Hi! from my modding queue
NC = New comboBlanket = https://puu.sh/ww6lr/79ddf96365.jpgGeneral
Remove countdown.
Might want to change the diffname to something more creative if you want? These mellow/beautiful songs can have something uplifting as a diffname. Just a tip
Sayonara
00:03:551 (3) - NC
00:09:669 (7) - NC
00:06:176 (2) - Blanket better (x:336 y:224)
00:16:855 (4) - NC
00:22:780 (1,2,3) - I'd have these as a stack or atleast close to eachother, fits well with the vocals. (personally I would use a repeat slider)
00:23:530 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Rythmiclly, this doesn't make sense the sliders are ending on a important sound of the instrument you're following, scale them down to atleast the blue tick before and add a circle on the red tick.
00:26:155 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
00:26:155 (1) - Remove NC
00:26:343 (3) - NC
00:27:655 (7) - NC
00:29:718 (4,6,2,4,2) - I would Ctrl+G these for better flow and just working better together.
00:36:843 (5) - NC
00:39:843 (5) - NC
00:45:093 (3,5,7) - I'd NC all of these
01:03:093 (4) - NC
01:02:343 (1,4,7) - Inconsistent overlap.
01:04:218 (1,5) - Why not stack these.
01:05:343 (8) - NC
01:08:343 (5) - NC
01:15:843 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - I'd follow this pattern you gave at the start imo 00:44:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OR you could make the pattern you had at the start similar to this. Creates alot of consistency.
01:36:843 (9) - NC
01:38:905 (7,9) - NC
01:42:843 (10) - NC
01:45:655 (1) - remove NC
01:45:843 (3) - NC
02:05:343 (5) - NC
02:06:468 (9) - NC
02:08:155 (2,3) - Stack these maybe
02:15:843 (6) - NC
02:18:843 (8) - NC
02:22:405 (4) - NC for easier to read.
02:22:592 (5) - Stream starts here.
02:26:343 (10) - NC
02:33:093 (5,6) - To large jump here, the song is really calm.
02:33:843 (11,12,1) - The whole song you're mapping to the vocals and here u dont? Why? I'd map this probably as sliders at low velocity or something.
02:51:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd follow this pattern you gave at the start imo 00:44:718 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - OR you could make the pattern you had at the start similar to this.
03:15:843 (1,2) - Alot of players will probably break on this, i'd nerf the jump a bit.
03:32:530 (3) - Make a slider here instead? Too keep the rythm.
03:46:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Either NC all these, to make them stand out as 1/3's or space them visibly from your other 1/4 streams.
03:51:843 (6) - NC
04:38:343 (2,3,4) - I'd remove the circle and just make the first slider end on the blue tick here.
05:38:343 (1) - This is really cool but why not just map like normal here? I know she's draging out her voice but there's so much other stuff that's going on in the song.
05:54:723 (1) - Here you can put the heart instead of the spinner ^^.
Additional information
This is actually pretty smooth to play, however i'd lower the HP to atleast 7 (6 recommended) and make the OD 8. That's the norm for maps like this.
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GL with the map !