alright lets see
Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommendedRed is unrankable[General]
on Hard Insane and Regou'd diff: 00:09:627 - snap to 00:09:669your preview time is unsnapped; snap to either 00:48:877 or 00:49:991[Easy]
00:14:422 (2,3) - it would be easier to play if you arranged this part like this:
00:35:808 (1) - try having this spinner start at 00:35:660 to follow the vocals, feels more natural to me
01:01:947 (1,2) - hmm this plays a bit weird since you were following vocals with 01:01:947 (1) but switched to instrumentals at 01:03:135 (2); would be great if you shortened 01:01:947 (1) to 01:02:541 for a simpler rhythm
[Normal]
00:02:986 (2,3) - follow the guitar here?
00:11:006 (3) - the amount of rhythm spacing change here is way too complicated, try making this a repeat slider starting at 00:10:858
00:17:838 (4) - use a finish here?
00:48:877 (1) - finish on spinner
00:56:006 (3,4) - hmm i wouldnt stack this here, its the only stack of its kind in the map and is not really predictable by the music, hence it might surprise some players
01:09:075 (1,2,3,4) - the rhythm here felt a bit weird, its better if you used a pattern that followed the vocals here:
[Hard]
00:14:422 (1,2,3) - the flow here felt really unexpected during my initial test play, its much more natural if you stacked 00:14:422 (1) on 00:14:570 (2,3) instead
00:37:442 (2,3,4,5,6) - if you follow the music here more precisely, the doubles should stack in pairs: 00:37:590 (3,4) - these should stack together and 00:37:887 (5,6) - these together
00:44:719 (2) - why not use a repeat slider here to convey the piano smashing in the music? you can delete 00:45:016 (3) and have a break here for players instead (end 00:44:719 (2) at 00:45:016)
00:58:382 (1) - why does the end have a soft sample? makes the hold sound awkward
01:12:640 (1) - to follow the music better remove this NC and place it on 01:13:234 (4)
[Insane]
00:09:075 (4,5,6,7) - i dont personally have a problem with this, but some people might get confused on how the last slider face an opposite direction; ctrl+g on 00:09:224 (5) would solve this problem
00:16:501 (5,6,7,8,1) - i always had problems here, because the standard stream following a slider pattern starts on the blue tick, but you started it on the white before, leaving an extra note which i always "forget" to hit. remove 00:16:501 (5) and extend the slider there
00:39:075 (7) - use a finish on the start instead?
01:01:353 (3) - because of the effect 01:00:462 (4,1) brings, its best to NC here too so you get a nicely "colour haxed" overlap pattern
01:04:323 (1) - manually stack this, the current stack causes 01:04:026 (1) to shift up which breaks your stack pattern
[Regou's Insane]
its better to name this Extra considering how much harder it is compared to the Insane (I passed the Insane on first try, this diff took me 7)also OD+1 would better suit the difficulty here, dont worry about the star rating people will know by the name
00:16:501 (4) - NC here, good indicator of change in rhythm and the coming fail spike
00:27:788 (2,3) - its quite tempting to hit this as 1/4 spacing due to the nature of the map's flow, would advise you move this even furthur
00:36:773 (6,1) - this is really hard to read when stacked, since 00:36:773 (6) is technically an overmap here and players will usually hit it too late
00:53:927 (2,3) - this feels a bit awkward to play since the vocals were completely skipped over here, its best to use the 3/4 slider first, then the 1/2 slider starting at 00:54:224
00:59:570 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern flows really bad after the huge jump at 00:59:273 (7,8); most of the time i would miss 00:59:719 (2) because im tempted to do a bigger jump due to the previous combo. You can try ctrl+r on 00:59:719 (2,3) which will allow the transition to be smoother
01:14:125 (2,3) - i think you meant to perfectly center this?
Let me know after you are done with this (also dont forget to reply to the mod above)
It got ranked without me noticing xD