ごめん適当だからこれｗｗｗAlternative wrote:
Clapは2,4拍目に置くべきじゃないか？と思った
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eLy wrote:
ごめん適当だからこれｗｗｗAlternative wrote:
Clapは2,4拍目に置くべきじゃないか？と思った
ああ＾～
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thanks !!Zexous wrote:
Really nice map ^_^
ありがとう！
wow is epic map :O
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thanks ![ OxyDian ] wrote:
wow is epic map :O
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thanks Beard !-Beard- wrote:
Super fun to play, great map! :3
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強い。-Heart- wrote:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1825906
senpai pls can i make gd pls I'm mokori approved bb
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I think so, tooRickput wrote:
Amazing beatmap and even more amazing song <3 uwu
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wow !!VINXIS wrote:
senpai pls can i make gd
Which diff ?
ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeLy wrote:
wow !!VINXIS wrote:
senpai pls can i make gd
Which diff ?
any diff u want me to do, if u want me to choose then I'll probably make something somewhere between around insane lmao idk lol i love this song
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I'll leave that to you !!VINXIS wrote:
ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
any diff u want me to do, if u want me to choose then I'll probably make something somewhere between around insane lmao idk lol i love this song
ok ayeeeLy wrote:
I'll leave that to you !!VINXIS wrote:
ayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
any diff u want me to do, if u want me to choose then I'll probably make something somewhere between around insane lmao idk lol i love this song
Ohai, I had made a 5.10 star map of this song and noticed this mapset needs GDs. I think my difficulty would make a nice addition to this mapset as Another.
Here, you can download and check the standalone map: http://puu.sh/f3mjR/7673c5fe88.osz (hitsounding on it is not complete)
Here, you can download and check the standalone map: http://puu.sh/f3mjR/7673c5fe88.osz (hitsounding on it is not complete)
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SDCassu2 wrote:
Ohai, I had made a 5.10 star map of this song and noticed this mapset needs GDs. I think my difficulty would make a nice addition to this mapset as Another.
Here, you can download and check the standalone map: http://puu.sh/f3mjR/7673c5fe88.osz (hitsounding on it is not complete)
Another → 5.10×
Another → 4.3~4.65○
Are they able to lower SD ... ?
No, sorry. Oh well. I'll just upload it as my own map then. Sorry to bother you. Great map, by the way!eLy wrote:
SDCassu2 wrote:
Ohai, I had made a 5.10 star map of this song and noticed this mapset needs GDs. I think my difficulty would make a nice addition to this mapset as Another.
Here, you can download and check the standalone map: http://puu.sh/f3mjR/7673c5fe88.osz (hitsounding on it is not complete)
Another → 5.10×
Another → 4.3~4.65○
Are they able to lower SD ... ?
amazing. really
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wow ! thaaanks ><AuThisH wrote:
amazing. really
amazing song, amazing map, hope it gets ranked ^-^
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thanks ~P3NGU1NZ wrote:
amazing song, amazing map, hope it gets ranked ^-^
nice song 
Extra:
01:33:543 (1,2,3) - These three should probably be lined up more neatly.
01:59:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Consider breaking the combos (and spacing) in this stream up more naturally.
02:02:857 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - If there has to be a change of pace in the middle of this stream, it should probably be on 9 and not 8.
02:08:343 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Likewise here, consider changing pace on an even beat (uneven combo number) like it's done here: 02:13:828 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12)
02:23:514 (4,5) - This gap is quite large, considering these are 1/4 notes.
02:40:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream should probably also be more organic.
Otherwise I love this map to death. Get it ranked.
Another:
00:46:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider spacing this so the rhythm is more intuitive.
01:50:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider having more combos in the slow part here.
Also, the last post is probably right, the sheer speed and complexity of this map probably means having the circles clustered this close together makes it harder and not easier. A more appropriate star rating would be achieved by a little larger spacing throughout. But I suppose, to distance this diff from the extra, it's can be argued that it's fine.
Hyper:
This needs to be comboed up before I can do any reasonable modding.
Normal:
02:24:971 (2,3) - Error here
Easy:
00:52:743 (1,1) - Time between slider and next object is very short
Over all I love it. Please, keep working on it.
01:33:543 (1,2,3) - These three should probably be lined up more neatly.
01:59:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Consider breaking the combos (and spacing) in this stream up more naturally.
02:02:857 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - If there has to be a change of pace in the middle of this stream, it should probably be on 9 and not 8.
02:08:343 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Likewise here, consider changing pace on an even beat (uneven combo number) like it's done here: 02:13:828 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12)
02:23:514 (4,5) - This gap is quite large, considering these are 1/4 notes.
02:40:743 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This stream should probably also be more organic.
Otherwise I love this map to death. Get it ranked.
Another:
00:46:571 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider spacing this so the rhythm is more intuitive.
01:50:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Consider having more combos in the slow part here.
Also, the last post is probably right, the sheer speed and complexity of this map probably means having the circles clustered this close together makes it harder and not easier. A more appropriate star rating would be achieved by a little larger spacing throughout. But I suppose, to distance this diff from the extra, it's can be argued that it's fine.
Hyper:
This needs to be comboed up before I can do any reasonable modding.
Normal:
02:24:971 (2,3) - Error here
Easy:
00:52:743 (1,1) - Time between slider and next object is very short
Over all I love it. Please, keep working on it.
Man this map is so unbeliavably addictive,
but the new hitsoudns suck so much
I've had default hitsounds (using Azer's ones) and it sounded so fucking cool and soothing.
I am saddened I have to ignore hitsounds for this map.
but the new hitsoudns suck so much
I've had default hitsounds (using Azer's ones) and it sounded so fucking cool and soothing.
I am saddened I have to ignore hitsounds for this map.
This map is really good. One of the things I would change about it is the combos. You should add because the numbers go up to 20-30 and it would be nice if it wasn't that high.
Random modding~
[Easy]
really nice set, call me back when the Hyper is finished and I'll recheck~ sorry for NC spam on Hyper w
[Easy]
- 02:37:999 (3) - object end not snapped
- 00:04:743 (3) - object too close to previous
- 00:55:143 (2,3) - could maybe blanket the tail of 00:55:143 (2) - ?
- 01:08:857 (1) - move the tail down to avoid the overlap with 01:07:486 (3) -
- 02:33:886 (1,2) - can you avoid the overlap here?
- 00:14:857 (6,7) - too close to previous object
- 00:14:857 (6) - NC?
- 00:17:257 (11,12) - ^
- 00:19:143 (9) - ^
- 01:26:000 (2,1) - create better blanket?
- 01:27:714 (3,1) - ^
- 00:07:486 (7) - NC
- 00:29:428 (8) - NC
- 01:00:628 (10) - NC
- 01:03:371 (10) - NC
- 01:08:857 (12) - NC
- 01:11:600 (10) - NC
- 01:14:343 (9) - NC
- 00:58:400 (7) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/jhZyQ/13561614d0.jpg this feels a lot better to play. you leave out notes here 00:58:743 and here 00:59:000 and you could map them ~
- 01:02:428 (8) - move this to 01:02:343 there's a drum beat here and this feels strange on a blue tic. you could also add another 1/4 slider like this http://puu.sh/jhZRe/43c0089f52.jpg
- 01:03:971 01:04:228 01:04:486. add notes here? I think a whole stream feels better to play
- 01:07:914 (6) - same as I mentioned earlier move it back a tic and add another 1/4 slider
- 01:20:343 (6) - same as mentioned back at 00:58:400 http://puu.sh/ji0a1/da4d416c8b.jpg
- 01:21:200 (3) - extend this to the next blue tic and have 01:21:457 (4) - start at 01:21:286 so it catches the drum beat you miss here
- 01:24:371 (5) - same as before here move it back a tic and add 1/4 slider
- 01:29:857 (6) - ^^
- 02:09:800 02:10:057 02:10:314 add notes at these
- 02:10:571 (7) - if you do the above add NC here, not add NC here anyway~
- 02:13:743 (6) - you know about this by now ww
- 02:30:200 (5) - :3 ^
- 02:35:686 (6) - ;w; ^^
- 02:12:457 (3,4) - this stack under the tail feels really strange to me, maybe not stack them?
- 02:31:657 (3,4) - same here
- 02:41:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make this stream look nicer?
really nice set, call me back when the Hyper is finished and I'll recheck~ sorry for NC spam on Hyper w
Hello, eLy
Im gonna start the first two diffs first
you can ask me in game if you have problems with Hyper, Insane and Extra
General:
Untick Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks because there is no storyboarding
from 02:44:857 until the outro, the melody is still playing
dont be lazy to map this part
add ' dnb ' , ' drum and bass ' in tags
Easy
some HP bars in other skins are huge (idk why)
00:04:743 (3,4) - move this upwards, it'll hit the HP bar if played with HR (unrankable)
00:11:257 (1) - ^ without HR
00:13:657 (3,4) - ^ with HR
00:20:857 (4) - move this a bit lower, Im worried ;w;
00:45:543 (4) - it hit the HP bar with HR
00:52:743 (1,1) - after spinners, you should make at least 1/1 space time for Easy, this lets new players to recover from the spinner and react to the next hit circle
00:54:457 (1) - new combo
01:01:657 (2,3) - might hit the HP bar with HR
01:07:486 (3,4,1) - to be safe, I dont recommend overlapping and old slider with a new combo slider (depends on the situation), this stresses out the user
01:17:086 (1) - move this a little bit upwards because of HP bar with HR
01:32:171 (1) - ^
01:39:028 (3) - this is really unfriendly for new users to co-op with, dont put something like this underneath a slider or they'll combo break and missed it
put this somewhere else and new combo it
01:55:486 (1) - HP barrr HR
02:14:686 (1,2,3) - not quite sure about this but, move this a bit lower
02:19:486 (4) - dont do this
02:40:057 (2) - ^
02:41:428 (4) - ^
02:42:114 (1) - doesnt flow well with the previous object
There's some untidy blankets, please fix that
00:04:743 (3,4) - move this upwards, it'll hit the HP bar if played with HR (unrankable)
00:11:257 (1) - ^ without HR
00:13:657 (3,4) - ^ with HR
00:20:857 (4) - move this a bit lower, Im worried ;w;
00:45:543 (4) - it hit the HP bar with HR
00:52:743 (1,1) - after spinners, you should make at least 1/1 space time for Easy, this lets new players to recover from the spinner and react to the next hit circle
00:54:457 (1) - new combo
01:01:657 (2,3) - might hit the HP bar with HR
01:07:486 (3,4,1) - to be safe, I dont recommend overlapping and old slider with a new combo slider (depends on the situation), this stresses out the user
01:17:086 (1) - move this a little bit upwards because of HP bar with HR
01:32:171 (1) - ^
01:39:028 (3) - this is really unfriendly for new users to co-op with, dont put something like this underneath a slider or they'll combo break and missed it
put this somewhere else and new combo it
01:55:486 (1) - HP barrr HR
02:14:686 (1,2,3) - not quite sure about this but, move this a bit lower
02:19:486 (4) - dont do this
02:40:057 (2) - ^
02:41:428 (4) - ^
02:42:114 (1) - doesnt flow well with the previous object
There's some untidy blankets, please fix that
Normal
00:09:886 (3,1) - please be consistent about the spacing here , it doesnt look fine
00:12:628 (3,4) - I dont think this'll work well
00:14:000 (5) - new combo
00:15:371 (7) - I dont think so
00:16:743 (10) - new combo
00:17:771 (12) - I dont think so too
00:19:143 (14) - ^
00:19:486 (15) - new combo
00:21:543 (18) - put this slider somewhere else for the player to read better
00:24:971 (1) - this overlap doesnt look great
00:35:257 (3,4) -
00:36:971 (6) - I really dont recommend putting this under a slider but its your choice
00:38:000 (8) - I think this slider should have the same shape like the previous slider but dont change the flow
00:43:143 (4) - overlap doesnt look so good
00:57:886 (1) - ^
00:56:514 (1) - remove new combo
00:59:257 (1) - ^
01:02:000 (1) - ^
01:04:743 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:486 (1) - ^
01:10:228 (1) - remove new combo
01:11:600 (4) - new combo
01:12:971 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:200 (1) - ^
01:23:943 (1) - ^
01:26:686 (1) - ^
01:29:428 (1) - ^
01:30:800 (1) - overlap not good
01:32:171 (1) - remove new combo
01:33:543 (1) - overlap not good
01:34:914 (1) - remove new combo
01:37:657 (1) - ^
01:39:028 (3) - new combo
01:51:371 (2) - slider's shape doesnt look so good, I suggest you copy the previous slider
01:52:743 (3) - ^ also new combo
01:58:228 (8) - new combo
01:58:314 (1,1) - same reason as Easy
02:02:343 (1) - remove new combo
02:05:086 (1) - ^
02:07:828 (1) - ^
02:10:571 (1) - ^
02:16:057 (1) - ^
02:21:543 (1,1) - same reason as Easy and this spinner is too fast for Normal
02:22:914 (1) - remove new combo
02:24:286 (1) - ^
02:27:029 (1) - ^
02:29:772 (1) - ^
02:32:515 (1) - ^
02:35:257 (1) - ^
02:37:315 (2) - might hit HP bar with HR
02:38:000 (1) - remove new combo
02:40:743 (1) - ^
02:42:115 (1) - overlap doesnt look so good
02:44:857 (7) - new combo
, it doesnt look fine 00:12:628 (3,4) - I dont think this'll work well
00:14:000 (5) - new combo
00:15:371 (7) - I dont think so
00:16:743 (10) - new combo
00:17:771 (12) - I dont think so too
00:19:143 (14) - ^
00:19:486 (15) - new combo
00:21:543 (18) - put this slider somewhere else for the player to read better
00:24:971 (1) - this overlap doesnt look great
00:35:257 (3,4) -
00:36:971 (6) - I really dont recommend putting this under a slider but its your choice
00:38:000 (8) - I think this slider should have the same shape like the previous slider but dont change the flow
00:43:143 (4) - overlap doesnt look so good
00:57:886 (1) - ^
00:56:514 (1) - remove new combo
00:59:257 (1) - ^
01:02:000 (1) - ^
01:04:743 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:486 (1) - ^
01:10:228 (1) - remove new combo
01:11:600 (4) - new combo
01:12:971 (1) - remove new combo
01:21:200 (1) - ^
01:23:943 (1) - ^
01:26:686 (1) - ^
01:29:428 (1) - ^
01:30:800 (1) - overlap not good
01:32:171 (1) - remove new combo
01:33:543 (1) - overlap not good
01:34:914 (1) - remove new combo
01:37:657 (1) - ^
01:39:028 (3) - new combo
01:51:371 (2) - slider's shape doesnt look so good, I suggest you copy the previous slider
01:52:743 (3) - ^ also new combo
01:58:228 (8) - new combo
01:58:314 (1,1) - same reason as Easy
02:02:343 (1) - remove new combo
02:05:086 (1) - ^
02:07:828 (1) - ^
02:10:571 (1) - ^
02:16:057 (1) - ^
02:21:543 (1,1) - same reason as Easy and this spinner is too fast for Normal
02:22:914 (1) - remove new combo
02:24:286 (1) - ^
02:27:029 (1) - ^
02:29:772 (1) - ^
02:32:515 (1) - ^
02:35:257 (1) - ^
02:37:315 (2) - might hit HP bar with HR
02:38:000 (1) - remove new combo
02:40:743 (1) - ^
02:42:115 (1) - overlap doesnt look so good
02:44:857 (7) - new combo
flow is great but too much unreasonable overlap and new combo
please be consistent about combo colors, it represents new melody usually used in piano rolls
WISE WORDS:
but try to keep combo consistent, here a trick. Maybe try doing a new combo one every 2 big white stick for your map. - Julie
good luck !
awesome map. really fun to play.
GO RANKED!
GO RANKED!
Humblest wish and petition to bring back the kick sliders and short streams to Extra that were replaced by the back and forth sliders.
I literally just began crying irl because the back and forth sliders killed jumping and the fast flow the streams that I enjoyed most in this map. This first time ever I've bothered to bleed in forum about beatmap changes but THIS map was literally one of the best (if not the best) and most enjoyable map I have played in my 3 year time in Osu! until those were changed TT^TT
Pretty Pliz... <3
I literally just began crying irl because the back and forth sliders killed jumping and the fast flow the streams that I enjoyed most in this map. This first time ever I've bothered to bleed in forum about beatmap changes but THIS map was literally one of the best (if not the best) and most enjoyable map I have played in my 3 year time in Osu! until those were changed TT^TT
Pretty Pliz... <3
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i don't think so ( '-' )HeXGaruDo wrote:
Humblest wish and petition to bring back the kick sliders and short streams to Extra that were replaced by the back and forth sliders.
I literally just began crying irl because the back and forth sliders killed jumping and the fast flow the streams that I enjoyed most in this map. This first time ever I've bothered to bleed in forum about beatmap changes but THIS map was literally one of the best (if not the best) and most enjoyable map I have played in my 3 year time in Osu! until those were changed TT^TT
Pretty Pliz... <3
thank you for your honest opinion !