Avishay wrote:

Hey, from my queue !

[General]
May be pointless, but for some reason the slider velocities on 00:08:991 and 00:09:266 are different even though there're no notes between them, so the SV change is just pointless (just as my note)wow I didn't notice it. ok fixed for taiko players

At 01:02:523 you've used a SV multiplier of 1.2, which is the 4th SV in this difficulty, so if you're looking to get your map ranked, you need to use up to 3 (you can use more if it fits really good), but I am not sure about this case, this is the still same chorus but for some reason you changed the SV to be higher, I suggest removing the SV change, also I noticed 1.5 SV at the third chorus, so I think you should ask a BAT about it.4th (or more) SV is not issue. The part is certainly more intense.

04:53:716 - Add a point and change the volume here to 5% done

[Insane]
Shouldn't you use snap divisor of 1/8 here? sometimes you insert 1/8 streams and sometimes, cut sliders by 1/8.nope

So, it is great and fun that you treat the song as a 218 bpm song, but there are overly done parts which are too hard to play / read and sometimes not fun at all, so I suggest going over the difficulty by yourself again after my mod!

00:36:651 - Add a note here (perhaps at the same place of (3))done
00:41:055 - Add a note here (I think you should stack it with (2) here)done
00:43:119 - Add a note herenone. here is a suddenly (ah yes) change of rhythm, I took drums, so no.
00:44:771 - If you want, you can ignore a note here, but I think you should add it because it fits more when not missing the rhytm.none . I want take vocals.
00:45:735 (6) - Make the slider here shorter until the red line, it misses the rhytm and it is over-mapped here, when I played this it was frustrating and not that enjoyable.umm give me time to consider it.
00:49:725 (8) - I suggest not stacking it with the previous note, it is unnecessary and obviously cowhy? this stop and go is really fun for mego is really fun for me[/color]
00:49:450 (7,8) - I think you can even change those both to 1/2 (2/4, 4/8, same shit) sliders, I don't know why but it feels much nicer when it is like that and it feels the empty parts.^
00:55:230 (7,8) - I strongly suggest removing (8) and just extending (7), this is too hard in my opinion, and I think it is over-mapping again.none. it breaks player's tap rhythm. I don't think it's good idea.
01:06:927 (3) - Change the note position to make a better pattern, I suggest X:268 Y:96It's so strange. um sorry.
01:13:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Place NC for each new wordIt's hard to read and break NC patterns
01:15:597 (2) - Change position, I suggest X:356 Y:220why? I stacked (1)(2) for take a break.
01:23:991 (5) - Extend it until the yellow line in 1/8 (01:24:197)we need time cuz here a sudden change SV...
02:12:982 (2) - CTRL + Gdone
02:25:023 (5) - Here's a little add-on I think you can add, it is fun but not for everyone, add a note at 02:25:023 and stack it on the slider afterwardsSorry I cant understand why and how you suggest. You means "make 1/8 jump!"? It's too hard for most players (includes me)
02:52:340 (9) - NCdone
03:39:266 (3) - NCnone
03:39:679 (4) - NCdone
03:40:367 (8) - NCnone
03:40:780 (9) - NCdone
03:41:055 (1) - Cancel NC (also it continues Mirai as 'rai' so why NC at all?)done. and This is not "Mirai（未来）" but "MInai（見ない）"
03:42:707 (7) - I think adding a Finish here will fit too!because after spam of finishes, It sounds loud.
03:46:697 (8) - CTRL + GIt's on purpose
03:50:138 (2) - CTRL + G^
04:45:459 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - WOWW this is too much confusing, try change a bit the rotating or move a bit every NC so a difference will be noticeabletried

[Hard]
00:25:367 (6) - Stack it on (5) instead of (7) to make a little jump.This is clam part so no
01:04:587 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest changing the pattern here to keep this pattern


[Normal]
Seems good to me.


Good luck!

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. From popner's modding team.

[General]

1. Your BG should be 1024*768 or 1366*768 if your width is 768.fixed
2. I think your non-kiai part is lack of hitsounds. I could hardly hear any hitsounds of this part (your custom whistle is too low). You'd better add some, at least some default whistles.I'll fix

[Normal]done

1. AR-1 is more suitable to be the easiest diff.done
2. 00:15:184 (2) - Try use the same shape as 00:14:083 (1) - , that would be prettier I suppose.done
3. 00:22:890 (2) - rotate by -9° clockwise would be prettier.done
   
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4. 00:29:496 (3) - I would like something like, which partly encircled your previous slider end:done
   
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5. 00:52:615 (3) - you can add a clap on slider end.done
6. 01:10:229 (5) - ^(other kiai parts are similar so I would stop this point here.)
7. 01:17:936 (3) - curve down would be better.umm, I wanna keep symmetry. If another mod point this, I'll change this.
   
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   It also looks good with previous slider:
   
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8. 03:42:156 (3) - try this:done
   
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[Hard]

1. 00:36:927 (4) - try x=48 y=88done
2. 01:57:982 (2) - why not make it symmetric?cuz my lazy done
   
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3. 02:06:376 (1) - try curved right:done
   
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4. 02:10:780 (4) - DEL NCdone
5. 02:33:899 (2) - make it symmetric? also move 02:32:798 (1) - left a bit:done
   
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6. 03:26:193 (2) - try curve right, would be better with 03:26:606 (3) - done
   
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7. 03:59:771 (3) - try x=80 y=56done
8. 04:31:147 (4) - curve down?done
9. 04:49:450 (1) - why not silence like Normal?done

[Insane]

1. 00:12:982 (3) - prolong to 00:13:532done
2. 01:22:340 (2,3,4,5,6) - 3/4 is not good, shorten them to 1/2ah, hard to tell, umm,
   This part stressed vocal, so I put 3/4 slider.
   
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   original text in Japaneseこの5音に関しては一音一音が非常に強調して、力を入れて歌われています。私はそれを表現しようとAIMに力のかかるような、3/4 slider をおきました
3. 01:44:358 (10) - NC, this combo is too longdone
4. 01:57:982 (2) - wow just saying this slider is so cool!Thank you
5. 02:22:615 (6) - NC would be betterdone
6. 02:52:340 (9) - ^^
7. 02:54:817 (2,3,4) - same as beforesame as before too
8. 03:39:679 (4) - NCdone
9. 03:59:771 (6) - NCdone
10. 04:00:596 (11) - this one is too ugly imo. fixed
11. 04:11:881 (2,3,4) - same as beforesame as before too
12. 04:49:312 (1) - why not silence like Normal?done

That's all. Good Luck~

Project Railgun wrote:

Kotoko <3

[General]

1. I think it plays really nice with burst kiai at 01:24:541 -, 02:57:018 -, and 04:14:083 -.

[Easy]

1. 00:38:853 (3,1) - Do not overlap here. Try a different pattern instead? 00:37:752 -:
   
   
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2. 00:48:211 (6,1) - Blanket Slider 6 and stack slider 1 with the previous Circle 4.
   
   
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3. 01:19:037 - Try this.
   
   
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4. 01:47:661 (2,4) - Stack Circle 4 with the end of Slider 2?
5. 02:42:707 (3) - To avoid overlap, please try x:320 y:300. Also move the slider on 02:43:807 (1) - for Distance Snap.

[Normal]

1. 00:25:092 (1,2) - Do not hide slider 2 behind slider 1 in Normal. Do this instead.
   
   
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2. 00:33:899 (4) - Stack with 00:32:523 (2) -?
3. 01:02:523 (1,2,3) - Curve one of these sliders?
4. 01:57:569 (6,7) - Same as 00:25:092 (1,2) -. I do not think you can do this in Normal. Make the next object visible instead.
5. 02:14:083 (3,4,2,3) - Curve one of these sliders?
6. 04:15:734 (4,1) - Blanket Slider 4 with Slider 1?
7. 04:32:798 (3,4,3,4,3,4) - Try to curve some of these sliders.

[Hard]

1. 02:57:018 - Add a circle here and make the spinner start on 02:57:156 -.

The Insane difficulties are rather nice as well.

Good luck.