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Timing Check
Offset
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BPM
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[7K Another]
Note Placement
00:15:287 (15287|2) - This does not emphasize anything, if you are mapping towards the vocals here, there are 2 vocals that fall on 1/6s on top of this note and on the bottom of this note on the nearest purple line
Overmapping
00:03:099 (3099|2) - No Sound here - Remove
00:06:099 (6099|4) - ^
00:09:100 (9100|4) - ^
00:10:600 (10600|3,12475|4,12662|4,12850|2,13037|2) - ^
00:28:599 (28599|2) - ^
00:31:975 (31975|6,32163|4,32350|5,32538|2) - ^
01:24:102 (84102|1) - ^
01:27:477 (87477|6,87665|4,87852|5,88040|2) - ^
Note Count
00:01:506 - +1 Note | 00:01:693 uses the same instrument and same volume of vocal as 00:01:506 , so there should be a same amount of notes here
00:02:068 (2068|2,2068|6,2068|4) - Why does this have 3 notes when this contains only string instruments while 00:01:881 (1881|0,1881|2,1881|4) - contains both string instruments and a loud kick | Consider removing 1 of the notes
... if done so, fix all the patterns that have this error
00:07:318 (7318|6,7412|1) - I don't think the drums are loud enough for 2 note chords here | Remove one on each chord
00:10:600 (10600|3) - Remove one of these | The extra string instrument here is not loud enough to be emphasized with 2 note chords
00:30:099 (30099|2,30100|4) - ^
00:14:631 (14631|2,14631|6,14631|0) - This has 3 notes and 00:14:818 (14818|1,14818|5,14818|4) - This has 3 notes, also, they are significantly different in volume, I suggest fixing this
00:16:881 (16881|0,16881|2,16881|6,17069|1,17069|5,17069|2) - ^
... 00:15:006 (15006|0,15006|3) - This has 2 notes, it contains vocals, a kick and a light string instrument, while 00:14:631 (14631|2,14631|6,14631|0) - contains only kicks and a light string instrument, there is a major imbalance on note counts here
00:17:256 (17256|3,17256|0) - ^
00:18:006 (18006|2,18006|0) - ^
00:18:381 (18381|0,18381|4) - ^
00:18:756 (18756|0,18756|4) - ^
00:16:131 (16131|3,16131|1) - This contains a bell and a vocal, having 2 notes while 00:16:318 (16318|2,16318|4) - has 2 notes which contain a bell, I suggest you remove one from 00:16:318 (16318|2,16318|4)
00:18:194 (18194|2,18194|5) - There is no vocals here, I suggest you remove one since 00:18:006 (18006|0,18006|2) - has 2 note which contains vocal and string instruments
00:20:069 (20069|3,20069|5,20069|1) - The vocals and string instruments here is not strong enough to have 3 notes compared to 00:19:881 (19881|6,19881|2,19881|0) - which has a loud kick and string instrument
00:20:444 (20444|4,20444|3,20444|6,20631|0,20631|5,20631|2,20819|6,20819|3,20819|1,21006|4,21006|0,21006|5,21194|3,21194|2,21194|6,21381|2,21381|0,21381|5) - You are not emphasizing anything here, when there is a significant difference in volume on every chord
00:22:131 (22131|3,22131|0,22131|5,22319|4,22319|3,22319|1,22506|0,22506|4,22506|6,22694|5,22694|2,22694|1,22881|3,22881|0,22881|6) - There is vocals on the 1st,3rd and 5th chord here, I suggest you add another note on each of those chords
00:23:631 (23631|0,23631|3,23631|1,23819|6,23819|2,23819|4,24006|0,24006|3,24006|5,24194|2,24194|4,24194|1,24381|0,24381|4,24381|2) - ^
00:25:506 (25506|4,25506|6,25881|2,25881|0) - These 2 2-note chords have kick and vocals while 00:25:131 (25131|1,25131|3,25131|5) - This 3-note chord also has kick and vocals, also, 00:25:506 (25506|4,25506|6,25881|2,25881|0) - has 2 vocals merged together
00:25:881 (25881|2,25881|0,26163|5,26163|3,26444|4,26444|2,26631|0,26631|5,26631|3) - Inconsistency of notes here even though mapped notes have almost the same magnitude of volume
00:27:006 (27006|3,27006|5,27006|6,27194|4,27194|1,27194|3) - These have only vocals, while 00:27:381 (27381|0,27381|2,27381|4) - has kick and instrument, consider removing 2 from each chord for 00:27:006 (27006|3,27006|5,27006|6,27194|4,27194|1,27194|3)
00:30:569 (30569|4,30569|2,30569|5) - The vocals here are not louder than 00:30:756 (30756|3,30756|1) - I suggest removing one note from 00:30:569 (30569|4,30569|2,30569|5)
00:30:944 (30944|2,30944|0) - There's a kick here with vocals while 00:30:756 (30756|1,30756|3) - has a kick with no vocals, I suggest to add one on 00:30:944 (30944|2,30944|0)
00:31:319 (31319|3,31319|5,31694|2,31694|4) - ^
00:33:382 to 00:39:382 - It seems you are ignoring the vocals here I will mod according to that :
-=- 00:34:882 (34882|0,35069|2,35257|3) - has kicks while 00:34:882 (34882|0,35069|2,35257|3) - has kicks also, I suggest adding one on each chord of 00:34:882 (34882|0,35069|2,35257|3) to emphasize it
-=- 00:37:882 (37882|1,38069|2,38257|3) - ^
00:39:475 (39475|4,39475|2,39663|2,39663|4) - I don't think the string instrument here is loud enough to have 2-note chords, remove one on each chord
00:40:975 (40975|4,40976|2,41163|4,41163|2) - ^
00:42:475 (42475|2,42475|4,42663|4,42663|2) - ^
00:43:975 (43975|2,43975|4,44163|2,44163|4) - ^
OPTIONAL :
00:39:944 (39944|6,39944|3,39944|1) - The vocals and string instrument here is softer than 00:40:132 (40132|0,40132|2,40132|4) - I suggest removing one on the chord
00:41:444 (41444|3,41444|1,41444|6) - ^
00:42:944 (42944|6,42944|1,42944|3) - ^
00:44:444 (44444|1,44444|3,44444|6) - ^ ( Dat number )
00:46:507 (46507|6,46507|0,46507|4,46694|5,46694|3,46694|1) - There is no kicks here while 00:45:944 (45944|4,45944|2,45944|0,46132|3,46132|6,46132|1) - these have kicks, I suggest to remove one or 2 notes on 00:46:507 (46507|6,46507|0,46507|4,46694|5,46694|3,46694|1) -
Is it just me or have I not seen any sliders??? :
-=- 00:58:132 (58132|6,58132|0,58132|2,58132|4) - Change these to sliders
01:08:070 (68070|1,68070|0,68070|3,68258|6,68258|4,68258|2,68445|5,68445|3,68445|1,68633|4,68633|0,68633|2,68914|5,68914|3,68914|1,69195|4,69195|6,69195|2,69383|1,69383|0,69383|3) - Inconsistent note count with kicks and vocals ( I don't really have to explain )
01:09:570 (69570|6,69570|4,69570|2,69758|2,69758|4) - ^
01:11:258 (71258|6,71258|4,71258|2,71445|3,71445|5,71445|1,71633|6,71633|2,71633|0) - ^
01:12:945 (72945|6,72945|4,72945|2) - ^
01:13:320 (73320|3,73320|2,73320|5) - ^
01:13:414 (73414|1) - ^ ( Kick Falls here instead of 01:13:320 (73320|3,73320|2,73320|5) - )
01:14:070 (74070|5,74070|3,74070|6,74445|3,74445|5,74445|2) - ^
01:15:945 (75945|6,75945|1,75945|3) - ^
01:16:320 (76320|5,76320|1,76320|3) - ^
01:17:820 (77820|6,77820|1,77820|4,78195|6,78195|4,78195|1) - ^
01:18:570 (78570|1,78570|4,78570|2) - ^
01:20:070 (80070|5,80070|2,80070|4,80258|6,80258|0,80258|2,80446|3,80446|1,80446|4) - If you are using 3 notes for chords for the vocals on the 2nd chord, you should have more notes on the 2nd chord
01:27:008 (87008|6) - There's a kick here, there should be more notes
01:27:196 (87196|1,87196|5,87196|3) - There isn't any kick here, remove some
Hit-Sound Check
No Problems here, well placed, there are instances when chords makes the hit-normal a tad bit too loud, but it can be overlooked
SV Check
No Problems, a bit bland though
Kiai Time Check
No Problems
General
Ranking Criteria Check
No Problems
AiMod
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Title Check
No Problems
Pattern Check
00:34:882 (34882|0,35069|2,35257|3,35444|4,35632|6,35819|5,36007|4,36194|6) - I think you are not emphasizing anything here with these 1/2 notes..?
00:37:882 (37882|1,38069|2,38257|3,38444|4,38632|6) - ^
Not going to mod other diffs for now ( tired Q_Q ), call me back if you want more mods, I'll edit more in o/