Nekomata Master+ - Nightbird Lost Wing [Osu|Taiko] · forum

GugUCorn

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-20T16:28:24+00:00

Translation for Leader

OverPower wrote:
Normal

00:03:944 (1) - 스핀은 대부분 가운데에서 돌립니다. 하지만 이 슬라이드는 가운데와 멀리 떨어져있네요. 노말과 안어울리는 느낌일까요?

01:14:049 (6) - 그전 슬라이드와 동선이 너무 단순합니다. 다른 배치는 완벽하지만, 슬라이드와 리핏슬라이드를 같은 동선에 두게되면 말그대로 단순해 보

이지 않을까 합니다. 리핏슬라이드를 위로 세우거나, 아니면 반대로, 아니면 그전 슬라이드 꺾어질때쯤 사이에 둬도 나쁘지 않습니다.

01:25:102 (4) - 이런식으로 리핏슬라이드를 좀더 자유롭게 두어도 된다는 뜻이죠.

00:03:944 (1) - Most People spin a spinner on the center. But this slider is far from the center. Maybe It doesn't feat as Normal Diff..?

01:14:049 (6) - compare with previous slider, traffic line is so simple. Another placement is perfect, but if the slider and repeat slider are laid by same traffic line, it maybe seems to simple. try to stand the repeat slider, or the other way. Or lay between previous slider is snapped.

01:25:102 (4) - Like this, make freely a repeat slider.

>>It's just my translation. maybe there is strange sentence..

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-20T16:38:15+00:00

OverPower wrote:
안녕하세요! M4M 보고왔습니다.

앞서서, 타물님 배치 진짜 대단하시네요.

Easy

00:37:891 (2) - 먼저 이부분 입니다. 제 개인적인 생각으로, 초보분들에겐 이런 짦은슬라이드가 낯설어보이지 않을까 합니다.

00:38:049 - 여기에 서클 한개와,

00:38:365 - 서클 또하나,

00:38:681 - 여기에서 00:38:996 - 여기까지 슬라이드를 넣어도 꽤 괜찮지 않을까 합니다.
전 그대로가 나을 것 같아요. 전 초보자들한테 자비는 없습니다(?) 고려사항으로만 둘께요! 패스!

01:20:996 (1) - Easy 곡에서 이렇게 슬라이드와 01:21:944 (2) - 슬라이드를 겹치게 두어도 애매모호 한데요. 초보유저 분들깨서는 혼란을 줄수도 있죠. 괜찮습니다. 어느 랭크맵에서도 이런 부분이 없진 않거든요 ㅎ 꼬아두지만 않으면 괜찮다고 봅니다. 패스!

01:45:944 (4) - 맨 마지막 서클입니다. 마지막에 이렇게 맨밑에 장식하면 끝나는 분위기가 아닌것 같은데요. (어디까지나 개인적인 생각이지만)

x:384 y:272 에 배치 하셔도 나쁘진 않을것 같네요. 기존 prev와 크게 차이도 없고, 옴겨봤자 안좋은건 아니니까요.
죄송하지만 패스할께요..겹치는게 영 아니여보여요 ^^;

모딩 감사합니다. 하지만 고친게 없으므로 쿠도스 못 드려요 ㅠ
노멀에서 고친게 나왔으면 쿠도스 드리고요 ^^;

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Neta 2014-02-20T17:35:44+00:00

안녕하세요~ M4M큐 보고 왔습니다

[모딩 전 팁]
우선 기본적으로 슬라이더 모양을 신경 써주셧으면 합니다 http://puu.sh/73w0d.jpg -->http://puu.sh/73w0L.jpg 이런식으로 슬라이더 끝을 중앙에 배치하시면서 깔끔한 슬라이더를 만들면 맵 퀄이 올라가요~

[Easy]

00:06:470 (2) - http://puu.sh/73vXx.jpg 슬라이더 모양을 이렇게 고쳐주세요
00:44:365 (1) - ^
01:26:996 (3) - ^
우선 배치는 잘 짜셧네요 딱히 흠 잡을게 없는듯 합니다. 슬라이더 모양만 조금 신경써주시면 좋곘어요 겉보기엔 정상이지만 슬라이더선이 이상한 슬라이더가 많습니다

[Leader's Normal]

00:26:681 (4) - Make slider clearly plz like http://puu.sh/73wmC.jpg
00:16:575 (1,2,3,4) - you used this patterns but i think it's not good for normal better use distance snap

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:08:996 (1,3) - 패턴을 앞과 똑같이 하는게 좋을듯합니다
01:06:470 (2) - 차라리 노트 2개로 바꾸는게 패턴상 좋지 않을까 싶습니다

[Insane]

00:02:523 (1) - 위에서 말했듯이 깔끔하게 바꿔주세요
00:25:418 (1) - 뒤에 1/6 3연타를 쓰셧는데 BPM도 BPM인 만큼 별로 좋은 선택은 아닌듯합니다 슬라이더 같은걸로 대처하시는게 좋을듯해요
00:43:102 (1) - 첫번째와 동일 이유
01:26:996 (1) - 음 이건 좀 심하게 틀어졌네요
01:35:839 (1) - 1번을 스트림 형식으로 EX) http://puu.sh/73x86.jpg 이런식으로 바꿔주세요

허졉한 모딩 죄송합니다

맵 배치가 매우 깔끔하네요 부러울 정도 ㅠㅠ

슬라이더만 조금 신경 써주시면 퀄리티 좋은 맵이 될꺼라 생각합니다

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-21T01:21:12+00:00

Neta wrote:
안녕하세요~ M4M큐 보고 왔습니다

[모딩 전 팁]
우선 기본적으로 슬라이더 모양을 신경 써주셧으면 합니다 http://puu.sh/73w0d.jpg -->http://puu.sh/73w0L.jpg 이런식으로 슬라이더 끝을 중앙에 배치하시면서 깔끔한 슬라이더를 만들면 맵 퀄이 올라가요~

[Easy]
00:06:470 (2) - http://puu.sh/73vXx.jpg 슬라이더 모양을 이렇게 고쳐주세요
00:44:365 (1) - ^
01:26:996 (3) - ^
우선 배치는 잘 짜셧네요 딱히 흠 잡을게 없는듯 합니다. 슬라이더 모양만 조금 신경써주시면 좋곘어요 겉보기엔 정상이지만 슬라이더선이 이상한 슬라이더가 많습니다

[Insane]
00:02:523 (1) - 위에서 말했듯이 깔끔하게 바꿔주세요
00:25:418 (1) - 뒤에 1/6 3연타를 쓰셧는데 BPM도 BPM인 만큼 별로 좋은 선택은 아닌듯합니다 슬라이더 같은걸로 대처하시는게 좋을듯해요
00:43:102 (1) - 첫번째와 동일 이유
01:26:996 (1) - 음 이건 좀 심하게 틀어졌네요
01:35:839 (1) - 1번을 스트림 형식으로 EX) http://puu.sh/73x86.jpg 이런식으로 바꿔주세요

허졉한 모딩 죄송합니다

맵 배치가 매우 깔끔하네요 부러울 정도 ㅠㅠ

슬라이더만 조금 신경 써주시면 퀄리티 좋은 맵이 될꺼라 생각합니다

1/6 3연타 부분만 고쳤습니다.^^
Thanks!

Nyukai

2,415 posts

Joined July 2012

Nyukai 2014-02-22T10:17:12+00:00

Random M4M, I posted my map in your queue. ^^

o3o - Suggestions
o3o - Highly suggestions

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:05:839 (1) - Remove NC.
00:07:733 (1) - ^
00:10:733 (1) - ^
00:15:944 (1) - ^
00:20:996 (1) - ^
00:22:733 (5) - Move it to x:360 y:344, then put (6) in the same place, overlapping (5).
00:23:839 (1) - Remove NC.
00:27:628 (3) - I think a curve slider would look better, if you do that move it to x:320 y:20. (:
00:31:418 (5, 1) - Repeat only slider (5). Then move (1) to x:255 y:317 to follow next note.
00:40:418 (1, 2) - Remove NC at (1) and add it to (2).
00:41:681 (1, 2) - ^
00:45:944 (3) - Maybe it would look better if you move it to x:280 y:288, since it's overlapping 00:46:891 (1).
00:51:628 (6) - Ctrl+J and move it to x:96 y:328. :3
01:00:312 (3) - Maybe overlap on (2)? Looks weird for me. >_<
01:14:523 (3) - I think it would have a better flow if you move it to x:288 y:160.

Nice diff. <3

[Insane]

I think AR:9 is too much, consider adding only AR:8. >_<

00:02:523 (1) - Remove NC.
00:28:891 (1) - ^ and add it to 00:29:907 (3).

[Normal]

Better if you add CS:3 instead of CS:4.

[Easy]

CS:2 instead of CS:3 maybe?

That's all, nice mapset and song.

GL~

Last edited by Nyukai 2014-02-22T15:26:22+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

[Twinkle] 2014-02-22T11:01:10+00:00

M4M from your Q
I can only mod stardard. ;w;

[Easy]
01:03:312 (1) - this spinner may close at this point

SPOILER

[Leader's Normal]
00:44:365 (1) - remove NC
00:45:786 (1) - ^
00:51:944 (1) - ^
00:54:470 (1) - ^
00:56:996 (1) - ^
00:59:523 (1) - ^
01:25:733 (5) - add nc
01:26:049 (1) - remove nc

[Sonnyc's Hard]
I think the drop sound effect is used too many. u may remove some
01:02:996 (1) - add a note at the starting point of the spinner and put the spinner backwards

[Insane]
00:50:365 (3) - make this slider slow down may fit the rhythm better
01:00:470 (1) - ^

nice song! good luck

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Leader 2014-02-22T11:51:38+00:00

Just fixed two/three things, leaving CS4 and the current combo scheme

diff

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TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Leader's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
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GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-22T16:09:21+00:00

Inyuschan

Inyuschan wrote:
Random M4M, I posted my map in your queue. ^^

o3o - Suggestions
o3o - Highly suggestions

[Insane]

I think AR:9 is too much, consider adding only AR:8. >_< think about AR 8. i want to make it as AR 9!

00:02:523 (1) - Remove NC. No!
00:28:891 (1) - ^ and add it to 00:29:907 (3). fixed!

[Easy]

CS:2 instead of CS:3 maybe? no, i want to make it CS 2

That's all, nice mapset and song. GL~

[box=[Twinkle:1337]]

[Twinkle] wrote:
M4M from your Q
I can only mod stardard. ;w;

[Easy]
01:03:312 (1) - this spinner may close at this point i can't see your screen shot image.. i don't know what you mean but, i fixed this spinner a little bit.
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:50:365 (3) - make this slider slow down may fit the rhythm better no
01:00:470 (1) - ^ no

nice song! good luck

Thanks!

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-22T16:13:11+00:00

Updated

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-02-24T13:52:30+00:00

~~Fixed by request~~

Freya

Freya wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:04:418 (2) - change to clap then change 00:04:575 (3) tail to whistle, i thinks sounds better // Added Whistle at the head of (3) instead.
00:06:470 (1,2,3) - ^
00:08:996 (1,2,3) - ^
00:10:733 (1) - i thinks it's nice if you put soft whistle // Whistle at 00:10:891 (2,4) will be enough.
00:17:365 - i hear drum here ad note please // That's not that strong to emphasize, and tick will be fine enough.
00:17:996 - ^
00:18:470 (7) - move it far abit, so flows better with next slider http://puu.sh/6ZEtl.jpg // The spacing was based on the end of 00:17:839 (5).
00:29:049 (3) - i think it's wrong snapped, must be 1/6, look at insane, or i think i know your intention to put notes between 2 1/6 beat notes
i don't really good at this, so ask another experienced mapper maybe, or if you think it's okay leave it as is // Well didn't noticed that this is empty. Well I should look for more opinions
00:59:996 (2,3) - at first glance i think it's 1/2, it sure confusing, consider unstack, yah if you say no make the stack more perfect // Changed spacing.
01:05:839 ~ 01:10:812 . i don't feel right with the clap at ths part, make it sounds like insane maybe? // I think it's fine.

i feel a bit don't right with the rhytym on this diff, but since i'm not really experienced with rhytym itself maybe we leave as it is, or ask next modder

Neta

Neta wrote:
[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:08:996 (1,3) - 패턴을 앞과 똑같이 하는게 좋을듯합니다 // 이 부분만 좀 이질적이긴 하네요. 그렇지만 다음 노트 흐름상 이제 와서 바꾸기 곤란할듯요<<
01:06:470 (2) - 차라리 노트 2개로 바꾸는게 패턴상 좋지 않을까 싶습니다 // 음,, 큰 차이 없는거 같은데 슬라이더로 두고 싶습니다.

Inyuschan

Inyuschan wrote:
Random M4M, I posted my map in your queue. ^^

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:05:839 (1) - Remove NC. // Nah, having it the same combo with previously is really nonsense in hp drain, and the time gap.
00:07:733 (1) - ^
00:10:733 (1) - ^
00:15:944 (1) - ^
00:20:996 (1) - ^
00:22:733 (5) - Move it to x:360 y:344, then put (6) in the same place, overlapping (5). // Sorry, I want a square pattern here.
00:23:839 (1) - Remove NC. // Bell emphasis.
00:27:628 (3) - I think a curve slider would look better, if you do that move it to x:320 y:20. (: // Sure it'll be, but prefer an aesthetic here.
00:31:418 (5, 1) - Repeat only slider (5). Then move (1) to x:255 y:317 to follow next note. // Can't understand the meaning here, but I want to give symmetry<<
00:40:418 (1, 2) - Remove NC at (1) and add it to (2). // Following the music, I think my selection is better,, Still 00:42:944 (5) added NC here instead.
00:41:681 (1, 2) - ^
00:45:944 (3) - Maybe it would look better if you move it to x:280 y:288, since it's overlapping 00:46:891 (1). // Since the overlapping part is the head, it's nearly unoticable when playing.
00:51:628 (6) - Ctrl+J and move it to x:96 y:328. :3 // Curving down, and breaking flow with the next slider was my selection here, and I want to keep the flow.
01:00:312 (3) - Maybe overlap on (2)? Looks weird for me. >_< // Fixed
01:14:523 (3) - I think it would have a better flow if you move it to x:288 y:160. // Looks good.

Twinkle

[Twinkle] wrote:
[Sonnyc's Hard]
I think the drop sound effect is used too many. u may remove some
01:02:996 (1) - add a note at the starting point of the spinner and put the spinner backwards // Fixed

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Sonnyc's Hard
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
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GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-25T13:29:42+00:00

↑Updated! 감사합니다 ㅎㅎ

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-09T13:53:54+00:00

Hi!

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
Fix this.

SPOILER

[Leader's Normal]
00:11:523 (1,2) - Play little weird, maybe make rhythm like this?

SPOILER

00:17:839 (3) - Add finish.

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:10:733 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here, remove it.
00:15:944 (1) - How about ctrl+g? it will get better flow imo.
00:16:575 (1) - Add finish at the head slider
00:17:207 (3) - Add NC.
00:23:839 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here imo.
00:47:207 (2) - Make perfect stack.
00:47:365 (3) - ^
01:02:996 (1) - This is not a new rhythm, will be better if you remove NC.

[Insane]
00:07:733 (1) - Use 0.75 slider velocity.
00:08:365 (2) - Since you returned the slider velocity back it must be NC.
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - Confused rhythm for me, i recommend remove slider velocity 0.50 and try make rhythm like this, it will be easier read imo

SPOILER

good luck

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-03-09T13:56:51+00:00

소수 슬라 속도 저거 안고치는게 좋습니다. 모딩 체크는 차후에,,

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-03-09T15:41:25+00:00

Sonico Makaron wrote:
Hi!

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
Fix this.
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:07:733 (1) - Use 0.75 slider velocity.
00:08:365 (2) - Since you returned the slider velocity back it must be NC.
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - Confused rhythm for me, i recommend remove slider velocity 0.50 and try make rhythm like this, it will be easier read imo
SPOILER

good luck

Only fixed at easy's error.
i don't want to make change of speed.

Thanks mod

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-03-09T15:43:52+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
모딩 체크는 차후에,,

천천히 하셔도됩니다

그땐 너무 재촉했어요

Akiyama Mizuki

2,710 posts

Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2014-03-12T12:35:13+00:00

늦어서 죄송해요
TK'S Muzu

SPOILER

00:03:944 (1) - I prefer D. It sounds better IMO
00:13:733 (8) - d
00:33:707 (90) - k? ~~I'm not sure it sounds better honestly~~
00:46:102 (142) - ^
00:51:154 (159) - ^
00:59:049 (183) - d
01:17:996 (55) - d
01:18:154 (56) - k
01:25:418 (95) - d

I'll mod Oni later, sry

/// uhhh I ate dinner
TK'S Oni

SPOILER

00:03:944 (1) - D
00:18:944 (38) - k

~~wtf my father came I'll mod more tomorrow I'm really sorry~~

////OK. And here's more
TK'S Oni (more)

SPOILER

00:33:786 (136) - k
00:51:154 (235) - d
01:17:918 (71) - ^
01:25:418 (128) - d
01:25:496 (129) - k

TKS

Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014

1,356 posts

Joined July 2011

TKS 2014-03-13T13:08:38+00:00

bbj0920 wrote:
늦어서 죄송해요
TK'S Muzu
SPOILER
00:03:944 (1) - I prefer D. It sounds better IMO - fixed.
00:13:733 (8) - d - no need that triplet pattern for Muzu.

TK'S Oni
SPOILER
00:03:944 (1) - D - fixed.

thanks for mod!!
sorry for fixed only a little.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... 20Wing.rar

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-03-13T13:13:14+00:00

updated!

Cancel

956 posts

Joined August 2012

Cancel 2014-03-22T15:43:59+00:00

[General]

1. Remove all capitals from the tags.
2. Why not use custom diff names like Beginner, Standard and Hyper?
[Easy]
- 1. 00:08:365 (3) - Make a better blanket with 00:06:470 (2) - . >like this maybe??<
  2. 00:24:154 (1) - This slider makes no sense. At all. Maybe change it to a regular wave slider like this? If you do, make sure 00:25:418 (1) - makes a good blanket with that slider end.
  3. 00:53:839 (5) - Move slider end to x=304 y=72. It will look much better imo.
  4. 00:59:523 (1) - Make a good blanket with 00:59:207 (3) - .
  5. 01:10:891 (1,2) - Make these blanket good with each other.
  6. 01:19:102 (2) - Make a good blanket with the slider end of 01:17:839 (4) - .
  7. 01:24:470 (2) - Move this slider one block to the right, so that it makes a good blanket with 01:23:523 (1) - .
    
    Good diff, only a few fixes needed.
  [Leader's Normal]
  - 1. 00:28:575 (2,3) - Fix these sliders so that it looks like a better circle.
    2. 01:03:154 (1) - The slider end sound is a bit unfitting. Maybe change volume to 10%?
    3. 01:11:523 (2) - Let it flow better by making it bend?
      
      Good diff overall, but the jumps like 01:02:049 (1,2,3) - bother me enormously. Maybe ask a BAT if this is an ok placement for a normal difficulty.
    [Sonnyc's Hard]
    - 00:04:575 (3) - Make it a bent slider just like 00:07:102 (3) - ?
      00:12:154 (3) - Make it a better blanket with the slider end.
      00:12:787 (1) - Maybe instead of a spinner, you could place a slider(s) like this?:
      If you apply the one above, make sure to place a beat at 00:14:049 - to keep the flow stable. Or you could anything else that you like, since this is only a suggestion...
      00:30:154 (1) - Remove NC and place NC at 00:30:628 (2) - .
      00:30:786 (3,5) - Maybe make these a good blanket with 00:32:049 (1) - ?
      00:48:786 (2) - I personally hate these kind of sliders with a passion. Why do you overlap a slider as simple as that, with the slider end of 00:47:839 (5) - ??
      00:57:470 (2,3) - This is a lazy jump imo. Maybe increase the spacing between those two?
      01:15:944 - From this part on, all the sliders have a clap in them. Why? Was this intentional?
      01:32:049 (4) - Weird unfitting slider. Make it something else?
      01:38:681 - Why is this section after the spinner not mapped like all the other diffs?
      
      This diff is really lazy, if I have to be fair, but its not that bad.
      [Insane]
      
      Please reach me In-Game to talk about this diff.
      
      Thats it! Nice map overall, and nice song. Good luck! ^^

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-03-23T02:06:39+00:00

@Cancel : Fixed without General.
I'll call you in In-Game for checking Insane! ☜▒▒(-,.ㅡ )3

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,146 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2014-03-23T09:05:24+00:00

hey~ i'm here from my queue

.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
00:12:786 (2,3) - replace this for a 2/1 repeat slider. it'll be more easier to follow for beginners during gameplay, as well as the BGM smoothly just like this 1/1, 2/1 combination. yes it breaks the blanket, but would you go for something that feels rushed for beginners, or something a lot easier in terms of rhythm?
00:15:628 (2) - i think you should delete this note. because the downwards transition feels a bit forced for beginners during gameplay. yes i see the blanket, but again--would you do for something that feels rushed for beginners, or something a lot easier?
00:19:102 (1,2,3,4) - you should do something easier because i really feel that this belongs in a normal diff more than an easy diff. try a 4/1 repeat slider it'll follow the drums more nicely due to the sliderticks in effect, and a lot easier to follow for beginners as well.
00:29:839 (2) - why don't you curve this slider downwards? i mean the current pattern would possibly feel uncomfortable since the arc of the slider is in the way of the previous note during gameplay. if you don't understand, it should look something like this when i mentioned downwards.
00:37:891 (2) - because the BPM is pretty high, this can throw off beginners when it comes to their sense of rhythm, and to the song as well. remove the 1/2 slider, and add a repeat on (1) so that it can be easier to follow, as well as it can follow the music nicely as well during gameplay.
00:39:312 (1,2,3,1) - for this one, do something like this. again it's easier to follow and it can follow the music nicely during gameplay.
00:55:891 (2) - flip this instead. at 1st glance, it can look pretty uncomfortable to follow for beginners since the slider is faced like this. basically like this.
you need to make this easy a lot easier. right now as it stands, it feels like a light normal, and this can give beginners a hard time to keep up during gameplay.

[Leader's Normal]
consider AR5. with this CS, AR6 would feel like the notes appear too quickly for players IMO.
00:01:733 (1,1) - don't you think this appears a bit too quick for players? i say that you give them some time to recover, at least a 1 tick gap should be fine. in roder to do that, extend the spinner to where (1) is, and delete (1) while doing this. it'll give players enough time for them to recover after the spinner during gameplay.
00:16:575 (1,2,3,4,5) - i really feel this pattern can cause a bit of confusion for amateurs because since it's spaced like this, this can be misleading for 1/2 or a 1/1 note pattern since it's spaced like an anti-jump. space it out instead so that it can be more readable and a lot easier to follow for amateurs during gameplay.
00:46:891 (1,2,3) - ^
00:54:470 (1,2,3) - ^ i'm sure you get the idea by now.
01:14:681 (1,1,2) - same as 00:01:733. for this one, remove the 2nd (1) and (2) and extend the spinner to where the 2nd (1) is. same reason.
besides the anti jumps and spinner recovery, this is a good normal. kind of feels like a normal+, but i think it might be me.

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:04:418 (2,3) - i think you should go for something like this so that the curve feels more comfortable for players than the current pattern you have. i feel that the curve felt like taking a sudden sharp turn when driving a car IMO.
00:09:628 (3) - space this out. i really feel that you're breaking consistency with the last 2 combo in this part of the song.
00:12:153 (3) - ^
00:29:128 - consider adding a circle here to follow the music more effectively in this part of the song during gameplay IMO.
00:32:049 (1) - just a minor issue, but consider removing the whistle on the sliderbody since it sounds slightly disturbing IMO.
00:39:233 - same as 00:29:128.
a good hard. the only flaw i had was those sliderticks at the kiai. they don't sound fitting to follow during gameplay personally.

[Insane]
01:08:049 (2) - i think you can replace this for a 1/2 slider, followed by a 1/1 slider to follow the music more properly during gameplay, as well as emphasis in the piano a lot better.
01:18:707 (2) - remove this note. it doesn't follow anything in the music.
01:20:918 (5) - ^
decent insane. i may have overlooked overmapped 1/4 notes, so i want you to highly consider removing those since there's some that don't follow the music, and there are others that do.

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on this map

.

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-03-23T10:26:55+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
hey~ i'm here from my queue .

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: Should be fixed/highly suggested.
Green: Suggestion.
Blue: Comments, Advice or Other.

[General]
CLEAR~!

[Easy]
00:12:786 (2,3) - replace this for a 2/1 repeat slider. it'll be more easier to follow for beginners during gameplay, as well as the BGM smoothly just like this 1/1, 2/1 combination. yes it breaks the blanket, but would you go for something that feels rushed for beginners, or something a lot easier in terms of rhythm? ok,fixed!
00:15:628 (2) - i think you should delete this note. because the downwards transition feels a bit forced for beginners during gameplay. yes i see the blanket, but again--would you do for something that feels rushed for beginners, or something a lot easier? ok,fixed!
00:19:102 (1,2,3,4) - you should do something easier because i really feel that this belongs in a normal diff more than an easy diff. try a 4/1 repeat slider it'll follow the drums more nicely due to the sliderticks in effect, and a lot easier to follow for beginners as well.ok,fixed!
00:29:839 (2) - why don't you curve this slider downwards? i mean the current pattern would possibly feel uncomfortable since the arc of the slider is in the way of the previous note during gameplay. if you don't understand, it should look something like this when i mentioned downwards. yes,maybe it's uncomfortable thing. because of next slider, i want to locate it upwards.
00:37:891 (2) - because the BPM is pretty high, this can throw off beginners when it comes to their sense of rhythm, and to the song as well. remove the 1/2 slider, and add a repeat on (1) so that it can be easier to follow, as well as it can follow the music nicely as well during gameplay.
00:39:312 (1,2,3,1) - for this one, do something like this. again it's easier to follow and it can follow the music nicely during gameplay. 00:39:312 ~ 00:39:312 - i changed rhythm pattern like easier.
00:55:891 (2) - flip this instead. at 1st glance, it can look pretty uncomfortable to follow for beginners since the slider is faced like this. basically like this. fixed!
you need to make this easy a lot easier. right now as it stands, it feels like a light normal, and this can give beginners a hard time to keep up during gameplay.

[Insane]
01:08:049 (2) - i think you can replace this for a 1/2 slider, followed by a 1/1 slider to follow the music more properly during gameplay, as well as emphasis in the piano a lot better. i think it was not bad.
01:18:707 (2) - remove this note. it doesn't follow anything in the music.
01:20:918 (5) - ^ i don't want to delete those. if i delete those, i feel like empty.
decent insane. i may have overlooked overmapped 1/4 notes, so i want you to highly consider removing those since there's some that don't follow the music, and there are others that do.

and that's all i got. GL and don't give up on this map .

Thanks Byaku!

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-03-23T15:20:17+00:00

Sonico Makaron wrote:
[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:10:733 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here, remove it. // But I can't find an alternative hitsound to support the high-toned sound here..
00:15:944 (1) - How about ctrl+g? it will get better flow imo. // It seems so, but I want to avoid jump here.
00:16:575 (1) - Add finish at the head slider // Added a drum.
00:17:207 (3) - Add NC // Added
00:23:839 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here imo. // Removed.
00:47:207 (2) - Make perfect stack. // ?
00:47:365 (3) - ^ //
01:02:996 (1) - This is not a new rhythm, will be better if you remove NC. // Removed.

Cancel wrote:
[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:04:575 (3) - Make it a bent slider just like 00:07:102 (3) - ? // Linear slider was for flow to the next note.
00:12:154 (3) - Make it a better blanket with the slider end. // The blanket is nice enough.
00:12:787 (1) - Maybe instead of a spinner, you could place a slider(s) like this?: // Sorry, I think a spinner fits best here.
If you apply the one above, make sure to place a beat at 00:14:049 - to keep the flow stable. Or you could anything else that you like, since this is only a suggestion...
00:30:154 (1) - Remove NC and place NC at 00:30:628 (2) - . // fix
00:30:786 (3,5) - Maybe make these a good blanket with 00:32:049 (1) - ? // Uhh,, want to stick a symmetry here..
00:48:786 (2) - I personally hate these kind of sliders with a passion. Why do you overlap a slider as simple as that, with the slider end of 00:47:839 (5) - ?? // This much overlap won't be unreadable, and I had no selection here to maintain flow.
00:57:470 (2,3) - This is a lazy jump imo. Maybe increase the spacing between those two? // I wanted to emphasize pause as 00:59:996 (2,3).
01:15:944 - From this part on, all the sliders have a clap in them. Why? Was this intentional? // I didn't realized there was a custom tick. Removed.
01:32:049 (4) - Weird unfitting slider. Make it something else? // This is blanketing 01:31:575 (2). The circular slider can't support my pattern.
01:38:681 - Why is this section after the spinner not mapped like all the other diffs? // I thought that part of the music wasn't worth enough to map..

This diff is really lazy, if I have to be fair, but its not that bad. // Good catch.

Byakugan249 wrote:
[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:04:418 (2,3) - i think you should go for something like this so that the curve feels more comfortable for players than the current pattern you have. i feel that the curve felt like taking a sudden sharp turn when driving a car IMO. // (3) is to shaped to flow nice with 00:05:839 (1). Rather fixed with 00:03:944 (1).
00:09:628 (3) - space this out. i really feel that you're breaking consistency with the last 2 combo in this part of the song. // 2 flow, 2 stacks. This was a variation of mine for 4 same part of the song.
00:12:153 (3) - ^
00:29:128 - consider adding a circle here to follow the music more effectively in this part of the song during gameplay IMO. // Added
00:32:049 (1) - just a minor issue, but consider removing the whistle on the sliderbody since it sounds slightly disturbing IMO. // Removed
00:39:233 - same as 00:29:128. // Added
a good hard. the only flaw i had was those sliderticks at the kiai. they don't sound fitting to follow during gameplay personally.

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GugUCorn

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Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-03-23T15:21:46+00:00

updated!

Leader

osu! Alumni

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Joined January 2011

Leader 2014-03-24T14:17:16+00:00

Fixed everything except the antijumps which sounds fine and I don't really want to change them (I've asked some BATs and they are fine with them, anyway), thank you

diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: nightbird lost wing.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75628
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Nightbird Lost Wing
TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Leader's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
Tags:TKSalt Leader Sonnyc Reflec Beat Colette Naoyuki Sato autumn
BeatmapID:371438
BeatmapSetID:128070

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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124,156,87628,2,0,P|60:128|32:80,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,88575,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,280,88891,2,0,B|368:256|368:320|452:284,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,264,89523,2,0,P|460:192|480:92,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,32,90312,2,0,P|316:24|252:84,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,91102,5,6,0:0:0:0:
248,268,91418,1,12,0:0:0:0:
340,296,91733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,92049,2,0,P|420:168|392:116,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,92,92681,2,0,L|184:76,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,184,93628,6,0,P|344:240|320:304,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,304,94102,2,0,P|216:288|156:328,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,336,94575,2,0,P|72:268|84:176,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,104,95365,2,0,P|240:56|332:136,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,168,99944,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,101207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101365,12,0,103733,0:0:0:0:
256,216,104365,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,105628,2,0,L|256:108,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

GugUCorn

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GugUCorn 2014-03-24T14:21:04+00:00

updated!

JeZag

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JeZag 2014-03-25T01:22:11+00:00

M4M request please >.<

Easy

00:35:523 (2) - Would go better with 00:34:260 (1) if it moved up a bit (you may have to adjust 00:36:154 (3,4) after for consistant ds)

SPOILER

00:38:681 (2) - If you moved the third point( or tick) up a bit, it would blanket 00:36:786 (1) a bit better (I think x.x)

00:45:628 (2) - Adjust this to make the blanket more even (first point (204,208) second point (236,248) third point (245,196)

SPOILER

00:48:154 (2) - Better blanket if second point (or tick on the slider) is at (295,247) and third is at (315,206)

01:01:102 (1) - Second point (348,160) third point (396,136)

01:10:891 (1) - Second point (47,265) third point (8,291)

01:11:523 (2) - Flip 01:10:891 (1) and place where it once was

01:14:681 (1) - Second point (251,346) third point (215,375)

01:19:102 (2) - Off a bit second point (447,314) third point (345, 293)

01:21:944 (6) - Second point (137,363) third point (209, 106)

01:23:523 (1) - Second point (392,47) third (437,65)

Leader's Normal

01:33:628 (1,2,3) - Make these symmetrical?

01:34:575 (3,4) - Looks better if 01:35:365 (4) is moved up a bit? (3 points towards 4 instead of being a bit crooked)

Insane

00:54:312 (4,5,1) - maybe these can face 00:54:154 (3)? Its a bit awkward to me.. (because I'm bad)

Being really tough because I can't mod your flow; its too good T_T
I also got tired of doing pics of every single one xD I'm bad

GugUCorn

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GugUCorn 2014-03-25T02:21:02+00:00

JeZag wrote:
M4M request please >.<

Easy

00:35:523 (2) - Would go better with 00:34:260 (1) if it moved up a bit (you may have to adjust 00:36:154 (3,4) after for consistant ds) checked!
SPOILER

00:38:681 (2) - If you moved the third point( or tick) up a bit, it would blanket 00:36:786 (1) a bit better (I think x.x) checked!

00:45:628 (2) - Adjust this to make the blanket more even (first point (204,208) second point (236,248) third point (245,196) checked!
SPOILER

00:48:154 (2) - Better blanket if second point (or tick on the slider) is at (295,247) and third is at (315,206) i'm not follow yours,but similiar changed!

01:01:102 (1) - Second point (348,160) third point (396,136) i'm just blanket between 00:59:523 (1,1)

01:10:891 (1) - Second point (47,265) third point (8,291) checked!

01:11:523 (2) - Flip 01:10:891 (1) and place where it once was [b]checked!

01:14:681 (1) - Second point (251,346) third point (215,375) [b]checked!

01:19:102 (2) - Off a bit second point (447,314) third point (345, 293) [b]checked!

01:21:944 (6) - Second point (137,363) third point (209, 106) [b]checked!

01:23:523 (1) - Second point (392,47) third (437,65) [b]checked!

Insane

00:54:312 (4,5,1) - maybe these can face 00:54:154 (3)? Its a bit awkward to me.. (because I'm bad) [b]no, sorry

Being really tough because I can't mod your flow; its too good T_T
I also got tired of doing pics of every single one xD I'm bad

thanks mod!

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