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Kagaya Rei - One Night(Instrumental Version)

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TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

From queue
[Easy]
00:06:331 (5) - NC -Fixed
00:25:389 (2,3,4) - 其實可以不用刻意去調小聲 -我也覺得...因為之前設定音效比音樂大聲所以覺得吵了
00:42:331 (2) - ???? - :cry: 改了下節奏
00:49:389 (6) - x280 y196 -Fixed.

[Normal]
00:07:742 (2) - 這樣overlap掉不好看 -Sorry,I keep.
00:49:742 (3) - x476 y136 -Fixed.
00:50:095 (4) - x603 y150 -Fixed.
00:55:742 (2,3) - 轉一轉角度?(ctrl+r) -Fixed.
01:16:919 - 調整下間距 -Fixed.
01:20:940 (1) - 在01:25:123 - 完(其他難度一樣) -keep,好像01:25:123上沒有線..

[Hard]
00:05:978 - 沒必要KIAI -Fixed.
00:06:154 (2,3) - ctrl+g -Fixed.
00:09:154 (3) - 在這裡完 , 然後在00:10:566 - 加NOTE -Fixed.
00:59:978 (2) - 建議在01:00:683 - 完-Fixed.
01:01:389 (5) - 同上 , 在01:02:095 - -Fixed.
01:02:801 (8) - 同上-Fixed.
01:05:625 - 漏了個音 -有嗎?
01:10:566 (1,2,3) - flow不好-Fixed.


另外請問我能做一個GD嗎(Insane) :3?
當然可以 ;)
感謝mod!
-Teina-
529 posts
Joined October 2013
-Teina-
[Hard]
open
00:08:272 (2) - 可以減少1/4 並在00:08:978 - 加個圈 (不重要)
我不知道如何去mod hard的歌...
但感覺上不錯 很舒服~
加油

(no kd)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
Done~! 完成了
好像比你的易 :3

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TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

Done~! 完成了
好像比你的易 :3

點開
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344,320,9507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,264,9860,5,2,0:0:0:0:
376,356,10213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,10566,5,2,0:0:0:0:
428,260,10919,2,0,L|332:276,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,11625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,11801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,224,11978,6,0,P|256:176|264:120,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,12507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,120,12683,2,0,L|120:132,1,45,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,172,13389,2,0,P|24:212|36:268,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,13919,2,0,L|148:280,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,344,14625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,356,14801,6,0,L|360:356,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,340,15331,2,0,P|388:296|372:244,2,90,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,356,16213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,364,16566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,300,16919,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,212,17272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,196,17448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,172,17625,6,0,P|260:124|216:84,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,88,18154,2,0,L|104:88,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,100,18683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,200,19036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,292,19389,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,292,19566,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,292,19742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,292,19919,2,0,B|136:292|136:292|168:312|168:312|192:312,1,90
236,312,20448,5,2,0:0:0:0:
344,248,20801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,196,21154,1,10,0:0:0:0:
360,136,21507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,136,21683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,136,21860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,96,22213,2,0,P|472:56|464:4,2,90,0|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,120,23095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
476,144,23272,5,2,0:0:0:0:
476,272,23625,2,0,L|428:280,1,45,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,272,23978,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,264,24154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,236,24683,2,0,P|256:280|232:316,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,328,25213,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,264,25566,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,168,25919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,160,26095,6,0,P|224:128|216:64,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,60,26625,2,0,L|344:60,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,48,27507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,40,27860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,184,28213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
212,192,28566,2,0,L|264:192,1,45,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,192,28919,6,0,P|296:232|288:284,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,296,29978,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,296,30154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,296,30331,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,340,30683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,200,31036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,184,31389,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,184,31566,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,31742,12,0,33860,0:0:0:0:
128,236,34566,5,0,0:0:0:0:
180,120,34919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,124,35095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,128,35272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
324,188,35625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,236,35978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,120,36507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,96,36683,6,0,L|212:52,1,45,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,136,37036,2,0,L|327:107,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,220,37389,2,0,B|362:218|362:218|400:224|417:260,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
507,335,37919,2,0,P|465:348|424:332,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,259,38448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,56,38801,2,0,L|483:146,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,212,39331,2,0,B|468:224|440:200|440:200|412:208,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,140,40036,1,2,0:0:0:0:
276,148,40213,6,0,P|220:160|172:144,1,90
84,12,40919,2,0,P|122:54|132:104,1,90,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,168,41448,2,0,P|71:202|60:245,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,292,41978,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,332,42331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,216,42683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,56,43036,6,0,P|240:104|292:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,64,43566,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,16,43919,2,0,P|105:12|83:15,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,80,44448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,156,44801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,244,45154,1,10,0:0:0:0:
100,172,45331,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,252,45507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,164,45684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,244,45860,6,0,P|204:284|340:284,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,252,46919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,264,47095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,280,47272,2,0,L|452:180,1,90
340,100,47978,2,0,L|336:189,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,200,48507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,212,48683,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,49036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,200,49389,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,104,49742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,88,49918,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,76,50096,2,0,L|372:165,1,90
460,324,50801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,300,50978,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,276,51154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
412,172,51507,2,0,L|428:76,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,104,52036,2,0,L|384:12,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,28,52566,2,0,P|307:30|267:10,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,88,53272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,88,53448,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,88,53625,2,0,L|52:152,1,45,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,284,54154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,308,54331,6,0,P|136:328|188:320,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,244,55036,1,10,0:0:0:0:
219,119,55389,6,0,L|224:164,1,45,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,244,55742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,84,56095,6,0,L|398:172,1,90,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,20,57154,6,0,P|296:8|344:16,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,116,57860,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,224,58213,6,0,L|348:288,1,45,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,340,58566,2,0,L|425:364,2,45,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,352,59272,2,0,P|180:364|124:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,296,59801,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,296,59978,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,60,60683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,135,61036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,135,61213,2,0,P|256:161|196:136,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,72,62095,2,0,L|76:180,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,228,62625,6,0,P|96:232|152:152,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,36,63507,2,0,L|36:144,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,140,64036,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,152,64213,2,0,L|160:192,2,45,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,272,64919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,256,65272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,268,65448,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,280,65625,6,0,P|288:288|356:264,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,298,66331,2,0,L|248:280,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,196,66860,2,0,L|187:214,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,208,67389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,68,67742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,228,68095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,192,68272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,184,68448,6,0,P|184:192|248:180,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,79,69154,2,0,P|319:71|276:80,1,90
152,184,69860,2,0,L|159:228,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,69,70213,2,0,L|184:104,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,60,70566,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,128,70919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,140,71095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,132,71272,5,6,0:0:0:0:
348,124,71978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,132,72331,2,0,L|352:200,1,45,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,52,72683,6,0,L|448:168,1,90
464,284,73389,2,0,L|355:239,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,244,73919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,196,74095,2,0,L|340:124,1,90
160,208,74801,2,0,P|176:248|160:304,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,168,75507,5,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,236,75860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,76213,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,224,76566,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,240,76743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,236,76919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,32,78204,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,78633,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,276,79786,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80940,12,0,86998,0:0:0:0:
perfect good!~難度名就叫wkyik嗎?
Nya Nya Neko
440 posts
Joined February 2013
Nya Nya Neko
Hard diff
00:12:860 (3) - maybe place this 1/4 snap forward
00:14:272 (1) - ^
00:17:625 (3) - make this one 1/4 snap longer (sounds and looks better i think)
00:21:507 (4) - replace this with a cirrcle and place this 00:21:860 (5) - 1/4 snap backwards. extend the slider 1/4 snap
00:21:683 place a timing point with a bit lower slider velocity ( about 0.8)
00:34:566 I would'nt place a short kiai timehere
00:38:801 (2,3) - it sounds like it doesn't fit to the music
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Lust
From my modding queue

quick mod
nice soft song~

[Easy]
  1. 00:06:331 (1,2) - This would be nice if it was blanketed fully
    readjust spacing afterwards
  2. 00:17:625 (1,2) - I do not really like the look of this pattern, awkward flow and looks eh weird to say the least. Try this instead or something similar
  3. 00:25:389 (2) - 284:47
  4. 00:25:389 (2,3) - try blanket
  5. 00:26:095 (3,4) - why have (4) there? again some weird flow and location beginners are not going to be accustomed to. try moving it to 364:176
  6. 00:28:213 (1) - doesnt really follow the rhythm nicely, maybe try circles here?
  7. 00:32:448 - a note here perhaps, feels empty without one
  8. 00:36:683 (2,4) - would be nice if these sliders were symmetrical
  9. 00:39:507 (6,1) - bit of a nazi but the blanket is slightly off
  10. 00:52:919 (3,4) - blanket is off
  11. 01:11:272 (3) - newer players are not going to expect the slider turning more than once

good luck!
[ Raphael ]
[ Raphael ]
Hi~! from my queue!

[Easy]
  • It feels like Normal diff. CS → 3, HP → 2, AR → 3, OD → 2
    00:00:684 (1,2,3) - set to parallel
    00:14:801 (3,4) - blanket
    00:35:978 - add circle
    00:55:036 - ^
    00:59:272 (1) - add finish on end

    [Normal]
    • AR → 5
      00:00:684 (1,2) - distance
      00:06:331 (1,2) - remove that it overlaps lightly. maybe it is look like better~ :3
      00:13:389 (1) - opposite slider
      00:32:448 (1,2) - jump?? it is hard for beginners..
      00:55:742 (2,3) - remove that it overlaps lightly.
      01:16:919 (1) - move to (204,137) for blanket with 01:15:154 (1)

      [Hard]
      • 00:17:625 (3) - end on 00:18:331 for follow song
        00:21:507 (4,5) - remove that it overlaps lightly.
        00:29:625 - add circle. maybe it is funny :3
        00:31:036 - ^
        00:40:213 - add circle for follow song
        01:06:860 (3) - end on 01:07:389 or add circle on 01:07:389 for follow song
        01:07:742 (1,1,1,1) - NC spam D:
        01:14:095 (5,1) - remove that it overlaps lightly.

        [wkyik]
        • 00:01:742 (3) - straight slider
          00:04:389 (4,5) - overlap. it is look so strange.
          01:07:389 (4,7) - overlap

          Nice song~ :3
          Good luck!
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

not94 wrote:

Hard diff
00:12:860 (3) - maybe place this 1/4 snap forward But I think now is better
00:14:272 (1) - ^
00:17:625 (3) - make this one 1/4 snap longer (sounds and looks better i think) OK~
00:21:507 (4) - replace this with a cirrcle and place this 00:21:860 (5) - 1/4 snap backwards. extend the slider 1/4 snap Fixed
00:21:683 place a timing point with a bit lower slider velocity ( about 0.8) Fixed
00:34:566 I would'nt place a short kiai timehere Fixed
00:38:801 (2,3) - it sounds like it doesn't fit to the music Fixed
Thanks for mod! :)
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Lust wrote:

From my modding queue

quick mod
nice soft song~

[Easy]
  1. 00:06:331 (1,2) - This would be nice if it was blanketed fully Fixed
    readjust spacing afterwards
  2. 00:17:625 (1,2) - I do not really like the look of this pattern, awkward flow and looks eh weird to say the least. Try this instead or something similar Fixed
  3. 00:25:389 (2) - 284:47 Fixed
  4. 00:25:389 (2,3) - try blanket Fixed
  5. 00:26:095 (3,4) - why have (4) there? again some weird flow and location beginners are not going to be accustomed to. try moving it to 364:176 Fixed
  6. 00:28:213 (1) - doesnt really follow the rhythm nicely, maybe try circles here? Fixed
  7. 00:32:448 - a note here perhaps, feels empty without one Fixed
  8. 00:36:683 (2,4) - would be nice if these sliders were symmetrical Fixed
  9. 00:39:507 (6,1) - bit of a nazi but the blanket is slightly off Fixed
  10. 00:52:919 (3,4) - blanket is off Fixed
  11. 01:11:272 (3) - newer players are not going to expect the slider turning more than once Uh...Sorry,I keep this.

good luck!
Thanks for your mod!
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue
Hello~
From my queue. Sorry for late mod



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
这曲子我感觉适合慢sv 一点个人想法而已~
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵ 加油！
[Easy]
General
ez作的还可以，不过大概节奏需要一定的简化
Beats
00:28:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽说没错但是1/2不太适合在ez里面多用（后同）
Placement
00:00:684 (1) - 啊。。我是强迫症可以把中间的锚点删了么。。（tip向）
00:25:389 (2,3) - blanket包好
01:04:566 (2,3,4) - 注意间距，其实我感觉这个地方明显难了些，如果不是bpm低的话应该是不能这么用的
还有几个地方用的1.2间距尽量都用回1.0间距。。ez如何放跳呢。。
[Normal]
General
1/2总体感觉滥用啊。。节奏上还是有很多地方可以吐槽的。。
Beats
00:00:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 全1/2?前边本身节奏比较疏松为何反而全1、2塞满呢？本来不要空下么。。
00:06:331 (1,2) - 尽量减少在normal难度出现过多的折返滑条
00:32:448 (1) - 放spinner吧
00:47:978 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这些1/2note感觉跟曲子实在是关联性不大。。
01:03:154 (6) - 还是说没有音的地方。。
Placement
00:29:978 (1,1,1) - flow确实比较锋利
00:39:507 (7,8) - blanket包好
[Hard]
General
我觉得比柚子的难度难。。
还是有些东西需要注意的。
Beats
00:07:742 (6) - 可以做成一个长音
00:07:213 (5,6,2) - 对比这两个地方的节奏型和背景音乐，这里2应该是短1/4来覆盖钢琴的，而且在3前边那根蓝线上有一个音没有盖到
00:09:154 (3) - 这里我感觉在两个强音上放note，距离挨得近些就好，放折返像是在带过
00:11:978 (2) - 当加入鼓的时候节奏可以稍微加密一点，比如这个滑条是不是考虑拆下节奏，里面有很多节奏盖过去了
后边这一小段感觉跟的音轨比较乱，长滑条似乎是在跟的鼓声，不过跟完了立即就是一声钢琴，这里大概还可以理解，不过00:16:036 (7,1) - 这里我感觉就是一个很明显的切换了，打起来不会费劲但是节奏会感觉不舒服。。
00:17:272 (2,3) - 跟钢琴的话中间还是有些音没有压上
00:35:272 (3) - 滑条头在跟哪个音呢。。如果是那声类似鼓的声音的话我不是很推荐，还是跟音轨的问题，音轨切换在很多地方都不是很自然，或者不是太适合切换的地方切换了
00:43:036 (4) - 里面的节奏吞掉太多，应该展开
00:47:801 (6) - note多余
00:54:860 (1,2,3,4) - 这节奏自创的似乎不是很适合曲子
00:56:801 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 此处我拿不准，按照我的想法的话是不会使用这样的加节奏来突出音乐发展的，或者改跟背景音会有帮助
00:59:625 (1) - 也换成两个note吧，后边都是用的两个note
01:05:448 (5) - 01:06:860 (3) - 对比这两个音，我感觉应该做成类似节奏型
01:15:507 (3) - 如果要跟鼓的话建议把中间有一声也跟上
另外后边切了跟鼓声之后节奏密集程度加大了不少。。虽然也不是增加了太多。。

Placement
00:01:566 (4) - Nazi 没有叠好
往后紧接着就是又是没有叠好，建议关注右上角测距的小面板，看看叠的是不是完美的
00:05:978 (1,2,3) - 虽说是强音但是在不激烈的地方用了2.0间距还是很危险的
00:16:213 (1,2,3) - 注意flow问题
00:17:625 (3,4) - 不太适合stack
00:20:448 (1) - 还是注意下间距问题，跟前一个note距离大了0.05，不是大问题但是会影响整洁程度
00:23:272 (3) - 容我吐槽下锚点。。或许丧病但是学会下锚点的位置对掌控滑条有至关重要的作用（这条不是问题，是一个tip）
00:25:919 (4,5) - 已经构不成blanket了。。不过硬是想弄blanket的话我感觉这里包的还是有问题 另外这之间的2.45的间距确实大了
00:38:801 (2,4) - 美观的话应该统一这两个滑条弧度
00:52:919 (1,2) - blanket有问题
01:08:095 (2,3,4) - 还是建议间距小些，2.0我感觉大了，节奏型本身配合hitsound足以突出这个地方了，2.0反而影响间距判断
01:08:801 (1) - flow不顺畅
01:10:213 (4,1,3) - 这里两个滑条弄得更加对称或用相同的弧度会比较好，如此不整齐
[wkyik]
General
hi~柚子~摸到你的gd啦
最新说法怕是得改难度名
总体感觉不错，来挑挑刺
Beats
00:11:978 (1,2,3) - 考虑改成跟00:13:389 (4,5) - 一致的节奏型，中间多了个note是跑去跟鼓了，而这里是有一种对称节奏的
00:23:625 (2,3) - 跟上边那条感觉是一样的
00:26:625 (2) - 我感觉一个折返不足以强调这里的强音，可以做成滑条加note来强调那个音
00:30:331 (1,2,3) - 也做一个折返来形成节奏上的呼应如何？
00:52:566 (4) - 这滑条头上没有音，尾巴上有明显重音
SPOILER
看这里相似的节奏你下的就很切钢琴声，所以说这样：
SPOILER
进了kiai节奏下的没啥问题了
Placement
00:19:389 (5,6,7,8) - 一点建议
00:21:507 (4,5,6) - 这里不建议stack，尤其是在6和7之间有一种流动的感觉
00:44:448 (4) - 比较建议这个地方将距离拉近还原，这样的距离会让人误判节奏的
kiai感觉不错
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
- TiRaFiouS -
128 posts
Joined November 2012
- TiRaFiouS -
from modding queue

[General]
01:16:919 - timing 好像錯了
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不知道對不對...先看看吧..

00:11:095 - 這之前的音量改成5

[EZ]
Slider tick rate 改做2

00:26:095 (3) - 未包好
00:36:683 (3,4,5,6,7) -
00:35:978 (2) - 不要貼著滑跳
00:43:742 (4,5) - 變return slider 結束點00:44:448 -
00:55:742 (1) - end at 00:58:566 -
01:08:095 (2) - Prev DS :1.21 + change to circle
01:09:154 (1) - Prev DS :1.20
01:10:566 (2) - Prev DS :1.20
01:14:095 (4) - 未包好
01:16:566 (2,3) - 01:20:940 (1) - timing problem

[NM]
00:06:331 (1,2) - 各減一個return
00:31:389 (1) - Ctrl H
00:32:448 (1) - end at 00:33:154 - 00:33:860 - add note 00:34:566 - add note
00:37:389 (4,5,6,7) - 建議這樣
00:47:978 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
00:55:036 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 如圖 / 滑條與circle 前後次序掉轉
01:02:801 (5,6) - 6直接取代5(把滑條拉過去)
01:08:095 (3) - 把return位拉向右下45度
01:16:919 (1,1,1) - timing problem

[HD]
flow不太好
而且跟我做圖一樣...很多overlap ((掩面>^<
00:14:625 (2,3,4,5) - 可以變成兩個滑條
00:16:213 (1,2,3,4) - 角度太窄
00:28:566 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 要不要參考一下233


00:35:095 (2,3) - 3取代2 end at 00:35:978 -
00:47:801 (6) - remove
00:49:213 (2) - 感覺也可以^
00:54:860 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - remap 這部分...節奏拿不準 00:57:860 (1,2,3,4,5) - 順便也remap這裡
00:59:978 (2) - 01:01:389 (5) - 01:05:978 (1) - 這些滑條...要改一下....((有點醜= ="|
01:08:095 (2,3,4) - 與1分開一點
01:15:331 (2) - remove
01:15:507 (3) - end at 01:15:860 -
01:16:566 (5,1,1) - timing problem

[wkyik]
感覺不錯O_O
就右上和左下的位置用的不夠多
還有對於ins...這距離有點短
00:55:742 (2) - 這個可近一點?
01:14:095 (4) - 變曲好張漂亮一點?
01:16:919 (3,1,2,1,1) - 也就是timing 好像錯了;w;(伸手指general>W<)


good luck~
YielShelion
78 posts
Joined December 2011
YielShelion
Hello~
i think Easy and normal are already perfect
Hard
00:09:154 (3) - looks better IMO if it is reversed (ctrl + G)
00:21:154 (3) - Move this circle to (x248 y152. using grid level 3)
the rest are fine

wkyik
it sounds better if the Timing points at 76919 moved to 76566 and then resnap and readjust the distance on 01:16:566 (1,2,3), but you don't need to snap (1,2) : http://puu.sh/5FRLC.jpg

Hope it helps :)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia

Atrue wrote:

[wkyik]
General
hi~柚子~摸到你的gd啦
最新说法怕是得改难度名
总体感觉不错，来挑挑刺
Beats
00:11:978 (1,2,3) - 考虑改成跟00:13:389 (4,5) - 一致的节奏型，中间多了个note是跑去跟鼓了，而这里是有一种对称节奏的
00:23:625 (2,3) - 跟上边那条感觉是一样的
00:26:625 (2) - 我感觉一个折返不足以强调这里的强音，可以做成滑条加note来强调那个音 OK
00:30:331 (1,2,3) - 也做一个折返来形成节奏上的呼应如何？ 不了
00:52:566 (4) - 这滑条头上没有音，尾巴上有明显重音
SPOILER
看这里相似的节奏你下的就很切钢琴声，所以说这样：
SPOILER
[b]好[/b]
进了kiai节奏下的没啥问题了
Placement
00:19:389 (5,6,7,8) - 一点建议 不太明白啊
00:21:507 (4,5,6) - 这里不建议stack，尤其是在6和7之间有一种流动的感觉 ok
00:44:448 (4) - 比较建议这个地方将距离拉近还原，这样的距离会让人误判节奏的 ok
kiai感觉不错
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

[wkyik]
感覺不錯O_O
就右上和左下的位置用的不夠多
還有對於ins...這距離有點短
00:55:742 (2) - 這個可近一點? 我覺得這樣好有趣啊
01:14:095 (4) - 變曲好張漂亮一點? ????
01:16:919 (3,1,2,1,1) - 也就是timing 好像錯了;w;(伸手指general>W<)


good luck~

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256,20,57154,6,0,P|296:8|344:16,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,116,57860,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,224,58213,6,0,L|348:288,1,45,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,340,58566,2,0,L|425:364,2,45,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,352,59272,6,0,P|180:364|124:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,296,59801,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,296,59978,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,60,60683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,135,61036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,135,61213,2,0,P|256:161|196:136,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,72,62095,2,0,L|76:180,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,228,62625,6,0,P|96:232|152:152,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,36,63507,2,0,L|36:144,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,140,64036,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,152,64213,2,0,L|160:192,2,45,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,272,64919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,256,65272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,268,65448,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,280,65625,6,0,P|288:288|356:264,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,298,66331,2,0,L|248:280,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,196,66860,2,0,L|187:214,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,208,67389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,68,67742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,228,68095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,192,68272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,184,68448,6,0,P|184:192|248:180,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,79,69154,2,0,P|319:71|276:80,1,90
152,184,69860,6,0,L|159:228,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,69,70213,2,0,L|184:104,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,60,70566,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,128,70919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,140,71095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,132,71272,5,6,0:0:0:0:
348,124,71978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,132,72331,6,0,L|352:200,1,45,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,52,72683,2,0,L|448:168,1,90
464,284,73389,6,0,L|355:239,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,244,73919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,196,74095,2,0,L|340:124,1,90
160,208,74801,6,0,P|176:248|160:304,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,168,75507,5,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,236,75860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,76213,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,224,76566,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,240,76743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,236,76919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,32,78204,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,78633,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,276,79786,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80940,12,0,86998,0:0:0:0:



啊!還有因為rules的改變
麻煩幫忙把難度名改做wkyik's Insane
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa
[General]
这曲子我感觉适合慢sv 一点个人想法而已~
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵ 加油！
[Easy]
General
ez作的还可以，不过大概节奏需要一定的简化
Beats
00:28:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽说没错但是1/2不太适合在ez里面多用（后同）嗯我调整一下
Placement
00:00:684 (1) - 啊。。我是强迫症可以把中间的锚点删了么。。（tip向）就不删_(:з」∠)_
00:25:389 (2,3) - blanket包好 Fixed
01:04:566 (2,3,4) - 注意间距，其实我感觉这个地方明显难了些，如果不是bpm低的话应该是不能这么用的
还有几个地方用的1.2间距尽量都用回1.0间距。。ez如何放跳呢。。Fixed
[Normal]
General
1/2总体感觉滥用啊。。节奏上还是有很多地方可以吐槽的。。
Beats
00:00:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 全1/2?前边本身节奏比较疏松为何反而全1、2塞满呢？本来不要空下么。。OK空了一些
00:06:331 (1,2) - 尽量减少在normal难度出现过多的折返滑条我觉得还好啊
00:32:448 (1) - 放spinner吧 OK
00:47:978 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这些1/2note感觉跟曲子实在是关联性不大。。已调整
01:03:154 (6) - 还是说没有音的地方。。
Placement
00:29:978 (1,1,1) - flow确实比较锋利 Fixed
00:39:507 (7,8) - blanket包好
[notice][Hard]
General
我觉得比柚子的难度难。。
还是有些东西需要注意的。
Beats
00:07:742 (6) - 可以做成一个长音 OK
00:07:213 (5,6,2) - 对比这两个地方的节奏型和背景音乐，这里2应该是短1/4来覆盖钢琴的，而且在3前边那根蓝线上有一个音没有盖到 Fixed
00:09:154 (3) - 这里我感觉在两个强音上放note，距离挨得近些就好，放折返像是在带过Fixed
00:11:978 (2) - 当加入鼓的时候节奏可以稍微加密一点，比如这个滑条是不是考虑拆下节奏，里面有很多节奏盖过去了
后边这一小段感觉跟的音轨比较乱，长滑条似乎是在跟的鼓声，不过跟完了立即就是一声钢琴，这里大概还可以理解，不过00:16:036 (7,1) - 这里我感觉就是一个很明显的切换了，打起来不会费劲但是节奏会感觉不舒服。。Fixed
00:17:272 (2,3) - 跟钢琴的话中间还是有些音没有压上Fixed
00:35:272 (3) - 滑条头在跟哪个音呢。。如果是那声类似鼓的声音的话我不是很推荐，还是跟音轨的问题，音轨切换在很多地方都不是很自然，或者不是太适合切换的地方切换了Fixed
00:43:036 (4) - 里面的节奏吞掉太多，应该展开Fixed
00:47:801 (6) - note多余Fixed
00:54:860 (1,2,3,4) - 这节奏自创的似乎不是很适合曲子Fixed
00:56:801 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 此处我拿不准，按照我的想法的话是不会使用这样的加节奏来突出音乐发展的，或者改跟背景音会有帮助Fixed
00:59:625 (1) - 也换成两个note吧，后边都是用的两个noteFixed
01:05:448 (5) - 01:06:860 (3) - 对比这两个音，我感觉应该做成类似节奏型 不用了
01:15:507 (3) - 如果要跟鼓的话建议把中间有一声也跟上Fixed
另外后边切了跟鼓声之后节奏密集程度加大了不少。。虽然也不是增加了太多。。

Placement
00:01:566 (4) - Nazi 没有叠好
往后紧接着就是又是没有叠好，建议关注右上角测距的小面板，看看叠的是不是完美的Fixed
00:05:978 (1,2,3) - 虽说是强音但是在不激烈的地方用了2.0间距还是很危险的Fixed
00:16:213 (1,2,3) - 注意flow问题Fixed
00:17:625 (3,4) - 不太适合stackFixed
00:20:448 (1) - 还是注意下间距问题，跟前一个note距离大了0.05，不是大问题但是会影响整洁程度Fixed
00:23:272 (3) - 容我吐槽下锚点。。或许丧病但是学会下锚点的位置对掌控滑条有至关重要的作用（这条不是问题，是一个tip）Fixed
00:25:919 (4,5) - 已经构不成blanket了。。不过硬是想弄blanket的话我感觉这里包的还是有问题 另外这之间的2.45的间距确实大了Fixed
00:38:801 (2,4) - 美观的话应该统一这两个滑条弧度Fixed
00:52:919 (1,2) - blanket有问题Fixed
01:08:095 (2,3,4) - 还是建议间距小些，2.0我感觉大了，节奏型本身配合hitsound足以突出这个地方了，2.0反而影响间距判断Fixed
01:08:801 (1) - flow不顺畅Fixed
01:10:213 (4,1,3) - 这里两个滑条弄得更加对称或用相同的弧度会比较好，如此不整齐Fixed
感谢MOD和Star_(:з」∠)_
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

from modding queue

[General]
01:16:919 - timing 好像錯了
[TimingPoints]
684,705.882352941176,4,2,1,25,1,0
59978,-100,4,2,1,25,0,1
71272,-100,4,2,1,25,0,1
76563,750,4,2,1,25,1,1
76962,833.333333333333,4,2,1,25,1,1
78633,1153.84615384615,4,2,1,25,1,0
81877,857.142857142857,4,2,1,25,1,0
83591,857.142857142857,4,2,1,25,1,0
84126,1000,4,2,1,25,1,0
85120,909.090909090909,4,2,1,25,1,0
不知道對不對...先看看吧..
謝謝~改了76962,833.333333333333,4,2,1,25,1,1
78633,1153.84615384615,4,2,1,25,1,0
85120,909.090909090909,4,2,1,25,1,0
00:11:095 - 這之前的音量改成5

[EZ]
Slider tick rate 改做2

00:26:095 (3) - 未包好Fixed
00:36:683 (3,4,5,6,7) -
Fixed
00:35:978 (2) - 不要貼著滑跳Fixed
00:43:742 (4,5) - 變return slider 結束點00:44:448 - Fixed
00:55:742 (1) - end at 00:58:566 - Fixed
01:08:095 (2) - Prev DS :1.21 + change to circle
01:09:154 (1) - Prev DS :1.20
01:10:566 (2) - Prev DS :1.20 不改Prev DS
01:14:095 (4) - 未包好Fixed
01:16:566 (2,3) - 01:20:940 (1) - timing problem

[NM]
00:06:331 (1,2) - 各減一個return不改
00:31:389 (1) - Ctrl HFixed
00:32:448 (1) - end at 00:33:154 - 00:33:860 - add note 00:34:566 - add noteFixed
00:37:389 (4,5,6,7) - 建議這樣
00:47:978 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
00:55:036 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 如圖 / 滑條與circle 前後次序掉轉
Fixed
01:02:801 (5,6) - 6直接取代5(把滑條拉過去)Fixed
01:08:095 (3) - 把return位拉向右下45度Fixed
01:16:919 (1,1,1) - timing problem

[HD]
flow不太好
而且跟我做圖一樣...很多overlap ((掩面>^<
00:14:625 (2,3,4,5) - 可以變成兩個滑條Fixed
00:16:213 (1,2,3,4) - 角度太窄Fixed
00:28:566 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 要不要參考一下233


Fixed
00:35:095 (2,3) - 3取代2 end at 00:35:978 - Fixed
00:47:801 (6) - removeFixed
00:49:213 (2) - 感覺也可以^ 嗯..看看先~
00:54:860 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - remap 這部分...節奏拿不準 00:57:860 (1,2,3,4,5) - 順便也remap這裡Fixed
00:59:978 (2) - 01:01:389 (5) - 01:05:978 (1) - 這些滑條...要改一下....((有點醜= ="|Fixed
01:08:095 (2,3,4) - 與1分開一點Fixed
01:15:331 (2) - remove Fixed
01:15:507 (3) - end at 01:15:860 - Fixed
01:16:566 (5,1,1) - timing problem

good luck~
Thanks for your advice!
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

YielShelion wrote:

Hello~
i think Easy and normal are already perfect
Hard
00:09:154 (3) - looks better IMO if it is reversed (ctrl + G)
00:21:154 (3) - Move this circle to (x248 y152. using grid level 3)
the rest are fine

Hope it helps :)
:) Thanks for your helpful mod!
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

Atrue wrote:

[wkyik]
Placement
00:19:389 (5,6,7,8) - 一点建议 不太明白啊

诶现在已经忘记了，估计当时是想截个图啥的。。今天单看这里局部的话应该是没问题的~ :)
sjoy
1,025 posts
Joined April 2012
sjoy
from my queue
整体音效提高10% 然后KIAI 再调高5%
[Easy]
主要问题还是音效太少，可以在重音的地方加WHIS 例如00:12:203
[Normal]
00:49:742 (2,3) - 删了3 ，2变成1/4滑条
00:47:978 (4,5,6) - 同 上
01:00:683 (2,3) - 01:01:036 - note 01:01:389 - 1/2 slider
01:04:213 (2,3,4) - 叠太多了
01:08:095 (3,1,2) - 01:08:448 (1) - 滑条这里开始
01:13:389 (6) - 节奏不对 01:13:919这里有个音

[Hard]
00:26:095 (2) - 00:26:448这里结束后面加个NOTE
00:36:507 (1,2,3) - 有蛋疼 蓝线起的滑条 建议先NOTE再滑条
[wkyik's Insane]
音量小于25%都是UNRANKABLE 拉 改成35%拉
00:30:331 (1) - 删掉
00:53:978漏音
没啥大问题
good luck
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

sjoy wrote:

from my queue
整体音效提高10% 然后KIAI 再调高5% 嗯...再看看吧,因为这歌实在太安静了
[Easy]
主要问题还是音效太少，可以在重音的地方加WHIS 例如00:12:203 ok
[Normal]
00:49:742 (2,3) - 删了3 ，2变成1/4滑条 ok
00:47:978 (4,5,6) - 同 上ok
01:00:683 (2,3) - 01:01:036 - note 01:01:389 - 1/2 slider ok
01:04:213 (2,3,4) - 叠太多了 已改
01:08:095 (3,1,2) - 01:08:448 (1) - 滑条这里开始 prefer the original
01:13:389 (6) - 节奏不对 01:13:919这里有个音 ok

[Hard]
00:26:095 (2) - 00:26:448这里结束后面加个NOTEok
00:36:507 (1,2,3) - 有蛋疼 蓝线起的滑条 建议先NOTE再滑条ok
Thanks for help~_(:з」∠)_
Last edited by TatsumiAlicekawa , edited 1 time in total.
Rukaru
829 posts
Joined April 2012
Rukaru
hello there. request from my queue.
sorry for taking a long time.
[General]

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:978, ends on 01:18:633

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:978, ends on 01:18:633

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:919, ends on 00:35:095
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:978, ends on 01:16:962

- [wkyik's Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:978, ends on 01:16:962
remove tags "kagaya rei" beacuse it is already on artist.
add tag Kawaiwkyik
[Easy]
how about adding whistle hitsound every downbeat (long white tick) on this part :
00:11:978 - 00:27:507
00:34:566 - 00:54:331

on kiai time you use some whistle but only here 00:59:272 (1,2,3). why don't you follow this hitsound pattern to the end of kiai time??

01:16:962 (3,1) - finish here.
01:20:940 (1) - here too
[Normal]
uh....barely hitsounded. :/

consider adding whitsle on :
SPOILER
00:00:684 (2) - slider head
00:02:095 (2) - ^
00:03:507 (2) - ^
00:04:919 (4) - ^
00:06:331 (1) - ^
00:07:742 (2) - ^
00:13:389 (3) - ^
00:14:801 (1) - ^
00:16:213 (3) - ^
00:17:625 (1) - ^
00:19:036 (4) - ^
00:32:448 (1) -
uh....basically, consider adding whistle on 1st and 3rd white tick.

consider adding finish on :
SPOILER
00:11:978 (1) - slider head
00:17:625 (1) - ^
00:23:272 (1) - ^
00:28:566 (1) - slider end
00:31:389 (2) - ^
00:45:154 (1) - slider end
00:51:507 (1) - slider head
00:59:272 (1) - slider end
01:11:272 (2) -
01:16:962 (1) - slider head
01:16:962 (1,1) - ^

00:34:919 (2) - finish should be here 00:34:566 (1) instead
00:45:154 (1,2,3) - I think this is better. easier to read and more fun to play.
SPOILER
01:04:919 (4) - stack to 01:05:272 (5)
01:05:272 (5,6) - uh...how about this? change (5) into a circle and make (6) start at 01:05:625 and end at 01:06:331

that's it.
[Hard]
grid level 4 pls
for hitsound, you may use my suggestion on normal diff.

00:03:860 (3,4) - make this straight with 00:02:978 (1,2)
00:08:095 (1,2,3) - I think it's better like this.
SPOILER
00:47:095 (4,5) - switch position? slider first and circle last.
[wkyik's Insane]
no comment. it's good already.
[]
uh....your easy diff and insane are good. doesn't mean your normal and hard is bad. no no no.
I wonder why in your diff, all of them (easy, normal, and hard) barely hitsounded.

that's all. good luck for rank.
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

raheta_adi wrote:

hello there. request from my queue.
sorry for taking a long time.
[General]

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Easy] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:978, ends on 01:18:633

- [Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:978, ends on 01:18:633

- [Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:919, ends on 00:35:095
Kiai #2: Starts on 00:59:978, ends on 01:16:962

- [wkyik's Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:59:978, ends on 01:16:962
All changed to 01:16:962
remove tags "kagaya rei" beacuse it is already on artist.
add tag Kawaiwkyikok
[Easy]
how about adding whistle hitsound every downbeat (long white tick) on this part :ok
00:11:978 - 00:27:507
00:34:566 - 00:54:331

on kiai time you use some whistle but only here 00:59:272 (1,2,3). why don't you follow this hitsound pattern to the end of kiai time??ok

01:16:962 (3,1) - finish here.added whistle
01:20:940 (1) - here toook
[Normal]
uh....barely hitsounded. :/

consider adding whitsle on :
SPOILER
00:00:684 (2) - slider head
00:02:095 (2) - ^
00:03:507 (2) - ^
00:04:919 (4) - ^added
00:06:331 (1) - ^added
00:07:742 (2) - ^added
00:13:389 (3) - ^added
00:14:801 (1) - ^added
00:16:213 (3) - ^added
00:17:625 (1) - ^added
00:19:036 (4) - ^added
00:32:448 (1) -
uh....basically, consider adding whistle on 1st and 3rd white tick.

consider adding finish on :
SPOILER
00:11:978 (1) - slider head
00:17:625 (1) - ^
00:23:272 (1) - ^
00:28:566 (1) - slider end
00:31:389 (2) - ^
00:45:154 (1) - slider end
00:51:507 (1) - slider head
00:59:272 (1) - slider end added
01:11:272 (2) -
01:16:962 (1) - slider head
01:16:962 (1,1) - ^
Because finish is too noisy but this is a silent song,I prefer the original.

00:34:919 (2) - finish should be here 00:34:566 (1) instead ok
00:45:154 (1,2,3) - I think this is better. easier to read and more fun to play.
SPOILER
ok
01:04:919 (4) - stack to 01:05:272 (5)ok
01:05:272 (5,6) - uh...how about this? change (5) into a circle and make (6) start at 01:05:625 and end at 01:06:331ok

that's it.
[Hard]
grid level 4 pls
for hitsound, you may use my suggestion on normal diff.

00:03:860 (3,4) - make this straight with 00:02:978 (1,2) ok
00:08:095 (1,2,3) - I think it's better like this.
SPOILER
prefer the original
00:47:095 (4,5) - switch position? slider first and circle last.ok
:)Thanks for help!
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
回sjoy:改了漏音部份 其餘沒改
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: -One Night(Instrumental Version).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 10933
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:One Night(Instrumental Version)
TitleUnicode:One Night(Instrumental Version)
Artist:Kagaya Rei
ArtistUnicode:加贺谷玲
Creator:TatsumiAlicekawa
Version:wkyik's Insane
Source:Night on the Galactic Railroad
Tags:Kawaiwkyik
BeatmapID:332758
BeatmapSetID:129804

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Hello there.

Red - Fix it.
Blue - Suggestion.

General:

Try fixing the title of the song from One Night(Instrumental Version) to One Night (Instrumental Version).
Try placing the Audio Lead-in to 1000ms in all difficulties.

Easy:

00:33:154 (1) - Maybe remove the new combo?
00:36:683 (3) - Add a whistle to the slider end.
00:42:331 (3) - ^
00:43:742 (4) - ^
00:46:566 (3) - ^
00:47:978 (5) - ^
00:50:801 (1) - ^
00:51:507 (2) - Add a whistle to the slider end.
00:52:919 (3) - ^
01:15:507 (1) - Remove New Combo.

Normal:

00:27:507 (7) - Place it here: http://puu.sh/5XeY4.jpg
00:29:625 (1) - Whistle.
00:31:036 (1) - ^
00:36:683 (3) - ^
00:49:389 (3) - ^
00:51:507 (1) - Add whistle to the slider end.
00:52:919 (3) - ^
01:04:919 (2) - ^
01:07:389 (2) - ^

Hard:

00:09:154 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make this a star pattern.
00:07:213 (1,2) - Whistle at the slider end.
00:08:625 (3) - Whistle.
01:20:940 (1) - This spinner, unlike in the other diffs starts too early. The original placement was better.

wkyik's Insane:

Nothing to see here.

I hope this mod helps you, just re-check the map and place the whistles where they should go~
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
First one, Sorry i become so busy irl so i give a quick check mod here
Hi ~ From



  • General
    Hitsound whistle in this song should be used every 1st and 3rd whitetick


  • Easy
    00:06:331 (1,2) - you need to add more hitsound here to make it not boring. example whistle in every long whitetick. except 00:04:919 (4) - you need whistle to emphasize the piano
    00:07:742 (2,4) - overlapping, move it a little to fix it. pls
    00:19:036 (2) - too curved until flow is broken here. make it similar like http://puu.sh/5XWYO.jpg
    00:23:272 (1) - for this i feel too plain when playing with straight slider only, try http://puu.sh/5XX58.jpg
    00:29:978 (2,3) - plain flow too, move (2) to 264,360 and 00:31:389 (3) - 72,308 instead
    00:33:154 (1) - too curved Q_Q , http://puu.sh/5XXff.jpg . also no need NC for this slider
    00:34:566 (1,3) - aw overlapping. 00:34:566 (1) - move to 212,140 and tail 204,204
    00:38:801 (4,5,6) - click all and move to 256,132 for better visual and flow. and then 00:39:507 (6) - rotate-15 degree, put at 256,232 lol
    00:47:978 (5,1) - should be swap NC and then 00:51:507 (2) - NC for consistency
    01:00:683 (2) - aw the flow is really bad, from design too. try this http://puu.sh/5XXAv.jpg instead
    01:03:860 (1,2,3,4) - :< try http://puu.sh/5XXEu.jpg for better flow maybe
    01:08:448 (7,1) - swap NC because loud piano sound on (7)
    01:06:683 (5,6,7) - bad flow :< , try http://puu.sh/5XXJG.jpg instead
    01:11:272 (3) - bad overlapping and 2 repeats on 1 slider is really bad for me. try to change like http://puu.sh/5XXLX.jpg
    01:15:507 (1) - remove NC, no need to NC here

Will point unrankable only then because i become so busy


  • Normal
    CS-1 D:
    No SV changing in Normal diff. remove the 0,50x SV then
    i did a much flow suggestion from Easy. I hope you can remap it based as i told to you


  • Hard
    00:59:978 (4) - finish on head


  • Insane
    default clap is really weird for relax song. try http://puu.sh/5XXV7.wav instead?
    Nice diff, nothing to say. i tested it and i enjoyed ~

Well, this is your first map. No Suprised if you need to remap especially flow and placement in this map. Rhythm is acceptable here
Yeah and Sorry again i can't mod all diffs here
Around February i will have free time after exams so you can call me to mod this map again when February coming ~ Don't forget to remap the flow and placement >3<

Good Luck nyaan
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
Mod From my queue

  • [General]
  1. Hello.

    [Easy]
  2. 00:17:625 (1,2) - 个人建议包一下 或者把2的滑条弧度搞小一点 现在这样看起来不怎么好
  3. 00:36:683 (3,4) - 挨到了
  4. 01:11:272 (3) - 减少一个折返吧 然后add a circle

    [Normal]
  5. 00:03:507 (2,3) - 弧度太大啦 搞小一点 然后后面的4正好可以跟3的尾巴做blanket
  6. 00:06:331 (1,2) - 建议都减少一个折返然后add a circle
  7. 00:09:154 (3,4,5) - 正三角比较美
  8. 00:48:331 (2,4) - 这里还是别跟vocal 延长1/4
  9. 01:14:095 add a note?不然感觉节奏有点怪

    [Hard]
  10. 00:04:389 (5,6) - 没搞好 你看6的尾巴那里明显空出一大块
  11. 00:21:683 (5) - 变速NC
  12. 00:27:507 (6) - ^
  13. 00:34:566 (1,3) - 没包好 而且梗不怎么好
  14. 00:40:919 (1,3) - 挨到惹
  15. 00:59:978 (4,3,3) - kiai反而用慢速了 跟音乐不合啊 这里估计大部分人一开始打都会认为是快slider
  16. 不必要的遮挡太多啦

    [Insane]
  17. 老婆啊
  18. 00:13:919 (5) - 换成1/4滑条然后00:14:448这里也加个单点？
  19. 01:16:919 (3) - w > fin
That's all
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