10nya wrote:

Hi m4m from modreq~
sorry for the poor modding haven't modding since a long time =w=/

[Yasora's Normal]

1. 01:08:241 (4)- : nc? to make nc consistency
2. 01:42:332 (3)- : add whistle? i can hear piano here, it'll support
3. 02:09:150 (3,1)- : perhaps make slider 1 symmetric?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:58:696 (4)- : add clap here?

[Hard]

1. 00:03:696 (7)- : there's piano sound at here so add whistle?
2. 00:18:696 (8)- : move this to x4 y84 to make better shape
3. 01:02:787 (1)- : add finish to the head~
4. 01:16:309 , 01:16:537 , 01:16:764 - optional, but to support drum, add circles?
5. 01:49:378 (6)- : optional, but to support drum add clap?
6. 02:02:787 (1)- : add finish to the head
7. 02:10:059 (1)- : ^
8. 02:13:241 (3)- : rather than keep consistency of clap, if I were you I'll follow drum from music instead, so perhaps remove clap here and add at 02:13:014 (2) and 02:13:469 (4) 's head?
9. 02:30:059 (9,1)- : swap NC
10. 02:36:650 (8)- : add clap to the head?
11. 02:37:332 (1)- : add finish to the head
12. 02:55:059 (8)- : place this at x504 y304

that's all~ good luck

Yasora wrote:

10nya wrote:

[Yasora's Normal]

1. 01:08:241 (4)- : nc? to make nc consistency uh i know but still a bit weird cuz in 01:55:514 (3) - no nc and if nc in here make the combo too short
2. 01:42:332 (3)- : add whistle? i can hear piano here, it'll support I did that
3. 02:09:150 (3,1)- : perhaps make slider 1 symmetric? done
4. 02:58:696 (4)- : add clap here? sure

thank you
http://puu.sh/5NjvT.osu

1. Well, I personally like your combo colour 1 and 3, but 2 and 4 seems quite unfitting, because the BG doesn't have any of those colours (green and pink), so try to use some white there and maybe some more blue, that way it becomes fitting :3
2. Disable the widescreen support for obvious reasons (Your normal difficulty has it checked!)

1. The OD seems rather low for a normal difficulty, consider raising it up by one (it would be 3 then) to make the diff spread more equal!
2. 00:02:787 (3) - I personally think the clap on the redtick doesn't fit, try to use a whistle instead? I personally prefer that and it sounds better to me
3. 00:34:150 (2,3) - Blanket please
4. 00:39:150 (1) - Uhh, I would remove this NC here and 00:40:969 (3) - add one here, because you seem to use NC on every 2nd snatza? Or whatever, but that looks inconsistent.
5. 00:39:605 (2,3) - Blanket is incorrect
6. 01:08:923 - If you want, you can add a note here? Quite similar to 01:00:287 (2) - for example
7. 01:20:969 (3,4) - Blanket
8. 01:41:878 (3) - Slider's start one grid down to make a better blanket
9. 01:44:378 (3) - I wouldn't do this, really because there's a strong beat that is kinda bad to ignore ( 01:44:605 - ), so here's a rhythm you want to consider using instead
   
   Example

   
10. 01:50:059 (1) - Slider's end 1 grid to up / left to make a better blanket
11. 02:38:241 (3,4) - Blanket please
12. 02:40:969 (1) - Slider's end 1 grid to right to for better blanket
13. 03:02:787 (1,2) - You might want to check this blanket out too

1. 00:11:878 (1,3) - Blanket between these sliders are incorrect, make sure to fix it !
2. 00:12:787 (3,4) - I think the natural flow is broken here, maybe move the (4) and the others more down for a better flow?
   
   Example

   
3. 00:21:878 (7) - What do you think of CTRL + G'ing this slider? Feels kinda fun imo
4. 00:28:014 (5) - I think if you curve this slider other way round, it fits better (atleast for me)
   
   Example

   
5. 00:29:832 (9) - What do you think of silencing / lowering the volume A LOT on half of the slider because the music kinda stops when the guy sings ''kokoro ga'' so it would be a fun effect to it
6. 00:36:196 (6) - I think the flow here isn't the best because 00:35:514 (5) - doesn't ''catch'' the (6)'s start, so try this?
   
   Example

   
7. 01:04:150 (4,5) - Kind of awkward angle imo, I would move the slider somewhere to here
   
   Example

   
8. 01:18:696 (4,5) - Again like above, you have make your decision now and if you agreed on the first one, fix this and the rest by yourself / contact me in-game so we can fix them together
9. 01:30:969 (4) - The rhythm you're using is ''wrong'', well, not necessarily but there's a 1/3 repeative sound there, so here's a rhythm that is also more interesting but follows the music better!
   
   Example

   
10. 02:31:650 (5,6,7) - I would advise to make a blanket with (6), would look cook here
11. 02:58:242 (7) - If you agreed on the CTRL + G above, do the same here
12. 03:06:423 (3) - I don't think finish sounds good here, because the song kind of disappears >:

Asphyxia wrote:

Hi Habi! M4M here!

General thoughts:

1. Well, I personally like your combo colour 1 and 3, but 2 and 4 seems quite unfitting, because the BG doesn't have any of those colours (green and pink), so try to use some white there and maybe some more blue, that way it becomes fitting :3
2. Disable the widescreen support for obvious reasons (Your normal difficulty has it checked!)

Yasora's Normal:

1. The OD seems rather low for a normal difficulty, consider raising it up by one (it would be 3 then) to make the diff spread more equal!
2. 00:02:787 (3) - I personally think the clap on the redtick doesn't fit, try to use a whistle instead? I personally prefer that and it sounds better to me
3. 00:34:150 (2,3) - Blanket please
4. 00:39:150 (1) - Uhh, I would remove this NC here and 00:40:969 (3) - add one here, because you seem to use NC on every 2nd snatza? Or whatever, but that looks inconsistent.
5. 00:39:605 (2,3) - Blanket is incorrect
6. 01:08:923 - If you want, you can add a note here? Quite similar to 01:00:287 (2) - for example
7. 01:20:969 (3,4) - Blanket
8. 01:41:878 (3) - Slider's start one grid down to make a better blanket
9. 01:44:378 (3) - I wouldn't do this, really because there's a strong beat that is kinda bad to ignore ( 01:44:605 - ), so here's a rhythm you want to consider using instead
   
   Example

   
10. 01:50:059 (1) - Slider's end 1 grid to up / left to make a better blanket
11. 02:38:241 (3,4) - Blanket please
12. 02:40:969 (1) - Slider's end 1 grid to right to for better blanket
13. 03:02:787 (1,2) - You might want to check this blanket out too

Hard:

1. 00:11:878 (1,3) - Blanket between these sliders are incorrect, make sure to fix it !
2. 00:12:787 (3,4) - I think the natural flow is broken here, maybe move the (4) and the others more down for a better flow?
   
   Example

   
3. 00:21:878 (7) - What do you think of CTRL + G'ing this slider? Feels kinda fun imo
4. 00:28:014 (5) - I think if you curve this slider other way round, it fits better (atleast for me)
   
   Example

   
5. 00:29:832 (9) - What do you think of silencing / lowering the volume A LOT on half of the slider because the music kinda stops when the guy sings ''kokoro ga'' so it would be a fun effect to it
6. 00:36:196 (6) - I think the flow here isn't the best because 00:35:514 (5) - doesn't ''catch'' the (6)'s start, so try this?
   
   Example

   
7. 01:04:150 (4,5) - Kind of awkward angle imo, I would move the slider somewhere to here
   
   Example

   
8. 01:18:696 (4,5) - Again like above, you have make your decision now and if you agreed on the first one, fix this and the rest by yourself / contact me in-game so we can fix them together
9. 01:30:969 (4) - The rhythm you're using is ''wrong'', well, not necessarily but there's a 1/3 repeative sound there, so here's a rhythm that is also more interesting but follows the music better!
   
   Example

   
10. 02:31:650 (5,6,7) - I would advise to make a blanket with (6), would look cook here
11. 02:58:242 (7) - If you agreed on the CTRL + G above, do the same here
12. 03:06:423 (3) - I don't think finish sounds good here, because the song kind of disappears >:

Soo, that would be all I got~ GL :3

Yasora wrote:

almost fixed all sorry I suck at blanket things orz
thanks http://puu.sh/5SB5m.osu

[Kanbe Kotori] wrote:

[General]

-add 'ending' on tag / 수정

[Hard]

nazi 머겅 두번머겅

-00:15:059 (5,6,7,8) - 힛사소리를 점점 줄어드는 느낌이 들게 잡아주세요.
대강 5에 50, 6에 40, 7에 30, 8에 20 잡으니 괜찮은듯 / 기각 저는 별로네요

-00:29:832 (9) - 이 슬라이더 끝부분 소리 거슬리는데 이 끝부분만 소리 안들리도록 확 줄여주세요 / 기각 굳이 그래야하는 이유를 모르겠음

-00:37:332 (1) - 슬라이더 끝에 클랩 넣으셨는데 클랩보단 이부분만 소리 확키우고 피니쉬 추가좀 / 기각
01:24:605 (1) 여기도 똑같이 해주세요. / 기각

-00:54:605 (7) - 이거 그냥 서클 5연타가 더 좋을거 같은데... / 기각

-01:05:514 (1,4) - 두마디로 나눠서 첫박마다 뉴콤 넣으시다가 가사 맞춰서 넣으신거 같은데 / 수정
일관성있게 1에 뉴콤 지우고 4에 뉴콤 추가

-01:13:696 (7) - 뉴콤 추가 / 수정

-01:14:605 (1) - 뉴콤 제거 / 수정

-01:30:059 (3) - 맨끝에 클랩 추가? / 수정

-01:41:878 (7,8) - 힛사 처음엔 작게 잡고 점점 키워 가는 식으로 표현 부탁드려요./ 수정

-02:50:059 (1) - 끝부분 소리 최대한 작게 해주세요 거슬림... / 기각


GL

Teara wrote:

Hi, Just did a very quick basic mod, and things seem good!

No kd =)

[Normal]

Very nice, here is one suggestion on the end which I feel could flow a bit better =)

02:54:150 (4) - Convert there to two sliders maybe, to make it flow more with the vocals. Clap on the start of the first one, and a clap on the end of the last one =)

Yasora wrote:

fixed all http://puu.sh/5W212.osu
thank you guys

Caffe_[Latte] wrote:

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:04:605 (1) - y44

00:18:696 (7) - 8 l 84

00:23:696 (3) - 2 번째 점 420 252, 3번째점 384 224

00:33:696 (1) - 2번째점 464 272 3번째점 416 196

00:39:150 (5) - 완벽하게 담요...? (4)를 ctrl g해서 어프로치 서클에 맞춰보세요

00:58:241 (6) - 이건 그냥 제 스탈인데... ctrl g를 ..? (안하는게 좋을지도?)

01:12:219 (2) - 428 296

01:22:559 (5) - 452 308

01:22:787 (6) - 452 208 근처

01:30:969 (1,2,3) - ctrl j

01:53:696 (1) - 스페이싱?

01:54:605 (3,4) - 둘이 모양을 바꾸는건 어떤가요? http://puu.sh/6dBgx.jpg 이런 식으루

02:23:696 (3) - 304 52

02:25:969 (8) - (7) 슬라이더 쓰는것도 조흘듯 하네요

02:30:514 (2) - (3) 덮어주는게 보기 좋을듯 합니다.

02:44:378 (2) - 클랩

03:06:196 (2) - (1)과 겹치는것도 좋을듯 하네요. 딱히 안해도 상관은 없어용 ㅎ

이상입니당 역시 매핑굇님 ㄷㄷㄷ

Teara wrote:

정말 잘 만든 맵이네요!! >< 하지만 이지 난이도가 필요한거 같아요

W h i t e wrote:

From IRC

IRC

23:47 HabiHolic: 화이트님
23:47 W h i t e: 옘
23:47 HabiHolic: [http://osu.ppy.sh/s/130114# SPYAIR - Last Moment]
23:47 HabiHolic: 이거 이지모딩가능?
23:48 W h i t e: 이지모딩..?
23:48 HabiHolic: sp
23:48 HabiHolic: 네
23:48 HabiHolic: 테아라가 이지하나 만들레서
23:48 HabiHolic: 만듬
23:50 W h i t e: 그 뭐냐
23:50 W h i t e: 모딩 하자면
23:50 W h i t e: 이지에서 00:55:514 (1,3) -
23:50 W h i t e: 이렇게 겹치면 안되는걸로 알앙
23:50 W h i t e: 아요
23:50 W h i t e: 나머진 없는듯 겹치는거 뺴곤
23:50 W h i t e: 01:20:969 (1,3) - 여기도 있네
23:50 W h i t e: 01:42:786 (1,3) -
23:51 W h i t e: 02:08:241 (1,2) -
23:51 HabiHolic: 겹치면 안되나요?>
23:51 W h i t e: 흠 몇 뱃들은 이런거 잡는데
23:51 W h i t e: 그도 그럴만한게
23:51 W h i t e: AR도 작고
23:51 W h i t e: 겹쳐서 초보자한텐
23:51 W h i t e: 상당히 어려움

Lolicore_Komari wrote:

IRC Modding

12:55 *Lolicore_Komari is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/352296 SPYAIR - Last Moment [Easy]]
12:55 Lolicore_Komari: 으음
12:55 Lolicore_Komari: 00:06:423 (2,3) - 이런데는 3번노트 지우고
12:55 Lolicore_Komari: 슬라이더 처리해도 될거같아요
12:56 Lolicore_Komari: aimod 체크해주세요 언스냅도 하나 있네용
12:56 HabiHolic: ㄴㄴㄴ
12:57 Lolicore_Komari: ??
12:57 HabiHolic: 수정~
12:57 HabiHolic: 언스냅 수정하고
12:57 HabiHolic: 00:06:423 (2,3) -
12:57 HabiHolic: 요건 안고침요
12:57 Lolicore_Komari: 아아
12:57 HabiHolic: 왜냐하면 슬라이더 보다는
12:57 HabiHolic: 저게 치기에는 편해서..
12:58 Lolicore_Komari: 00:40:969 (1) - 스핀이 여기에 꼭 있을 필요가 있으려나..
12:58 Lolicore_Komari: 전 그냥 거기다가 노트 넣는게 더 낫다고 봐요 'ㅅ'
12:58 HabiHolic: 네
12:58 Lolicore_Komari: 아하
12:58 HabiHolic: 흠
12:58 HabiHolic: 그럼 박자를 짜맞출까요?
12:58 Lolicore_Komari: 왜냐면
12:58 Lolicore_Komari: 이지에만 스핀이 10개 ..
12:58 Lolicore_Komari: 너무 많아요
12:59 Lolicore_Komari: 01:00:059 (5) - 이런거는
12:59 Lolicore_Komari: 직선슬라이더로 완전히 고치거나, 아니면 좀더 굽혀주세요
13:00 Lolicore_Komari: 보기에 좋아보이는 모양은 아님 'ㅅ' ..
13:00 Lolicore_Komari: 01:06:423 (1) - 이 스핀도 위에 같은이유로 고쳐주세요
13:01 HabiHolic: 01:00:059 (5) - 이거
13:01 HabiHolic: 00:57:332 (3) -
13:01 HabiHolic: 얘 모양대로
13:01 HabiHolic: 간거니까
13:01 HabiHolic: 안고쳐도 될듯
13:01 Lolicore_Komari: 그런가영
13:01 HabiHolic: 01:06:423 (1) -
13:01 HabiHolic: 스핀은
13:01 HabiHolic: 박자짜맞출게요
13:02 Lolicore_Komari: 01:53:695 (1) - 여기도 가능하면 ..
13:02 HabiHolic: ㅇㅇ
13:02 Lolicore_Komari: 02:35:059 (2) - DS
13:02 Lolicore_Komari: 00:04:150 (4) - ^
13:03 Lolicore_Komari: 02:40:969 (1) - 이 스핀도 노트가 더 나을듯 ..
13:05 HabiHolic: 01:53:695 (1) -
13:05 HabiHolic: 여긴 안맞춰도되고
13:07 HabiHolic: 저거 이외에
13:07 HabiHolic: 수정함
13:07 Lolicore_Komari: 더 짚을데는 짝히 없어보이네용
13:07 Lolicore_Komari: GL!

S o a p wrote:

[Easy]
good diif,nothing to say

[Yasora's Normal]
00:02:787 (3) - like it http://puu.sh/6i45g.jpg
02:35:514 (3,4) - ctrl+G

[Hard]
00:28:696 (6,7) - spacing should be longer than 00:30:514 (1,2) -
01:01:423 (5) - spacing is so small

that's all,good map

Yasora wrote:

thanks http://puu.sh/6kHi9.osu

Teara wrote:

Easy looks good!

I'd bubble this, but you already have an active bubble from me at the moment. So for now. Take a star.

I feel this is ready.

o/

Teara wrote:

Lissette wrote:

[Timing]
I feel offset is early, use 978 (+9ms to your current), works better. Remember to resnap all notes after changing.

[Hard]
00:43:696 (3) - I think fits better a triplet here
00:40:981 (1) - sounds better if you make it 1/4 longer, just like 00:41:890 (3) -, and of course removing this note 00:41:662 (2) -
02:25:514 (7) - stack under prev 5 so it looks cleaner

[Yasora's Normal]
01:30:059 (1,2) - sounds better if you Ctrl+G these two (If you do, fix spacing)
01:39:150 - useless timing point
I think this have too much breaks, I actually noticed while playing. I know this is a guest diff but I really suggest you to map the first break-time 00:15:514 - at least, to avoid this and also this will make the breaks similar to Easy.

Good map overall

Call me back please

Yasora wrote:

http://puu.sh/6v3Ms.osu

Lissette wrote:

Ok, this is good to me now. Will have to re-bubble because there were changes on the timing.

Good luck~

p3n wrote:

[Yasora's Normal]
00:44:159 (5) - Lissette already mentioned this and I didn't see any reply why you didn't change it. I also recommend using a 1/2 repeat slider here: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1278618 If you want to keep the long slider I just want to know the reason behind it I dunno why, it's just my eyes or not, but I don't see this suggestion from lissette.. but fixed now
02:14:614 (3) - I suggest following the baseline here (which is 1/3). You can do this with a single 1/3 2x repeating slider or with any combination you prefer (as long as it fits the 1/3): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1278631 done

p3n wrote:

[General]
If you want I can delay the Artist+Title to display during the first break. Would work well with all diffs having the same break there.

hmm i think 00:15:523 - this start?

[Easy]
02:03:250 (6,1,2) - NC should start on 02:04:614 (2) - also... hmm ok~ fixed~
02:08:250 (1) - ...no NC here but start the NC on 02:12:796 (5) - to make it consistent with the rest of this diff fixed
Just poke me on IRC as soon as you have replied/updated.

p3n wrote:

Good job (ﾉ 'ω')ﾉ