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Came here from mod queue.
Hi! Nice map, but I think it requieres an Easy. If you don't mind, can I make one? (through I don't guarrantee I have the time, motivation or creativity). You know, to practice.

General

-Try to use an audio editor to get away of those 6 seconds (aproximately) of pure silence at the start.
-You could try and start mapping at the very start... I think it's a good area to do something. If you don't want at the start, you could begin from 00:20:697 (without audio editions).

Hard

01:57:756 (1) - This shape is weird (or so I feel...)
-After the last spinner you could put something (to compensate for those special effects...)

That's all. I'll wait for your answer! :)
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The diff spread is ok for ranking criteria considering the "less 3" star rating for the easiest diff and I don't want to add any guest here (maybe I can do it by myself but idk I want to keep it as it is now). Thank you very much for checking anyways and for requesting! <3
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Hey~ From modding queue.

[Normal]

- 00:41:432 (3,3) - This is probably better if not overlapping with 00:41:874 (1) -
- 00:50:697 (1) - Maybe vertical inversion? Just to have the wave pointing down, looks better I guess
- 01:09:006 (2) - I was going to say to try blanket on this, but then I saw 4 and it looks bad. maybe try to place 2 exactly opposite to 4?
- 01:10:109 (1) - rotate this clockwise just a little bit, just because :D
- 01:24:006 (4,2) - feels to me like an angle that's not properly easy to do at lower levels. Maybe https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1713857 ?

Seems fine and beautiful otherwise

[Hard]

- 00:44:300 (5) - Make this curve the same as 3

Not much to say, very beautiful as well.

Good luck with this, beautiful song <3
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Thank you all 3 of you guys! I will check the mods today after italian tournment ew
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Hello.Chewin.

[Normal]

00:47:609 (2) - Remove finish,and add whistle? I think it is no downbeat here.
00:59:300 (3) - Keep a space for play easy,so I suggest remove note,because there is no vocal here,so remove it can fit the music.
01:03:050 (1) - Follow vocal ,perhaps can add Whistle here?
01:17:168 (1) - As above.
01:34:815 (3) - ^
01:45:403 (1) - ^

[Hard] (The hitsound "whistle: you can add the same in nm diff,so I don"t recomment here.)

00:47:609 (2) - As the Normal diff.
01:11:212 (3) - Perhaps can stack better? With(01:10:109 (1) )
01:31:285 (5) - Listen the music seems can make jump? (ctrl+g)
01:48:932 (1,2) - ^

Overrall so good,so I shoot a star for you!
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Hi Chewin~ M4M~

[General]
I suggest the sakura you used in Storyboard add a Outer glow and it will fit better, since there is sawtooth if you use the original pic .

this one is with a pink glow

and this one is with a white glow
Just choose the one you like,I prefer the pink one,but the white seems better through the whole song.


lyrics are also suggested :D make them if you like ~
I can also make the pics for you (though I think you can make them by yourself?



And I think that epilepsy warning should be on since it flashes here 00:06:579 and here 01:15:403

[Normal]
00:41:874 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think too many stuffs stack here maybe. I try to make it like this

hope you'll understand what I'm drawing zzzzzz
And you can also move the place of 00:41:432 (3) to make it better.
00:44:962 (2) - In this case ↑ I suggest it be a slider to make the flow feel better.
01:15:403 (1) - I think the song is going up here,make it a slider to fill in the gap may sound better.

[Hard]
First I list some places I suggest you add notes to fit with other patterns.
00:41:763
00:48:822
01:21:469
01:29:190 - If you would change here,you may change the slider.
01:43:528

01:33:050 (3) - I think the direction of this slider can be changed to make it look better~

I really like to see if you place a sakura pattern in this diff :3 It seems that the circles just go other directions :(
And I love the way you place notes in this diff very much >////< Maybe I'll learn something from it~


I also love this song~
Good luck :D
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Fixed some of them, thank you guys! About whistles, i'm not going to use them in this song, I alternated normal and drum samplesets only!
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examination wrote:

I suggest the sakura you used in Storyboard add a Outer glow and it will fit better, since there is sawtooth if you use the original pic .

this one is with a pink glow

and this one is with a white glow
Just choose the one you like,I prefer the pink one,but the white seems better through the whole song.
It seems heavy with the glow... I think I'll keep it how it is at the moment =/


lyrics are also suggested :D make them if you like ~ I can't find the lyrics ._.
I can also make the pics for you (though I think you can make them by yourself?


And I think that epilepsy warning should be on since it flashes here 00:06:579 and here 01:15:403 Okay
Thanks for suggestions \:D/
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Kenterz wrote:

examination wrote:

lyrics are also suggested :D make them if you like ~ I can't find the lyrics ._.
I can also make the pics for you (though I think you can make them by yourself?
Thanks for suggestions \:D/
Sure I find the lyrics for you :D

First , Artist should be れるりり and Romanised artist Rerulili
The romanised title should be Itsumo Yori Nakimushi Na Sora

Since this song is a cut ver,so I also cut the lyrics here~
6時半を過ぎて辺りは 
もう暗くなった帰り道
急に降り出した雨に
ハザードランプが反射する

イヤフォンを外したら雨音が
少し切ない気分にしてくれた

いつもより泣き虫な空
傘の無い僕はまるで
誰かの気紛れで
調子はずれに吐かれた鼻歌の気分さ

いつまでも泣き虫な空
だから僕は歌を歌ってんだ
悲しまないで また僕を照らして
posted
wow thanks *-* I really needed the artist and title name.
Will update tomorrow, thank you once again
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hello~Chewin-chan

[Normal]

  • Rhythm
  1. 00:42:756 (3,4,5) - I think this 2 sliders' ds should be the same as 00:33:491 (1,2,3) -
  2. 00:52:021 (2,1) - This parten should be adjusted imo.
  3. 01:44:521 (3,4,1) - Note 4 is should be moved up a little,it's have good flow
  4. 01:49:373 (2,3,1) - Wow,I love this return. :3


[Hard]

  • Rhythm
  1. 00:41:432 (6,3) - Stack is not well.
  2. 01:02:829 (4,1) - This slider isnt comfortable in playing.
  3. 01:59:962 (3,4,5) - slider 3's end and 4 and 5's start is not in a strairht line,If 4 is a kink,4 and 5 should use a jump.
  • Sound Effect
  1. 00:41:874 - to 01:15:293 - I recommended this parten you can reduce the Finish effect's volume to 30%.Because this music is soft. :3

excellent mapset

☆┏ (゜ω゜)=☞
posted
Storyboard updated with the lyrics =D

SB folder : http://puu.sh/9uouJ.rar

.osb : http://puu.sh/9uoxr.osb
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Rotte: Thank you so much! Fixed almost everything :3
Kenterz: Awesome <3 Updated!
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Bubbled!
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Yales wrote:

ahah wat
Thanks MMzz <3
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Chewin wrote:

Yales wrote:

ahah wat
Thanks MMzz <3
+ = rabbit bubble face xD
congrats for rank in advance!
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Chewin wrote:

Rotte: Thank you so much! Fixed almost everything :3
Kenterz: Awesome <3 Updated!
Wow,bubbled,it's quicklly :>
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Hmm...why do you have 2 OSB files and why maxresdefault.jpg is unused in the Storyboard? :<
Also on Hard difficulty, these notes at 01:56:432 (2,3,4) are not perfectly stacked!
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because i suck
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