A Mystery wrote:

Hello K1dPoker. This is my first mod so I will do as much as I can. I don't know how long you are mapping songs, but this is certainly not a bad beatmap! Perfect timing, good use of kiai time, and also quite fun to play

General

There are, (especially the normal beatmap) several straight sliders and sliders in a straight line. They make the map not look so well, and even the slighest curve and twisting them a bit can make a huge difference.

Normal

00:12:304 (5) - Sliders straight up don't look so well in my opinion, I should rotate them a bit and curve it a bit.
However, slider which go horizontally do look a lot better. I don't say you can't use vetical sliders at all, but try to avoid them as much as possible
00:12:304 (5) -
00:13:242 (1,2,3) - This also doesn't look so well when playing: 2 sliders in a straight line, but also the 90° angle it makes with the next slider
00:39:492 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - again: going straight down and up, and make a 90° angle,
00:59:179 (5) - I should change this slider too :p
01:02:460 (1,2,3) - straight down and a slider straight up, try to change that. I should do the same as the 3 objects before it but in reflection.
01:04:804 (2) - try to curve this one
01:11:835 (1,2,3,4) - also here a lot of vertical sliders and cirkels which follow each other in 90° angels
01:15:585 (1,2,3) - sliders horizontally look better, but this one combined with the cirkel is a bit too long.
01:18:163 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - also here too many straight sliders placed horizontally
01:28:242 (5) - you can let this one stay, but still looks a bit weird
01:31:054 (4) - I should let this slider bounce, just make two of them
01:48:867 (2,3) - try to change this (also very straight)
02:00:117 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same as 00:39:492 (1,2,3,1,2,3)
02:24:492 (1,2,3) - vertical sliders and a 90° angle - try to change
02:28:710 (2,3) - vertical slider and cirkel in a straight line, try to replace with some curved and rotated sliders. Then use this 3 times after each other, not all the same, but flipped vertically or horizontally, so it will match the lyrics (the repetition)
02:36:210 (1,2,3) - Again, make something with curved and rotated sliders, not in a straight line, and repeat it
02:46:054 (5) - this one could use a curve
02:49:804 (5,1) - 2, long, vertical sliders. I should change the second one in 2 shorter sliders and one cirkel, not placed in a straight line of course :p
02:55:429 (4) - vertical slider, not necessary to remove but still...
03:15:117 (3) - maybe repeat the previous slider and cirkel
03:24:492 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - use four cirkels instead of three, this will fit the beat and also change the combo colour then.
03:28:710 (1,2,3) - a slight rotation maybe? but try to let them be a reflection of each other
03:32:460 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - sliders and cirkels in a straight line again in a 90° angle
03:42:070 (2,3) - try to curve these sliders
03:43:710 (1,2,3,4) - same as 02:30:585 (1,2,3,4) -
03:31:992 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - 03:39:960 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - replace it with something that looks a bit better again by using curved, rotated sliders, not on a straight line.

01:05:742 (4) - this sliders is correct in the rythm, but I should use either a shorter slider so the slider bounces on the white beat snap and one bounce extra, or either just a spinner.
01:07:617 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - nice patern!
01:11:835 (1,2,3,4) - maybe you should change this into the same patern, but flipped horizontally with the previous one.
01:15:585 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - just use the reflection of the first 1,2,3 to replace the 1,2,3,4. This fits the repetition of the lyrics.
Then...

I think you used the distance snap, which is a good thing, but I don't think it is necessary for the sliders and the cirkels to let them overlap each other.

I know this is a lot, but change them will make the beatmap (in my opinion, and others too) a lot better . I will give you a few tips.
- http://puu.sh/5PUIQ.jpg, http://puu.sh/5PVFp.jpg
- http://puu.sh/5PUP9.jpg instead of http://puu.sh/5PUSc.jpg
- http://puu.sh/5PUYd.jpg instead of the straight, vertical sliders
- http://puu.sh/5PVb0.jpg instaed of letting them overlap
- http://puu.sh/5PViQ.jpg, http://puu.sh/5PVzz.jpg
- http://puu.sh/5PWCq.jpg instead of http://puu.sh/5PWGs.jpg

I know these are a lot of complaints, but they are not meant in a bad way. The are just tips of what I think can improve your current map. This is also my fist mod, and I am really trying. I hope this was usefull to you and if you are going to change your map, I can't wait to play it ^^

Hard

Well made, it was good for a hard difficulty and also fun to play.

Comming soon xD I have no time left to do this one right at the moment. If you found my advise usefull, I will certainly try to help you with the hard difficulty too.