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YunoFanatic
Hi pare! Please bear all what i have to say :*

Generals

- The diff's name is unrankable. I suggest add ''4K'' or ''7K'' in the difficulties name like 4K Easy and 4K Dante's insane
- The diff spread is kinda uhhh.. Why is there only one 7K and its an INS atleast make easier version of the 7K
- Olivirus Ruby, is this a collab name or so? if not suggest to change the diff name into INS MX SC or what ever fits the diff name its an unrakable rule :3

4k Easy

00:05:296 (5296|1,5770|0) - doesnt really gives a meaning. i suggest move this note on 1 and 4 reference from 00:02:770 (2770|2,3244|3,4033|1,4507|3)
00:07:822 - addable note on 1st column since its a bit loud and the vocal will start there.
00:09:086 (9086|2,9559|1) - i kinda dont approve in this pattern move it to 4th and 2 to balance the pattern.
00:11:612 (11612|1,12086|2) - 2 options.. 1. make this notes look like 00:10:349 (10349|0,10822|2) - or 2. mirror it and will be putted at 3rd and 4th.
00:19:191 a bit throw off, why not put a note? Add note .
00:20:454 ^
00:21:717 ^
00:22:980 ^
00:24:244 ^
00:25:507 ^
00:29:296 (29296|2,30559|1) - move to 4th and 1st since its doesnt make sense to the pattern cause the holder 00:31:822 (31822|3) - isnt the a bit long.
00:32:928 (32928|1) - weird placement imo, move to 3rd. since the next patterns has the same.
00:35:454 - 00:37:507 its very okay if you turned this into 1/2 since it kinda covers the 1/4 beat.
00:41:612 (41612|2) - it will be much better if you move this note on the 4th since 00:39:717 (39717|1,40349|2) - is a stair pattern.
00:50:454 (50454|1) - move to 3rd. you broke the pattern and when you move it to 3rd you will be able to continue the pattern until the next notes.
00:59:296 (59296|1,59454|2,59928|1) - this pattern should be look like 00:58:033 (58033|3,58191|2,58665|1) - it bothers me alot.

4K Normal

00:04:349 (4349|2) - move to 4th since you can make an opening for the upcoming note.
00:05:296 (5296|1) - im a bit curious why did you stopped the beat and flow of the pattern here. Move this to 1st
00:06:401 (6401|3) - same reason ^ move to 1st
00:06:875 (6875|2) - it will give much more meaning if you move this to 4th column its more easy to press.
00:07:822 (7822|1) - same reason ^ move to 1st
00:09:086 (9086|2) - hmm move this to 3rd? cause it will be able to follow much on the flow of the pattern.
00:19:665 (19665|1) - a bit awful placement. move to 1.
00:26:296 (26296|1) - move this note on 3rd you suddenly changed the pattern. why?
00:36:875 (36875|1,37033|1,37507|2,37665|2) - stack ups? :V bad. suggest to change them or change the pattern itself.
00:44:296 (44296|2) - move this note to 4th it has more meaningful to the pattern and look how much the pattern can be.
00:45:875 (45875|0) - lol stopped the flow again, move to 3rd

4K Insane

- im a bit sad that you didnt start the mapping on the 00:00:00 in easy and normal :/
- im a bit worried about the overmap.
00:01:033 (1033|1) - move to 1.. because 00:00:717 (717|3,1191|0,1349|3) -
00:06:401 (6401|0) - move this note to 4th you already have the main pattern see 00:06:559 (6559|1,6717|2,6875|1,7033|2) - ?
00:20:138 (20138|1,20138|0) - move this to 1st and 4th since you already patterned the after notes.
00:35:928 (35928|3,35928|2,36086|2,36086|1,36244|2,36244|1,36401|0,36401|1,36559|1,36559|0,36717|3,36717|0,36875|3,36875|0,37033|1,37033|2,37191|2,37270|1,37349|3,37428|0,37507|3,37665|0,37665|3) - is it me or this pattern isnt just working well O.o maybe change pattern where you can move to an much better readable place.

4K Dante's Insane

00:02:888 (2888|3,3046|0) - may i know the best reason why isnt this notes snapped?
00:13:349 (13349|0) - a bit awful to look at move to 3rd so it can do the pattern 00:13:507 (13507|3,13665|2,13822|3) -



GL
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus
Hello pare! Thanks for modding my map :)
SPOILER
Generals

- The diff's name is unrankable. I suggest add ''4K'' or ''7K'' in the difficulties name like 4K Easy and 4K Dante's insane
- The diff spread is kinda uhhh.. Why is there only one 7K and its an INS atleast make easier version of the 7K
- Olivirus Ruby, is this a collab name or so? if not suggest to change the diff name into INS MX SC or what ever fits the diff name its an unrakable rule :3
Fixed these. Renamed all the difficulty and made the 7 key difficulty to 7K INS~

On 4K Easy:

00:05:296 (5296|1,5770|0) - doesnt really gives a meaning. i suggest move this note on 1 and 4 reference from 00:02:770 (2770|2,3244|3,4033|1,4507|3)
00:07:822 - addable note on 1st column since its a bit loud and the vocal will start there.
00:09:086 (9086|2,9559|1) - i kinda dont approve in this pattern move it to 4th and 2 to balance the pattern.
00:11:612 (11612|1,12086|2) - 2 options.. 1. make this notes look like 00:10:349 (10349|0,10822|2) - or 2. mirror it and will be putted at 3rd and 4th
Fixed~! although, the first one which you said it doesnt have meaning, I just mirrored the first pattern if you'll notice. :3

00:19:191 a bit throw off, why not put a note? Add note .
00:20:454 ^
00:21:717 ^
00:22:980 ^
00:24:244 ^
00:25:507 ^
I didnt put those notes since I feel it'll make the difficulty unbalance, the chorus isnt that hard so yeah :?

00:32:928 (32928|1) - weird placement imo, move to 3rd. since the next patterns has the same.
00:35:454 - 00:37:507 its very okay if you turned this into 1/2 since it kinda covers the 1/4 beat.
00:41:612 (41612|2) - it will be much better if you move this note on the 4th since 00:39:717 (39717|1,40349|2) - is a stair pattern.
00:50:454 (50454|1) - move to 3rd. you broke the pattern and when you move it to 3rd you will be able to continue the pattern until the next notes.
00:59:296 (59296|1,59454|2,59928|1) - this pattern should be look like 00:58:033 (58033|3,58191|2,58665|1) - it bothers me alot.
Fixed especially the 1/2 and 1/4 beat parts! now its more comfortable to hit :)

On 4K Normal
00:04:349 (4349|2) - move to 4th since you can make an opening for the upcoming note.
00:05:296 (5296|1) - im a bit curious why did you stopped the beat and flow of the pattern here. Move this to 1st
00:06:401 (6401|3) - same reason ^ move to 1st
00:06:875 (6875|2) - it will give much more meaning if you move this to 4th column its more easy to press.
00:07:822 (7822|1) - same reason ^ move to 1st
00:09:086 (9086|2) - hmm move this to 3rd? cause it will be able to follow much on the flow of the pattern.
00:19:665 (19665|1) - a bit awful placement. move to 1.
00:26:296 (26296|1) - move this note on 3rd you suddenly changed the pattern. why?
00:44:296 (44296|2) - move this note to 4th it has more meaningful to the pattern and look how much the pattern can be.
00:45:875 (45875|0) - lol stopped the flow again, move to 3rd
Fixed~! those stops dont have any instrument to be noted :3

00:36:875 (36875|1,37033|1,37507|2,37665|2) - stack ups? :V bad. suggest to change them or change the pattern itself.
major changes in this pattern :3 I made it more comfortable to play :D

4K Insane and 4K Dante's Insane

Fixed some parts of it :3 especially the pattern which you think dont work well.

Again thank you for the mod :)
[b]
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus
Waiting for the BATs~

Will update one more 7K difficulty. HD difficulty so atleast it will be more acceptable to be ranked and then few more mods :)
[ M o m o ]
Hi Arcwin o/
Random mod for 7K HD
Columns 0,1,2,3,4,5,6

Change name diff "7K HD" for "7K Hard"

7K HD
00:00:875 - Add a note at 6
00:02:138 - Add a note at 0
00:03:875 (3875|4) - Move to 3 -- And 00:04:033 - Add a note at 5
00:06:559 - Add a note at 6
00:07:349 (7349|5) - Move to 5 -- And 00:07:822 - Add a note at 5
From 00:26:612 - To 00:28:033 - Make like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1361203
00:30:559 - Add a note
00:32:770 - Add a note at 0
From 00:35:612 - To 00:36:895 - And from 00:36:895 - To 00:38:138 - Make like this? First part http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1361231 And Second part http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1361232
01:03:244 - Change LNS of this form http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1361246
Nice Map, good luck o/.
PD: You need diff 7K Normal
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

[ M o m o ] wrote:

Hi Arcwin o/
Random mod for 7K HD
Columns 0,1,2,3,4,5,6
SPOILER
OK! Fixed: Change name diff "7K HD" for "7K Hard"
OK! Fixed: 00:00:875 - Add a note at 6
OK! Fixed: 00:02:138 - Add a note at 0 Also applied to other diffs
(X)! Nope: 00:03:875 (3875|4) - Move to 3 -- And 00:04:033 - Add a note at 5
(X)! Nope: 00:06:559 - Add a note at 6
(X)! Nope: 00:07:349 (7349|5) - Move to 5 -- And 00:07:822 - Add a note at 5 Its not that strong and its just HD
OK! Fixed: (But on the other way)From 00:26:612 - To 00:28:033 - Make like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1361203
OK! Fixed: 00:30:559 - Add a note
OK! Fixed: 00:32:770 - Add a note at 0
OK! Fixed: From 00:35:612 - To 00:36:895 - And from 00:36:895 - To 00:38:138 - Make like this? First part http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1361231 And OK! Fixed: (but on the other way) Second part http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1361232
OK! Fixed: 01:03:244 - Change LNS of this form http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1361246
Nice Map, good luck o/.
PD: You need diff 7K Normal
Oh thank you for the 7K mod! :)
And nope, I'm not going to put normal since this is actually a 4K map set :? Its just I added 7K. Having only Hard and Insane 7K is still acceptable like
17VA's future Gazer :3 Updated!
PROGUY
Hi again :)
Here's my check as requested.

[4K Dante's Insane]
00:02:257 (2257|3,2415|1,2888|3,3046|0) These notes are not snapped to the 1/2 grid. Was this intentional?
00:05:415 (5415|1) ^
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

PROGUY wrote:

Hi again :)
Here's my check as requested.

[4K Dante's Insane]
00:02:257 (2257|3,2415|1,2888|3,3046|0) These notes are not snapped to the 1/2 grid. Was this intentional?
00:05:415 (5415|1) ^
Dante gave me the priority to fix his difficulty in his leave. As I remember we already fixed that @.@. Anyway, ALL FIXED~! /o/
Thank you for the ReCheck Sir PROGUY :)
PROGUY
Alright, bubbled. :)
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

PROGUY wrote:

Alright, bubbled. :)
YAY~ Thank you so much Sir!

myfirst..myfirst..map ranked >w> *whispers to self*
YunoFanatic
Hardcore arcwin.

Fre congrats xD asdfghjl parteh parteh!!
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

YunoFanatic wrote:

Hardcore arcwin.

Fre congrats xD asdfghjl parteh parteh!!
Oh yeah /o/ thanks XD parteh parteh XD prepare the rootbeers /o/
[ M o m o ]
Congrats Arcwin \o/, go go rank :D
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

[ M o m o ] wrote:

Congrats Arcwin \o/, go go rank :D
Thank you! :) yey /o/
dkun
Title should be "This Will Be the Day (feat. Casey Lee Williams)" with the artist being just "Jeff Williams", according to the RWBY OST.

Please let me know when you've changed this.
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

dkun wrote:

Title should be "This Will Be the Day (feat. Casey Lee Williams)" with the artist being just "Jeff Williams", according to the RWBY OST.

Please let me know when you've changed this.
Thank you for checking its title, Sir dkun! No wonder why it looks weird :3 Its all fixed and updated~! :)
dkun
Here's your bubble back.

As a disclaimer, this was a pop for a metadata issue. Please assume the mania aspects of this are approved by PROGUY.
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

dkun wrote:

Here's your bubble back.

As a disclaimer, this was a pop for a metadata issue. Please assume the mania aspects of this are approved by PROGUY.
Yes I understand, Sir~! thank you for the check and rebubble! :)
mingmichael
this will be the 1st ranked beatmap for my bigbradah :oops:
go go for ranked~!!! /o/
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

mingmichael wrote:

this will be the 1st ranked beatmap for my bigbradah :oops:
go go for ranked~!!! /o/
Yes! I'm hoping this to get ranked as soon as possible >w<)/
Thank you Lilbradah~!! \o\
/me is happy with your words :)
[Shi-Ra]
No problems with patterns, HSed correctly on all diffs, such comfortable patterns awww...Ranked! ^w^
REDYUMiKA
First! Congratz arcwin :oops:
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

No problems with patterns, HSed correctly on all diffs, such comfortable patterns awww...Ranked! ^w^
Oh my... Thank you so much! Yipeee my first ranked map~! \(^o^)/

REDYUMiKA wrote:

First! Congratz arcwin :oops:
Thank you Yumika~! ♥ :oops:
Secretpipe
Gratz for your first rank Arc :D
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

Secretpipe wrote:

Gratz for your first rank Arc :D
Thank you Secretpipe :)
Sorarei
nice one ! , gratz
PROGUY
Congrats, arcwin! :D
Akasha-
Congrats arcwinolivirus >w<
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

Reikosaka wrote:

nice one ! , gratz

PROGUY wrote:

Congrats, arcwin! :D

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Congrats arcwinolivirus >w<
Thank you all for the support~! :oops:
[ M o m o ]
Congrats Arcwin \o/
Sorarei
is anime just for japan ? i though RWBY are anime, i just checked in the wiki and say "anime-styled American CG-animated web-series"

just wonder the genre for this beatmaps
PyaKura
Gratz Arcwin o/

@Reiko : English rock you could say
NaxelCL
congratz friend arci<3
HabiHolic
Gratz~
[AyanoTatemaya]
Congrats arc! ^^
[ Demi ]
Really like this map... >w<)b
Big congrats :) and way to go Arc =3=
Sapphiire_old_1
Gratz~
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus
@all
Thank you everyone <3 thank you for the support! :)
bomboy2121
damm this song :)
when i started playing osu i downloaded this cuz i love rwby and i tryed insane for the first time
it was so hard but i loved it!
i kept playing at it(about 40 times) and thats how i got better in osu!

thank you for the map, without i could never reach the skills i have now!
Topic Starter
arcwinolivirus

bomboy2121 wrote:

damm this song :)
when i started playing osu i downloaded this cuz i love rwby and i tryed insane for the first time
it was so hard but i loved it!
i kept playing at it(about 40 times) and thats how i got better in osu!

thank you for the map, without i could never reach the skills i have now!
Im glad that you liked it :) Yes I love RWBY too~ and the song is really awesome!
I feel happy to your feedback :oops:
Ryokoto
One of the best beatmaps I've ever played.
Can you make it so the approach rate on the songs a bit slower and make them a new difficulty?
It's great, just that it's hard to enjoy the song and beatmap when me and my friends are so focused on the top of the screen. :lol:
Other than that, we love the song! :)
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