Nekomata Master+ - Nightbird Lost Wing [Osu|Taiko] · forum

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-04T03:02:52+00:00

TKSalt wrote:
go!
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... 20Wing.rar

I'm so happy for fast mapping! Thanks!

ritsu-tanaika

468 posts

Joined September 2012

ritsu-tanaika 2014-02-05T11:31:01+00:00

m4m

EASY

try increasing DS to 1.1 to avoid the overlaps and tight spacing between notes

00:46:260 (3,4) - change to slider for better flow

SPOILER

01:44:996 (3) - Move down to (152,236) to avoid overlap with circle slider

INSANE

00:08:996 (1) - overlap with 00:08:681 (4) - so I suggest this

SPOILER

00:11:523 (1) - ctrl J and stack it back on top of the stream

00:29:996 (1,2,3,1,2) - pattern is quite confusing since there's so many colors, so remove NC on some of them

00:49:891 (2) - ctrl G for better flow

01:01:654 - add a note here so the stream is consistent of 5

01:35:444 - add note here since the instrument is still going on at this point

hope I helped

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-05T12:13:25+00:00

ritsu-tanaika wrote:
m4m

EASY

try increasing DS to 1.1 to avoid the overlaps and tight spacing between notes think about that!

00:46:260 (3,4) - change to slider for better flow no!

SPOILER

01:44:996 (3) - Move down to (152,236) to avoid overlap with circle slider fixed!

INSANE

00:08:996 (1) - overlap with 00:08:681 (4) - so I suggest this no!

SPOILER

00:11:523 (1) - ctrl J and stack it back on top of the stream no!

00:29:996 (1,2,3,1,2) - pattern is quite confusing since there's so many colors, so remove NC on some of them remove NC on 00:30:470 (1)

00:49:891 (2) - ctrl G for better flow no!

01:01:654 - add a note here so the stream is consistent of 5 no! there is not rhythm.

01:35:444 - add note here since the instrument is still going on at this point same,no!

hope I helped

thanks!

Revo

78 posts

Joined April 2012

Revo 2014-02-05T13:13:07+00:00

Hi TaMul! I'll try to mod your map. (Just a random mod, or m4m if you want)

[Easy]

00:37:891 (2) - Isn't this too hard and shocking for a newbie? I suggest you to change it.

[Insane]

00:28:970 (1) - This isn't put perfectly. Move it to 00:28:996 - with a 1/3 snap.
00:56:365 (4) - How about making it like below? It fits the background music, but it's just a suggestion, though.
SPOILER
00:47:365 (2) - Ctrl + G to make it flow better.

I love the hitsounds

That's all from me. I hope it helps and hope your map get ranked soon!
Good Luck!

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-05T14:08:02+00:00

Revo wrote:
Hi TaMul! I'll try to mod your map. (Just a random mod, or m4m if you want)

[Easy]
00:37:891 (2) - Isn't this too hard and shocking for a newbie? I suggest you to change it.

[Insane]
00:28:970 (1) - This isn't put perfectly. Move it to 00:28:996 - with a 1/3 snap.
00:56:365 (4) - How about making it like below? It fits the background music, but it's just a suggestion, though.
SPOILER
00:47:365 (2) - Ctrl + G to make it flow better.

I love the hitsounds
That's all from me. I hope it helps and hope your map get ranked soon!
Good Luck!

fixed on last one! thanks!

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2014-02-06T05:23:00+00:00

hello from your m4m queue

Insane

00:13:102 (2) make this a NC to indicate new slider velocity

01:01:418 (1,2,3,4) hard to read this coming off of the slider. approach circles blend with the slider circle and make things hard to read, along with the irregular rhythm:

this

blanket more visibly i guess would be the easiest way to fix. 01:23:918 (2) does it fine, but i'd say that's because the song is much more predictable there

01:02:996 (5) make this a NC. there's no way to really tell that the slider's gonna be slower than the previous otherwise

01:40:891 (2) this looks fine in the editor, but in actual gameplay, it's kind of off center due to the auto-blanket thing. i'd suggest just doing this to keep symmetry:

this is what it looks like in game

this is what it should look like in editor to be good

01:45:312 (2) move to x:232 y:248 to have super awesome lined up proprelynes blahbalhablh

Easy

00:20:996 (4) this note is pretty close to the bottom border, i think you should make it higher up

01:14:681 (1) also pretty close to the bottom border

01:20:996 (1,2) avoid the overlap :/

01:34:260 (2) this note just doesn't fit with teh song

01:39:944 (1) just personal opinion here, having the note centered inside of the other slider and curving like it does looks bad. having it instead bend around one of the end points of the slider or not bend at all would be better.

01:45:628 (4) maybe make this a new combo just because it's the last note of the song and the clap hitsound emphasizes it. your choice there though

also can't mod taiko so i'll ignore those

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-06T08:17:01+00:00

pishifat wrote:
hello from your m4m queue

Insane

00:13:102 (2) make this a NC to indicate new slider velocity

01:01:418 (1,2,3,4) hard to read this coming off of the slider. approach circles blend with the slider circle and make things hard to read, along with the irregular rhythm:
this
blanket more visibly i guess would be the easiest way to fix. 01:23:918 (2) does it fine, but i'd say that's because the song is much more predictable there

01:02:996 (5) make this a NC. there's no way to really tell that the slider's gonna be slower than the previous otherwise

01:40:891 (2) this looks fine in the editor, but in actual gameplay, it's kind of off center due to the auto-blanket thing. i'd suggest just doing this to keep symmetry:
this is what it looks like in game
this is what it should look like in editor to be good

01:45:312 (2) move to x:232 y:248 to have super awesome lined up proprelynes blahbalhablh

Easy

00:20:996 (4) this note is pretty close to the bottom border, i think you should make it higher up

01:14:681 (1) also pretty close to the bottom border

01:20:996 (1,2) avoid the overlap :/

01:34:260 (2) this note just doesn't fit with teh song

01:39:944 (1) just personal opinion here, having the note centered inside of the other slider and curving like it does looks bad. having it instead bend around one of the end points of the slider or not bend at all would be better.

01:45:628 (4) maybe make this a new combo just because it's the last note of the song and the clap hitsound emphasizes it. your choice there though

also can't mod taiko so i'll ignore those

some fixed! thanks!

NavyYa

141 posts

Joined February 2013

NavyYa 2014-02-07T04:34:08+00:00

안녕하세요~
M4M 신청해볼께요..

~~3달만에 하는거라 도움이 안되실수도 ㅠㅠ~~

[Easy]

00:36:786 (1,2,3) - 1번노트랑 2번노트 박자가 약간 까다로운데
1번슬라이더에 리버스 다시는걸 추천합니다

01:33:628 (1,2) - 이것도 긴거 하나로 묶으심이..

노트 배치 진짜 잘하시네요 존경합니다

[Insane]

불필요한 3연타가 좀 많은것..같아요
히트사운드 볼륨을 높이시면 좀 괜찮을듯

00:13:312 (3,1) - 간격에 비해 점프가 너무넓은데 3번 슬라이더 끝에 노트를 붙여주시면 될거같아요

00:15:312 (2) - 이것만 점프를 좀 넣으시는 건 어떤가요?

00:38:365 (2,3,4,5,1) - 리듬이 이상한데 평소처럼 해주시는게

01:02:996 (1,1) - 슬라이더 대신 스피너를 빨리넣고 끝내는게 좋아보여요

01:36:312 (1) - 01:36:154 <<여기서 시작해야할것같은데..어렵네요 ㅠㅠ
01:41:365 (1) - 이것도..반박자느린느낌

태고는 모딩을못하기에..ㅠ
여기까지 할께요

Good Luck~

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-07T05:50:33+00:00

[Navy] wrote:
안녕하세요~
M4M 신청해볼께요..

~~3달만에 하는거라 도움이 안되실수도 ㅠㅠ~~

[Easy]

00:36:786 (1,2,3) - 1번노트랑 2번노트 박자가 약간 까다로운데
1번슬라이더에 리버스 다시는걸 추천합니다 3번 슬라이더 반복 넣었어요~

01:33:628 (1,2) - 이것도 긴거 하나로 묶으심이..PASS!

노트 배치 진짜 잘하시네요 존경합니다

[Insane]

불필요한 3연타가 좀 많은것..같아요
히트사운드 볼륨을 높이시면 좀 괜찮을듯

00:13:312 (3,1) - 간격에 비해 점프가 너무넓은데 3번 슬라이더 끝에 노트를 붙여주시면 될거같아요 PASS! 이정도는 괜찮을 거라고 봐요ㅎ

00:15:312 (2) - 이것만 점프를 좀 넣으시는 건 어떤가요? PASS!

00:38:365 (2,3,4,5,1) - 리듬이 이상한데 평소처럼 해주시는게 PASS!

01:02:996 (1,1) - 슬라이더 대신 스피너를 빨리넣고 끝내는게 좋아보여요 그건 생각해봐야겠어요~

01:36:312 (1) - 01:36:154 <<여기서 시작해야할것같은데..어렵네요 ㅠㅠ
01:41:365 (1) - 이것도..반박자느린느낌 위아래 패스!

태고는 모딩을못하기에..ㅠ
여기까지 할께요

Good Luck~

감사합니다

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2014-02-07T12:41:03+00:00

Hi, m4m from your queue

I unfortunately lost my mod post cause my pc sunddenly shut itself for unknown reason so I'm trying to writing it again, sorry if I lost patience...

Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
may add muted sliderslide

Insane
00:04:102 (1,2,3) - misused drum sample, should be at 00:04:260 - and 00:04:733 - instead, same thing happened in the first part, like 00:06:470 (1,2,3) - and so on, plz fix them by yourself
00:07:733 (1) - may drum at end, also drum at 00:08:839 (5) -
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - drum at 1's end, 2's end (not on head) and 3's end
00:13:890 (6,7) - whistle fits better than drum, for these two notes
00:14:681 (3,4) - CTRL+G for better flow, as 00:14:049 (1,2) - is clockwise flow
00:19:418 (2) - clap fits nicely, 00:19:733 (4,5) - also for their heads, and for 00:20:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - all these beats, I think you could add clap to them all and gradually increase volume from a lower state, that would be cool
00:23:365 (1) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:25:654 (2,3) - wrong snap again, should be snapped on 1/6, and you should use 3 circles instead of 2, or a 1/6 reverse slider
00:27:154 (2) - not a good rhythm, better to use circle at 00:27:154 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:27:312 -
00:28:891 - should have a circle with clap here, forming basic rhythm, and 00:28:970 (1) - wrong snapped, should be on 1/3, check the picture below

SPOILER

00:29:839 - not good to leave it blank as there's clear audioable sound here, recommend to add a circle at 00:29:207 (3) - 's end
00:31:418 (9,3) - not a nice-looking overlap, move 3 to (184,248)?
00:33:312 (3) - should have a clap at end as well
00:35:523 (5,1) - better exchange NC, cause it's 5 that actually starts a new stanza
00:36:312 (4,5,6) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6, see the pic below

SPOILER

00:38:996 (4,5) - correct!
00:42:470 (3) - better to shorten to a 1/2 slider and you don't need to use tick sound
00:45:786 (1) - should use whistle instead according to music
00:46:102 (3) - also clap at here sounds nice
00:46:418 (5,6,7) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:47:365 (2) - need finish on head, just like 00:46:891 (1,3) -
00:49:260 (8,9,1) - wrong snap again, should be on 1/6
00:50:839 (4) - missed a whistle
00:52:418 (2) - missed whistle on head
00:52:891 (3) - replace the clap with finish, it should be with the same sound as 1,2
00:53:365 (4) - better to use a circle at 00:53:365 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:53:523 - for better rhythm
00:53:996 (2) - missed a whistle
00:54:786 (2) - finish at end, same sound as 00:54:470 -
00:54:786 (2,3) - better blanket?
00:56:365 (4,5) - better to use claps for their ends instead
00:57:470 (4) - missed finish
00:59:207 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/4, and you should use 4 circles instead of 3
00:59:996 (2) - whistle + finish on head
01:01:418 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:02:523 (4) - missing finish on head
01:12:944 (4,5) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:14:049 (4,5) - clap on 4's head and 5's head and tail?
01:18:786 (3) - missing clap on head
01:19:418 (3) - ^
01:24:391 - it would be cool to add a circle here, stacking on 01:24:470 (2) - 's head
01:29:996 (1) - not good rhythm, use circle at 01:29:996 - and 1/2 slider at 01:30:154 -
01:31:418 (2) - finish on head, like 01:31:102 (1) -
01:34:496 - same as 01:24:391 -

Easy
00:40:891 (3) - missing clap on head and end
00:50:839 - tick whistle here
00:54:470 (1) - also finish at reverse point
01:11:523 (2) - missing clap at end, maybe also on head
01:21:944 (2) - missing clap at end
01:26:996 (3) - ^
01:26:996 (3,4,5,1) - not really a natural flow
01:35:523 (3) - whistle at end

That's all.....
Good luck

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-07T13:48:23+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
Hi, m4m from your queue
I unfortunately lost my mod post cause my pc sunddenly shut itself for unknown reason so I'm trying to writing it again, sorry if I lost patience...
Unrankable issues
Highly recommend to fix
Common sugestions

General
may add muted sliderslide

Insane
00:04:102 (1,2,3) - misused drum sample, should be at 00:04:260 - and 00:04:733 - instead, same thing happened in the first part, like 00:06:470 (1,2,3) - and so on, plz fix them by yourself
00:07:733 (1) - may drum at end, also drum at 00:08:839 (5) -
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - drum at 1's end, 2's end (not on head) and 3's end
00:13:890 (6,7) - whistle fits better than drum, for these two notes
00:14:681 (3,4) - CTRL+G for better flow, as 00:14:049 (1,2) - is clockwise flow
00:19:418 (2) - clap fits nicely, 00:19:733 (4,5) - also for their heads, and for 00:20:365 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1) - all these beats, I think you could add clap to them all and gradually increase volume from a lower state, that would be cool
00:23:365 (1) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:25:654 (2,3) - wrong snap again, should be snapped on 1/6, and you should use 3 circles instead of 2, or a 1/6 reverse slider
00:27:154 (2) - not a good rhythm, better to use circle at 00:27:154 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:27:312 -
00:28:891 - should have a circle with clap here, forming basic rhythm, and 00:28:970 (1) - wrong snapped, should be on 1/3, check the picture below
SPOILER
00:29:839 - not good to leave it blank as there's clear audioable sound here, recommend to add a circle at 00:29:207 (3) - 's end
00:31:418 (9,3) - not a nice-looking overlap, move 3 to (184,248)?
00:33:312 (3) - should have a clap at end as well
00:35:523 (5,1) - better exchange NC, cause it's 5 that actually starts a new stanza
00:36:312 (4,5,6) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6, see the pic below
SPOILER
00:38:996 (4,5) - correct!
00:42:470 (3) - better to shorten to a 1/2 slider and you don't need to use tick sound
00:45:786 (1) - should use whistle instead according to music
00:46:102 (3) - also clap at here sounds nice
00:46:418 (5,6,7) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
00:47:365 (2) - need finish on head, just like 00:46:891 (1,3) -
00:49:260 (8,9,1) - wrong snap again, should be on 1/6
00:50:839 (4) - missed a whistle
00:52:418 (2) - missed whistle on head
00:52:891 (3) - replace the clap with finish, it should be with the same sound as 1,2
00:53:365 (4) - better to use a circle at 00:53:365 - and a 1/2 slider from 00:53:523 - for better rhythm
00:53:996 (2) - missed a whistle
00:54:786 (2) - finish at end, same sound as 00:54:470 -
00:54:786 (2,3) - better blanket?
00:56:365 (4,5) - better to use claps for their ends instead
00:57:470 (4) - missed finish
00:59:207 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/4, and you should use 4 circles instead of 3
00:59:996 (2) - whistle + finish on head
01:01:418 (1,2,3) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:02:523 (4) - missing finish on head
01:12:944 (4,5) - wrong snap, should be on 1/6
01:14:049 (4,5) - clap on 4's head and 5's head and tail?
01:18:786 (3) - missing clap on head
01:19:418 (3) - ^
01:24:391 - it would be cool to add a circle here, stacking on 01:24:470 (2) - 's head
01:29:996 (1) - not good rhythm, use circle at 01:29:996 - and 1/2 slider at 01:30:154 -
01:31:418 (2) - finish on head, like 01:31:102 (1) -
01:34:496 - same as 01:24:391 -

Easy
00:40:891 (3) - missing clap on head and end
00:50:839 - tick whistle here
00:54:470 (1) - also finish at reverse point
01:11:523 (2) - missing clap at end, maybe also on head
01:21:944 (2) - missing clap at end
01:26:996 (3) - ^
01:26:996 (3,4,5,1) - not really a natural flow think about that...! pass!
01:35:523 (3) - whistle at end

That's all.....
Good luck

Reaaaaally nice mod!! all fixed! ~~Without one~~ Thank you for detail mod!!!!

Will you mod Normal,Hard Diff when i get GD?

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Leader 2014-02-15T14:47:35+00:00

Normal

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: nightbird lost wing.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75628
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nightbird Lost Wing
TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Leader's Normal
Source:Reflec Beat
Tags:TKSalt
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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GugUCorn

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Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-15T15:09:59+00:00

Leader wrote:

Normal

osu file format v12

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Thanks!

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

koreapenguin 2014-02-15T16:36:58+00:00

뭐

Freya

337 posts

Joined March 2013

Freya 2014-02-17T15:09:18+00:00

Hi TaMul here's your M4M

[General]

The source sould be "DanceDanceRevolution (2013)" Naoyuki Sato arrange this song originally for DDR here is the source
and move reflec beat colette to the tags since it's appearance in reflec beat for promote DDR OST, you can read here
also add autumn on the tag
inconsistence widescreen support on insane and taiko oni

[Insane]

00:04:260 (2,3) - how about rotate like this? http://puu.sh/6ZBGC.jpg
i think its better, flows good with (1)
00:08:839 (5) - NC should be here since there's rhytym change from drum to piano
00:25:628 (2) - ^
00:26:523 (9) - ^
00:40:418 (6) - ^
00:11:207 (4) - NC should be here piano to drum
00:13:891 (6,7) - change this to with clap, your whistle too much bass and doesn't fit with piano i think
00:16:418 (3,1) - i think it's better if you reduce the spacing, jump is not fit with clam part like that
00:19:023 (4) - it's better you try ctrl + G, the sounds fit for jump
00:20:996 (1,2,3,4) - this one is sure confusing, it's okay you give jump there but it's better if you put same spacing
00:22:575 (3) - i think this slider unrankable, correct me if i'm wrong
00:22:891 (1,2,3) - it's better if you put (3) stack with (1) rather than (2) because the sounds fit for such jump
00:25:628 (2,3,4) - i think it's still better if you put 2 notes stack but if it's three i think it's really confusing
00:28:260 (2) - ctrl + G for better flow, and this 00:28:575 (3) too
00:33:628 (1,5) - give some hitsound here, because of piano sounds, finish is okay
00:34:260 (1,2,3) - the spacing change is too way different despite same sounds, if dont want to change spacing, it's safe you give NC on 00:34:575 (2) to emphasize spacing change
00:35:996 (3) - i think this slider repeat doesn't fit with the song, i clearly hear piano sound just on here 00:36:154, and before that i hear nothing, it;s better if you put note there
00:39:102 (5,1) - the flow is way too rigid for 2/3 jump, when you slide down and suddenly jump up. how about ctrl + G 00:39:102 (5), it's way more better
00:46:418 (5) - NC here since there's change from 1/2 to 1/6
00:49:260 (8) - ^
00:58:891 (4) - ^
00:49:418 (1,2,3) - i think it's better if you give Ctrl + G on each slider, for emphasize drum obviously
00:55:102 (3,4) - because i think this one is overmap, it's better if you ctrl+ G this one for sake of spacing, so it's not really confusing
01:10:575 (6,7,8) - you put stack there despite there's rhytym difference, so add NC at (7)
01:20:681 (4,5,1) - i think that note is 1/6, just guessing though, it's safe if you ask experienced mapper

it's nice insane

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:04:418 (2) - change to clap then change 00:04:575 (3) tail to whistle, i thinks sounds better
00:06:470 (1,2,3) - ^
00:08:996 (1,2,3) - ^
00:10:733 (1) - i thinks it's nice if you put soft whistle
00:17:365 - i hear drum here ad note please
00:17:996 - ^
00:18:470 (7) - move it far abit, so flows better with next slider http://puu.sh/6ZEtl.jpg
00:29:049 (3) - i think it's wrong snapped, must be 1/6, look at insane, or i think i know your intention to put notes between 2 1/6 beat notes
i don't really good at this, so ask another experienced mapper maybe, or if you think it's okay leave it as is
00:59:996 (2,3) - at first glance i think it's 1/2, it sure confusing, consider unstack, yah if you say no make the stack more perfect
01:05:839 ~ 01:10:812 . i don't feel right with the clap at ths part, make it sounds like insane maybe?

i feel a bit don't right with the rhytym on this diff, but since i'm not really experienced with rhytym itself maybe we leave as it is, or ask next modder

[Leader's Normal]

01:09:627 (3) - aibat said it's unsnaped
00:29:049 - i think you should start slider here, it's less confusing imo because 1/6 triplet piano sounds
00:32:996 (6) - i don't feel right with that default clap, how about make soft:c1 clap, its more better
00:44:996 (2) - i don't hear any sound at all here, how about move to 00:44:996 (2) -
01:05:839 - same with hard, and i feel the clap is inconsistent too

well i think it's solid normal diff

[Easy]

that is my 3rd time recheck buti didn't find anything error at all, so its okay
~~or maybe i'm too noob lol~~

I can't mod taiko that too well made, so sorry.
goodluck TaMul, i hope this mapset ranked, nice song after all

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-02-18T01:28:06+00:00

TaMul will take care of mine, and I think I've put in hitsounds quite randomly lol
Still, I think 1/6 rhythm will be inappropriate for a hard.

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-18T04:12:33+00:00

Freya wrote:
Hi TaMul here's your M4M

[General]
The source sould be "DanceDanceRevolution (2013)" Naoyuki Sato arrange this song originally for DDR here is the source
and move reflec beat colette to the tags since it's appearance in reflec beat for promote DDR OST, you can read here
also add autumn on the tag
inconsistence widescreen support on insane and taiko oni
Fixed! all of them.

[Insane]
00:04:260 (2,3) - how about rotate like this? http://puu.sh/6ZBGC.jpg no, i don' want to change. but not bad!
i think its better, flows good with (1)
00:08:839 (5) - NC should be here since there's rhytym change from drum to piano no,pass
00:25:628 (2) - ^ ^
00:26:523 (9) - ^ ^
00:40:418 (6) - ^ ^
00:11:207 (4) - NC should be here piano to drum sorry, pass
00:13:891 (6,7) - change this to with clap, your whistle too much bass and doesn't fit with piano i think ok, not bad
00:16:418 (3,1) - i think it's better if you reduce the spacing, jump is not fit with clam part like that no,pass
00:19:023 (4) - it's better you try ctrl + G, the sounds fit for jump ok, not bad
00:20:996 (1,2,3,4) - this one is sure confusing, it's okay you give jump there but it's better if you put same spacing sorry, pass
00:22:575 (3) - i think this slider unrankable, correct me if i'm wrong it's not unrankable because there is not stacked sliderpoint. it's no problem!
00:22:891 (1,2,3) - it's better if you put (3) stack with (1) rather than (2) because the sounds fit for such jump no, i want to stack (2),(3). because of similiar sound.
00:25:628 (2,3,4) - i think it's still better if you put 2 notes stack but if it's three i think it's really confusing yup, but i try to put 3 notes. if another people mod about this, i'll chagne!
00:28:260 (2) - ctrl + G for better flow, and this 00:28:575 (3) too no,pass but i fixed another pattern!
00:33:628 (1,5) - give some hitsound here, because of piano sounds, finish is okay fixed!
00:34:260 (1,2,3) - the spacing change is too way different despite same sounds, if dont want to change spacing, it's safe you give NC on 00:34:575 (2) to emphasize spacing change no,pass
00:35:996 (3) - i think this slider repeat doesn't fit with the song, i clearly hear piano sound just on here 00:36:154, and before that i hear nothing, it;s better if you put note there fixed!
00:39:102 (5,1) - the flow is way too rigid for 2/3 jump, when you slide down and suddenly jump up. how about ctrl + G 00:39:102 (5), it's way more better sorry,pass!
00:46:418 (5) - NC here since there's change from 1/2 to 1/6 no,pass
00:49:260 (8) - ^ no,pass
00:58:891 (4) - ^ no,pass
00:49:418 (1,2,3) - i think it's better if you give Ctrl + G on each slider, for emphasize drum obviously fixed!
00:55:102 (3,4) - because i think this one is overmap, it's better if you ctrl+ G this one for sake of spacing, so it's not really confusing no,pass
01:10:575 (6,7,8) - you put stack there despite there's rhytym difference, so add NC at (7) no,pass
01:20:681 (4,5,1) - i think that note is 1/6, just guessing though, it's safe if you ask experienced mapper no,pass

it's nice insane Thanks!

I can't mod taiko that too well made, so sorry.
goodluck TaMul, i hope this mapset ranked, nice song after all

Thanks mod!

ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2014-02-18T07:56:55+00:00

[I]
00:09:312 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345614
00:37:260 (2,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345617
00:42:470 (3) - Ctrl+G
00:42:786 (4) - ^
01:08:996 (4) - blanket
01:26:681 (4) - Ctrl+G
01:45:628 (1,2,3) - a reverse
Good map,Makes me want to make a diff for this,Do you accept insane? :3
[H]
01:00:312 (1) - NC
01:21:312 (2) - Ctrl+G
>01:21:628 (3) - ^
GJ
[N]
00:22:891 (1) - del
>00:21:628 (1) - end at 00:22:891
Try HP3 CS3 AR4 OD3or2?
GJ
[E]
00:28:575 (1) - blanket
00:34:260 (1) - blanket
00:59:523 (1) - ^
01:01:102 (1) - ^
01:30:470 (3) - ^
>01:31:733 (2) - copy from^
[Oni]
00:23:365 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - kkd kkddk
00:32:839 (129,130) - kd?
00:57:470 (263,264) - k k
01:25:418 (125,126,127,128,129) - kkdkk?
01:35:523 (197,198,199,200,201) - ^
[Muzu]
00:57:470 (180,181) - k k
um...This make I remenber Nitrome
[Finished]
↓choose one please:3

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-18T08:50:58+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[I]
00:09:312 (2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345614 Good! changed!
00:37:260 (2,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1345617 Not bad! changed!
00:42:470 (3) - Ctrl+G fixed!
00:42:786 (4) - ^ fixed!
01:08:996 (4) - blanket fixed!
01:26:681 (4) - Ctrl+G sorry, i want to make jump..
01:45:628 (1,2,3) - a reverse fixed!
Good map,Makes me want to make a diff for this,Do you accept insane? :3
Sorry, i don't want to add diff anymore.. but i can add your diff as non upload..

[E]
00:28:575 (1) - blanket
00:34:260 (1) - blanket
00:59:523 (1) - ^
01:01:102 (1) - ^
01:30:470 (3) - ^
>01:31:733 (2) - copy from^
all checked!

Thanks!

TKS

Former osu!taiko Champion: 2014

1,356 posts

Joined July 2011

TKS 2014-02-18T09:26:27+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Oni]
00:23:365 (66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73) - kkd kkddk - i dont like them.
00:32:839 (129,130) - kd? - nope.
00:57:470 (263,264) - k k - i made a contrast with 00:54:470 (254,255,256) -
01:25:418 (125,126,127,128,129) - kkdkk? - nope.
01:35:523 (197,198,199,200,201) - ^ - ^
[Muzu]
00:57:470 (180,181) - k k - same as Oni.
um...This make I remenber Nitrome

thanks for mod.
sorry but i didnt got anything from your mod.
i fixed some timing issues.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... 20Wing.rar

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-18T09:37:51+00:00

TKSalt wrote:
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/263 ... 20Wing.rar

updated!

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Leader 2014-02-19T10:06:34+00:00

Fixed some, thanks

whee

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: nightbird lost wing.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 75628
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nightbird Lost Wing
TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Leader's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
Tags:TKSalt Leader Sonnyc Reflec Beat Colette Naoyuki Sato autumn
BeatmapID:371438
BeatmapSetID:128070

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:2

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@TaMuL: don't bother contacting me, I'll check my diff every two/three mods :3

GugUCorn

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Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-19T10:29:38+00:00

Leader wrote:

Fixed some, thanks

whee

osu file format v12

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252,176,31575,2,0,P|300:180|332:192,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,268,32207,2,0,P|259:304|273:335,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,276,32839,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,276,32996,2,0,P|72:244|56:188,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,104,33628,5,0,3:0:0:0:
76,104,33944,1,0,3:0:0:0:
76,104,34260,6,0,B|176:56|208:156|340:84,1,240,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,72,35207,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,144,35523,2,0,P|476:208|472:272,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,312,36154,2,0,P|376:248|380:184,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,124,36786,2,0,P|192:64|92:172,1,300,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,264,37891,5,0,0:0:0:0:
100,264,38049,2,0,P|164:268|212:308,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,300,38681,2,0,P|351:265|411:263,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,216,39312,2,0,P|500:152|468:96,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,80,39944,2,0,L|260:68,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,76,40418,6,0,P|196:104|184:144,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,156,41049,2,0,P|273:189|293:226,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,172,41681,2,0,P|392:192|432:204,2,60,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,80,42312,2,0,P|417:74|454:54,2,60,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,32,42944,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,32,43102,2,0,P|236:32|184:72,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,140,43733,5,0,3:0:0:0:
44,108,44049,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,200,44365,6,0,P|68:260|108:320,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,360,44996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,304,45312,2,0,L|380:296,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,320,45786,6,0,P|396:252|420:148,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,72,46575,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,52,46891,5,6,0:0:0:0:
360,52,47365,1,6,0:0:0:0:
340,52,47839,1,6,0:0:0:0:
320,52,48312,6,0,B|264:52|264:52|216:88|216:88|152:88,2,180,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,88,49418,6,0,P|368:148|348:216,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,216,49891,2,0,P|228:220|184:260,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,280,50365,2,0,B|224:300|256:360|256:360|284:300|352:284,1,240,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,268,51312,6,0,P|488:232|472:120,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,128,51944,6,0,L|304:116,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,136,52418,2,0,P|224:176|164:184,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,180,52891,2,0,P|44:188|52:328,1,240,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,348,53839,6,0,B|224:384|224:316|316:356,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,336,54470,5,6,0:0:0:0:
368,312,54944,1,6,0:0:0:0:
376,292,55418,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,268,55891,6,0,B|324:268|324:268|272:244|272:244|204:244,2,180,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,232,56996,6,0,P|428:172|408:108,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,104,57470,2,0,P|304:112|256:84,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,56,57944,2,0,P|116:40|60:152,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,220,58891,6,0,P|200:220|252:144,1,180,0|0,0:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
296,124,59523,6,0,L|424:112,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,136,59996,2,0,P|436:196|464:264,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,292,60470,2,0,L|336:308,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,368,61102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,304,61418,2,0,B|148:304|148:304|96:272|96:272|32:272,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,228,62049,5,6,0:0:0:0:
16,208,62523,1,2,0:0:0:0:
20,188,62996,1,14,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63154,12,0,64575,0:0:0:0:
192,120,65839,6,0,L|312:120,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,176,66470,2,0,P|404:232|388:292,1,120,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,356,67102,2,0,L|196:356,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,292,67733,1,0,3:0:0:0:
124,292,68365,6,0,P|108:234|124:177,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,116,68996,2,0,L|316:116,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,180,69628,2,0,P|404:236|384:300,1,120,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,356,70259,2,0,L|196:356,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,292,70891,6,0,P|96:216|64:192,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,104,71523,2,0,L|12:48,2,60,0|0|8,3:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,120,72154,2,0,L|248:120,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,204,72786,2,0,L|176:204,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,280,73418,2,0,P|152:324|216:336,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,340,74049,2,0,L|376:340,2,60,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74681,12,0,75628,0:0:0:0:
64,192,75944,5,6,0:0:0:0:
96,284,76260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,244,76575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,316,76891,2,0,P|308:336|364:316,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,248,77523,2,0,L|444:128,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,319,78470,5,2,0:0:0:0:
296,248,78786,2,0,B|212:212|212:280|120:244,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,232,79418,2,0,P|40:152|88:80,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,112,80207,2,0,P|256:148|336:112,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,88,80996,5,6,0:0:0:0:
464,176,81312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,268,81628,1,0,3:0:0:0:
336,272,81944,2,0,P|272:284|228:332,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,360,82575,2,0,L|28:384,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,272,83523,6,0,P|148:228|80:212,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,224,83996,2,0,P|28:164|52:104,1,120,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,88,84470,2,0,L|216:80,1,120,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,56,85102,2,0,L|320:-4,2,60,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,148,85733,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,196,86049,5,4,0:0:0:0:
432,140,86365,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,52,86681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,56,86996,2,0,P|244:52|192:84,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,156,87628,2,0,P|60:128|32:80,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,216,88575,5,2,0:0:0:0:
272,280,88891,2,0,B|368:256|368:320|452:284,1,180,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,264,89523,2,0,P|460:192|480:92,1,180,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,32,90312,2,0,P|316:24|252:84,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,176,91102,5,6,0:0:0:0:
248,268,91418,1,12,0:0:0:0:
340,296,91733,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,232,92049,2,0,P|420:168|392:116,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,92,92681,2,0,L|184:76,2,120,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,184,93628,6,0,P|344:240|320:304,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,304,94102,2,0,P|216:288|156:328,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,336,94575,2,0,P|72:268|84:176,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,104,95365,2,0,P|240:56|332:136,1,240,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,96154,12,0,98681,0:0:0:0:
256,168,99944,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,100575,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,216,101207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101365,12,0,103733,0:0:0:0:
256,216,104365,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,104996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,105628,2,0,L|256:108,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

@TaMuL: don't bother contacting me, I'll check my diff every two/three mods :3

Updated! Sorry, I thought you didn't know!

OverPower

40 posts

Joined August 2012

OverPower 2014-02-20T15:39:05+00:00

안녕하세요! M4M 보고왔습니다.

앞서서, 타물님 배치 진짜 대단하시네요.

Easy

00:37:891 (2) - 먼저 이부분 입니다. 제 개인적인 생각으로, 초보분들에겐 이런 짦은슬라이드가 낯설어보이지 않을까 합니다.

00:38:049 - 여기에 서클 한개와,

00:38:365 - 서클 또하나,

00:38:681 - 여기에서 00:38:996 - 여기까지 슬라이드를 넣어도 꽤 괜찮지 않을까 합니다.

01:20:996 (1) - Easy 곡에서 이렇게 슬라이드와 01:21:944 (2) - 슬라이드를 겹치게 두어도 애매모호 한데요. 초보유저 분들깨서는 혼란을 줄수도 있죠.

01:45:944 (4) - 맨 마지막 서클입니다. 마지막에 이렇게 맨밑에 장식하면 끝나는 분위기가 아닌것 같은데요. (어디까지나 개인적인 생각이지만)

x:384 y:272 에 배치 하셔도 나쁘진 않을것 같네요. 기존 prev와 크게 차이도 없고, 옴겨봤자 안좋은건 아니니까요.

Normal

00:03:944 (1) - 스핀은 대부분 가운데에서 돌립니다. 하지만 이 슬라이드는 가운데와 멀리 떨어져있네요. 노말과 안어울리는 느낌일까요?

01:14:049 (6) - 그전 슬라이드와 동선이 너무 단순합니다. 다른 배치는 완벽하지만, 슬라이드와 리핏슬라이드를 같은 동선에 두게되면 말그대로 단순해 보

이지 않을까 합니다. 리핏슬라이드를 위로 세우거나, 아니면 반대로, 아니면 그전 슬라이드 꺾어질때쯤 사이에 둬도 나쁘지 않습니다.

01:25:102 (4) - 이런식으로 리핏슬라이드를 좀더 자유롭게 두어도 된다는 뜻이죠.

Insane

배치도 정말 좋으시고, 보는내내 입만 벌리고 있었네요.

딱 집을때가 없습니다. 브레이크 타임대신

01:38:839 - 이런 여백을 사용하셨고, 01:05:523 - 중간중간 유저들을 짦게라도 쉬게 해주고픈 느낌도 촥 왔네요.

저도 이런 정신없는 곡에 스핀조차없고, 하다못해 짦은 여백도 없는곡을 싫어하는편 입니다.

타블렛 유저다 보니까 저는 손에 땀이생겨서 자꾸 펜이 밑으로 내려가는군요.. ㅠㅠ

펜을 다시 잡을수있는 시간이 필요하기 때문에.. 이런식의곡 정말 좋아하구요.

하루빨리 랭크되셨으면 좋겠습니다! (애용할깨요)

포럼에 리플 날리고 가겠습니다!

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-20T16:28:24+00:00

Translation for Leader

OverPower wrote:
Normal

00:03:944 (1) - 스핀은 대부분 가운데에서 돌립니다. 하지만 이 슬라이드는 가운데와 멀리 떨어져있네요. 노말과 안어울리는 느낌일까요?

01:14:049 (6) - 그전 슬라이드와 동선이 너무 단순합니다. 다른 배치는 완벽하지만, 슬라이드와 리핏슬라이드를 같은 동선에 두게되면 말그대로 단순해 보

이지 않을까 합니다. 리핏슬라이드를 위로 세우거나, 아니면 반대로, 아니면 그전 슬라이드 꺾어질때쯤 사이에 둬도 나쁘지 않습니다.

01:25:102 (4) - 이런식으로 리핏슬라이드를 좀더 자유롭게 두어도 된다는 뜻이죠.

00:03:944 (1) - Most People spin a spinner on the center. But this slider is far from the center. Maybe It doesn't feat as Normal Diff..?

01:14:049 (6) - compare with previous slider, traffic line is so simple. Another placement is perfect, but if the slider and repeat slider are laid by same traffic line, it maybe seems to simple. try to stand the repeat slider, or the other way. Or lay between previous slider is snapped.

01:25:102 (4) - Like this, make freely a repeat slider.

>>It's just my translation. maybe there is strange sentence..

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-20T16:38:15+00:00

OverPower wrote:
안녕하세요! M4M 보고왔습니다.

앞서서, 타물님 배치 진짜 대단하시네요.

Easy

00:37:891 (2) - 먼저 이부분 입니다. 제 개인적인 생각으로, 초보분들에겐 이런 짦은슬라이드가 낯설어보이지 않을까 합니다.

00:38:049 - 여기에 서클 한개와,

00:38:365 - 서클 또하나,

00:38:681 - 여기에서 00:38:996 - 여기까지 슬라이드를 넣어도 꽤 괜찮지 않을까 합니다.
전 그대로가 나을 것 같아요. 전 초보자들한테 자비는 없습니다(?) 고려사항으로만 둘께요! 패스!

01:20:996 (1) - Easy 곡에서 이렇게 슬라이드와 01:21:944 (2) - 슬라이드를 겹치게 두어도 애매모호 한데요. 초보유저 분들깨서는 혼란을 줄수도 있죠. 괜찮습니다. 어느 랭크맵에서도 이런 부분이 없진 않거든요 ㅎ 꼬아두지만 않으면 괜찮다고 봅니다. 패스!

01:45:944 (4) - 맨 마지막 서클입니다. 마지막에 이렇게 맨밑에 장식하면 끝나는 분위기가 아닌것 같은데요. (어디까지나 개인적인 생각이지만)

x:384 y:272 에 배치 하셔도 나쁘진 않을것 같네요. 기존 prev와 크게 차이도 없고, 옴겨봤자 안좋은건 아니니까요.
죄송하지만 패스할께요..겹치는게 영 아니여보여요 ^^;

모딩 감사합니다. 하지만 고친게 없으므로 쿠도스 못 드려요 ㅠ
노멀에서 고친게 나왔으면 쿠도스 드리고요 ^^;

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Neta 2014-02-20T17:35:44+00:00

안녕하세요~ M4M큐 보고 왔습니다

[모딩 전 팁]
우선 기본적으로 슬라이더 모양을 신경 써주셧으면 합니다 http://puu.sh/73w0d.jpg -->http://puu.sh/73w0L.jpg 이런식으로 슬라이더 끝을 중앙에 배치하시면서 깔끔한 슬라이더를 만들면 맵 퀄이 올라가요~

[Easy]

00:06:470 (2) - http://puu.sh/73vXx.jpg 슬라이더 모양을 이렇게 고쳐주세요
00:44:365 (1) - ^
01:26:996 (3) - ^
우선 배치는 잘 짜셧네요 딱히 흠 잡을게 없는듯 합니다. 슬라이더 모양만 조금 신경써주시면 좋곘어요 겉보기엔 정상이지만 슬라이더선이 이상한 슬라이더가 많습니다

[Leader's Normal]

00:26:681 (4) - Make slider clearly plz like http://puu.sh/73wmC.jpg
00:16:575 (1,2,3,4) - you used this patterns but i think it's not good for normal better use distance snap

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:08:996 (1,3) - 패턴을 앞과 똑같이 하는게 좋을듯합니다
01:06:470 (2) - 차라리 노트 2개로 바꾸는게 패턴상 좋지 않을까 싶습니다

[Insane]

00:02:523 (1) - 위에서 말했듯이 깔끔하게 바꿔주세요
00:25:418 (1) - 뒤에 1/6 3연타를 쓰셧는데 BPM도 BPM인 만큼 별로 좋은 선택은 아닌듯합니다 슬라이더 같은걸로 대처하시는게 좋을듯해요
00:43:102 (1) - 첫번째와 동일 이유
01:26:996 (1) - 음 이건 좀 심하게 틀어졌네요
01:35:839 (1) - 1번을 스트림 형식으로 EX) http://puu.sh/73x86.jpg 이런식으로 바꿔주세요

허졉한 모딩 죄송합니다

맵 배치가 매우 깔끔하네요 부러울 정도 ㅠㅠ

슬라이더만 조금 신경 써주시면 퀄리티 좋은 맵이 될꺼라 생각합니다

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-21T01:21:12+00:00

Neta wrote:
안녕하세요~ M4M큐 보고 왔습니다

[모딩 전 팁]
우선 기본적으로 슬라이더 모양을 신경 써주셧으면 합니다 http://puu.sh/73w0d.jpg -->http://puu.sh/73w0L.jpg 이런식으로 슬라이더 끝을 중앙에 배치하시면서 깔끔한 슬라이더를 만들면 맵 퀄이 올라가요~

[Easy]
00:06:470 (2) - http://puu.sh/73vXx.jpg 슬라이더 모양을 이렇게 고쳐주세요
00:44:365 (1) - ^
01:26:996 (3) - ^
우선 배치는 잘 짜셧네요 딱히 흠 잡을게 없는듯 합니다. 슬라이더 모양만 조금 신경써주시면 좋곘어요 겉보기엔 정상이지만 슬라이더선이 이상한 슬라이더가 많습니다

[Insane]
00:02:523 (1) - 위에서 말했듯이 깔끔하게 바꿔주세요
00:25:418 (1) - 뒤에 1/6 3연타를 쓰셧는데 BPM도 BPM인 만큼 별로 좋은 선택은 아닌듯합니다 슬라이더 같은걸로 대처하시는게 좋을듯해요
00:43:102 (1) - 첫번째와 동일 이유
01:26:996 (1) - 음 이건 좀 심하게 틀어졌네요
01:35:839 (1) - 1번을 스트림 형식으로 EX) http://puu.sh/73x86.jpg 이런식으로 바꿔주세요

허졉한 모딩 죄송합니다

맵 배치가 매우 깔끔하네요 부러울 정도 ㅠㅠ

슬라이더만 조금 신경 써주시면 퀄리티 좋은 맵이 될꺼라 생각합니다

1/6 3연타 부분만 고쳤습니다.^^
Thanks!

Nyukai

2,415 posts

Joined July 2012

Nyukai 2014-02-22T10:17:12+00:00

Random M4M, I posted my map in your queue. ^^

o3o - Suggestions
o3o - Highly suggestions

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:05:839 (1) - Remove NC.
00:07:733 (1) - ^
00:10:733 (1) - ^
00:15:944 (1) - ^
00:20:996 (1) - ^
00:22:733 (5) - Move it to x:360 y:344, then put (6) in the same place, overlapping (5).
00:23:839 (1) - Remove NC.
00:27:628 (3) - I think a curve slider would look better, if you do that move it to x:320 y:20. (:
00:31:418 (5, 1) - Repeat only slider (5). Then move (1) to x:255 y:317 to follow next note.
00:40:418 (1, 2) - Remove NC at (1) and add it to (2).
00:41:681 (1, 2) - ^
00:45:944 (3) - Maybe it would look better if you move it to x:280 y:288, since it's overlapping 00:46:891 (1).
00:51:628 (6) - Ctrl+J and move it to x:96 y:328. :3
01:00:312 (3) - Maybe overlap on (2)? Looks weird for me. >_<
01:14:523 (3) - I think it would have a better flow if you move it to x:288 y:160.

Nice diff. <3

[Insane]

I think AR:9 is too much, consider adding only AR:8. >_<

00:02:523 (1) - Remove NC.
00:28:891 (1) - ^ and add it to 00:29:907 (3).

[Normal]

Better if you add CS:3 instead of CS:4.

[Easy]

CS:2 instead of CS:3 maybe?

That's all, nice mapset and song.

GL~

Last edited by Nyukai 2014-02-22T15:26:22+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

[Twinkle]

179 posts

Joined October 2012

[Twinkle] 2014-02-22T11:01:10+00:00

M4M from your Q
I can only mod stardard. ;w;

[Easy]
01:03:312 (1) - this spinner may close at this point

SPOILER

[Leader's Normal]
00:44:365 (1) - remove NC
00:45:786 (1) - ^
00:51:944 (1) - ^
00:54:470 (1) - ^
00:56:996 (1) - ^
00:59:523 (1) - ^
01:25:733 (5) - add nc
01:26:049 (1) - remove nc

[Sonnyc's Hard]
I think the drop sound effect is used too many. u may remove some
01:02:996 (1) - add a note at the starting point of the spinner and put the spinner backwards

[Insane]
00:50:365 (3) - make this slider slow down may fit the rhythm better
01:00:470 (1) - ^

nice song! good luck

Leader

osu! Alumni

1,849 posts

Joined January 2011

Leader 2014-02-22T11:51:38+00:00

Just fixed two/three things, leaving CS4 and the current combo scheme

diff

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TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Leader's Normal
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
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GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-22T16:09:21+00:00

Inyuschan

Inyuschan wrote:
Random M4M, I posted my map in your queue. ^^

o3o - Suggestions
o3o - Highly suggestions

[Insane]

I think AR:9 is too much, consider adding only AR:8. >_< think about AR 8. i want to make it as AR 9!

00:02:523 (1) - Remove NC. No!
00:28:891 (1) - ^ and add it to 00:29:907 (3). fixed!

[Easy]

CS:2 instead of CS:3 maybe? no, i want to make it CS 2

That's all, nice mapset and song. GL~

[box=[Twinkle:1337]]

[Twinkle] wrote:
M4M from your Q
I can only mod stardard. ;w;

[Easy]
01:03:312 (1) - this spinner may close at this point i can't see your screen shot image.. i don't know what you mean but, i fixed this spinner a little bit.
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:50:365 (3) - make this slider slow down may fit the rhythm better no
01:00:470 (1) - ^ no

nice song! good luck

Thanks!

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-02-22T16:13:11+00:00

Updated

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2014-02-24T13:52:30+00:00

~~Fixed by request~~

Freya

Freya wrote:

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:04:418 (2) - change to clap then change 00:04:575 (3) tail to whistle, i thinks sounds better // Added Whistle at the head of (3) instead.
00:06:470 (1,2,3) - ^
00:08:996 (1,2,3) - ^
00:10:733 (1) - i thinks it's nice if you put soft whistle // Whistle at 00:10:891 (2,4) will be enough.
00:17:365 - i hear drum here ad note please // That's not that strong to emphasize, and tick will be fine enough.
00:17:996 - ^
00:18:470 (7) - move it far abit, so flows better with next slider http://puu.sh/6ZEtl.jpg // The spacing was based on the end of 00:17:839 (5).
00:29:049 (3) - i think it's wrong snapped, must be 1/6, look at insane, or i think i know your intention to put notes between 2 1/6 beat notes
i don't really good at this, so ask another experienced mapper maybe, or if you think it's okay leave it as is // Well didn't noticed that this is empty. Well I should look for more opinions
00:59:996 (2,3) - at first glance i think it's 1/2, it sure confusing, consider unstack, yah if you say no make the stack more perfect // Changed spacing.
01:05:839 ~ 01:10:812 . i don't feel right with the clap at ths part, make it sounds like insane maybe? // I think it's fine.

i feel a bit don't right with the rhytym on this diff, but since i'm not really experienced with rhytym itself maybe we leave as it is, or ask next modder

Neta

Neta wrote:
[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:08:996 (1,3) - 패턴을 앞과 똑같이 하는게 좋을듯합니다 // 이 부분만 좀 이질적이긴 하네요. 그렇지만 다음 노트 흐름상 이제 와서 바꾸기 곤란할듯요<<
01:06:470 (2) - 차라리 노트 2개로 바꾸는게 패턴상 좋지 않을까 싶습니다 // 음,, 큰 차이 없는거 같은데 슬라이더로 두고 싶습니다.

Inyuschan

Inyuschan wrote:
Random M4M, I posted my map in your queue. ^^

[Sonnyc's Hard]

00:05:839 (1) - Remove NC. // Nah, having it the same combo with previously is really nonsense in hp drain, and the time gap.
00:07:733 (1) - ^
00:10:733 (1) - ^
00:15:944 (1) - ^
00:20:996 (1) - ^
00:22:733 (5) - Move it to x:360 y:344, then put (6) in the same place, overlapping (5). // Sorry, I want a square pattern here.
00:23:839 (1) - Remove NC. // Bell emphasis.
00:27:628 (3) - I think a curve slider would look better, if you do that move it to x:320 y:20. (: // Sure it'll be, but prefer an aesthetic here.
00:31:418 (5, 1) - Repeat only slider (5). Then move (1) to x:255 y:317 to follow next note. // Can't understand the meaning here, but I want to give symmetry<<
00:40:418 (1, 2) - Remove NC at (1) and add it to (2). // Following the music, I think my selection is better,, Still 00:42:944 (5) added NC here instead.
00:41:681 (1, 2) - ^
00:45:944 (3) - Maybe it would look better if you move it to x:280 y:288, since it's overlapping 00:46:891 (1). // Since the overlapping part is the head, it's nearly unoticable when playing.
00:51:628 (6) - Ctrl+J and move it to x:96 y:328. :3 // Curving down, and breaking flow with the next slider was my selection here, and I want to keep the flow.
01:00:312 (3) - Maybe overlap on (2)? Looks weird for me. >_< // Fixed
01:14:523 (3) - I think it would have a better flow if you move it to x:288 y:160. // Looks good.

Twinkle

[Twinkle] wrote:
[Sonnyc's Hard]
I think the drop sound effect is used too many. u may remove some
01:02:996 (1) - add a note at the starting point of the spinner and put the spinner backwards // Fixed

osu file format v12

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Mode: 0
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TitleUnicode:Nightbird Lost Wing
Artist:Nekomata Master+
ArtistUnicode:猫叉 Master+
Creator:TaMul
Version:Sonnyc's Hard
Source:DanceDanceRevolution (2013)
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GugUCorn

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GugUCorn 2014-02-25T13:29:42+00:00

↑Updated! 감사합니다 ㅎㅎ

Sonico Makaron

731 posts

Joined March 2011

Sonico Makaron 2014-03-09T13:53:54+00:00

Hi!

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
Fix this.

SPOILER

[Leader's Normal]
00:11:523 (1,2) - Play little weird, maybe make rhythm like this?

SPOILER

00:17:839 (3) - Add finish.

[Sonnyc's Hard]
00:10:733 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here, remove it.
00:15:944 (1) - How about ctrl+g? it will get better flow imo.
00:16:575 (1) - Add finish at the head slider
00:17:207 (3) - Add NC.
00:23:839 (1) - Drum hit sound not fit well here imo.
00:47:207 (2) - Make perfect stack.
00:47:365 (3) - ^
01:02:996 (1) - This is not a new rhythm, will be better if you remove NC.

[Insane]
00:07:733 (1) - Use 0.75 slider velocity.
00:08:365 (2) - Since you returned the slider velocity back it must be NC.
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - Confused rhythm for me, i recommend remove slider velocity 0.50 and try make rhythm like this, it will be easier read imo

SPOILER

good luck

Sonnyc

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Sonnyc 2014-03-09T13:56:51+00:00

소수 슬라 속도 저거 안고치는게 좋습니다. 모딩 체크는 차후에,,

GugUCorn

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Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-03-09T15:41:25+00:00

Sonico Makaron wrote:
Hi!

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
Fix this.
SPOILER

[Insane]
00:07:733 (1) - Use 0.75 slider velocity.
00:08:365 (2) - Since you returned the slider velocity back it must be NC.
00:12:786 (1,2,3) - Confused rhythm for me, i recommend remove slider velocity 0.50 and try make rhythm like this, it will be easier read imo
SPOILER

good luck

Only fixed at easy's error.
i don't want to make change of speed.

Thanks mod

GugUCorn

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Topic Starter

GugUCorn 2014-03-09T15:43:52+00:00

Sonnyc wrote:
모딩 체크는 차후에,,

천천히 하셔도됩니다

그땐 너무 재촉했어요

Akiyama Mizuki

2,710 posts

Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2014-03-12T12:35:13+00:00

늦어서 죄송해요
TK'S Muzu

SPOILER

00:03:944 (1) - I prefer D. It sounds better IMO
00:13:733 (8) - d
00:33:707 (90) - k? ~~I'm not sure it sounds better honestly~~
00:46:102 (142) - ^
00:51:154 (159) - ^
00:59:049 (183) - d
01:17:996 (55) - d
01:18:154 (56) - k
01:25:418 (95) - d

I'll mod Oni later, sry

/// uhhh I ate dinner
TK'S Oni

SPOILER

00:03:944 (1) - D
00:18:944 (38) - k

~~wtf my father came I'll mod more tomorrow I'm really sorry~~

////OK. And here's more
TK'S Oni (more)

SPOILER

00:33:786 (136) - k
00:51:154 (235) - d
01:17:918 (71) - ^
01:25:418 (128) - d
01:25:496 (129) - k

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