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Kagaya Rei - One Night(Instrumental Version)

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TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年12月24日 at 13:04:57

Artist: Kagaya Rei
Title: One Night(Instrumental Version)
Source: Night on the Galactic Railroad
Tags: Kawaiwkyik
BPM: 85
Filesize: 2761kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.21 stars, 66 notes)
  2. Hard (4.59 stars, 165 notes)
  3. Normal (3.34 stars, 108 notes)
  4. wkyik's Insane (4.65 stars, 191 notes)
Download: Kagaya Rei - One Night(Instrumental Version)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my first map for my favourite song :D
It sounds so good in Nightcore mod!
Easy by me
Normal by me
Hard by me
wkyik's Insane by Kawaiwkyik
Last edited by TatsumiAlicekawa , edited 17 times in total.
Akabato
207 posts
Joined October 2013
Akabato
贴吧的百里衍秀
只能给一些大概建议了，不好意思

1.关于timing，BPM是85整？offset我没细测。如果改timing别忘了resnap notes,另外，曲子临结尾处BPM是变化了的，考虑是不是找人帮忙测一下。不过用转盘糊弄过去应该也是可以的
2.关于map信息，tag可以适当添加，如出处作品等
3.combo颜色7个也略多啊，一般三四个为宜
4.下note还是不要跟那条明着的钢琴旋律吧，跟背景节奏会比较贴合，打着也会顺手许多，说白了就是跟红白线
5.请一定要开着distance snap，note间距不应是随性变化的，而是与其音乐上的间隔成正比对应关系
6.new combo的设定也比较乱，跟着一小段一小段节奏来吧，一般应以长白线处note为起始，数字不超过10为宜
7.滑条速度好像略慢了点
8.关于排列，进edit多看看别人的rank图，细细体会一下。折返滑条头在哪个方向才顺手？弯滑条怎么拉才好看？散note要怎么摆？相信多看多想，会有不一样的感受。前提是一定注意开着DS
9.音效基本等于没下，至少在重音处都加个slap啥的。有地方加了有地方没加，不知为何

大概如此了。加油 :oops:
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Akabato wrote:

贴吧的百里衍秀
只能给一些大概建议了，不好意思

1.关于timing，BPM是85整？offset我没细测。如果改timing别忘了resnap notes,另外，曲子临结尾处BPM是变化了的，考虑是不是找人帮忙测一下。不过用转盘糊弄过去应该也是可以的
2.关于map信息，tag可以适当添加，如出处作品等
3.combo颜色7个也略多啊，一般三四个为宜
4.下note还是不要跟那条明着的钢琴旋律吧，跟背景节奏会比较贴合，打着也会顺手许多，说白了就是跟红白线
5.请一定要开着distance snap，note间距不应是随性变化的，而是与其音乐上的间隔成正比对应关系
6.new combo的设定也比较乱，跟着一小段一小段节奏来吧，一般应以长白线处note为起始，数字不超过10为宜
7.滑条速度好像略慢了点
8.关于排列，进edit多看看别人的rank图，细细体会一下。折返滑条头在哪个方向才顺手？弯滑条怎么拉才好看？散note要怎么摆？相信多看多想，会有不一样的感受。前提是一定注意开着DS
9.音效基本等于没下，至少在重音处都加个slap啥的。有地方加了有地方没加，不知为何

大概如此了。加油 :oops:
非常感谢 :D bpm改成85整了，调整了一下物件放置和音效，因为曲子太安静了所以不太敢加太多clap
Cartographer
94 posts
Joined November 2012
Cartographer
Hey from #modreq

Just a small mod/tips since it's your first map.
(I suck at modding, but here it goes)

- Easy -

Easy looks cool, just place the notes using the distance snap. and make them "Flow" with the music.

- Hard -

You seem to over map some parts, remember to follow the song/rhythm. If there's nothing to put a note or beat to. then leave it or find another creative way to over come it.

For example.



00:04:911 - There's a beat here, yet no note? and then just after you have a a slider that repeats at 00:05:087 (12)

Why don't you follow the same pattern you had before at 00:02:970 (7,8)



00:11:793 (2) - I'd remove this, I don't feel it. It just doesn't fit with anything

00:15:852 (12) - ^ Same as above

00:19:028 (5) - Why don't you follow the same pattern you had before at 00:02:970 (7,8) - Or make something cool and creative that fits.

00:22:028 (6) - Feel over mapped. keep things simple. Remember! It's a simple song

00:23:264 (3) - Why don't you follow the same pattern you had before at 00:02:970 (7,8)

00:24:675 (5) - ^ Same as above

00:24:675 (5) - ^

00:47:970 (6) - ^

00:51:499 (4) - ^

00:55:205 (9,2) - CTRL + G these notes, feels cooler :P (You don't have to, but I think it would make be a nice change)

00:57:146 (5) - ^

01:16:205 - Nothing is here D:

01:17:028 - ^

Remember the keep things fun and simple! This is a very slow, calm song. Make the map fit the song, not the other way around. :P

Anyway! Not bad for a first map. my first map sucked so hard haha.
Just keep trying on different songs and you'll get it eventually!
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Cartographer wrote:

Hey from #modreq

Just a small mod/tips since it's your first map.
(I suck at modding, but here it goes)

- Easy -

Easy looks cool, just place the notes using the distance snap. and make them "Flow" with the music.

- Hard -

You seem to over map some parts, remember to follow the song/rhythm. If there's nothing to put a note or beat to. then leave it or find another creative way to over come it.

For example.



00:04:911 - There's a beat here, yet no note? and then just after you have a a slider that repeats at 00:05:087 (12)

Why don't you follow the same pattern you had before at 00:02:970 (7,8)



00:11:793 (2) - I'd remove this, I don't feel it. It just doesn't fit with anything

00:15:852 (12) - ^ Same as above

00:19:028 (5) - Why don't you follow the same pattern you had before at 00:02:970 (7,8) - Or make something cool and creative that fits.

00:22:028 (6) - Feel over mapped. keep things simple. Remember! It's a simple song

00:23:264 (3) - Why don't you follow the same pattern you had before at 00:02:970 (7,8)

00:24:675 (5) - ^ Same as above

00:24:675 (5) - ^

00:47:970 (6) - ^

00:51:499 (4) - ^

00:55:205 (9,2) - CTRL + G these notes, feels cooler :P (You don't have to, but I think it would make be a nice change)

00:57:146 (5) - ^

01:16:205 - Nothing is here D:

01:17:028 - ^

Remember the keep things fun and simple! This is a very slow, calm song. Make the map fit the song, not the other way around. :P

Anyway! Not bad for a first map. my first map sucked so hard haha.
Just keep trying on different songs and you'll get it eventually!
Thanks for your advice.It`s very nice! :)
Kuron-kun
Kuron-kun
Random Mod :D

General

• Unmark Letterbox during breaks due there is no SB

• Some sliders are really weird like this and you don't have to spam points

• Kiai starts at 00:59:970 and ends at 01:16:911


Easy

00:04:911 (4) - Move to x372 y204

00:07:734 (6) - Move to x396 y224

00:09:146 (7,8,9) - 7 to x308 y192 ; 8 to x212 y136 ; 9 to x248 y32

00:11:970 (1) - You can do this, it's more beautiful

00:19:028 (7) - Move to x224 y136

00:21:499 (9) - You can't do this, delete it, and add a note here 00:21:852 at x344 y112

00:28:558 (6,1,1) - Delete all those sliders, and you can do this, add a slider like this at 00:28:205 add a note at 00:29:617 x312 y200, add another slider like the other one at 00:30:323 and a note at 00:31:734 x184 y240

00:34:911 (3,4) - You can't do this again you know what to do

00:36:499 (1,2) - ^

00:36:499 (1,2) - Don't put notes in the blue snap!

00:45:146 (1,2) - You can't do this again you know what to do

01:03:852 (4) - ^

01:05:264 (7) - ^

01:06:675 (1) - ^

01:08:087 (2,3,4) - ^

Hard

• Stack the notes correctly!

00:02:970 (7) - New Combo

00:08:087 (7) - ^

00:14:793 (1) - ^

00:16:028 (5) - This is hard to read, so move to x432 y272

00:36:852 (5) - Ctrl G

I think it's all, good luck~
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Kuron-Kun wrote:

Random Mod :D

General

• Unmark Letterbox during breaks due there is no SB

• Some sliders are really weird like this and you don't have to spam points

• Kiai starts at 00:59:970 and ends at 01:16:911


Easy

00:04:911 (4) - Move to x372 y204

00:07:734 (6) - Move to x396 y224

00:09:146 (7,8,9) - 7 to x308 y192 ; 8 to x212 y136 ; 9 to x248 y32

00:11:970 (1) - You can do this, it's more beautiful

00:19:028 (7) - Move to x224 y136

00:21:499 (9) - You can't do this, delete it, and add a note here 00:21:852 at x344 y112

00:28:558 (6,1,1) - Delete all those sliders, and you can do this, add a slider like this at 00:28:205 add a note at 00:29:617 x312 y200, add another slider like the other one at 00:30:323 and a note at 00:31:734 x184 y240

00:34:911 (3,4) - You can't do this again you know what to do

00:36:499 (1,2) - ^

00:36:499 (1,2) - Don't put notes in the blue snap!

00:45:146 (1,2) - You can't do this again you know what to do

01:03:852 (4) - ^

01:05:264 (7) - ^

01:06:675 (1) - ^

01:08:087 (2,3,4) - ^

Hard

• Stack the notes correctly!

00:02:970 (7) - New Combo

00:08:087 (7) - ^

00:14:793 (1) - ^

00:16:028 (5) - This is hard to read, so move to x432 y272

00:36:852 (5) - Ctrl G

I think it's all, good luck~
Thank you for your mod! :)
Vita-VVA
58 posts
Joined March 2013
Vita-VVA
[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[timing check]


[general]
多用绿线改变滑条速度啦！这么美的一首歌！！
我记得是要三个难度才能rank！！！

[hard]
00:05:087 (6) - 向前挪动1/4拍
00:08:087 (1) - 只有两个音啦3个note不合适
00:14:264 (5,2) - play的时候会有视觉上的重叠感觉出现
00:16:558 (1) - 提前到00:16:205 -
00:22:028 (5) - 提前到00:21:852 -
00:27:675 (12) - ^00:27:499 -
00:49:205 (9) - distance 错误
00:49:028 (8) - new combo
00:49:381 (10) - 不能完美的体现效果 削减slider到00:49:734 - 加一个单note
00:52:911 (1) - 和00:51:499 (4,5) - 一致最好
01:05:970 (6) - 缩短到01:06:323 - stop
01:11:087 (2,3,4) - distance 错误（故意的？）
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Vita-VVA wrote:

[Tips]
mod with light blue just is a suggestion or silly mod which made me uncomfortable personally
mod with dark blue is what I strongly suggest to do
mod with red is advise that I think should be changed
meanwhile, I was not a pro modder, so all of above is basing on myself :) Ignore them if you think they are helpless :)

[timing check]


[general]
多用绿线改变滑条速度啦！这么美的一首歌！！- 嗯我试试看
我记得是要三个难度才能rank！！！
两个就可以哟~第一次作图姑且偷下懒
[hard]
00:05:087 (6) - 向前挪动1/4拍 已改
00:08:087 (1) - 只有两个音啦3个note不合适 已改
00:14:264 (5,2) - play的时候会有视觉上的重叠感觉出现 不知道，是颜色的问题？
00:16:558 (1) - 提前到00:16:205 - 已改
00:22:028 (5) - 提前到00:21:852 - 已改
00:27:675 (12) - ^00:27:499 - 已改
00:49:205 (9) - distance 错误 已改
00:49:028 (8) - new combo 已改
00:49:381 (10) - 不能完美的体现效果 削减slider到00:49:734 - 加一个单note 已改
00:52:911 (1) - 和00:51:499 (4,5) - 一致最好 已改
01:05:970 (6) - 缩短到01:06:323 - stop 已改
01:11:087 (2,3,4) - distance 错误（故意的？）已改

感谢mod！ :)
captin1
osu! Alumni
2,595 posts
Joined February 2011
captin1
hi

snapped your green lines as well with this, so this is good to just paste into your .osu file

SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
684,705.882352941176,4,2,1,15,1,0
772,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
59978,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
76919,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,0
78633,1153.84615384615,4,2,1,15,1,0

also just a note, an easy -> hard set is generally frowned upon, you would do well in making or finding someone for a normal to balance out the set

good luck!
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

captin1 wrote:

hi

snapped your green lines as well with this, so this is good to just paste into your .osu file

SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
684,705.882352941176,4,2,1,15,1,0
772,-100,4,2,1,15,0,0
59978,-100,4,2,1,15,0,1
76919,857.142857142857,4,2,1,15,1,0
78633,1153.84615384615,4,2,1,15,1,0

also just a note, an easy -> hard set is generally frowned upon, you would do well in making or finding someone for a normal to balance out the set

good luck!
Thanks a lot! :)
Losertic
461 posts
Joined May 2012
Losertic
Hello!

From Modding Queue. (thanks M4M)

Modding

General

  1. I think you should be add normal diff.

Easy

  1. 00:06:331 (1,2) - i think it's too hard by beginner player. and check distance. (maybe many mapper likes same distance to easy diff) how about this rhythm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134737
  2. 00:09:154 (3,4,5) - it's too hard. change 1.0x distance ;_;.
  3. 00:11:978 (1) - change 1.0x distance?
  4. 00:11:978 (1) - and change this? (slider shape) more roundly! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134751
    this diff, too many straight slider. if you change the roundly slider, maybe change better diff XD
  5. 00:19:036 (2) - check distance. (change 1.0x distance) it's too hard.
  6. 00:20:448 (3) - same problem.
  7. 00:21:860 (4) - same problem.
  8. 00:23:272 (1) - change 1.0x distance?
  9. 00:28:213 (6) - NC?
  10. 00:28:213 (6) - change 1.0x distance.
  11. 00:29:625 (7,8,9) - it's too hard. big jump :o
  12. 00:33:154 (1) - change 1.0x distance.
  13. 00:34:566 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - change 1.0x distance.
  14. 00:34:566 (2) - change this rhythm..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134765
  15. 00:43:742 (3,4) - change this rhythm?
    ─ 1. 00:43:742 ~ 00:44:095 - add slider. and add one reverse.
    ─ 2. 00:43:742 - add note. 00:44:095 ~ 00:44:448 - add slider.
  16. 00:45:154 (1,2,3) - check distance. too far away
  17. 00:47:978 (5) - wait, change this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134773
  18. 00:55:742 (1) - remove spinner, and add new rhythm? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/113477
  19. 01:03:860 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1,2) - plz change 1.0x distance o.o
  20. 01:07:742 (1,1,1) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134786 it's only rhythm.
  21. 01:11:272 (1) - change rhythm?
  22. 01:21:517 (1) - move spinner start at 01:20:940 end at 01:26:998 and remove finish sound?

    ─ actually, this diff change slider shape, same distance. try more easy difficult. maybe you can do this.

Hard

  1. ummm. nice rhythm. but it's too many stack note. ah, it's okay. but.. ex) 00:35:095 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134796 it's not pretty. not good stack. change 00:35:095 (2) = 00:35:272 (3) - same axis.
  2. 00:45:154 (1,2) - change this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134795
  3. 00:01:566 (4) - change perfect stack to 00:00:331 (1)
  4. 00:03:860 (3,4) -change perfect stack
  5. 00:17:272 (2) - i can't see this note. move another axis?

    too many this shape(not perfect stack) (maybe it's not good shape) ex) 00:25:566 (3,5) // can you change this?

    (try move slider, and change slider shape.)

I'm not good English skill.. ahh. sorry.

Good Luck!! ;)
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

From Modding Queue. (thanks M4M)

Modding

General

  1. I think you should be add normal diff.
-OK I am trying.

Easy

  1. 00:06:331 (1,2) - i think it's too hard by beginner player. and check distance. (maybe many mapper likes same distance to easy diff) how about this rhythm? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134737 - Fixed.
  2. 00:09:154 (3,4,5) - it's too hard. change 1.0x distance ;_;. - I don't think it's too hard but Fixed.
  3. 00:11:978 (1) - change 1.0x distance? - Fixed.
  4. 00:11:978 (1) - and change this? (slider shape) more roundly! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134751 - Fixed.
    this diff, too many straight slider. if you change the roundly slider, maybe change better diff XD
  5. 00:19:036 (2) - check distance. (change 1.0x distance) it's too hard. - Fixed.
  6. 00:20:448 (3) - same problem. - Fixed.
  7. 00:21:860 (4) - same problem. - Fixed.
  8. 00:23:272 (1) - change 1.0x distance? - Fixed.
  9. 00:28:213 (6) - NC? - Fixed.
  10. 00:28:213 (6) - change 1.0x distance. - Fixed.
  11. 00:29:625 (7,8,9) - it's too hard. big jump :o - Fixed.
  12. 00:33:154 (1) - change 1.0x distance. - Fixed.
  13. 00:34:566 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - change 1.0x distance. - Fixed.
  14. 00:34:566 (2) - change this rhythm..? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134765 - Fixed.
  15. 00:43:742 (3,4) - change this rhythm?
    ─ 1. 00:43:742 ~ 00:44:095 - add slider. and add one reverse.
    ─ 2. 00:43:742 - add note. 00:44:095 ~ 00:44:448 - add slider. - I choose it.
  16. 00:45:154 (1,2,3) - check distance. too far away - Fixed.
  17. 00:47:978 (5) - wait, change this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134773 - Fixed.
  18. 00:55:742 (1) - remove spinner, and add new rhythm? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/113477 - Still spinner.
  19. 01:03:860 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,1,2) - plz change 1.0x distance o.o - Fixed.
  20. 01:07:742 (1,1,1) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134786 it's only rhythm.- Fixed.
  21. 01:11:272 (1) - change rhythm? - Fixed.
  22. 01:21:517 (1) - move spinner start at 01:20:940 end at 01:26:998 and remove finish sound? - Fixed.

    ─ actually, this diff change slider shape, same distance. try more easy difficult. maybe you can do this.

Hard

  1. ummm. nice rhythm. but it's too many stack note. ah, it's okay. but.. ex) 00:35:095 (2,3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134796 it's not pretty. not good stack. change 00:35:095 (2) = 00:35:272 (3) - same axis. - Fixed.
  2. 00:45:154 (1,2) - change this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1134795 - Maintain the current status.
  3. 00:01:566 (4) - change perfect stack to 00:00:331 (1) - Fixed.
  4. 00:03:860 (3,4) -change perfect stack- Fixed.
  5. 00:17:272 (2) - i can't see this note. move another axis?- Fixed.

    too many this shape(not perfect stack) (maybe it's not good shape) ex) 00:25:566 (3,5) // can you change this?- Fixed.

    (try move slider, and change slider shape.)

I'm not good English skill.. ahh. sorry.

Good Luck!! ;)
Thanks for your mod! :)
Ultima Fox
621 posts
Joined August 2013
Ultima Fox
Hi :)
Im from the modding queue and im excited to mod your map :D

[Easy]

00:26:095 (3,4) - Make this into a slider?
00:28:213 (6) - New Combo
00:47:978 (5) - Take off the last repeat and replace with a note, i don't think you should have that long of a repeat slider on an easy map
01:11:272 (1) - thats quite a long repeat slider

[Hard]

00:05:978 (1,2,3) - this might catch people off guard but knowing that it goes to the song it should be fine
00:56:801 (6) - New Combo
01:08:095 (1,1,1) - Again some weird jumps
01:09:683 (3) - add a note after to go with the song
01:12:507 (6) - New Combo
01:18:204 (6) - ^

Love the map so far, Lets get this Ranked!
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

GyroX20 wrote:

Hi :)
Im from the modding queue and im excited to mod your map :D

[Easy]

00:26:095 (3,4) - Make this into a slider? - OK~
00:28:213 (6) - New Combo -OK
00:47:978 (5) - Take off the last repeat and replace with a note, i don't think you should have that long of a repeat slider on an easy map -I replaced with two slider.
01:11:272 (1) - thats quite a long repeat slider -OK

[Hard]

00:05:978 (1,2,3) - this might catch people off guard but knowing that it goes to the song it should be fine -shortened the distance of the note.
00:56:801 (6) - New Combo -OK
01:08:095 (1,1,1) - Again some weird jumps -OK I try to make it looks comfortable. :(
01:09:683 (3) - add a note after to go with the song -OK
01:12:507 (6) - New Combo -OK
01:18:204 (6) - ^ -OK

Love the map so far, Lets get this Ranked!
Thanks a lot for your mod. :D
Swayzo_old
78 posts
Joined April 2013
Swayzo_old
Difficulty:Easy and Normal
Fun: 6.5/10
Really slow, not quite fun. (Even though it's easy/normal, you have to make it somewhat challenging for the players of that skill set.)
Design: 7/10
- Maybe change the sliders that are the size of 1/4th of a beat. If you make quick
- Make it a bit harder.
Fundamentals: 9/10
Everything's alright. Maybe if you can increase the volume of the hit sounds, that'd be great.

Difficulty: Hard
Fun: 8/10
Pretty good!
Design: 8/10
- Like the design.
- Maybe add less spacing/gaps in between notes so you have to be constantly pressing instead of waiting in some parts to make it more fun and challenging.
- The squiggly slider @ 00:04:919 doesn't look nice. Maybe change it to a normal curve. Maybe make it look something like this:

Fundamentals: 9/10
What's with the extremely short Kiai time @ 00:05:978 and 00:34:566? There is no need for that.

Overall:
- Change the volume for the notes
- Fix up your Easy and Normal difficulties so that it's more fun and challenging.
- The hard mode difficulty is pretty good.
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
From queue
[Easy]
00:06:331 (5) - NC
00:25:389 (2,3,4) - 其實可以不用刻意去調小聲
00:42:331 (2) - ????
00:49:389 (6) - x280 y196

[Normal]
00:07:742 (2) - 這樣overlap掉不好看
00:49:742 (3) - x476 y136
00:50:095 (4) - x603 y150
00:55:742 (2,3) - 轉一轉角度?(ctrl+r)
01:16:919 - 調整下間距
01:20:940 (1) - 在01:25:123 - 完(其他難度一樣)

[Hard]
00:05:978 - 沒必要KIAI
00:06:154 (2,3) - ctrl+g
00:09:154 (3) - 在這裡完 , 然後在00:10:566 - 加NOTE
00:59:978 (2) - 建議在01:00:683 - 完
01:01:389 (5) - 同上 , 在01:02:095 -
01:02:801 (8) - 同上
01:05:625 - 漏了個音
01:10:566 (1,2,3) - flow不好


另外請問我能做一個GD嗎(Insane) :3?
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Swayzo wrote:

Difficulty:Easy and Normal
Fun: 6.5/10
Really slow, not quite fun. (Even though it's easy/normal, you have to make it somewhat challenging for the players of that skill set.)
Design: 7/10
- Maybe change the sliders that are the size of 1/4th of a beat. If you make quick
- Make it a bit harder.
Fundamentals: 9/10
Everything's alright. Maybe if you can increase the volume of the hit sounds, that'd be great.

Difficulty: Hard
Fun: 8/10
Pretty good!
Design: 8/10
- Like the design.
- Maybe add less spacing/gaps in between notes so you have to be constantly pressing instead of waiting in some parts to make it more fun and challenging.
- The squiggly slider @ 00:04:919 doesn't look nice. Maybe change it to a normal curve. Maybe make it look something like this:
- Fixed
Fundamentals: 9/10
What's with the extremely short Kiai time @ 00:05:978 and 00:34:566? There is no need for that. -Fixed the first one.

Overall:
- Change the volume for the notes
- Fix up your Easy and Normal difficulties so that it's more fun and challenging.
- The hard mode difficulty is pretty good.
Changed the volume and made the Easy/Normal harder.
Thanks for your help! :D
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

From queue
[Easy]
00:06:331 (5) - NC -Fixed
00:25:389 (2,3,4) - 其實可以不用刻意去調小聲 -我也覺得...因為之前設定音效比音樂大聲所以覺得吵了
00:42:331 (2) - ???? - :cry: 改了下節奏
00:49:389 (6) - x280 y196 -Fixed.

[Normal]
00:07:742 (2) - 這樣overlap掉不好看 -Sorry,I keep.
00:49:742 (3) - x476 y136 -Fixed.
00:50:095 (4) - x603 y150 -Fixed.
00:55:742 (2,3) - 轉一轉角度?(ctrl+r) -Fixed.
01:16:919 - 調整下間距 -Fixed.
01:20:940 (1) - 在01:25:123 - 完(其他難度一樣) -keep,好像01:25:123上沒有線..

[Hard]
00:05:978 - 沒必要KIAI -Fixed.
00:06:154 (2,3) - ctrl+g -Fixed.
00:09:154 (3) - 在這裡完 , 然後在00:10:566 - 加NOTE -Fixed.
00:59:978 (2) - 建議在01:00:683 - 完-Fixed.
01:01:389 (5) - 同上 , 在01:02:095 - -Fixed.
01:02:801 (8) - 同上-Fixed.
01:05:625 - 漏了個音 -有嗎?
01:10:566 (1,2,3) - flow不好-Fixed.


另外請問我能做一個GD嗎(Insane) :3?
當然可以 ;)
感謝mod!
-Teina-
529 posts
Joined October 2013
-Teina-
[Hard]
open
00:08:272 (2) - 可以減少1/4 並在00:08:978 - 加個圈 (不重要)
我不知道如何去mod hard的歌...
但感覺上不錯 很舒服~
加油

(no kd)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
Done~! 完成了
好像比你的易 :3

點開
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TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

Done~! 完成了
好像比你的易 :3

點開
osu file format v12

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Title:One Night(Instrumental Version)
TitleUnicode:One Night(Instrumental Version)
Artist:Kagaya Rei
ArtistUnicode:加贺谷玲
Creator:TatsumiAlicekawa
Version:wkyik
Source:Night on the Galactic Railroad
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perfect good!~難度名就叫wkyik嗎?
Nya Nya Neko
440 posts
Joined February 2013
Nya Nya Neko
Hard diff
00:12:860 (3) - maybe place this 1/4 snap forward
00:14:272 (1) - ^
00:17:625 (3) - make this one 1/4 snap longer (sounds and looks better i think)
00:21:507 (4) - replace this with a cirrcle and place this 00:21:860 (5) - 1/4 snap backwards. extend the slider 1/4 snap
00:21:683 place a timing point with a bit lower slider velocity ( about 0.8)
00:34:566 I would'nt place a short kiai timehere
00:38:801 (2,3) - it sounds like it doesn't fit to the music
Lust
osu! Alumni
2,667 posts
Joined January 2013
Lust
From my modding queue

quick mod
nice soft song~

[Easy]
  1. 00:06:331 (1,2) - This would be nice if it was blanketed fully
    readjust spacing afterwards
  2. 00:17:625 (1,2) - I do not really like the look of this pattern, awkward flow and looks eh weird to say the least. Try this instead or something similar
  3. 00:25:389 (2) - 284:47
  4. 00:25:389 (2,3) - try blanket
  5. 00:26:095 (3,4) - why have (4) there? again some weird flow and location beginners are not going to be accustomed to. try moving it to 364:176
  6. 00:28:213 (1) - doesnt really follow the rhythm nicely, maybe try circles here?
  7. 00:32:448 - a note here perhaps, feels empty without one
  8. 00:36:683 (2,4) - would be nice if these sliders were symmetrical
  9. 00:39:507 (6,1) - bit of a nazi but the blanket is slightly off
  10. 00:52:919 (3,4) - blanket is off
  11. 01:11:272 (3) - newer players are not going to expect the slider turning more than once

good luck!
[ Raphael ]
[ Raphael ]
Hi~! from my queue!

[Easy]
  • It feels like Normal diff. CS → 3, HP → 2, AR → 3, OD → 2
    00:00:684 (1,2,3) - set to parallel
    00:14:801 (3,4) - blanket
    00:35:978 - add circle
    00:55:036 - ^
    00:59:272 (1) - add finish on end

    [Normal]
    • AR → 5
      00:00:684 (1,2) - distance
      00:06:331 (1,2) - remove that it overlaps lightly. maybe it is look like better~ :3
      00:13:389 (1) - opposite slider
      00:32:448 (1,2) - jump?? it is hard for beginners..
      00:55:742 (2,3) - remove that it overlaps lightly.
      01:16:919 (1) - move to (204,137) for blanket with 01:15:154 (1)

      [Hard]
      • 00:17:625 (3) - end on 00:18:331 for follow song
        00:21:507 (4,5) - remove that it overlaps lightly.
        00:29:625 - add circle. maybe it is funny :3
        00:31:036 - ^
        00:40:213 - add circle for follow song
        01:06:860 (3) - end on 01:07:389 or add circle on 01:07:389 for follow song
        01:07:742 (1,1,1,1) - NC spam D:
        01:14:095 (5,1) - remove that it overlaps lightly.

        [wkyik]
        • 00:01:742 (3) - straight slider
          00:04:389 (4,5) - overlap. it is look so strange.
          01:07:389 (4,7) - overlap

          Nice song~ :3
          Good luck!
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

not94 wrote:

Hard diff
00:12:860 (3) - maybe place this 1/4 snap forward But I think now is better
00:14:272 (1) - ^
00:17:625 (3) - make this one 1/4 snap longer (sounds and looks better i think) OK~
00:21:507 (4) - replace this with a cirrcle and place this 00:21:860 (5) - 1/4 snap backwards. extend the slider 1/4 snap Fixed
00:21:683 place a timing point with a bit lower slider velocity ( about 0.8) Fixed
00:34:566 I would'nt place a short kiai timehere Fixed
00:38:801 (2,3) - it sounds like it doesn't fit to the music Fixed
Thanks for mod! :)
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Lust wrote:

From my modding queue

quick mod
nice soft song~

[Easy]
  1. 00:06:331 (1,2) - This would be nice if it was blanketed fully Fixed
    readjust spacing afterwards
  2. 00:17:625 (1,2) - I do not really like the look of this pattern, awkward flow and looks eh weird to say the least. Try this instead or something similar Fixed
  3. 00:25:389 (2) - 284:47 Fixed
  4. 00:25:389 (2,3) - try blanket Fixed
  5. 00:26:095 (3,4) - why have (4) there? again some weird flow and location beginners are not going to be accustomed to. try moving it to 364:176 Fixed
  6. 00:28:213 (1) - doesnt really follow the rhythm nicely, maybe try circles here? Fixed
  7. 00:32:448 - a note here perhaps, feels empty without one Fixed
  8. 00:36:683 (2,4) - would be nice if these sliders were symmetrical Fixed
  9. 00:39:507 (6,1) - bit of a nazi but the blanket is slightly off Fixed
  10. 00:52:919 (3,4) - blanket is off Fixed
  11. 01:11:272 (3) - newer players are not going to expect the slider turning more than once Uh...Sorry,I keep this.

good luck!
Thanks for your mod!
Atrue
osu! Alumni
1,017 posts
Joined July 2012
Atrue
Hello~
From my queue. Sorry for late mod



[Notion]
This color means something you can either choose to fix or not to fix cause I prefer to do this.
This color means some suggestions.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
这曲子我感觉适合慢sv 一点个人想法而已~
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵ 加油！
[Easy]
General
ez作的还可以，不过大概节奏需要一定的简化
Beats
00:28:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽说没错但是1/2不太适合在ez里面多用（后同）
Placement
00:00:684 (1) - 啊。。我是强迫症可以把中间的锚点删了么。。（tip向）
00:25:389 (2,3) - blanket包好
01:04:566 (2,3,4) - 注意间距，其实我感觉这个地方明显难了些，如果不是bpm低的话应该是不能这么用的
还有几个地方用的1.2间距尽量都用回1.0间距。。ez如何放跳呢。。
[Normal]
General
1/2总体感觉滥用啊。。节奏上还是有很多地方可以吐槽的。。
Beats
00:00:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 全1/2?前边本身节奏比较疏松为何反而全1、2塞满呢？本来不要空下么。。
00:06:331 (1,2) - 尽量减少在normal难度出现过多的折返滑条
00:32:448 (1) - 放spinner吧
00:47:978 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这些1/2note感觉跟曲子实在是关联性不大。。
01:03:154 (6) - 还是说没有音的地方。。
Placement
00:29:978 (1,1,1) - flow确实比较锋利
00:39:507 (7,8) - blanket包好
[Hard]
General
我觉得比柚子的难度难。。
还是有些东西需要注意的。
Beats
00:07:742 (6) - 可以做成一个长音
00:07:213 (5,6,2) - 对比这两个地方的节奏型和背景音乐，这里2应该是短1/4来覆盖钢琴的，而且在3前边那根蓝线上有一个音没有盖到
00:09:154 (3) - 这里我感觉在两个强音上放note，距离挨得近些就好，放折返像是在带过
00:11:978 (2) - 当加入鼓的时候节奏可以稍微加密一点，比如这个滑条是不是考虑拆下节奏，里面有很多节奏盖过去了
后边这一小段感觉跟的音轨比较乱，长滑条似乎是在跟的鼓声，不过跟完了立即就是一声钢琴，这里大概还可以理解，不过00:16:036 (7,1) - 这里我感觉就是一个很明显的切换了，打起来不会费劲但是节奏会感觉不舒服。。
00:17:272 (2,3) - 跟钢琴的话中间还是有些音没有压上
00:35:272 (3) - 滑条头在跟哪个音呢。。如果是那声类似鼓的声音的话我不是很推荐，还是跟音轨的问题，音轨切换在很多地方都不是很自然，或者不是太适合切换的地方切换了
00:43:036 (4) - 里面的节奏吞掉太多，应该展开
00:47:801 (6) - note多余
00:54:860 (1,2,3,4) - 这节奏自创的似乎不是很适合曲子
00:56:801 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 此处我拿不准，按照我的想法的话是不会使用这样的加节奏来突出音乐发展的，或者改跟背景音会有帮助
00:59:625 (1) - 也换成两个note吧，后边都是用的两个note
01:05:448 (5) - 01:06:860 (3) - 对比这两个音，我感觉应该做成类似节奏型
01:15:507 (3) - 如果要跟鼓的话建议把中间有一声也跟上
另外后边切了跟鼓声之后节奏密集程度加大了不少。。虽然也不是增加了太多。。

Placement
00:01:566 (4) - Nazi 没有叠好
往后紧接着就是又是没有叠好，建议关注右上角测距的小面板，看看叠的是不是完美的
00:05:978 (1,2,3) - 虽说是强音但是在不激烈的地方用了2.0间距还是很危险的
00:16:213 (1,2,3) - 注意flow问题
00:17:625 (3,4) - 不太适合stack
00:20:448 (1) - 还是注意下间距问题，跟前一个note距离大了0.05，不是大问题但是会影响整洁程度
00:23:272 (3) - 容我吐槽下锚点。。或许丧病但是学会下锚点的位置对掌控滑条有至关重要的作用（这条不是问题，是一个tip）
00:25:919 (4,5) - 已经构不成blanket了。。不过硬是想弄blanket的话我感觉这里包的还是有问题 另外这之间的2.45的间距确实大了
00:38:801 (2,4) - 美观的话应该统一这两个滑条弧度
00:52:919 (1,2) - blanket有问题
01:08:095 (2,3,4) - 还是建议间距小些，2.0我感觉大了，节奏型本身配合hitsound足以突出这个地方了，2.0反而影响间距判断
01:08:801 (1) - flow不顺畅
01:10:213 (4,1,3) - 这里两个滑条弄得更加对称或用相同的弧度会比较好，如此不整齐
[wkyik]
General
hi~柚子~摸到你的gd啦
最新说法怕是得改难度名
总体感觉不错，来挑挑刺
Beats
00:11:978 (1,2,3) - 考虑改成跟00:13:389 (4,5) - 一致的节奏型，中间多了个note是跑去跟鼓了，而这里是有一种对称节奏的
00:23:625 (2,3) - 跟上边那条感觉是一样的
00:26:625 (2) - 我感觉一个折返不足以强调这里的强音，可以做成滑条加note来强调那个音
00:30:331 (1,2,3) - 也做一个折返来形成节奏上的呼应如何？
00:52:566 (4) - 这滑条头上没有音，尾巴上有明显重音
SPOILER
看这里相似的节奏你下的就很切钢琴声，所以说这样：
SPOILER
进了kiai节奏下的没啥问题了
Placement
00:19:389 (5,6,7,8) - 一点建议
00:21:507 (4,5,6) - 这里不建议stack，尤其是在6和7之间有一种流动的感觉
00:44:448 (4) - 比较建议这个地方将距离拉近还原，这样的距离会让人误判节奏的
kiai感觉不错
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .
- TiRaFiouS -
128 posts
Joined November 2012
- TiRaFiouS -
from modding queue

[General]
01:16:919 - timing 好像錯了
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不知道對不對...先看看吧..

00:11:095 - 這之前的音量改成5

[EZ]
Slider tick rate 改做2

00:26:095 (3) - 未包好
00:36:683 (3,4,5,6,7) -
00:35:978 (2) - 不要貼著滑跳
00:43:742 (4,5) - 變return slider 結束點00:44:448 -
00:55:742 (1) - end at 00:58:566 -
01:08:095 (2) - Prev DS :1.21 + change to circle
01:09:154 (1) - Prev DS :1.20
01:10:566 (2) - Prev DS :1.20
01:14:095 (4) - 未包好
01:16:566 (2,3) - 01:20:940 (1) - timing problem

[NM]
00:06:331 (1,2) - 各減一個return
00:31:389 (1) - Ctrl H
00:32:448 (1) - end at 00:33:154 - 00:33:860 - add note 00:34:566 - add note
00:37:389 (4,5,6,7) - 建議這樣
00:47:978 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
00:55:036 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 如圖 / 滑條與circle 前後次序掉轉
01:02:801 (5,6) - 6直接取代5(把滑條拉過去)
01:08:095 (3) - 把return位拉向右下45度
01:16:919 (1,1,1) - timing problem

[HD]
flow不太好
而且跟我做圖一樣...很多overlap ((掩面>^<
00:14:625 (2,3,4,5) - 可以變成兩個滑條
00:16:213 (1,2,3,4) - 角度太窄
00:28:566 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 要不要參考一下233


00:35:095 (2,3) - 3取代2 end at 00:35:978 -
00:47:801 (6) - remove
00:49:213 (2) - 感覺也可以^
00:54:860 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - remap 這部分...節奏拿不準 00:57:860 (1,2,3,4,5) - 順便也remap這裡
00:59:978 (2) - 01:01:389 (5) - 01:05:978 (1) - 這些滑條...要改一下....((有點醜= ="|
01:08:095 (2,3,4) - 與1分開一點
01:15:331 (2) - remove
01:15:507 (3) - end at 01:15:860 -
01:16:566 (5,1,1) - timing problem

[wkyik]
感覺不錯O_O
就右上和左下的位置用的不夠多
還有對於ins...這距離有點短
00:55:742 (2) - 這個可近一點?
01:14:095 (4) - 變曲好張漂亮一點?
01:16:919 (3,1,2,1,1) - 也就是timing 好像錯了;w;(伸手指general>W<)


good luck~
YielShelion
78 posts
Joined December 2011
YielShelion
Hello~
i think Easy and normal are already perfect
Hard
00:09:154 (3) - looks better IMO if it is reversed (ctrl + G)
00:21:154 (3) - Move this circle to (x248 y152. using grid level 3)
the rest are fine

wkyik
it sounds better if the Timing points at 76919 moved to 76566 and then resnap and readjust the distance on 01:16:566 (1,2,3), but you don't need to snap (1,2) : http://puu.sh/5FRLC.jpg

Hope it helps :)
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia

Atrue wrote:

[wkyik]
General
hi~柚子~摸到你的gd啦
最新说法怕是得改难度名
总体感觉不错，来挑挑刺
Beats
00:11:978 (1,2,3) - 考虑改成跟00:13:389 (4,5) - 一致的节奏型，中间多了个note是跑去跟鼓了，而这里是有一种对称节奏的
00:23:625 (2,3) - 跟上边那条感觉是一样的
00:26:625 (2) - 我感觉一个折返不足以强调这里的强音，可以做成滑条加note来强调那个音 OK
00:30:331 (1,2,3) - 也做一个折返来形成节奏上的呼应如何？ 不了
00:52:566 (4) - 这滑条头上没有音，尾巴上有明显重音
SPOILER
看这里相似的节奏你下的就很切钢琴声，所以说这样：
SPOILER
[b]好[/b]
进了kiai节奏下的没啥问题了
Placement
00:19:389 (5,6,7,8) - 一点建议 不太明白啊
00:21:507 (4,5,6) - 这里不建议stack，尤其是在6和7之间有一种流动的感觉 ok
00:44:448 (4) - 比较建议这个地方将距离拉近还原，这样的距离会让人误判节奏的 ok
kiai感觉不错
That's my suggestions. Thanks for requesting.If you have any questions feel free to send pm to me.:) .

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

[wkyik]
感覺不錯O_O
就右上和左下的位置用的不夠多
還有對於ins...這距離有點短
00:55:742 (2) - 這個可近一點? 我覺得這樣好有趣啊
01:14:095 (4) - 變曲好張漂亮一點? ????
01:16:919 (3,1,2,1,1) - 也就是timing 好像錯了;w;(伸手指general>W<)


good luck~

點開
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228,56,43036,6,0,P|240:104|292:136,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,64,43566,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,16,43919,2,0,P|105:12|83:15,2,45,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,36,44448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,156,44801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,244,45154,5,10,0:0:0:0:
100,172,45331,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,252,45507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,164,45684,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,244,45860,6,0,P|204:284|340:284,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,252,46919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,264,47095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,280,47272,2,0,L|452:180,1,90
340,100,47978,2,0,L|336:189,1,90,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,200,48507,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,212,48683,5,0,0:0:0:0:
312,88,49036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,200,49389,1,10,0:0:0:0:
352,104,49742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,88,49918,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,76,50096,2,0,L|372:165,1,90
460,324,50801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
448,300,50978,1,2,0:0:0:0:
436,276,51154,5,2,0:0:0:0:
412,172,51507,2,0,L|428:76,1,90,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,104,52036,2,0,L|384:12,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,20,52566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
146,90,52919,2,0,P|102:99|60:88,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,88,53448,1,2,0:0:0:0:
60,88,53625,2,0,L|52:152,1,45,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,284,54154,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,308,54331,6,0,P|136:328|188:320,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,244,55036,1,10,0:0:0:0:
219,119,55389,6,0,L|224:164,1,45,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,244,55742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,84,56095,6,0,L|398:172,1,90,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,20,57154,6,0,P|296:8|344:16,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,116,57860,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,224,58213,6,0,L|348:288,1,45,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,340,58566,2,0,L|425:364,2,45,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,352,59272,6,0,P|180:364|124:336,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,296,59801,1,2,0:0:0:0:
96,296,59978,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,60,60683,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,135,61036,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,135,61213,2,0,P|256:161|196:136,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,72,62095,2,0,L|76:180,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,228,62625,6,0,P|96:232|152:152,1,135,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,36,63507,2,0,L|36:144,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,140,64036,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,152,64213,2,0,L|160:192,2,45,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,272,64919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,256,65272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,268,65448,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,280,65625,6,0,P|288:288|356:264,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,298,66331,2,0,L|248:280,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,196,66860,2,0,L|187:214,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,208,67389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,68,67742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,228,68095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
108,192,68272,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,184,68448,6,0,P|184:192|248:180,1,90,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,79,69154,2,0,P|319:71|276:80,1,90
152,184,69860,6,0,L|159:228,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,69,70213,2,0,L|184:104,1,45,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,60,70566,1,2,0:0:0:0:
228,128,70919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,140,71095,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,132,71272,5,6,0:0:0:0:
348,124,71978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,132,72331,6,0,L|352:200,1,45,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,52,72683,2,0,L|448:168,1,90
464,284,73389,6,0,L|355:239,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,244,73919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,196,74095,2,0,L|340:124,1,90
160,208,74801,6,0,P|176:248|160:304,1,90,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,168,75507,5,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75683,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,236,75860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,64,76213,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,224,76566,5,2,0:0:0:0:
124,240,76743,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,236,76919,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,32,78204,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,112,78633,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,276,79786,5,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80940,12,0,86998,0:0:0:0:



啊!還有因為rules的改變
麻煩幫忙把難度名改做wkyik's Insane
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa
[General]
这曲子我感觉适合慢sv 一点个人想法而已~
(ノ·ω·)ノ︵ 加油！
[Easy]
General
ez作的还可以，不过大概节奏需要一定的简化
Beats
00:28:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 虽说没错但是1/2不太适合在ez里面多用（后同）嗯我调整一下
Placement
00:00:684 (1) - 啊。。我是强迫症可以把中间的锚点删了么。。（tip向）就不删_(:з」∠)_
00:25:389 (2,3) - blanket包好 Fixed
01:04:566 (2,3,4) - 注意间距，其实我感觉这个地方明显难了些，如果不是bpm低的话应该是不能这么用的
还有几个地方用的1.2间距尽量都用回1.0间距。。ez如何放跳呢。。Fixed
[Normal]
General
1/2总体感觉滥用啊。。节奏上还是有很多地方可以吐槽的。。
Beats
00:00:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 全1/2?前边本身节奏比较疏松为何反而全1、2塞满呢？本来不要空下么。。OK空了一些
00:06:331 (1,2) - 尽量减少在normal难度出现过多的折返滑条我觉得还好啊
00:32:448 (1) - 放spinner吧 OK
00:47:978 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这些1/2note感觉跟曲子实在是关联性不大。。已调整
01:03:154 (6) - 还是说没有音的地方。。
Placement
00:29:978 (1,1,1) - flow确实比较锋利 Fixed
00:39:507 (7,8) - blanket包好
[notice][Hard]
General
我觉得比柚子的难度难。。
还是有些东西需要注意的。
Beats
00:07:742 (6) - 可以做成一个长音 OK
00:07:213 (5,6,2) - 对比这两个地方的节奏型和背景音乐，这里2应该是短1/4来覆盖钢琴的，而且在3前边那根蓝线上有一个音没有盖到 Fixed
00:09:154 (3) - 这里我感觉在两个强音上放note，距离挨得近些就好，放折返像是在带过Fixed
00:11:978 (2) - 当加入鼓的时候节奏可以稍微加密一点，比如这个滑条是不是考虑拆下节奏，里面有很多节奏盖过去了
后边这一小段感觉跟的音轨比较乱，长滑条似乎是在跟的鼓声，不过跟完了立即就是一声钢琴，这里大概还可以理解，不过00:16:036 (7,1) - 这里我感觉就是一个很明显的切换了，打起来不会费劲但是节奏会感觉不舒服。。Fixed
00:17:272 (2,3) - 跟钢琴的话中间还是有些音没有压上Fixed
00:35:272 (3) - 滑条头在跟哪个音呢。。如果是那声类似鼓的声音的话我不是很推荐，还是跟音轨的问题，音轨切换在很多地方都不是很自然，或者不是太适合切换的地方切换了Fixed
00:43:036 (4) - 里面的节奏吞掉太多，应该展开Fixed
00:47:801 (6) - note多余Fixed
00:54:860 (1,2,3,4) - 这节奏自创的似乎不是很适合曲子Fixed
00:56:801 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 此处我拿不准，按照我的想法的话是不会使用这样的加节奏来突出音乐发展的，或者改跟背景音会有帮助Fixed
00:59:625 (1) - 也换成两个note吧，后边都是用的两个noteFixed
01:05:448 (5) - 01:06:860 (3) - 对比这两个音，我感觉应该做成类似节奏型 不用了
01:15:507 (3) - 如果要跟鼓的话建议把中间有一声也跟上Fixed
另外后边切了跟鼓声之后节奏密集程度加大了不少。。虽然也不是增加了太多。。

Placement
00:01:566 (4) - Nazi 没有叠好
往后紧接着就是又是没有叠好，建议关注右上角测距的小面板，看看叠的是不是完美的Fixed
00:05:978 (1,2,3) - 虽说是强音但是在不激烈的地方用了2.0间距还是很危险的Fixed
00:16:213 (1,2,3) - 注意flow问题Fixed
00:17:625 (3,4) - 不太适合stackFixed
00:20:448 (1) - 还是注意下间距问题，跟前一个note距离大了0.05，不是大问题但是会影响整洁程度Fixed
00:23:272 (3) - 容我吐槽下锚点。。或许丧病但是学会下锚点的位置对掌控滑条有至关重要的作用（这条不是问题，是一个tip）Fixed
00:25:919 (4,5) - 已经构不成blanket了。。不过硬是想弄blanket的话我感觉这里包的还是有问题 另外这之间的2.45的间距确实大了Fixed
00:38:801 (2,4) - 美观的话应该统一这两个滑条弧度Fixed
00:52:919 (1,2) - blanket有问题Fixed
01:08:095 (2,3,4) - 还是建议间距小些，2.0我感觉大了，节奏型本身配合hitsound足以突出这个地方了，2.0反而影响间距判断Fixed
01:08:801 (1) - flow不顺畅Fixed
01:10:213 (4,1,3) - 这里两个滑条弄得更加对称或用相同的弧度会比较好，如此不整齐Fixed
感谢MOD和Star_(:з」∠)_
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

from modding queue

[General]
01:16:919 - timing 好像錯了
[TimingPoints]
684,705.882352941176,4,2,1,25,1,0
59978,-100,4,2,1,25,0,1
71272,-100,4,2,1,25,0,1
76563,750,4,2,1,25,1,1
76962,833.333333333333,4,2,1,25,1,1
78633,1153.84615384615,4,2,1,25,1,0
81877,857.142857142857,4,2,1,25,1,0
83591,857.142857142857,4,2,1,25,1,0
84126,1000,4,2,1,25,1,0
85120,909.090909090909,4,2,1,25,1,0
不知道對不對...先看看吧..
謝謝~改了76962,833.333333333333,4,2,1,25,1,1
78633,1153.84615384615,4,2,1,25,1,0
85120,909.090909090909,4,2,1,25,1,0
00:11:095 - 這之前的音量改成5

[EZ]
Slider tick rate 改做2

00:26:095 (3) - 未包好Fixed
00:36:683 (3,4,5,6,7) -
Fixed
00:35:978 (2) - 不要貼著滑跳Fixed
00:43:742 (4,5) - 變return slider 結束點00:44:448 - Fixed
00:55:742 (1) - end at 00:58:566 - Fixed
01:08:095 (2) - Prev DS :1.21 + change to circle
01:09:154 (1) - Prev DS :1.20
01:10:566 (2) - Prev DS :1.20 不改Prev DS
01:14:095 (4) - 未包好Fixed
01:16:566 (2,3) - 01:20:940 (1) - timing problem

[NM]
00:06:331 (1,2) - 各減一個return不改
00:31:389 (1) - Ctrl HFixed
00:32:448 (1) - end at 00:33:154 - 00:33:860 - add note 00:34:566 - add noteFixed
00:37:389 (4,5,6,7) - 建議這樣
00:47:978 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
00:55:036 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - 如圖 / 滑條與circle 前後次序掉轉
Fixed
01:02:801 (5,6) - 6直接取代5(把滑條拉過去)Fixed
01:08:095 (3) - 把return位拉向右下45度Fixed
01:16:919 (1,1,1) - timing problem

[HD]
flow不太好
而且跟我做圖一樣...很多overlap ((掩面>^<
00:14:625 (2,3,4,5) - 可以變成兩個滑條Fixed
00:16:213 (1,2,3,4) - 角度太窄Fixed
00:28:566 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 要不要參考一下233


Fixed
00:35:095 (2,3) - 3取代2 end at 00:35:978 - Fixed
00:47:801 (6) - removeFixed
00:49:213 (2) - 感覺也可以^ 嗯..看看先~
00:54:860 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - remap 這部分...節奏拿不準 00:57:860 (1,2,3,4,5) - 順便也remap這裡Fixed
00:59:978 (2) - 01:01:389 (5) - 01:05:978 (1) - 這些滑條...要改一下....((有點醜= ="|Fixed
01:08:095 (2,3,4) - 與1分開一點Fixed
01:15:331 (2) - remove Fixed
01:15:507 (3) - end at 01:15:860 - Fixed
01:16:566 (5,1,1) - timing problem

good luck~
Thanks for your advice!
TatsumiAlicekawa
68 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
TatsumiAlicekawa

YielShelion wrote:

Hello~
i think Easy and normal are already perfect
Hard
00:09:154 (3) - looks better IMO if it is reversed (ctrl + G)
00:21:154 (3) - Move this circle to (x248 y152. using grid level 3)
the rest are fine

Hope it helps :)
:) Thanks for your helpful mod!
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