1. Easy (1.51 stars, 216 notes)
2. Hard (4.45 stars, 482 notes)
3. Lunatic (4.99 stars, 766 notes)
4. Normal (3.01 stars, 296 notes)

Moway wrote:

oh my god

Frostmourne wrote:

Best song ever

Frostmourne wrote:

╭( ･ㅂ･)و

╭( ･ㅂ･)و <3

Itachi_Uchiha wrote:

m4m yay~

General

1. Old Style map too good :O :o

Easy

1. 00:41:050 (2) - Even though it´s an easy, a note here would be good for a nice polarisation ok
   
2. 02:00:398 (1) - Put this and the following notes straight with the previous slider like you did with (2) and (3) I don't get it
   
3. 02:51:050 (1) - This note is somehow useless in my opinion um.. I did on other diffs so I guess I keep it for consistency.
   
4. 03:41:920 (2) - If you ctrl+g this players can fling into the spinner ok
   
5. 04:15:181 (3) - NC here to get more emphasze on it ok

 

Normal

1. 00:39:963 (2,3,4) - Check spacing on this done
   
2. 01:13:007 (4) - End it on the red tick - sounds better done
   

 

Hard

1. Nothing to say here - was really nice to play Thank you!

 

Insane

1. Same as Hard - I´m into harder diffs xD Thank you!

Solid mapset with good ol' Sliders I really like it *star*

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi~

M4M Possible??

El SolarBeam wrote:

my mod as promised~
sorry, actually I just intend to write as short as possible, but I hope it doesn't seems like a long post It's really long

General

Nice hitsounding, I really learned a lot from this


[Easy]

Pretty diff~
But I suggest finding soft-slidertick sample hitsound because there's some long sliders which has a bass sound like here 00:29:746 and 00:33:224 so it would be perfect I think they are ok as they are following vocal instead of drum xD
01:00:398 (1) Nazi, move slider head to x:168 y:216 why?... spacing is wrong when it's on that point http://puu.sh/5M8NC.png
01:33:876 (4) Maybe make it more symmetrical with 01:31:702 (1) but spacing is already correct
01:36:485 (2) I think this one can be blanketed nicer fixed
02:00:398 (1,2,3,4) Well, this placement seems quite rigid imo, it just feels out of place. But if you want to keep it for the pattern variation, well it's up to you I like this kind of pattern o_O.... why is it bad D:
I've just spotted a bit of inconsistency in the rhythm between this section 00:57:137 and 02:05:833. I think it's better to keep it consistent
02:43:442 (4) Maybe make it more symmetrical with 02:41:268 (1)
02:46:050 (2) Maybe another blanket say hello to spacing
02:58:876 (1,2,3) Just stating my opinion as ctb player, this pattern, will just be converted as mere straight-fall fruits, so maybe variate it a little? eh.. =_= it plays good for osu!standard...
03:32:137 (3,1) Just a little blanketing problem please....
04:07:572 (3,4,1) How about this? Gives better flow imo fixed

SPOILER

04:27:355 How about this? Because it seems you follow the piano on 04:30:181 fixed something similar

SPOILER

Some unused red anchor (maybe): They need to be red because I want to use old slider method instead of the new one
00:34:963
00:38:007
00:40:615
00:44:529
00:47:137

I can't find another thing, the rest is perfect, I suppose


[Normal]

00:36:702 (1) Maybe it's better to use just 2 anchor point to make it similar with (2) fixed
01:04:746 (3) Make it curve for consistency? no because it's on the border of the screen
02:29:963 Make the flow smoother? (just an illustration) sorry.. I like this way

SPOILER

03:18:659 (6) Maybe clap, since you use clap-whistle pattern on 03:19:311 and 03:22:789 but the music doesn't have any kind of snare at these points
03:22:137 (5) This too? listen to music and it clearly doesn't have them
04:09:963 (3) Make it a bit curve? I like linear slider here
04:15:615 (3) Nazi, move the tail 1 grid to the left done
04:31:268 (2,3) Is it supposed to be a blanket? I don't think it's necessary, I didn't intend to make any blanket.
I don't know if this is intentional since there's so many of them, but I think they're unused red anchor
They are intentional and they are used. It's a technique that most of new mappers don't know what it is. I just change the way to make a middle anchor on the slider act different way and give more flexible curve to me.

[Hard]

00:38:442 (7) I think the NC should be here instead, since you use the previous NC on 00:31:920 and 00:35:398 because of the finish sound
But finish is on the tail and the next rhythm is far from here so I believe this is right way to place an NC.
01:08:659 (1,2,3,4,5) Actually I'd like to move the mouse like this good point but I prefer mine.. Sorry orz

SPOILER

And you see, the (4) and (5) is quite uh.. break the flow, so maybe you should curve the slider instead
01:21:702 (1,2,3,4) I recommend to ctrl+h this. Simply put, firstly let's see the flow on 01:19:311

SPOILER

And as we could see, the flow is clockwise, so it would be better when 01:21:702 (1,2,3,4) is mirrored on y axis to make a consistency

SPOILER

I like this, Thank you
Of course it's just an illustration, you could place the notes wherever you feel fitting
01:39:311 (1,2,3) Just some ctb-conversion things again, it's up to you though
02:01:485 ^
02:09:746 ^
02:10:398 ^
02:28:659 Add circle? um.. it's too rush to add at this stage.
02:44:746 (2,3) I think these one can be made more symmetrical fixed
02:59:963 (3) The volume on the tail should be higher it's higher on 03:00:833 instead.
04:01:268 (6,1,2) This pattern doesn't look pretty imo but it plays comfortable
04:25:833 (4) I'm not really sure, but maybe this? plays a bit awkward I guess

SPOILER

[Lunatic]

00:49:529 (1) I think I see two anchor point on the slider's head, is it intentional? yes
01:25:398 (5,6) Make a blanket? I don't understand orz
01:26:268 (3,4) ^ ^
03:09:529 I'm not really sure about this pattern, it's kind of.. doesn't feel smooth? it feels smooth to me

SPOILER

03:16:920 (4,1) Maybe blanket I don't understand again.. sorry for my english..
03:31:702 It's better to curve this downward okay


solid map, hope it will be ranked soon!
(and nice song, so here' a star XD)

P A N wrote:

hmm...

[Lunatic]

00:35:833 (3) - remove repeat แล้ว add note เเทน? น่าจะเข้ากับเสียงมากกว่า ok lol
00:44:094 (1) - อืม.. ผมว่ามันดูไม่ค่อยสวยนะถึงเเม้ว่ามันจะ flow 55 ลองนี่มั้ย สวยแล้ว -_-'a

SPOILER

00:50:833 (4) - จุดกลาง 77|222 , ปลาย 131|292 better blanket D: ไม่ได้คิดทำ blanket อยู่แล้ว
00:57:572 (4) - ไม่แน่ใจว่าพี่ตั้งใจให้มัน flow รึเปล่าเเต่ 69|307 จะไหลตรงกับ slider เก่ามากกว่า โคดละเอียด
00:59:746 (2) - จุดที่ 3 250|290 จุดที่ 2 274|353 better blanket - - อันนี้ดีอยู่แล้วๆ
01:02:137 (3) - เลื่อนไป 246|192 ดีมั้ยจะได้ให้หาง perfect stack with 3 อันก่อน โอเค
01:16:920 (1,2) - ลองสลับ NC? nope
01:24:094 (10,1) - ^ nope
01:44:529 (2,3,4,5) - ผมว่า square pattern ไม่น่าเข้ากับเพลงชิวๆแบบนี้นะ 55 มันดูไม่ลื่นตามเพลง เเต่ก็ไม่รู้จะเปลี่ยนเป็นอะไรเหมือนกัน กำเข้าแล้วๆ (คิดซะว่าปล่อยๆหน่อยละกัน เหอๆ)
02:41:268 (2) - เลื่อนไป 452|235 จะได้ better blanket ส่วน 1 ที่ทับกันตอนเเรกก็เขยิบตามไปที่ 245|252 *-*
03:58:876 (6,1) - swap NC มั้ย เริ้มท่อน kial มันเหมือนเชื่อมกับอันเก่าอยู่ เหตุผลคล้ายๆที่บอกไป
04:18:659 - ลองจังหวะนี้ปะ เอ่อไม่อ่ะ

[Hard]

00:41:702 - ผมว่าให้ 1,2,3 spacing เท่ากันเเล้วค่อยโดดตรง 4 น่าจะเข้ากับเพลงกว่า เอ่อไม่อยากทำโดดใน Hard กับท่อนแบบนี้ - -
01:09:529 (3,4,5) - ลองวางแบบนี้มั้ย ให้มันโดดตรงเริ่ง kial พอดี lol no ละกัน

SPOILER

01:10:181 (5,1) - สลับ NC? เพราะเริ่ม kial มันเหมือนยังเชื่อมกับ 01:09:529 (3) - อยู่ เลยไม่อยากเปลี่ยน
01:19:094 - ผมว่าน่าจะมีโน็ตตรงนี้ เหมือนขาดอะไรไป วางสไลเดอร์เพิ่มไปละ

[Normal]

04:29:963 - add note? ok
ไม่มีไรม็อดเลย

[Easy]

ไม่มีเหมือนกัน - - มองตามลูก slider ไหลเเล้วตาปลือๆ -*-

ดาวให้เบยละกัน *-*

Bless wrote:

Frost~ >3</
another FELT lol

[General]
cancel "Widescreen Support" in Easy, Normal and Hard diff ok done
why the last spinner end at 04:45:670 -0.0? i didn't hear any obvious end point at here~ i suggest end at 04:45:833 it currently ends precisely I am sure.
[Easy]
02:03:876 (4) - add finish removed in Normal diff
02:43:007 (3) - not good for Easy diff, change to a slider like this, and add clap on head should be ok.. I did that on the first kiai too..

SPOILER

02:59:746 (2) - slider's tail change to Sampleset Drum and add clap normal hit fits more (I use normal hit for other diffs)
03:00:398 (3) - slider's head change to Sampleset Drum and add finish ^
03:05:833 (1) - add whistle on tail whistle is actually on the red tick before and after this point
[Normal]
04:40:833 (1) - start at 04:40:724 as others diff? okie
01:32:137 (2) - silence slider? maybe add whistle on head and tail? :3 added whistle but I didn't silence it because it is following vocal owo
02:41:702 (2) - ^ ^
02:59:746 (3) - slider's tail change to Sampleset Drum and add clap
03:00:398 (4) - slider's head change to Sampleset Drum and add finish
same as Easy diff
04:32:572 (3) - maybe you can make better blanket with 04:31:268 (2) okay.. since many people complain about *blanket*
04:34:963 (2) - add whistle on slider's tail whistle is on white tick before this slider end...
04:39:094 (1) - ^ fixed
[Hard]
01:23:224 (1) - add Sampleset Drum clap on reverse, you can lower this volume whistle instead
02:59:746 (3) - slider's tail change to Sampleset Drum and add clap
03:00:398 (4) - slider's head change to Sampleset Drum and add finish
same as Easy diff
03:01:268 (6) - remove clap and add finish okay
04:13:224 - add note here imo :3
04:25:724 - ^
04:28:876 - ^
I don't want to add any more notes because I have something on the background to follow currently, sorry Bless
[Lunatic]
02:59:963 (1,2) - hitsounds same as others diff that i saidsorry orz...
01:33:442 (1) - ctrl+g and put back feels awkward
02:05:180 (3) - NC
03:14:529 (3) - NC
03:14:746 (1) - remove NC
03:14:963 (3) - NC
I have some kind of pattern that I can't explain in my mind. Sorry for that orz

Nice map =w=)b Thank you Bless!

Edit: (ノ・ω・)ノ

HabiHolic wrote:

[Easy]

01:03:659 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1170206 ok
01:37:572 - Delete clap? it's following a snare in the map
02:07:137 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1170210 ok
02:15:833 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1170213 I prefer my own way
02:26:050 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1170216 ok


[Normal]

01:27:572 (5) - add finish?? too loudy
02:03:876 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1170224 I prefer a linear slider
02:58:876 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1170226 I like this way...


[Hard]

00:40:615 (3,4,5,6) - spacing what's wrong with it?
00:47:137 (3) - clap? no clap exists in the music..
01:30:398 (5) - ctrl + g I like this way...
02:33:224 (2) - ^ I like this way...

Good Luck~

1. 04:21:050 (2) - maybe a mistake? add whistle on end instead of clap

1. 02:18:442 (1) - hmm perhaps delete this note would be better for feeling because vocal sound is started in next note and you handling it as slider 01:08:876 - on this part (oh and don't forget to add NC on next note if you delete this)
2. 04:13:442 (1) - missed whistle on start?

1. tick rate 2 fits better on this song as well
2. 01:23:224 (1) - uh i think there should be drum hitsound on repeat slider like Lunatic diff (also check 02:32:789 (1) - here)
3. 01:23:876 (2) - same drum suggestion with Lunatic
4. 02:56:702 (6) - whistle on start
5. 04:29:094 (3) - since you followed with piano sounds here how about dividing this slider into a 1/2 slider and a note?
   
   for example

   

1. tick rate 2 fits better on this song
2. 01:18:442 (4) - since it's hardest diff it would be better if you divide into 1/2 slider and a note considering the vocal sound (and you would be better to fix 02:28:007 (4) - here)
   
   fox example

   
3. 01:23:876 (9) - finish hears much better than clap imo (don't forget to add it on 02:33:442 (8) - here as well)
4. 02:05:180 (3) - NC for consistence?
5. 03:00:398 (2) - how about adding drum finish like 03:01:268 (3) - this?
6. 03:04:311 (4,1) - consider swapping NC here since the new vocal sound is actually started in 03:04:311 (4) - here
7. 03:58:876 (6,1) - swap NC for consistence

NonxE wrote:

tested and gave some suggestion

Aldwych wrote:

Hi!! m4m req. :> hi~~

[Easy]

00:52:789 : I don't really understand why this slider is a line and not a curve like others. I aligned them similar to 00:54:963 (2,3,4,5) -
00:54:963 : Why not for an horizontal circle pattern but yeah, it surprise me. ^
01:00:398 : Most of the time you're on the main ticks (white) and not here just to follow the "lyrics", i'm sure that being 1/2 tick before and with clap hitsound will be better (tl;dr move it to : 01:00:181). good point, I fixed that accordingly!
02:43:007 : It confuse me because the 3/2 space, it's a circle and not a slider (so there's not precision penality like circle) and because ther's a clap before, take care if someone tells it too, and find a solution if it's a problem. I did that on the first kiai and I think it fits.
02:51:050 : Is it important this circle? Just to rage people who will hidden this maybe. let them rage if they can't even play on HD with just OD2 \:D/. I made this because other diffs I did. It isn't hard at all to guess this rhythm since you can count beats according to bass drum in that portion
04:15:181 (1,2,3) : Ok for following the piano notes but the 3/2 space etc... confused me again, maybe because I prefer following the battery (so the main rythm), so if you want move 1/2 tick before. I focus on a bass sound with hi-hat like I did on 04:21:050 (2,3,4) -

Nice easy diff by the most objects are sliders and low SV, i'm just disapointed that don't follow more the battry, but i consider that it was hard to make an easy diff on this music because there's lot of instruments and which follow to create the map.

[Normal]

01:16:920 : Why don't you put this object with the next 2 ones? (If you know what i mean). It is on the finish (the border for the next part) which I want them to be separated more clearly and also parallel with the 01:16:050 (4) -
02:33:659 : I think to make it more intuitive, move it on the bottom like (184;320). done!
02:47:572 : Move the end to X = 256? kk
02:51:050 : Same thing as Easy. same

Nothing really to said more.

[Hard]

I find the AR too high maybe decrease by one? ok

02:19:529 : I found this slider alone. And the Ds after is too high. I think you can move this slider pattern to => (1 : ok, 2 : 320;120, 3 : 176;192, 4 : 312;280). Plus, you'll have a "constant" jump with the next combo. It's not too high for a hard diff and they are slider.. I hope so orz..
02:51:050 : Easylol. I am starting to be sad now lol

Nothing really important to say too. Gj.

[Lunatic]

01:17:137+ : Love it! *_* Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!
02:25:615 (7,8) : Ctrl + G too far orz..
02:51:050 : You know.

Nice diff.I found it a bit slow by the SV but the jumps makes it harder. Gj.


Hope it could help you, gl hf for rank.

- N a n a k a - wrote:

M4M ไหมครัช #โดนตบ

General
สีคอมโบ 1 กับ 3 มัน เหมือนกันมาก แยกไม่ค่อยออกนะ
Frostmorune's Style <3
Nice Hitsound
-*-

Easy
00:33:224 (1) - แบบนี้ฟอลกว่าไหม ไม่รู้แต่แก้ละกัน - -

SPOILER

00:59:746 (3,1) - More Blanket แก้ในม็อดอื่นๆละ
03:32:137 (3,1) - Blanket ดีกว่าไหม (ขยับปลายสไลด์ไปขวาแล้วเลื่อนไปทางขวาล่าง 1 ครั้ง แล้วขยับ 2 3 ตาม //4 ไว้ที่เดิมก็ได้ถ้าขยับ 2 3 ดีๆจะเข้าที่) -*-เรื่องมาก

SPOILER

Normal
00:39:963 (2,3) - Blanket ดูดีกว่านะ เล่นลำบากกว่า
02:32:789 (4) - เลื่อนปลายสไลด์มาที่ x:272 y:232 จะดู blanket กว่า เหอๆ อันนี้มันมั่วๆ ช่างมัน lol

Hard
00:29:746 (1) - เลื่อนปลายสไลด์ไปที่ x:96 y:48 จะ blanket กว่า อะไรมันจะสังเกตขนาดนั้นฟะ lol
01:01:050 (3) - move to x:280 y:192 spacing มันถูกอยู่แล้วอ่ะ..
01:01:268 (4) - move to x:256 y:116 ^

SPOILER

01:29:311 (3) - เลื่อนหัวสไลด์ไปที่ x:56 y:304 แล้วเลื่อนปลายสไลด์ไป overlap กับ 01:27:572 (4) - จะพอดี + blanket กับ 2 ด้วย -*-

Lunatic
02:44:094 (1) - more blanket ไม่ได้กะทำ blanket อยู่แล้ว -_-...
ชิวๆ ครับ ไม่มีอะไรจะม็อด :3

star~

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi Prost Frost

[Easy]

1. 04:21:050 (2) - maybe a mistake? add whistle on end instead of clap fixed

[Normal]

1. 02:18:442 (1) - hmm perhaps delete this note would be better for feeling because vocal sound is started in next note and you handling it as slider great suggestion!
   01:08:876 - on this part (oh and don't forget to add NC on next note if you delete this)
2. 04:13:442 (1) - missed whistle on start? yes orz..

[Hard]

1. tick rate 2 fits better on this song as well is that you Garven? D:
2. 01:23:224 (1) - uh i think there should be drum hitsound on repeat slider like Lunatic diff (also check 02:32:789 (1) - here) yesssssssss
3. 01:23:876 (2) - same drum suggestion with Lunatic ^
4. 02:56:702 (6) - whistle on start done
5. 04:29:094 (3) - since you followed with piano sounds here how about dividing this slider into a 1/2 slider and a note? I like this way because it's more relaxing than that rhythm
   
   for example

   

[Lunatic]

1. tick rate 2 fits better on this song is that you Garven? D:
2. 01:18:442 (4) - since it's hardest diff it would be better if you divide into 1/2 slider and a note considering the vocal sound (and you would be better to fix 02:28:007 (4) - here) sry, I think this pattern fits good enough..
   
   fox example

   
3. 01:23:876 (9) - finish hears much better than clap imo (don't forget to add it on 02:33:442 (8) - here as well) I can't differ any difference for their sound. The pitch is quite the same, isn't it? ... I don't know orz..
4. 02:05:180 (3) - NC for consistence? the previous mod referred this so ok
5. 03:00:398 (2) - how about adding drum finish like 03:01:268 (3) - this? a bit different sound there so it's fine as is
6. 03:04:311 (4,1) - consider swapping NC here since the new vocal sound is actually started in 03:04:311 (4) - here orz
7. 03:58:876 (6,1) - swap NC for consistence would rather keep it..

solid and nice as always! good luck for rank~

Edit : aw i almost forgot, http://osu.ppy.sh/s/94506 this is my map

Momochikun wrote:

Hi ~ really short modding mode as told before xD

[Lunatic]

1. 00:55:833 (2,3,4,1) - I prefer adding jump here I don't :\ (already a jump on 00:57:572 (4,1) - )
2. 02:06:702 (3) - Replace with 3/4 slider and note will be better imo I hate 3/4 slider
3. 02:09:963 (2,1,2,1) - Try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1170637 that destroys my current pattern ;w;
4. 02:55:181 (3,4) - Prefer symmetry of making them on the same shape I don't get it
5. 03:00:398 (2) - Add drum clap other diff use normal hit like this

[Hard]

1. 00:31:920 (1) - Ctrl H everything doesn't need to be a jump
2. 00:38:442 (7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1170650 fixed
3. 01:26:920 (2) - Replace this with 1/2 slider instead for vocal wanted to make like this in the first place (to follow hi-hat)
4. 03:28:876 (3) - Move this 1 grid down if you want a rainbow pattern lol rainbow
5. 04:27:355 (2) - Remove 1 repeat and add 1/1 slider from 04:28:442 - will follow the drum better it's following piano I believe

[Normal]

1. 00:41:268 (3) - 337 325 for centered perfectly between the sliders perfect!
2. 01:25:615 (3) - Reduce this by 1/4 then add a note on the red tick ? actually did the same on 2nd kiai
3. 03:19:529 (2) - Ctrl J maybe for smoother flow maybe, so fixed!
4. 04:13:442 (1) - 55 220 for blanket ... it's worse

[Easy]

1. 00:50:398 (2) - It's better if you start this 1/2 later because this spacing feels so weird D: I will no longer be able to follow bass drum there
2. 02:46:050 (2) - Nicer pattern to follow http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1170738 did something exactly symmetry on the first kiai
3. 03:07:137 (2,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1170741 ? I prefer mine

Good Luck ~

Xinely wrote:

Hi ~

• 
  Lunatic
  00:54:963 (3) - how about move this circle to stacked with 00:54:529 (1) - ? imo will be nice for playing (a little jump /w/) D:
  01:16:920 (1,2) - how about to swap the NC? to emphasize the jump um.. I don't like that much
  01:57:137 - add note here and remove 01:57:355 (1) - ? more easily to following by player imo I want this to be an anti-jump like 02:00:398 (2,1) -
  02:07:789 (5) - ctrl+G? seems nice for jump jump here isn't fitting imo
  02:33:659 (9,1) - swap NC? same reason as previous um.. I don't like that much
  03:43:115 (1) - add whistle? somehow feel nice to hear it's too tough at this point.. sorry

• 
  Hard
  01:20:398 (3) - curve it a little bit up? imo can make a better flow >< okay
  02:13:442 (3) - how about extend to 02:13:876 - (for following piano sound) and add circle 02:14:094 - ? trying to follow vocal at this point because it's a main sound here
  02:19:094 (3) - ctrl+G to keep consistency flow with 02:18:224 (1,2) - ? um.. nope
  03:43:115 (1) - same as Lunatic same
  03:56:920 (1) - add whistle on tail for consistency with Lunatic diff fixed in Lunatic

• 
  Normal
  00:31:920 - i heard cymbal here, i think better if you map this time and remove 00:32:137 (4) - this one but that means I have to lose where I am following vocal. I know it's significant but I guess only this one can be acceptable (I hope)
  01:05:615 (4) - whistle on head for emphasize vocal? it's not good to emphasize vocal with that bass drum..
  02:14:529 (2) - whistle on head for consistency? example with 02:09:311 - bass drum is on red tick here. Not a white tick
  03:08:224 (1) - hmm i think it's a mistake. huge of inconsistency spacing here (1,50x) really big mistake
  03:43:007 (1) - add whistle? sorry, nope
  03:56:920 (1) - same as Hard same as Hard
  04:14:311 (2) - sorry nazi, inconsistency spacing (1,07x) here fixed
  04:33:659 (1) - is whistle body in here intentional? somehow i feel too loud here. remove it instead? removed!

• 
  Easy
  01:08:876 (1,2,3) - i feel flow is kinda forced to play here, try http://puu.sh/5Mpf4.jpg ? changed something there but not that as picture
  02:46:050 (2) - make it become 1/1 slider and move to 02:46:268 - to follow cymbal sound on 02:46:268 - ? feel better imo I don't think so because it's too busy for an easy diff
  03:43:007 (1) - same as Normal sorry, nope

I enjoyed when testplay this map ~
Take my star and good luck for ranking

Garven wrote:

Definitely needs tick rate 2 ;D

1. add 東方ヴォーカル instead of 東方ボーカル to tags (though, not wrong this one --; just a suggestion)

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Delis wrote:

;w;

[General]

1. add 東方ヴォーカル instead of 東方ボーカル to tags (though, not wrong this one --; just a suggestion) fixed

For example

1. http://dic.nicovideo.jp/a/%E6%9D%B1%E6%96%B9%E3%83%B4%E3%82%A9%E3%83%BC%E3%82%AB%E3%83%AB
2. http://puu.sh/5N3uL.png , http://puu.sh/5N3vA.png

[Lunatic]
01:58:876 (1,2,3) - pattern suggestion, I feel better flow but my flow is cute o.o..

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03:29:311 (1) - I wanna make straight flow with 03:28:659 (5,6,7,8) - , just I prefer =v= =w=, it's similar jump on 03:31:702 (4,5) -
03:58:876 (6,1) - switch NewCombo, I guess. guess right

[Hard]
00:31:920 (1) - delete a centre point of a slider, hmm looks quite bad to me orz curve a little D:
01:10:181 - rhythm suggestion ,would be consistent with other part (02:19:746 , 03:58:876 )also I didn't liked that pattern.. \--/ lol ok

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02:28:007 (3) - 02:28:876 (1) - remove this, then add reverse here. just this will be like my mapping style (oh sorry for bad suggestion) anyways try it
tried it but I didn't like that much

[Normal]
00:31:920 - I wanna add finish here.. so add a circle (or a slider of 1/2) instead of 00:32:137 (4) - , I think will be fit than now ok =.=

[Easy]
aww nothing to say

1. Okay

1. 02:02:355 (3) - ผมคิดว่าลองเปลี่ยนเป็น curve slider เหมือนรูปนี้จะดูดีกว่าหรือเปล่า?
   
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2. 02:10:398 (4) - ผมว่าเสียง whistle ในท้ายของ sliderไม่น่าจะเหมาะกับเสียง melody นะ
   
3. 04:33:659 (1,2) - ทำ slider ให้โค้งคล้ายๆกับ 04:32:137 (4) - (ไม่เกี่ยวกับความยาวโน๊ตนะ)

1. 00:37:355 (3) - flow มันดูแปลกๆ โดยเฉพาะคนที่เล่นโหมด DT อยากให้พิจารณาส่วนนี้หน่อย
   
2. 00:39:936 (3,4,5) - ลองย้ายโน๊ตหรือ slider point เล็กน้อยประมาณรูปนี้ ผมคิดว่ามันน่าจะดูดีขึ้นนะ
   
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3. 01:53:224 (3) - ผมคิดว่าลบเสียง whistle ดีกว่านะ เพราะดูเหมือนว่ามันไม่น่าจะเหมาะที่จะใช้ที่นี่
   
4. 04:14:311 (2) - ใส่เสียง clap ทั้งหัวและท้ายของ slider ด้วยนะ

1. 02:12:137 (4,1,2) - ลองใช้โน๊ตตามจังหวะประมาณนี้ดูนะ แล้วเพิ่ม NC ที่ (2) ด้วยนะ ถ้าแก้
   
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2. 02:23:659 (1,2) - ลดความโค้งของ slider หรือทำคล้ายๆกับรูปนี้ flow น่าจะดีขึ้น
   
3. 03:41:920 (5) - ผมอยากให้ stack กับหัวของ slider (6) มากกว่า
   
4. 04:10:615 (3,4) - น่าจะย้าย (3) ไป stack กับ 04:08:876 (7,8) - แล้วย้าย (4) ไปที่ x:288 y:144

1. 01:51:702 (2) - ย้ายไปทางขวาเล็กน้อย เพื่อให้มันดูดีขึ้น
   
2. 01:54:963 (3,4,5) - อยากให้ย้ายพวกนี้ไปที่ x:224 y:132 ซึ่งผมคิดว่ามัน flow ดีกว่านะ
   
3. 02:55:615 (4,5) - ใช้ slider ที่เหมือนกับ (3) ลงใน (4) โดยใช้ Ctrl+G แล้ววางไว้ที่ประมาณ x:288 y:360 จากนั้นแก้ไข (5) เล็กน้อยตามรูป ผมว่ามันจะดูดีขึ้น
   
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4. 03:33:876 (4) - ผมต้องการที่จะให้มันหลีกเลี่ยงการ stack กับท้ายของ slider (3) เพราะมันทำให้ผมอึดอัดใจ
   
5. 04:40:615 (11) - เพิ่ม NC ที่นี่จะดีไหม?

Nichiyouki wrote:

ดีคับพี่ >w< ดีๆ

M4M request จาก Nich's m4m Queue

[General]

1. Okay

[Easy]

1. 02:02:355 (3) - ผมคิดว่าลองเปลี่ยนเป็น curve slider เหมือนรูปนี้จะดูดีกว่าหรือเปล่า? พอดีอยากเรียงกับอันนี้ 02:00:398 (1,2) - แต่แรกอยู่แล้ว
   
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2. 02:10:398 (4) - ผมว่าเสียง whistle ในท้ายของ sliderไม่น่าจะเหมาะกับเสียง melody นะ อืม.. แต่พยายามยึดเสียงที่มันอยู่ในเพลงจริงๆอ่ะ ก็เลยอาจจะแหม่งๆ.. จะลด volume ลงไปเลยมันก็กะไรอยู่...
   
3. 04:33:659 (1,2) - ทำ slider ให้โค้งคล้ายๆกับ 04:32:137 (4) - (ไม่เกี่ยวกับความยาวโน๊ตนะ) ok~

[Normal]

1. 00:37:355 (3) - flow มันดูแปลกๆ โดยเฉพาะคนที่เล่นโหมด DT อยากให้พิจารณาส่วนนี้หน่อย แยกไม่ออกนะว่าแปลกยังไง เพราะมันก็ flow จาก 00:36:702 (2) - นี้ดีหนิ? รู้สึกแบบนั้น -_-
   
2. 00:39:936 (3,4,5) - ลองย้ายโน๊ตหรือ slider point เล็กน้อยประมาณรูปนี้ ผมคิดว่ามันน่าจะดูดีขึ้นนะ ok
   
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3. 01:53:224 (3) - ผมคิดว่าลบเสียง whistle ดีกว่านะ เพราะดูเหมือนว่ามันไม่น่าจะเหมาะที่จะใช้ที่นี่ อ่าจริงด้วยๆ ลบละ
   
4. 04:14:311 (2) - ใส่เสียง clap ทั้งหัวและท้ายของ slider ด้วยนะ clap มันไม่ลงเส้นแดงนะ ในตรงจุดนี้

[Hard]

1. 02:12:137 (4,1,2) - ลองใช้โน๊ตตามจังหวะประมาณนี้ดูนะ แล้วเพิ่ม NC ที่ (2) ด้วยนะ ถ้าแก้ ไม่ใส่รัวนะสำหรับตรงนี้ จะใส่แค่จุดสำคัญจริงๆ อย่าง 02:05:398 (4,5,6) - เป็นต้น
   
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2. 02:23:659 (1,2) - ลดความโค้งของ slider หรือทำคล้ายๆกับรูปนี้ flow น่าจะดีขึ้น ok, แก้ตัวก่อนหน้านิดนึงด้วย
   
3. 03:41:920 (5) - ผมอยากให้ stack กับหัวของ slider (6) มากกว่า ได้
   
4. 04:10:615 (3,4) - น่าจะย้าย (3) ไป stack กับ 04:08:876 (7,8) - แล้วย้าย (4) ไปที่ x:288 y:144 คิดว่าที่ตอนนี้เป็นอยู่โอเคนะ เพราะว่ามันโดดสบายมือสุดละ รู้สึกแบบนั้น

[Lunatic]

1. 01:51:702 (2) - ย้ายไปทางขวาเล็กน้อย เพื่อให้มันดูดีขึ้น เลื่อนละ แต่หลักๆยังยึดตาม 01:50:833 (6,1) - อยู่
   
2. 01:54:963 (3,4,5) - อยากให้ย้ายพวกนี้ไปที่ x:224 y:132 ซึ่งผมคิดว่ามัน flow ดีกว่านะ เอ่อ.. ไม่แก้ละกัน ชอบที่เป็นอยู่มากกว่า
   
3. 02:55:615 (4,5) - ใช้ slider ที่เหมือนกับ (3) ลงใน (4) โดยใช้ Ctrl+G แล้ววางไว้ที่ประมาณ x:288 y:360 จากนั้นแก้ไข (5) เล็กน้อยตามรูป ผมว่ามันจะดูดีขึ้น พี่เน้นเล่นเป็นหลัก มันอาจดูดีขึ้น แต่พี่คิดว่ามันก็เล่นแล้วรู้สึกเหมือนเดิมไม่เปลี่ยนแปลง
   
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4. 03:33:876 (4) - ผมต้องการที่จะให้มันหลีกเลี่ยงการ stack กับท้ายของ slider (3) เพราะมันทำให้ผมอึดอัดใจ เปลี่ยนเป็น slider แทนละๆ
   
5. 04:40:615 (11) - เพิ่ม NC ที่นี่จะดีไหม? มันดูไม่ค่อยต่อเนื่องกับ 04:40:398 (10) - เท่าไหร่อ่ะดิ

Comment : โอเคคับ flow ดูดี ไม่น่าจะมีปัญหาอะไรมากคับ

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ca20114 wrote:

Thank you Frostmourne
You make many FELT(Maika)'s map

wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request here

[General]
fine

[Easy]
00:50:833 - I suggest to change the pattern a bit to follow the vocal, the rhythm would be much better imo, like what you did at 02:00:398 -
idk if I get right, Just adding a note after that slider then =_=..
04:28:659 - ^, you followed the piano before and after this slider, it would be better if you make the rhythm regular here imo fixed, you are right

[Normal]
03:43:007 - I suggest to end the slider here with finish, and then start the spinner later. finish fit the song better here imo added a note instead

[Hard]
00:45:398 - you need to change clap to whistle here, if you listen to the song carefully, you can find there's only clap at 00:45:507 - in the music
but I hear it right that it's a clap.. I am really sure about it, that's why I did this on the Lunatic too. Just the snare doesn't sound as loud as the next 1/4 one but it is impossible to be a bass drum according to its pitch
01:09:963 (4) - if you don't mind this note overlapping with slider 3, I suggest to put the note at about x:248 y:160 and then put 01:10:181 (5) - far away. cuz the music is highest at 01:10:181 - , jump start at 01:09:963 - is better than start at 01:09:746 - imo(use something like 02:16:920 (2,3,4) - is also nice)
moved downwards a bit for those 2 circles
01:54:963 (5) - same as 00:45:398 - here sorry

[Lunatic]
00:45:398 - 00:48:876 - 01:54:963 - 01:58:442 - 02:01:920 - same as Hard no change, reason as explained.. sorry about this
00:54:746 (2) - I highly suggest to move this note to stack under 00:54:529 (1) - , and fix some newcombos, then the patterns can be much better imo. first it's easier to read, plus every jump at this pattern is jump to a clap which is following the drums in the music, this plays much better
;o; but I like that pattern.. I will leave it here.

really nice map, no much to say