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Nitta Emi, Mimori Suzuko & Uchida Aya - Susume Tomorrow (TV

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Kiyura_old
115 posts
Joined November 2012
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Kiyura_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, March 15, 2014 at 6:15:03 PM

Artist: Nitta Emi, Mimori Suzuko & Uchida Aya
Title: Susume Tomorrow (TV Size)
Source: Love Live! School Idol Project
Tags: Kousaka Honoka Umi Sonoda Kotori Minami u's muse ending 1
BPM: 100
Filesize: 22497kb
Play Time: 01:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.36 stars, 103 notes)
  2. Insane (4.98 stars, 308 notes)
  3. Normal (3.44 stars, 154 notes)
Download: Nitta Emi, Mimori Suzuko & Uchida Aya - Susume Tomorrow (TV Size)
Download: Nitta Emi, Mimori Suzuko & Uchida Aya - Susume Tomorrow (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Love Live! School Idol Project Ending Theme (Episode 1 & 12)
Easy - PM me if you want to make it, if not, i'll make it myself :3
Normal - 100% (me)
Hard - WIP 60%
Insane - 100% (me) --- Hitsound helped by Vicho
Trying to make the insane crazy :3
Valentine Day- I got a new spirit to continue the map.... REVIVED!
testplays and mods are most welcomed
(2/18) BG, mp3 changed
(3/15) Insane tweaked for better flow
Last edited by Kiyura_old , edited 15 times in total.
toara_fict
1,319 posts
Joined July 2012
toara_fict
First :3

Good song & fun map >u<
Kiyura_old
115 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Kiyura_old
thx :3
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
GO FOR KIYURA!!

SEMANGAT YA!!
Kiyura_old
115 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Kiyura_old
._. thanks :v
Vicho
887 posts
Joined May 2009
Vicho
yay, let's go!
SPOILER
2013-12-09 04:20 Vicho: hi~
2013-12-09 04:20 *Vicho is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/325173 Nitta Emi, Mimori Suzuko & Uchida Aya - Susume Tomorrow (TV Size) [Insane]]
2013-12-09 04:20 Kiyura: yeah? :3
2013-12-09 04:21 Vicho: just wonder if you want some help with hitsounds, some sounds kinda weird ><
2013-12-09 04:21 Kiyura: sure :3
2013-12-09 04:21 Kiyura: which part is weird?
2013-12-09 04:24 Vicho: why don't you try this :3? http://puu.sh/5GY1O.osu
2013-12-09 04:25 Kiyura: wait
2013-12-09 04:25 Kiyura: be right back
2013-12-09 04:28 Kiyura: let's see
2013-12-09 04:32 Kiyura: osu crashed XD
2013-12-09 04:33 Vicho: lol xD
2013-12-09 04:33 Kiyura: yep it's better... far better >_<
2013-12-09 04:33 Vicho: :3
2013-12-09 04:33 Kiyura: pro :3
2013-12-09 04:34 Vicho: 00:48:987 (8) - you should add a whistle, I forgot to add ^^'
2013-12-09 04:35 Kiyura: right~ added
2013-12-09 04:35 Vicho: the map is so crazy, I like it :D
2013-12-09 04:36 Kiyura: seems many high rank player like it? 0_0
2013-12-09 04:36 Vicho: lol
2013-12-09 04:37 Kiyura: post in the forum if you want to >< i'll kd you :3
Kiyura_old
115 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Kiyura_old
Thanks a lot Vicho :3
loved your hitsounds :3
keeeeeeko
353 posts
Joined May 2012
keeeeeeko
hi-!

This mp3 is unrankable.
Rules
The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.
You can use this one if you don't mind!
http://puu.sh/5PA2X.mp3
Kiyura_old
115 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Kiyura_old

keeeeeeko wrote:

hi-!

This mp3 is unrankable.
Rules
The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.
You can use this one if you don't mind!
http://puu.sh/5PA2X.mp3
umm... actually, I myself changed this mp3 into 192 kbps...
and i think it shows in the AI mod if my bitrate is wrong, but it didn't show up. :)
AImod

thanks for checking :)
Kiyura_old
115 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Kiyura_old
"Valentine Day- I got a new spirit to continue the map.... REVIVED!" + completed normal :v

decided to continue the map, any help would be appreciated :v
[ Scarlet Red ]
379 posts
Joined September 2013
[ Scarlet Red ]
Normal
- AR, for a normal map, AR is too slow, maybe increase it by one? Just my opinion, I think Easy deserves that better than normal, although the map is a bit too hard for easy haha.
- Parts such as: 01:24:671 (1,2,3) - 01:29:723 (1,2,3) - 01:34:776 (1,2,3) - and 01:38:566 (3,4,5) - are an abrupt change of tempo, this is a difficulty of normal, so you have to think of it in a noobie or semi-noob's point of view. It might be too difficult for one. It was a bit weird for me and I play insane haha, but for insane difficulties you can get away with it!

Hard
- HORRIBLE! HALF THE MAP IS BLANK!!!!! (Just kidding, I know it's WIP :3)

Insane
- 00:51:988 (2) - Ugly crooked note, fix it with moving the middle point and straightening the end point a bit
- 00:53:408 (7) - ^
- A lot of notes are very far apart throughout the map, now this is my mapping style but I don't feel going across the map is completely necessary...(then there is the big black....that was way too overmapped hahaha)
- 01:31:302 (6) - Another strange slider, might need to raise the middle point
- 01:38:250 (5,6,7) - Strange little set of sliders, you might need to fix those since going back three times isn't all that pretty

Overall, great map, favorited for sure, if you want you can check my new and improved (updated map), maybe favorite that too if you think it deserves it, bye!!! :3

M4M
Kiyura_old
115 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Kiyura_old

reyder wrote:

Normal
- AR, for a normal map, AR is too slow, maybe increase it by one? Just my opinion, I think Easy deserves that better than normal, although the map is a bit too hard for easy haha. didn't really want to change it... if other modder says this, i'll change
- Parts such as: 01:24:671 (1,2,3) - 01:29:723 (1,2,3) - 01:34:776 (1,2,3) - and 01:38:566 (3,4,5) - are an abrupt change of tempo, this is a difficulty of normal, so you have to think of it in a noobie or semi-noob's point of view. It might be too difficult for one. It was a bit weird for me and I play insane haha, but for insane difficulties you can get away with it! no, because this is normal diff, that rhythm is made for kiai section. if this is an easy, I can consider, but this is normal.

Hard
- HORRIBLE! HALF THE MAP IS BLANK!!!!! (Just kidding, I know it's WIP :3) oh you :P

Insane
- 00:51:988 (2) - Ugly crooked note, fix it with moving the middle point and straightening the end point a bit changed
- 00:53:408 (7) - ^ changed
- A lot of notes are very far apart throughout the map, now this is my mapping style but I don't feel going across the map is completely necessary...(then there is the big black....that was way too overmapped hahaha) this is playable.. i myself don't want to make overmapped maps, i want to make fun maps :3
- 01:31:302 (6) - Another strange slider, might need to raise the middle point changed, also there's a reason for this :3 look at 01:30:039 (2,3,4,5,6) - 's pattern :v
- 01:38:250 (5,6,7) - Strange little set of sliders, you might need to fix those since going back three times isn't all that pretty I don't see any problem here?

Overall, great map, favorited for sure, if you want you can check my new and improved (updated map), maybe favorite that too if you think it deserves it, bye!!! :3

M4M
thanks for the mod! it helps :)
BCslav
19 posts
Joined July 2012
BCslav
Normal

Overall, I'd turn up the AR by 1. It feels really slow for a Normal imo.

00:52:466 (2) - This note is on the same tick as the slider, probably a mistake.
01:06:907 (6) - This note also is completely out of place.
01:16:481 (3) - Same issue.
01:12:355 (2,1,2) - I'd change that to something like this: (orange 3,4 are the same as 1,2)
SPOILER

Hard

00:14:379 (7) - Not sure if this is intended, but I'd recommend sticking to one snap distance (unless it's a different timing section).
The rest I'm not going to mention, since it's clearly a WIP.

Insane
00:54:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - That section feels kind of weird, like it follows vocals and then suddenly skips to barely hearable chimes. Dunno, maybe it's just me :3

The rest of the maps look well done :3
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
P o M u T a
hi. your queue.

[General]
  1. your mp3 need 192 kps. try this http://puu.sh/70HQu.mp3
[Normal]
  1. AR3 is really low. try 4 or 5.
  2. 00:41:723 (1) - add finish slider head.
  3. 00:44:250 (1) - ^
  4. 00:45:671 (1) - 2 repeat is hard read imo. 1 repeat + circle better.
  5. 00:46:776 (1) - i want note this time. big white line, so, heavy sound.
  6. 01:04:144 (4) - add whistle.
  7. 01:19:144 (4) - add finish slider end.
  8. 01:40:460 (2) - add finish slider head.
[Insane]
  1. 00:55:934 (4) - one grid up. so, overlaps.
  2. 01:03:039 (4) - 2 grid down. same reason.
  3. 01:18:039 (3) - x:276 y:52?
good luck
Kiyura_old
115 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Kiyura_old

BCslav wrote:

Normal

Overall, I'd turn up the AR by 1. It feels really slow for a Normal imo.

00:52:466 (2) - This note is on the same tick as the slider, probably a mistake. dunno what you mean
01:06:907 (6) - This note also is completely out of place. ^
01:16:481 (3) - Same issue. ^
01:12:355 (2,1,2) - I'd change that to something like this: (orange 3,4 are the same as 1,2)
SPOILER
Changed this

Hard

00:14:379 (7) - Not sure if this is intended, but I'd recommend sticking to one snap distance (unless it's a different timing section). changed to different rhythm
The rest I'm not going to mention, since it's clearly a WIP.

Insane
00:54:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - That section feels kind of weird, like it follows vocals and then suddenly skips to barely hearable chimes. Dunno, maybe it's just me :3 it's just you :3

The rest of the maps look well done :3 Thanks :)

P o M u T a wrote:

hi. your queue.

[General]
  1. your mp3 need 192 kps. try this http://puu.sh/70HQu.mp3
I thought i have already make the mp3 192kbps... the AImod didn't show anything, anyway I changed just in case

[Normal]
  1. AR3 is really low. try 4 or 5. ok
  2. 00:41:723 (1) - add finish slider head.ok
  3. 00:44:250 (1) - ^ ok
  4. 00:45:671 (1) - 2 repeat is hard read imo. 1 repeat + circle better. ok
  5. 00:46:776 (1) - i want note this time. big white line, so, heavy sound. ok
  6. 01:04:144 (4) - add whistle. ok
  7. 01:19:144 (4) - add finish slider end. ok
  8. 01:40:460 (2) - add finish slider head. ok
[Insane]
  1. 00:55:934 (4) - one grid up. so, overlaps. ok
  2. 01:03:039 (4) - 2 grid down. same reason. ok
  3. 01:18:039 (3) - x:276 y:52? ok
good luck
thanks for both mods... updated : BG change, mp3 change, hard continued a little :3
kogasa_old_1
123 posts
Joined July 2011
kogasa_old_1
Hello! From my modding queue! :P

Normal
00:21:579 (3) - The hitting on the blue tick sounds very off. Try this instead.

01:09:671 (3) - Please move this to the white tick, this might be hard to hit accurately.
01:12:197 (2) - ^
01:14:644 (1) - ^

Hard
-The entire intro of the song should use distance snap or at least not be so far apart. It's a slow part of the song, it doesn't need to be so jumpy.
00:14:379 (6) - There does not need to be a jump this big here.
00:39:197 (1,2) - Stack these.
00:45:513 (2) - Move onto white tick and repeat it once more.
00:48:355 (5) - Repeat this slider for better rhythm.
00:50:881 (5) - ^
00:53:408 (5) - ^
00:58:460 (5) - ^
01:05:092 (3,4,5) - Add another circle on the white tick.

-There is not much good flow to be honest, you should probably go back and fix it before moving forward.

Insane
-Err... There are a lot of problems with this difficulty. The rhythm is good, but the flow is very strange at most parts, and unfitting.
-Lower the SV. With a BPM of 190 it does Not need to be at 1.80.
-Lower the distance spacing as well. 1.5-1.8 please.

00:17:379 (5,6) - Move these. Try to line up 6 with 4.
00:19:179 (9) - Move this to be in the slider's path.
00:46:460 (5) - Put 5 in the center of the pattern.
01:07:144 (5) - NC
01:08:881 (4,5) - Move 4 down a little so you can put 5 where 1 was.
01:11:092 (3) - Line this up with 1 diagonally.
01:11:881 (5) - Move this so it's about the same distance from 3 as 1 and 2 were.
01:43:618 (5,6,7,8,9) - Placement for this pattern is just... bad.

You'll probably ending up having to edit this map heavily or remapping it, but this is the advice I have for you now.

That's it. Good luck with your map!
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