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... so long now...
Also if .mp3 quality is low maybe you can ask Ephemeral or someone else to find a better one?
Also if .mp3 quality is low maybe you can ask Ephemeral or someone else to find a better one?
NoHItter's Easy
Nice easy.
All your spinners are too close to the following note.
Beginning feels a bit difficult for a beginning.
01:08:930 (1,2,3,4) - Overlaps map confuse.
01:31:335 (3) - Redo this slider.
Climbb's Normal
Good harder normal, I think.
All your spinners are too close to the following note. Most have hit markers which cover notes.
Some weird timing with some notes, e.g.
00:43:725 (1) -
00:52:527 (1) -
00:54:528 (2,3,4) -
01:35:736 (3) -
01:49:739 (5) -
01:52:539 (2) -
Hard
Rename to Insane.
OD+1. (Trust me, it works.)
Okay diff.
I have a problem with the spinners because right after is a blinding kiai. The end of a spinner is blinding enough, and to add kiai and a bright background with bright hitcircles to the miss is just lfjds;lfjdadf. In particular, it's harder to read the doubles. Whatever.
Nice easy.
All your spinners are too close to the following note.
Beginning feels a bit difficult for a beginning.
01:08:930 (1,2,3,4) - Overlaps map confuse.
01:31:335 (3) - Redo this slider.
Climbb's Normal
Good harder normal, I think.
All your spinners are too close to the following note. Most have hit markers which cover notes.
Some weird timing with some notes, e.g.
00:43:725 (1) -
00:52:527 (1) -
00:54:528 (2,3,4) -
01:35:736 (3) -
01:49:739 (5) -
01:52:539 (2) -
Hard
Rename to Insane.
OD+1. (Trust me, it works.)
Okay diff.
I have a problem with the spinners because right after is a blinding kiai. The end of a spinner is blinding enough, and to add kiai and a bright background with bright hitcircles to the miss is just lfjds;lfjdadf. In particular, it's harder to read the doubles. Whatever.
Adjusting some spinners seems to ruin the flow...
Either I have to remove them or keep them as is...
Version without spinner changes:
Download: SHK - Identity Part II (Chacha17) [NoHItter's Easy].osu
Either I have to remove them or keep them as is...
Version without spinner changes:
Download: SHK - Identity Part II (Chacha17) [NoHItter's Easy].osu
Very good map, I love those custom hitsounds.
And that tempo change on the Hard surprised me a lot by how well it was done.
Old as fuck edit: The kd is for an irc mod I did a freakton of time ago
And that tempo change on the Hard surprised me a lot by how well it was done.
Old as fuck edit: The kd is for an irc mod I did a freakton of time ago
Topic Starter
You could have just sent me a forum PM since it's an oldie, anyways time to mod.
Why do i feel i've seen this map before? XD
[Hard]
00:36:524 (5,6) - The distance here seems a little bit low related to what it's supposed to be (apparently you made it less than half when it's about a 3/4 > 1/2 ratio) (Same for similar sections)
01:10:931 (1) - This section doesn't seem to fit an spinner, i suggest you map it normally and maybe use a slow slider on the sustained note that lowers in pitch.
Pretty ok map i guess
[Climbb's Normal]
Your hitsounds sound a bit odd imo
Use slider tick rate 2 to avoid awkward slider ticks
Please dont put claps on sliderticks
Map the difficulty to the end?
I've already expressed my hate for unfinished diffs before
[NoHItter's Easy]
Oh not you too orz yeah please no claps on ticks bla bla bla, map to end bla bla bla that's all
Hope i can get a good answer about that from you
If you fix, poke me again for a bubble
Why do i feel i've seen this map before? XD
[Hard]
00:36:524 (5,6) - The distance here seems a little bit low related to what it's supposed to be (apparently you made it less than half when it's about a 3/4 > 1/2 ratio) (Same for similar sections)
01:10:931 (1) - This section doesn't seem to fit an spinner, i suggest you map it normally and maybe use a slow slider on the sustained note that lowers in pitch.
Pretty ok map i guess
[Climbb's Normal]
Your hitsounds sound a bit odd imo
Use slider tick rate 2 to avoid awkward slider ticks
Please dont put claps on sliderticks
Map the difficulty to the end?
I've already expressed my hate for unfinished diffs before
[NoHItter's Easy]
Oh not you too orz yeah please no claps on ticks bla bla bla, map to end bla bla bla that's all
Hope i can get a good answer about that from you
If you fix, poke me again for a bubble
As I've said before, I'll map to the end if climbb agrees to map to the end too. Having an Easy that is longer than a Normal would be odd.
ok ungraved.
Good luck~
Good luck~
[Easy]
Map to the end,as Normal is full now.
Also,don't forget to add red lines from 02:27:346 and so on,they're currently missing.
00:25:722 (3) - I'd flip it horizontally.
01:15:332 - Huh,why not to continue repeating slider up to this note?
[Normal]
Sometimes rhytm is way too hard for Normal,like here:
02:20:945 (1,2,3) - I wasn't expecting this at all.
But otherwise it's fine to me.
[Hard]
OD is same to Insane,maybe reduce by 1?
00:37:924 (6) - Spacing mistake,DS doesn't let you place it farther,but it should be,really,remap this pattern cause this slider should be way farther from 00:37:524 (4,5).
01:13:231 (2) - Doesn't sound good to me
move it to 01:13:331?
01:18:532 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce volume for this notes,or make sections with increasing volume for every note.
01:47:638 (1) - Blue tick right after the spinner is hardly readable.
[Insane]
01:18:532 (1,2,3,4) - As in Hard.
Pretty cool difficulty.
Good job,star!
Map to the end,as Normal is full now.
Also,don't forget to add red lines from 02:27:346 and so on,they're currently missing.
00:25:722 (3) - I'd flip it horizontally.
01:15:332 - Huh,why not to continue repeating slider up to this note?
[Normal]
Sometimes rhytm is way too hard for Normal,like here:
02:20:945 (1,2,3) - I wasn't expecting this at all.
But otherwise it's fine to me.
[Hard]
OD is same to Insane,maybe reduce by 1?
00:37:924 (6) - Spacing mistake,DS doesn't let you place it farther,but it should be,really,remap this pattern cause this slider should be way farther from 00:37:524 (4,5).
01:13:231 (2) - Doesn't sound good to me
move it to 01:13:331?01:18:532 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce volume for this notes,or make sections with increasing volume for every note.
01:47:638 (1) - Blue tick right after the spinner is hardly readable.
[Insane]
01:18:532 (1,2,3,4) - As in Hard.
Pretty cool difficulty.
Good job,star!
Map's good, and for me there's nothing i to tell about. But now i need something for my headhache, star <3
NoHItter's Easy
- AR +1 ?
Wanh's Normal
00:21:721 (3) - Reduce this slider by 1/2 ? It will follow the music much better.
00:49:326 (1) - Move this slider 1/1 later, remove 1 reverse and add a note at 00:49:326 and 00:49:527
00:52:727 (5,1) - It's too hard for a Normal difficulty :/
01:35:336 (2) - Add a reverse ?
Hard
00:17:720 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and add clap at the end
02:00:641 - Make a spinner who ends at 02:01:741
Insane
00:49:026 - Add a note ?
02:00:641 - Make a spinner who ends at 02:01:741
That's all~
Apparently, I've already starred this map xD
- AR +1 ?
Wanh's Normal
00:21:721 (3) - Reduce this slider by 1/2 ? It will follow the music much better.
00:49:326 (1) - Move this slider 1/1 later, remove 1 reverse and add a note at 00:49:326 and 00:49:527
00:52:727 (5,1) - It's too hard for a Normal difficulty :/
01:35:336 (2) - Add a reverse ?
Hard
00:17:720 (1) - Remove clap at the beginning and add clap at the end
02:00:641 - Make a spinner who ends at 02:01:741
Insane
00:49:026 - Add a note ?
02:00:641 - Make a spinner who ends at 02:01:741
That's all~
Apparently, I've already starred this map xD
This is mostly just some very minor and meaningless things, feel free to ignore if you don't agree~ :3
[Hard]
00:17:720 (1) - Delete clap from beginning and add it to end
01:53:739 (4) - Whistles to this slider?
02:30:718 (1) - I know the distance snap is right when the BPM changes, but this looks bit weird next to the prevous combo. Maybe move one grid left?
[Normal]
00:52:927 (1,2) - Clap to end?
00:56:128 (5) - New combo?
00:59:328 (3) - ^
01:05:730 (3) - ^
01:08:930 (4) - ^
02:44:549 (1) - Clap on slidertick sounds off~
No problems in other diffs, Starred~ o/
[Hard]
00:17:720 (1) - Delete clap from beginning and add it to end
01:53:739 (4) - Whistles to this slider?
02:30:718 (1) - I know the distance snap is right when the BPM changes, but this looks bit weird next to the prevous combo. Maybe move one grid left?
[Normal]
00:52:927 (1,2) - Clap to end?
00:56:128 (5) - New combo?
00:59:328 (3) - ^
01:05:730 (3) - ^
01:08:930 (4) - ^
02:44:549 (1) - Clap on slidertick sounds off~
No problems in other diffs, Starred~ o/
[Insane]
00:27:322 (1,2,3,4) - use soft hitsounds?
00:31:523 (6) - ugly
00:37:924 (5) - ^
00:39:525 - whistle
00:41:125 (6) - ..
01:13:531 - clap
01:14:131 - ^
01:14:532 - ^
01:14:932 - ^
01:15:132 - ^
01:18:932 (2,4) - remove clap
02:18:144 - whistle
02:18:944 (7,2) - whistle it if you use the hitsounds above
02:49:951 (3,6) - whistle
[Hard]
00:51:127 (4) - spacing
01:27:734 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:134 (5) - new combo
01:35:136 (2) - copy 01:34:536 (1)?
02:16:744 (2) - whistle?
[wanH]rename to NM+?
01:56:240 (4) - this rhyhm is hard for a NM.
+star
00:27:322 (1,2,3,4) - use soft hitsounds?
00:31:523 (6) - ugly
00:37:924 (5) - ^
00:39:525 - whistle
00:41:125 (6) - ..
01:13:531 - clap
01:14:131 - ^
01:14:532 - ^
01:14:932 - ^
01:15:132 - ^
01:18:932 (2,4) - remove clap
02:18:144 - whistle
02:18:944 (7,2) - whistle it if you use the hitsounds above
02:49:951 (3,6) - whistle
[Hard]
00:51:127 (4) - spacing
01:27:734 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:134 (5) - new combo
01:35:136 (2) - copy 01:34:536 (1)?
02:16:744 (2) - whistle?
[wanH]rename to NM+?
01:56:240 (4) - this rhyhm is hard for a NM.
+star
I Feel I'm OP.ed to still mod this, but anyways
NoHitter's Easy
None~
Wanh's Normal
01:53:539 (6) - Move 2/4 earlier?
I feel likes it a normal+
Hard
None~
Insane
None~
~Starred
NoHitter's Easy
None~
Wanh's Normal
01:53:539 (6) - Move 2/4 earlier?
I feel likes it a normal+
Hard
None~
Insane
None~
~Starred
Hello~
Good luck~
SPOILER
Hard:
HP Drain Rate -2? (So that it is the same as Overall Difficulty.)
0:17:320 - Nc
0:17:720 - No nc.
0:19:320 - Nc
0:20:121 - No nc.
0:20:921 - Nc
0:32:123 - Nc (you done a nc here in insane by the way...)
0:33:123 - No nc
0:33:723 - Nc
0:38:524 - Nc
0:39:525 - No nc
0:40:125 - Nc
0:51:727 - Don't repeat, add a note at 0:52:327 instead?
0:57:728 - Nc
1:07:330 - I can't understand how this can be stacked if 1:04:129 is not stacked. Unstack.
1:09:330 - Unstack, it is confusing.
1:14:532 - U probably stucked not to have a problem with spacing the 3,4,5 but no, it is not helping the player, so unstack.
1:14:932 - Nc?
2:39:748 - Nc
2:41:349 - Nc
2:40:729 - No nc
2:46:150 - Nc
2:47:150 - No nc.
2:47:750 - nc
Insane:
Overall Difficulty +1? (So that it is the same as HP Drain Rate.)
Combos are better in this difficulty! I think that you should see if your Hard has new combos in same places as in Insane; that would really improve hard. I tried to do the job for you above not even knowing about it, yet please do double check! Yet before you do these changes to Hard, please fallow the mod below...
1:10:131 - Remove, you've lost track of the combos because of this evil 1/1 note
1:10:331 - Nc
1:11:531 - No nc
1:11:931 - Make this slider two circles placed where it started and where it finished instead. Then, make the circle you placed where the dead slider finished new combo...
1:12:931 - Nc
1:14:331 - Nc would look expectionaly nice here = not every nc looks nice even if it is right -^^-
1:27:734 - No nc
1:28:134 - nc
1:31:135 (1,2) - Switch their places so that the nc is right
1:55:340 - Iit is definitly nc here like on all the other ones!
1:56:340 - No nc
1:59:741 - Maybe add a note?
2:07:342 - Nc here like on the previous one of the kind.
2:12:143 - Nc?
2:13:743 - ^
2:18:944 - Nc
2:19:344 - No nc
2:19:745 - Nc?
HP Drain Rate -2? (So that it is the same as Overall Difficulty.)
0:17:320 - Nc
0:17:720 - No nc.
0:19:320 - Nc
0:20:121 - No nc.
0:20:921 - Nc
0:32:123 - Nc (you done a nc here in insane by the way...)
0:33:123 - No nc
0:33:723 - Nc
0:38:524 - Nc
0:39:525 - No nc
0:40:125 - Nc
0:51:727 - Don't repeat, add a note at 0:52:327 instead?
0:57:728 - Nc
1:07:330 - I can't understand how this can be stacked if 1:04:129 is not stacked. Unstack.
1:09:330 - Unstack, it is confusing.
1:14:532 - U probably stucked not to have a problem with spacing the 3,4,5 but no, it is not helping the player, so unstack.
1:14:932 - Nc?
2:39:748 - Nc
2:41:349 - Nc
2:40:729 - No nc
2:46:150 - Nc
2:47:150 - No nc.
2:47:750 - nc
Insane:
Overall Difficulty +1? (So that it is the same as HP Drain Rate.)
Combos are better in this difficulty! I think that you should see if your Hard has new combos in same places as in Insane; that would really improve hard. I tried to do the job for you above not even knowing about it, yet please do double check! Yet before you do these changes to Hard, please fallow the mod below...
1:10:131 - Remove, you've lost track of the combos because of this evil 1/1 note
1:10:331 - Nc
1:11:531 - No nc
1:11:931 - Make this slider two circles placed where it started and where it finished instead. Then, make the circle you placed where the dead slider finished new combo...
1:12:931 - Nc
1:14:331 - Nc would look expectionaly nice here = not every nc looks nice even if it is right -^^-
1:27:734 - No nc
1:28:134 - nc
1:31:135 (1,2) - Switch their places so that the nc is right
1:55:340 - Iit is definitly nc here like on all the other ones!
1:56:340 - No nc
1:59:741 - Maybe add a note?
2:07:342 - Nc here like on the previous one of the kind.
2:12:143 - Nc?
2:13:743 - ^
2:18:944 - Nc
2:19:344 - No nc
2:19:745 - Nc?
Good luck~
Oh hi old map.
Easy:
Easy is an easy. slider tick clap sounds little weird for me, but may be just me.
All fine.
Normal:
Not that normal, but since you already have easy and normal is still kinda normal, also this map is good, so fine IMO.
Slider tick clap sounds like "come out from nowhere" to me, but may be just me too. Just point out.:3
Hard:
I suggest make some short streams to stack or move notes closer. Like this: 02:10:543 (3,4,5,6,7) -
This diff is well made. O_O
Insane:
No problem.
Easy:
Easy is an easy. slider tick clap sounds little weird for me, but may be just me.
All fine.
Normal:
Not that normal, but since you already have easy and normal is still kinda normal, also this map is good, so fine IMO.
Slider tick clap sounds like "come out from nowhere" to me, but may be just me too. Just point out.:3
Hard:
I suggest make some short streams to stack or move notes closer. Like this: 02:10:543 (3,4,5,6,7) -
This diff is well made. O_O
Insane:
No problem.
just fix the 00:19:721(5)'S position 
Download: SHK - Identity Part II (Chacha17) [Wanh's Normal].osu
lol hope to see this getting rank soon
btw, is this normal too hard? I'm sorry that I often have the wrong sense about mapset's difficulty ;_;
hope it will not be a problem that serious.
Download: SHK - Identity Part II (Chacha17) [Wanh's Normal].osu
lol hope to see this getting rank soon
I think the sound of slidertick is quite low now XDdeepsea wrote:
Normal:
Not that normal, but since you already have easy and normal is still kinda normal, also this map is good, so fine IMO.
Slider tick clap sounds like "come out from nowhere" to me, but may be just me too. Just point out.:3
btw, is this normal too hard? I'm sorry that I often have the wrong sense about mapset's difficulty ;_;
hope it will not be a problem that serious.
mod4mod
Easy :
nothing to mention (except some nazi things, which are extremely nazi ^^)
Normal :
same as Easy
Hard :
nice flow
Insane :
00:59:128 (6) - [Suggestion] place it right of 5?
anyway, awesome map :3
i like it, star
Easy :
nothing to mention (except some nazi things, which are extremely nazi ^^)
Normal :
same as Easy
Hard :
nice flow
Insane :
00:59:128 (6) - [Suggestion] place it right of 5?
anyway, awesome map :3
i like it, star
osz file seems broken(Only Hard diff, other are gone.). Check files and full submit.
Topic Starter
Oh, didn't notice that.deepsea wrote:
osz file seems broken(Only Hard diff, other are gone.). Check files and full submit.
Fully resubmitted. It should be fixed now. @_@
【Normal】
AR+1 ?
00:24:121 (1) -make it eaiser to move , it is a normal diff ?
01:15:332 (1) - too long spinner ?
02:28:999 (5) - stack it on the (4) ?
【Hard】
decrease the times of 5連打 for it is a hard diff ?
00:35:324 (1) - make it curved?
00:43:525 (1) - shorten the spinner to the white line:
01:31:535 (1) - remove ? it spoild the ryhthem
02:28:378 (2) - new combo ?
02:30:070 (2) - new combo ?
02:42:949 (1) - remove new combo ? and then 02:44:349 (3) - new combo ?
【Insane】
00:36:224 (4) - dont stack it on the (3) , make it somewhere jump ? maybe upper right of (5), like this:
00:55:728 (4) - new combo ?
01:03:929 (5) - remove new combo ?
01:04:129 (1) - new combo ?
01:05:330 (3) - new combo ?
01:12:931 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:28:134 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:28:734 (2) - new combo ?
01:33:735 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:36:136 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:37:736 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:45:138 (2,3) - add one note bewteen them
01:45:738 (1) - shorten the spinner? :
01:55:340 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:59:541 (4,5) - add one note between them
02:14:143 (2) - normal clap ?
02:43:849 (4) - dont stack it on the (3) , place it somewhere near (5)
nice song star~
AR+1 ?
00:24:121 (1) -make it eaiser to move , it is a normal diff ?
01:15:332 (1) - too long spinner ?
02:28:999 (5) - stack it on the (4) ?
【Hard】
decrease the times of 5連打 for it is a hard diff ?
00:35:324 (1) - make it curved?
00:43:525 (1) - shorten the spinner to the white line:
01:31:535 (1) - remove ? it spoild the ryhthem
02:28:378 (2) - new combo ?
02:30:070 (2) - new combo ?
02:42:949 (1) - remove new combo ? and then 02:44:349 (3) - new combo ?
【Insane】
00:36:224 (4) - dont stack it on the (3) , make it somewhere jump ? maybe upper right of (5), like this:
00:55:728 (4) - new combo ?
01:03:929 (5) - remove new combo ?
01:04:129 (1) - new combo ?
01:05:330 (3) - new combo ?
01:12:931 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:28:134 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:28:734 (2) - new combo ?
01:33:735 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:36:136 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:37:736 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:45:138 (2,3) - add one note bewteen them
01:45:738 (1) - shorten the spinner? :
01:55:340 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:59:541 (4,5) - add one note between them
02:14:143 (2) - normal clap ?
02:43:849 (4) - dont stack it on the (3) , place it somewhere near (5)
nice song star~
Topic Starter
SPOILER
eXTREEEE wrote:
【Normal】
AR+1 ?
00:24:121 (1) -make it eaiser to move , it is a normal diff ?
01:15:332 (1) - too long spinner ?
02:28:999 (5) - stack it on the (4) ?
【Hard】
decrease the times of 5連打 for it is a hard diff ?
00:35:324 (1) - make it curved?
00:43:525 (1) - shorten the spinner to the white line:
01:31:535 (1) - remove ? it spoild the ryhthem
02:28:378 (2) - new combo ?
02:30:070 (2) - new combo ?
02:42:949 (1) - remove new combo ? and then 02:44:349 (3) - new combo ?
【Insane】
00:36:224 (4) - dont stack it on the (3) , make it somewhere jump ? maybe upper right of (5), like this:
00:55:728 (4) - new combo ?
01:03:929 (5) - remove new combo ?
01:04:129 (1) - new combo ?
01:05:330 (3) - new combo ?
01:12:931 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:28:134 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:28:734 (2) - new combo ?
01:33:735 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:36:136 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:37:736 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:45:138 (2,3) - add one note bewteen them
01:45:738 (1) - shorten the spinner? :
01:55:340 (1) - remove new combo ?
01:59:541 (4,5) - add one note between them
02:14:143 (2) - normal clap ?
02:43:849 (4) - dont stack it on the (3) , place it somewhere near (5)
nice song star~
I tried everything you said, but I had to say no to the new combos and remove new combos and hitsound changes. (not because I don't want the bubble to be popped, but because the map itself is fine with me now) Thank you.
Oh hey I remember this map. Reminds me of when I used to be MAT~
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NoHItter's Easy
Wanh's Normal
02:25:746 (5) - The last rebounce took me by surprise... because the other patterns did not have that repeat, and to add to that, the arrow was hidden. I was thinking it was going to be something like this. It would be much, much better if you changed it to something like that or... well, just don't hide the arrow.
Insane
00:52:927 - I'd snap the 1.0x section here. The Taiko scroll will look a bit better if you do that.
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That's all I guess. I'll be able to rank it once you fix, since they're very minor changes overall.
EDIT: Rechecked with dDifference... they should be the only changes, and since the other time everything else was perfect as well it should be fine if I rank this in this exact moment.
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NoHItter's Easy
- Those spinners make me worry. I think many of them are a bit short for an Easy, although I wouldn't say it's a necessity to change. Consider making them shorter anyway...
Wanh's Normal
02:25:746 (5) - The last rebounce took me by surprise... because the other patterns did not have that repeat, and to add to that, the arrow was hidden. I was thinking it was going to be something like this. It would be much, much better if you changed it to something like that or... well, just don't hide the arrow.
Insane
00:52:927 - I'd snap the 1.0x section here. The Taiko scroll will look a bit better if you do that.
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That's all I guess. I'll be able to rank it once you fix, since they're very minor changes overall.
EDIT: Rechecked with dDifference... they should be the only changes, and since the other time everything else was perfect as well it should be fine if I rank this in this exact moment.
I wish you mapped it closer to the actual o2jam map. You know, breaks where they had breaks, etc
took you long enough 
anyway, congratz 
anyway, congratz Finnaly ranked, Gratz :p
grats~
This took an awesomely long time to get ranked
now that it finally rank, congratz~
now that it finally rank, congratz~