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smallboat

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-02-12T14:20:01+00:00

Quick check

[615's Easy]

00:34:060 (4) - 你前面的大白線都加上whistle了，所以我認為這邊大白線也可以加
00:37:642 (3) - ^
00:41:224 (3) - 像這邊就加了，所以我認為上面那些都可以加。
00:53:762 (1,2) - 這邊兩個是唱出來的vocal和重音，是不是忘了加finish阿?
01:00:926 (1) - 我感覺這個finish音量太小了要不要加個10%? 聽得有加跟沒加都一樣。
01:21:523 (3) - 有聽到一點點的whistle聲我覺得可以加個whistle增強。
01:26:001 (1) - 既然你後面紅線有加whistle，那麼01:27:120 (2,3) 這兩個紅線怎不加?
01:43:911 (1) - 尾端不是whistle阿，而是finish，song要尾聲了，換成finish感覺更好。

[ZZH's Normal] 找不到 VideoOffset 可能是我沒下載video的還是..?

00:11:448 (5) - 取消折返，尾端00:12:120，都加whistle，我認為這個節奏比較好。
00:16:150 (4) - 歌曲起頭所以我認為加個finish可表達音樂(615都加了)
00:26:448 (4) - 尾端finish忘了?
00:31:822 (1) - 或許能加個whistle
00:35:851 (4) - ^ (+開頭)
00:49:284 (5) - 放的位置不太好呀，跟前面疊到了，imo.
00:50:180 (1) - 開頭是往上的vocal怎不加finish呢
01:00:926 (1) - 同615
01:04:508 (3) - 開頭finish忘了?
01:08:090 (1) - ^
01:11:672 (1) - ^
01:15:254 (1) - 我覺得開頭能加whistle做個效果。
01:17:717 (1) - 為啥加紅線，這個finish聽得很多餘，去掉吧? 前面已經有finish了。
01:29:583 (1,2) - 用s-finish就好了吧，應該是不會用到n-finish。

[Hard]

00:31:598 (3,4) - 先全選丟到(112|39)，然後00:31:822 (4) 疊到 00:32:269 (1) 開頭上，似乎蠻有感覺。
01:08:762 (2) - 開頭whistle?
01:43:016 (3) - 照前面這樣聽的話，這個開頭是不是忘了加whistle了?

[Insane]

00:14:359 (1,4) - 全選移到(349|82)不就成了四邊形? 而下面的4也能呈三角形。
00:17:269 (4,6) - 我覺得兩個ctrl+G一下比較順。
00:37:642 (1) - 試試Ctrl+g?
00:39:433 (1) - 或許你可以疊 00:38:090 (2) 開頭
01:06:747 (2) - (493|156)? 覺得上面之間間隔可以平均點。
01:12:344 (2) - 尾端是不是忘了whistle?
01:46:374 (2) - 或許折返能加個whistle。

[Other]
祝泡。 LOL

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-02-13T06:58:05+00:00

for sb's mod
fixed except 01:29:583 (1,2)
use different finish sound make the rhythm stronger.
maybe your english buhao.-.

code

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TitleUnicode:ヒマワリの教会
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Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Topic Starter

Koiyuki 2014-02-13T07:27:30+00:00

smallboat wrote:
[Hard]

00:31:598 (3,4) - 先全選丟到(112|39)，然後00:31:822 (4) 疊到 00:32:269 (1) 開頭上，似乎蠻有感覺。我没感觉
01:08:762 (2) - 開頭whistle? nope
01:43:016 (3) - 照前面這樣聽的話，這個開頭是不是忘了加whistle了? √

[Insane]

00:14:359 (1,4) - 全選移到(349|82)不就成了四邊形? 而下面的4也能呈三角形。√ 换了个摆法
00:17:269 (4,6) - 我覺得兩個ctrl+G一下比較順。 nope
00:37:642 (1) - 試試Ctrl+g? nope
00:39:433 (1) - 或許你可以疊 00:38:090 (2) 開頭 nope
01:06:747 (2) - (493|156)? 覺得上面之間間隔可以平均點。 nope
01:12:344 (2) - 尾端是不是忘了whistle? √
01:46:374 (2) - 或許折返能加個whistle。 nope

thanks~

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-02-14T02:51:56+00:00

Atrue wrote:
[615's Easy]
General
好久不见，质量还不错
不过你确定红线起滑条不会耽误可读性么？对于新手来说。嘛，我想即便是写了很多关于这个的mod也不会大改一番的你書隊了

Beats
00:01:822 (1,2) - 我就说一条这样的明确会影响可读性的，第二个note就搞红线滑条，是相当危险的，虽然这个节奏本身我十分喜欢，但是个人感觉不是ez中的节奏，因此我建议从长白线起滑条，那么后边00:07:419 (2) - 这里也得相应改变，后边的红线滑条由于有了ds做对照，会好读的多，重申一句，我十分喜欢这样的节奏同上

Placement
01:27:120 (2,4) - 应该叠好的好

Hitsound
00:44:807 (3) - 箭头处我觉得用finish好些啊~clap确实有点死板了全改成finish了
00:53:762 (1) - 这里的头上不应该加一个finish之类的东西来强调么？实话说，就是前两个点都加了finish也是适当的，个人建议是normalfinish比较合适，然后把后边的滑条2同样加上 finish還好，nmfinish太嚇人了
00:57:344 (3) - 前边滑条怎么加的音效相应加上，尾巴上我觉得不需要clap，可能显得有点轻，要是觉得轻的话要不要直接用finish呢？去掉了
01:32:269 (4,5) - 要不要试试drum的clap然后是drum的finish试试呢？调sampleset就行，还挺有意思的音樂貌似沒有誒
01:33:165 (1) - 在01:33:613 插根绿线让这个slidertick有一个drumclap音如何？tick音不是俺能決定的TAT
01:36:747 (1) - 同上

smallboat wrote:
[615's Easy]

00:34:060 (4) - 你前面的大白線都加上whistle了，所以我認為這邊大白線也可以加
00:37:642 (3) - ^
00:41:224 (3) - 像這邊就加了，所以我認為上面那些都可以加。
00:53:762 (1,2) - 這邊兩個是唱出來的vocal和重音，是不是忘了加finish阿?
01:00:926 (1) - 我感覺這個finish音量太小了要不要加個10%? 聽得有加跟沒加都一樣。
01:21:523 (3) - 有聽到一點點的whistle聲我覺得可以加個whistle增強。
01:26:001 (1) - 既然你後面紅線有加whistle，那麼01:27:120 (2,3) 這兩個紅線怎不加?
01:43:911 (1) - 尾端不是whistle阿，而是finish，song要尾聲了，換成finish感覺更好。
除了改音量all fixed~

謝mod

人家懶嘛~

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HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2014-02-14T11:17:46+00:00

recheck, no kds

[615's Easy]

01:02:717 (3) - i think deleting normal sampleset on repeat arrow hears better for the song and consistency
01:43:911 (1) - try adding finish on start

[ZZH's Normal]

could you rearrange the NCs consistently? like adding them on every 2nd long white tick or something in silimar way
00:46:598 (1) - perhaps you forgot to add finish here?

[Hard]

01:12:568 (3) - add whistle on start for consistency
01:15:702 (2) - try finish on end

[Insane]

00:21:523 (1) - add whistle on start for consistnecy
00:37:642 (1) - i prefer to reverse this slider by using ctrl g for better flow and give jump between 00:37:642 (1,2) - these
01:15:926 (4) - try finish

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-02-14T12:24:09+00:00

fixed.

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Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2014-02-14T12:40:29+00:00

615 told me to fix all
in easy 01:02:717 (3) - that's a soft clap on the repeat arrow so I dont change it

And I keep mine on 00:37:642 (1) - in Insane

Other all fixed

HelloSCV

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HelloSCV 2014-02-14T12:50:20+00:00

bubbled~!

Nyquill

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Nyquill 2014-02-15T00:13:39+00:00

[Hard]
00:30:478 (1) - Spacing error? Normally I wouldn't be bothered but you have rather consistent spacing up till now. I don't mind the next slider as sliders have more leniency for spacing.
01:02:717 (1) - Why not stack a soft whistle on top of a clap? It seems weird to break your clap scheme considering 01:00:926 (1) and 01:04:508 (1) was the same rhythm.

Nothing else.

Really good map, call me back when you're ready.

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2014-02-15T05:03:59+00:00

Nyquill wrote:
[Hard]
00:30:478 (1) - Spacing error? Normally I wouldn't be bothered but you have rather consistent spacing up till now. I don't mind the next slider as sliders have more leniency for spacing. rearranged
01:02:717 (1) - Why not stack a soft whistle on top of a clap? It seems weird to break your clap scheme considering 01:00:926 (1) and 01:04:508 (1) was the same rhythm. finally I decide to use finish on the head 01:02:717 (1) - and clap on the end 01:02:717 (1) - , add whistle on 01:03:389 (2) - in all three place 01:00:926 (1,2) - ,01:02:717 (1,2) - and01:04:508 (1,2) - . Also fixed the same place in Insane

Nothing else.

Really good map, call me back when you're ready.

thanks for modding >~<