Zamaro wrote:

Hay! Form my modding queue!
Ok so... I didn't find a lot. My modding skills are not that great for the moment... But the song is greatly timed and all.
Mostly suggestions.


Easy :

00:59:644 (5) - Should probably be changed. I find this boring it shouldn't be this long, the music is still playing! I leave it as it is, I thought that new players need a break so it is just the introduction to the break


deejaydray's Normal :

Colors are not the same as in other difficulties. i don't know if it's okay or not to have this difference, but you should at least change the black color, it's kinda ugly with the background


Hard :

00:14:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part of the combo is perfectly following the vocals, but 00:16:420 (7) - is not... Should be fixed! Changed it to a reverse slider and repositioned it
01:57:774 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Is this ok for an hard diff? There's a jump for 01:58:333 (4,5) - and with 01:58:705 (6) - in the middle, it's a bit confusing. Also, spaces between the notes vary a lot here. So... Maybe re-do the whole combo? V


Insane :

00:31:325 (2) - The acceleration is a bit surprising and the song doesn't really suggest it yet. It's not a big problem, but consider lowering this section to BPM x1,30~1,40 or so. I did it on purpose, and I'll leave it as it is
01:34:578 (5,6) - This section is a bit confusing, I've miss-hit this part a few time. Maybe you should put more space between the sliders so that you can see the approach circles better. Right, I removed the reverse slider and made an other pattern


Arie's Insane :

00:11:203 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - Too imprecise and confusing, you may want to change this part


Yeah... I seriously didn't find a lot...
Well... You're map is already good as it is right know. I'm sure it'll be ranked soon.

• 00:20:146 (1,3) - remove that overlap lightly
  00:23:872 (1,2) - try blanket
  00:38:405 (4) - NC
  00:58:154 (4,5) - bad overlap
  01:35:137 (4,1) - try blanket
  01:39:515 (5,6) - remove that overlap lightly
  01:42:123 (7,1) - bad overlap D:
  01:54:606 (4) - same like 01:55:910 (5) -
  02:19:013 (1) - why used whistle?
  
  [deejaydray's Normal]
  
  • 00:20:146 (2) - move to (196,172) for better flow
    00:23:872 (4) - distance
    00:34:119 (6) - end on 00:34:678 for follow vocal
    01:13:804 (3,4) - better blanket
    01:22:747 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    01:38:210 (6) - end on 01:38:770 -
    01:53:116 (3) - start on 01:52:929 - and add circle on 01:53:488 -
    02:09:326 (4) - same like 02:07:835 (2) -
    
    [Hard]
    
    • I think it is good :3
      
      [Aries's Insane]
      
      • 00:54:986 (5) - NC
        01:00:762 (8) - ^
        01:33:832 (8) - ^
        02:05:040 (5) - ^
        02:12:492 (5) - ^
        
        [Insane]
        
        • 00:06:731 (1,2) - better blanket
          00:12:693 (5,1) - accurate overlap
          00:15:488 (5,6) - better blanket
          00:25:735 (9) - should be start on 00:26:108 - for follow vocal
          00:37:846 (3,4) - accurate overlap
          00:51:260 (2) - i think this is bored ;w;
          01:19:207 (2) - too close
          01:51:439 (6,1) - don't overlap
          01:56:469 (1,3) - switch NC
          02:02:618 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - distance is too confuse
          02:04:295 (1) - avoid overlap with 02:03:363 (10) -
          02:09:139 (6) - NC
          
          Good luck :3

tutuhaha wrote:

！！！！This song ヾ(　´・∀・｀)ノ！！！！
tag: change op to opening
[Insane]
00:06:731 (1,2,3) - make same distance with those three note Pretty cool, should've done that before!
00:08:781 (2,3,4) - ^ :)
00:09:712 (1) - move to x172y80 V
00:10:271 (3) - move to x340y80 V
^try to make it looks more nice
00:13:439 (3,4,5,1) - make same distance with those note I think it was fine but I changed the pattern
00:19:121 (4) - delete will be better about rhythm V
00:22:661 (x) - add note? I like it, added
00:24:431 (2,3,4) - I am sure it is unrank Why is that? 2 then 3 then 4 in on a slider that starts in 2 and ends in 3, it is not unrankable
00:29:275 (x) - you dont need rhythm here I think I think it fits and I like it, I won't remove it
00:30:579 (6,7) - ...space is too close....and also looks not really nice...I suggest to move 7 to x220y104 The thing that was before was nice in my opinion, but your suggestion is even better
00:32:070 (3,4,5,6) - try to make a □ and ctrl+g 4 and 5 Created a square and changed it a bit.
00:33:840 (x) - there should have rhythm, no 00:34:026 Right, changed!
00:36:076 (x) - there should have rhythm, no 00:36:262 V
00:37:939 (x) - note V
00:38:964 (8,9) - unrank I am not sure about that, but I did change the pattern to something better
00:44:553 (1) - this part try to follow music will be more good than follow vocal I follow the vocal on purpose because I like this part in the song
00:55:452 (x) - miss rhythm V
00:55:638 (x) - ^ Also removed the slider and made a stream here
00:58:619 (4) - delete V
01:06:445 (6) - nc V
01:18:834 (1) - delete nc V
01:24:796 (1,2,3,4) - ....try to make same distance Alright, made it look nicer with bigger distance
01:43:800 (2,3,4) - ^ Done!
01:49:762 (x) - miss rhythm V
you need take care of space, it will cause your map beautiful or not.

[Aries's Insane]
00:06:731 (1,2,3) - try to make same space between those three note
00:15:674 (6) - try to make it overlap with slider3's end?
00:16:886 (2) - delete
00:25:176 (4,5) - use slider will be better I think
00:31:138 (x) - there has rhythm I think
01:07:097 (7) - just look at rhythm↓

01:17:623 (5) - delete
01:19:114 (12) - delete
01:31:504 (x) - miss rhythm
01:49:483 (x) - ^
01:51:346 (x) - ^
02:00:382 (2) - begin here, try to use more smooth slider

will finish tomorrow

Feverie wrote:

[Easy]

00:08:595 (1) - Move this to the right a bit. At the moment it is not exactly above the hit Circle. They are, the X of both are 368
00:14:184 (1) - Do not overlap this in the middle of the slider. Try overlapping it at the end of 00:12:693 (6) - This will be just confusing for new players, because the DS won't allow it.
00:23:872 (1) - Slider may confuse new Players. Try to make it straight or one curve. I don't think it will, it is a simple line and a curve, and they will have to learn it anyway from some song
00:51:819 (4) - Try moving this Left a Tad It is fine as it is
01:30:199 (4) - Move this up so it only overlaps with the End of 01:28:336 (3) - Moving it up looking nicer indeed
01:32:808 (2) - Slider may confuse new Players. Try to make it straight or one curve. Same as before
01:54:047 (3) - Move this up so it lines up with the end of 01:53:302 (2) - It should have considerable DS and it does not fit well with your suggestion
01:54:606 (4) - Move this down so it is not overlapping. But put it as close to 01:55:910 (5) - as you can. You are right, done.
01:57:401 (1) - Avoid Overlap Unavoidable, and I think it is fine as it is

Good Luck!

Priti wrote:

You lil' jewderp, its supposed to be written as "Aries' Insane"
Add Can't Buy My Love (Album) to tags
Also, change the artist name to ユイ and put YUI under romanised artist.

Avishay wrote:

Priti wrote:

You lil' jewderp, its supposed to be written as "Aries' Insane"
Add Can't Buy My Love (Album) to tags
Also, change the artist name to ユイ and put YUI under romanised artist.

T(sp)ank you kind sir.

P o M u T a wrote:

please remove 'ユイ'
Source→　(歌手 = singer)
this singer's name is 'YUI'
not need japanese artist name.
i know this singer. because i am japanse and fan.
_____________________________________________________________________________________
WhiteAriesさんもユイにする必要があると思いますか？
私は無いと思います。登録商法って言い方はおかしいですが、YUIさんはユイで見られる事は無いと思います。
ONE OK ROCK がワン　オク　ロックにするのと同じですからね。
製作者と相談してみてください。
_____________________________________________________________________________________
@Priti ユイ is how to read 'YUI'. not correct artist name.
_____________________________________________________________________________________

so, that's all. No kudosu.

-Kirito wrote:

hi ramdom mod:)

[General]
- Uninherited timing points conflict with mii-chan's Muzukashii and RatedNC17's Oni diff. (AiMod) I think it is fine because every creator starts in his own point, can't they?
- Source conflicts with RatedNC17's Oni diff. (AiMod) Fixed

[deejaydray's Normal]
- check to disable Enable Countdown and Letterbox during breaks (AiMod)

01:38:768 - Object's end is not snapped!
01:44:730 - ^

passes only unranked.
rolling star good:D

Anchor wrote:

M4M from my queue


[Easy]
00:43:621 (2) - move to 00:43:435 (2) Seems nicer.
00:44:367 (1) - end at 00:48:093 V
01:03:743 (1) - end at 01:04:488 - or just remove it V
The break time is too long, place note from 01:11:568 There is just one break in the song and the difficulty is easy, I think it is fine as it is
02:20:876 (1) - end at 02:22:181 - V

[Hard]
00:48:093 (1) - too long Changed to few spinners with circles between them
01:10:357 (6) - remove Um, I guess I should.
02:11:747 (5) - add note here V

[Insane]
01:19:393 (1,2) - remove I think it is fine now, the stream starts on a beat and it fits
01:49:948 (4) - Change it's shape...I made it like that on purpose, I think it fits and I like it

Frostmourne wrote:

As promised

General
Overall you can add some clap on every 1st and 3rd white tick in 1 room.
For example, the end of 00:32:070 (1) - and the start of 00:33:188 (3) - to make it more interesting. The current hitsound is quite bland.
Here is the elaborating screenshot. You can add a clap on these yellow marks but in some case, you may have to listen to music closely to check whether it feels right to you or not.


Easy
See about hitsound suggestion in General section
00:11:203 (5) - You may new combo here
00:26:667 (3) - ^
00:39:895 (3) - if you get how hitsound should work, the clap should be on the end of the slider, not the start here.
01:04:861 (1) - the break here is really too long. It uses up almost 1/4 of the whole song, consider mapping some portions here
01:53:302 (2,3,4) - these spacings are confusing to read, please correct them
Problem are pretty much about hitsound. You can reduce overall volume 10-20 % and add some clap as I suggest above.
Placements look fine but some sliders that have repeat more than 1 (e.g. 01:40:633 (6) - ) is not recommended. I would not do that if I were you.

deejaydray's Normal
See about hitsound suggestion in General section
00:12:693 (6) - you can new combo here to not make it too long
00:30:579 (4,1) - spacing between these two notes can be confusing to read for Normal diff. I suggest you move them apart from each other.
Really nice rhythm wise you have there. Just try decorating with some hitsound suggestions and I believe it will be a decent diff.

Hard
00:12:693 (1,2) - I guess stacking them together feels more comfortable and intuitive to read
00:13:625 (5) - see the spacing between the previous and the next. 1.78x and 0.71x is not really a good sign there.
00:14:743 (3) - see the spacing between the previous and the next. 1.21x and 0.74x. As well as above ^
00:17:910 (5,6,7,8) - you shouldn't reduce your default spacing without any sign of music as this does. Here you are using 1.4x 00:16:979 (1,2,3) - and then you suddenly changed to something different in the same combo set. So it's quite a must to fix these first.
00:29:089 (8) - new combo here instead of 00:30:021 (1) -
You may split these notes this way to make it more easy to read.

SPOILER

00:33:747 (1,2) - spacing again between these notes
01:43:614 (1) - slider which has more than 1 repeat is not recommended as I pointed out in Easy diff.
01:55:910 (8) - wrongly snapped

I mod only these points for now. It's just because if you can see some awkward spacings like I suggest above, you can fix them by yourself I am sure.
If you decide to use 1.0x spacing between each notes, you should stick 1.0x spacing throughout the whole map as much as possible. Otherwise you can't get map ranked easily.

Insane
00:51:260 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this is way too loud and overmappped. So it's unrankable to have this way.
01:07:842 (1,2,3,4) - ^ as well. They shouldn't end at blue tick.

It plays ok more than I played last time. But some of spacings like between 1 and 2 here 02:13:424 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - is not good at all.

Sorry but your map seems to have some more works to do, but overall I am sure you can approach the right direction. Start off with your hitsound and spacing as I suggested above

Good luck!

WhiteAries' Insane
Just check overall hitsound (mostly clap). The placements look a bit unnatural sometimes but they play great!

Kibbleru wrote:

from our queue

[WhiteAries' Insane]

00:30:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - space these out more evenly o-o?

00:33:560 (1,2) - blanket better?
01:36:161 (2,3) - ^
01:48:644 (2,3) - ^

00:31:511 (6) - well ctrl+g would be better imo but it sup to u
same with other ones

01:20:139 (3,4) - make these parallel?
01:18:648 (8,1) - ^

01:27:964 (4,1) - this overlap doesn't look so good

fk sry not good at modding harder maps


[Insane]

00:15:488 (5,6) - blanket here? It was a blanket from the beginning, but I made a wider one now.
00:06:731 (1,2) - ^ There's blanket and it is totally fine
01:03:184 (5,6) - ^ After re-looking at this part I've decided to change the pattern there a bit
01:10:823 (1,2) - ^ Made the blanket better, for (5) as well.

00:34:492 (8,9) - blanket better Uhm, I guess I should.
01:51:066 (6,7) - ^ Seems totally fine for me.

00:35:424 (2,5) - errg this overlap.. I see no problem in this overlap, the map is AR9 so if you'll play it won't interrupt at all and it is great and flows well.

00:37:287 (5) - better flow if it was ctrl + h I did it like this on purpose and I think it is flows well and just harder from your pattern

00:41:572 (7) - move this down a bit for better flow, ofc change 00:42:131 (1) too if you did the previous it flows good in my opinion and I think they're should be in a good distance from the big sliders

00:44:553 (1) - looks kinda bad Changed pattern I guess, I probably was too lazy to change it from long time ago :

01:10:078 (1,2,3,4) - might look better if these formed a diamond made it neater

01:13:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - slightly confusing to read This is the purpose of this part regualar 1/2 distancing beteween each note and it is challenging a bit

01:13:431 (1,9) - stack these Weps, I didn't notice that, fixed

01:41:564 (7) - ctrl + hj? I like it, changed

01:46:595 (1,2) - don't really like this overlap I do like it :<

01:48:458 (1) - not sure this is rankable I've seen worse getting ranked, if a BAT will tell me this is unrankeable I'll change it.

there should be at least 1 spinner o-oI don't like spinners, so.. :<


[Hard]

00:14:370 (2,3) - doesn't flow well. one way to solve is if you ctrl + g either (3) or (2), or you can ctrl + h (2) Used ctrl + h on (2), thanks

00:16:233 (6,4) - stack? fixed

00:16:420 (7) - angle this more upwards so it goes into (5) and (6) better V

00:22:009 (4,6) - why not blanket Made a better blanket
00:34:306 (2,3) - ^ It is a blanket, just a bit spaced

00:48:093 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - there's not enough time for players to react to the sudden circles AR is 7 and the spinners are not short, this is not hard to react and seems fine

01:07:842 (1) - make this less curved like (3) V

01:15:853 (6,7,8) - this might look better suggestion: http://gyazo.com/e4cd3e74a5c5ee35b620623fd94435da Changed, thanks.

01:32:249 (2,3) - not a big fan of this overlap, doesn't look good I think it is fine
01:46:595 (1,2) - this overlap is pretty bad imo, either make it fully overlap or don't overlap The overlap was poorly a mistake, removed the overlap

01:48:644 (1) - too hard to read, not sure if its rankable either Um, changed.

01:57:960 (2,6,1) - stack? An other mistake by me, fixed
01:58:519 (5,3) - ^ V

02:14:914 (5,7) - stack this better fixed


[deejaydray's Normal]

00:26:108 (1,3) - stack the ends?

00:26:108 (1,2) - blanket? http://gyazo.com/c6799d9ded694fda414e5eb604db0a25

01:13:804 (3,4) - when you have a curve and a linear slider together like this, it doesn't really look good, make them both linear or both curved
there are others like this too

not much here, maps pretty good


[Easy]

00:25:363 (2,1) - blanket? It is kind of blanket now, the distance snap won't let me make the distance smaller.
01:35:137 (4,1) - ^ Made it better

01:30:199 (4,2) - this overlap is kinda bad Why? there's a note between them and they have a big enough time difference
01:41:378 (7,8) - ^ I think it is fine, but I can't make it better because of the distance snap
01:54:606 (4,5) - ^ I think this overlap is fine, obviously I would have made the distance bigger, but distance snap won't let me :\

watch out for some of your overlaps



Great map in general! gl

Kibbleru wrote:

from our queue

[WhiteAries' Insane]

00:30:579 (1,2,3,4,5) - space these out more evenly o-o?

00:33:560 (1,2) - blanket better?
01:36:161 (2,3) - ^
01:48:644 (2,3) - ^

00:31:511 (6) - well ctrl+g would be better imo but it sup to u
same with other ones

01:20:139 (3,4) - make these parallel?
01:18:648 (8,1) - ^

01:27:964 (4,1) - this overlap doesn't look so good

fk sry not good at modding harder maps

Raiku wrote:

Raiku mod!

[General]

6732 Offset. Make sure this is universal in all your diffs.

[Easy]

A few too many spinners in my opinion, this can wear the new player out.

I would recommend combing over your combos again so that all your new combos start on the first bar in 4/4 time.

00:08:222 (3) - I'l start this off by suggesting you move this up a touch to make it a neat line, it was slightly out of place (http://puu.sh/77Yjf.jpg).

00:14:184 (1) - In this circumstance, I would ignore the overlap here and create some distance between the head of this slider and the body of the previous one. Note that this IS an easy and you want to provide the beginner with easy reading, manageable sections. I suggest creating a blanket to avoid the whole collision (http://puu.sh/77Yyv.jpg). Don't worry about the distance snap because its a new combo.

00:17:910 (3,1) - Move 3 up however you like so you avoid an overlap with 1. Here's my suggestion (http://puu.sh/77YLb.jpg).

00:20:146 (1) - I feel you should line this up with the previous slider so it comes straight out of the exit. Looks better and
flows better (http://puu.sh/77YNF.jpg).

00:21:636 (3) - I would suggest moving this slider along to the right a bit as it clashes with note 1 a little. I would then recommend you alter the curve of the slider to it matches the curve of hitcircle number 2 so you create a prettier pattern (http://puu.sh/77Z0Z.jpg).

00:25:363 (2) - This one is a little nazi and I don't mean to flood you with tiny alterations but I believe the way a map pieces together through little things is integral to overall playability and enjoyability of the mapset. Move this slider down a little so the blanket is even with the
head of the next slider (http://puu.sh/77Zc5.jpg).

00:42:503 (1) - Slider head to body overlaps like this have the potential to confuse the player, you can avoid this by moving this first point of the slider up a bit on 1/2 beat snap divisor to reveal the whole body of the slider without changing its length (http://puu.sh/77Zov.jpg).

01:15:667 (4) - How do you feel about moving this note above the 2 sliders? This way you can avoid an overlap with the first circle of the next combo AND have a welcome change in flow direction for a split second (http://puu.sh/77ZzO.jpg).

01:30:199 (4) - You could possibly make the tail of this slider fit perfectly in the body curve of the slider it ends on to make it look neater and avoid multiple slider head/tail cluster collisions (http://puu.sh/7802y.jpg). You can see how I've used the points to shape this slider for a guideline.

01:35:230 (4) - The snap was off on this slider, here's the correct length of the slider you were going for to match
the breakdown beats (http://puu.sh/780j0.jpg). I would arrange the combo like this for maximum impact (http://puu.sh/780tz.jpg).

01:37:652 (2) - The head overlaps the body of this slider, I feel like more should be revealed so here's my
alternative structure (http://puu.sh/780EM.jpg).

01:41:378 (7) - I recommend flipping this slider on the y-axis so it blankets the other one and you avoid a weird flow change. You are also by doing this avoiding an overlap like so (http://puu.sh/780PA.jpg).

01:42:123 (8) - New combo here at the start of the next timing phrase.

01:45:104 (3) - And again here for the start of the next phase after the pause between notes. The spacing between these notes is too short for it not to be highlighted with a new combo or it will confuse people.

01:48:085 (5) - Rotate this slider so it at least fits the line of the next slider. Also move it so the head and tail are hugging the body line of said slider. You also avoid an overlap. I recommend rotating it by these settings: (http://puu.sh/7815E.png). You can open rotate menu with ctrl+shift+r but make sure rotate origin is set to selection center before rotating. I arranged it like this (http://puu.sh/781l1.jpg). Also NC here.

01:54:606 (4,5) - I recommend these 2 sliders blanket a little better like this (http://puu.sh/781q4.jpg).

On a side note, with the insane before I mod it, there are quite a few overlaps which can the map look untidy. Remember, even though it is AR9 and it wont LOOK like a collision, it still in the players eyes disrupts the symmetry and evenness of the map in general.

Consider the curve of sliders in accordance to where the next or previous note is to maintain a smooth steady flow which I can see you are going for so good luck.

I'm going to come back and mod the rest of these diffs, but I felt easy needed the most work so i'l leave it at this till I've finished work! Good luck!

Jehyeon wrote:

[Easy]

00:10:085 (2) - same suggestion V

SPOILER

00:23:872 (1) - Shape is slightly skewed. V

SPOILER

00:33:188 (3) - Round slider Why? I think it is really fine as it is and adds a bit to the map
00:41:013 - add note here Follow the vocals V
01:41:378 (7) - ctrl + g V
02:06:344 (5) - Delete and repeat 02:07:462, 02:07:834 - add a note to your I think I understood what you meant, and I did it for the next pattern as well

[deejaydray's Normal]

00:36:541 (5) - add repeat? Follow the vocals I'll post on dray's behalf, if he thinks this is wrong I'll remove it, but I think you are correct

good job diff no pick

[Hard]

00:13:439 (4) - spacing please V
00:14:743 (3) - Blanket. This will look better.V and I tweaked it a bit more

SPOILER

00:18:655 (8) - this slider end 00:19:214 - here Tweaked NC and changed sliders there a bit
00:37:287 (10) - ctrl + g V

Good Luck

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi, from my queue here.
Sorry, I'm really late and kind of busy these days, so I just point out some general setting stuff and skip hitsounds atm. I will mod it detailedly when I have time. ;__;

General

1. BG size is not standard, a standard one should be of 1366*768 or 1024*768. I have resized it for you, feel free to use it
   
   SPOILER

   
   Thank you!
2. Your offset throughout the whole mapset is inconsistent, and this is unrankable according to the ranking criteria.
   

   Ranking Criteria wrote:

   Uninherited timing sections must be the same in every difficulty of the mapset. That is, each section must have the same BPM and offset in each difficulty. Furthermore, there must not be extra or missing uninherited sections in any difficulty. A song's timing doesn't change between difficulties, so there's no sense in having different uninherited sections per difficulty.

   Done in my diffs, will wait for Dray and Aries to do theirs.
3. Consider using custom combo colors which fit your background? Or you can follow the Normal which has custom combo colors. But remember all diffs must have consistent combo colors. V
4. The box 'Letterbox during breaks' is not consistent. I strongly recommend you to tick the box in all difficulties

V

WhiteAries' Insane

1. Some unnecessary green lines are found, please delete them: 00:08:968 - 00:56:477 and 01:41:937 .
2. 01:09:519 (1) - End this at 01:10:450 with a solid sound heard at here.
3. 01:28:336 (5,1) - This kind of overlapping bothers me, how about you?
4. One suggestion is placing those streams in a more curvy way, like what you did at 02:12:492 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) , it's much more comfortable for players to stream with some angles.

Insane

1. 00:08:968 - 00:45:857 - 00:47:348 - 00:48:279 - 01:41:564 These green lines are unnecessary, please delete them. The last one is a SV change, everything else fixed.
2. 00:53:216 - This green line is duplicated with different volumes. Place one green line at a time point only. V
3. 00:44:553 (1) - I think you better don't use this kind of slider coz in this thread, this kind of technique has been discussed recently.

You convinced me to change the slider are in that part

Hard

1. 01:30:858 - This green line is unsnapped, snap it to 01:30:851. V
2. 00:53:962 - 01:47:620 - Unnecessary green lines again. V
3. 00:10:085 (2) - This DS is really confusing, when I testplayed it, I hit it right after end of 00:09:340 (1) . V
4. 00:17:538 (4) - Stack with 00:17:165 (2) perfectly would be a lot aesthetic imo. V
5. 00:48:093 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I wonder if it is necessary to use so many spinners here. I suppose the music here is really powerful and it's still the kiai time, so I recommend you map these instead of placing spinner spams. Trust me, it would be a lot more fun. XD I'll leave it as it is, this is a known and weird pattern but I think it fits and I like it here.
6. 01:08:960 (3) - As mentioned above, this DS.. DX This is a hard diff and I think a jump is just fine here
7. 01:30:199 (8) - NC this for the sake of cutting the combo number. V
8. 01:35:975 (1,1) - Remove NC. There is nothing special here imo. V
9. Well, I would say you shd find a consistent pattern of placing NC, for example, NC every 1/2 big white tick(s), or follow the vocal. It would be much more neat and clean if you do so.
10. 01:48:644 (1) - Mentioned above. V
11. 01:51:066 (1) - End this at 01:52:557 and place a circle at 01:52:929 , which, as a player, is a lot comfortable. Also, move this 01:53:302 (1) to 01:53:116 & remove the NC to follow the lyrics perfectly, like what you did at 01:54:606 (6) , 01:55:910 (9). V, didn't notice that
12. 01:59:823 (2) - DS, it makes me hit immediately after the previous slider again. V
13. 02:15:473 (7) - Are you sure this slider is readable? I would recommend you place a few grids different from 02:14:914 (5) such that players can notice them even without a transparent skin. Um, I changed the pattern but the spacing is a bit jumpy, but it should be fine.

Normal

1. 00:06:732 - 01:05:792 - Both are unnecessary green lines. Please delete them.
2. Take a look at the AImod and you will find two objects' ends are not snapped.
3. The SV is really really slow for this diff (and why all use 0.5x in the timing session? I can't figure out why.. If all of them are 0.5x, why not change it here? 1.4*0.5=0.7, in fact Normal normally has a SV of 1.0-1.2x), and it makes no sense that Normal has the same SV as Easy lolll, tho the placements of rhythm make it like a Normal.
4. 02:19:386 (1,2) - DS, make sure the DS is consistent throughout the whole diff.

Easy

1. 00:06:732 - 02:22:367 - Both are unnecessary green lines. Please delete them. V
2. I think what you can is to change the DS to 0.7x instead here.
   
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3. 00:41:013 (1,1,1) - These NC are not necessary imo, coz there aren't any tricky stuff involved. V
4. 00:54:427 (3) - DS, make sure you check the whole diff for consistent DS. I snapped it just for the previous note, there's the NC and the song change so the minor DS change should be fine
5. 01:37:652 (2) - ^ I stop spamming you here about the DS, please check them once yourself because I am too lazy and my nickname is IamPiG. V, I am lazy as well hehe
6. 01:44:359 (1,1,1) - Mentioned ^^^^^ V
7. As for the NC, please check out what I hv mentioned in the Hard diff.

All in all, some more work is needed on this mapset and questions are always welcomed. If you really find difficult to understand what I'm talking about, just pm or find me in game! Good luck!