Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui - Maware! Setsugekka (T

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Topic Starter
imariL
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014년 1월 29일 수요일 at 오후 9:04:12

Artist: Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui
Title: Maware! Setsugekka (TV Size)
Source: Kikou Shoujo wa Kizutsukanai
Tags: 機巧少女は傷つかない Machine Doll wa Kizutsukanai ending ED [FX] AEM PROGUY Jubeat Saucer Pop'n Music Sunny Park Reflec Beat Colette All Seasons Dance Dance Revolution DDR
BPM: 160
Filesize: 3223kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. 7K Another - 7Key (5 stars, 1226 notes)
  2. 7K Beginner - 7Key (1.59 stars, 275 notes)
  3. 7K Hyper - 7Key (4.04 stars, 698 notes)
  4. 7K Normal - 7Key (2.63 stars, 455 notes)
  5. AEM's 4K Insane - 4Key (4.41 stars, 844 notes)
  6. AEM's 4K Normal - 4Key (2.42 stars, 459 notes)
  7. PROGUY's 4K Easy - 4Key (0.73 stars, 141 notes)
  8. PROGUY's 6K MX - 6Key (5 stars, 1175 notes)


Download: Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui - Maware! Setsugekka (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mawaremawaremawaremawaremawaremaware Ma~wa~re~
BG & Mp3 from http://osu.ppy.sh/s/122658
PROGUY's 4K Easy - 100%
AEM's 4K Normal - 100%
AEM's 4K Insane - 100%
4K Difficulty Mapped by http://osu.ppy.sh/u/3203075 and http://osu.ppy.sh/u/528181
PROGUY's 6K MX - 100%, Mapped by https://osu.ppy.sh/u/528181
7K Beginner (4) - 100%
7K Normal (6) - 100%
7K Hyper (9) - 100%
7K Another (12) - 100%
7K Difficulty level based on BeatmaniaIIDX
[Shi-Ra]
Hi, there are mods for your diffs ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Normal
Awesome and simple patterned diff, only some suggestions:

00:07:506 (7506|4) - move to 3rd column, placing last going note in centre column will be better for your pattern here

00:14:631 - add note here to 4th column, you see that it good place for it according to the syllable which goes here

00:19:881 - missed beat, place one more chord, the beat sounds clearly here

01:02:070 (62070|5) - move to another column, 3rd or 6th I suggest coz there's no repeating sound to place two notes in same column

01:08:071 (68071|5) - same suggestion ^ or better mirror pattern here to make the difference between this and previous pattern

Hyper
00:07:412 (7412|5) - move to 3rd column, this triplet more playable here and it'll save hand balance too

From 00:11:268 to 00:12:006 - I suggest you to fill missed beat part according to your difficulty, there's no need to ignore clear beat

00:13:881 - add here at least one more note or chord too according to the strong beat

00:14:631 - add one more note, same reason ^

00:16:904 - and again add chord here, please, don't ignore strong beat in song even when you following vocals

Here 00:30:755 and here 00:31:511 - add chords, the beat here goes in another way, so re-arrange this pattern

00:39:007 - add note here, carefully listen to the sound which goes there

01:12:664 - add here one more note and perform triplet according to the song

01:18:383 - one more note again, perform simple chord according to strong beat

Another
These bms patterns are looks good for me, except some issues:

00:13:881 - add here one more note to 3rd column to complete here chord correctly

00:16:318 - you can add one more note or two note chord according to the sound which goes here

00:18:850 - add notes here to 3rd and 5th columns and perform triplet according to the song

00:40:507 (40507|6) - move to 5th column to finish this chord correctly

00:51:382 (51382|5) - move to 4th column, make a little break for 5th column here

01:02:632 (62632|4) - move to 3rd column to make more comfortable chord transition

01:12:289 - add here note to 1st column according to syllable which goes there

01:26:264 - missed beat here, don't ignore it coz it's another diff, add one more chord

01:27:008 - add one more chord here to according to the song, double beat goes there

MAWAREMAWAREMAWAREMAWAREMAWAREMAWAREMAWAREMAWARE~ Shootin' star xD
Good luck :3/
Bruce
Mod by request
[Normal]
HP7 OD8
00:11:068 - ~ 00:12:193 - All become 1 Note
00:19:881 - Add a Note at 4
00:24:569 - Remove a Note
00:24:756 - Remove a Note
00:31:506 - Add a Note at 4
00:51:382 - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125951
00:53:257 - ~ 00:54:007 - All become 1 Note
00:54:663 (54663|2) - Move to 00:54:757 -
01:22:133 (82133|5,82133|3,82133|1) - Change to Note
01:22:508 - Add a Hold, End at 01:22:883 -
01:25:883 - Add a Note
01:26:071 - Remove a Note
01:27:008 - Add a Note
01:28:508 (88508|5) - Remove

[Hyper]
00:11:256 - Add 2 Notes
00:11:443 - Remove a Note
00:11:631 - Add 2 Notes
00:11:818 - Remove a Note
00:12:006 - Add 2 Notes
00:13:881 - Remove 1 or 2 Notes
00:23:444 (23444|3,23537|2,23631|1) - Ctrl+j
00:30:569 - Remove a Note
00:30:756 - Add 1 or 2 Notes
00:31:506 - Add 1 or 2 Notes
00:31:694 - Remove 1 or 2 Notes
01:22:133 (82133|1,82133|3,82133|5) - 01:22:508 - The same problems likes Normal

[Another]
00:19:319 - Add a Note at 1
00:19:694 - Add a Note at 6
00:30:756 - Add 2 Notes at 1 and 3
00:31:506 - Add 2 Notes at 4 and 6
01:22:508 - Add a Hold at 4,end at 01:22:883 -

Nice map, Good Luck~
Topic Starter
imariL

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hi, there are mods for your diffs ^w^

Shi-Ra's Patterns Review:

(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6)
Normal
Awesome and simple patterned diff, only some suggestions:

00:07:506 (7506|4) - move to 3rd column, placing last going note in centre column will be better for your pattern here

00:14:631 - add note here to 4th column, you see that it good place for it according to the syllable which goes here

00:19:881 - missed beat, place one more chord, the beat sounds clearly here Tried to place notes by vocal, but anyway fixed

01:02:070 (62070|5) - move to another column, 3rd or 6th I suggest coz there's no repeating sound to place two notes in same column

01:08:071 (68071|5) - same suggestion ^ or better mirror pattern here to make the difference between this and previous pattern

All Fixed!

Hyper
00:07:412 (7412|5) - move to 3rd column, this triplet more playable here and it'll save hand balance too

From 00:11:268 to 00:12:006 - I suggest you to fill missed beat part according to your difficulty, there's no need to ignore clear beat

00:13:881 - add here at least one more note or chord too according to the strong beat

00:14:631 - add one more note, same reason ^

00:16:904 - and again add chord here, please, don't ignore strong beat in song even when you following vocals

Here 00:30:755 and here 00:31:511 - add chords, the beat here goes in another way, so re-arrange this pattern

00:39:007 - add note here, carefully listen to the sound which goes there

01:12:664 - add here one more note and perform triplet according to the song

01:18:383 - one more note again, perform simple chord according to strong beat

All Fixed!

Another
These bms patterns are looks good for me, except some issues:

00:13:881 - add here one more note to 3rd column to complete here chord correctly

00:16:318 - you can add one more note or two note chord according to the sound which goes here

00:18:850 - add notes here to 3rd and 5th columns and perform triplet according to the song

00:40:507 (40507|6) - move to 5th column to finish this chord correctly

00:51:382 (51382|5) - move to 4th column, make a little break for 5th column here

01:02:632 (62632|4) - move to 3rd column to make more comfortable chord transition

01:12:289 - add here note to 1st column according to syllable which goes there

01:26:264 - missed beat here, don't ignore it coz it's another diff, add one more chord

01:27:008 - add one more chord here to according to the song, double beat goes there

All Fixed!

MAWAREMAWAREMAWAREMAWAREMAWAREMAWAREMAWAREMAWARE~ Shootin' star xD
Good luck :3/
Thank you for Modding! :D
Topic Starter
imariL

Simple_Star wrote:

Mod by request
[Normal]
HP7 OD8 OD8 is harsh for Normal players imo
00:11:068 - ~ 00:12:193 - All become 1 Note Fixed!
00:19:881 - Add a Note at 4 Fixed!
00:24:569 - Remove a Note Don't agree. Placed notes by vocal
00:24:756 - Remove a Note ^
00:31:506 - Add a Note at 4 Fixed!
00:51:382 - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1125951 Fixed!
00:53:257 - ~ 00:54:007 - All become 1 Note Fixed!
00:54:663 (54663|2) - Move to 00:54:757 - Fixed!
01:22:133 (82133|5,82133|3,82133|1) - Change to Note Don't agree. Sorry!
01:22:508 - Add a Hold, End at 01:22:883 - ^
01:25:883 - Add a Note Fixed!
01:26:071 - Remove a Note Placed notes by vocal
01:27:008 - Add a Note ^
01:28:508 (88508|5) - Remove Don't agree. It's end of this song, so I put triple notes.

[Hyper]
00:11:256 - Add 2 Notes Changed Pattern at this part
00:11:443 - Remove a Note ^
00:11:631 - Add 2 Notes ^
00:11:818 - Remove a Note ^
00:12:006 - Add 2 Notes ^
00:13:881 - Remove 1 or 2 Notes Don't agree. It has beat at this part
00:23:444 (23444|3,23537|2,23631|1) - Ctrl+j Fixed!
00:30:569 - Remove a Note Placed notes with vocal at here.
00:30:756 - Add 1 or 2 Notes Fixed!
00:31:506 - Add 1 or 2 Notes Fixed!
00:31:694 - Remove 1 or 2 Notes Don't agree. If other modders say this problem too, I'll fix it.
01:22:133 (82133|1,82133|3,82133|5) - 01:22:508 - The same problems likes Normal Don't agree. Sorry!

[Another]
00:19:319 - Add a Note at 1 It's not necessary rhythm I think. Don't agree, Sorry!
00:19:694 - Add a Note at 6 Fixed!
00:30:756 - Add 2 Notes at 1 and 3 Fixed!
00:31:506 - Add 2 Notes at 4 and 6 Fixed!
01:22:508 - Add a Hold at 4,end at 01:22:883 - Don't agree, Sorry!

Nice map, Good Luck~
Thank you for Modding! :D
Eyun
[Another]
00:04:506 (4506|3) - 중간에 말고 왼쪽이나 오른쪽으로 분산 시켜서 하던가 스페이스바가 3번이나 나오는건 문제 있는듯
00:05:256 (5256|5) - 오른손에 집중된 패턴
00:08:256 (8256|6) - 이부분 스페이스바를 왼손으로 빼던가 오른손에 있는 노트를 왼쪽으로 빼던가 하는게 좋을듯 이 뒤에 반복되는 것도 마찬가지
00:18:850 (18850|3) - 오른손에 노트 집중되있음
00:30:006 (30006|3) - 4.5초에 나오는 패턴이랑 같음.
00:50:820 (50820|6) - 마찬가지 오른손에만 노트가 있음
00:51:570 (51570|6) - 여기도
01:11:633 (71633|5) - 6번키가 연속 2번나오는데 이러면 치기 힘듬.
01:19:414 (79414|6) - 이노트 2번으로 옮기는게 더 좋아보임

[hyper]
딱히 지적할만한 억지패턴은 없으나 패턴이 너무 단순함.
연속적인 웨이브 패턴만 나올뿐 다른 패턴이 없어서 지루함.
난이도를 유지하면서 창의적인 패턴 추가 필요
Topic Starter
imariL

Eyun wrote:

[Another]
00:04:506 (4506|3) - 중간에 말고 왼쪽이나 오른쪽으로 분산 시켜서 하던가 스페이스바가 3번이나 나오는건 문제 있는듯 Don't agree, Sorry!
00:05:256 (5256|5) - 오른손에 집중된 패턴 ^
00:08:256 (8256|6) - 이부분 스페이스바를 왼손으로 빼던가 오른손에 있는 노트를 왼쪽으로 빼던가 하는게 좋을듯 이 뒤에 반복되는 것도 마찬가지 Considering
00:18:850 (18850|3) - 오른손에 노트 집중되있음 Fixed!
00:30:006 (30006|3) - 4.5초에 나오는 패턴이랑 같음. Sorry!
00:50:820 (50820|6) - 마찬가지 오른손에만 노트가 있음 Fixed!
00:51:570 (51570|6) - 여기도 Fixed!
01:11:633 (71633|5) - 6번키가 연속 2번나오는데 이러면 치기 힘듬. Fixed!
01:19:414 (79414|6) - 이노트 2번으로 옮기는게 더 좋아보임 Don't agree, Sorry!

[hyper]
딱히 지적할만한 억지패턴은 없으나 패턴이 너무 단순함.
연속적인 웨이브 패턴만 나올뿐 다른 패턴이 없어서 지루함.
난이도를 유지하면서 창의적인 패턴 추가 필요
Thank you for Modding! :D
Sorarei
Line guide : |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
I would like if you try and play with SV


[Normal]
00:07:881 - Add note in 2nd so it will be balance
00:10:506 (10506|0) - move to 2nd
00:10:693 (10693|2) - move to 5th
00:13:506 (13506|6,13506|0) - move to 2nd & 6th
00:23:162 (23162|5) - move to 2nd for easy to do
00:16:318 (16318|1) - move to 7th
00:16:694 (16694|1) - move to 6th
00:24:569 (24569|4,24569|2) - move to 2nd & 6th
00:26:163 (26163|4) - move to 7th
00:30:944 (30944|6) - move to 5th
01:01:414 (61414|1) - move to 6th
01:07:133 (67133|4,67133|6,67415|3,67415|1,67696|4,67696|2) - mirror this
Please insert more LN

[Hyper]
00:19:412 (19412|4,19412|5) - According in normal and Another diff , beat position must be 00:19:506 -
00:19:694 (19694|3,19694|2) - move to 00:19:881 -
00:34:132 (34132|6) - change to LN , make longer to this 00:34:507 -
00:37:132 (37132|6) - same problem
00:40:507 (40507|1) - move to 1st
00:42:007 (42007|5) - move to 7th
00:52:882 - the jackhammer looks annoying try this Click me!
00:54:382 - same problem
01:01:132 (61132|2,61132|0) - move to 2nd & 4th
01:07:133 (67133|2,67133|0,67415|5,67415|3,67696|6,67696|4) - mirror
01:06:852 (66852|2,66946|3,67040|4) - mirror

[Another]
isn't that overmapped ? i think need to remove some especially for this pattern Click me!
Topic Starter
imariL

Reikosaka wrote:

Line guide : |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|
I would like if you try and play with SV


I tried, but some parts doesn't match with song imo. So I accept 33382 & 39382 sv changes at here. Thank you for advice! 'w')/

[Normal]
00:07:881 - Add note in 2nd so it will be balance Fixed!
00:10:506 (10506|0) - move to 2nd
00:10:693 (10693|2) - move to 5th
00:13:506 (13506|6,13506|0) - move to 2nd & 6th This is more nice I think. Sorry!
00:23:162 (23162|5) - move to 2nd for easy to do Don't agree. Placed notes for balance
00:16:318 (16318|1) - move to 7th
00:16:694 (16694|1) - move to 6th
00:24:569 (24569|4,24569|2) - move to 2nd & 6th
00:26:163 (26163|4) - move to 7th
00:30:944 (30944|6) - move to 5th
01:01:414 (61414|1) - move to 6th
01:07:133 (67133|4,67133|6,67415|3,67415|1,67696|4,67696|2) - mirror this
Please insert more LN Sorry, I don't want to insert many LNs at IIDX style map T.T

[Hyper]
00:19:412 (19412|4,19412|5) - According in normal and Another diff , beat position must be 00:19:506 - Fixed!
00:19:694 (19694|3,19694|2) - move to 00:19:881 - Fixed!
00:34:132 (34132|6) - change to LN , make longer to this 00:34:507 - Sorry, Don't want to add LN
00:37:132 (37132|6) - same problem ^
00:40:507 (40507|1) - move to 1st
00:42:007 (42007|5) - move to 7th
00:52:882 - the jackhammer looks annoying try this Click me! Don't agree. Added jackhammer by base sound
00:54:382 - same problem ^
01:01:132 (61132|2,61132|0) - move to 2nd & 4th
01:07:133 (67133|2,67133|0,67415|5,67415|3,67696|6,67696|4) - mirror
01:06:852 (66852|2,66946|3,67040|4) - mirror

I didn't change about some patterns which pointed out above. Sorry, different with my mapping style.. and also think doesn't matter.

[Another]
isn't that overmapped ? i think need to remove some especially for this pattern Click me!
I heard first time that it was overmapped. Same rhythm as 00:01:881

Thank you for advice about SV and pointed out some note timing. It was helpful! ;)
Remillion Cross
Hi Chocoliti o/ here's my mod as you requested yesterday.
You can ignore or accept this.

Ask
where is Beginner diff ? i think this song can be mapped for Beginner diff :P

Normal
*00:30:756 - add a note in 5th column
*00:32:819 (32819|6) - deleted
*00:33:757 (33757|0,33757|2) - move to 6th or 7th column
*00:34:132 (34132|6) - move to 4th column
*00:36:757 (36757|2,36757|0) - move to 2nd or 3rd column
*01:25:883 (85883|3) - not sure about this, move to 01:25:789 -

Hyper
*00:07:318 - i think should be good if add a note in 6th column, the pattern is almost nice
*00:17:069 - 00:17:537 - try to be creative at this pattern ( you can make like this http://puu.sh/5vTiY.png or http://puu.sh/5vTkb.png or http://puu.sh/5vTny.jpg )
*00:33:007 (33007|4) - move to 4th column
*00:40:413 - add a note at 1st column
*00:41:913 - add a note at 7th column
*01:17:164 - add a note at 3rd column
*01:28:508 (88508|4) - move to 3rd column

Another:
*00:06:193 (6193|5) - move to 2nd column
*00:09:193 (9193|3) - move to 2nd column
*00:33:007 (33007|5) - move to 4th column
*00:35:163 - i heard the vocal sound, add a note in 4th column and 1st column or just a one note only,
*01:17:070 (77070|5) - move to 2nd column
*01:28:509 (88509|5) - move to 4th column

Good luck for ranked :D nice mapset
-DanteMayCry-
Omg, love this map *_* good luck for ranked >_<
Topic Starter
imariL

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hi Chocoliti o/ here's my mod as you requested yesterday.
You can ignore or accept this.

Ask
where is Beginner diff ? i think this song can be mapped for Beginner diff :PI didn't have plan to make beginner diff, but I'll consider it.

Normal
*00:30:756 - add a note in 5th column Fixed!
*00:32:819 (32819|6) - deleted Sound exists at here
*00:33:757 (33757|0,33757|2) - move to 6th or 7th column Don't agree. Same pitch at here.
*00:34:132 (34132|6) - move to 4th column Sorry, I prefer this pattern.
*00:36:757 (36757|2,36757|0) - move to 2nd or 3rd column ^
*01:25:883 (85883|3) - not sure about this, move to 01:25:789 - um well, I don't think so. Sorry!

Hyper
*00:07:318 - i think should be good if add a note in 6th column, the pattern is almost nice Fixed!
*00:17:069 - 00:17:537 - try to be creative at this pattern ( you can make like this http://puu.sh/5vTiY.png or http://puu.sh/5vTkb.png or http://puu.sh/5vTny.jpg ) Thank you for advice this pattern! Fixed! It was really helped.
*00:33:007 (33007|4) - move to 4th column Sorry, note doesn't exist at 4th column so idk which one should I move.
*00:40:413 - add a note at 1st column Sorry, instrument sound doesn't exist at here.
*00:41:913 - add a note at 7th column ^
*01:17:164 - add a note at 3rd column Fixed pattern.
*01:28:508 (88508|4) - move to 3rd column Sorry, I prefer this pattern.

Another:
*00:06:193 (6193|5) - move to 2nd column Fixed!
*00:09:193 (9193|3) - move to 2nd column Fixed!
*00:33:007 (33007|5) - move to 4th column
*00:35:163 - i heard the vocal sound, add a note in 4th column and 1st column or just a one note only, I placed notes by background instrument at this part. Sorry!
*01:17:070 (77070|5) - move to 2nd column Fixed!
*01:28:509 (88509|5) - move to 4th column Sorry, I prefer this pattern.

Good luck for ranked :D nice mapset
Thank you for Modding! :D
[FX] AEM
4K NM

4K IN

*4K Insane doesn't has SV/BPM change.
and 4K NM need mod a lot too, because i've no idea :(
17VA
[Another]
00:16:131 (16131|3,16506|1,16694|4) - 매우 약한 비트인데 3개는 어색한듯.
00:19:319 - 빠짐?

[Hyper]
00:40:507 (40507|3) - ~ 00:45:382 (45382|4) -
Divisor 를 1/2로 잡고 빠진 라인에 노트 하나씩 추가하시는게 좋을듯
01:04:414 - 여기... 드럼비트가 있네요
01:26:071 (86071|0,86071|2) - 01:27:196 (87196|5,87196|3,87196|1) - 여기 비트가 없는것같네요

[Normal]
00:13:693 (13693|3) - 삭제
00:13:881 - 추가
00:16:881 - 추가
00:43:697 - 추가
01:04:508 - 추가
01:27:196 (87196|4,87196|6) - 01:26:071 (86071|2,86071|0) - 하이퍼하고 같은문제
Topic Starter
imariL

[FX] AEM wrote:

4K NM

4K IN

*4K Insane doesn't has SV/BPM change.
and 4K NM need mod a lot too, because i've no idea :(
4K NM is hard to say NM imo(looks like HD difficulty), anyway I'll update it after 17VA's Modding.
Topic Starter
imariL

17VA wrote:

[Another]
00:16:131 (16131|3,16506|1,16694|4) - 매우 약한 비트인데 3개는 어색한듯. 패턴 수정했습니다.
00:19:319 - 빠짐? 뒤에 배경음을 바탕으로 해서 노트를 배치했어요.

[Hyper]
00:40:507 (40507|3) - ~ 00:45:382 (45382|4) -
Divisor 를 1/2로 잡고 빠진 라인에 노트 하나씩 추가하시는게 좋을듯 뒤에 악기음을 바탕으로 노트를 배치했어요.
01:04:414 - 여기... 드럼비트가 있네요 어나더 난이도도 같은 박자로 배치했는데 다른 모더들도 지적시 고치겠습니다. 이부분을 비우는것과 노트를 추가하는것 둘다 괜찮아 보이네요.
01:26:071 (86071|0,86071|2) - 01:27:196 (87196|5,87196|3,87196|1) - 여기 비트가 없는것같네요 저부분은 보컬을 강조하기 위해서 일부러 보컬 리듬에 맞춰서 노트를 배치했습니다.

[Normal]
00:13:693 (13693|3) - 삭제 맨마지막 노트라 노트 3개를 찍었습니다.
00:13:881 - 추가 보컬 리듬에 맞추어 1/2박자로 노트를 찍었습니다.
00:16:881 - 추가 ^
00:43:697 - 추가 이부분은 노말, 하이퍼, 어나더 전부 뒤에 악기음을 중심으로 노트를 찍었습니다.
01:04:508 - 추가 Fixed! 추가해보니 확실히 더 나은것 같네요.
01:27:196 (87196|4,87196|6) - 01:26:071 (86071|2,86071|0) - 하이퍼하고 같은문제 하이퍼와 같은 이유
Thank you for Modding! :D
Alumetorz
Mod as requested (my second mania mod ever, so feel free to ignore haha)

[7K Beginner]
01:09:758 (69758|4,69758|6) – There should only be one note, instead 01:10:508 – here should be 2, because when you listen to vocals it's more dominant there imo
Haha that's it, I can't find anything. I think it's a good Beginner diff (can't tell properly cause I haven't modded nor played any Beginner diffs LOL)

[7K Normal]
00:07:318 (7318|4,7412|2,7506|3) – How about this instead? (remove triplet and instead add note on 00:07:506) You don't have 1/4s anywhere and I think this actually fits better... Just my opinion though
00:13:131 (13131|5,13131|1) – Remove 1 Note and move other to 5th column?)(columns: 1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Because I don't think 2 notes are proper there, since there isn't anything in the music that would require 2 notes imo
00:21:006 (21006|1,21194|5) – These two should be on same column, because of pitch and it would complete the pattern
00:22:131 (22131|6,22319|5,22506|4,22694|3) – I don't think stairs should be placed here, pairs of two fit better to the vocals here (for example this or this, etc)
01:19:883 (79883|0,79883|2) – Remove both notes, because you keep mapping to vocals, this would break the pattern?

[AEM's 4K Normal]
00:01:412 (1412|0) – Move this note to 00:01:506 – instead?
00:01:881 – Add a note here for finish sound?
00:04:693 – That's just a suggestion, but how about adding a note here (on 4th column for example) because of the vocals haha
00:10:693 – What about this? Imo it fits better to the instruments than just 1/2s
00:22:225 (22225|2) – This hold starting on a blue tick feels kinda weird even though I know you intended to map to that fading sound. Just pointing this out, maybe you feel unsure about it too haha
00:24:194 – Add a note there, it feels too empty there (on 3rd column for example)?
00:25:881 – Add a note here because it fits way better to the pattern (on 2nd column)
01:21:383 – Needs one more note here, because of following pattern (4th column)

not yet finished modding, will do the rest tomorrow

[7K Hyper]
00:19:131 (19131|1,19131|0) - (suggestion) How about two holds instead, because of that sound. You could try it out haha
01:26:258 - add a note here and 01:27:008 - here. The kick sounds are way too dominant to ignore them imo (How about something like this?
That's it. I can't find anything else. It's perfect imo haha

[AEM's 4K Insane]
I really like this diff but I think some jacks are a bit too hard compared to the rest of the map, which is rather easy. Like 01:19:413 (79413|2,79506|3,79506|2,79506|1) - this one or this 01:20:163 (80163|1,80256|2,80256|1,80256|0). Just pointing it out, maybe you want to nerf it? You could for example move 01:20:164 (80164|1) - this note to the 4th column. You'd still have the jack, but it'd be slightly easier. You don't need to change anything, I'm just recommending it haha
00:26:819 (26819|1,26913|2,27006|1) - How about something like this instead? Because you always have two notes for vocals emphasizing, it would fit better imo
00:32:631 (32631|0,32631|1) - (suggestion) Make these two holds and move them to 2nd and 3rd column? (screenshot)
00:37:038 - Add note on 2nd column for jack, because of vocals (I think it really fits good here)
00:48:663 (48663|2,49413|0) - IMO these two jacks don't fit there. The part of the song here is just too calm for such a dense pattern. Also it exceeds the difficulty of your map by far. That's just my opinion though :D
00:58:882 - Add two or one note here, because of finish sound and start of kia (1st and 2nd for example)?
01:02:163 (62163|2,62913|3) - As mentioned above these two are very hard too, especially the second one. I'd recommend a slight nerf, but it's up to you...
01:17:164 - Add a note here (on 3rd column) and remove the 3rd one of 01:17:256 (77256|0,77256|2,77256|3), to follow the kick sounds
That's it! Aside from some jacks, I really like this diff :D

[7K Another]
00:19:131 - Just like in other diff, how about adding holds. It'd fit to this sound...
01:12:664 - Add a note?
01:16:508 - (suggestion) There are 2 1/4s sounds following and you ignored them. How about this? Please try it out and see how you like it.
01:28:508 - Add note on 5th column (nazi)?
This diff is so awesome, I really enjoyed playing it!

So that's it, awesome mapset! I hope it will get ranked soon, but you need to place hitsounds, because of the new ranking criteria for mania maps...
Anyways, good luck! :D
[FX] AEM

Alumetorz wrote:

Mod as requested (my second mania mod ever, so feel free to ignore haha)

[AEM's 4K Normal]
00:01:412 (1412|0) – Move this note to 00:01:506 – instead?
00:01:881 – Add a note here for finish sound?
00:04:693 – That's just a suggestion, but how about adding a note here (on 4th column for example) because of the vocals haha I'm not interested in vocal notes though, however I'll waiting for someone mention about this again.
00:10:693 – What about this? Imo it fits better to the instruments than just 1/2s
00:22:225 (22225|2) – This hold starting on a blue tick feels kinda weird even though I know you intended to map to that fading sound. Just pointing this out, maybe you feel unsure about it too haha move LN to redline and add a note at 2nd column 00:22:225 - instead.
00:24:194 – Add a note there, it feels too empty there (on 3rd column for example)?
00:25:881 – Add a note here because it fits way better to the pattern (on 2nd column)
01:21:383 – Needs one more note here, because of following pattern (4th column)

not yet finished modding, will do the rest tomorrow

[AEM's 4K Insane]
I really like this diff but I think some jacks are a bit too hard compared to the rest of the map, which is rather easy. Like 01:19:413 (79413|2,79506|3,79506|2,79506|1) - this one or this 01:20:163 (80163|1,80256|2,80256|1,80256|0). Just pointing it out, maybe you want to nerf it? You could for example move 01:20:164 (80164|1) - this note to the 4th column. You'd still have the jack, but it'd be slightly easier. You don't need to change anything, I'm just recommending it haha waiting for others to mention this part.. again.
00:26:819 (26819|1,26913|2,27006|1) - How about something like this instead? Because you always have two notes for vocals emphasizing, it would fit better imo actually, this part is best for SV change.
00:32:631 (32631|0,32631|1) - (suggestion) Make these two holds and move them to 2nd and 3rd column? (screenshot)
00:37:038 - Add note on 2nd column for jack, because of vocals (I think it really fits good here) added. but move 00:36:944 (36944|1) - to 3rd column. because after playing this part i feel a bit confused.
00:48:663 (48663|2,49413|0) - IMO these two jacks don't fit there. The part of the song here is just too calm for such a dense pattern. Also it exceeds the difficulty of your map by far. That's just my opinion though :DRe-arranged.
00:58:882 - Add two or one note here, because of finish sound and start of kia (1st and 2nd for example)?
01:02:163 (62163|2,62913|3) - As mentioned above these two are very hard too, especially the second one. I'd recommend a slight nerf, but it's up to you... Re-arranged.
01:17:164 - Add a note here (on 3rd column) and remove the 3rd one of 01:17:256 (77256|0,77256|2,77256|3), to follow the kick sounds
That's it! Aside from some jacks, I really like this diff :D
Fixed.

Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui - Maware! Setsugekka (TV Size) (Chocoliti) [[FX] AEM's 4K Normal]
Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui - Maware! Setsugekka (TV Size) (Chocoliti) [[FX] AEM's 4K Insane]

Remove [FX] text on my diff.
like this AEM's 4K Normal, AEM's 4K Insane

no kd.
Topic Starter
imariL

Alumetorz wrote:

Mod as requested (my second mania mod ever, so feel free to ignore haha)

[7K Beginner]
01:09:758 (69758|4,69758|6) – There should only be one note, instead 01:10:508 – here should be 2, because when you listen to vocals it's more dominant there imo Fixed!
Haha that's it, I can't find anything. I think it's a good Beginner diff (can't tell properly cause I haven't modded nor played any Beginner diffs LOL)

[7K Normal]
00:07:318 (7318|4,7412|2,7506|3) – How about this instead? (remove triplet and instead add note on 00:07:506) You don't have 1/4s anywhere and I think this actually fits better... Just my opinion though Fixed!
00:13:131 (13131|5,13131|1) – Remove 1 Note and move other to 5th column?)(columns: 1,2,3,4,5,6,7) Because I don't think 2 notes are proper there, since there isn't anything in the music that would require 2 notes imo Fixed!
00:21:006 (21006|1,21194|5) – These two should be on same column, because of pitch and it would complete the pattern I'll consider it
00:22:131 (22131|6,22319|5,22506|4,22694|3) – I don't think stairs should be placed here, pairs of two fit better to the vocals here (for example this or this, etc) Fixed!
01:19:883 (79883|0,79883|2) – Remove both notes, because you keep mapping to vocals, this would break the pattern? I'll remove it if other modders point this out too.

[7K Hyper]
00:19:131 (19131|1,19131|0) - (suggestion) How about two holds instead, because of that sound. You could try it out haha Sorry, don't want to add more LN because I want to mapping by IIDX style
01:26:258 - add a note here and 01:27:008 - here. The kick sounds are way too dominant to ignore them imo (How about something like this? Fixed!
That's it. I can't find anything else. It's perfect imo haha

[7K Another]
00:19:131 - Just like in other diff, how about adding holds. It'd fit to this sound... Sorry, Same reason!
01:12:664 - Add a note? Fixed!
01:16:508 - (suggestion) There are 2 1/4s sounds following and you ignored them. How about this? Please try it out and see how you like it. Fixed!
01:28:508 - Add note on 5th column (nazi)? Sorry, I prefer this pattern.
This diff is so awesome, I really enjoyed playing it!

So that's it, awesome mapset! I hope it will get ranked soon, but you need to place hitsounds, because of the new ranking criteria for mania maps...
Anyways, good luck! :D
Nice modding! You should make mania maps Alumetorz! :D
Thank you for modding so many diffs
LeiN-
4키난이도만 모딩해드려요~

Line : 1 2 3 4

[AEM's 4K Normal]
00:15:943 (15943|3) - move to 3
00:34:882 (34882|3) - move to 3
00:35:069 (35069|3) - move to 3
00:38:069 (38069|1) - move to 3
00:41:632 (41632|3) - move this LN's start point to 00:41:726 here
00:48:570 (48570|1) - move to 4
00:48:945 (48945|2) - move to 1
00:49:320 (49320|1) - move to 4
00:49:695 (49695|2) - move to 1
00:55:320 (55320|1) - move to 00:55:507 here
00:55:320 (55320|0) - ^
01:17:820 (77820|2) - move to 2
01:17:914 (77914|0) - move to 3
01:18:008 (78008|1) - move to 1
01:20:821 (80821|0) - delete
01:21:008 (81008|2) - delete
01:27:008 (87008|1) - move to 01:27:196 here

[AEM's 4K Insane]
00:19:319 (19319|1) - move to 00:19:412 's 4th column
00:19:694 (19694|2) - move to 1
00:19:131 (19131|2) - ends at 00:19:694 here
00:38:632 (38632|0) - ends at 00:39:194 here
00:39:194 - add on 4
00:51:663 (51663|0) - move to 2
00:55:320 (55320|1) - move to 00:55:507 here
00:55:320 (55320|2) - ^
01:02:632 (62632|0) - move to 2
01:03:007 (63007|3) - move to 3
01:03:382 (63382|2) - move to 2
01:08:914 (68914|3) - move to 3


modding end.

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