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Nekomata Master+ - Nightbird Lost Wing [Osu|Taiko]

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[Twinkle]
179 posts
Joined October 2012
[Twinkle]
M4M from your Q
I can only mod stardard. ;w;

[Easy]
01:03:312 (1) - this spinner may close at this point
SPOILER

[Leader's Normal]
00:44:365 (1) - remove NC
00:45:786 (1) - ^
00:51:944 (1) - ^
00:54:470 (1) - ^
00:56:996 (1) - ^
00:59:523 (1) - ^
01:25:733 (5) - add nc
01:26:049 (1) - remove nc

[Sonnyc's Hard]
I think the drop sound effect is used too many. u may remove some
01:02:996 (1) - add a note at the starting point of the spinner and put the spinner backwards

[Insane]
00:50:365 (3) - make this slider slow down may fit the rhythm better
01:00:470 (1) - ^

nice song! good luck
Leader
osu! Alumni
1,849 posts
Joined January 2011
Leader
Just fixed two/three things, leaving CS4 and the current combo scheme

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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: nightbird lost wing.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75628
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nightbird Lost Wing
TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Leader's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
Tags:TKSalt Leader Sonnyc Reflec Beat Colette Naoyuki Sato autumn
BeatmapID:371438
BeatmapSetID:128070

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
Inyuschan

Inyuschan wrote:

Random M4M, I posted my map in your queue. ^^

o3o - Suggestions
o3o - Highly suggestions

[Insane]

I think AR:9 is too much, consider adding only AR:8. >_< think about AR 8. i want to make it as AR 9!

00:02:523 (1) - Remove NC. No!
00:28:891 (1) - ^ and add it to 00:29:907 (3). fixed!

[Easy]

CS:2 instead of CS:3 maybe? no, i want to make it CS 2


That's all, nice mapset and song. :) GL~

[box=[Twinkle:1337]]

[Twinkle] wrote:

M4M from your Q
I can only mod stardard. ;w;

[Easy]
01:03:312 (1) - this spinner may close at this point i can't see your screen shot image.. :o i don't know what you mean but, i fixed this spinner a little bit. ;)
SPOILER


[Insane]
00:50:365 (3) - make this slider slow down may fit the rhythm better no
01:00:470 (1) - ^ no

nice song! good luck

Thanks!
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
Updated ;)
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Fixed by request
Freya

Freya wrote:


  • [Sonnyc's Hard]
  1. 00:04:418 (2) - change to clap then change 00:04:575 (3) tail to whistle, i thinks sounds better // Added Whistle at the head of (3) instead.
  2. 00:06:470 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:08:996 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:10:733 (1) - i thinks it's nice if you put soft whistle // Whistle at 00:10:891 (2,4) will be enough.
  5. 00:17:365 - i hear drum here ad note please // That's not that strong to emphasize, and tick will be fine enough.
  6. 00:17:996 - ^
  7. 00:18:470 (7) - move it far abit, so flows better with next slider http://puu.sh/6ZEtl.jpg // The spacing was based on the end of 00:17:839 (5).
  8. 00:29:049 (3) - i think it's wrong snapped, must be 1/6, look at insane, or i think i know your intention to put notes between 2 1/6 beat notes
    i don't really good at this, so ask another experienced mapper maybe, or if you think it's okay leave it as is // Well didn't noticed that this is empty. Well I should look for more opinions
  9. 00:59:996 (2,3) - at first glance i think it's 1/2, it sure confusing, consider unstack, yah if you say no make the stack more perfect // Changed spacing.
  10. 01:05:839 ~ 01:10:812 . i don't feel right with the clap at ths part, make it sounds like insane maybe? // I think it's fine.

    i feel a bit don't right with the rhytym on this diff, but since i'm not really experienced with rhytym itself maybe we leave as it is, or ask next modder
Neta

Neta wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
    1. 00:08:996 (1,3) - 패턴을 앞과 똑같이 하는게 좋을듯합니다 // 이 부분만 좀 이질적이긴 하네요. 그렇지만 다음 노트 흐름상 이제 와서 바꾸기 곤란할듯요<<
    2. 01:06:470 (2) - 차라리 노트 2개로 바꾸는게 패턴상 좋지 않을까 싶습니다 // 음,, 큰 차이 없는거 같은데 슬라이더로 두고 싶습니다.
Inyuschan

Inyuschan wrote:

Random M4M, I posted my map in your queue. ^^

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:05:839 (1) - Remove NC. // Nah, having it the same combo with previously is really nonsense in hp drain, and the time gap.
00:07:733 (1) - ^
00:10:733 (1) - ^
00:15:944 (1) - ^
00:20:996 (1) - ^
00:22:733 (5) - Move it to x:360 y:344, then put (6) in the same place, overlapping (5). // Sorry, I want a square pattern here.
00:23:839 (1) - Remove NC. // Bell emphasis.
00:27:628 (3) - I think a curve slider would look better, if you do that move it to x:320 y:20. (: // Sure it'll be, but prefer an aesthetic here.
00:31:418 (5, 1) - Repeat only slider (5). Then move (1) to x:255 y:317 to follow next note. // Can't understand the meaning here, but I want to give symmetry<<
00:40:418 (1, 2) - Remove NC at (1) and add it to (2). // Following the music, I think my selection is better,, Still 00:42:944 (5) added NC here instead.
00:41:681 (1, 2) - ^
00:45:944 (3) - Maybe it would look better if you move it to x:280 y:288, since it's overlapping 00:46:891 (1). // Since the overlapping part is the head, it's nearly unoticable when playing.
00:51:628 (6) - Ctrl+J and move it to x:96 y:328. :3 // Curving down, and breaking flow with the next slider was my selection here, and I want to keep the flow.
01:00:312 (3) - Maybe overlap on (2)? Looks weird for me. >_< // Fixed
01:14:523 (3) - I think it would have a better flow if you move it to x:288 y:160. // Looks good.
Twinkle

[Twinkle] wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
I think the drop sound effect is used too many. u may remove some
01:02:996 (1) - add a note at the starting point of the spinner and put the spinner backwards // Fixed
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75628
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:Nightbird Lost Wing
TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Sonnyc's Hard
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
Tags:TKSalt Leader Sonnyc Reflec Beat Colette Naoyuki Sato autumn
BeatmapID:372047
BeatmapSetID:128070

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

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//Break Periods
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88,288,51628,2,0,B|54:288|54:288|18:308,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,212,51944,6,0,B|56:164|40:120|40:120|40:92|52:64,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,88,52418,2,0,B|204:100|240:48|296:60,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,92,52891,2,0,P|416:132|416:232,2,150,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,53839,6,0,L|204:308,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,54154,2,8,L|308:308,1,75
352,216,54470,2,0,P|312:156|240:140,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,172,54944,2,0,B|136:128|148:76|200:52|200:52|244:36|280:48,1,225,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,304,55891,6,0,P|384:316|340:324,2,75,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,208,56365,2,0,B|440:168|440:168|420:136,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,64,56681,2,0,B|330:82|330:82|290:78,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,60,56996,6,0,B|156:56|156:56|112:64|60:112,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,192,57470,1,6,0:0:0:0:
12,196,57944,2,0,B|36:244|88:272|88:272|148:284|204:260,1,225,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,188,58575,6,0,P|296:168|332:164,1,75,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,196,58891,2,0,P|456:220|476:252,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,284,59207,2,0,L|344:300,3,37.5,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,312,59523,6,0,P|244:312|152:264,1,150,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,192,59996,1,10,0:0:0:0:
96,192,60312,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,96,60470,2,0,B|120:88|156:116|156:116|208:116|208:116|244:88|290:91,1,225
386,101,61102,2,0,P|353:166|284:188,1,150,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,212,61575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,280,61733,2,2,P|300:284|336:276,1,75
416,232,62049,6,0,P|424:308|372:368,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,380,62523,1,4,0:0:0:0:
48,304,62996,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63075,12,8,65207,0:0:0:0:
192,88,65839,6,0,P|244:56|320:88,1,150,4|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,284,66470,2,0,P|304:304|260:316,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,284,66786,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,168,67102,6,0,P|352:136|360:88,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,52,67418,2,0,L|256:127,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,168,67733,2,0,P|160:136|152:88,2,75,8|0|8,3:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,296,68365,6,0,B|304:296|304:296|256:324|208:296|208:296|184:296,1,150,8|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,236,68839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,144,68996,2,0,B|68:96|92:56|92:56|120:40|146:36,1,150,8|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,36,69628,2,0,B|392:40|420:56|420:56|444:96|432:144,1,150,8|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,236,70102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,188,70260,2,0,B|296:168|296:168|256:160|216:168|216:168|188:188,1,150,8|8,3:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,284,70733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,70891,6,0,L|256:84,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,71365,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,80,71523,2,0,P|52:112|40:160,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,244,71839,2,0,P|55:279|78:308,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,340,72154,2,8,B|236:340|236:292|308:292,1,150
405,292,72628,5,0,0:0:0:0:
468,216,72786,2,0,P|484:180|488:136,1,75,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,48,73102,2,0,P|428:32|384:28,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,52,73418,5,2,0:0:0:0:
216,228,73733,2,0,P|140:224|136:148,2,150
288,160,74523,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74681,12,8,75628,0:0:0:0:
112,160,75944,6,0,P|84:184|64:220,1,75,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,248,76260,2,0,P|188:272|208:308,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,304,76575,2,0,P|323:272|352:248,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,216,76891,2,0,P|428:184|400:160,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,127,77207,2,0,P|313:92|304:56,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,56,77523,2,0,P|198:92|208:128,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,224,77839,2,0,B|224:228|256:208|256:208|288:228|328:224,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,296,78470,6,0,P|108:268|92:220,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
95,141,78786,2,0,P|113:109|144:88,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,151,79102,2,0,L|294:151,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,87,79418,2,0,B|408:104|416:144|416:144|432:224,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,312,79891,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,312,80048,2,0,B|392:316|356:280|356:280|300:280,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,212,80523,2,0,P|210:243|204:280,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,376,80839,1,2,0:0:0:0:
124,336,80996,6,0,P|92:312|64:264,1,75,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,192,81312,2,0,L|112:192,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,100,81628,2,0,P|93:70|124:48,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,81944,2,0,B|272:108|304:76|360:96,2,150,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,20,82891,2,0,P|432:52|444:88,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,176,83207,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,328,83523,6,0,P|276:344|184:328,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,232,83996,2,0,B|228:236|256:260|256:260|284:236|324:232,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,160,84470,2,0,B|360:124|296:120|256:156|256:156|216:120|152:124|120:160,1,300,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,68,85260,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,52,85418,2,0,B|224:48|256:66|256:66|288:48|328:52,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,224,86049,6,0,B|424:264|424:264|404:292,1,75,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,348,86365,2,0,B|324:308|324:308|304:280,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,280,86681,2,0,B|188:308|188:308|188:348,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,292,86996,2,0,B|88:264|88:264|88:224|88:224|88:184|64:152|64:152|40:120|40:80,1,225,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,84,87628,2,0,P|172:80|216:56,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,144,87944,2,0,P|300:104|292:4,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,176,88575,6,0,B|420:212|456:232|456:232|464:272|432:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,368,89049,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,299,89207,2,0,P|284:331|276:368,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,288,89523,2,0,B|196:328|192:368|192:368|124:352|64:280|60:208,1,300,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,115,90312,2,0,P|100:124|131:145,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,96,90628,2,0,P|227:131|224:168,2,75,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,48,91102,6,0,P|322:119|316:193,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,280,91575,1,2,0:0:0:0:
184,240,91733,2,0,P|144:228|84:236,1,75,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,324,92049,2,0,B|160:348|192:364|232:368|232:368|284:372|340:364|372:308|356:248,1,300,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,160,92996,2,0,P|216:231|272:280,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,296,93628,6,0,B|480:244|456:200|456:200|428:152,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,72,94102,2,0,B|336:100|332:152|332:152|296:160|276:192,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,248,94575,2,0,P|296:276|224:100,1,300,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,44,95365,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,20,95523,2,0,P|128:68|96:148,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,328,96154,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96233,12,0,98681,3:0:0:0:
GugUCorn
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↑Updated! 감사합니다 ㅎㅎ ;)
Sonico Makaron
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Sonico Makaron
Hi!

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
Fix this.
SPOILER

[Leader's Normal]
00:11:523 (1,2) - Play little weird, maybe make rhythm like this?
SPOILER
00:17:839 (3) - Add finish.

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:10:733 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here, remove it.
00:15:944 (1) - How about ctrl+g? it will get better flow imo.
00:16:575 (1) - Add finish at the head slider
00:17:207 (3) - Add NC.
00:23:839 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here imo.
00:47:207 (2) - Make perfect stack.
00:47:365 (3) - ^
01:02:996 (1) - This is not a new rhythm, will be better if you remove NC.

[Insane]
00:07:733 (1) - Use 0.75 slider velocity.
00:08:365 (2) - Since you returned the slider velocity back it must be NC.
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - Confused rhythm for me, i recommend remove slider velocity 0.50 and try make rhythm like this, it will be easier read imo
SPOILER

good luck :)
Sonnyc
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Sonnyc
소수 슬라 속도 저거 안고치는게 좋습니다. 모딩 체크는 차후에,,
GugUCorn
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Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Sonico Makaron wrote:

Hi!

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
Fix this.
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:07:733 (1) - Use 0.75 slider velocity.
00:08:365 (2) - Since you returned the slider velocity back it must be NC.
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - Confused rhythm for me, i recommend remove slider velocity 0.50 and try make rhythm like this, it will be easier read imo
SPOILER

good luck :)
Only fixed at easy's error.
i don't want to make change of speed. :P

Thanks mod ;)
GugUCorn
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GugUCorn

Sonnyc wrote:

모딩 체크는 차후에,,
천천히 하셔도됩니다 :lol:
그땐 너무 재촉했어요 :o
Akiyama Mizuki
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Joined March 2009
Akiyama Mizuki
늦어서 죄송해요
TK'S Muzu
SPOILER
00:03:944 (1) - I prefer D. It sounds better IMO
00:13:733 (8) - d
00:33:707 (90) - k? I'm not sure it sounds better honestly
00:46:102 (142) - ^
00:51:154 (159) - ^
00:59:049 (183) - d
01:17:996 (55) - d
01:18:154 (56) - k
01:25:418 (95) - d
I'll mod Oni later, sry

/// uhhh I ate dinner
TK'S Oni
SPOILER
00:03:944 (1) - D
00:18:944 (38) - k
wtf my father came I'll mod more tomorrow I'm really sorry

////OK. And here's more
TK'S Oni (more)
SPOILER
00:33:786 (136) - k
00:51:154 (235) - d
01:17:918 (71) - ^
01:25:418 (128) - d
01:25:496 (129) - k
TKS
Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014
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TKS

bbj0920 wrote:

늦어서 죄송해요
TK'S Muzu
SPOILER
00:03:944 (1) - I prefer D. It sounds better IMO - fixed.
00:13:733 (8) - d - no need that triplet pattern for Muzu.

TK'S Oni
SPOILER
00:03:944 (1) - D - fixed.
thanks for mod!!
sorry for fixed only a little.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... 20Wing.rar
GugUCorn
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updated!
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[General]

    1. Remove all capitals from the tags.
    2. Why not use custom diff names like Beginner, Standard and Hyper?

    [Easy]

      1. 00:08:365 (3) - Make a better blanket with 00:06:470 (2) - . >like this maybe??<
      2. 00:24:154 (1) - This slider makes no sense. At all. Maybe change it to a regular wave slider like this? If you do, make sure 00:25:418 (1) - makes a good blanket with that slider end.
      3. 00:53:839 (5) - Move slider end to x=304 y=72. It will look much better imo.
      4. 00:59:523 (1) - Make a good blanket with 00:59:207 (3) - .
      5. 01:10:891 (1,2) - Make these blanket good with each other.
      6. 01:19:102 (2) - Make a good blanket with the slider end of 01:17:839 (4) - .
      7. 01:24:470 (2) - Move this slider one block to the right, so that it makes a good blanket with 01:23:523 (1) - .

        Good diff, only a few fixes needed.

      [Leader's Normal]

        1. 00:28:575 (2,3) - Fix these sliders so that it looks like a better circle.
        2. 01:03:154 (1) - The slider end sound is a bit unfitting. Maybe change volume to 10%?
        3. 01:11:523 (2) - Let it flow better by making it bend?

          Good diff overall, but the jumps like 01:02:049 (1,2,3) - bother me enormously. Maybe ask a BAT if this is an ok placement for a normal difficulty.

        [Sonnyc's Hard]

          1. 00:04:575 (3) - Make it a bent slider just like 00:07:102 (3) - ?
          2. 00:12:154 (3) - Make it a better blanket with the slider end.
          3. 00:12:787 (1) - Maybe instead of a spinner, you could place a slider(s) like this?:
          4. If you apply the one above, make sure to place a beat at 00:14:049 - to keep the flow stable. Or you could anything else that you like, since this is only a suggestion... :lol:
          5. 00:30:154 (1) - Remove NC and place NC at 00:30:628 (2) - .
          6. 00:30:786 (3,5) - Maybe make these a good blanket with 00:32:049 (1) - ?
          7. 00:48:786 (2) - I personally hate these kind of sliders with a passion. Why do you overlap a slider as simple as that, with the slider end of 00:47:839 (5) - ??
          8. 00:57:470 (2,3) - This is a lazy jump imo. Maybe increase the spacing between those two?
          9. 01:15:944 - From this part on, all the sliders have a clap in them. Why? Was this intentional?
          10. 01:32:049 (4) - Weird unfitting slider. Make it something else?
          11. 01:38:681 - Why is this section after the spinner not mapped like all the other diffs?

            This diff is really lazy, if I have to be fair, but its not that bad.

          [Insane]

          Please reach me In-Game to talk about this diff.

          Thats it! Nice map overall, and nice song. Good luck! ^^
GugUCorn
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@Cancel : Fixed without General.
I'll call you in In-Game for checking Insane! ☜▒▒(-,.ㅡ )3
YTYuyu
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hey~ i'm here from my queue :D.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
00:12:786 (2,3) - replace this for a 2/1 repeat slider. it'll be more easier to follow for beginners during gameplay, as well as the BGM smoothly just like this 1/1, 2/1 combination. yes it breaks the blanket, but would you go for something that feels rushed for beginners, or something a lot easier in terms of rhythm?
00:15:628 (2) - i think you should delete this note. because the downwards transition feels a bit forced for beginners during gameplay. yes i see the blanket, but again--would you do for something that feels rushed for beginners, or something a lot easier?
00:19:102 (1,2,3,4) - you should do something easier because i really feel that this belongs in a normal diff more than an easy diff. try a 4/1 repeat slider it'll follow the drums more nicely due to the sliderticks in effect, and a lot easier to follow for beginners as well.
00:29:839 (2) - why don't you curve this slider downwards? i mean the current pattern would possibly feel uncomfortable since the arc of the slider is in the way of the previous note during gameplay. if you don't understand, it should look something like this when i mentioned downwards.
00:37:891 (2) - because the BPM is pretty high, this can throw off beginners when it comes to their sense of rhythm, and to the song as well. remove the 1/2 slider, and add a repeat on (1) so that it can be easier to follow, as well as it can follow the music nicely as well during gameplay.
00:39:312 (1,2,3,1) - for this one, do something like this. again it's easier to follow and it can follow the music nicely during gameplay.
00:55:891 (2) - flip this instead. at 1st glance, it can look pretty uncomfortable to follow for beginners since the slider is faced like this. basically like this.
you need to make this easy a lot easier. right now as it stands, it feels like a light normal, and this can give beginners a hard time to keep up during gameplay.

[Leader's Normal]
consider AR5. with this CS, AR6 would feel like the notes appear too quickly for players IMO.
00:01:733 (1,1) - don't you think this appears a bit too quick for players? i say that you give them some time to recover, at least a 1 tick gap should be fine. in roder to do that, extend the spinner to where (1) is, and delete (1) while doing this. it'll give players enough time for them to recover after the spinner during gameplay.
00:16:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - i really feel this pattern can cause a bit of confusion for amateurs because since it's spaced like this, this can be misleading for 1/2 or a 1/1 note pattern since it's spaced like an anti-jump. space it out instead so that it can be more readable and a lot easier to follow for amateurs during gameplay.
00:46:891 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:470 (1,2,3) - ^ i'm sure you get the idea by now.
01:14:681 (1,1,2) - same as 00:01:733. for this one, remove the 2nd (1) and (2) and extend the spinner to where the 2nd (1) is. same reason.
besides the anti jumps and spinner recovery, this is a good normal. kind of feels like a normal+, but i think it might be me.

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:04:418 (2,3) - i think you should go for something like this so that the curve feels more comfortable for players than the current pattern you have. i feel that the curve felt like taking a sudden sharp turn when driving a car IMO.
00:09:628 (3) - space this out. i really feel that you're breaking consistency with the last 2 combo in this part of the song.
00:12:153 (3) - ^
00:29:128 - consider adding a circle here to follow the music more effectively in this part of the song during gameplay IMO.
00:32:049 (1) - just a minor issue, but consider removing the whistle on the sliderbody since it sounds slightly disturbing IMO.
00:39:233 - same as 00:29:128.
a good hard. the only flaw i had was those sliderticks at the kiai. they don't sound fitting to follow during gameplay personally.

[Insane]
01:08:049 (2) - i think you can replace this for a 1/2 slider, followed by a 1/1 slider to follow the music more properly during gameplay, as well as emphasis in the piano a lot better.
01:18:707 (2) - remove this note. it doesn't follow anything in the music.
01:20:918 (5) - ^
decent insane. i may have overlooked overmapped 1/4 notes, so i want you to highly consider removing those since there's some that don't follow the music, and there are others that do.

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on this map :D.
GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn

Byakugan249 wrote:

hey~ i'm here from my queue :D.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
00:12:786 (2,3) - replace this for a 2/1 repeat slider. it'll be more easier to follow for beginners during gameplay, as well as the BGM smoothly just like this 1/1, 2/1 combination. yes it breaks the blanket, but would you go for something that feels rushed for beginners, or something a lot easier in terms of rhythm? ok,fixed!
00:15:628 (2) - i think you should delete this note. because the downwards transition feels a bit forced for beginners during gameplay. yes i see the blanket, but again--would you do for something that feels rushed for beginners, or something a lot easier? ok,fixed!
00:19:102 (1,2,3,4) - you should do something easier because i really feel that this belongs in a normal diff more than an easy diff. try a 4/1 repeat slider it'll follow the drums more nicely due to the sliderticks in effect, and a lot easier to follow for beginners as well.ok,fixed!
00:29:839 (2) - why don't you curve this slider downwards? i mean the current pattern would possibly feel uncomfortable since the arc of the slider is in the way of the previous note during gameplay. if you don't understand, it should look something like this when i mentioned downwards. yes,maybe it's uncomfortable thing. because of next slider, i want to locate it upwards.
00:37:891 (2) - because the BPM is pretty high, this can throw off beginners when it comes to their sense of rhythm, and to the song as well. remove the 1/2 slider, and add a repeat on (1) so that it can be easier to follow, as well as it can follow the music nicely as well during gameplay.
00:39:312 (1,2,3,1) - for this one, do something like this. again it's easier to follow and it can follow the music nicely during gameplay. 00:39:312 ~ 00:39:312 - i changed rhythm pattern like easier.
00:55:891 (2) - flip this instead. at 1st glance, it can look pretty uncomfortable to follow for beginners since the slider is faced like this. basically like this. fixed!
you need to make this easy a lot easier. right now as it stands, it feels like a light normal, and this can give beginners a hard time to keep up during gameplay.

[Insane]
01:08:049 (2) - i think you can replace this for a 1/2 slider, followed by a 1/1 slider to follow the music more properly during gameplay, as well as emphasis in the piano a lot better. i think it was not bad. :P
01:18:707 (2) - remove this note. it doesn't follow anything in the music.
01:20:918 (5) - ^ i don't want to delete those. if i delete those, i feel like empty.
decent insane. i may have overlooked overmapped 1/4 notes, so i want you to highly consider removing those since there's some that don't follow the music, and there are others that do.

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on this map :D.
Thanks Byaku! :D
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc

Sonico Makaron wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:10:733 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here, remove it. // But I can't find an alternative hitsound to support the high-toned sound here..
00:15:944 (1) - How about ctrl+g? it will get better flow imo. // It seems so, but I want to avoid jump here.
00:16:575 (1) - Add finish at the head slider // Added a drum.
00:17:207 (3) - Add NC // Added
00:23:839 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here imo. // Removed.
00:47:207 (2) - Make perfect stack. // ?
00:47:365 (3) - ^ //
01:02:996 (1) - This is not a new rhythm, will be better if you remove NC. // Removed.

Cancel wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]

    1. 00:04:575 (3) - Make it a bent slider just like 00:07:102 (3) - ? // Linear slider was for flow to the next note.
    2. 00:12:154 (3) - Make it a better blanket with the slider end. // The blanket is nice enough.
    3. 00:12:787 (1) - Maybe instead of a spinner, you could place a slider(s) like this?: // Sorry, I think a spinner fits best here.
    4. If you apply the one above, make sure to place a beat at 00:14:049 - to keep the flow stable. Or you could anything else that you like, since this is only a suggestion... :lol:
    5. 00:30:154 (1) - Remove NC and place NC at 00:30:628 (2) - . // fix
    6. 00:30:786 (3,5) - Maybe make these a good blanket with 00:32:049 (1) - ? // Uhh,, want to stick a symmetry here..
    7. 00:48:786 (2) - I personally hate these kind of sliders with a passion. Why do you overlap a slider as simple as that, with the slider end of 00:47:839 (5) - ?? // This much overlap won't be unreadable, and I had no selection here to maintain flow.
    8. 00:57:470 (2,3) - This is a lazy jump imo. Maybe increase the spacing between those two? // I wanted to emphasize pause as 00:59:996 (2,3).
    9. 01:15:944 - From this part on, all the sliders have a clap in them. Why? Was this intentional? // I didn't realized there was a custom tick. Removed.
    10. 01:32:049 (4) - Weird unfitting slider. Make it something else? // This is blanketing 01:31:575 (2). The circular slider can't support my pattern.
    11. 01:38:681 - Why is this section after the spinner not mapped like all the other diffs? // I thought that part of the music wasn't worth enough to map..

      This diff is really lazy, if I have to be fair, but its not that bad. // Good catch.

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:04:418 (2,3) - i think you should go for something like this so that the curve feels more comfortable for players than the current pattern you have. i feel that the curve felt like taking a sudden sharp turn when driving a car IMO. // (3) is to shaped to flow nice with 00:05:839 (1). Rather fixed with 00:03:944 (1).
00:09:628 (3) - space this out. i really feel that you're breaking consistency with the last 2 combo in this part of the song. // 2 flow, 2 stacks. This was a variation of mine for 4 same part of the song.
00:12:153 (3) - ^
00:29:128 - consider adding a circle here to follow the music more effectively in this part of the song during gameplay IMO. // Added
00:32:049 (1) - just a minor issue, but consider removing the whistle on the sliderbody since it sounds slightly disturbing IMO. // Removed
00:39:233 - same as 00:29:128. // Added
a good hard. the only flaw i had was those sliderticks at the kiai. they don't sound fitting to follow during gameplay personally.
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GugUCorn
936 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
GugUCorn
updated! ;)
Leader
osu! Alumni
1,849 posts
Joined January 2011
Leader
Fixed everything except the antijumps which sounds fine and I don't really want to change them (I've asked some BATs and they are fine with them, anyway), thank you

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osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75628
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Nightbird Lost Wing
TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Leader's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
Tags:TKSalt Leader Sonnyc Reflec Beat Colette Naoyuki Sato autumn
BeatmapID:371438
BeatmapSetID:128070

[Difficulty]
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44,108,44049,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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360,336,54470,5,6,0:0:0:0:
368,312,54944,1,6,0:0:0:0:
376,292,55418,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,268,55891,6,0,B|324:268|324:268|272:244|272:244|204:244,2,180,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,232,56996,6,0,P|428:172|408:108,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,104,57470,2,0,P|304:112|256:84,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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120,220,58891,6,0,P|200:220|252:144,1,180,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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276,368,61102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,304,61418,2,0,B|148:304|148:304|96:272|96:272|32:272,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,228,62049,5,6,0:0:0:0:
16,208,62523,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,188,62996,1,14,0:0:0:0:
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192,120,65839,6,0,L|312:120,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,176,66470,2,0,P|404:232|388:292,1,120,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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124,292,67733,1,0,3:0:0:0:
124,292,68365,6,0,P|108:234|124:177,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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316,356,70259,2,0,L|196:356,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,292,70891,6,0,P|96:216|64:192,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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96,284,76260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,244,76575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,316,76891,2,0,P|308:336|364:316,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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360,319,78470,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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428,88,80996,5,6,0:0:0:0:
464,176,81312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,268,81628,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,272,81944,2,0,P|272:284|228:332,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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GugUCorn
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updated!
JeZag
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JeZag
M4M request please >.<

Easy

00:35:523 (2) - Would go better with 00:34:260 (1) if it moved up a bit (you may have to adjust 00:36:154 (3,4) after for consistant ds)
SPOILER

00:38:681 (2) - If you moved the third point( or tick) up a bit, it would blanket 00:36:786 (1) a bit better (I think x.x)

00:45:628 (2) - Adjust this to make the blanket more even (first point (204,208) second point (236,248) third point (245,196)
SPOILER

00:48:154 (2) - Better blanket if second point (or tick on the slider) is at (295,247) and third is at (315,206)

01:01:102 (1) - Second point (348,160) third point (396,136)

01:10:891 (1) - Second point (47,265) third point (8,291)

01:11:523 (2) - Flip 01:10:891 (1) and place where it once was

01:14:681 (1) - Second point (251,346) third point (215,375)

01:19:102 (2) - Off a bit second point (447,314) third point (345, 293)

01:21:944 (6) - Second point (137,363) third point (209, 106)

01:23:523 (1) - Second point (392,47) third (437,65)

Leader's Normal

01:33:628 (1,2,3) - Make these symmetrical?

01:34:575 (3,4) - Looks better if 01:35:365 (4) is moved up a bit? (3 points towards 4 instead of being a bit crooked)

Insane

00:54:312 (4,5,1) - maybe these can face 00:54:154 (3)? Its a bit awkward to me.. (because I'm bad)


Being really tough because I can't mod your flow; its too good T_T
I also got tired of doing pics of every single one xD I'm bad
GugUCorn
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GugUCorn

JeZag wrote:

M4M request please >.<

Easy

00:35:523 (2) - Would go better with 00:34:260 (1) if it moved up a bit (you may have to adjust 00:36:154 (3,4) after for consistant ds) checked!
SPOILER

00:38:681 (2) - If you moved the third point( or tick) up a bit, it would blanket 00:36:786 (1) a bit better (I think x.x) checked!

00:45:628 (2) - Adjust this to make the blanket more even (first point (204,208) second point (236,248) third point (245,196) checked!
SPOILER

00:48:154 (2) - Better blanket if second point (or tick on the slider) is at (295,247) and third is at (315,206) i'm not follow yours,but similiar changed!

01:01:102 (1) - Second point (348,160) third point (396,136) i'm just blanket between 00:59:523 (1,1)

01:10:891 (1) - Second point (47,265) third point (8,291) checked!

01:11:523 (2) - Flip 01:10:891 (1) and place where it once was [b]checked!

01:14:681 (1) - Second point (251,346) third point (215,375) [b]checked!

01:19:102 (2) - Off a bit second point (447,314) third point (345, 293) [b]checked!

01:21:944 (6) - Second point (137,363) third point (209, 106) [b]checked!

01:23:523 (1) - Second point (392,47) third (437,65) [b]checked!

Insane

00:54:312 (4,5,1) - maybe these can face 00:54:154 (3)? Its a bit awkward to me.. (because I'm bad) [b]no, sorry :P


Being really tough because I can't mod your flow; its too good T_T
I also got tired of doing pics of every single one xD I'm bad
thanks mod!
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