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EX Industry - Memory

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Andrea
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Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sabato 7 dicembre 2013 at 10:45:01

Artist: EX Industry
Title: Memory
Source: Ib
Tags: osuplayer111 garry mary game eve rose kioku kouri remix
BPM: 111,9
Filesize: 2692kb
Play Time: 01:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,92 stars, 70 notes)
  2. Hard (4,79 stars, 157 notes)
  3. Normal (4,02 stars, 96 notes)
Download: EX Industry - Memory
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 191th Beatmap.

I hope you will like and enjoy it <3

Mapset:

Hard - Done.
Normal - Done.
Easy - Done.
Last edited by Andrea , edited 16 times in total.
Momochikun
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Joined October 2012
Momochikun
#1 :3
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
#2 owo
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
baka I know this owo ♥ call me for mod when you finish btw #3
Sure
4,219 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
:D

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19:33 ykcarrot: metronome works weird
19:33 Andrea: it seems so orz
19:34 Andrea: I spent 1 hour to time it
19:34 Andrea: loool
19:34 ykcarrot: anyway it's simple and good
19:34 Andrea: yaaay :D
19:34 Andrea: check editor for timing www
19:34 Andrea: thanks so much for test carrot-sama <3
19:34 ykcarrot: my pleasure :D
19:35 ykcarrot: f1. Offset: 835ms BPM: 111.80
19:35 ykcarrot: should be 3/4 o_o
19:36 Andrea: oh that's why =3="
19:36 Andrea: others too I guess?
19:36 ykcarrot: let me see..
19:37 ykcarrot: yeah. every metronome of timings should be 3/4
19:38 Andrea: yep, definitely lol
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
*D*
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea
Ready for mods :3
Wander Away
11 posts
Joined January 2013
Wander Away
Are you gonna be making more difficulties? :3
I was having a hard time trying to find Ib songs on Osu >.<
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea
Mapset is finished already.

And yup, finding Ib songs here it's pretty hard~
Sephibro
315 posts
Joined November 2012
Sephibro
il soft-hitfinish da' un po' fastidio giocando perche' dovrebbe avere il picco all'inizio, non dopo 20 ms:


eccoti il .wav tagliato nel punto giusto: http://puu.sh/5qOot.wav (click destro > Salva destinazione con nome)

Secondo me potresti cambiare anche il soft-hitnormal con quello della skin default, il bam bam bam bam copre troppo la melodia imo
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Andrea
Changed and updated, thanks. :)
Kurokami
osu! Alumni
4,024 posts
Joined February 2010
Kurokami
Random mod because Nyandrea is hentai.

[Sound]

00:05:128 (2) - How about to place it a bit down to match better with the flow?
SPOILER
00:05:665 (3,1,2) - I don't really like the placement for (1). It gives me and unnatural feeling during testplay. I tried something like this, but if you have better idea just ignore it.
SPOILER
00:15:325 (2,3,1,2,3) - Try something like this? (2) is a bit too low currently and gives unnatural feeling.
SPOILER
00:57:576 (1) - Move the endpoint to the center and the result will be splendid. :3

Maybe they are ignorable changes but I think it gives better playability.

[Melody]

00:09:958 (1,2) - For some reason a repeat on (1) sounds better but maybe its enough if you just add a circle to 00:11:031 instead of (2).
00:27:762 (1) - Why not an 1/2 slider? There is a very nice sound at 00:28:040. o.o
00:32:918 - Why empty? Something really needs here. Maybe you can add a repeat to (2) and move (3) 1/2 later for better rhythm.

Asside from these I think this is a really nice difficulty. Good work. :3

[Carillon]

00:25:262 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Something interesting needs here. I wonder if you can use something like this, well (7) will be a bit far away this way...
SPOILER
00:41:037 (7) - Are you sure that this circle under the slider really needs? The rhythm is sounds good even w/o it end it plays better too.

Nice. \o/
[]

The first mapset from you which is easy enough to be fcable to me too. \o/ Well, this song is calm enough for it. Nice spread and good luck with ranking, well it will be ranked in 3 days anyways. lol
Nyukai
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Nyukai
Good luck~
Darksonic
Global Moderator
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Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Ib <3
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Think I've heard this somewhere in osu lol

Sound:

00:08:348 (2,3) - (2): (208,132) and (3): (200,32) for better flow on 00:10:495 (1).
00:55:954 (3,1) - Imo, it would be better if they were parallel.

Melody:

00:58:657 (3) - This curves abit high, while 00:58:116 (2) is a straight slider. I think that makes the flow broken. Try making like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1123950
01:01:630 (2) - 1 grid up?
01:04:873 (2) - (252,118) the start, (312,154) the end for a better line.
01:06:563 (4) - 1 grid up?

Carillon:

00:20:423 (2) - 1 Grid down the last slider dot to make a better line with the next note.
00:21:496 (5,1) - I think this combo isn't right? Maybe was this because of the symmetry pattern in 00:22:301 (1)?
00:24:448 (1) - Imo, adding a whistle at the head sounds really nice, despite it breaks your hit sound pattern.
00:28:318 (2) - Well, I think the selected Finish on the head sounds too long, affecting 00:28:588. I feel just placing a Whistle makes more sense.
00:42:441 (4) - I think hit sounds are lacking diversity. Try adding Whistle here, and other similar parts like this at least in kiai. 00:44:062 (8) too. They will sound nice with the bell imo.
00:55:954 (5,6) - I think the jump was too large comparing to other parts. Try this kind of sliders? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1123943
01:04:062 (7) - NC? Fine to keep if you want to avoid short combo.

Again, I think hitsounds are lacking which is little sad. Map was nice btw :3

Good luck Andrea ;)
Andrea
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Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for the mods, guys!

Applied almost everything and updated.
Luna-
811 posts
Joined June 2012
Luna-
mod request via pm
Ib <3

[Sound]
00:11:031 (2)- the slider feels something.. weird? xP change it like this http://puu.sh/5tdxK.jpg
01:07:674 (1)- the spinner feels shorter and it's close to previous circle, I think it would be better if you delete 01:07:396 (5)- and start the spinner there.
[Melody]
00:05:665 (4,5)- don't feel the rhythm when i'm doing click here, try this: http://puu.sh/5teJs.jpg or: http://puu.sh/5tedq.jpg
00:50:819 (5)- delete this circle
[Carillon]
There is something about new combos that i think doesn't keep well, because you are starting nc in the slider where the tail is on the strong beat, i wasn't sure about this on sound and melody, but here think you need to change it, it supposed you are starting a new rhythm and you are putting it on the last note, just saying.
00:04:323 (2)- start NC here
00:07:543 (2)- ^
00:13:983 (2)- ^
00:17:203 (2)- ^
00:20:423 (2)- ^
00:22:033 (6)- here is different but think the same, ^
00:25:262 (2)- ^
00:30:212 (7)- Maybe NC here?
00:31:836 (2)- start NC here
00:35:083 (2)- ^
00:38:331 (2)- ^
00:54:603 (2)- ^
00:57:846 (2)- ^

I wait this noob mod helps :)
Natsu
8,074 posts
Joined September 2012
Natsu
HI~ Andrea owo mod as I promise

General:
  1. Clean and Kawaii

Carrillon:
  1. 00:02:176 (5) - this need to be on y:90 to keep the symetry with previous 1
  2. 00:04:860 (3,6) - same as above check the ¨y¨
  3. 00:08:080 (3,6) - check the stack look kinda weird in game you told me I can be nazi here so /me runs
  4. 00:13:178 (1) - this slider its not symetrical owo just move the left middle slider point 1 grid to the left
  5. 00:32:648 (4) - the actually way dont play good for me since if you move 4 a little up will flow better with previous and next slider and will keep the symetry like:
    SPOILER
  6. 00:40:496 (6,7) - fix this stack
  7. 01:04:062 (1,2) - just as personal prefference but the actually way play kinda weird also look like it why you dont try to make a blanket with 1 and 2 like:
    SPOILER

Melody:
  1. 00:08:348 (2,3,4) - since I dont like this straigh form with the tail 3 and 4 take in considerationb the slider is curved so moving 3 and 4 in a little curved way will play really more confortable thought
  2. 00:17:740 (2) - symilar as above try to move 2 some grids down to improve the flow owo like:
    SPOILER


Fine:
  1. 00:05:665 (3) - rotate this in 10º selection centre (clockwise) and move to x:272 y:320 play better imo
  2. 00:13:715 (1,2) - this play kinda weird try to redo the slider maybe like
    SPOILER
  3. 00:57:576 (1) - Redo this slider try to keep the same straight line as 00:55:954 (3) - like:
    SPOILER

Pretty cool mapset and lovely song baka didn't find much orz ;)
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks for the mods guys, fixed some small stuff. :3
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Suimya
Andrea baka owo/

I'm kinda lazy so don't expect anything much =3=

General:
  1. remove "ib" from the tags, it's too short and no one can search it anyways lol
  2. uncheck the widescreen support, you didn't use any widescreen sb here baka =3=

Sound:
cs-1 pls ;w; this huge circles are scary for this soft song :c
  1. 00:04:055 (1) - I think this slider will flow better if you made it like this instead
    SPOILER
  2. 00:07:275 (1) - idk..but using liner slider on this kind of songs is kinda odd, so how about making it a curve instead?
    SPOILER
  3. 00:16:398 (1) - ^
    SPOILER
  4. 00:24:985 (4,5) - ^
    SPOILER
  5. 00:45:143 (2,3) - an e.g of bad flow =3= those notes don't flow good imo how about changing them like this?
    SPOILER
  6. 01:07:396 (5) - move this note to x:92 y:168 to make better tringle flow

Melody:
  1. 00:02:981 (4) - move this slider one grid to left so it'll make better blanket with 00:01:908 (3) -
  2. 00:09:153 (3) - i think if you switch those 2 notes into 1 short 1/2 slider would be better for the diff since it is normal diff anyways o3o
clean diff =w=/


Carillon:
  1. 00:37:248 (8) - how about moving this note like this instead
    SPOILER

okbye~
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