삭제하시는것같지만.. )
00:52:419 (3,4) - ^
( ^ )
00:53:539 (5,6,7) - ^ ( ^ )
00:56:897 - 노트 추가 ( 위에 말했듯이 개인적으로 'ㅅ' .. )
00:58:688 - ^ ( ^ )
01:19:285 (2,3) - AImod에 잡힐 정도의 디스턴스!
( 이건 님의 오류인것같아요 'ㅅ' .. 저는 AI모드가 안뜨게 한 뒤에 맵을 제출하는 타입이라 .. 거의 안뜰꺼에요 'ㅅ' .. ) 어쩔떈 깜빡하지만 'ㅅ' ..
01:27:121 (5) - 그냥 써클로 해주세요. 1/4 슬라이더를 쓸 필요가 없어보입니다.

( ㄴㄴ... 서클로 겹쳐놓으면 보기않좋고 .. 4타니까 .. 저렇게 해놓은거 'ㅅ' .. )
Comment

깔끔하고 좋네요. 하지만 반대로 생각하면 패턴이 단조롭다고 볼 수 있어요. 노래가 길지 않아서 딱히 문제되지 않지만 길어지면 플레이어들에게 지루함을 줄 수도 있으니 새로운 패턴을 구상해보시는게 좋을거 같아요.

( 'ㅅ'.. ) 너무 들어서 이제 들어도 감각이 없네요 'ㅅ' .. 는 매핑스타일 바꾸라는데 .....'ㅂ'..

모딩 다 고쳤어요 ( 카렌님 'ㅅ' .. )

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[ Yuki ]_old

132 posts

Joined October 2012

[ Yuki ]_old 2013-12-10T15:08:03+00:00

[General]

예시

이창 모든 난이도 똑같이 해주세요

[Easy]
00:48:166 (1) - 사나님 말처럼 가사 무시임;; 그냥 고치세여
01:02:942 (3) - HP바 가릴거 같음
01:12:792 (5) - 이거 고치라니깐여???(일부로 만들었다고 우기지 말고 고치세여;;)

[Normal]
00:41:001 (6) - 이런 모양 어떰?

예시

01:01:151 (1) - 휜 슬라이드 추천 01:02:494 (2) - 감싸도록 배치

[Zzz's Hard]
;;패스 아니 좀 일부로라도 틀려여 ㅡㅡ;;

[Habi's Insane]
00:15:479 (2) - 꼬리부분 00:14:136 (8) - 머리랑 겹치게 해주세여(미세한 차이?)
00:22:195 (1,2) - Ctrl+G?
00:29:807 (2) - 268,324가 디스턴스 균형도 맞고 00:30:703 (4) - 머리위에 있어서 좋을거 같아여
00:41:673 (4) - 350,359가 00:41:001 (3) - 모양이랑 딱인듯
00:43:688 (3,4,5) - 00:43:688 (3) - 344,44 00:43:912 (4) - 224.212 00:44:136 (5) - 36,128 어떰??

예시

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-12-10T15:13:44+00:00

Almost fixed~

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
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[Editor]
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Title:Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:[ Karen ]
Version:Habi's Insane
Source:Non non Biyori
Tags:のんのんびより opening [ Zzz ] HabiHolic
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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Lari

367 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Lari 2013-12-10T16:12:08+00:00

[ Yuki ] wrote:
[General]
예시
이창 모든 난이도 똑같이 해주세요 << 완료

[Easy]
00:48:166 (1) - 사나님 말처럼 가사 무시임;; 그냥 고치세여 << 수정 완료
01:02:942 (3) - HP바 가릴거 같음 << 모양 변경 완료
01:12:792 (5) - 이거 고치라니깐여???(일부로 만들었다고 우기지 말고 고치세여;;) <<수정 완료

[Normal]
00:41:001 (6) - 이런 모양 어떰? << ㅇㅋ 수정

예시

01:01:151 (1) - 휜 슬라이드 추천 01:02:494 (2) - 감싸도록 배치 << 완료

모딩 감사합니다!

-Teina-

529 posts

Joined October 2013

-Teina- 2013-12-12T08:46:53+00:00

Form my modding queues~
[Habi's Hard]

open

00:39:882 (1) - move to X:38 Y;126
00:44:360 (6) - move to X:293 Y:61 (around)
01:21:076 (3) - CTRL+G

Sorry, I cannot know how to mod other diffs.
And I cannot mod in general.

(NO KD)

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-12-14T09:48:39+00:00

:3

SPOILER

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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2013-12-14T11:15:37+00:00

Hi,[ Karen ],In-game PM req.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

None.

[Easy]

00:09:658 (2) - The slider end place big white line is not proper to me,try this rhythm :

SPOILER

00:13:240 (3) - ^

SPOILER

00:20:852 (2) - DS
00:21:300 (3) - ^
00:23:986 (2) - The slider end place big white line is not proper to me,try this rhythm :

SPOILER

01:16:822 (3) - Blanket?

[Normal]

00:06:972 (3) - Blanket (2) slider end?
00:14:136 (4) - Slidertick + clap? (Because 24clap.)
00:17:718 (3) - ^
00:20:852 (3) - The middle remove clap (It is not 24 clap.)
00:27:569 (2) -

SPOILER

00:29:360 (5) -

SPOILER

00:49:509 (2) - Change 2 note? (The slider end place big white line is not proper to me)
00:57:121 (1) - Slidertick + clap? (Because 24clap.)
01:18:166 (1) - Change 2 note?
01:19:957 (3) - ^
01:23:539 (2,4) - ^

[Zzz's Hard]

01:14:583 (6) - Sliderend remove clap? (Not 24 clap)
01:15:255 (7) - ^
01:17:494 (2) - ^

[Habi's Insane]

00:15:479 (2) - Slider end stack crooked off.
00:20:852 (4) - Try move to (0|148)? Feel move here is follow music better.
00:22:867 (4) - (280|312),be a diamond,is good flow,too.
00:24:882 (6) - Blanket crooked off.
00:44:360 (6) - Feel use ctrl+g is better flow.
00:58:912 (1) - Forgot to add finish? (Remember reduce the spinner end volume 10%~20%)
01:02:494 (1) - Slider end can be adjust,try move become perfect blanket.
01:14:583 (1) - (180|276)? (Be a blanket)
01:22:643 (2) - Stack 01:21:748 (4) ?
01:23:763 (7) - Stack 01:25:106 (2) slider end is better flow?
01:25:778 (4) - The same with 01:02:494.
01:27:345 (7) - Can make a jump,be a symmetry with (6)?

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2013-12-14T12:30:15+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Nanairo Biyori (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62494
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:[ Karen ]
Version:Habi's Insane
Source:Non non Biyori
Tags:のんのんびより opening [ Zzz ] HabiHolic
BeatmapID:334989
BeatmapSetID:130942

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"biyori.avi"
0,0,"2013-10-22-613414.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-12-14T23:02:48+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Hi,[ Karen ],In-game PM req.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[Zzz's Hard]

01:14:583 (6) - Sliderend remove clap? (Not 24 clap) ( umm.. I now have a better idea )
01:15:255 (7) - ^ ( ^ )
01:17:494 (2) - ^ ( ^ )

( sorry.. . thanks~!! mod! ) ^~^!!

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Last edited by [ Zzz ] 2013-12-14T23:12:59+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Momochikun

1,927 posts

Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2013-12-14T23:09:28+00:00

Change title into (TV Ver.) instead..

Lari

367 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Lari 2013-12-15T03:44:54+00:00

smallboat wrote:
Hi,[ Karen ],In-game PM req.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

None.

[Easy]

00:09:658 (2) - The slider end place big white line is not proper to me,try this rhythm : << fix
SPOILER
00:13:240 (3) - ^ << fix
SPOILER
00:20:852 (2) - DS << fix
00:21:300 (3) - ^ << fix
00:23:986 (2) - The slider end place big white line is not proper to me,try this rhythm : fix
SPOILER
01:16:822 (3) - Blanket? << fix

[Normal]

00:06:972 (3) - Blanket (2) slider end?<< fix
00:14:136 (4) - Slidertick + clap? (Because 24clap.) << fix
00:17:718 (3) - ^ << fix
00:20:852 (3) - The middle remove clap (It is not 24 clap.) << fix
00:27:569 (2) - << fix
SPOILER
00:29:360 (5) - << fix
SPOILER
00:49:509 (2) - Change 2 note? (The slider end place big white line is not proper to me) << fix
00:57:121 (1) - Slidertick + clap? (Because 24clap.) << fix
01:18:166 (1) - Change 2 note? << fix
01:19:957 (3) - ^ << sorry
01:23:539 (2,4) - ^ << sorry

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

Thanks for modding >_<

Lari

367 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Lari 2013-12-15T03:45:59+00:00

Momochikun wrote:
Change title into (TV Ver.) instead.. << change

Ami

177 posts

Joined November 2012

Ami 2014-01-04T10:23:28+00:00

m4m.~o~

[Easy]
00:14:136 (4,5) - try to make it perfect. http://puu.sh/693G9.jpg
00:33:837 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/693J4.jpg
00:53:539 (5,1) - Move (5) to x460 y244 and (1) to x248 y204
01:15:479 (2,3) - try to make this perfect hehe.

[Normal]
00:11:897 (4,1) - Make it perfect! :3 http://puu.sh/694jJ.jpg
00:14:136 (4) - remove clap on the Slider head. / end
00:17:718 (3) - too, add finish on slider end
00:30:703 (1) - add finish
00:57:121 (1) - remove claps.
00:57:121 (1,2) - Make it perfect.

http://puu.sh/694qo.jpg
01:01:151 (1,2) - ^
01:14:583 (1) - add finish on the reversarrow and end. It sounds nice :3
01:15:927 (3) - remove clap.

[Zzz's Hard]
01:26:897 (3,4,5) - its hard to play. D: I always have 1 100there.
Nice nice GD.

[Habi's Insane]
00:13:464 (5) - Stack 5 with 4 perfectly, Disable Grid snap. http://puu.sh/694E7.jpg
00:15:479 (2) - stack slider end with the red slider. (8)
00:32:046 (7) - stack slider end with 00:31:151 (5) - this slider head. o3o
00:38:091 (5,6) - Make this perfect :3
00:41:001 (3,4) - too :3
01:02:494 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/694LC.jpg it looks better. o3o
01:12:121 (3) - why the red point on the end?
01:12:569 (4) - ^

Nice map :3 rank this pls pls D:
(oh, and sry for my bad english.. x3)

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-01-12T14:51:18+00:00

Sorry for late

SPOILER

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62494
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)
TitleUnicode:Nanairo Biyori (TV Ver.)
Artist:nano.RIPE
ArtistUnicode:nano.RIPE
Creator:[ Karen ]
Version:Habi's Insane
Source:Non non Biyori
Tags:のんのんびより opening [ Zzz ] HabiHolic
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[Difficulty]
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Lari

367 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Lari 2014-01-12T15:34:16+00:00

Ami wrote:
m4m.~o~

[Easy]
00:14:136 (4,5) - try to make it perfect. http://puu.sh/693G9.jpg <<Already fixed
00:33:837 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/693J4.jpg << ^
00:53:539 (5,1) - Move (5) to x460 y244 and (1) to x248 y204 << fix
01:15:479 (2,3) - try to make this perfect hehe. <<sorry

[Normal]
00:11:897 (4,1) - Make it perfect! :3 http://puu.sh/694jJ.jpg << Already fixed
00:14:136 (4) - remove clap on the Slider head. / end << fix
00:17:718 (3) - too, add finish on slider end << only remove clap on the head
00:30:703 (1) - add finish << sorry..
00:57:121 (1) - remove claps. << fix~
00:57:121 (1,2) - Make it perfect. http://puu.sh/694qo.jpg << Already fixed
01:01:151 (1,2) - ^ << ^
01:14:583 (1) - add finish on the reversarrow and end. It sounds nice :3 << sorry
01:15:927 (3) - remove clap. << fix

Nice map :3 rank this pls pls D:
(oh, and sry for my bad english.. x3)

thanks for modding

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2014-01-12T15:44:54+00:00

Ami wrote:
m4m.~o~

[Zzz's Hard]
01:26:897 (3,4,5) - its hard to play. D: I always have 1 100there. ( No. Better now. )
Nice nice GD.

Nice map :3 rank this pls pls D:
(oh, and sry for my bad english.. x3)

deejaydray

166 posts

Joined October 2013

deejaydray 2014-01-14T21:45:46+00:00

Hello, m4m from my queue ~

EASY

00:44:136 (4) - half of this circle is a little bit outside, maybe you should re-position it
00:44:136 (4) - ^ same

NORMAL

00:23:091 (5) - NC here
00:42:792 (3,4) - instead of these circles, why don't you put a slider similar to this one 00:43:688 (5) and then a circle at 00:43:464 I think it sounds better
00:55:330 (6) - NC here
00:57:121 (1) - no NC here
01:06:076 (4) - NC here

Zzz's HARD

You should change Beat snap divisor from 1/2 to 1/4
00:39:882 (1) - no NC here
00:48:166 (8) - NC here
01:12:345 (1) - no NC here

INSANE

00:21:300 (5) - NC here
00:24:882 (5) - ^ same
00:35:628 (5) - ^ same
00:39:210 (4) - ^ same
00:42:792 (5) - ^ same
01:15:927 (4) - ^ same
01:27:232 (6,7) - better delete these circles

That's all, good luck! ^^

Lari

367 posts

Joined June 2013

Topic Starter

Lari 2014-01-15T08:31:10+00:00

deejaydray wrote:
Hello, m4m from my queue ~

EASY

00:44:136 (4) - half of this circle is a little bit outside, maybe you should re-position it << DS..? fix
00:44:136 (4) - ^ same << o..o ?

NORMAL

00:23:091 (5) - NC here << fix
00:42:792 (3,4) - instead of these circles, why don't you put a slider similar to this one 00:43:688 (5) and then a circle at 00:43:464 I think it sounds better<< The rhythm is not suitable for normal diff
00:55:330 (6) - NC here << fix
00:57:121 (1) - no NC here << fix
01:06:076 (4) - NC here << fix

INSANE

00:21:300 (5) - NC here <<fix
00:24:882 (5) - ^ same << fix
00:35:628 (5) - ^ same << fix
00:39:210 (4) - ^ same << fix
00:42:792 (5) - ^ same << sorry..
01:15:927 (4) - ^ same << sorry..
01:27:232 (6,7) - better delete these circles << sorry.. There are not many circles

That's all, good luck! ^^

Thanks for modding ~

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2014-01-15T17:55:07+00:00

deejaydray wrote:
Hello, m4m from my queue ~

Zzz's HARD

You should change Beat snap divisor from 1/2 to 1/4
00:39:882 (1) - no NC here ( no... Because there is a jump does not change the I nc. )
00:48:166 (8) - NC here ( yes~ )
01:12:345 (1) - no NC here ( Because there is a jump does not change the I nc. )

That's all, good luck! ^^

'~' 업로드점 !!

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Dropbox_old

Dropbox_old 2014-01-21T10:28:07+00:00

Easy

00:15:927 (1) - 이부분의 스핀 끝을 4/4 박자 앞으로 땡겨야할꺼같네요. 안땡기면 AR이 느려서 00:19:509 (1) 이 노트랑 혼동될수 있을꺼같아요.
01:14:583 (7) - 이지에서 오버랩을 하면 초보 유저들이 많이 헷갈릴꺼같네요.
01:23:986 (5) - 슬라이더 돌아오는 때 박자가 안맞습니다.. 새로 노트를 구성하세요.
01:27:345 - 여기도 다른 난이도들과 같이 스핀을 넣으세요.

Normal

00:16:822 (2) - 이부분 슬라이더가 위로 되있는데 아래쪽으로 하는게 흐름에 더 맞을꺼 같아요.
01:06:747 (2) - 슬라이더를 2/4 뒤로 보내고 2/4 짧게 하는편이 앞부분들 흐름과 맞아서 더 좋을꺼 같아요.
01:07:643 (3) - 이부분도 위와 같이 하는게 더 좋을꺼 같아요.

Zzz's Hard

00:18:837 - 노트추가.
00:40:778 - 노트추가.
01:27:345 - 노트를 추가하고 스핀을 1/4 박자 뒤로 보내면 좋을꺼같네요.

Insane

00:18:725 (1,2) - 이 노트들 서로 겹치지 않게 하거나 00:17:718 (6) - 이 슬라이더 끝부분이랑 맞추는게 더 좋을꺼같아요.
00:32:830 (3,4) - 이부분도 위와 같이 하면 좋을꺼같아요.
00:47:158 (3,4) - 위와 같음.
01:12:457 (4,5) - 이것도.
위 겹침노트들은 제 생각이 크므로 크게 신경 안쓰셔도 됩니다.

Habi's Insane

01:23:203 (4,5) - 이부분도 위에서 말한 Insane 난이도와 같이 수정하면 좋을꺼같아요. 물론 뒤의 겹침노트 01:23:763 (7) - 이것도 같이.

HabiHolic

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Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-01-21T13:45:16+00:00

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